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EMILIA(CV: Rie Takahashi) - Stay Alive

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mardi 18 juillet 2017 at 00:33:19

Artist: EMILIA(CV: Rie Takahashi)
Title: Stay Alive
Source: Re:ゼロから始める異世界生活
Tags: re: zero kara hajimeru isekai seikatsu life in a different world from re:zero tv size ed ending metaku hazu- yaleufeu
BPM: 70
Filesize: 2996kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fate (3,77 stars, 238 notes)
  2. Hazu's Light Insane (3,25 stars, 211 notes)
  3. Metaku's Hard (2,49 stars, 178 notes)
  4. Normal (1,55 stars, 129 notes)
Download: EMILIA(CV: Rie Takahashi) - Stay Alive
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I STAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAY alive

Normal by Me
Metaku's Hard by Metaku
Hazu's Light Insane by Hazu-
Fate by Me

Hitsounds taken from this mapset

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: Zero__wind
: Zero__wind
: Chaoslitz
: Zero__wind
: Chaoslitz
Nokashi
Hello, saw your map on #modreqs

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:339 (3) - Just a suggestion, but maybe extend this, since 00:02:196 (4) - isnt that strong of a sound to be clickable
  2. 00:03:482 (1,2) - Use a similar rhythm to 00:00:054 (1,2,3) - to make the most out of the strong beats provided here
  3. 00:30:053 (4,5) - would work better as a slider to emphasize the strong beat here 00:30:053 -
  4. 00:39:053 (2) - to be consistent, a slider like this 00:33:911 (5) - would work way better for emphasizing both vocals and instruments here
  5. 01:12:053 (1,2) - changing their rotation would work really well here, like this, since its directly facing the 3 slider
Really clean and well structured diff

[Metaku's Hard]
  1. 00:11:196 (2,3) - all different instances of this certain rhythm were expressed with movement, yet this one uses stacked sliders, id suggest using previous rhythm variations for consistency
  2. 00:17:196 (1) - DS inconsistency
  3. 00:24:053 (1) - ^
  4. 00:34:339 (1,2) - while the first you used this rhythm it worked, here it doesnt, this time the blue tick isnt as strong. So i'd suggest sticking to a good old 3/4 slider here
  5. 00:39:482 (1) - why did the DS Increase by 0.20x here. I checked the kiai and its still 1.20 there, so its kinda suprising to put a spike here
  6. 00:41:196 - This could be clickable. It's a prominent piano note
  7. 00:48:053 (1) - adding a circle hear would make the break in rhythm less sudden and improve flow
  8. 00:54:482 (7) - I Avoid pointing out blankets but making this a blanket might fix the DS inconsistency here ( 1.40x )
  9. 01:08:625 (1) - while im personally against this gradual increase in DS, its justifyable cuz of song intesity, but it might become an issue
  10. 01:15:482 (1) - DS

[Hazu's Light Insane]
  1. 00:29:625 (7) - curve this from this other side instead to hint the next object's placement
  2. 00:37:768 (1,2) - you gave proper spacing to every object represented by this sound, and yet you didnt do it here
  3. 01:03:482 (5) - curve it a bit more to give a more natural movement to the next object
  4. 01:18:026 (7,8) - why not use the same rhythm you used for all previous instances of this ( 00:16:339 (1,2) - for example )
  5. 01:24:819 (7,8) - ^
Pretty clean

[Fate]
  1. 00:04:339 (3) - turn into 2 1/2 sliders as well to be consistent with your rhythm choices
  2. 00:11:196 (3) - after seeing it happen again i concluded that it might have been intended to leave it like this, but you should investigate either way
  3. 00:14:196 (2) - I wouldnt fully overlap this above any slider, because it might cause readability issues, so do look into that
  4. 00:30:911 (1,2,3) - i feel like something like this would flow better and also look better
  5. 00:50:196 (7,8,9) - this is pretty linear flow, and angles like these dont tend to play well. i suggest making the 8 ->9 jump a more sharp angle ( maybe with ctrl g'ing the 9? )
  6. 01:27:993 (1,2,3) - ^

Cool set, Good Luck~
Metaku

Nokashi wrote:

[Metaku's Hard]
  1. 00:11:196 (2,3) - all different instances of this certain rhythm were expressed with movement, yet this one uses stacked sliders, id suggest using previous rhythm variations for consistency But that's on purpose as the melody is different here so I wanted to make it stand out as it's also the last section of the intro
  2. 00:17:196 (1) - DS inconsistency
  3. 00:24:053 (1) - ^ But these both have increased spacing for emphasis...
  4. 00:34:339 (1,2) - while the first you used this rhythm it worked, here it doesnt, this time the blue tick isnt as strong. So i'd suggest sticking to a good old 3/4 slider here It's the same rhythm tho so no :/
  5. 00:39:482 (1) - why did the DS Increase by 0.20x here. I checked the kiai and its still 1.20 there, so its kinda suprising to put a spike here Well kiai also has increased SV so the spacing is bigger despite DS being the same... And how it's a suprsing spike? It's the last build up before the calm part and then the kiai :(
  6. 00:41:196 - This could be clickable. It's a prominent piano note Hmm yeah but I didn't really follow the piano here anyway 00:42:053 (1,2,3) -
  7. 00:48:053 (1) - adding a circle hear would make the break in rhythm less sudden and improve flow Huh? Circle where? that's where the slider starts
  8. 00:54:482 (7) - I Avoid pointing out blankets but making this a blanket might fix the DS inconsistency here ( 1.40x ) It had slightly increased spacing for emphasis but yeah I improved the blanket a bit
  9. 01:08:625 (1) - while im personally against this gradual increase in DS, its justifyable cuz of song intesity, but it might become an issue It's a hard anyway so distance snap isn't a must all the time and it's basically 140BPM 1/1 jumps so it's not really that big of an issue
  10. 01:15:482 (1) - DS Again spacing for emphasis :/
Well I changed that one blanket lol
osu file format v14

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Title:Stay Alive (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Stay Alive (TV Size)
Artist:EMILIA (CV: Rie Takahashi)
ArtistUnicode:EMILIA (CV: Rie Takahashi)
Creator:yaleufeu
Version:Metaku's Hard
Source:Re:ゼロから始める異世界生活
Tags:re: zero kara hajimeru isekai seikatsu life in a different world from zero re:zero tv size ed ending metaku hazu-
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Hazu-

Nokashi wrote:

Hello, saw your map on #modreqs

[Hazu's Light Insane]
  1. 00:29:625 (7) - curve this from this other side instead to hint the next object's placement Fixed.
  2. 00:37:768 (1,2) - you gave proper spacing to every object represented by this sound, and yet you didnt do it here No problem with this.
  3. 01:03:482 (5) - curve it a bit more to give a more natural movement to the next object ^
  4. 01:18:026 (7,8) - why not use the same rhythm you used for all previous instances of this ( 00:16:339 (1,2) - for example ) Originally I intended to do that, but I don't feel they are same :/
  5. 01:24:819 (7,8) - ^ ^
Pretty clean :arrow: Thanks~
Cool set, Good Luck~
Thanks for mod~
Poi
osu file format v14

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Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Nokashi wrote:

Hello, saw your map on #modreqs

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:339 (3) - Just a suggestion, but maybe extend this, since 00:02:196 (4) - isnt that strong of a sound to be clickable Did a slider return instead, consistancy with 00:04:339 (2) -
  2. 00:03:482 (1,2) - Use a similar rhythm to 00:00:054 (1,2,3) - to make the most out of the strong beats provided here mod above
  3. 00:30:053 (4,5) - would work better as a slider to emphasize the strong beat here 00:30:053 - yea why not
  4. 00:39:053 (2) - to be consistent, a slider like this 00:33:911 (5) - would work way better for emphasizing both vocals and instruments here I'm mapping the cymballs
  5. 01:12:053 (1,2) - changing their rotation would work really well here, like this, since its directly facing the 3 slider why not, looks good
Really clean and well structured diff oh well thanks !

[Fate]
  1. 00:04:339 (3) - turn into 2 1/2 sliders as well to be consistent with your rhythm choices nah, the slider return fits better with the sounds here
  2. 00:11:196 (3) - after seeing it happen again i concluded that it might have been intended to leave it like this, but you should investigate either way ^
  3. 00:14:196 (2) - I wouldnt fully overlap this above any slider, because it might cause readability issues, so do look into that well, the 1/8 slider return finishes at the tail, so I decided to stack the slider with the 1/8 slider return to avoid overlaping it with the tail
  4. 00:30:911 (1,2,3) - i feel like something like this would flow better and also look better alright, looks better
  5. 00:50:196 (7,8,9) - this is pretty linear flow, and angles like these dont tend to play well. i suggest making the 8 ->9 jump a more sharp angle ( maybe with ctrl g'ing the 9? ) changed into something else
  6. 01:27:993 (1,2,3) - ^ moved and changed the thing

Cool set, Good Luck~ Thanks for modding !
WingSilent
Voyons voir..

Supprime ces 2 green lines, 01:00:911 - 01:01:768 - pas besoin de stopper le kiai pour le redémarrer alors que la musique est toujours aussi intense.

Normal :
> 00:20:196 (5) - 2 cercles seraient mieux vu que tu as mis 2 hitclaps ici, et pour légèrement endurcir ta Normal aussi, car ça à l'air d'une grosse Easy pour le moment.
> 00:27:053 (5) - ^
> 00:33:911 (5,1) - Ne serait-ce pas plus propre comme ça ? http://puu.sh/uahFw.jpg
> 00:36:911 (4) - 264/259 si tu veux améliorer le flow avec le slider précédent et le suivant
> 00:43:768 (3) - Tu devrais réduire ce slider de moitié et lui mettre une reverse pour que tu obtienne un hitsound sur la voix ici 00:44:196 - :
> 01:09:482 (2) - En 2 cercles ça passerait mieux
> 01:12:911 (2) - ^
> 01:21:842 (5) - ^

Fate :
> 00:18:911 (4) - Purement personnel mais je verrais mieux ce slider tout droit pour qu'il soit mieux axé avec 00:19:339 (5) -
> 00:28:768 (5,6) - rip le flow ici, tu pars de 5 vers 6, mais 6 est une curve qui démarres du haut, ça va pas ça.. Sers-toi de cet exemple 00:29:839 (8,9) - :)
> 00:30:482 (10) - Flow issue, once again le slider dirigé à droite alors que la suite se trouve vers la gauche
> 00:35:196 (3) - Juste une proposition pour le flow, http://puu.sh/uaj2Z.jpg
> 00:47:196 (1,1) - Jusque là je me suis abstenu de citer les blankets mais vu la lenteur des sliders ici, ça se voit trop que celui-ci n'est pas super.
> 01:11:625 (2) - En 2 cercles pour emphasize avec la suite qui est plein de hitfinishes.
> 01:12:053 (1,2,1,2) - Pas logique ton flow, tes sliders qui dirigent vers le haut alors que le suivant est en bas :/
> 01:17:602 (5) - Courbe le un peu vers le haut celui-ci pour fix le flow vers le suivant : http://puu.sh/uajvx.jpg

Honk
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Lumy wrote:

Voyons voir..

Supprime ces 2 green lines, 01:00:911 - 01:01:768 - pas besoin de stopper le kiai pour le redémarrer alors que la musique est toujours aussi intense. Elle reprends sa voix pour pouvoir rechanter, et la mélodie reprends aussi, donc si

Normal :
> 00:20:196 (5) - 2 cercles seraient mieux vu que tu as mis 2 hitclaps ici, et pour légèrement endurcir ta Normal aussi, car ça à l'air d'une grosse Easy pour le moment. why not
> 00:27:053 (5) - ^ ^
> 00:33:911 (5,1) - Ne serait-ce pas plus propre comme ça ? http://puu.sh/uahFw.jpg j'aime pas D:
> 00:36:911 (4) - 264/259 si tu veux améliorer le flow avec le slider précédent et le suivant ok
> 00:43:768 (3) - Tu devrais réduire ce slider de moitié et lui mettre une reverse pour que tu obtienne un hitsound sur la voix ici 00:44:196 - : yes
> 01:09:482 (2) - En 2 cercles ça passerait mieux J'ai essayé, mais en slider c'est mieux je trouve xddd
> 01:12:911 (2) - ^ ^
> 01:21:842 (5) - ^ Celui la je l'ai changé pour consistancy avec les 2 mods que j'ai apply a 20 et 27 secondes

Fate :
> 00:18:911 (4) - Purement personnel mais je verrais mieux ce slider tout droit pour qu'il soit mieux axé avec 00:19:339 (5) - J'avais changé le pattern pendant ton mod je pense xD
> 00:28:768 (5,6) - rip le flow ici, tu pars de 5 vers 6, mais 6 est une curve qui démarres du haut, ça va pas ça.. Sers-toi de cet exemple 00:29:839 (8,9) - :) J'ai changé en qqch d'autre
> 00:30:482 (10) - Flow issue, once again le slider dirigé à droite alors que la suite se trouve vers la gauche emphasis sur gros tick blanc
> 00:35:196 (3) - Juste une proposition pour le flow, http://puu.sh/uaj2Z.jpg ok
> 00:47:196 (1,1) - Jusque là je me suis abstenu de citer les blankets mais vu la lenteur des sliders ici, ça se voit trop que celui-ci n'est pas super. fixed
> 01:11:625 (2) - En 2 cercles pour emphasize avec la suite qui est plein de hitfinishes. ok
> 01:12:053 (1,2,1,2) - Pas logique ton flow, tes sliders qui dirigent vers le haut alors que le suivant est en bas :/ changé
> 01:17:602 (5) - Courbe le un peu vers le haut celui-ci pour fix le flow vers le suivant : http://puu.sh/uajvx.jpg alright

Honk Honk Honk ty for modding
Vanillas
Hi~ from my queue
Mod
General
  1. Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768: Stay Alive bg.png (1920x1080)
  2. artist: エミリア(CV:高橋李依)
  3. Metaku's Hard -> Metaku's Advanced, Hazu's Light Insane -> Hazu's Hard
Normal
  1. Its ok to name it Easy.
  2. 00:01:339 and 00:04:768 remove hitsound or Vol. 20%
  3. 00:32:196 (2,3) - move it a 1/4 beat later ? https://puu.sh/uaiqA/955b9f4ef2.png
  4. 00:58:339 Vol. 50%
  5. 01:12:053 (1,2) - Vol. 60%
Metaku's Hard
  1. I see stack like this 1 2, not looking good. try to seperate them or make them closer like what you did at 01:26:092 (2,3,4,5) - Use default skin to check.
  2. 00:32:839 (5,1,2,3,4) - why change DS here ? I think DS for 00:33:696 (2,3) - is also good for 00:32:839 (5,1) -
  3. 00:57:482 (5,1) - will not get ranked if you do not fix this. Only if 2.46 is hardest diff its allowed to use it.
  4. 01:06:696 (6) - NC
  5. 01:14:625 (1,2) - seperate them. move 01:15:053 (2) - to X: 432 Y: 52.
Hazu's Light Insane
  1. 00:40:768 (9,10,1) - suggestion: DS between (10) and (1) larger than (9) and (10)
  2. suggestion: maybe add a spinner ? Try to have at least one spinner in each difficulty to create variety in the map and fluctuation among scores.
    nothing need to fix, just 2 suggestions.
Insane
  1. 00:14:196 (2,2) - add hitclap and Vol. 30%, also 00:19:982 (8) - Vol. 30%. Also apply to later notes like these.
  2. 00:36:053 (6) - NC
  3. 00:37:339 (9,10,1) - not flow after test playing as obtuse angle.

Not much to say. Nice map. GL~
nextplay
o/
Short Mod because the Map is really good!
[Normal]

00:44:839 (1) - What about ending the Spinner already here 00:46:982 because you want to have the I as a little break but with this atm it ends when the I starts
01:06:482 (2,3) - Blanket
01:21:842 (5) - Imo you should make this two circles into a Slider
01:24:393 (4,5) - Blanket

You don't have to give kds for this short mod

GL~!
Hazu-

Vanillas wrote:

Hi~ from my queue
Mod
General
  1. Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768: Stay Alive bg.png (1920x1080)
  2. artist: エミリア(CV:高橋李依)
  3. Metaku's Hard -> Metaku's Advanced, Hazu's Light Insane -> Hazu's Hard
Hazu's Light Insane
  1. 00:40:768 (9,10,1) - suggestion: DS between (10) and (1) larger than (9) and (10) Fixed.
  2. suggestion: maybe add a spinner ? Try to have at least one spinner in each difficulty to create variety in the map and fluctuation among scores. Not necessary.
    nothing need to fix, just 2 suggestions.

Not much to say. Nice map. GL~
Thanks~
Poi
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Stay Alive (TV Size)
Artist:EMILIA (CV: Rie Takahashi)
ArtistUnicode:EMILIA (CV: Rie Takahashi)
Creator:yaleufeu
Version:Hazu's Light Insane
Source:Re:ゼロから始める異世界生活
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Metaku

Vanillas wrote:

Metaku's Hard
  1. I see stack like this 1 2, not looking good. try to seperate them or make them closer like what you did at 01:26:092 (2,3,4,5) - Use default skin to check. Ahh no, that's on purpose. I've mapped this in a way that the spacing (and sv) get's progressively bigger up to the kiai where 1/4 gaps are visually separate.
  2. 00:32:839 (5,1,2,3,4) - why change DS here ? I think DS for 00:33:696 (2,3) - is also good for 00:32:839 (5,1) - Hmm yeah sure. I'm not sure what I had in mind there so might as well change it to be equal
  3. 00:57:482 (5,1) - will not get ranked if you do not fix this. Only if 2.46 is hardest diff its allowed to use it. Ehh? What exactly is unrankable about that?
  4. 01:06:696 (6) - NC Meh that'd make it inconsistent. I have nced the whole kiai the same way but that one just happens to be a bit longer because there's more circles and no 1/2 sliders like in 01:01:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
  5. 01:14:625 (1,2) - seperate them. move 01:15:053 (2) - to X: 432 Y: 52.
    I want them to be like that since it's a 1/6 gap anyway
Not much changed but thanks for the mod!
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Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Vanillas wrote:

Hi~ from my queue
Mod
General
  1. Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768: Stay Alive bg.png (1920x1080) it is allowed to have a 1920x1080 bg now
  2. artist: エミリア(CV:高橋李依) fixed
  3. Metaku's Hard -> Metaku's Advanced, Hazu's Light Insane -> Hazu's Hard Metaku mapped it as a Hard and Hazu as a Light Insane, I don't think we'll rename them
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  1. Its ok to name it Easy. will wait for further mods before renaming it or not
  2. 00:01:339 and 00:04:768 remove hitsound or Vol. 20% why D:
  3. 00:32:196 (2,3) - move it a 1/4 beat later ? https://puu.sh/uaiqA/955b9f4ef2.png no, ending 00:32:411 (3) - on 00:33:053 - is better since the sound on it is higher than 00:33:268 -
  4. 00:58:339 Vol. 50% why
  5. 01:12:053 (1,2) - Vol. 60% why

Insane
  1. 00:14:196 (2,2) - add hitclap and Vol. 30%, also 00:19:982 (8) - Vol. 30%. Also apply to later notes like these. why
  2. 00:36:053 (6) - NC fixed
  3. 00:37:339 (9,10,1) - not flow after test playing as obtuse angle. nah, I've made a flowbreak on purpose to emphasize 00:37:768 (1) -

Not much to say. Nice map. GL~
Thanks for modding ! My mod on ur map will be a bit late tho D:

nextplay wrote:

o/
Short Mod because the Map is really good!
[Normal]

00:44:839 (1) - What about ending the Spinner already here 00:46:982 because you want to have the I as a little break but with this atm it ends when the I starts it is better ending the spinner on 00:47:196 - to get a hitsound on it
01:06:482 (2,3) - Blanket fixed
01:21:842 (5) - Imo you should make this two circles into a Slider nah, I decided to make the same thing as 00:20:196 (5,6,1) - and 00:27:053 (5,6,1) -
01:24:393 (4,5) - Blanket fixed

You don't have to give kds for this short mod

GL~!
Thanks for modding !
Pachiru
[Metaku's Hard]
  1. 00:27:482 (1,2) - Since they don't sound same as those one: 00:26:625 (1,2,3,4) - why you used the same visual pattern? I think it would be better if you use a different mapping pattern for this 00:27:482 (1,2) -
  2. 00:33:482 (6) - Why not replacing those two beats by a 1/4 slider, because it feels better like it to me, and it plays better too.
  3. 00:48:911 (2,3) - On this part it feels like it's missing something, why not adding a beat to this tick: 00:48:696 -
Otherwise, there is nothing bad on it, it's pretty solid, and I think it will need sth like 1 or 2 mods maybe before being near of perfect :)

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  1. 00:49:768 (3,4,5) - Ca doit surement être le seul point négatif que je trouve a la map. Pourquoi tu n'essaies pas de bouger ton pattern ailleurs, plutôt que de le laisser retourner au même endroit et de tout regrouper au même endroit. Pourquoi tu ne le laisses pas partir du coté droit, ça serait plus joli honnêtement, et ça collerait mieux avec ton mapping actuel sur la difficulté.
  2. 01:22:266 (1,2) - Tu veux pas essayer de mettre ces deux sliders parallèles?
  3. 01:28:839 - J'aurais mis ce beat clickable honnêtement, et puis vu que le BPM est trés bas, je ne pense pas que ce sera un soucis de difficulté, t'en fais pas pour ça, même si le beat clickable est sur un rythme en 1/4 ;)
[Hazu's Light Insane]
  1. 01:28:205 (1,2,3,4) - Try to improve this jump because it's more than tricky, and I think there is a lot of way to improve this. The problem in this jump is those two notes, that breaks the jump flow 01:28:416 (2,3) -
  2. 01:20:994 (6,7) - This has not a really nice flow to me, try to move it to make this more fun to play.
That's all for me, good luck for rank !
Metaku

Pachiru wrote:

[Metaku's Hard]
  1. 00:27:482 (1,2) - Since they don't sound same as those one: 00:26:625 (1,2,3,4) - why you used the same visual pattern? I think it would be better if you use a different mapping pattern for this 00:27:482 (1,2) - Hmm I never thought of it as the same pattern tho since 2 is a slider... And well not going to change that since it would make it inconsistent with the rest of the map since I've mapped it in the same way elsewhere too (00:30:911 (1,2) - 00:34:339 (1,2) - 00:37:768 (1,2) - ) :/
  2. 00:33:482 (6) - Why not replacing those two beats by a 1/4 slider, because it feels better like it to me, and it plays better too. Hmm pretty much the same thing as 00:26:625 (1,2,3,4) - anyway and I don't see the point of making it different since 00:33:482 (1,2) - and 00:33:911 (3,4) - are mapped to the same sounds anyway
  3. 00:48:911 (2,3) - On this part it feels like it's missing something, why not adding a beat to this tick: 00:48:696 - But there's no beat there :?:
Otherwise, there is nothing bad on it, it's pretty solid, and I think it will need sth like 1 or 2 mods maybe before being near of perfect :)
Yeh no changes this time :/
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Pachiru wrote:

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  1. 00:49:768 (3,4,5) - Ca doit surement être le seul point négatif que je trouve a la map. Pourquoi tu n'essaies pas de bouger ton pattern ailleurs, plutôt que de le laisser retourner au même endroit et de tout regrouper au même endroit. Pourquoi tu ne le laisses pas partir du coté droit, ça serait plus joli honnêtement, et ça collerait mieux avec ton mapping actuel sur la difficulté. Changé
  2. 01:22:266 (1,2) - Tu veux pas essayer de mettre ces deux sliders parallèles? Ca fait trop droit D:
  3. 01:28:839 - J'aurais mis ce beat clickable honnêtement, et puis vu que le BPM est trés bas, je ne pense pas que ce sera un soucis de difficulté, t'en fais pas pour ça, même si le beat clickable est sur un rythme en 1/4 ;) Okay, fait !
That's all for me, good luck for rank ! Thanks for modding ! :D
Hazu-
All fixed, thanks~
Poi
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70,291,72482,2,0,P|110:283|162:271,1,74.9999948501589,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,216,72911,2,0,P|296:208|244:196,1,74.9999948501589,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,143,73340,2,0,P|122:135|174:123,1,74.9999948501589,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,73768,5,8,0:0:0:0:
262,200,73982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,36,74196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,148,74411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,212,74625,2,0,P|116:200|76:188,2,49.9999965667726,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,280,75053,2,0,P|288:268|328:256,2,49.9999965667726,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,356,75482,6,0,P|80:344|4:328,1,124.999995231629,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,156,76330,2,0,P|80:144|128:132,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,92,76754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,140,76966,2,0,P|240:184|236:232,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,284,77390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,240,77602,2,0,P|404:244|440:248,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,260,78026,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,92,78450,1,4,0:0:0:0:
280,144,78874,6,0,P|216:136|128:124,1,124.999995231629,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,280,79722,2,0,P|104:276|160:268,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,260,80146,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,320,80358,2,0,P|316:316|372:308,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,300,80782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,216,80994,2,0,P|412:160|416:124,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,68,81418,2,0,P|344:32|284:32,1,124.999995231629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,56,82054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,132,82266,6,0,P|184:212|192:280,1,124.999995231629,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,360,83117,2,0,P|332:320|336:276,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,228,83542,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,228,83755,2,0,P|384:188|380:144,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,84180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,144,84393,2,0,P|216:140|164:136,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,136,84819,1,4,0:0:0:0:
52,300,85244,1,4,0:0:0:0:
220,348,85670,6,0,P|296:332|368:320,1,124.999995231629,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,276,86515,2,0,P|508:236|504:200,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,136,86937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,184,87148,2,0,P|352:180|304:176,1,62.4999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,144,87571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,208,87782,2,0,P|188:252|192:292,1,62.4999976158143,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,88099,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,304,88205,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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124,336,88627,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,260,88839,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Linada
lo

  • [Fate]
  1. mek jamais tu met OD8 sur ça stp 7.5 au grand maximum
  2. 00:53:625 (6,7,8,9,10) - pls fait une vrai star here :v
  3. 00:58:982 (2,3,4,5,6) - Je trouve que le rythme est assez vide la, tu pourrais mapper un peu sur les vocal ici comme ça, tu peux mieux emphasize 01:00:911 (1,2,3,4) - tu pourrais faire un truc comme ça http://puu.sh/ucrxf/015098bce1.png
  4. 01:06:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ehm je pense pas que spam circle 1/2 fit ici xD

    la diff est vraiment clean mais ouai, au niveau du rythme ça fais vraiment vide, on sait pas trop ce que tu suis

  • [Metaku's Hard]
  1. 00:48:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know why you used such a different rhythm than 01:01:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , which i think fit better. It feels quite empty for the kiai

light insane is really good !
ye
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Linada wrote:

lo olala LinadaZzZzZ bigfan

  • [Fate]
  1. mek jamais tu met OD8 sur ça stp 7.5 au grand maximum mais c'est bien pour les pp OD 8
  2. 00:53:625 (6,7,8,9,10) - pls fait une vrai star here :v wi
  3. 00:58:982 (2,3,4,5,6) - Je trouve que le rythme est assez vide la, tu pourrais mapper un peu sur les vocal ici comme ça, tu peux mieux emphasize 01:00:911 (1,2,3,4) - tu pourrais faire un truc comme ça http://puu.sh/ucrxf/015098bce1.png J'follow la guitare en fond
  4. 01:06:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ehm je pense pas que spam circle 1/2 fit ici xD J'follow la guitare en fond

    la diff est vraiment clean mais ouai, au niveau du rythme ça fais vraiment vide, on sait pas trop ce que tu suis a, ty mé c just twa ki konpran pa mon art :(
ye
Metaku

Linada wrote:

  • [Metaku's Hard]
  1. 00:48:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know why you used such a different rhythm than 01:01:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , which i think fit better. It feels quite empty for the kiai Yeah it kinda does feel empty :/ But the drums are different in the first and second part of the kiai hence a different rhythm
Shyotamaze
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Fate
  1. 00:19:339 (5,6) - Le spacing devrait être + grand qu'ici 00:19:553 (6,7) - puisque tu emphasize les vocals ici 00:18:482 (2,3,4) - (3 et 4) donc faut rester constant, pareil pour 00:29:625 (7,8,9) -
  2. 00:20:196 Tu pourrais le rendre cliquable vu que les vocals sont plutôt forts ici (du coup faudrait augmenter le spacing de 00:20:411 (9) - pour créer un jump vu que les vocals sont forts ici)
  3. 00:22:768 (1) - T'aurais pu faire le même slider que 00:22:125 (3) - pour bien montrer que c'est le même son qui est mappé comme t'as fait ici 00:14:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - et là 00:24:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - (d'ailleurs enlève le NC sur 00:22:768 (1) - pls), pareil pour 01:17:602 (5) -
  4. 00:28:125 (3,4) - Un peu chelou comme flow imo ce serait mieux de blanket 00:27:482 (1) - plutôt que 00:28:768 (5) - pour rendre le flow + confortable genre comme ça http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7405946
  5. 00:30:482 (10) - Remplace le par 2 cercles comme ça tu loupes pas le vocal ici 00:30:696
  6. 00:33:268 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - T'auras pu faire un joli hexagone ici pour la structure et tout :(
  7. 00:44:625 (1) - yaleufeu qui fait un sliderart pas mal ? is dis real word ?
  8. 00:52:768 Ce serait cool de pouvoir cliquer dessus vu que vocals forts c'le début du "live", pareil pour 00:55:339 c'le début de "hitori"
  9. 00:57:053 (3,4) - Pourquoi pas un slider comme 00:57:482 (5) - pour bien suivre les vocals plutôt ?
Pas mal mais y a des rythmes un peu bizarres genre on est pas sûr si tu suis les vocals (qui sont beaucoup + importants que les drums ou quoi dans la musique imo) ou autre chose alors j'ai pas mentionné tous les rythmes chelous, je pense que tu vois où je veux en venir :^)
Bonne chance !
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