This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, March 19, 2018 at 7:41:24 PM

Artist: FELT
Title: Lies in Reality
Source: 東方神霊廟　～ Ten Desires.
Tags: Touhou Shinreibyou ~ Vivienne Maurits"禅"Cornelis Stage 5 Boss Theme Mononobe no Futo 物部　布都 大神神話伝 Legend of the Great Gods 東方Project Abyss nova
BPM: 204
Filesize: 11679kb
Play Time: 06:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Albatross (5.66 stars, 1880 notes)

Download: FELT - Lies in Reality
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WHY IS THE DIFF NAME ALBATROSS LMAO

very! nice

[seagull]

00:01:716 (1) - looks so ugly holy fk can u make this nicer lol

00:19:363 - rhythm around here seems pretty inconsistent. since sometimes you're following the guitar, sometimes the piano. shouldn't it be similar to the section before since it sounds the same?

00:22:892 (1,2,3,4) - seems funny to overmap this triple then ignore the actual drums between slider end and 4

01:14:510 - you ignored a quint here but put one 01:16:274 (2,3,4,5,6) - there though its a lot quieter o.o

01:31:862 (2) - ugh weird rhythm here with the stronger note on the slider end.

01:31:862 (2) - same here

i know you're following the deeper ones but i think ctrl g on the slider and circles before them would be better anyway.

01:45:612 (1,2,3) - shouldnt be ncd cuz u dont nc on the other times for the spaced triple

02:14:067 (2,3,4,5) - lol this is super misleading cuz uve been doing spaced out 2-3 for the triples and now it's spaced out for the entire triple

basically i think ppl would think its the same thing as 1/2 slider > double instead of what you have and misread.

03:34:912 - this section feels kinda anticlimatic for a guitar solo, just my impression though.

03:35:684 - definitely should be broken up into multiple sliders imo

03:48:745 - this part also feels pretty undermapped cuz of focus on drums in a guitar solo lol

04:37:890 - think you should continue the 1/4, cuz guitar scale is still doing it. maybe repeats or kicksliders

04:43:844 - rip triple (a bunch of them get ignored for some reason when others are followed, make that more consistent plz.)

05:14:285 (5,6,7,8) - this one is way too big imo. the motion is in the complete opposite direction.

05:30:755 (5) - same

mostly talked about rhythms, spacing didnt look bad and holy fuck please blanket some stuff i know you hate it but for the love of god at least the ones that are close put blankets

i won't push this cuz i like captin's map, but it shouldn't be too hard to get through. good luck!

Nao Tomori wrote:

[seagull]

00:01:716 (1) - looks so ugly holy fk can u make this nicer lol No idea what you're talking about I'll smoothen it out a bit

00:19:363 - rhythm around here seems pretty inconsistent. since sometimes you're following the guitar, sometimes the piano. shouldn't it be similar to the section before since it sounds the same? I do it solely for the appeal

00:22:892 (1,2,3,4) - seems funny to overmap this triple then ignore the actual drums between slider end and 4 I don't know, it sounds alright, though pretty hard to play

01:14:510 - you ignored a quint here but put one 01:16:274 (2,3,4,5,6) - there though its a lot quieter o.o Indeed it looks like I have

01:31:862 (2) - ugh weird rhythm here with the stronger note on the slider end. ?_?

01:31:862 (2) - same here

i know you're following the deeper ones but i think ctrl g on the slider and circles before them would be better anyway.

01:45:612 (1,2,3) - shouldnt be ncd cuz u dont nc on the other times for the spaced triple this one is spaced, AND it's unstacked though !!

02:14:067 (2,3,4,5) - lol this is super misleading cuz uve been doing spaced out 2-3 for the triples and now it's spaced out for the entire triple I don't really notice it

basically i think ppl would think its the same thing as 1/2 slider > double instead of what you have and misread.

03:34:912 - this section feels kinda anticlimatic for a guitar solo, just my impression though. I'd like to slow down the map here. Streams in guitar sections are cliche anyways

03:35:684 - definitely should be broken up into multiple sliders imo

03:48:745 - this part also feels pretty undermapped cuz of focus on drums in a guitar solo lol

04:37:890 - think you should continue the 1/4, cuz guitar scale is still doing it. maybe repeats or kicksliders

04:43:844 - rip triple (a bunch of them get ignored for some reason when others are followed, make that more consistent plz.) Damn

05:14:285 (5,6,7,8) - this one is way too big imo. the motion is in the complete opposite direction. Yeah it's probably too hard

05:30:755 (5) - same

mostly talked about rhythms, spacing didnt look bad and holy fuck please blanket some stuff i know you hate it but for the love of god at least the ones that are close put blankets Blankets are my favourite pattern though

i won't push this cuz i like captin's map, but it shouldn't be too hard to get through. good luck!

Thanks for the mod I added a note to make a triple and fixed the beginning slider

helo

all I have for now

osuskrub wrote:

helo

00:19:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this looks a bit messy, though i'd prolly start spacing the stream out like you did starting on 3, cause it seems like you are following piano To be honest I didn't even know there was a piano there haha
00:24:069 (9,1) - reduce the spacing here, going across the screen in 2/10ths of a second without reason I'll look into it
from 01:07:745 - 01:17:892 you seem to be mapping drums but you ignore lots of sounds that would become triplets like 01:11:789 01:13:260 01:14:730
y tho It's for the good of the patterns
01:32:744 (4) - you put a lot of emphasis on this slider and all of the rest of the ones that make the same sound except 01:34:803 (3) - I would probably put more distance from 2 I think a little variation is healthy
01:45:612 (1,2) - why not stack? Because... geometry
02:10:832 (7,8,9,1) - distance between this and what you did on 02:13:038 (5,1) - is really inconsistent. it's okay to vary a bit from distance though this is too much variance. you can either reduce distance on 9,1 or increase distance on 1,2 I will look into it
all I have for now

Thanks hope you can give me more feedback

mod#

thanks for your suggestions!
I made a lot of changes on some parts regarding the rhythm
I'll look into some of the distance issues a bit more

alright you asked for gameplay so i'll try to pay attention to that

00:01:726 (1,2,3) - its awkward how 1 is mapped to a piano sound, then 2 is mapped to a drum sound 1/2 after piano sound, and then 3 is mapped to piano sound again. i'd make all the heads piano, and map the drum sound with a tail for consistency. maybe something like this

same applies elsewhere in this section(e.g. 00:04:814 (2) - )

00:02:829 (3,1) - i'm fairly certain these are both placed 1/4 too late.

00:09:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - after the first 9 note stream, the player has to jump from the kickslider to the stream, but then the stream continues opposite the direction of movement leading into it, making the flow here awkward. there's plenty of other points in the map where the flow is awkward (e.g. 00:22:461 (5,6,7,8,9) - 00:27:167 (5,6,7,8,9) - 02:42:165 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc.) but there's also where it flows properly (e.g. 02:51:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - 05:09:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - ). check all the bursts in the map, there's quite a few more i didn't mention. change the direction and rotation of the stream to match the movement of the player leading into it, like this:


etc.

just as a note, awkward movements like 00:10:991 (6,1) - are fine since it's emphasizing the piano sound. the ones i pointed out above aren't.

00:19:226 (1,2,3,4) - i'd go for a stream here to match the piano. it's weird how there's stops when the piano is so prominent here

00:19:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - dont understand why this stream is like this. cool pattern but doesnt fit the song

00:39:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i dont like how you started mapping the guitar sound but then switched to bass drum half way through. put slider heads on the guitar part and let the tails cover the bass drum, feels weird otherwise (or vice versa i suppose. doesn't matter what you do as long as you do it consistently)

01:08:196 (3) - emphasis is right but still undermapped. definitely need something on the white tick too. make this a repeat slider?

01:31:283 (1,2,1,2) - same thing i was mentioning earlier, you switched from guitar on slider heads to being on a tail. you probably still want a note on the snare hit, maybe change the second combo to 3 circles instead? inconsistent rhythm is present throughout this whole section, make similar changes

02:29:813 (1) - missing a bass drum sound on the white tick in the middle of this slider. change the way the sliders are mapped throughout this part too (repeats, change lengths, etc.)

03:36:870 (4) - avoid putting slider ends on snare sounds

03:58:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - i like the idea of having the kicksliders vary in length but it's not handled consistently. i'd put a jump on every bass & snare sound.

most of the problems after the second break are more of what ive mentioned above. focus on:
-making sure flow is good when entering streams & bursts
-making sure that you don't miss sounds within sliders
-making sure that rhythm with slider heads / tails is used consistently.

hopefully this helps!

thank you!
I fixed a bit of the beginning
I didn't go ahead with most of the rhythm suggestions because I don't view them as major issues
I will evaluate the one stream that stands out to see if I can or need to change it

Hi ! I was too hard but i did what i can^^


A little mod ('-') made as fast as i could because i realized i'm really tired^^ hope it helps
See ya

I changed some issues to make the flow better and the NC issues
some of the other issues about readability I'm gonna evaluate a bit further to see if they're necessary

thanks so much!

I actually really like this song and I'm very tempted to download the client just to mod this for you.

Do it for me Hika

Hello mod from my queue~
Good luck!

TheKingHenry wrote:

Hello mod from my queue~

Albatross

1. I don't think you are supposed to have 大神神話伝as the non-romanized title, it's not the title of the song, it's title of the original touhou song that this song is based on. The title should just be Lies in Reality. (add 大神神話伝to tags then tho) oh oops fixed
2. 01:19:813 - the 7/4 at 01:21:872 - should be here already You're right
3. similarly, 4/4 begins at 02:38:048 - instead of 02:40:401 - Fixed
4. either add 4/4 at 04:48:928 - or move the 3/4 so that it's at 04:50:986 - instead First one
5. 05:03:045 - 4/4 begins already here instead of 05:07:751 - Mhm
6. use custom combo colors, default ones in skin can look pretty retarded when considering the visual experience Oh yeah forgot about combo colors
7. 00:02:804 (3) - if you do stuff like this, have it inside slider, since clicking on this god knows how snapped beat is very unintuitive
8. 00:04:079 (4) - NC instead of 00:04:520 (1) - cuz the strong sound. This song has a lot of places where it emphasises the note 1/2 before the big white tick. Usually that's where you have NC then, so I won't mention 'em since likely there's hella lot of NC things to change here. Note that not every NC should still be done like that, just when the music justifies it
9. 00:13:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is just an example, I think there were many places where you had stream on place where the sound the stream bases the stream in is very quiet or doesn't even exist. Like here, I don't hear anything that would make sense to be made into 1/4. Again since there were a lot of these, I won't be mentioning them all. Note that this same thing applies to triples too, not only longer 1/4
10. 00:19:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I guess you are mapping the piano sound here or smth? That's kinda contradictory tho, since the piano is stronger around 00:19:226 (1,2,3,4) - than here, but there you just ignored it. Would make more sense to map it there then as well. Especially since you are going for not-so-common stream shape
11. 00:24:961 (7,8,9) - looks like this is 1/4 too late or smth? There no sound at 00:25:182 - but at 00:24:888 - there is Fixed
12. 01:06:284 (3) - NC should be here (white tick, emphasised sound, new phrase)
13. 01:09:226 (4) - I guess I said I wouldn't mention NCs again, but I feel like this could get skipped going according to what I said in the beginning. So yeah, NC here not earlier lol (or alternatively NC here AND earlier but that would just get messy and the place where the earlier NC is isn't too good either so preferably just this)
14. 02:43:342 (4,5,6) - weird spacing+flow. The linear flow combined with the drastically different spacing feels random, especially when 02:43:636 (6) - is somewhat important sound. Atleast it would make sense to have somewhat similar spacing and perhaps emphasize things with angles or smth
15. All in all, NC were pretty messy imo, visuals could use some work too if you want (but since they weren't really wrong or bad and were somewhat consistent in what they were, I didn't mention anything here). You might need to adjust both visuals and gameplay according to the structural changes you need to do to fix the NCing I had some sort of system for NC which made sense to me. I'll look through and re-evaluate whether a different NC system is more intuitive

Good luck!

Thank you !

Hey, from my modding queue




Good luck

thank you! I updated the tags
regarding NC I do have some system I am following
HP is low for leniency during the last chorus and because the map is super long. it'll feel bad to fail after playing for 5 mins
most of the position suggestion I didn't make changes because the problems don't seem to be urgent

thanks for the mod!

from q



Interesting map, gl with it

thank you!

I fixed most of the suggestions
regarding NC it's for combo colour purposes because I'm like that