This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mardi 2 mai 2017 at 20:05:29

Artist: C-Show
Title: On the FM
Source: beatmania IIDX 23 copula
Tags: KONAMI BEMANI
BPM: 200
Filesize: 3067kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:

1. Futsuu (2,28 stars, 287 notes)
2. Inner Oni (5,28 stars, 657 notes)
3. Kantan (2,04 stars, 173 notes)
4. Muzukashii (3,33 stars, 423 notes)
5. Oni (4,13 stars, 557 notes)

Download: C-Show - On the FM
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bjr

[Inner Oni]

1. I guess this part is trying to follow the melody according to this K 00:05:836 (32) - . So, maybe change this note 00:05:386 (29) - into a k ? The pitch is quite different on this note : 00:05:386 (29) - . While those 2 are exactly the same : 00:05:536 (30,31) - .
2. 00:24:286 (69,70,71) - I suppose you're using this triplet to follow the melody. So I just have a suggest, to maybe make it even better. How about swapping color (changing into a k d) those note 00:24:586 (72,73) - ? The pitch on 72 is actually more high pitched than the 73. Also, 73 is almost like a downbeat.
3. 01:03:036 (20) - how about changing this one into a d ? Even tho this note is pretty similar to those one 01:02:836 (18,19,21) - . Changing this one into a d will emphasize the last note, which is stronger than the other.
4. 01:12:436 (90,91,92,93) - the melody is exactly the same as this one ^. So if you fixed it, don't forget about this one.

[Oni]

1. 00:28:786 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - I can understand why it's a ddd ddk ddk. But I really think this note should have a clear difference to be emphasized. So, how about just changing the pattern into a ddd ddd ddk ?
2. The melody here 01:08:136 (52,53) - being really similar to 01:08:436 (54,55) - . I'd highly suggest to use the same mimic by just changing this note 01:08:136 (52) - into a k

[Muzukashii]
don't forget your OD :c

1. 00:05:386 (21,22) - maybe change those to into k ? It'll make a difference between those note, and the triplet d. I think, make those note different from the triplet might be better since both note are on melody (not the case for the triplet) ; and also, something similar to a drum snare.

Don't forget about your OD on easier diff :c

also, I don't think easier diff need my help (after checking them)

dem

>General
* ur HP OD setting seems lazy, e

>Inner
* 00:05:386 (29,30) - please kat these, dem yu not gib this alteration colors.. dat drums >:^(
* 00:06:136 (33,34,35) - kat DON DON!!111 -> differ finishars, sooo lets maek contrastt 00:05:836 (32,36) - 00:05:836 (32) -
* 00:07:936 - this cat? why not end of spinner :^)
* 00:08:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these SV are so suddens, but just retry ye.. tbh its awsome, ppl just need to press " ` " if they suc
* 00:10:411 - kat, but np here.. just silly maybe to kat this? *for vocal pfftt, forget it* buttt.. 00:44:761 - :thinking:
* 00:15:436 (43,1) - finisher pls? like 00:15:436 (43,1) -
* 01:00:636 (1,2) - ._. 01:00:736 (2) - this don alteration to 01:00:836 (3,4) - ... weird, ctrl g pls
* 01:03:136 - okey this fine cuz still haev similar sounds like 01:02:836 (18,19,20) - , but if you want don for drum
* 01:40:936 (5,6,7) - wow.. taktaktak~

>Oni
* 00:06:136 (29,30,31) - inner!!111
* 00:07:936 -
* tfw u just dlt'd for spread just in here.. 00:10:186 - and 00:08:736 (7) - pls delete this 1 for Oni playah ~_~
* 00:21:061 (27) - 00:23:461 - 00:25:861 - pls dld, too hot... :^)
* 00:28:786 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - :THONKANG: ( maybe, 00:29:161 (115,118) - choose one )
* 00:34:486 - give me breeeekkkkk
* 00:38:386 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - :THENKONG:
* 00:43:261 - 1/2 alternating gyud..dt dt... no moar 1/4 here X(
* 00:48:061 - yummy.. or gib brekk on 1/2 pottarn
* 00:49:036 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241) - remove 2 or idk, density pls..
* 00:57:936 (22,28) - dlt want want? and in Muzu.. put slidar nggh.. no? oke no
* 00:59:836 - yes
* 01:00:636 (1,2) -
* 01:26:736 (22,28) -
and next... similar, density density... oni hottt

>Muzu
* nice slidar slidar and some spread from 1/3 or idk... and something that you can apply here from my Suggestion (like weird emphasize or add notes finisher+spin.. idk) in oni inner

>baby diffs ok!1!! idc bye!

why your map fun dem sir :^) fk me ye

Kin wrote:

bjr

[Inner Oni]

1. I guess this part is trying to follow the melody according to this K 00:05:836 (32) - . So, maybe change this note 00:05:386 (29) - into a k ? The pitch is quite different on this note : 00:05:386 (29) - . While those 2 are exactly the same : 00:05:536 (30,31) - . ok
2. 00:24:286 (69,70,71) - I suppose you're using this triplet to follow the melody. So I just have a suggest, to maybe make it even better. How about swapping color (changing into a k d) those note 00:24:586 (72,73) - ? The pitch on 72 is actually more high pitched than the 73. Also, 73 is almost like a downbeat. marche dans les deux sens, le d que tu me conseil de swap sonne quand même plus bas que le k précédent. j'ai pas de préférence pour un choix ou un autre niveau gameplay mais ça fait trop de k d'affilé donc je garde d
3. 01:03:036 (20) - how about changing this one into a d ? Even tho this note is pretty similar to those one 01:02:836 (18,19,21) - . Changing this one into a d will emphasize the last note, which is stronger than the other. j'pref garder le k, pas fan du pattern résultant si je change en d
4. 01:12:436 (90,91,92,93) - the melody is exactly the same as this one ^. So if you fixed it, don't forget about this one.

[Oni]

1. 00:28:786 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - I can understand why it's a ddd ddk ddk. But I really think this note should have a clear difference to be emphasized. So, how about just changing the pattern into a ddd ddd ddk ? ok
2. The melody here 01:08:136 (52,53) - being really similar to 01:08:436 (54,55) - . I'd highly suggest to use the same mimic by just changing this note 01:08:136 (52) - into a k j'essaie de pas trop utiliser de kd tbh, jgarde le dd

[Muzukashii]
don't forget your OD :c

1. 00:05:386 (21,22) - maybe change those to into k ? It'll make a difference between those note, and the triplet d. I think, make those note different from the triplet might be better since both note are on melody (not the case for the triplet) ; and also, something similar to a drum snare. jl'ai fait sur la inner mais là idk, de base j'préfère full d et là y'a pas masse de note donc ça passe pour moi

Don't forget about your OD on easier diff :c

also, I don't think easier diff need my help (after checking them)

cimer

Surono wrote:

dem

>General
* ur HP OD setting seems lazy, e

>Inner
* 00:05:386 (29,30) - please kat these, dem yu not gib this alteration colors.. dat drums >:^( 29 is k after the other mod, 30 doesnt sound like k
* 00:06:136 (33,34,35) - kat DON DON!!111 -> differ finishars, sooo lets maek contrastt 00:05:836 (32,36) - 00:05:836 (32) - don KAT KAY*
* 00:07:936 - this cat? why not end of spinner :^) plays cooler cause high sv before slow down
* 00:08:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these SV are so suddens, but just retry ye.. tbh its awsome, ppl just need to press " ` " if they suc 8^)
* 00:10:411 - kat, but np here.. just silly maybe to kat this? *for vocal pfftt, forget it* buttt.. 00:44:761 - :thinking:
* 00:15:436 (43,1) - finisher pls? like 00:15:436 (43,1) - wot its finisher already
* 01:00:636 (1,2) - ._. 01:00:736 (2) - this don alteration to 01:00:836 (3,4) - ... weird, ctrl g pls ok
* 01:03:136 - okey this fine cuz still haev similar sounds like 01:02:836 (18,19,20) - , but if you want don for drum
* 01:40:936 (5,6,7) - wow.. taktaktak~ removed lulmao

>Oni
* 00:06:136 (29,30,31) - inner!!111 .
* 00:07:936 -
* tfw u just dlt'd for spread just in here.. 00:10:186 - and 00:08:736 (7) - pls delete this 1 for Oni playah ~_~ its ez..
* 00:21:061 (27) - 00:23:461 - 00:25:861 - pls dld, too hot... :^) ok
* 00:28:786 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - :THONKANG: ( maybe, 00:29:161 (115,118) - choose one ) |^(
* 00:34:486 - give me breeeekkkkk wots that
* 00:38:386 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - :THENKONG:
* 00:43:261 - 1/2 alternating gyud..dt dt... no moar 1/4 here X( removed something
* 00:48:061 - yummy.. or gib brekk on 1/2 pottarn
* 00:49:036 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241) - remove 2 or idk, density pls.. weary
* 00:57:936 (22,28) - dlt want want? and in Muzu.. put slidar nggh.. no? oke no
* 00:59:836 - yes
* 01:00:636 (1,2) - ok
* 01:26:736 (22,28) -
and next... similar, density density... oni hottt

>Muzu
* nice slidar slidar and some spread from 1/3 or idk... and something that you can apply here from my Suggestion (like weird emphasize or add notes finisher+spin.. idk) in oni inner

>baby diffs ok!1!! idc bye!

why your map fun dem sir :^) fk me ye

tyvm

Nofool]
[quote="Surono wrote:

dem

>Inner
* 00:15:436 (43,1) - finisher pls? like 00:15:436 (43,1) - wot its finisher already dem me madnuts, I mean 00:59:836 - here.. why not make like 00:15:436 (44,1) -

>Oni
* 00:34:486 - give me breeeekkkkk wots that "its me!" -Maria Brah

[quote]

kds agian, ty

01:00:736 (2,3,4,5) - I realized if u follow instrudem, o yessss I cant understn map.. ]even not understn grill.. nvm frgt

[General]

1. Use actual settings because you aren't edgy enough to pull this shit yet.
2. I don't think you should try going ham with SV on lower diffs tbh. Risky af lmao.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:34:186 (62,63) - I see the density increase, but I think one here is just safe since you don't make another until a good amount later.

enjoy this micromod on your pro safe set lmao

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]

1. Use actual settings because you aren't edgy enough to pull this shit yet.
2. I don't think you should try going ham with SV on lower diffs tbh. Risky af lmao.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:34:186 (62,63) - I see the density increase, but I think one here is just safe since you don't make another until a good amount later.

enjoy this micromod on your pro safe set lmao

settings back to residentsleeper usual ones
SV nerfed on kantan/futsuu
removed one note at the spot u linked for the futsuu

TY

I don't think Muzukashii should have them either rly, since it's where players barely start to read shit like 1/4 and 1/3 so having them faster just ruins that readability for them xd

fixed

ty PieGone loverz for bub this

Edit:
bg is correct size? I lazy to re-DL since my conection are limited... :C

* for futsuu and kantan, 00:15:586 - spinner start here, its sudden for newbie.
* 00:22:036 - its awkawrd, move to 00:21:886 - here, more emphasized and Synchroned with sounds *for kantan*
* 00:21:436 - move to 00:21:736 - here and 00:22:036 - this, you can choose to delete or change it to don, for futsuu
* 00:08:736 (7) - can you delete this for Oni ?
* 00:28:936 (40,41,42) - maybe try with finish on muzu diff? so futsuu only as normal pattern
* 00:57:936 (22,28) - for Oni
* 00:59:836 - add finisher circle then 00:59:911 - spinner here. 00:15:436 - u did it

omg SVs oh and please, your base pattern ( 1/2 snap ) on muzu and oni are looooong. low diff I think fine, but many kats lul X"D

OMG SUR'S FIRST BUBBLE QUALIFY

Surono wrote:

ty PieGone loverz for bub this

Edit:
bg is correct size? I lazy to re-DL since my conection are limited... :C idk i think size's ok, fits high resolution

* for futsuu and kantan, 00:15:586 - spinner start here, its sudden for newbie. ok
* 00:22:036 - its awkawrd, move to 00:21:886 - here, more emphasized and Synchroned with sounds *for kantan* nah plays awkard to me at - 00:21:886 -, big sound is at - 00:22:036 -
* 00:21:436 - move to 00:21:736 - here and 00:22:036 - this, you can choose to delete or change it to don, for futsuu lol changed
* 00:08:736 (7) - can you delete this for Oni ? plays weird with break imo
* 00:28:936 (40,41,42) - maybe try with finish on muzu diff? so futsuu only as normal pattern i think normal notes are better to emphasize - 00:29:836 (63) - as big notes
* 00:57:936 (22,28) - for Oni mmmmmm i think its ok tbh, either this or muzu's pattern, its weird having 5 notes 1/3
* 00:59:836 - add finisher circle then 00:59:911 - spinner here. 00:15:436 - u did it nice

omg SVs oh and please, your base pattern ( 1/2 snap ) on muzu and oni are looooong. low diff I think fine, but many kats lul X"D not hard

ty

since the overall is not hard
I luv ur map

Qualified

ded

gratsu desu nofool-sama and surono-sensei/senpai <3

lmao gratz (?)

Surono Heart was stolen here LOL
anyway congratz

Why are we gratzing for Surono lol?

Gratz Nofool! Decent map.

Hello, this map has been disqualified for spread issues in lower difficulties.

• [General]

1. Here is the resized background with a resolution of 1920x1200 pixels. Although the current one fits the widescreen ratio, you could use standardized sizes as they are easily available in the internet.
2. Please reconsider the use of SV changes in Kantan and Futsuu as they are not encouraged in lower difficulties. If you really want to keep them, they could be milder in Kantan and Futsuu difficulties to make them beginner-friendly. Take 00:15:361 - this spot as an example, 1.7x is in fact too significant for Futsuu.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:29:236 (25) - this note could be deleted for a longer break. Currently the pattern chain is too long from 00:03:436 to 00:40:486 -
2. 00:38:836 (46) - you may delete this note for consistency if you apply ^

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:10:336 (9) - a 2/1 break could be made simply by removing this note. Beginners need rests to prepare for upcoming patterns, so it would be better not to strain them by leaving 00:01:036 to 00:24:436 - consecutively mapped.
2. 00:28:936 (40) and 00:38:536 (78) - similar to Kantan, these notes could be deleted for rest moments. Currently the pattern chain is too long from 00:25:036 to 00:53:236 -
3. 00:34:336 (61) - you may want to delete this note as well for cohering 00:24:736 -
4. From 01:01:036 to 01:19:936 - the note density in this part is very similar to that in Kantan but there are already plenty of 1/3 notes in Muzukashii, resulting in an unbalanced spread. What you could do here is to either use some monotone 1/3 doublets in Futsuu (e.g. add a note at spots like 01:01:561 and 01:08:161 - ) or simplify the patterns in both Muzukashii and Oni in this session.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:10:336 (14) - same as Futsuu especially when the first minute of the difficulty is mapped without 2/1 breaks.
2. 00:21:436 (17) - you may move this note to 00:21:736 - to shorten the 1/2 + 1/4 pattern. Currently its length is quite similar to that in Oni and the difficulty gap with Futsuu is rather huge due to this.
3. 00:23:836 (31) - 00:26:236 (46) - 00:31:036 (72) - 00:33:436 (86) - 00:35:836 (102) - same as ^
4. 00:34:486 (92) - this note could be deleted to avoid excessively long pattern chain as mentioned.
5. 00:53:536 (6) and 00:55:936 (12) - same as 00:10:336 (14) -

You may call me back after that.