LABYRINTHS - Yumeji Labyrinth · forum

Binguo

Joined April 2015

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Binguo 2017-01-30T15:22:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年11月17日星期五 at 17:11:25

Artist: LABYRINTHS
Title: Yumeji Labyrinth
Source: うらら迷路帖
Tags: Urara Meirochou J.C.STAFF 原田彩楓はらたさやか Harata Sayaka 本渡楓ほんどかえで Hondo Kaede 久保ユリカくぼゆりか Kubo Yurika 佳村はるかよしむらはるか Yoshimura Haruka Pata-Mon Hanazawa Kana Kamiya
BPM: 162
Filesize: 3457kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.62 stars, 125 notes)
Fortune (4.76 stars, 375 notes)
Kamiya's Hard (3 stars, 206 notes)
Kana's Normal (1.93 stars, 148 notes)
Pata-Mon's Insane (4.14 stars, 318 notes)

Download: LABYRINTHS - Yumeji Labyrinth
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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うらら迷路帖

杀猪卡_1112的迷路帖 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/616683

谢谢骏喵的meta
References:
+ http://www.tbs.co.jp/anime/urara/disc/cd01.html
+ http://www.tbs.co.jp/anime/urara/goods/img/cd01a.jpg

Pata-Mon's Insane
Hanazawa Kana's Normal
Kamiya's Hard

pp map 请放心食用
不飞了 You can you up Me,no English.

Last edited by Binguo 2017-11-17T09:13:43+00:00, edited 31 times in total.

[Kamiya]

637 posts

Joined November 2012

[Kamiya] 2017-02-14T08:29:19+00:00

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Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-02-14T09:14:26+00:00

微调下
ps tags里加上你原来id

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: ulala.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49572
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22905,28831,40683,55498,67350,82164
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Yumeji Labyrinth
TitleUnicode:夢路らびりんす
Artist:LABYRINTHS
ArtistUnicode:らびりんず
Creator:Misaki-Mei
Version:Pata-Mon's Insane
Source:うらら迷路帖
Tags:J.C.STAFF 原田彩楓 はらた さやか Harata Sayaka 本渡楓 ほんど かえで Hondo Kaede 久保 ユリカ くぼ ゆりか Kubo Yurika 佳村 はるか よしむらはるか Yoshimura Haruka Pata-Mon Hanazawa Kana Kamiya
BeatmapID:1199886
BeatmapSetID:565555

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.2
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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SugarCube_BE

10 posts

Joined July 2016

SugarCube_BE 2017-03-01T12:09:52+00:00

This one should make it to the ranked ones!!!
Really love this anime and it's so a cheerful song!

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2017-03-06T15:49:40+00:00

Ronke wrote:
This one should make it to the ranked ones!!!
Really love this anime and it's so a cheerful song!

ORZ

kiddly

884 posts

Joined February 2009

kiddly 2017-03-17T18:14:24+00:00

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Otosaka-Yu

1,117 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-03-18T03:13:45+00:00

水摸四水摸
音效统一点？

Wlala

看上去好乱，但是很神
看上去是主难度，ar调高点

00:10:590 (7,8) - 是故意的吗
00:47:535 (3,4) - 重叠的
00:29:387 (3,6) - 不是stack的强迫症够难受
00:34:757 (1,2) - ^
00:59:202 (4) - ^

美丽，还是说句看上去好乱

Pata-Mon's Insane

我看巴达萌这没有combo colour啊，还有这ar要不要再往上点？8.5左右？8.2感觉好像有点低

00:22:905 (1,2,3) - 虽然可玩，但是突然往下会不会太难？
00:25:868 (1,2,3) - ^
01:22:164 (1,2,3) - ^
01:25:127 (1,2,3) - ^
00:55:498 - 01:07:350 - 为什么不插kiai段？

Insane

这没下音效啊……sl在0.2好像不是太好，0.5就适合了

00:16:979 (1) - 只需四点可
01:27:720 (6) - sv的变换请nc

Kamiya's Hard

音效略吵，这歌不是很适合nm simple

00:45:127 (3) - 不好看……
00:49:572 (1,2) - blanket？
00:56:609 (5,7) - ^
01:11:239 (3,7) - stack
01:22:905 (3) - 建议换成俩滑条
01:25:868 (3) - ^

01:09:757 - gugu
摸低难度不是很擅长，而且看了应该还好
美丽，祝早日rank！

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-03-18T06:49:06+00:00

[General]

那个求求你.jpg 这曲子别放哨子（为啥主难度都没哨子 EN全都哨子……）

[Easy]

开头这段我还是觉得跟轨要统一比较好．跟轨统一了也一样有不少地方可以有变化，在easy里类似地方时而用蓝线节奏时而1/1铺我觉得这不是好方法
00:11:053 (1,2) - 这里也是
00:12:535 (3,4,5) - 我觉得这里先两note后1/1滑条会跟vocal更配
00:15:498 (3,4) - 这里也是节奏ctrl+比较好，00:15:498 - 00:15:868 - 00:16:239 - 这三个vocal是跟前一句的，一个折返跟，00:16:609 - 这个是跟后一句，单独一个note
中间那段的音效……这曲子跟哨子我是在是觉得……（甚至于我一度以为是你加了自定义音效我这里没有，吓得我redl了一次）
00:53:646 (4,5) - ctrl+G
00:56:239 (2,3,4,5) - 这排列感觉不适合放easy
00:59:942 - 不太理解这种空拍
01:14:757 (3,4) - 前面有类似的地方说过，节奏ctrl+G
我觉得低难度如果希望不那么单调，想寻求一些变化，是可以的，但前提还是应该跟好轨，在这基础上，比如都是1/1节奏，哪里用连续两个滑条，哪里用折返+note或者note+折返，哪里可以连续俩note，还有哪些地方的音你觉得次要一些，可以把一些拍子空过去，放上2/1滑条，其实这样节奏也可以很丰富．为了寻求变化而看上去很随意就有点适得其反了

[Normal]

00:18:461 (1) - 低难度别放这么挤的……而且说实话……难看
多次折返我依然不觉得是最好的解决方法，嘛不过这个你应该考虑过．我个人还是觉得简化节奏是最好的，你要不想改的话就到时候看看bn了
但是有个问题，00:23:646 (1) - 这个你明显跟的是主旋律（りゃりゃりゃりゃ），但是00:24:387 (1,2,3,4) - 你跟了伴唱（いつむぢゃんぢゃん）．我觉得要选一个跟好，这切轨实在没必要．后面还有几处同样的就不说了
00:34:016 (1) - 前面那里“りゃりゃりゃりゃ”用折返滑条跟至少是有道理的，因为是4个一样的特殊音．这里的话就比较无理了．00:34:572 - 这明显一个锣声，把这个单拆出note最好
00:39:942 (1) - 这里也没必要折返，前后节奏密度也不高，拆成俩1/2滑条就很好
01:12:535 - 如果你是跟vocal，那我觉得这里还是拆开比较好
01:14:016 (2,3,4) - 没必要强行三角，这里4往左放更舒服
01:19:202 (1,1) - 这音乐完全不适合转盘啊……而且前面一样的（00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,1,2,3,4) - ）你也是正常放的，复制粘贴都比转盘好（曲子里没有合适地方就不放转盘没关系的，你看其他难度全都没转盘．这曲子可能就开头那里放转盘比较合适，不过normal应该塞不下）

[Hard]

00:13:831 (6) - 讲道理 hard里的话直接放三连还简单点．短滑条在hard里是非常规，最好别随便用
00:16:053 (2,3) - 这俩object里的重音全都不clickable啊跟鼓跟vocal都一样
00:20:127 (2) - why
00:23:276 (2) - normal clap 好吵
00:34:572 (4) - 别叠
00:40:683 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - 这段ds少大一点别擦边
01:26:794 (5) - 3次折返太怪了……换成这样更舒服https://puu.sh/uO93H/48682a6cd8.png
01:27:350 (1,2,3) - 吵……

[Insane]

后俩难度看起来很乱但打起来要比看起来好点……所以我也不懂怎么样了．就打一下然后说说打起来感觉怪怪的地方吧
00:44:016 (2,3,1) - 不合适的读图梗．实际上节奏上00:44:016 (2,3) - 就用滑条应该是最合理的，至少也要00:43:646 - 和00:44:016 - 一致．00:43:646 (1,2,3,1,2) - 用三组两两重合的note来跟这三个vocal也是一种合理，但现在中间突然出现一个梗感觉很莫名
00:47:720 (4) - 这overmap感觉没必要
00:49:479 (9,1) - 在insane里这个东西我觉得存疑．实际上仔细一听00:49:294 - 00:49:387 - 00:49:479 - 是在overmap啊这里调整一下看看
00:54:757 (1) - 这单独搞个滑条出来后面还空了一拍感觉很奇怪啊不如00:55:127 (1) - 这滑条直接早一拍开始，折返持续两拍
01:23:924 (2) - 好像没什么明显的音
01:27:905 - 5%

[Wlala]

うらら是Urara 中英的通用译名也都是Urara，自己造词没必要吧
结构上：为什么kiai部分全都是这种普通间距连打，开头00:13:461 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 各种飞？至少类似的地方比如01:00:683 (4,5,6) - 01:01:239 (8,9,1) - 等应该有不亚于开头那里的强度才对吧
00:07:720 (4,1) - 分开放（最好是让00:08:090 (1) - 头到00:07:720 (4) - 身子最近点的距离和00:07:350 (2,3,4) - 这里的ds相等）
00:16:239 (6,7,8) - 这应该是等ds的吧
00:40:127 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - 可以有趣点的，比如跟着旋律高低：https://puu.sh/uOaM8/3a99a8c279.png
00:46:609 - 到00:48:090 - 这里节奏我觉得很不舒服．最好还是把重音注意一下．另外00:47:535 (3) - 这里unsnap明显错了
00:49:202 (7,1) - 太远了
00:54:757 (1,2) - 同in
01:23:276 (6,7) - 这俩换顺序更好

GL

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Hanazawa Kana 2017-03-18T15:25:46+00:00

说实话我都快忘了这图了
马克下明天改
~~我查了下这歌还没有rank图呢是不是被果业霸气震到都不敢撞~~

patamon

Pata-Mon wrote:
[General]
那个求求你.jpg 这曲子别放哨子（为啥主难度都没哨子 EN全都哨子……）咦我记得做的时候不是哨子音来着

[Normal]
00:18:461 (1) - 低难度别放这么挤的……而且说实话……难看嗯
多次折返我依然不觉得是最好的解决方法，嘛不过这个你应该考虑过．我个人还是觉得简化节奏是最好的，你要不想改的话就到时候看看bn了
但是有个问题，00:23:646 (1) - 这个你明显跟的是主旋律（りゃりゃりゃりゃ），但是00:24:387 (1,2,3,4) - 你跟了伴唱（いつむぢゃんぢゃん）．我觉得要选一个跟好，这切轨实在没必要．后面还有几处同样的就不说了这里我其实没想跟5 6那个轨的但是跟主旋律这边短条就有点多了而且00:24:757 (2) - 这里有鼓就顺手拉过去了 ~~确实是有点难打我再看看别人意见吧~~
00:34:016 (1) - 前面那里“りゃりゃりゃりゃ”用折返滑条跟至少是有道理的，因为是4个一样的特殊音．这里的话就比较无理了．00:34:572 - 这明显一个锣声，把这个单拆出note最好嗯
00:39:942 (1) - 这里也没必要折返，前后节奏密度也不高，拆成俩1/2滑条就很好嗯
01:12:535 - 如果你是跟vocal，那我觉得这里还是拆开比较好
01:14:016 (2,3,4) - 没必要强行三角，这里4往左放更舒服
01:19:202 (1,1) - 这音乐完全不适合转盘啊……而且前面一样的（00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,1,2,3,4) - ）你也是正常放的，复制粘贴都比转盘好（曲子里没有合适地方就不放转盘没关系的，你看其他难度全都没转盘．这曲子可能就开头那里放转盘比较合适，不过normal应该塞不下）大哥说的很对

谢怕他猛

GL

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:
果神 M4M
Kana's Normal
这个难度打起来没问题，就是后面那个大圈圈不要这样水吧！！随便再糊一段就好。可以d

谢谢妙芙

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我日果业你这主难度是真的J8

Last edited by Hanazawa Kana 2017-03-19T00:58:03+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2017-03-18T16:14:56+00:00

果神 M4M

Kana's Normal

这个难度打起来没问题，就是后面那个大圈圈不要这样水吧！！随便再糊一段就好。

Kamiya's Hard

00:16:979 (1) - 这里节奏错了 00:17:350 - 这里要放个按的要么就把这个00:17:535 - 删了
00:33:831 (2) - 做成这个00:34:202 (3) -

Insane

00:16:979 (1) - 这滑条拉得不好看
00:18:461 (6) - NC
00:29:572 (4) - stack
00:34:387 (4) - ↑
00:36:979 (6) - ↑
00:44:016 (2,3,1) - 不要突然换风格啊
00:46:609 (1,1) - 可以拉的更好的
[notice]

Pata-Mon's Insane

00:03:646 (4) - 这个故意不NC的吗？

Augur

00:02:165 - 节奏这样摆会更顺手 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7595612
00:03:183 - 加圈，舒服
00:05:127 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 。。。请用这个节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7595657
00:43:646 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里本来很安静了，节奏摆那么密干嘛
00:47:535 (3,4) - 头尾结合了
00:55:035 - 我觉得加个圈stack在下一个更舒服
01:06:979 (7,1) - 这两个重合得好看一点啊
01:12:905 (3,1) - 包好点

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2017-03-18T16:15:52+00:00

Suzuki_1112

Suzuki_1112 wrote:
水摸四水摸
音效统一点？
Wlala
看上去好乱，但是很神
看上去是主难度，ar调高点
00:10:590 (7,8) - 是故意的吗是
00:47:535 (3,4) - 重叠的 修改了
00:29:387 (3,6) - 不是stack的强迫症够难受
00:34:757 (1,2) - ^
00:59:202 (4) - ^
美丽，还是说句看上去好乱

Insane
这没下音效啊……sl在0.2好像不是太好，0.5就适合了都一样的
00:16:979 (1) - 只需四点可好
01:27:720 (6) - sv的变换请nc 变sv是否要nc要看读图或者其他因素

01:09:757 - gugu
摸低难度不是很擅长，而且看了应该还好
美丽，祝早日rank！

Pata-Mon

Pata-Mon wrote:
那个求求你.jpg 这曲子别放哨子（为啥主难度都没哨子 EN全都哨子……）
那个我主难度放哨子了 N 那里有哨子啊 E被re了
[Insane]
后俩难度看起来很乱但打起来要比看起来好点……所以我也不懂怎么样了．就打一下然后说说打起来感觉怪怪的地方吧
00:44:016 (2,3,1) - 不合适的读图梗．实际上节奏上00:44:016 (2,3) - 就用滑条应该是最合理的，至少也要00:43:646 - 和00:44:016 - 一致．00:43:646 (1,2,3,1,2) - 用三组两两重合的note来跟这三个vocal也是一种合理，但现在中间突然出现一个梗感觉很莫名确实重叠不合适但是这里的音乐是有细微的区别的我换了个做法
00:47:720 (4) - 这overmap感觉没必要修了
00:49:479 (9,1) - 在insane里这个东西我觉得存疑．实际上仔细一听00:49:294 - 00:49:387 - 00:49:479 - 是在overmap啊这里调整一下看看这里不懂
00:54:757 (1) - 这单独搞个滑条出来后面还空了一拍感觉很奇怪啊不如00:55:127 (1) - 这滑条直接早一拍开始，折返持续两拍先保持原样
01:23:924 (2) - 好像没什么明显的音
01:27:905 - 5%
[Wlala]
うらら是Urara 中英的通用译名也都是Urara，自己造词没必要吧 ok
结构上：为什么kiai部分全都是这种普通间距连打，开头00:13:461 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 各种飞？至少类似的地方比如01:00:683 (4,5,6) - 01:01:239 (8,9,1) - 等应该有不亚于开头那里的强度才对吧 ok
00:07:720 (4,1) - 分开放（最好是让00:08:090 (1) - 头到00:07:720 (4) - 身子最近点的距离和00:07:350 (2,3,4) - 这里的ds相等）都听大师的
00:16:239 (6,7,8) - 这应该是等ds的吧
00:40:127 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - 可以有趣点的，比如跟着旋律高低：https://puu.sh/uOaM8/3a99a8c279.png 好改的更加善良了
00:46:609 - 到00:48:090 - 这里节奏我觉得很不舒服．最好还是把重音注意一下．另外00:47:535 (3) - 这里unsnap明显错了重音无所谓进入放松段落了并且重音不一定是要可点击的 unsnap

00:49:202 (7,1) - 太远了好
00:54:757 (1,2) - 同in 不好
01:23:276 (6,7) - 这俩换顺序更好
GL

3.
谢摸

Ellyu

429 posts

Joined May 2014

Ellyu 2017-03-19T02:44:13+00:00

Req from qq

quick mod

俺国二
00:03:831 (2,4) - 有点擦边，虽然打的时候没感觉
00:11:794 (4,5) - 这个形状加上overlap……真心觉得有些丑
00:14:016 (12) - nc应该是从这开始的
00:27:350 (1) - 可以和之前的3stack
00:36:239 (1,2) - 这种overlap不太好吧
00:47:905 (4) - 我还是喜欢两个鼓音都clickable的，感觉都挺明显的，而且说实在话这里两个重音配上这种低sv的1/4滑条有点糊了
00:54:757 (1) - 后面蓝线上还有音啊，再多折返一次啊
01:17:350 (5,6,7,8,1) - 建议把5678弧度弄小些然后包住1，大概这样https://puu.sh/uPuRM/8f09cf1c8e.png
01:23:090 (5) - nazi，有点没stack好

怕他
赶紧把combo color换了
00:20:683 (1,2,3,4) - 转一个角度复制成这样更好玩啊https://puu.sh/uPvw5/71b6f2ef9f.png
01:19:942 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
00:32:720 (5,6) - 白线上的音更重啊，不clickable好难受，建议ctrl+g
01:03:276 (2,3,4) - 这三个为什么不是摆成三角形呢，各自旋转120度的那种
这复制粘贴多的令人发指

Insane
00:23:461 (3,5) - 这两个哨子听得我好难受，后面也是
00:34:757 (5,4) - 这种overlap了不大好看
01:12:164 (3,4,5) - 变间距直线超卡手啊，实际难度根本不符合这个难度
01:14:016 (2) - 按照之前跟vocal的尿性这里应该是个3/4滑条啊

四萌
00:02:905 (2,3) - 可以blanket
00:24:757 (6,7) - blanket
00:38:831 (4,5) - blanket
00:32:535 (3) - 建议换成1/2的，因为红线上重音太明显
01:22:905 (3) - 怎么说呢，这种超过三个的1/2折返已经是一种老图的标志了，特别是在这个难度里，现在的图一般都会处理成拆掉头或尾的一个折返换成单点
01:26:794 (5) - 让最后一个音clickable吧

Kana's Normal
00:18:461 (1) - 头和尾建议不要overlap
00:23:646 (1) - 这个nc是怎么回事
00:58:461 (1,2,3) - 建议减少overlap，特别是圈不要和滑条遮挡很不好看，可以对照一下01:14:016 (2,3) - 这个，这种程度的overlap就好很多
01:14:016 (2,3) - 最后两个转盘肯定是会被搞事的，做完

[Kamiya]

637 posts

Joined November 2012

[Kamiya] 2017-03-19T12:14:15+00:00

Suzuki_1112摸

Suzuki_1112 wrote:
Kamiya's Hard
音效略吵，这歌不是很适合nm simple
00:45:127 (3) - 不好看……
00:49:572 (1,2) - blanket？clear
00:56:609 (5,7) - ^clear
01:11:239 (3,7) - stackclear
01:22:905 (3) - 建议换成俩滑条
01:25:868 (3) - ^

pata-mon 摸

Pata-Mon wrote:
[Hard]
00:13:831 (6) - 讲道理 hard里的话直接放三连还简单点．短滑条在hard里是非常规，最好别随便用clear
00:16:053 (2,3) - 这俩object里的重音全都不clickable啊跟鼓跟vocal都一样
00:20:127 (2) - why
00:23:276 (2) - normal clap 好吵clear
00:34:572 (4) - 别叠clear
00:40:683 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - 这段ds少大一点别擦边clear
01:26:794 (5) - 3次折返太怪了……换成这样更舒服https://puu.sh/uO93H/48682a6cd8.pngclear
01:27:350 (1,2,3) - 吵……
clear

喵扶摸

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:
Kamiya's Hard
00:16:979 (1) - 这里节奏错了 00:17:350 - 这里要放个按的要么就把这个00:17:535 - 删了clear
00:33:831 (2) - 做成这个00:34:202 (3) -

handsome摸

handsome muscle wrote:
四萌
00:02:905 (2,3) - 可以blanket？？
00:24:757 (6,7) - blanketclear
00:38:831 (4,5) - blanketclear
00:32:535 (3) - 建议换成1/2的，因为红线上重音太明显
01:22:905 (3) - 怎么说呢，这种超过三个的1/2折返已经是一种老图的标志了，特别是在这个难度里，现在的图一般都会处理成拆掉头或尾的一个折返换成单点
01:26:794 (5) - 让最后一个音clickable吧clear

没标记的都是no fix

最后想统一回复下关于2段折返滑条01:22:905 (3,3) - 这两个和前面的一样算是一种前后呼应，对于老图的说法可能会有点但是这么做我认为跟曲子里的节奏更贴切。

thanks for your modding~

改

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Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2017-03-21T15:04:07+00:00

_MiaoFUuU_

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:
果神 M4M

Insane
00:16:979 (1) - 这滑条拉得不好看好看
00:18:461 (6) - NC 不用
00:29:572 (4) - stack
00:34:387 (4) - ↑
00:36:979 (6) - ↑ 好
00:44:016 (2,3,1) - 不要突然换风格啊好
00:46:609 (1,1) - 可以拉的更好的不会
[notice]

Augur
00:02:165 - 节奏这样摆会更顺手 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7595612 暂时保留
00:03:183 - 加圈，舒服不舒服前面放松一点
00:05:127 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 。。。请用这个节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7595657 此处人声优先级低
00:43:646 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里本来很安静了，节奏摆那么密干嘛前面有放松的段落了这里相对不算安静并且这是主难度没问题的
00:47:535 (3,4) - 头尾结合了？
00:55:035 - 我觉得加个圈stack在下一个更舒服不赛宝没感觉了
01:06:979 (7,1) - 这两个重合得好看一点啊不重合了
01:12:905 (3,1) - 包好点好
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handsome muscle

handsome muscle wrote:
Req from qq

quick mod

俺国二
00:03:831 (2,4) - 有点擦边，虽然打的时候没感觉故意的
00:11:794 (4,5) - 这个形状加上overlap……真心觉得有些丑你一说确实有些丑修改了位置
00:14:016 (12) - nc应该是从这开始的是的只是为了梗而已暂时保留
00:27:350 (1) - 可以和之前的3stack 不太好
00:36:239 (1,2) - 这种overlap不太好吧还好
00:47:905 (4) - 我还是喜欢两个鼓音都clickable的，感觉都挺明显的，而且说实在话这里两个重音配上这种低sv的1/4滑条有点糊了如此短的条都差不多吧不过我还是改了节奏保持原样为了配合后面两个条
00:54:757 (1) - 后面蓝线上还有音啊，再多折返一次啊好
01:17:350 (5,6,7,8,1) - 建议把5678弧度弄小些然后包住1，大概这样https://puu.sh/uPuRM/8f09cf1c8e.png 单独调整了8
01:23:090 (5) - nazi，有点没stack好 nazi？ fix

Insane
00:23:461 (3,5) - 这两个哨子听得我好难受，后面也是消除了一些
00:34:757 (5,4) - 这种overlap了不大好看 fix
01:12:164 (3,4,5) - 变间距直线超卡手啊，实际难度根本不符合这个难度卡一卡暂时保留
01:14:016 (2) - 按照之前跟vocal的尿性这里应该是个3/4滑条啊没有这里直接复制粘贴的00:14:016 (1,2,3,1) -

谢摸

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-03-22T03:46:37+00:00

~~水膜预定~~
[ Easy ]
00:11:053 (1,2,3) - 也许可以这样试试？这样2,3的FLOW会更舒服一点

00:14:016 (1) - 稍微弯曲幅度小一点？弄得和这组00:11:053 (1,2)差不多的感觉？因为我觉得这样前后联系性更紧密一点
00:22:164 (6,7) - 换成这样？因为首先大白线用滑条尾结束感觉不是很好然后就是1,2人声也很强也可以起个强调作用

咦。。。没做完？？

[ Kana's Normal ]
我。。。。太久没做N了。。我感觉自己不会看了QWQ大哥加油!

[ Kamiya's Hard ]
00:09:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这块我不知道。。就是个人感觉，要不然都做成这种节奏00:08:831 (3,4) ，要不然做这样试试？

00:12:720 (2) - 换成两个单点!!前面都在跟鼓。。不要跟我说对了那个很奇怪的音轨，不适合
00:13:276 (4,5) - 这里改这样

00:16:053 (2,3) - 这个跟上面类似。。你可能是说要对人声，但是这里换成单点加滑条这样更适合。。不管是鼓点还是人声
00:16:979 (1) - 可以换成3/4滑条加单点。。。因为最后那个白线是个很明显的重音，我觉得需要强调，滑条尾打击感太弱了
00:45:127 (3) - QWQ要不要就三点滑条算啦，感觉好别扭啊
00:56:053 (3,4) - 强烈建议你不要叠住。。。大多数情况我都认为红线在前的重叠是非常不舒服的，这里人声重音都是和白线不能重叠，而且人声还是升调，这就更不适合重叠了!所以拖开？然后我又看了下你后面。。都是这样重叠的，那么还是无视这个吧。。不然改动太大，不过你可以下次注意啊~~

[ Insane ]
00:02:165 (1,2) - 这里就来回吧？蓝线到红线的距离。。首先觉得太近了，打起来不舒服，然后本身3/4这个节奏做单点也不好。然后就是2,300:02:720 (2,3) - 这个我觉得3 ctrl+g反而更舒服点。。。
00:07:350 (2) - NC捏？这里的乐器效果很特殊啊，NC一个感觉还可以啊
00:07:720 (4) - 似乎是1/6
00:16:979 (1,2) - 可以3/4滑条带单点，然后就是1/1单点一定要拖远点。。。感觉这一块1/2单点跟1/1看着都差不多远
00:25:127 (4,5,6) - 我觉得4,5叠起来然后6挪到原来5的位置比较好，首先6是重音也是升调，更适合大距离的跳跃，但是这里4,5跳的比6的距离大了差不多两倍，就觉得更不好了
01:27:720 (6) - 变速了NC啊~~
这段话是我个人看法，因为我自己也不确定，但是我觉得部分间距问题的处理是你现在比较需要进一步加强的。比如，00:02:165 (1,2,3) - 00:09:572 (1,2,3) - 00:16:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这几个我认为是一定要改进的地方，1/2和1/1或者是3/4和1/2之间的间距处理比较模糊，考虑了物件摆放联系性的时候却忽视了间距处理 00:21:424 (1,2,3,4) - 01:20:684 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方节奏比较特殊，我觉得你这样处理也不是没有道理所以我单独列出，但是我仍然觉得还是稍微能把3/4和1/2之间的关系能区分开来
补充一下。。说是个人看法是因为打起来真的不难受。。。所以我也不是很懂

[ Pata-Mon's Insane ]
01:11:053 (3,5) - 也许可以换下位置，3那里是个升调，改了FLOW也顺一点
好好好，你赢了，无话可说

偷个懒QWQ最后一个就不看啦，好累啊，加油~~

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MoeAsuka

302 posts

Joined October 2013

MoeAsuka 2017-03-22T07:55:54+00:00

水个nm
[Kana's Normal]
00:17:350 (6,7) - 我感觉这里用一个1/1折返会更好，能强调出后面重音的打击感
00:49:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的4声节奏是完全一样的，建议都用一样的下法，我倾向于都跟vocal放四个折返
00:58:461 (1,2,3) - 不是很丑，但是感觉叠的有点多，还是会难受
01:11:794 (3,4,5) - 一样的问题，要统一一下跟的音，而且最后这个单点特别突兀。要么就把两个单点都跟了，要么就按01:08:831 (4,5) - 的节奏来

[Kamiya's Hard]
00:14:757 (2,1) -或许可以blanket？不过你要是觉得不好看就算了

SPOILER

00:28:461 (8,1) - 看着好难受啊，能不能包一下

[Insane]
讲道理，我在edit下都差点读不懂。。太神了
~~pp图？不存在的~~

[Pata-Mon's Insane]
00:02:905 (2) - 你这个音效在这里有点太吵了，建议这个滑条尾5%
00:25:127 (6,7) - 我太菜了看不懂这里为什么这么下，虽然好像也可以，不过我还是更喜欢在这里下三个单点
01:06:053 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这跟的又是什么..

看不懂也打不动，找不到节奏，甚至pass不了，就不问太多了
几个月不看发现巴达兽又变神了，求教育..

[Augur]
00:29:387 (3,3) - 感觉红线上的声音太小了。。更倾向于在蓝线放二连
其他的没什么了

柑橘这种大间距图你在简介里写pp map简直就是欺诈

Echoy

141 posts

Joined December 2013

Echoy 2017-03-23T06:29:46+00:00

Augur
00:02:165 (1,2,1,2) - 这两组12明显是对称的，节奏也应该一样
00:03:831 (2) - 多余
00:05:498 (3,3) - 反倒这两个我觉得可以延长为1/2滑条
00:09:850 - 这个地方虽然被滑条尾盖过去了，然而还是多余。这里是个三连音，两个短滑条节奏指向也不太对
00:11:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里和开头一样的，只是多了鼓，你又换了下节奏的方式，不太舒服
00:12:720 (2,3,4,5,6) - 和01:06:053 (2,3,4,5) - 可以互相参考一下
00:14:757 (2,4) - 这俩变成3/4滑条试试？这样下无可厚非，但是4个1/2滑条空且无趣
00:17:720 (4) - 搞个加速
00:20:683 (5) - NC
00:28:090 (6,7,8) - 这里不太好吧，有种脱离群众的断裂感，跟着人声来四个1/4
00:37:720 (1) - 我觉得可以缩短至1/2跟两个note
00:40:313 (8) - 其实这里挺有趣的，但是8才是音乐的转折点，所以你看看有什么更好的方法没
00:40:683 (1) - 这里我听了挺多遍，总觉得有点空，把滑条尾鼓点单独出来吧
00:43:646 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一部分点点太多了，但音乐又挺慢，我觉得可以适当弄几个滑条进去
00:46:239 (7) - 这里有种改法，正好和00:40:683 (1) 对应。首先00:46:239 (7) - 变成3/4加速滑条，00:46:609 - 这里再接上一个减速的和00:40:683 (1) - 类似的3/4滑条
00:51:794 (1,2,3,4) - 这一部分人声渐高，总感觉不太适合对称，个人感觉
00:54:757 (1,2) - 这里有点儿问题，你放慢仔细听下，应该是这样：https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7633502，但是挺微小的，你原始的或许还好打些

这个【次】Insane难度很有意思

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2017-03-23T09:16:27+00:00

简单看看

Augur

00:11:794 (4,5) - 节奏应该和00:11:053 (1,2,3) - 一致，不管有多想放梗，这种基本的东西还是要搞好
00:12:535 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏也应该一致，要么把3删了要么用两个1/4滑条，蓝线的音不是主旋律，可以舍弃，强行混轨很违和
00:14:016 (12) - NC
00:14:016 (12,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 全1/2滑条很无聊，这里可以做些3/4滑条的梗
00:16:239 (6,1) - 美观问题
00:55:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:01:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - 节奏为何不一样？
01:17:350 (5,6,7,8) - 可以跟前面拉开距离，圈在滑条下面打起来吃翔
感觉flow和排版不是很好，也缺少一点结构，基本想到什么摆什么，没有考虑整体，严格来说还是比较乱，rank不太行

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

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Binguo 2017-03-23T09:48:52+00:00

Karen wrote:
简单看看

Augur
00:11:794 (4,5) - 节奏应该和00:11:053 (1,2,3) - 一致，不管有多想放梗，这种基本的东西还是要搞好
00:12:535 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏也应该一致，要么把3删了要么用两个1/4滑条，蓝线的音不是主旋律，可以舍弃，强行混轨很违和
00:14:016 (12) - NC
00:14:016 (12,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 全1/2滑条很无聊，这里可以做些3/4滑条的梗
00:16:239 (6,1) - 美观问题
00:55:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:01:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - 节奏为何不一样？
01:17:350 (5,6,7,8) - 可以跟前面拉开距离，圈在滑条下面打起来吃翔
感觉flow和排版不是很好，也缺少一点结构，基本想到什么摆什么，没有考虑整体，严格来说还是比较乱，rank不太行

你说的应该都会改我在大改一波尽量做到不乱吧结构不太一样应该是隔了太久才做的原因大概一个月
其他摸之后在回又要咕咕一波

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2017-03-23T18:13:38+00:00

from in-game request

Easy

加音效先
00:02:165 (1,2) - 建议做成两个1/1 滑条。因为类似00:05:127 (1,2) - 这样相近的3/4 你基本上也没做成3/4。为了让玩家打了开头之后打到类似3/4的时候没那么尴尬，还是建议改了
00:42:164 (1) - 如果执意要突出可爱的两声发音的话..给00:43:646 (1) - 上个NC，然后00:45:127 (1) - 取消NC，再在00:46:609 (3) - 添加NC。假如不是得话，取消42秒的NC
01:27:721 (4) - 可以用NC提醒玩家这里结束了

Kana's Normal
00:39:942 (1) - 看上去好像并没有什么意义的NC，取消？

Kamiya's Hard
00:28:461 (8) - 单独一个overlap遮挡看起来不是很妥当，原因是前后并没有类似的overlap摆设，这里的音乐表现也感觉用一个overlap并不是特别有趣...
00:25:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 实话说用Normal-Hitclap相当吵。我觉得应该加一条新的独立绿线，然后用addition-soft的clap声（即默认
00:41:794 - 00:43:276 - 00:46:053 - 00:46:239 - 我觉得漏掉这些人声，不是很棒的选择
01:24:387 (7) - 这里十分建议拆成三个1/2的note, 你在后面01:27:350 (1,2,3) - 也这么做了

Insane
00:21:053 (4) - 尾巴时间轴没对准。
00:33:831 (1) - 这里和前面听起来是属于一个段，况且上下对称的情况下各自NC相当不好看。建议取消NC。而且干脆在00:34:387 (4) - 做一个NC吧
00:42:164 (6) - NC，这里歌词都分段了
00:49:386 (8,9,1) - 超难打还不怎么好看。在00:49:386 (8) - 做一个1/4短滑条，把9删了。
00:54:757 (1) - 这里也是1/6，要用就都一起用1/6 要是怕前后时间距离太小就删掉一次折返..
00:57:350 (2,3) - 01:03:276 (2,3) - 稍微消一下尾巴的音

Pata-Mon's Insane
00:54:109 - 可以加转盘
01:11:053 (3,5) - 其实我觉得ctrl+g的五角星打起来更好，虽然这样做没什么创意
01:17:350 (1) - 你都是最高难度了，这里再加一次折返到01:17:627 - 又不是不能打。这里随便就切到2了

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