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YUC'e - Cinderella Syndrome

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Kibbleru
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on March 28, 2017 at 11:33:09 PM

Artist: YUC'e
Title: Cinderella Syndrome
Tags: Future Candy yuce
BPM: 100
Filesize: 8368kb
Play Time: 03:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Affection (5.92 stars, 1120 notes)
  2. Easy (1.82 stars, 270 notes)
  3. Hard (3.54 stars, 660 notes)
  4. Insane (4.92 stars, 856 notes)
  5. Normal (2.33 stars, 420 notes)
Download: YUC'e - Cinderella Syndrome
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how'd i map this in 2 days wtf

Extra: me
Insane: me
Hard: me
Normal: me
Easy: me

all me (+ a bit of Naitoshi)
thank Naitoshi for helping me with the additive hitsounding
Nathan
kibb syndrome
VINXIS
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Nakano Itsuki
kibb extras lul
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

StarrStyx wrote:

kibb extras lul
fuk
allein

Kibbleru wrote:

i can map extras too
Voxnola
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22:25 *Naitoshi is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/136400 DJ Genericname - Dear You [Dear Rue]]
22:26 Kibbleru: that map so old
22:26 Naitoshi: Yeah
22:26 Naitoshi: and it still has better hitsounds than like 90% of maps
22:27 Naitoshi: current maps
22:27 Naitoshi: with base sounds alone
22:29 Kibbleru: is the tip just to be super additive?
22:29 Kibbleru: the trick*
22:30 Kibbleru: i tend to just follow the music
22:30 Kibbleru: is that my problem?
22:31 Kibbleru: answer mee
22:31 Naitoshi: Additive? You mean blending sounds?
22:31 Kibbleru: i mean like
22:31 Kibbleru: i just completely follow the music
22:31 Kibbleru: snare when tehres a snare
22:31 Kibbleru: kick when theres a kick
22:32 Kibbleru: this map kinda uses the normal hit normal sorta additively
22:32 Kibbleru: kinda extra from the music
22:32 Naitoshi: Yes
22:32 Naitoshi: the normal in that case
22:32 Naitoshi: can be used as a clap
22:32 Naitoshi: or just extra emphasis to melodic structures
22:32 Naitoshi: For me it's like
22:33 Kibbleru: it sounds like he does both kicks and snares with the hitnormal
22:34 Naitoshi: Yeah he does that
22:34 Naitoshi: it's more the style behind how he does things though
22:34 Naitoshi: like he'll emphasize the basic melodic structures with whistles
22:34 Naitoshi: but he won't whistle everything
22:35 Naitoshi: cause that's fucking uncool
22:35 Naitoshi: He'll have like max two whistles in a row (1/2 gap)
22:35 Naitoshi: and then ghost whistle for the other sound
22:35 Naitoshi: using a different sound
22:35 Naitoshi: like a normal
22:36 Naitoshi: You can follow the song at first
22:36 Naitoshi: get a good skeleton
22:36 Naitoshi: then like
22:37 Kibbleru: yeah i know that
22:37 Naitoshi: Look in the music for the most minor melodic structures
22:37 Kibbleru: i usually just exactly copy the percussions in the music
22:37 Naitoshi: and put different sounds around them emphasizing those
22:38 Naitoshi: I guess that's why this map is so impressive though. It's dnb, there's only one clap and everything else is 1/4
22:38 Naitoshi: and all the same sound
22:38 Naitoshi: Hitsounds fucking made this map
22:39 Kibbleru: yeah
22:39 Kibbleru: i know
22:39 Kibbleru: like i can follow the music pretty well
22:39 Kibbleru: but when it comes to some more additive stuff
22:39 Kibbleru: all i can ever do are whistles lol
22:40 Kibbleru: like
22:40 *Kibbleru is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/969314 graves & MYRNE - Tiger Blood [vintyui]]
22:40 Kibbleru: i would never think of doing this lo 01:46:735 (2,3,4) -
22:40 Kibbleru: if it were me it'd all be whistles
22:40 Naitoshi: Damn
22:41 Naitoshi: If you're gonna go for whistles, it'd be cool to just ghost the whistles at the ends of sliders
22:41 Naitoshi: well
22:41 Kibbleru: i cant be that creative
22:42 Kibbleru: all i'd do is use them to emphasize vocals or melody
22:42 Naitoshi: It's cool to emphasize
22:42 Naitoshi: powerful things
22:42 Naitoshi: by combining sounds
22:43 Naitoshi: like my whole thing is using the soft finish as a normal whistle
22:43 Naitoshi: and combining normal whistle and normal finish
22:43 Naitoshi: for the super extra finish
22:45 Kibbleru: btw do u have any suitable hitsound for a snare here
22:45 *Kibbleru is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1187506 YUC'e - Cinderella Syndrome [Affection]]
22:46 Naitoshi: Is it the god damn server?
22:46 Naitoshi: what is this dl?
22:46 Kibbleru: i have no clu
22:46 Naitoshi: 5 seconds baybeeee
22:48 Naitoshi: the clap
22:48 Naitoshi: in this song
22:48 Naitoshi: is like
22:48 Naitoshi: damn it's not impactful
22:49 Naitoshi: I mean the song itself
22:49 Naitoshi: its clap
22:49 Kibbleru: yeah i know
22:49 Naitoshi: So you want like a better one? Do you want more emphasize for the clap or something?
22:50 Kibbleru: actually i found something suitable from the tiger blood map lol
22:50 Naitoshi: lul
22:50 Naitoshi: 01:38:978 - and god damn man
22:50 Kibbleru: hm
22:50 Naitoshi: this is too special for a normal ass whistle
22:50 Naitoshi: tsktsk
22:50 Kibbleru: i agree
22:51 Kibbleru: help me make this hs shit better lo
22:51 Kibbleru: i wana do some cool additive stuff on the kiai as well :S
22:51 Kibbleru: the kiai is honestly so bland
22:51 Naitoshi: you need a whistle bomb for that shit hell yeah
22:51 Naitoshi: hold up
22:51 Naitoshi: it may be in tiger blood too
22:52 Kibbleru: wana help me spice up the kiai a little
22:52 *Naitoshi is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/969314 graves & MYRNE - Tiger Blood [vintyui]]
22:52 Naitoshi: grab drum clap 2 for whistle bomb
22:53 Naitoshi: lol kiai is whistle spamming
22:55 Naitoshi: Honestly you could even just add a few normal samplesets in places and it would sound like it has a lot more variation
22:55 Kibbleru: yeah
22:55 Kibbleru: but
22:55 Kibbleru: idk where and how to add them
22:56 Naitoshi: ooo ooo and some sik russian soft finishes
22:56 Naitoshi: hold up
22:57 Naitoshi: like
22:57 Naitoshi: idea
22:57 Naitoshi: 01:08:828 (2) - normal sampleset here 01:08:828 (2) - and here
22:57 Naitoshi: 01:08:828 (2) - add finish here
22:57 Naitoshi: 01:11:228 (2) - normal here
22:58 Naitoshi: 01:12:128 - ^
22:58 Naitoshi: 01:12:578 - finish
22:58 Naitoshi: That adds some sik russian soft finishes
22:59 Kibbleru: but that part has the kick already? owo
22:59 Naitoshi: I'm aware
22:59 Naitoshi: but kicks aren't enough
22:59 Naitoshi: and it's something with variation
23:00 Naitoshi: some having normal sample sets with kicks
23:00 Naitoshi: and some having kicks only
23:01 Naitoshi: 01:12:578 (3) - and the big white ticks would be cool with normal + kicks
23:01 Kibbleru: i see
23:02 Kibbleru: anything to do about all these notes feeling really empty? 01:12:578 (3) -
23:03 Naitoshi: add normal to 01:12:878 (7) - the circle ends of the stream
23:04 Naitoshi: remove
23:04 Naitoshi: the whistles from the whole stream
23:04 Naitoshi: 01:13:028 (8) - add whistle back to here
23:04 Naitoshi: 01:13:028 (8) - then add whistle here
23:04 Naitoshi: 01:12:728 (5) -
23:04 Naitoshi: both of those places
23:04 Kibbleru: u keep
23:04 Kibbleru: inking the same thing twice lol
23:04 Naitoshi: Would make it sound pretty cool
23:05 Naitoshi: 01:13:178 (1) - remove whistle from big white tick :( that's so uncool
23:05 Naitoshi: better with normal
23:06 Naitoshi: Did you get what I said though?
23:06 Naitoshi: 01:12:728 (5) - middle one sounds awesome with a whistle
23:06 Kibbleru: would hitnormals be cool here? 01:17:378 (1,2,1,2) -
23:06 Naitoshi: if the end is a normal sampleset
23:07 Naitoshi: For this uh
23:07 Kibbleru: so far i put hitnormal on every big white tick
23:08 Naitoshi: 01:17:978 (1) - if you ever used the default normal finish I'd say had soft finishes to 01:17:828 - and 01:17:528 - , buuuut that wouldn't sound cool with the big tick being a soft finish
23:08 Naitoshi: so I think hitnormals would sound cool on those
23:09 Naitoshi: but if there are whistles you should remove them from the first one and the third one
23:09 Naitoshi: 01:17:678 (1) - and 01:17:378 (1) -
23:09 Naitoshi: That would make it sound :superokhand:
23:10 Naitoshi: 01:17:528 - 01:17:828 - if tldr or I didn't make sense @-@ hitnormals on these, the other two shouldn't have them
23:12 Kibbleru: ok
23:12 Kibbleru: can i export what i have so far and send to u
23:12 Naitoshi: okie
23:13 Kibbleru: k uploading
23:13 Kibbleru: https://kibbleru.s-ul.eu/ew5eMBRk
23:14 Naitoshi: this dl....
23:14 Kibbleru: LO
23:14 Kibbleru: it cud be cuz mp3 is 320 kbps tbh
23:14 Naitoshi: IT'S ALMOST THERE
23:15 Naitoshi: Did I link the wrong shit for finishing? xd
23:16 Naitoshi: There's some inconsistencies now
23:16 Naitoshi: 01:08:828 -
23:16 Naitoshi: just meant normal sampleset
23:16 Naitoshi: 01:10:178 - and then this would be a finish
23:16 Kibbleru: lmao yea u told me to finish there
23:17 Naitoshi: 01:11:228 - yeah, just normal sampleset mb
23:17 Naitoshi: 01:12:128 - juuuust normal
23:17 Kibbleru: that sounds much better lo
23:17 Naitoshi: 01:10:178 - this should be the finish
23:17 Naitoshi: 01:12:578 - and this
23:18 Naitoshi: 01:17:678 (1) - ooo ooo
23:18 Naitoshi: ghost this
23:18 Kibbleru: yeah
23:18 Naitoshi: remove clap
23:18 Kibbleru: what is ghost this
23:18 Kibbleru: like no hitsound?
23:18 Naitoshi: yeah
23:19 Kibbleru: would hitnormals work on these 01:14:228 (4,3) -
23:19 Kibbleru: sorry i meant
23:19 Kibbleru: 01:14:228 (4,4) -
23:20 Naitoshi: you would just follow the same pattern
23:20 Naitoshi: 01:13:628 -
23:20 Naitoshi: 01:14:528 -
23:20 Naitoshi: 01:14:978 - but don't finish the claps here in this second section
23:21 Kibbleru: what do u mean
23:21 Kibbleru: follow the same pattern?
23:22 Naitoshi: 01:11:228 - this normal and 01:12:128 - this normal applies to 01:13:628 - and 01:14:528 (1) -
23:23 Naitoshi: 01:16:028 (3) - and then normal here and 01:16:028 (3) - here
23:23 Naitoshi: which some are already there
23:23 Kibbleru: so i need to add 01:13:628 (3) - hitnormal here?
23:23 Naitoshi: yeah
23:24 Naitoshi: 01:14:228 (4) - your normal will go ono the big white tick too
23:25 Naitoshi: 01:14:378 - *
23:25 Naitoshi: fucking objects
23:25 Naitoshi: You will have a sick double normal pattern going
23:25 Naitoshi: 01:16:778 (5) - so this would be normal too
23:26 Kibbleru: so 01:11:978 (6) - 01:14:378 (6) -
23:27 Kibbleru: 01:16:778 (5) -
23:27 Kibbleru: etc
23:27 Naitoshi: yeah
23:28 Kibbleru: and then i love it how the htisounds completely get drowned out when i turn the vol to 100% :D:D:D:D:
23:29 Naitoshi: i play with 50% music
23:32 Naitoshi: so
23:32 Naitoshi: There's a type a foreshadow thing you can do too
23:32 Naitoshi: if you want
23:32 Naitoshi: since, this is the part where there's not a finish on the clap
23:33 Kibbleru: what do u mean by foreshadow
23:33 Naitoshi: you could foreshadow the normal offbeat later by adding one here 01:15:128 - and 01:15:428 - here and (maayyybe) removing the clap on 01:15:278 -
23:33 Naitoshi: 01:17:378 - foreshadow-sounding this here
23:34 Naitoshi: jk don't remove clap
23:35 Naitoshi: actually yeah, you might want to
23:35 Naitoshi: it's kind of a ghostin
23:35 Naitoshi: g
23:35 Naitoshi: effect
23:35 Naitoshi: up to you
23:35 Naitoshi: It's a special transition part
23:36 Kibbleru: ic
23:36 Naitoshi: 01:15:278 (5) - hell it could even just be a kick
23:36 Naitoshi: kick is ghosting enough and fitting there
23:37 Naitoshi: OHHH th
23:37 Naitoshi: that is a kick
23:37 Naitoshi: don't remove clap
23:37 Kibbleru: lol
23:37 Naitoshi: but you may want to remove whistle if you want to ghost it xd
23:38 Kibbleru: can i just put hitnormals on all these 03:17:978 (1,1,1,1) -
23:38 Kibbleru: and ghost which one
23:38 Kibbleru: o-o
23:38 Naitoshi: man.... normal default finish would be sooo cool here
23:38 Naitoshi: the last two sliders of the three
23:38 Naitoshi: should be normal sampleset
23:39 Kibbleru: the last of which three o-o?
23:39 Naitoshi: 03:18:428 (1) - normal on head
23:39 Naitoshi: 03:18:878 (1) - normal on head
23:39 Naitoshi: 03:18:278 (3) - normal here
23:40 Naitoshi: 03:18:728 (3) - and here
23:41 Naitoshi: 03:19:178 (3) - whistle here
23:41 Kibbleru: i guess i shud remove the clap here then 03:20:978 -
23:42 Naitoshi: nah
23:42 Naitoshi: keep it
23:42 Naitoshi: where's the missing clap?
23:42 Naitoshi: oh there's not one
23:42 Naitoshi: why remove it?
23:43 Kibbleru: it sounds kinda weird with the hitnormals no?
23:44 Naitoshi: That's true. There is a clap there, and not in the other part
23:44 Kibbleru: yeah
23:44 Naitoshi: clap should have prescedence though
23:44 Kibbleru: k
23:44 Naitoshi: precedence, and soooo... lets see
23:45 Kibbleru: i mean we ghosted a clap before lo
23:46 Naitoshi: pssshhhhh transition claps don't matter
23:46 Naitoshi: the pattern can just change
23:46 Naitoshi: so
23:47 Naitoshi: 03:18:278 (3) - normal here
23:47 Naitoshi: 03:18:728 (3) - whistle here remove normal
23:47 Naitoshi: 03:19:178 (3) - normal here
23:47 Naitoshi: 03:21:728 (1) - normal on head
23:48 Kibbleru: yeah that sonds better
23:48 Naitoshi: 03:22:178 - and ofc this just acts like 01:17:378 -
23:49 Kibbleru: yeah
23:52 Naitoshi: you know what would be cool
23:52 Naitoshi: that nobody would care about? :D
23:53 Naitoshi: 01:26:978 -
23:53 Naitoshi: https://puu.sh/u6Qt8/787696b0a1.png
23:53 Kibbleru: mhm?
23:54 Kibbleru: ur right nobody would care about it LOL
23:54 Naitoshi: hell yeah
23:55 Naitoshi: 01:38:978 - btw fucking beautiful
23:56 Kibbleru: idk
23:56 Kibbleru: i kinda wana use that thing other places too
23:56 Naitoshi: Go ahead
23:59 Kibbleru: iunno where tho LO
23:59 Naitoshi: oh
23:59 Naitoshi: You were dropping hints
23:59 Naitoshi: ok
00:00 Kibbleru: thinking at the beginning?
00:00 Kibbleru: 00:01:178 -
00:00 Naitoshi: no
00:01 Naitoshi: after transitions or at transitions
00:01 Naitoshi: 00:10:778 -
00:01 Naitoshi: like here would work
00:01 Naitoshi: or special things 00:12:578 -
00:01 Naitoshi: 00:14:978 - but it may happen too often
00:01 Naitoshi: so maybe not that
00:02 Naitoshi: 00:17:378 - unless you skip the last one and put one here
00:02 Kibbleru: i put it here 00:31:778 (1) -
00:02 Naitoshi: 00:19:178 - this is super special and it could go there
00:02 Naitoshi: 00:31:778 - yeah this is cool
00:04 Naitoshi: 01:07:178 -
00:04 Naitoshi: can go here too
00:06 Naitoshi: 01:56:378 -
00:06 Naitoshi: here
00:06 Naitoshi: in fact that part is begging for it
00:06 Naitoshi: 02:14:378 - this is just a copy if you did it before
00:07 Kibbleru: yea
00:08 Kibbleru: do i put them here too tho 01:58:778 - 02:01:178 - etc
00:08 Naitoshi: not special enough
00:09 Naitoshi: That's really up to you though
00:09 Kibbleru: 02:39:578 (1) - these i guess
00:09 Naitoshi: super subjective on your end
00:10 Kibbleru: ok
00:10 Kibbleru: i guess thats all
00:10 Kibbleru: thx for help :O
00:10 Naitoshi: ok kd pls
Izzywing
hard

00:16:328 (4,1) - bad flow
00:32:078 (2,1) - maybe move closer because its different from the previous kickslider so you dont throw off the player

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Nao Tomori

Hobbes2 wrote:

hard

00:16:328 (4,1) - bad flow
00:32:078 (2,1) - maybe move closer because its different from the previous kickslider so you dont throw off the player

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good mod ok_hand
Alheak
hi from modding discord

[General]
  1. https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/LIQ0LYG.png your mp3 is saturated af, better look into that to have a better audio quality
    normalising your audio file by ~ -0.5dB before converting to mp3 should get rid of most of the clipping
  2. small bg >:(
    just use http://waifu2x.udp.jp/ if there isn't anything larger
[Affection]
  1. OD8.5?
  2. 00:15:668 (1,4,6,10,1,2,4,6,9) - and 00:15:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - not sameconsistent
  3. 00:17:431 (6) - NC
  4. 00:24:431 (3,1) - the flow is previously suggesting to go straight for the next slider instead of holding a bit, which causes this transition to feel very awkward, and that's why it doesn't happen with 00:34:031 (3,1) - for example because the player has to control the mouvement and is more prepared for the transition
    btw i think you should make those both just like you did the other ones (01:31:231 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ) for consistency
  5. 01:10:381 (3) - 01:19:981 (3,4) - not consistent
  6. 01:17:431 (1,2,1,2) - those are really excessively spaced despite not much happening in the song, and the transition to the more intense 01:18:031 (1) - is a bit underwhelming in comparison and quite off-throwing
  7. 01:39:031 (1) - i feel like this could have more emphasis on it, like greater spacing or ctrl+g because it's quite an interesting sound and it could benefit a lot
    also kinda nazi but it just overlaps a bit with 01:40:081 (2) - and im triggered
  8. 02:24:631 (1,2,1,2,1) - like earlier
  9. 03:22:231 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^, furthermore the angle on 03:22:681 (2,1) - is really awkward to hit
  10. 03:24:781 (3,4) - not consistent with the previous parts
[Insane]
  1. 01:39:031 (1) - like Affection
  2. 02:57:931 (2) - you seem to be following the synth in this part so this slider should be two 1/4 sliders unless i'm missing something
  3. 03:07:531 (2) - ^
  4. 03:03:631 (1,2) - 03:08:431 (1,2,3) - not consistent
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:781 (4,1) - no jump like previously?
  2. 00:22:231 (4) - 00:27:181 (5) - not consistent, the first one was good imo because the stop acted like an emphasis, whereas 00:27:181 (5,1) - has nothing and doesn't accentuate the new bar at all
  3. 00:37:081 (6,1) - ^, more about the emphasis than consistency tho
  4. 00:38:581 (1) - emphasis
  5. 01:34:381 (5,1) - like earlier, actually the map has lots of inconsistencies with emphasis that seem quite random, and kiai doesn't have any at all
rest's fine

kinda want to get back into modding but im not very good, don't hesitate to tell me what i did wrong or right

good luck, YUC'e is nice
_handholding
insane
  1. I thought it was a bit weird that you mapped the 1/8 bits at 00:28:415 (9,10) but not at 01:03:031 (4,5,6). This would go for 02:10:231 (4,5,6) as well
  2. 02:14:281 (4,1) - I adding this to my mod only because I really want kds from this. feels a bit unnecessary to stack this when 01:07:081 (4,1) is unstacked. It think it looks prettier unstacked. I know you have others stacked elsewhere through out the map and it really doesn't matter but I want dat kds
I really like the insane diff, GL!
BitCritterSpyro
Was going to put this in the post, but then I realized you might've already been one for a while:

SPOILER
[b]WHOA, DUDE![/b] You weren't even a Nominator by the time [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5831504]you requested a mod![/url]

[img]https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/iYfsrHM.png[/img]

[b]but now look at you![/b]

[img]https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/wmjB7Yu.png[/img]

[size=150][b]GG!!!!![/b][/size]

Still gotta hold up to my modding queue tho, so here goes my moddd!!

-EASY-
  1. I was going to write a concern about 01:24:631 (3) - regarding 4:3 players, but I already tested out this slider in that aspect ratio and still found it readable, so you don't need to worry about this.
  2. 02:15:031 - Optional, in order to make it somewhat easier for Flashlight players: add another hitcircle before the new combo.

    (yes, this is my skin, but it's a prototype. I still need to work on its readability for harder difficulties, a "Restart" button in the pause menu, etc.)
  3. 03:03:631 - Was it your intention to switch up the hit-object rhythm that's present from 02:54:031 - to 02:58:831 - and once more from 02:58:831 - to 03:03:631 - in the 03:03:631 - to 03:10:831 - section? I'm sure you know what I mean, since you're a beatmap nominator now, but it's a little 50/50 for me here, because even though this difficulty is systematically Normal, you wanted to label it as "Easy," and I feel as though switching it up in this particular difficulty would kind of be a little unfair for some people who play Easy maps and would expect consistent, same-gameplay-per-measure-in-one-chord hit objects.

-NORMAL-
  1. 00:10:831 (1) - This is just one example out of many, but I thought extended sliders - you know, sliders extended to blue ticks - weren't supposed to exist in Normal. Even though I see your concern for next-hitobject proximity, the rhythm seems to be just fine with at least this slider retracted to its previous red tick, or extended to its respective white tick. The latter should be preferred if you want to bring the difficulty down to be systematically Normal, so the label would actually tell truth to the difficulty.
  2. 00:12:931 (5) - Okay, this is a bit more of an excusable slider, but I see this as another factor of systematically influencing the difficulty to be Hard, even though you labelled it as "Normal." Maybe replace this and some others like it with a few hit circles? idk.
  3. 00:38:131 (3) - Yeah, this is kind of what I mean about my first point. I was trying to believe that you wanted to make this difficulty play like a Normal, as you labelled it, but this object kind of affirmed me that this difficulty has been playing more like a Hard, coupled with the fact that its shape and angle is similar to that of 00:27:181 (3) -'s, with regards to that same object sitting on blue ticks that starts after a hit-circle that goes on a white tick (excuse me for the run-on sentence). Regular/incoming "Normal" players would hit this slider with the mentality that they'd only have to hold onto it until the next blue tick. The last two sliders before it at 00:37:231 (1,2) - definitely also play a factor in this, so consider fixing those, too.
  4. 00:47:731 (3,4) - Wanted to point out this slider pair because it seems more excusable than a majority of sliders up to that point, since it definitely shows an intention of calmly following the vocal line, whereas I feel as though the hitobject rhythm before it is a little too aggressive for Normal. I'd still exercise caution when fixing everything before it, though. If you keep this slider pair after that, it could throw off some people, but it'd be a somewhat safe choice implementation after that.
  5. 00:58:231 (5,6) - Definitely an easier slider pair for a Normal player to follow than 00:37:231 (1,2) -, but it's meant to be played at a faster rate, so it's also a bit questionable..
Actually, you know what? Seems like you might have to work on another difficulty that actually is systematically Normal, and then rename this difficulty "Advanced." I decided to keep my points here anyway because I decided that it could be a good starting point for fixing it to be systematically Normal, but I'm not going to give any more tips, because the way this difficulty works confuses me a little too much to make me think it's a Normal difficulty. You're a beatmap nominator, and I respect your effort, but I'm sorry to say that it doesn't really feel like a Normal difficulty.

-HARD-
  1. AiMod mentions a lotta jumps here, even though they're small and could be tolerated by a Hard player. Even goes close to being a Light Insane in some cases. Of course, I don't mind, but it's a little quick saying.
  2. 00:13:231 (1,2) - Since this difficulty does seem like a challenging Hard map, maybe realign these two so the angle of them doesn't get confused with the similarly angled-if-aligned-more-vertically-like-the-highlighted-combo combo pair at 00:15:631 (1,2) -, especially since they're the same color. Maybe do something like this. Of course, the flow shape change may confuse others who have test-played your map, but it'd still be very playable.
  3. 01:36:931 (2,3) - You did introduce transitioning 2-circle stacks that go into sliders before this point, but the majority of them also eventually have slider start circles that appear at the same point by the next measure (big white tick, if you forgot). I do acknowledge that you at least use them again at the buildup starting at 02:06:031 -, but it's more frequent at that point than what I highlighted, plus 30 seconds is a little bit of a stretch for some people's subconscious osu! memory. It's just a small concern, since 30 seconds isn't that long, but if need fix be, you may want to try placing circle 3 on top of the start of the next slider.
  4. 01:39:331 (2) - I'd be careful when keeping this placed there. Obviously very gimmicky, since a slider that follows the rhythm of drums that play right after a piano play like that only appears once, but I do see that you just want to add flair to this particular part. Your choice, really. You're the nominator, but I'd just still be careful.

I was going to do Insane, but I accidentally got engaged with making my own skin, so my skills with maps higher than 4.5 stars have dwindled a bit. Also, it's obvious I may have a few mod flaws, and I'm sorry if I have more mod flaws than valid suggestions, but good luck otherwise!
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
SPOILER
WHOA, DUDE! You weren't even a Nominator by the time you requested a mod!



but now look at you!



GG!!!!!


lol the nominator badge doesn't show in the modding queue forums :)


Alheak wrote:

hi from modding discord

[General]
  1. https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/LIQ0LYG.png your mp3 is saturated af, better look into that to have a better audio quality
    normalising your audio file by ~ -0.5dB before converting to mp3 should get rid of most of the clipping
  2. small bg >:(
    just use http://waifu2x.udp.jp/ if there isn't anything larger
[Affection]
  1. OD8.5?
  2. 00:15:668 (1,4,6,10,1,2,4,6,9) - and 00:15:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - not sameconsistent im confused u linked like the same thing lo
  3. 00:17:431 (6) - NC
  4. 00:24:431 (3,1) - the flow is previously suggesting to go straight for the next slider instead of holding a bit, which causes this transition to feel very awkward, and that's why it doesn't happen with 00:34:031 (3,1) - for example because the player has to control the mouvement and is more prepared for the transition im kinda confused, i think they play similarly tbh and i just wanted some variety so i did it like this
    btw i think you should make those both just like you did the other ones (01:31:231 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ) for consistency
  5. 01:10:381 (3) - 01:19:981 (3,4) - not consistent i just wanted a bit of variety here, ik its not exactly the same :d but i think they are similar
  6. 01:17:431 (1,2,1,2) - those are really excessively spaced despite not much happening in the song, and the transition to the more intense 01:18:031 (1) - is a bit underwhelming in comparison and quite off-throwing i dont think its too spaced out when u compare the rest of the kiai, but i did it like this for build up because for the kiai fountain effect
  7. 01:39:031 (1) - i feel like this could have more emphasis on it, like greater spacing or ctrl+g because it's quite an interesting sound and it could benefit a lot
    also kinda nazi but it just overlaps a bit with 01:40:081 (2) - and im triggered
  8. 02:24:631 (1,2,1,2,1) - like earlier
  9. 03:22:231 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^, furthermore the angle on 03:22:681 (2,1) - is really awkward to hit
  10. 03:24:781 (3,4) - not consistent with the previous parts
[Insane]
  1. 01:39:031 (1) - like Affection
  2. 02:57:931 (2) - you seem to be following the synth in this part so this slider should be two 1/4 sliders unless i'm missing something i think the hold effect works nicely too for the synth
  3. 03:07:531 (2) - ^
  4. 03:03:631 (1,2) - 03:08:431 (1,2,3) - not consistent
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:781 (4,1) - no jump like previously?
  2. 00:22:231 (4) - 00:27:181 (5) - not consistent, the first one was good imo because the stop acted like an emphasis, whereas 00:27:181 (5,1) - has nothing and doesn't accentuate the new bar at all these parts have different snares so i did them differnetly o-o
  3. 00:37:081 (6,1) - ^, more about the emphasis than consistency tho
  4. 00:38:581 (1) - emphasis i dont think its too necessary here and i dont really want to jump from a circle since it tends to be harder.
  5. 01:34:381 (5,1) - like earlier, actually the map has lots of inconsistencies with emphasis that seem quite random, and kiai doesn't have any at all
rest's fine

kinda want to get back into modding but im not very good, don't hesitate to tell me what i did wrong or right

good luck, YUC'e is nice
Kisses: fix all ty

no comment = fix
Gloria Guard
Okay, I'm back


[Easy]

■ 00:10:531 (2,3,1) - nazi, Can you try the sliders symmetry? I just think it's good shape
■ 01:56:431 - Add note here? The whistle is emphasized here.
■ 02:17:431 (3,1) - I think the patterns shape a little bad, but if the patterns shape your style I don't say anymore. but I recommend symmetry this pattern shape. and 00:36:631 (3,1) the same
■ 03:10:981 ~ 03:12:931 - I understand this part is so calm mood, But it is so empty. I just a suggestion to add spinner here. (if you add spinner here, start -> 03:10:981 end -> 03:12:331 is better)
■ 03:27:931 (1) - The symmetry a little bad. slider end move to x:298 y:79 here.


[Normal]

■ 00:50:431 (4,5) - it is enough a nice rhythm. but a little empty here. so 00:50:431 this point add note is better. i guess, and 00:52:831 - 00:55:231 the same
■ 01:09:331 (3) - The slider end remove Sampleset normal sound. It's not a combination of good sounds. so 01:11:731 (3) the same
■ 01:30:031 (1) - I just suggestion this straight line slider to more improved shape.
■ 01:47:281 (2,3) - idk, What is the intention of this rhythm? it's a little confused reading. and 01:47:131 this part also has a rhythm.(lyrics or drum) I hope to you try the change this rhythms


[Hard]

■ 00:15:931 (2) - The slider to try opposite direction? I think it's fun symmetry pattern flow
■ 01:01:981 (3) - The spacing is your intended? or not?
■ 01:55:831 (3,4,5,1) - uh yeah, this patterns shape and flow is not problem. but I want to improved this patterns flow and shape. Can you try this?


[Insane]

AR - 0.3 -> The setting spread to balance isn't good. and The players is enough reading AR 9 setting this difficulty.



Great map Kibbu zz and Sorry my bad description with this modding T^T
Anyways Good luck for ranking ! :)
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Gloria Guard wrote:

GG zz

Will mod soon later :P
woah thanks :)


BitCritterSpyro wrote:

Was going to put this in the post, but then I realized you might've already been one for a while:

SPOILER
[b]WHOA, DUDE![/b] You weren't even a Nominator by the time [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5831504]you requested a mod![/url]

[img]https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/iYfsrHM.png[/img]

[b]but now look at you![/b]

[img]https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/wmjB7Yu.png[/img]

[size=150][b]GG!!!!![/b][/size]

Still gotta hold up to my modding queue tho, so here goes my moddd!!

-EASY-
  1. I was going to write a concern about 01:24:631 (3) - regarding 4:3 players, but I already tested out this slider in that aspect ratio and still found it readable, so you don't need to worry about this.
  2. 02:15:031 - Optional, in order to make it somewhat easier for Flashlight players: add another hitcircle before the new combo. since the music calmed down here by alot i prefer to leave it empty :) i think HL players can do it by the follow points cuz of the large gap

    (yes, this is my skin, but it's a prototype. I still need to work on its readability for harder difficulties, a "Restart" button in the pause menu, etc.)
  3. 03:03:631 - Was it your intention to switch up the hit-object rhythm that's present from 02:54:031 - to 02:58:831 - and once more from 02:58:831 - to 03:03:631 - in the 03:03:631 - to 03:10:831 - section? I'm sure you know what I mean, since you're a beatmap nominator now, but it's a little 50/50 for me here, because even though this difficulty is systematically Normal, you wanted to label it as "Easy," and I feel as though switching it up in this particular difficulty would kind of be a little unfair for some people who play Easy maps and would expect consistent, same-gameplay-per-measure-in-one-chord hit objects. uhm, im not really sure what ur talking about here :/ they are consistent o-o so im a bit confused

-NORMAL-
  1. 00:10:831 (1) - This is just one example out of many, but I thought extended sliders - you know, sliders extended to blue ticks - weren't supposed to exist in Normal. Even though I see your concern for next-hitobject proximity, the rhythm seems to be just fine with at least this slider retracted to its previous red tick, or extended to its respective white tick. The latter should be preferred if you want to bring the difficulty down to be systematically Normal, so the label would actually tell truth to the difficulty.
  2. 00:12:931 (5) - Okay, this is a bit more of an excusable slider, but I see this as another factor of systematically influencing the difficulty to be Hard, even though you labelled it as "Normal." Maybe replace this and some others like it with a few hit circles? idk.
  3. 00:38:131 (3) - Yeah, this is kind of what I mean about my first point. I was trying to believe that you wanted to make this difficulty play like a Normal, as you labelled it, but this object kind of affirmed me that this difficulty has been playing more like a Hard, coupled with the fact that its shape and angle is similar to that of 00:27:181 (3) -'s, with regards to that same object sitting on blue ticks that starts after a hit-circle that goes on a white tick (excuse me for the run-on sentence). Regular/incoming "Normal" players would hit this slider with the mentality that they'd only have to hold onto it until the next blue tick. The last two sliders before it at 00:37:231 (1,2) - definitely also play a factor in this, so consider fixing those, too.
  4. 00:47:731 (3,4) - Wanted to point out this slider pair because it seems more excusable than a majority of sliders up to that point, since it definitely shows an intention of calmly following the vocal line, whereas I feel as though the hitobject rhythm before it is a little too aggressive for Normal. I'd still exercise caution when fixing everything before it, though. If you keep this slider pair after that, it could throw off some people, but it'd be a somewhat safe choice implementation after that.
  5. 00:58:231 (5,6) - Definitely an easier slider pair for a Normal player to follow than 00:37:231 (1,2) -, but it's meant to be played at a faster rate, so it's also a bit questionable..
Actually, you know what? Seems like you might have to work on another difficulty that actually is systematically Normal, and then rename this difficulty "Advanced." I decided to keep my points here anyway because I decided that it could be a good starting point for fixing it to be systematically Normal, but I'm not going to give any more tips, because the way this difficulty works confuses me a little too much to make me think it's a Normal difficulty. You're a beatmap nominator, and I respect your effort, but I'm sorry to say that it doesn't really feel like a Normal difficulty.

i think you are a bit misunderstanding something, you shouldn't really look at the colour of the ticks to tell what seems appropriate for the difficulty. this song is 100 bpm, but in fact, should be more accurately mapped as a 200 bpm song, hence why there are alot of blue tick rhythms. also if you notice the easy diff have alot of red tick and 1/2 rhythms, which is the equivalent to 1/1 rhythms in a 200 bpm song. this diff the 1/4 are equivalent to 1/2.

i hope we can learn form this :) we aren't bn's for no reason xD

-HARD-
  1. AiMod mentions a lotta jumps here, even though they're small and could be tolerated by a Hard player. Even goes close to being a Light Insane in some cases. Of course, I don't mind, but it's a little quick saying.
  2. 00:13:231 (1,2) - Since this difficulty does seem like a challenging Hard map, maybe realign these two so the angle of them doesn't get confused with the similarly angled-if-aligned-more-vertically-like-the-highlighted-combo combo pair at 00:15:631 (1,2) -, especially since they're the same color. Maybe do something like this. Of course, the flow shape change may confuse others who have test-played your map, but it'd still be very playable. i don't really think how i angle the sliders change how hard the map is o-o. they still play very similarly
  3. 01:36:931 (2,3) - You did introduce transitioning 2-circle stacks that go into sliders before this point, but the majority of them also eventually have slider start circles that appear at the same point by the next measure (big white tick, if you forgot). I do acknowledge that you at least use them again at the buildup starting at 02:06:031 -, but it's more frequent at that point than what I highlighted, plus 30 seconds is a little bit of a stretch for some people's subconscious osu! memory. It's just a small concern, since 30 seconds isn't that long, but if need fix be, you may want to try placing circle 3 on top of the start of the next slider. 2 circle stacks are appropriate for hard diffs, they are used quite often in hard diffs these days i use them when the song seems to stop or there are 2 notes to be emphasized
  4. 01:39:331 (2) - I'd be careful when keeping this placed there. Obviously very gimmicky, since a slider that follows the rhythm of drums that play right after a piano play like that only appears once, but I do see that you just want to add flair to this particular part. Your choice, really. You're the nominator, but I'd just still be careful. its not perfectly hidden, you can see the slider end, and i do use quite a few of these kinds of things so ive already established the usage so the user can expect it.

I was going to do Insane, but I accidentally got engaged with making my own skin, so my skills with maps higher than 4.5 stars have dwindled a bit. Also, it's obvious I may have a few mod flaws, and I'm sorry if I have more mod flaws than valid suggestions, but good luck otherwise!

Gloria Guard wrote:

Okay, I'm back


[Easy]

■ 00:10:531 (2,3,1) - nazi, Can you try the sliders symmetry? I just think it's good shape im not really sure what u mean by symmetry here xD i dont think the current is bad tho
■ 01:56:431 - Add note here? The whistle is emphasized here. i like to leave it as the start of the break instead, i think this way works well as well. same as i did in normal
■ 02:17:431 (3,1) - I think the patterns shape a little bad, but if the patterns shape your style I don't say anymore. but I recommend symmetry this pattern shape. and 00:36:631 (3,1) the same did something
■ 03:10:981 ~ 03:12:931 - I understand this part is so calm mood, But it is so empty. I just a suggestion to add spinner here. (if you add spinner here, start -> 03:10:981 end -> 03:12:331 is better) i don't think i would have enough spinner recovery time for that
■ 03:27:931 (1) - The symmetry a little bad. slider end move to x:298 y:79 here.


[Normal]

■ 00:50:431 (4,5) - it is enough a nice rhythm. but a little empty here. so 00:50:431 this point add note is better. i guess, and 00:52:831 - 00:55:231 the same emphasize drum notes only on this part, also simplifying it like this cuz its a calm part
■ 01:09:331 (3) - The slider end remove Sampleset normal sound. It's not a combination of good sounds. so 01:11:731 (3) the same intended here, i just copy HS from extra and i use alot of additive hitsounds, i think it sounds pretty cool :)
■ 01:30:031 (1) - I just suggestion this straight line slider to more improved shape.
■ 01:47:281 (2,3) - idk, What is the intention of this rhythm? it's a little confused reading. and 01:47:131 this part also has a rhythm.(lyrics or drum) I hope to you try the change this rhythms


[Hard]

■ 00:15:931 (2) - The slider to try opposite direction? I think it's fun symmetry pattern flow my intention is to emphasize the next 2 circles here so keep like this
■ 01:01:981 (3) - The spacing is your intended? or not?
■ 01:55:831 (3,4,5,1) - uh yeah, this patterns shape and flow is not problem. but I want to improved this patterns flow and shape. Can you try this?


[Insane]

AR - 0.3 -> The setting spread to balance isn't good. and The players is enough reading AR 9 setting this difficulty.



Great map Kibbu zz and Sorry my bad description with this modding T^T
Anyways Good luck for ranking ! :)


tyvm :3 no comment is fixed
Winnie
Pretty Good
no problems here
Lasse


affection
00:29:656 - how about making the 1/8 here clickable? rhythm here is a bit more unique and I think only sliders doesn't really bring that out well. (1) would still be nice melody on 00:29:581 - . for example http://lasse.s-ul.eu/7At6s4NE.jpg
00:32:131 (1,2,3) - one of the few cases where I think spamming nc would really help people read rhythm here to make clear it's different from before (or a way more drastic spacing increase, but I think that won't fit well here)
00:59:281 (3) - spacing seems a bit too much here lol didn't really use huge jumps for melody + weak drum before. maybe it could be stacked on 00:58:531 (2) - tail?
01:00:781 (2) - this also doesn't really fit, it's just a weak hihat and you make it feel as/nearly as important as vocal/stronger drums 01:00:631 (1,3) - . the one before is kinda similar, but at least not nearly as spaced, though 01:00:331 (1,1) - might even be nicer as sliders lol
01:02:881 (2) - basically my issue with this whole part until the chorus, so many jumps feel pretty unjustified, especially with this kind of spacing
01:06:481 - could make rhythm here more interesting to play and make it stand out more by doing something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/sYnB8GDN.jpg I think, having a repeat there just feels so undermapped for what song provides
01:09:181 (2) - seems like the chorus has the same thing again

I don't think we will be able to reach some agreement with these since they seem to be a core part of the map, so gl lol

I'll just leave some other things here I noticed while quickly looking over the other parts of the map:
01:31:431 (2) - seems a bit weird to ignore the buzz here as it stands out so much and you mapped it in the same pattern on 01:41:831 (3) -
02:34:531 (5) - lower sv would be nice here on this since music gets calmer (also nc might be nice cause music changes so much and 01:27:331 (1) - )
02:54:031 - kinda similar issue with how spacing is utilized in this part is it feels pretty random at times where only reasoning might be visuals, which also could be solved differently. things like 02:54:931 (2) - compared 02:59:581 (1) - where suddenly your jumps focus on something totally different (having it on 02:59:731 (2) - would make more sense with similar things before)
03:01:231 (1) - compared to 02:56:431 (1) -
03:03:631 (1) - compared to 02:58:831 (1) - 03:08:431 (1) -
this also doesn't reallyl allow you to put some noticeable jump/overall spacing/rhythm buildup through this part, which would be great considering the background sound builds up so much over this part
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Lasse wrote:



affection
00:29:656 - how about making the 1/8 here clickable? rhythm here is a bit more unique and I think only sliders doesn't really bring that out well. (1) would still be nice melody on 00:29:581 - . for example http://lasse.s-ul.eu/7At6s4NE.jpg i want to keep the slider structure here
00:32:131 (1,2,3) - one of the few cases where I think spamming nc would really help people read rhythm here to make clear it's different from before (or a way more drastic spacing increase, but I think that won't fit well here)
00:59:281 (3) - spacing seems a bit too much here lol didn't really use huge jumps for melody + weak drum before. maybe it could be stacked on 00:58:531 (2) - tail?
01:00:781 (2) - this also doesn't really fit, it's just a weak hihat and you make it feel as/nearly as important as vocal/stronger drums 01:00:631 (1,3) - . the one before is kinda similar, but at least not nearly as spaced, though 01:00:331 (1,1) - might even be nicer as sliders lol
01:02:881 (2) - basically my issue with this whole part until the chorus, so many jumps feel pretty unjustified, especially with this kind of spacing
01:06:481 - could make rhythm here more interesting to play and make it stand out more by doing something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/sYnB8GDN.jpg I think, having a repeat there just feels so undermapped for what song provides
01:09:181 (2) - seems like the chorus has the same thing again for the chorus i kinda wanted to make the effect of slowdown on the long held vocal and then speed up the momentum alot, i think it fits for this part

I don't think we will be able to reach some agreement with these since they seem to be a core part of the map, so gl lol

I'll just leave some other things here I noticed while quickly looking over the other parts of the map:
01:31:431 (2) - seems a bit weird to ignore the buzz here as it stands out so much and you mapped it in the same pattern on 01:41:831 (3) -
02:34:531 (5) - lower sv would be nice here on this since music gets calmer (also nc might be nice cause music changes so much and 01:27:331 (1) - )
02:54:031 - kinda similar issue with how spacing is utilized in this part is it feels pretty random at times where only reasoning might be visuals, which also could be solved differently. things like 02:54:931 (2) - compared 02:59:581 (1) - where suddenly your jumps focus on something totally different (having it on 02:59:731 (2) - would make more sense with similar things before)
03:01:231 (1) - compared to 02:56:431 (1) -
03:03:631 (1) - compared to 02:58:831 (1) - 03:08:431 (1) -
this also doesn't reallyl allow you to put some noticeable jump/overall spacing/rhythm buildup through this part, which would be great considering the background sound builds up so much over this part
Shad0w1and
[Affection]
00:05:881 (4) - overdone spacing imo
00:28:906 (1) - cancel nc?
00:57:631 (3,4,5) - I expect more movement here instead of stacking
01:03:181 - to me better as
01:51:781 - want give an emphasis on this beat
01:56:131 - 01:58:831 - why no clickable

[insane]
01:03:481 - prefer a click
02:10:681 - same
anna apple
why is top diff not "Down Syndrome"
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