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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年6月8日 at 15:42:10

Artist: Hiromi Sato
Title: Jiyuu no Hane
Source: 月影のシミュラクル-解放の羽-
Tags: eroge visual novel dating sim game meis clauson xr kisses joker- doormat akitoshi corinn Nathan Kiss
BPM: 96
Filesize: 4064kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:

Download: Hiromi Sato - Jiyuu no Hane
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EROGE fuck the makers of this game blocking foreign IPs from their website just cause im a gaijin doesnt mean i dont like anime girls and am out there to soil your business and pirate everything

smh
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Cymbal Sounder
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No kudosu yet.
kill me now pls
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Rhythm Incarnate
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uhhhhhhhhhhhh

well
00:35:686 (3) - There is no note on this circle
00:40:686 (3) - There is no note on this circle

shes singing on those notes

the rest of the points... uhh... if it wasnt obvious it was my intention to map the sliders this way, they dont necessary need to be pointing to every note after them...

as for the "equally spaced jumps", i dont see why thats necessary, its just edgy mapping

GL with your future mods! :D
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plz update

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Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62170
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 76936,108030
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Jiyuu no Hane
TitleUnicode:自由の翅
Artist:Hiromi Sato
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:Xexxar
Version:joker's Hard
Source:月影のシミュラクル-解放の羽
Tags:eroge visual novel dating sim game meis clauson xr
BeatmapID:1189269
BeatmapSetID:561640

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"unnamed2.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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00:28:030 (6) - NC is here, because you NC here 00:33:030 (1) -
01:01:467 (2) - Personally this one should be a repeat slider instead of 01:02:092 (3) -

Akitoshi's Normal


01:00:530 (1,2,3,4) - Sound is the same on all 4 notes. Transitioning from a 2/4 slider into 2 circles into a 2/4 slider while the music is the same is confusing.
01:25:530 (1,2,3) - This feels too hectic compared to the rest of the song. Consider reworking this pattern.

joker's Hard

00:22:092 (5,6) - Can blanket better
00:23:030 (1,2) - Have these two on top of eachother.
00:52:717 (6,7) - Make these into a slider. Too hectic for a mediocre player to read the jump between 00:52:873 (7,1) - and 00:53:030 (1,2) -
00:53:030 (1,2) - These can blanket better.
00:56:155 (2,3) - These can also blanket better.
01:02:717 (6,7) - This is fine.

Enjoyed your creative sliders, really took the map further.

A Feather

00:07:405 (5,6) - Why cant these be the same slider when 00:04:905 (5,6) - is the same?
00:09:905 (3,4) - ^
00:17:405 (5,6) - ^
00:19:905 (5,6) - ^
01:29:905 (4,5) - This is the same as in the beginning. Make these two sliders reflect that. Make them the same.
01:32:405 (5,6) - ^
01:34:123 (1,2,4,5) - This pattern is fine.
01:39:905 (5,6) - Make them the same.
01:42:405 (5,6) - ^
01:44:905 (5,6) - ^

Overall, these changes would make the beginning and end feel connected, instead of the player needing to always read a new pattern when the same beats begin. The kiai time was well structured.
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haihai m4m


    general
  • disable widescreen supp on every diff.
  • hard insane and extra have 5hp which is.. idk it's not a progressive hp transition? Suggestion: Insane -> 5.5~6 ; Extra -> 6~6.5 nvm with hr is just too hard to spin xD
  • I think going from AR 5 to AR 8 (normal->hard) is a bit too high. Consider reducing reduce ar on hard a bit.
  • I don't know how this bpm stuff work but this song shouldn't have 192bpm? It's like totally not a 96bpm song.


    A Feather
  • 00:05:217 - intended clap? you don't use it 00:07:717 - here and it doesn't seem to support the music imo
  • 00:23:030 - why volume 90 here and then 00:27:405 - 60? Music is the same :d
  • 00:35:530 - drum sampleset instead of additions?
  • 00:50:530 - ^?
  • 01:02:248 (2,3,4) - this triplet feels like it lacks of hitsounds D: try copying 01:02:248 (2) - this into 01:02:326 - here
  • 01:27:248 (1,2,3) - I think this triplet should have similar hitsounds as ^


    anxient's
  • call me when this is finished so I can mod it :o


    joker's
  • 00:05:217 (6) - same as extra, remove clap for consistency... I think you copy hitsounds from extra so check them too i guess
  • 00:17:405 (7,1) - Their heads are too close to each other. consider spacing them a bit so it's better structured as a whole.
  • 01:47:405 - missing clap?
  • 01:46:623 (4,5,6,7) - The spacing here feels a bit messy compared to the rest of the diff. try doing something like this? https://puu.sh/tPRQt/4e1c235863.png


    akitoshi's
  • 00:31:780 - feels a bit empty to not have this with drum sampleset since you were adding them every white tick. Having 00:31:780 - & 00:32:092 - fit fine imo.
  • 00:35:530 - drum sampleset instead of addition?


    easy
  • 00:33:030 (1,2) - This distance is 1,27 which is a bit high compared to the 1.05~1.1 you were using on the whole diff. Consider reducing it a bit.
  • 00:38:030 (1,2,3) - ^
  • 01:36:467 (2,3,1) - imo the flow you use here it's a bit weird to follow since it's so linear, try doing some curves somewhere :d


Okay that's all from me, couldn't find much things xd However I pointed some hitsounds stuff that you might want to check and then copy to the other diffs (I think you copied them so ye) if you agree.

GL! :D
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Kill me, I suppose.


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about the 99,999999999999999999999999% of the mod is made of personal suggestions
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Anxient's Insane
finish your diff u fucc

    00:07:092 (1) - Remove NC, doesn't make sense imo, it would also be aesthetically better if you stack it with 00:06:155 (3) -'s sliderend
    00:14:905 (1) - Remove NC ^ Okay, it's fully rankable and everything but it doesn't really make sense to me

finish your diff u fucc


joker's Hard
Didn't really find anything else, I'm not good at modding hard difficulties. gomenasai>///////<

Sorry if I'm not modding the Easy and Akitoshit's Normal. I seriously have to start mapping and modding Easy/Normal diffs properly fuckmylife
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wewlAd, idk why am here but cool song!

add gders to tags xd


A very heavy object

00:05:217 (6) - unintentional duplicated clap (i think, theres no snare in the music here)
00:10:217 (4) - same^
00:22:873 (2) - missing clap (i think, snare hits twice here)
01:00:217 (5) - this spacing is huge for what the music is atm, i would probably reduce it so you get a blanket on 00:59:592 (3) - slider end
01:07:717 (6) - maybe make this a copy of 01:07:405 (5) - since its part of the same word? would just be a nice a e s t h e t i c
01:17:717 (6) - same^
01:19:592 (3) - this flow is kinda awkward since it creates an instant 90 degree angle, all of your other linear sliders don't force an instant direction change so would prefer if this was rotated 90 degrees maybe?
01:37:092 (3,4) - maybe ctrl + g these on the timeline? atm the flow feels a bit forced and swapping these around would follow the general jump pattern you have in the map (where snares get more emphasis/spacing than the toms)
01:38:498 (2) - maybe increase spacing here because the piano is at a higher pitch and feels more intense here?
01:38:967 (4) - maybe reduce spacing here since the piano is less intense and at a lower pitch here?


Easy

Pretty nice, only minor things to say, not sure why you didn't put more emphasis in the intro/outro since thats the main part of the music that stands out to me and would also help bring the object density down a little

00:05:217 (3) - unintentional duplicated clap (i think, theres no snare in the music here)
00:10:217 (3) - same^
00:11:467 (2) - this type of flow coming out of 2 could be a little tricky because it goes backwards from where the slider is facing, i would make the slider curve slightly/aim a bit more towards 3 for more i n t u i t i v i t y
00:21:467 (2) - minor but ctrl + h for above + a e s t h e t i c s
00:26:155 (4,5) - fix parallels
00:28:655 (1,3) - because of the low ar, this appears before 00:28:655 (1) - finishes, and noob players are somewhat likely to just go straight to 3 because it's closer to them, i would suggest moving this further away from 00:28:655 (1) - to avoid potential confusion
00:32:405 (4,2) - this doesn't apply here, because 1 is closer to 4 than 3
00:33:655 (2,4) - but it does apply here, so same suggestion of moving 00:36:155 (4) - a bit further away from 00:33:655 (2) -
00:38:655 (2,4) - wew^
00:59:905 (3,1) - fix parallels
01:08:655 (2) - maybe turn this into red point slider? looks a bit weird imo as it is

gl!
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about the 99,999999999999999999999999% of the mod is made of personal suggestions
kapp


iYiyo wrote:
haihai m4m


    general
  • disable widescreen supp on every diff.
  • hard insane and extra have 5hp which is.. idk it's not a progressive hp transition? Suggestion: Insane -> 5.5~6 ; Extra -> 6~6.5 nvm with hr is just too hard to spin xD
  • I think going from AR 5 to AR 8 (normal->hard) is a bit too high. Consider reducing reduce ar on hard a bit.
  • I don't know how this bpm stuff work but this song shouldn't have 192bpm? It's like totally not a 96bpm song. blame okorin

    ya on rest basically


    A Feather
  • 00:05:217 - intended clap? you don't use it 00:07:717 - here and it doesn't seem to support the music imo
  • 00:23:030 - why volume 90 here and then 00:27:405 - 60? Music is the same :d
  • 00:35:530 - drum sampleset instead of additions?
  • 00:50:530 - ^?
  • 01:02:248 (2,3,4) - this triplet feels like it lacks of hitsounds D: try copying 01:02:248 (2) - this into 01:02:326 - here
  • 01:27:248 (1,2,3) - I think this triplet should have similar hitsounds as ^

    applied all


    easy
  • 00:33:030 (1,2) - This distance is 1,27 which is a bit high compared to the 1.05~1.1 you were using on the whole diff. Consider reducing it a bit. maybe, im just trying to keep a visual pattern here though so idk...
  • 00:38:030 (1,2,3) - ^
  • 01:36:467 (2,3,1) - imo the flow you use here it's a bit weird to follow since it's so linear, try doing some curves somewhere :d eh i think its fine, no one cares about easys anyway hah ah h ahHAHAA


Okay that's all from me, couldn't find much things xd However I pointed some hitsounds stuff that you might want to check and then copy to the other diffs (I think you copied them so ye) if you agree.

GL! :D


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Easy

00:28:030 (6) - NC is here, because you NC here 00:33:030 (1) -
01:01:467 (2) - Personally this one should be a repeat slider instead of 01:02:092 (3) -
ya

A Feather

00:07:405 (5,6) - Why cant these be the same slider when 00:04:905 (5,6) - is the same?
00:09:905 (3,4) - ^
00:17:405 (5,6) - ^
00:19:905 (5,6) - ^
01:29:905 (4,5) - This is the same as in the beginning. Make these two sliders reflect that. Make them the same.
01:32:405 (5,6) - ^
01:34:123 (1,2,4,5) - This pattern is fine.
01:39:905 (5,6) - Make them the same.
01:42:405 (5,6) - ^
01:44:905 (5,6) - ^

REJECT ALL, nah i just dont think its necessary for the sliders to be the exact same in these patterns.

Overall, these changes would make the beginning and end feel connected, instead of the player needing to always read a new pattern when the same beats begin. The kiai time was well structured.


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wewlAd, idk why am here but cool song!

add gders to tags xd


A very heavy object

00:05:217 (6) - unintentional duplicated clap (i think, theres no snare in the music here)
00:10:217 (4) - same^
00:22:873 (2) - missing clap (i think, snare hits twice here)
01:00:217 (5) - this spacing is huge for what the music is atm, i would probably reduce it so you get a blanket on 00:59:592 (3) - slider end fixed
01:07:717 (6) - maybe make this a copy of 01:07:405 (5) - since its part of the same word? would just be a nice a e s t h e t i c
01:17:717 (6) - same^ nah, i think this is fine as is,
01:19:592 (3) - this flow is kinda awkward since it creates an instant 90 degree angle, all of your other linear sliders don't force an instant direction change so would prefer if this was rotated 90 degrees maybe?
01:37:092 (3,4) - maybe ctrl + g these on the timeline? atm the flow feels a bit forced and swapping these around would follow the general jump pattern you have in the map (where snares get more emphasis/spacing than the toms)
01:38:498 (2) - maybe increase spacing here because the piano is at a higher pitch and feels more intense here?
01:38:967 (4) - maybe reduce spacing here since the piano is less intense and at a lower pitch here?

applied most of it man im just tired of writing, message me if you have questions D:


Easy

Pretty nice, only minor things to say, not sure why you didn't put more emphasis in the intro/outro since thats the main part of the music that stands out to me and would also help bring the object density down a little

00:05:217 (3) - unintentional duplicated clap (i think, theres no snare in the music here)
00:10:217 (3) - same^
00:11:467 (2) - this type of flow coming out of 2 could be a little tricky because it goes backwards from where the slider is facing, i would make the slider curve slightly/aim a bit more towards 3 for more i n t u i t i v i t y im fuking out of space fam the nooblords who cant play this can suck it
00:21:467 (2) - minor but ctrl + h for above + a e s t h e t i c s already fixed
00:26:155 (4,5) - fix parallels
00:28:655 (1,3) - because of the low ar, this appears before 00:28:655 (1) - finishes, and noob players are somewhat likely to just go straight to 3 because it's closer to them, i would suggest moving this further away from 00:28:655 (1) - to avoid potential confusion
00:32:405 (4,2) - this doesn't apply here, because 1 is closer to 4 than 3
00:33:655 (2,4) - but it does apply here, so same suggestion of moving 00:36:155 (4) - a bit further away from 00:33:655 (2) -
00:38:655 (2,4) - wew^
00:59:905 (3,1) - fix parallels
01:08:655 (2) - maybe turn this into red point slider? looks a bit weird imo as it is

i dont really agree with the closer stuff, it should be ok and its a visual purpose, everything visual is fixed, wew

gl!
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Code:
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[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62139
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12999,97999
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Jiyuu no Hane
TitleUnicode:自由の翅
Artist:Hiromi Sato
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:Xexxar
Version:Kisses' Extra
Source:月影のシミュラクル-解放の羽
Tags:eroge visual novel dating sim game meis clauson xr
BeatmapID:1209987
BeatmapSetID:561640

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:3.59999990463257
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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feather
00:42:842 (3) - can u get rid of this it isnt in the song
if u want to keep the emphasis u can do this or something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7307445

01:14:874 (4,5,6,7) - these are too big imo cuz the other ones have loud drums and vocals and this one only has vocals

01:16:905 (2) - this ones too big as well theres like nothing on it lo

01:25:967 (2) - same

01:37:217 (4) - this is awkward af to have a wide angle into cuz its really quiet and not worth having that emphasis on. you could just make 3 into a slider instead.

01:29:874 (4) - the literal only red point slider nice


kisses

00:07:374 (5,6) - 00:17:374 (5,6) - holy moly can you make this into 2 1/2 slider please
it's really really obvious that that the end is stronger than the circle after it lol

00:42:061 (2,3,1) - this is the most awkward pattern to play in the history of osu standard can you just put a normal 1/3 quad please

00:47:842 (5) - this note appears to be ignored everywhere else so please delete it

01:11:592 (1) - doesn't need finish imo

i think there's some inconsistency in when you stack and dont stack in the part after the kiai, like at 01:28:936 (4,1) - vs 01:33:467 (2,3) - vs 01:36:436 (4,1) -
you then repeat it so it isn't technically inconsistent i guess but i think you should just do similar things for all of them instead


anxient
00:15:186 - missing clap?

00:24:092 (2,1) - ctrl g on this rhythm sounds better

00:29:092 - this is strong beat
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7307694 better rhythm imo.

00:30:655 - i also think this section is a bit too dense.

00:36:592 (1) - u did this stacked under the repeat last time at 00:26:592 -

00:47:764 (2,4) - what are these circles lmao
00:57:764 (3,5) - same
i get ur doing it for build up but i think you should change them to triples instead since doing a quint out of a slider makes the finger polarity really awkward.

01:25:499 (1) - weird to overmap into this one since it's pretty weak. at least the other ones have a new guitar chord but this one doesnt.

01:37:686 (3) - weird angle here, kinda uncomfortable to me.

01:47:686 (2,3) - also very awkward imo


joker
use of claps in intro is kind of inconsistent, 00:20:186 (6) - vs 00:15:186 (6) - vs 00:07:686 -

00:17:374 (7,1) - these two look really close together, can you space them out a bit?

00:19:092 (4,5) - this blanket looks kind of bad

00:43:467 (2) - 00:48:467 (2) - these sound overmapped, or not very major. better to leave these out imo. like here 00:55:967 -

01:08:467 (2,3) - can you space these same from 1 so it looks better

01:37:530 - weird to ignore this note, it's followed earlier with circles.

01:47:061 (5,6) - these are also very close together.


akitoshi
might be okay to use tick rate 2 to give the 1/1 sliders some feedback. since it's half bpm mapped.

ya


easy
tick rate 2 same thing


other stuff

all of the ending spinners are way too long, can you just end it earlier or take them out or something, they should be between 4 and 15k score or so and they currently go to between 30 and 55k
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00:07:374 (5,6) - 00:17:374 (5,6) - holy moly can you make this into 2 1/2 slider please
it's really really obvious that that the end is stronger than the circle after it lol I mapped each snare to be different to it's preceding note so I that's the logic behind the 1/1 slider

00:42:061 (2,3,1) - this is the most awkward pattern to play in the history of osu standard can you just put a normal 1/3 quad please My logic behind this is that it's an extra diff but ok

00:47:842 (5) - this note appears to be ignored everywhere else so please delete it IT'S MY STYLE!!! No but seriously I wanted it for the raw emphasis on 00:47:999 (1) which is mapped as a circle where the other notes on 00:47:999 are sliders plus I do think the current rhythm of 00:47:999 (1,2) follows the song really well and if I were to omit 00:47:842 (5) it would play and flow really weirdly . I also added this note and did something similar at 00:50:342 (5) . Honestly I kinda just wanna say it's my style (xd) since I do this kind of thing a lot, e.g. 00:27:842 (3,1)

01:11:592 (1) - doesn't need finish imo but a finish exists here in the other diffs as well and you didn't point it out in the other diffs

i think there's some inconsistency in when you stack and dont stack in the part after the kiai, like at 01:28:936 (4,1) - vs 01:33:467 (2,3) - vs 01:36:436 (4,1) -
you then repeat it so it isn't technically inconsistent i guess but i think you should just do similar things for all of them instead This is the same as the first part of the song, I'm surprised you didn't pick up on that. Basically I had a thought process for each stack but I cba to write a whole paragraph why tbh :V a tl;dr of it would be "for playability"


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Altuth wrote:
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joker's Hard

00:22:092 (5,6) - Can blanket better
00:23:030 (1,2) - Have these two on top of eachother.
00:52:717 (6,7) - Make these into a slider. Too hectic for a mediocre player to read the jump between 00:52:873 (7,1) - and 00:53:030 (1,2) - i'd like to emphasize cymbal sound, keep
00:53:030 (1,2) - These can blanket better.
00:56:155 (2,3) - These can also blanket better.
01:02:717 (6,7) - This is fine. thanks :3

Enjoyed your creative sliders, really took the map further.


iYiyo wrote:
haihai m4m


notice

    joker's
  • 00:05:217 (6) - same as extra, remove clap for consistency... I think you copy hitsounds from extra so check them too i guess yeah, i didnt have time to check hitsound when i made my hard diff... I'll recheck later
  • 00:17:405 (7,1) - Their heads are too close to each other. consider spacing them a bit so it's better structured as a whole.
  • 01:47:405 - missing clap?
  • 01:46:623 (4,5,6,7) - The spacing here feels a bit messy compared to the rest of the diff. try doing something like this? https://puu.sh/tPRQt/4e1c235863.png


Mark101 wrote:
Kill me, I suppose.


joker's Hard
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Nao Tomori wrote:

feather

joker
use of claps in intro is kind of inconsistent, 00:20:186 (6) - vs 00:15:186 (6) - vs 00:07:686 -

00:17:374 (7,1) - these two look really close together, can you space them out a bit?

00:19:092 (4,5) - this blanket looks kind of bad

00:43:467 (2) - 00:48:467 (2) - these sound overmapped, or not very major. better to leave these out imo. like here 00:55:967 -

01:08:467 (2,3) - can you space these same from 1 so it looks better

01:37:530 - weird to ignore this note, it's followed earlier with circles.

01:47:061 (5,6) - these are also very close together.


other stuff

all of the ending spinners are way too long, can you just end it earlier or take them out or something, they should be between 4 and 15k score or so and they currently go to between 30 and 55k


no reply = fixed
thanks guys!
sry for late
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TitleUnicode:自由の翅
Artist:Hiromi Sato
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:Xexxar
Version:joker's Hard
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Nao Tomori wrote:

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00:42:842 (3) - can u get rid of this it isnt in the song k
if u want to keep the emphasis u can do this or something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7307445

01:14:874 (4,5,6,7) - these are too big imo cuz the other ones have loud drums and vocals and this one only has vocals what other one, this is fine

01:16:905 (2) - this ones too big as well theres like nothing on it lo k mom

01:25:967 (2) - same i think this is fine cause its in the build up

01:37:217 (4) - this is awkward af to have a wide angle into cuz its really quiet and not worth having that emphasis on. you could just make 3 into a slider instead. i did this 3 other times why dont u complain for them lo

01:29:874 (4) - the literal only red point slider nice 00:07:374 (5) -




easy
tick rate 2 same thing sure


other stuff

all of the ending spinners are way too long, can you just end it earlier or take them out or something, they should be between 4 and 15k score or so and they currently go to between 30 and 55k maybe if i can find a good way to do this
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