1. Easy (1.51 stars, 100 notes)
2. Hard (3.28 stars, 236 notes)
3. Insane (4.4 stars, 314 notes)
4. Pachiru's Normal (2.02 stars, 160 notes)

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

Hey there~ M4M from your queue

• [General]

1. I think you might wanna get the metadata checked properly, the overall music is done by Sako Tomohisa, but then the song is sang by Citron's VA. Very bad source nah, actually citron ver is only a cover version and this song originally sung by Sako Tomohisa (and this one is sako's ver) http://media.vgm.io/albums/65/53856/538 ... 831838.jpg http://www.sakotomohisa.com/disco/archive/?SECL-1684

• [Insane]
  First try testplay
  
  General

1. Check AIMod for unsnapped objects fak
2. Disable Countdown and Remove letterbox
   
   Modding stuff
3. 00:04:813 (6,1) - Maybe reduce the jump for this? I think this jumps to emphasize on the 00:04:460 (4,5) - claps a lot better currently 00:04:813 (6,1) - has bigger distance, kinda doesn't fit. Same applies to the later section that jump is for emphasis the downbeat of drum uwu
4. 00:10:990 (2) - Keep it at 1/2 slider would be nice, keeping it consistent with 00:07:813 (1) - and 00:02:166 (1) - i place on that for avoid overlap with 00:15:049 (6) - D:
5. 00:15:931 (10) - I think this should be closer to the 00:15:754 (9) - , fitting the dragging vocal here
6. 00:17:343 (4,5,6,7,8) - Kinda disagree with this kind of jump in such a soft part of the song @@ Keep it simple rhythm like http://puu.sh/tvl5A/d934fba7b8.jpg i like the rhythms here i just nerf the jumps instead
7. 00:26:872 (3,4) - Try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/tvlcC/88070b1808.jpg I think the slider fits the music well along with the circle on the vocal i keep the slider's head to emphasis the drum ><
8. 00:43:990 (4) - Maybe make this slider touch 00:43:637 (3) - sliderend? You have been doing this throughout the whole map except this part though
9. 00:54:225 (1,1,1) - Maybe no need to NC spam here, is not particular difficult for this kind of map, and following what you have done earlier 00:00:755 (1,2,3) - Same applies for this 01:05:519 (1,1,1) - they have sv changes which need nc to mark them
   
   Hitsound
10. 00:01:813 (4) - Missing clap
11. 00:05:873 (5) - ^ at slider-end
12. 00:05:873 (5) - Finish here feels very random though whistle D:
13. 00:11:343 (3) - Whistle here?
14. 00:16:637 - Missing whistle at slider-end
15. 00:45:049 (2) - Maybe add whistle here and slider-end, feels empty without whistle this section my current whistle doesnt fit with here, it fits for drum. lemme keep first since imo no hitsound is fine there
16. 00:59:519 - whistle at slider tail? Matching the 00:57:931 (4) -
17. 00:59:696 (4) - Missing clap
18. 01:03:578 - Whistle
19. 01:15:578 - 01:25:460 - I think this entire section hitsounded with whistle at every red tick would be nice i just use whistle for strong vocal like "susume" "susume" "susume" here D:

• [Hard]
  First try testplay
  
  General

1. wew, check AIMod LOL. All the unsnapped objects fak
   
   Modding Stuff
2. 00:06:225 (1,2) - Would prefer this flow similar to 00:03:402 (1,2) - 00:09:049 (1,2) - variation yap, it was used for square pattern on tail with 00:06:225 (1,2,3) -
3. 00:11:872 (1) - Don't think is necessary to NC here. Like what you did at 00:13:107 (4) - 01:00:225 (6) -
4. 00:36:754 (3) - Move this a little upwards to bracket 00:36:049 (1) - better?
5. 00:55:637 - Not sure, it felt very weird to leave this part empty especially in chorus part, a normal circle would be nice, fitting the vocal too
6. 01:14:519 (1) - I think the flow here is a little awkward from 01:14:343 (3) - hopefully its fine for you now
   
   Hitsound
7. 00:06:049 - Clap at slider-end
8. 00:06:049 - Same thing about finish I mentioned earlier same
9. 00:16:637 - Missing whistle
10. 00:56:519 - Whistle here along with 00:57:049 (1) -
11. 00:57:049 (1) - Missing clap cant hear drum
12. 01:15:578 - 01:25:460 - Same thing I mentioned earlier about whistle same

Easy and Normal difficult seems pretty fine to me
Only modded two difficulties here though, and my map is around 5mins. Mind if I mod the Alola map too? ayy its up to you just not fair if m4m with 2 maps D:

Anyway, semoga berjaya~ terima kasih

• [Insane]

1. 00:01:107 (2,3) - spacing is a bit off here
2. 00:02:872 (4) - 00:05:696 (4) - music here should get larger spacing for emphasis, like wat u have done at 00:08:343 (3,4) -
3. 00:04:460 (4) - 00:07:284 (4) - 00:10:107 (4) - NC for emphasis the clap sound would be nice
4. 00:25:990 (5) - 00:26:696 (3) - not rly sure if this is necessary, since the 1/6 sound here is rly unnoticeable, not like the sound at 00:28:813 (5) - here, so i think it would be better if u follow the vocal here, try this
5. 00:34:637 (1,2) - i would reduce some spacing here to express the emphasized more on 00:34:637 (1) -
6. 00:40:107 (5) - should NC n here instead on 00:40:460 (1) - since the vocal
7. 00:55:284 (2) - 01:06:578 (2) - i would NC here for consistent structure and emphasizing the sound
8. 01:27:402 (3) - 01:28:107 (6) - hmm NC these for emphasis the instrument would be nice

• [Hard]

1. 00:15:754 - 00:16:813 - 00:21:402 - 00:25:990 - suggest to add a note, cuz skipping the voocal here isnt rly a god choice
2. 00:34:284 (2,6) - stack lol?
3. 00:48:402 (4,5) - 00:52:637 (3,1) - 01:03:931 (3,1) - 01:19:637 (1,2) - spaced more for emphasis, like u did it at almost every cymbol sound but not these xd
4. 01:11:343 (5) - 01:25:460 (5) - NC for emphasis

• [Pachi's Normal]

1. 00:02:872 - try this, better rhythm choice imo xd, same 00:05:696 (2) - 00:08:519 (2) - and 00:11:343 (2) -
2. 00:42:225 - well spinner here feel rly weird, would be better if u place something else
3. 00:52:813 (2) - should be NC on here instead cuz here is where the vocal changed
4. 00:55:637 (2) - 01:06:931 (2) - 01:08:343 (6) - ^
5. 01:11:343 (5) - NC fore emphasis

• [Easy]

1. 00:41:696 (1,1) - stack would be nicer xd

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

• [Pachi's Normal]

1. 00:02:872 - try this, better rhythm choice imo xd, same 00:05:696 (2) - 00:08:519 (2) - and 00:11:343 (2) - wanted to keep a simple rhythm for the begining, and it feels good to me, i tried your suggestion, i keep it in my mind in case of someone asking me to change~
2. 00:42:225 - well spinner here feel rly weird, would be better if u place something else
3. 00:52:813 (2) - should be NC on here instead cuz here is where the vocal changed
4. 00:55:637 (2) - 01:06:931 (2) - 01:08:343 (6) - ^
5. 01:11:343 (5) - NC fore emphasis

the rhythm choice on normal diff isnt rly good, some stranged 1/1 gap :\

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M

• [Insane]

1. 00:01:107 (2,3) - spacing is a bit off here
2. 00:02:872 (4) - 00:05:696 (4) - music here should get larger spacing for emphasis, like wat u have done at 00:08:343 (3,4) -
3. 00:04:460 (4) - 00:07:284 (4) - 00:10:107 (4) - NC for emphasis the clap sound would be nice aa i prefer to keep nc pattern ><
4. 00:25:990 (5) - 00:26:696 (3) - not rly sure if this is necessary, since the 1/6 sound here is rly unnoticeable, not like the sound at 00:28:813 (5) - here, so i think it would be better if u follow the vocal here, try this i will hear more opinions first, i think that i can hear 1/6 clearly here but gonna take most community voices
5. 00:34:637 (1,2) - i would reduce some spacing here to express the emphasized more on 00:34:637 (1) -
6. 00:40:107 (5) - should NC n here instead on 00:40:460 (1) - since the vocal aa i nc here when strong drum appears like 00:40:460 -
7. 00:55:284 (2) - 01:06:578 (2) - i would NC here for consistent structure and emphasizing the sound same meow
8. 01:27:402 (3) - 01:28:107 (6) - hmm NC these for emphasis the instrument would be nice imo its more like nc spam so i prefer to keep nc every stanza instead of every cymbal

• [Hard]

1. 00:15:754 - 00:16:813 - 00:21:402 - 00:25:990 - suggest to add a note, cuz skipping the voocal here isnt rly a god choice i wasnt focusing on vocal and if i map them example 00:15:754 - i should map 00:15:402 - which making the rhythms being complex imo in calm part
2. 00:34:284 (2,6) - stack lol? f
3. 00:48:402 (4,5) - 00:52:637 (3,1) - 01:03:931 (3,1) - 01:19:637 (1,2) - spaced more for emphasis, like u did it at almost every cymbol sound but not these xd for first, not gonna try that because double circles jump will be hard, second and thrid they are just vocal and i give finish because the vocal as well so imo no need jump done for last
4. 01:11:343 (5) - 01:25:460 (5) - NC for emphasis its only a note, imo i better nc for next due stack

• [Easy]

1. 00:41:696 (1,1) - stack would be nicer xd

the rhythm choice on normal diff isnt rly good, some stranged 1/1 gap :\ 他是新的麻婆我相信以后他的进步会很大 ><
anyway gl
map for m4m : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/503849

Battle wrote:

moe male vocal w
also u told him before I did lul

[General]
Why not make bg 1920x1080 or sth? because i cant find ;_;

[Easy]
00:16:284 (1) - 00:21:931 (1) - tbh you could remove the NCs on these since like it would still be rhythmically correct and look less awkward that the combos are only like 2 to 3 notes long
00:55:813 (1,2,3) - could make a triangle out of 3 since it would look a bit better aesthetically, moving 2 over a bit to the lef also slightly smooths out flow
01:02:872 (3,4,1) - I'm always cautious about these kinds of things since people have the potential to mistake 1 to click rather than 4, a good way to avoid this is to try to make it like 01:04:990 (2,3,4) - where it's pretty clear what comes next while maintaining a very similar aesthetic but i think its like 00:52:460 (4,1) - tell me if u have an idea for make better rhythm here since i dont have any idea again qwq
01:26:872 (1,2) - parallel w

[Hard]
00:03:402 (1,2,3) - make all lead into each other would be nicer visually, 1,2 leads in to each other while 3 doesn't
00:04:107 (3,4,1) - Lower down 4 to fit the oval flow would be better , also make 00:04:107 (3,1) - mirror each other
00:11:872 (5,1) - mapping a pause in the music two different ways (00:13:107 (4,1) - ) close together can be really confusing imo, stick to one way of mapping it here
00:24:049 (6) - Maybe make the red node on the left so that way it leads into 1 more?
00:27:578 (1,2,3) - lol kinda the same thing I said in the easy, but it's just too close lol
00:31:813 (3,4,5) - mm I don't really get why you decided to make this one a jump I would've expect it on 00:33:225 (1) - since it's transitioning to a non-vocal part so yea not jump anymore
00:30:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Could make 3 and 5 symmetrical and adjust from there
[box=d[img:1337:1337]https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/8OS59xZ.jpg[/img:1337]]

HydroCannon13 wrote:

Nm req woo

[ Easy]

1. 00:12:225 (3) - dont mean to be picky, but blanket here could definitely be better
2. 01:14:166 - why no circle here? i think that this part which is very intense shouldnt have a pause like that, and also there is a strong beat that is avoided at that place so why not map it? because this 01:13:990 - and 01:14:343 - are stronger than that whitetick

[ Hard]

1. 00:24:049 (6) - ctrl+h? so that it faces in the direction of the next object
2. 00:25:990 - why no circle here, you had it in the previous section, and also i think its too high pitched to ignore
3. 01:00:049 (5) - nc here instead of 01:00:578 (1), since a more prominent change in music... or do what you did in the insane diff where both of them are nc'd 01:00:578 (1) - this has nc due stacked and repeat slider. i mean nc for readability here nvm i just nc there too lol

[ Insane]

1. 00:43:637 (3) - i dont think this deserves to be a 3/4 slider, since you didnt have one at 00:42:049 (2,3,4)... there is light vocal at 00:43:902 -
2. 00:52:107 (2,3,4,1) - nothing rhythmically wrong, but i think this pattern could play much better than it currently does, because it feels like there is no flow behind it... any idea for that?
3. 01:03:401 (2,3,4) - ^ (and also spacing from 2-3 is different from the first one) same ^
4. 01:05:519 (1) - larger spacing? since its a much stronger sound

K theres the mod, sorry if i wasnt helpful (probably since its such a short mod and such a good map )
gl with the rank!

Zallies wrote:

M4M

hi~
! ! ! BEGINNER MOD IN COMING ! ! !
ill do my best to mod your map
also my map is already finish i really want an icon >.< sure, i will give a nuke icon

[Insane]

1. 00:06:931 (3) - its a little bit close to 2, so can you move a little further i think 2,75x spacing is already far D:
2. 00:10:990 (2) - you can just move away from the 4, to make it better blanket
3. 00:11:696 (5) - 00:10:107 (4) - blanket + stack
4. 00:14:166 (3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/twuB2/b95944ac4c.png to me i really like this flow x_x
5. 00:14:166 (3,7) - not stack each other
6. 00:24:754 (1) - i want you to straight this, its like you used only curve slider nu, flow preference :C
7. 00:32:872 (4,1) - too far from each other
8. 00:38:166 (2,3) - too closee e__e
9. 00:41:166 (3,4) - too long to the other 2 and 3
10. 00:44:519 (1,2) - too close for insane, making insane to me its like "far" (idk wat it called) but the other patterns you made is far ya but vocal is weak and 00:45:049 (2,1) - want to make blanket here with 00:45:754 (1) - 's head stacked on 00:44:519 (1) - 's tail
11. 01:10:637 (3,4) - this i guest? https://puu.sh/twuS8/433b8d5be3.png
12. 01:28:107 (6) - nc ?? no need ;w;

[Hard]

1. 00:25:637 - and so on(vocal so, you dont have to follow all the hitsounds. you kinda ignore all) >.< what? naniii? in serious i dont understand the problem
2. 01:00:049 (5,6) - isnt this nc? cuz the music start to change the rhythm ya changed on above mod

gl > kd for me xxx

1. 00:06:931 (3) - its a little bit close to 2, so can you move a little further
2. 00:10:990 (2) - you can just move away from the 4, to make it better blanket
3. 00:11:696 (5) - 00:10:107 (4) - blanket + stack
4. 00:14:166 (3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/twuB2/b95944ac4c.png to me i really like this flow x_x
5. 00:14:166 (3,7) - not stack each other
6. 00:24:754 (1) - i want you to straight this, its like you used only curve slider
7. 00:32:872 (4,1) - too far from each other
8. 00:38:166 (2,3) - too closee e__e
9. 00:41:166 (3,4) - too long to the other 2 and 3
10. 00:44:519 (1,2) - too close for insane, making insane to me its like "far" (idk wat it called) but the other patterns you made is far
11. 01:10:637 (3,4) - this i guest? https://puu.sh/twuS8/433b8d5be3.png
12. 01:28:107 (6) - nc ??

1. 00:25:637 - and so on(vocal so, you dont have to follow all the hitsounds. you kinda ignore all) >.<
2. 01:00:049 (5,6) - isnt this nc? cuz the music start to change the rhythm

1. MUST CHECK the AiMod > fix the ds
2. 00:21:578 (1,2) - change nc, lol its really weird
3. 01:10:637 (5,1) - wouldnt be 1 on the top? to make it flow

1. Good Work

Zallies wrote:

also my map is already finish i really want an icon >.< that's not a way to ask icon dear~

[Normal]

1. MUST CHECK the AiMod > fix the ds
2. 00:21:578 (1,2) - change nc, lol its really weird
3. 01:10:637 (5,1) - wouldnt be 1 on the top? to make it flow

HydroCannon13 wrote:

[ Pachi's Normal]

1. 00:01:813 (1,2) - i think better to have the nc on (2) rather than (1), just a minor thing tho so ur choice fixed with battle's mod!
2. 00:15:402 (1,2) - held vocal starts at the end of the reverse, so maybe take off the reverse and lengthen the other slider to incorporate this, like so fixed with battle's mod, but your idea seems very interesting, i keep it in mind!
   
   
   
3. 00:25:990 (3) - ik you are mapping to the vocals, but that sound on the red tick this slider runs over is really strong, so maybe you want to have a slider end or smth on it?i don't really understand what you mean here, if you can clarify this, that would be nice from you~
4. 00:27:402 - the vocal here shouldnt be ignored imo, i would change (5) to a 1/2 slider if i was you
5. 01:21:754 (2,4) - idk to me the sounds on the slider ends are much stronger than the ones on the slider heads, so i think you should pick a different pattern that has both of them clicked, because this one doesnt have emphasis on the right places

Battle wrote:

[Normal]
maybe OD 4.5? Since AR is 5
00:01:813 (1,2) - I think NC should go on 2 rather than 1, 1 is basically an anacrusis to the main rhythm so it's better to just keep 00:00:755 (1,1) - together in the same combo and 00:02:166 (2) - starts the next one
00:07:284 (4,5) - Maybe ctrl + g rhythm here and re-adjust, while the claps are relatively the same intensity, the white tick that 4 lands is stronger than the red tick so it's better to have it clickable
00:15:931 (2) - Maybe make it two circles instead of a slider, slider ends on a pretty strong beat which feels weird to not be able to click
00:19:107 (3) - Curve could be less harsh tbh, it looks weird all scrunched up
00:19:637 (4,5,6) - Pattern could look better if 4 was a mirrored version of 6 and you make it so that the pattern is symmetrical
00:21:578 (1) - Make this a 1/2 slider and move 2 to the downbeat and shorten by 1/2, rn the slider goes over part of the vocal and a significant beat in the song, having it so it's a 1/2 slider will make all the important stuff clickable
00:13:460 - to 00:24:754 - I forgot to mention, but this is pretty dense for a calm part, you could simplify some of the stuff by getting rid of some of the circles you put on red ticks like 00:23:166 (4) - for example
00:50:519 (2,3,4) - This would look cuter if you made these all curved sliders
00:56:872 (4) - It's pretty weird to have the slider end on a vocal before a slight pause and continuing to map vocal after that pause, try to make the red tick clickable

1. 00:09:402 (4,5) - I guess you doing this as for variation but yee doing the same rhythm with previous patterns will be nice imo for keeping the 1/1 gaps with 00:10:637 (1) -
   
2. 00:29:343 (2,3) - I personally like to ctrl + g the rhythm but up to u xd
3. 01:07:813 (2) - maybe this slidershape can be more simple like you'll blanket the 01:09:225 (3) -
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:27:754 (2) - 2 circles for being clickable on 01:28:107 - ? xd

1. 00:55:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - missing hitsound?
2. 00:59:696 - Clap
3. 01:06:578 (1,2) - Swap NC for consistency with 00:55:284 (6,1) -

1. I have no idea aa

1. 00:06:578 (2,4) - visually too close imo, idk maybe you can drag this 00:06:931 (3,4) - until 00:05:520 (3) - and 00:07:284 (4) - stacks, if you're scared about distance then you can rotate 00:06:578 (2) - to the right side w
2. 00:10:107 (4) - 00:12:931 (3) - i think putting x0.6 DS here would be nice like how 00:04:460 (4) - 00:07:284 (4) - was ( n a z i )
3. 00:14:696 (5) - 00:17:696 (6) - 00:20:343 (5) - 00:23:343 (5) - idk maybe you can NC around there regardless of the intensity of the song since this part was the only one you used your NC usage by 1 measure longer.
4. 00:55:284 (2) - 01:06:578 (2) - maybe NC for visual preference
5. 00:56:519 (3) - whistle? Since 00:57:931 (4) - had whistle on both head and tail so yee

This is me every time when I'm modding sth

Hazu- wrote:

Pachi's Normal

1. 00:01:813 (2) - Missing clap
2. 00:02:872 (1) - Remove NC and add NC in 00:02:166 (3) - for consistency with 00:04:990 (1) - 00:07:813 (1) - and 00:10:637 (1) -
3. 00:37:284 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - This is really huge for Normal diff (I think) and for such a calm part, 00:37:990 - Not a very important sound, so you could replace 00:37:813 (4) - with a circle.
4. 00:55:814 - No skip sounds like this, I notice this a lot when I playing, also as your Normal has many objects you could map them. since i'm focused on vocals during all the map, i don't see how that could fit with the music, if you have screenshot, that would be appreciated~
5. 01:07:107 - ^ ^
6. 01:09:931 - ^ ^

Akitoshi wrote:

Pachi's Normal

1. 00:55:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - missing hitsound?
2. 00:59:696 - Clap
3. 01:06:578 (1,2) - Swap NC for consistency with 00:55:284 (6,1) -

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: kirakira.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49902
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13460,24754,36049,49990
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kirakira
TitleUnicode:キラキラ
Artist:Sako Tomohisa
ArtistUnicode:佐香 智久
Creator:Xinely
Version:Pachi's Normal
Source:ポケットモンスター XY
Tags:Pokemon Pocket Monster Pachiru
BeatmapID:1186086
BeatmapSetID:560933

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4.5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.15
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fokko waifu copy.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
755,352.941176470588,4,2,1,30,1,0
1813,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
2166,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
13460,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
34637,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
36049,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
41696,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
49990,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
54225,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
54578,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
54931,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
55813,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
60225,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61284,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
71343,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
75578,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
85460,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
89696,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
91107,-100,4,2,2,30,0,0
92519,-100,4,2,2,10,0,0
93578,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,140,85
Combo2 : 45,255,45
Combo3 : 102,171,255

[HitObjects]
424,172,755,6,0,P|424:100|412:44,2,115,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,1813,2,0,L|288:256,1,57.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,244,2166,6,0,P|180:232|124:244,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,212,2872,2,0,L|16:136,1,57.5,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,60,3402,2,0,L|100:176,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,4107,2,0,P|252:88|320:104,1,115,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
352,124,4637,2,0,L|416:116,1,57.5,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,108,4990,6,0,P|476:160|468:224,1,115,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,312,5696,2,0,L|328:304,1,57.5,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,6225,2,0,P|132:300|100:308,2,115,2|6|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,208,7284,1,8,0:1:0:0:
308,152,7461,2,0,L|314:94,1,57.5,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
320,36,7813,6,0,P|264:20|188:28,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,76,8519,2,0,L|28:72,1,57.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,180,9049,2,0,P|144:192|202:187,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,9754,2,0,P|360:128|418:139,1,115,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
456,180,10284,2,0,L|448:252,1,57.5,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,292,10637,6,0,P|384:300|326:284,1,115,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,11343,2,0,L|168:216,1,57.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,132,11872,1,14,0:0:0:0:
204,72,12225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,136,12578,2,0,P|332:192|328:252,1,115,4|4,3:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
320,296,13107,1,4,0:3:0:0:
216,348,13460,6,0,B|197:359|169:343|169:343|109:371|49:339,1,172.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,312,14166,2,0,L|8:180,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,140,14696,2,0,P|56:108|132:116,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,168,15402,6,0,L|208:232,2,57.5,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,15931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,12,16284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,16637,2,0,L|16:72,1,115,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,116,17166,2,0,L|4:176,1,57.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,232,17519,2,0,L|16:356,2,115,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,264,18578,6,0,L|180:260,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,256,18931,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,256,19107,2,0,B|356:268|392:200,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,152,19637,2,0,P|418:97|392:40,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,104,20343,2,0,P|240:112|168:92,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,36,21049,2,0,P|66:88|80:143,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,21578,2,0,L|184:208,1,57.5
224,236,21931,6,0,P|228:300|188:352,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,352,22637,2,0,L|64:228,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,128,23343,2,0,P|76:92|140:80,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,88,23872,2,0,L|276:84,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,156,24402,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,204,24754,6,0,P|456:156|392:56,1,172.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,68,25460,2,0,L|340:4,2,57.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,84,25990,2,0,L|156:76,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,120,26696,2,0,P|44:176|52:248,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,284,27225,2,0,P|76:312|100:336,1,57.5
152,344,27578,6,0,L|272:336,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,332,28107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,320,28284,2,0,P|396:264|375:196,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,28990,2,0,P|308:52|328:-4,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,2,29696,2,0,P|453:56|437:111,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,164,30225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,200,30402,6,0,L|240:196,1,115,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,196,30931,2,0,P|176:248|184:324,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,308,31637,2,0,P|70:250|50:197,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,84,32343,2,0,B|128:72|128:72|184:84,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,116,33049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,33225,6,0,P|352:204|336:268,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,344,33931,2,0,P|204:355|148:343,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,34637,2,0,L|244:232,1,57.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,264,35166,2,0,P|354:292|351:321,2,57.5,2|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
324,212,35696,2,0,P|321:184|324:152,1,57.5,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
336,100,36049,6,0,P|300:64|228:56,1,115,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,76,36578,2,0,L|68:68,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,184,37284,2,0,L|196:192,1,115,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,198,37813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,282,38166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
382,261,38343,2,0,P|398:225|386:141,1,115
359,103,38872,6,0,L|235:95,1,115,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,136,39402,2,0,L|71:128,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,241,40107,2,0,L|-1:234,2,115,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,248,40990,2,0,P|180:220|180:192,1,57.5,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
144,144,41343,2,0,P|140:116|144:88,1,57.5,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
176,40,41696,6,0,L|300:48,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,52,42225,2,0,P|360:116|340:172,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,212,42754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,172,43107,2,0,L|208:96,2,57.5,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,204,43637,2,0,P|116:200|36:204,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,260,44166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,288,44519,6,0,B|180:296|180:296|200:288|200:288|228:304|276:288,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,252,45049,2,0,B|296:204|296:204|312:168|312:168|296:124|296:124|300:80,1,172.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,40,45754,2,0,P|420:44|464:120,1,172.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,172,46460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,268,46813,6,0,L|332:268,1,57.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,308,47166,2,0,P|264:316|184:304,1,115,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,260,47696,2,0,L|104:260,1,57.5,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
83,209,48049,2,0,L|19:209,2,57.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,162,48578,6,0,B|172:130|244:162|244:162|308:194|400:150,1,287.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,60,49990,6,0,P|188:48|120:56,1,115,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,72,50519,2,0,P|68:104|68:132,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,148,50872,2,0,P|132:180|132:208,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,51225,2,0,P|68:256|68:284,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,328,51578,2,0,P|148:312|216:328,1,115,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,348,52107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,272,52460,2,0,L|412:272,1,57.5,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,240,52813,6,0,P|464:172|444:112,1,115,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,53343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,44,53519,2,0,L|260:40,1,115,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,72,54049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,108,54225,2,0,L|56:104,2,115,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,212,55284,2,0,L|140:208,1,57.5,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
128,252,55637,6,0,L|8:248,2,115
152,304,56519,2,0,L|224:308,1,57.5
248,352,56872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,312,57049,2,0,P|357:292|385:244,1,115
400,200,57578,2,0,L|412:136,1,57.5
424,88,57931,2,0,L|492:96,2,57.5,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,80,58460,6,0,B|308:60|308:60|248:72,1,115
212,108,58990,2,0,L|212:224,2,115,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,92,60049,2,0,P|68:160|92:252,1,172.5,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
124,300,60754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,164,61284,6,0,B|252:140|284:140|284:140|344:140,1,115,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,160,61813,2,0,L|380:216,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,228,62166,2,0,L|312:296,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,286,62519,2,0,L|244:350,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,364,62872,2,0,P|136:368|72:352,1,115,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,318,63402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,219,63754,6,0,L|89:135,1,57.5,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,104,64107,2,0,P|145:84|205:100,1,115,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,139,64637,2,0,L|231:203,2,57.5,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,106,65166,2,0,L|280:44,1,57.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,11,65519,2,0,L|448:11,2,115,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,115,66578,2,0,L|449:115,1,57.5,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,136,66931,6,0,P|496:192|488:248,1,115
456,296,67460,2,0,L|384:296,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,264,67813,2,0,L|284:264,2,57.5,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,220,68343,6,0,P|400:160|388:104,1,115
344,76,68872,2,0,L|284:72,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,120,69225,2,0,L|252:184,2,57.5,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,76,69754,2,0,L|40:84,1,172.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,200,70637,2,0,P|96:212|156:200,1,115,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,71343,5,8,0:0:0:0:
380,32,72754,6,0,P|364:88|380:152,1,115,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,196,73284,2,0,P|416:252|400:316,1,115,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,356,73813,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,336,73990,2,0,L|184:336,1,115,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,336,74519,1,4,0:0:0:0:
65,254,74872,1,4,0:0:0:0:
146,172,75225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,228,75578,6,0,P|260:168|244:104,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,24,76284,2,0,L|112:24,2,57.5,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,24,76813,2,0,L|352:24,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,24,77343,2,0,L|472:24,1,57.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,120,77872,6,0,L|346:120,2,57.5,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,78578,2,0,L|516:228,2,57.5,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,332,79284,2,0,L|336:332,1,57.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,79637,2,0,B|272:248|272:248|284:180,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,136,80166,1,12,0:0:0:0:
214,54,80519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,135,80872,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,76,81225,6,0,P|16:136|40:204,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,236,81754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,260,81931,2,0,L|176:256,1,57.5
208,296,82284,2,0,L|280:292,1,57.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,220,82813,2,0,L|356:136,2,57.5,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,256,83519,6,0,L|464:196,1,57.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,140,83872,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,84,84049,2,0,P|420:60|352:76,1,115,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,100,84578,2,0,P|252:112|188:92,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,68,85107,2,0,L|84:72,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|3:0,3:3:0:0:
40,72,85460,1,10,0:0:0:0:
188,300,86872,6,0,P|256:344|328:292,1,172.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,87754,2,0,L|256:132,1,57.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,88107,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88284,12,0,93578,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:27:578 (1) - symmetry? I think it'd look good in this situation. Try moving that 3rd white node up a bit or something.
2. 00:29:343 (2,3) - Swap? Usually you want to click on a strong note like 00:29:696 -
3. 00:44:519 (1,2) - hmm you fixed this already, but here's my idea I had before.
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:27:754 (2) - Maybe consider using a 1/2 repeat here? It isn't difficult in the slighest to play since it's the final note of the song to click.

1. 00:00:755 (1) - Minor aesthetics. It'd be nice if this had more of a curve, and flowed into 00:01:813 (2) - nicely. Even something simple like this:
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:04:637 (4) - 00:07:461 (5) - 00:10:284 (5) - These tail ends feel a bit forced imo. They'd work just fine a single circle.
3. 00:32:343 (4,5) - Try swapping these so you can flow vocals into the instruments on the next combo.
4. 00:37:813 (4) - This is a weak note to hit imo. There are stronger sounds on the tail here. Perhaps a rhythm like this would feel more natural to play:
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:04:637 (3,4) - swap? (go 1/2 then 1/2 repeat) to follow vocals better?
6. 01:16:813 (3) - try adding a little downward curve or something? This is way too linear. Example:
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:18:578 (2) - Missing whistle on head?

1. 00:02:696 (2,3,4,1) - A bit too linear imo. It's also hard to jump to the (1) because of it. Maybe try placing the (3) slider up a little more and have an upwards curve on it?
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:225 (1,2) - just circles? They don't really give off any kind of noise for a held slider.
3. 00:30:931 (2,3) - Not really a great jump imo. At this point when playing the (2) You're on the vocals, and to immediately swap to instruments with a jump like this could be confusing.
4. 00:52:813 (1,2,3) - Make these even? I always notice this when I testplay.
5. 00:55:637 (5,1) - also this jump is a bit much, since it's not really that powerful. The player is already focused on the vocals at this point.
6. 01:20:519 (3) - Try moving these down a bit so there are some bigger jumps here. These vocals and finishes are really powerful so a player won't mind the extra movement.
   

1. 00:18:225 (9) - Maybe have the tail end point towards (10) or even more to the right of that
2. 00:24:578 (8) - is a very silent note so it's actually pretty awkward to hit. Perhaps just use two 1/2 sliders for 00:24:049 (7,8) - instead?
3. 00:27:402 (4,1) - Could use more of a jump I think. at least as much as 00:26:696 (2,3) -
4. 00:43:637 (3) - 00:48:578 (1) - are you sure you want to use a 3/4 slider here? the second part of the vocals is at 00:43:813 - and 00:48:754 - and it's a much stronger hit.
5. 01:18:225 (7,1) - This is kind of a big jump when you've been following vocals for the past few combos. It can get pretty surprising.
6. 01:24:313 (3) - Is there something audible here? I really can't hear anything

Akitoshi wrote:

req from in-game uwu

Easy

1. 00:09:402 (4,5) - I guess you doing this as for variation but yee doing the same rhythm with previous patterns will be nice imo for keeping the 1/1 gaps with 00:10:637 (1) -
   
2. 00:29:343 (2,3) - I personally like to ctrl + g the rhythm but up to u xd i prefer seperate the rhythm due vocal lul
3. 01:07:813 (2) - maybe this slidershape can be more simple like you'll blanket the 01:09:225 (3) - not going for blanket tho, too boring if use it for long time
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:27:754 (2) - 2 circles for being clickable on 01:28:107 - ? xd im not sure to use 2 circles for redticks, personally prefer use this for keep simple

Hard

1. I have no idea aa

Insane

1. 00:06:578 (2,4) - visually too close imo, idk maybe you can drag this 00:06:931 (3,4) - until 00:05:520 (3) - and 00:07:284 (4) - stacks, if you're scared about distance then you can rotate 00:06:578 (2) - to the right side w
2. 00:10:107 (4) - 00:12:931 (3) - i think putting x0.6 DS here would be nice like how 00:04:460 (4) - 00:07:284 (4) - was ( n a z i ) due above, it changed to 0,7x so yeah :v
3. 00:14:696 (5) - 00:17:696 (6) - 00:20:343 (5) - 00:23:343 (5) - idk maybe you can NC around there regardless of the intensity of the song since this part was the only one you used your NC usage by 1 measure longer. oh my idea is nc per 2 stanza on calm part. that is what i do since hard diff part,also would be bad if i use nc per stanza here example for 00:20:343 (5) - that rotation pattern would be ruined lol
4. 00:55:284 (2) - 01:06:578 (2) - maybe NC for visual preference i think that isnt hard to read the 1/4. for visual i dont think its needed but you arent one who say this. if 1 more modder tell me, i will add
5. 00:56:519 (3) - whistle? Since 00:57:931 (4) - had whistle on both head and tail so yee nice catch

sorry for very short mod ;;

This is me every time when I'm modding sth

lmao

Hazu- wrote:

from #modreqs
osu! needs more Pokémon songs~ <3

General

1. Add "Pokémon" to the tags?
2. You could change the green color slightly so that it looks a bit more like Chespin. who i know is japanese name which is Harimaron lol, sure changed

Easy

1. 00:01:813 (2) - Missing clap
2. 00:44:872 - Consider map this sound, when I was playing I was a little weird with that break, try something like this?
   Nice diff :3

Hard

1. 00:01:813 (4) - Missing clap
2. 00:11:696 (4) - I don't think it's necessary to have more DS here.
3. 00:31:813 (3) - I'm not sure if it's blanket, but it would be better.
4. 00:34:637 (3) - Maybe put jump here? ;w;
5. 00:52:813 (1) - ^[ nope for this one because its only vocal/*:m]

I'm bad modding Insane diff :c
GL o3o/

Lanturn wrote:

I believe "Kirakira" is one word, but don't quote me on this. Might have to ask someone else.

Looks like "Tomohisa Sako" prefers his name this way. You can see CDs with this romanization as well as his blog. So you should probably swap..
http://www.sakotomohisa.com/disco/
http://lineblog.me/tomohisasako/

Timing should technically start at 00:02:166 - as the music before that is just part of the anacrusis. Just simply add a red timing point instead of moving it.

You can uncheck Countdown if you want.

[Easy]

1. 00:27:578 (1) - symmetry? I think it'd look good in this situation. Try moving that 3rd white node up a bit or something.
2. 00:29:343 (2,3) - Swap? Usually you want to click on a strong note like 00:29:696 - since 00:28:989 - is mapped with slider's tail, i do same for this one as well
3. 00:44:519 (1,2) - hmm you fixed this already, but here's my idea I had before.
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:27:754 (2) - Maybe consider using a 1/2 repeat here? It isn't difficult in the slighest to play since it's the final note of the song to click.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:696 (2,3,4,1) - A bit too linear imo. It's also hard to jump to the (1) because of it. Maybe try placing the (3) slider up a little more and have an upwards curve on it?
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:225 (1,2) - just circles? They don't really give off any kind of noise for a held slider. i feel like cirlces will give less emphasis so i prefer sliders
3. 00:30:931 (2,3) - Not really a great jump imo. At this point when playing the (2) You're on the vocals, and to immediately swap to instruments with a jump like this could be confusing. yeah i know that but based on space and design, i only can do this, if you have any idea pls tell me
4. 00:52:813 (1,2,3) - Make these even? I always notice this when I testplay.
5. 00:55:637 (5,1) - also this jump is a bit much, since it's not really that powerful. The player is already focused on the vocals at this point.
6. 01:20:519 (3) - Try moving these down a bit so there are some bigger jumps here. These vocals and finishes are really powerful so a player won't mind the extra movement.
   

[Insane]

1. 00:18:225 (9) - Maybe have the tail end point towards (10) or even more to the right of that
2. 00:24:578 (8) - is a very silent note so it's actually pretty awkward to hit. Perhaps just use two 1/2 sliders for 00:24:049 (7,8) - instead? removed instead
3. 00:27:402 (4,1) - Could use more of a jump I think. at least as much as 00:26:696 (2,3) -
4. 00:43:637 (3) - 00:48:578 (1) - are you sure you want to use a 3/4 slider here? the second part of the vocals is at 00:43:813 - and 00:48:754 - and it's a much stronger hit.
5. 01:18:225 (7,1) - This is kind of a big jump when you've been following vocals for the past few combos. It can get pretty surprising. i would like to keep first due i make symmetry in 01:17:871 (5,6,7,1) - , also on (1) is downbeat with strong drum so imo it fits
6. 01:24:313 (3) - Is there something audible here? I really can't hear anything its very weak but yes it exists, if ppl think its overmapping, imo this time overmap fits as well lol

Hopefully something helps. I'm still really rusty at modding XD

KuranteMelodii wrote:

m4m for your queue

My map for m4m: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/557832

I remember that i listened that on Tomohisa Sako and garnidelia's concert in HK, At that time, my sister also liked this song, so did i

[General]

1. Not pretty relevant for this song though, but Tomohisa Sako has an alternative named as "少年T" (ShounenT) as his official twitter suggests so i guess you can add this as tags
   
   https://twitter.com/syounen_t_sako

[Insane]

1. 00:00:755 (1,2,3) - Replace the finishes on slider heads to whistle so it can give more space to emphasize the drums at 00:01:813 (4,5,6,7) - which deems a stronger sound nope, sound for their slider heads music definitely are cymbals ;w;
2. 00:01:107 (2,3) - imo I don't think a complex slider shapes really work here, you could try to copy and paste 00:00:755 (1) - to replace those sliders as it will fit as they're the same sound, in fact, I sometimes thought that using extended sliders here overemphasized those cymbal sounds, so replacing them with circles will fit better personally i dont think the shape is a problem but if you have better idea, gimme example ><
3. 00:02:518 (2,3) - What about a 1/2 slider here? It seems that you're following the guitar on this part, yet 00:02:695 (3) - doesn't have anything special (i could hear the guitar ends here, though) so using a slider will emphasize the guitar more yap i can understand but its like personal preference to use circles here, imo using too many sliders would feel so boring as insane diff
4. 00:06:930 (3,4) - Some aesthetic problems though, But i think 00:07:283 (4) - can avoid overlapping with 00:06:577 (2) - without effecting the emphasis on 00:07:283 (4,5) - , It's not pretty neat for me :p oh i made on purpose, that circle is in center of their overlapping
   
   :::

   
5. 00:07:636 (6) - Reduce jump to differentiate 00:07:283 (4,5) - more? it makes the claps kinda plain when compared to 00:10:107 (4,5,6) - and 00:04:460 (4,5,6) -
6. 00:12:224 (1,2) - Different from 00:01:107 (2,3) - , But circles really fit more for those jump imo, using extended slider here is kinda like you're going to emphasize a holding sound :p would be boring with 1/1 circles imo, just prefer to use sliders here
7. 00:22:989 (4,5,6,7) - I know you did use some jumps on this part though but this one is strangely large than other jumps on this part, and there's no stronger sound compared to other jumps on this part, So i guess i don't think there's a reason to put a jump here reduced instead
8. 00:29:695 (8) - Same here, DS can be reduced here, and it kinda make the finish at 00:30:401 (1) - is pretty weak compared to 00:30:401 (1) - this one, blame copy pastaa pattern lol
9. 00:32:165 (6,7,8) - Ctrl+G? Doesn't it was supposed to have a counter clockwise reverse flow pattern?
10. 00:54:224 (1,1,1) - Just some suggestion for a better overlap
    
    :::

    
11. 01:08:342 (1,3) - Is this supposed to be a blanket? nop because impossible XD

Hard and Easy is pretty nice though! Can you teach me how to map hard ;_; circles sliders done ;w;

modding time: 2 hrs

Pretty solid, Good luck~

kunka wrote:

Hi!
Random short mod!
Insane

1. 01:04:636 (2,3) - I felt a sense of incongruity in rhythm. You make rhythm same as the 00:53:342 (2,3) - of the same section. However, please hear vocal carefully. It should become the different rhythm. I recommend ctrl+G. NICE CATCH AAA <3
2. 01:17:871 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - It's contents same as the above. Three times of same vocalist rhythm continues here. And you pick it up like 01:19:283 (4,5,1) - in the third. Because I am the same vocalist rhythm, I recommend coherent rhythm. https://gyazo.com/dd99f7db8434a3123c301071fd53ff3e i will try with circles instead
3. 01:25:460 (8) - nc?

Hard

1. 01:11:342 (5) - nc?
2. 01:13:989 (1,2) - I recommend 1/2 slider. Because a 01:14:165 (2) - sound is lower than 01:13:813 (3) - and 01:13:989 (1) - , I feel some senses of incongruity to the same notes. Please confirm the same point of the insane diff w
3. 01:25:460 (5) - nc?

Pachi's Normal

1. 00:16:283 (3,4) - You perform a lot of vocal follow. So, I think that I become the ctrl+G here.
2. 00:37:283 (3,4) - It's contents same as the above. I think that I'm as follows if you give priority to vocal follow. https://gyazo.com/ecb4062ccd9ddc06456497c7173e6f84

Easy

1. 00:48:048 (2,3) - I kinda feel a sense of incongruity in rhythm. In addition, the 3/2 reverse slider same as 00:45:224 (3) - is unnatural just before kiai. I suggest it as follows https://gyazo.com/429bbc15e1edee18d05b2431d69c4de0

cant follow this time because i have to keep use 1/1 gap for simple, and imo the rhythm is fine enough

gl rip puush