1. Insane (4,57 stars, 495 notes)
2. Kuron's Hard (3,51 stars, 379 notes)
3. Mao's Easy (1,89 stars, 161 notes)
4. Normal (2,25 stars, 227 notes)

• Looks good o:

• Looks good..

1. Kiai times are inconsistent between other diffs and yours.
2. 00:57:027 (4) - This slider is kinda weird,because 00:57:204 - I heard strong sound like them: 00:56:498 (1,2,3) - But this slider skips that sound.
3. 01:42:204 (4) - Same above

1. 00:23:057 - 00:23:322 - Why isn't there any hitobject between these two timeline?In my opinion,it is inconsistent to Kuron's guest diff and feels empty and weird.
2. 00:42:909 (4) - Unsnapped slidertail

Hobbes2 wrote:

found some time

Interesting that the grumd version got the metadata wrong, lol yeah never assume artists know how to spell lol

[General]

Sounds like 01:17:851 (2) - don't even get as much as a clap, when they probably should get at least some kind of hitsound More examples of this specific clap - 01:16:263 - and 01:16:792. Perhaps you could use the normal hit-clap for these, or consider finding a custom one? i'm using normal hitnormal for this stuff though D: if used in between a lot of soft hitnormals it sounds like a clap imo

[Normal]

01:02:145 (1,4) - Not really a fan of this overlap, and I think it could cause some readability issues. I suggest you avoid this entirely, although that might require you to change quite a few things. hmm i don't think it's that hard to read since there's some gap in between both
01:08:322 (2) - I don't think this should have the red combo color, I suggest NCing here so that only 01:07:792 (1) - is red. yeah fix

Love your normals! thanks :3

[Insane]

As much as I like lower AR as a player, I think that AR 9 would benefit this map. i don't think there's anything here that requires a higher AR and the map feels a lot better with more things on screen imo

00:12:910 (2,4) - Kinda confused by sliders like these. It feels to me like the weaker sound is on the head and the stronger sound (being the claps on 00:13:086 - and 00:13:616 ) are on the tails. Wouldn't https://puu.sh/vG9yx/623c3e1289.jpg make more sense? This applies to a lot of sections in the map, such as 00:15:557 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:18:380 (1,2,3,4). I suppose you have a reason for this if you've done it so consistently, but to me it seems like a very big issue. as you said i'm using the concept consistently and to me it was the most intuitive way to follow these sounds. overall since the song has a lot of different drums a lot of the notes feel very emphasized in one way or another but i tried to undermap it (in terms of clickability, and sometimes in literal terms too) interpreting rhythmic patterns into the music. those beats ended up being circle + slider and each of the three beats is an individual sound so it doesn't really matter which one to make not clickable as long as it's consistent imo

00:22:616 (1,2,3) - rip polarity, looks like you're missing something on 00:23:145 - true fixed
00:24:204 (2,3,4,5,6) - Looks like this could have been symmetrical with 00:24:557 (4) - being the axis of symmetry. i wanted to avoid this because the one object that is off would be too close to some of the following objects. also i like this slight asymmetry a lot aesthetically xD

Fun map, but I really dislike the abundance of 1/2 sliders with claps on the tails as I mentioned above. well thanks, they are hard to explain but i tried to make my point clear

Good luck~

zigizigiefe wrote:

Then I wanna give some suggestions,although I am not experienced at STD modding.I just want to help you and this song is really cool

[Insane]

1. 00:23:057 - 00:23:322 - Why isn't there any hitobject between these two timeline?In my opinion,it is inconsistent to Kuron's guest diff and feels empty and weird. yeah fixed
2. 00:42:909 (4) - Unsnapped slidertail fixed, must have been one of those shenanigans where 1ms off turns into 2ms off

Well,I tried to point out some weird parts.I hope it helps,good luck yeah sure did, thanks :3

iYiyo wrote:

Hello hello~ hallo hallo

• 
  [General]

1. 00:56:498 - maybe move the timing line to here? So that the players can hear it longer while choosing song xD you mean the preview point? for some reason i feel like the last section is more intense lol so i'll keep it there
   
   [Insane]
2. 00:22:880 (2) - extend the sliderreverse so it covers 00:23:145 - this beat aswell? done
3. 00:11:322 (1,2,3) - maybe do this red NC since the voice is similar as 00:16:969 (1,2) - i used the red NC to show extreme SV changes.
   these sv changes happen to be related to the voice (for obvious reasons) but here and at some other points i didn't think the voice was strong enough to change sv, just use some weird slidershapes
4. 01:08:145 (1,2) - make these 2 circle red NC aswell? They're following this "strange" sound too so yeah. ^
5. 01:16:263 (1,2,4,5) - This is a bit too detailist, but right now these feels and are closer than the previous similar pattern which was 01:05:322 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You go from 1.65x to 1.51x DS and it really makes the difference imo. tbh i just ran out of space up there and i actually cared about the blanket (maybe i shouldn't have) but oh well, i personally think the difference is not that noticable
6. 01:18:204 (3,1) - maybe make them a bit closer so the DS looks similar as 01:18:380 (1,2) - ? I mean you're reducing SV but it's still have the same timegap and it kinda confuse D: it's a 1/4 slider so i think the 1/4 gap after is very intuitive
7. 01:29:763 (5,6) - adding that single circle, like... it kinda "interrupts" the effect you want to make with the slider. Mainly because the slider is just 3/4 and the circle comes after a 1/2 gap but the players won't really expect that because the slider feels like a 1/1 so yeah, it feels like the circle comes way too "fast". Maybe you can do a longer slider with some sliderart? good point, changed
   
   [Normal]
8. 00:50:675 (8) - move it a bit to the left so it provides better flow? I mean you do similar in your overall mapping so yeah i like the zigzag motion here, i don't think that's bad flow
9. 01:31:792 (3,4) - maybe the overlap is a bit too much for a normal/slow part? why not rotate slider in 35°~? yeah changed some other way
10. 01:08:322 (2) - This circle is red NC while on other diffs is isn't, maybe you want to check them once more fixed

Hope it can be useful! I'm a bit sick so sorry if it's short/shit D: GL! oh dw, it was a nice mod :3

Hobbes2 wrote:

[Kuron's Hard]

00:16:969 (1) - Some kind of visual emphasis (a jagged slidershape or smth) would help too, making it red and a little faster doesn't really do it justice imo. It still looks a lot like 00:16:616 (5). On this note, I suggest making this a 1/1 slider as well, as I think that would fit the extended yelling sound more than a repeat does. Done something that would help. Can't do much because of the SV. :c
00:22:263 (5,6,7) - The stacking messes up the visual spacing a bit - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8003550, maybe you can move it a bit up so it looks more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8003551 Sure.
00:23:851 - The only clap that isnt' clicakable in this entire section. Maybe you could make 00:23:322 (4) - a revere slider and then 00:23:851 - a circle? Yep. Much better for consistency.

01:01:527 - there is no note here in the music so this reverse 1/4 slider is overmapped. Consider using the rhythm I suggest in the next point down below. Using that rhythm also allows 01:01:616 - to be clickable! https://puu.sh/vG91D/c97f8d8671.jpg Okay, you're right.
01:12:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I have a few issues with this. For one, I believe that 01:12:557 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - is way too dense for a hard, and the clap on 01:12:380 - is not made clickable. I think that the following would be a better rhythm because it makes the claps clickable without feeling too dense for a hard difficulty - https://puu.sh/vG91D/c97f8d8671.jpg. What do you think? Hope it's better now!
^Consider that rhythm for the measure at 01:57:204 (1) - as well. Same.

01:51:557 (1,2) - a ctrl+g of this rhythm would be a better representation of the music I think, making 01:51:910 - clickable. Not sure why you have 01:51:733 - as the head when both white ticks next to it are stronger sounds than it. It should be the slidertail. Fixed.

zigizigiefe wrote:

[Kuron's Hard]

1. Kiai times are inconsistent between other diffs and yours. Hmmm... no, they aren't. :c
2. 00:57:027 (4) - This slider is kinda weird,because 00:57:204 - I heard strong sound like them: 00:56:498 (1,2,3) - But this slider skips that sound. It was made to emphasize the strong vocal. I did the same here 01:42:204 (4,5) - .
3. 01:42:204 (4) - Same above Woops, that was my example!

iYiyo wrote:

• 
  [Kuron's Hard]

1. 01:17:675 - I highly believe that this beat should be clickable D: I kinda expected that when seeing it Not really, only the whistles are x)
2. 02:03:380 (2,3,4,1) - the overall spacing here is inconsistent imo. First you have 02:03:380 (2,3,4) - with both 1/4 gaps but you use notoriously different DS for both cases. Highly recommend you to make them consistent since there's nothing really special on the music in order to do it. Finally 02:03:822 (4,1) - , you should increase DS a bit because it's using same DS as 02:03:380 (2,3,4,1) - for a 1/4 gap. I think you get the idea xp Woops, that wasn't meant to happen. Thank you!

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy.
Looks like you forgot to set the combo colors after the break. fixed

Normal.
00:33:910 (1,2,3,4) - This is having a red combo. Looks like the setting itself was done for consistency with insane, but considering the similar patterns of 00:45:204 (1,2,3,4) - 00:56:498 (1,2,3,4) - 01:41:675 (1,2,3,4) - just having ordinary colors, it didn't felt to be the best setting in this difficulty. you are right, fixed

Hard.
00:53:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - Using a 1/4 spacing in a way that other usual 1/2s were done didn't felt to be nice to tell the difference. I guess this part of the song is something different enough but such various 1/4 spacing concept felt a bit too much compared to other parts of the map imo. slightly adjusted it to be lower but still not touching. should be better now. also adjusted it here 01:15:733 (4,5) -
01:13:086 (5) - 1.2x for 1/2 spacing please. fixed

Insane.
00:33:910 (1,2,3,4) - vs. 00:45:204 (1,2,3,4) - Why is the pattern composed in a different way? Even the location inside the song is different each, they are basically really similar songs. It was a bit hard to understand of having such different ideas. You can make 00:33:910 (1,2,3,4) - as a circle to ensure consistency with the drum sound of 00:45:204 (1,2,3,4) - 00:56:498 (1,2,3,4) - 01:41:675 (1,2,3,4) - , or you can make 00:45:204 (1,2,3,4) - as a 1/4 slider to ensure the vocal difference with 00:56:498 (1,2,3,4) - 01:41:675 (1,2,3,4) - . Up to you, but I think fixing would be better anyways. it's composed differently because the first pattern has the strong vocal 'screams' that i followed with fast sliders when they appeared without drums. but here i felt like i need to follow both the drums and the scream so i made this variation
01:07:792 (1) - Red combo at a slow sv? It broke your combo color logic imo. You'll want this considered in other diffs too. i'm using the red combo to mark (relatively excessive) sv changes caused by the added vocals. for normal-insane this concept should be consistently applied now, for easy they are used without sv changes because the diff has no sv variation, but they mark special slidershapes there that still follow the vocals

Sonnyc wrote:

Insane.
01:07:792 (1) - Red combo at a slow sv? It broke your combo color logic imo. You'll want this considered in other diffs too. i'm using the red combo to mark (relatively excessive) sv changes caused by the added vocals. // I'm aware that red colors were used for excessive sv changes, but the point I wanted to say was that all other sv changes were a speed "up" while this was the only on being the speed "down". Well could work if you want as this way since they are all basically sv changes in the common term. Just wanted a confirmation before further processing.