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Lily - Marie-Luise

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spboxer3
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年9月10日 at 上午 11:01:44

Artist: Lily
Title: Marie-Luise
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: wmfchris
BPM: 130
Filesize: 15418kb
Play Time: 03:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.79 stars, 441 notes)
  2. Insane (4.92 stars, 720 notes)
  3. Normal (2.65 stars, 214 notes)
  4. Wmf's Taiko (4.89 stars, 1331 notes)
Download: Lily - Marie-Luise
Download: Lily - Marie-Luise (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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8/11 change some Taiko diff by Lesjuh XDD

special Thank for Taiko diff By wmfchris >w<
Thanks for everyone help me mod and give me star!!!
9/4 Thanks happy30 help change timing :3
9/10 Thanks timing change for Alace :3

My 3rd Ranked map~ Joy it~<3
Last edited by spboxer3 , edited 11 times in total.
bakabaka
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bakabaka
star :3
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Overall
音效部分有些地方該放finish但是漏了，檢查一下吧
請務必善用音量控制，有些地方該大聲(例如kiai部分, 在[Insane]會有點太小聲了)有些地方該小聲

[Normal]

00:32:466 (5,1) - spacing!
00:37:081 (1) - 頭放finish?
00:38:927 (4) - ^
00:40:773 (6) - 頭尾放finish?
02:13:081 (1,2,3) - 改成(1,3)頭放finish(2)放clap? 如果改的話連帶其他的也改一下
02:22:773 (5,6) - spacing! 疊在一起?
02:48:158 (7) - 這應該出現在 02:48:619 比較對
03:15:389 (4,5,6) - spacing!
03:34:312 (8,1) - ^
03:38:466 (6) - 彎地有點不好看


[Hard]
:!: 音效比起[Normal]亂，請參照[Normal]。
前面一小段間距不怎麼固定，修正一下
因為你這裡使用x0.8間距，所以note之間很近，但也因此很容易擠成一堆不好看
建議你整個diff跑過一遍，把間距不怎麼一致或著排列不好看的地方修正。
例如:
SPOILER
01:30:389 (7,8,9,10,11) - 弄圓
01:23:927 (2,5,6) - (5)感覺要離(2)遠一點又離(6)近點

00:16:773 (1) - 這一段改成這樣?
SPOILER
00:30:158 (1,2) - spacing, 要不乾脆(1)用折返?
01:32:466 (1) -
01:56:466 (1) - 這應該是..unrankable
03:31:082 (1) - 同01:32:466 (1)?

後半有點偷懶喔www
而且排列可以更漂亮些...


[Insane]
00:23:119 (4) - 可以拿掉?
00:23:927 (x) - 加個note?
00:25:081 (4,5) - spacing!
00:25:312 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 我個人建議音效別這樣下，會混淆，建議有規律地放在白線或紅線上(ex.00:25:543 (7,10,1))
00:28:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
00:42:619 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ (ex. 00:42:850 (9,13,3,7) clap?)
00:56:466 (4) - 右一格 (事實上有很多類似的瑕疵...自己找找吧)
00:57:158 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 也是類似之前的問題
03:19:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (ex. 03:18:619 (9,1,5,7) - clap?)
03:32:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
03:49:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - 間距工整些

=================================

整體來說
音效比較需要再加強些
我是覺得[Normal]下法不錯
不過其他兩個diff也不是不好 (個人偏好有規律的下法)
大方向: 音效是輔佐完加抓節奏用的，所以以不混淆玩家為主

排列上[Hard]可以加強些

star~



spboxer3
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[quote="yongtw123"]Overall
音效部分有些地方該放finish但是漏了，檢查一下吧
請務必善用音量控制，有些地方該大聲(例如kiai部分, 在[Insane]會有點太小聲了)有些地方該小聲

[Normal]

00:32:466 (5,1) - spacing!
00:37:081 (1) - 頭放finish?
00:38:927 (4) - ^
00:40:773 (6) - 頭尾放finish?
02:13:081 (1,2,3) - 改成(1,3)頭放finish(2)放clap? 如果改的話連帶其他的也改一下
02:22:773 (5,6) - spacing! 疊在一起?
02:48:158 (7) - 這應該出現在 02:48:619 比較對
03:15:389 (4,5,6) - spacing!
03:34:312 (8,1) - ^
03:38:466 (6) - 彎地有點不好看


[Hard]
:!: 音效比起[Normal]亂，請參照[Normal]。
前面一小段間距不怎麼固定，修正一下
因為你這裡使用x0.8間距，所以note之間很近，但也因此很容易擠成一堆不好看
建議你整個diff跑過一遍，把間距不怎麼一致或著排列不好看的地方修正。
例如:
SPOILER
01:30:389 (7,8,9,10,11) - 弄圓
01:23:927 (2,5,6) - (5)感覺要離(2)遠一點又離(6)近點

00:16:773 (1) - 這一段改成這樣?
SPOILER
[attachment=1:90bfc]06.jpg[/attachment:90bfc][attachment=2:90bfc]05.jpg[/attachment:90bfc]
00:30:158 (1,2) - spacing, 要不乾脆(1)用折返?
01:32:466 (1) - [attachment=0:90bfc]07.jpg[/attachment:90bfc]
01:56:466 (1) - 這應該是..unrankable
03:31:082 (1) - 同01:32:466 (1)?

後半有點偷懶喔www
而且排列可以更漂亮些...


[Insane]
00:23:119 (4) - 可以拿掉?
00:23:927 (x) - 加個note?
00:25:081 (4,5) - spacing!
00:25:312 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 我個人建議音效別這樣下，會混淆，建議有規律地放在白線或紅線上(ex.00:25:543 (7,10,1))
00:28:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
00:42:619 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ (ex. 00:42:850 (9,13,3,7) clap?)
00:56:466 (4) - 右一格 (事實上有很多類似的瑕疵...自己找找吧)
00:57:158 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 也是類似之前的問題
03:19:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (ex. 03:18:619 (9,1,5,7) - clap?)
03:32:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
03:49:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - 間距工整些

=================================

整體來說
音效比較需要再加強些
我是覺得[Normal]下法不錯
不過其他兩個diff也不是不好 (個人偏好有規律的下法)
大方向: 音效是輔佐完加抓節奏用的，所以以不混淆玩家為主

排列上[Hard]可以加強些

that's all fix Done!!
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spboxer3
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_lolipop wrote:

0.0
thanks give some tip in IRC
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:oops:
PSPDS Eddie
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PSPDS Eddie
;)
hvick225
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:D
RhaiizoN
RhaiizoN
8-)
wmfchris
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lily >w<
要不要taiko diff
LKs
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LKs
nnnnnnn

[00:11:235] 遮挡不严
[00:42:158] 这突然加一个jump干嘛 影响美观
[01:06:158] clap
[01:09:850] clap
[01:10:081] no clap
[01:10:696] clap
[01:11:927] no clap
[01:13:543] clap
[01:20:004] clap
[01:20:927] clap
[01:27:850] no clap
[01:28:081] clap
[01:35:696] clap
[01:50:466] clap+whistle
[02:48:619]~[02:49:543] 参见前面的修改方式
[02:53:235] clap
[02:53:466] no clap
[03:39:850] clap
[03:52:773] clap

hhhhhhhh

[00:31;773] 间距
hard不错

iiiiiii

[00:19:081] clap
[00:19:427] clap
[00:20:004] clap
[01:35:004] 遮挡不严
[02:23;927] no clap

整体难度都再提升一步就更好了
Uan
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Uan
Good!!:)
S.T.A.R!!
KanaRin
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KanaRin
Good job!
Star
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Star.

Edit:IRC modded.
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spboxer3
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kanpakyin wrote:

Star.
Thanks mod in IRC
Ibuki Suika
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8-)
每次见到我能打的连打图都会类牛满面
spboxer3
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Ibuki Suika wrote:

8-)
每次见到我能打的连打图都会类牛满面
lol不是吧大佬~~~你能打的圖都有成千上萬來著~~~
wmfchris
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>_<

Download: Lily - Marie-Luise (spboxer3) [Wmf's Taiko].osu

aabc271
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aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Wmf's Taiko]

The diff doesn't have enough 1/2 rests imo. Could be tiring or boring to play for some players ~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:58:889 - ( 322 ) Blue note ?

02:13:081 - ( 769 ) Add finish ?

02:34:427 - ( 43 ~ 50 ) oooooooo ?

03:41:004 - ( 182 ~ 189 ) oooo oooo ? ( 1/6 )

03:53:004 - ( 357 ) Blue note ?

03:55:773 - ( 374 ~ 376 ) Change to oooo ( 1/6 ) so that it fits with the previous 1/6 ?

The map is OK overall ~

Rating : 7.5/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)
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