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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, February 02, 2017 at 12:29:20 PM

Artist: Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O)
Title: Harumachi Clover
Source: OneRoom
Tags: tv size one_room カントク kantoku -hakurei- karia lasse sekai sekai-nyan sekaii
BPM: 142
Filesize: 2042kb
Play Time: 00:30
Difficulties Available:

Download: Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover
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kantoku is moe
Last edited by lit120 on , edited 19 times in total.
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General:

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Disable countdown and letterbox in Karia's diff

Karia:

00:05:566 (1,2,3,4) - How about shaping it like this for better aethestics
Did you want to use NC after every 1/4? Because atm it's inconsistent.

Hard:

00:00:284 (1) - Poor rhythm execution. How about using this?
00:16:552 (1) - You mapped every single beat in this diff except for this red tick. Any particular reason?
00:19:932 (1) - ^

Normal:
00:00:284 (1) - Same as hard
00:19:932 (3) - Rotate -10 clockwise to make it the same * as (2)
00:26:481 (1) - Poor flow. How about using this?

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30 sec map so i couldnt find much :(
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DavidEd wrote:
General:

Image

Disable countdown and letterbox in Karia's diff
fixed

Hard:

00:00:284 (1) - Poor rhythm execution. How about using this? keep
00:16:552 (1) - You mapped every single beat in this diff except for this red tick. Any particular reason? vocals are kinda different from some of those parts
00:19:932 (1) - ^ ^

Normal:
00:00:284 (1) - Same as hard i'll think about this
00:19:932 (3) - Rotate -10 clockwise to make it the same * as (2) that'll ruin the pattern from 00:18:242 (1,2,3) -
00:26:481 (1) - Poor flow. How about using this? ok

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30 sec map so i couldnt find much :(

thx!
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M4M

General
As the Ranking criteria says, "The minimum draining (play) time for a map is 30 seconds". But thin song has only 28 sec, I'm not sure it is allowable so check the BN or QAT for it better.
Uncheck the letterbox and Widescreen support.
Inconsistence countdown.
Set the AudioLeadIn +1000 better, current starts suddenly I suppose.
Add "kantoku" to Tags.


Normal
I just wonder this diff is good for Normal, but in this mapset there is no Easy. So for newbie, I suppose this diff looks a bit hard because AR/HP/OD is 5, and contaiin some staking notes. I highly recommend you can add a Easy diff or make Normal more easier.
Rhythm
00:28:594(1) same as Hard.
Hit Sound
Same as Insane.


Hard
Placement
00:28:383(1) Place this note like this, and the flow from (7) looks nice.
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Rhythm
00:28:594(1) The beginning should be 00:28:489 like Insane since the vocal starts 00:28:383.
Hit Sound
I just wonder Normal finish is not suitable for this song since I can't clearly hear. Soft finish would be fine same as Insane.


Insane
Placement
00:07:256(3) Current liner slider looks a bit weird for me. Bent this slider's end to the next note, and this flow would be more fine.
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00:12:327(3) Move this slider to previous slider, and the shape from (1) to (3) would be nice.
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Good Luck.
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DavidEd wrote:
Karia:

00:05:566 (1,2,3,4) - How about shaping it like this for better aethestics Adjusted to better shape
Did you want to use NC after every 1/4? Because atm it's inconsistent. NC pattern is consistent generally. :p


Thanks for modding!

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Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: short.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 179
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 284,1341,2186,8101,14862,21622,28383,30496
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Harumachi Clover
TitleUnicode:春待ちクローバー
Artist:Yui Hanasaka (CV: M A O)
ArtistUnicode:花坂結衣(CV:M・A・O)
Creator:lit120
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:OneRoom
Tags:opening op tv size one room カントク -hakurei-
BeatmapID:1180926
BeatmapSetID:558217

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"oneroom.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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kajiyatta wrote:
M4M

General
As the Ranking criteria says, "The minimum draining (play) time for a map is 30 seconds". But thin song has only 28 sec, I'm not sure it is allowable so check the BN or QAT for it better. i used spinner
Uncheck the letterbox and Widescreen support. i did that already .-.
Inconsistence countdown. ^
Set the AudioLeadIn +1000 better, current starts suddenly I suppose. ok
Add "kantoku" to Tags. ow ok


Normal
I just wonder this diff is good for Normal, but in this mapset there is no Easy. So for newbie, I suppose this diff looks a bit hard because AR/HP/OD is 5, and contaiin some staking notes. I highly recommend you can add a Easy diff or make Normal more easier. i should wait for another mod who will talk about this for few times idk
Rhythm
00:28:594(1) same as Hard. it's fine
Hit Sound
Same as Insane.


Hard
Placement
00:28:383(1) Place this note like this, and the flow from (7) looks nice. oh well~
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Image

Rhythm
00:28:594(1) The beginning should be 00:28:489 like Insane since the vocal starts 00:28:383. i forgot LOL
Hit Sound
I just wonder Normal finish is not suitable for this song since I can't clearly hear. Soft finish would be fine same as Insane. i think it's fine

Good Luck.

thx!

updated karia's (except from kajiyatta's)

incoming 1 last GD insane
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@kajiyatta : Fixed 2nd thing. 00:06:834 (2,3,4) - This shape is better to me. imo, flow is fine cuz (3) is just a slider. Thanks for modding~

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Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: short.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 179
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 284,1341,2186,8101,14862,21622,28383,30496
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Harumachi Clover
TitleUnicode:春待ちクローバー
Artist:Yui Hanasaka (CV: M A O)
ArtistUnicode:花坂結衣(CV:M・A・O)
Creator:lit120
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:OneRoom
Tags:opening op tv size one room カントク kantoku -hakurei- karia
BeatmapID:1180926
BeatmapSetID:558217

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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468,279,21200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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27,145,23735,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,329,23946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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25,233,24369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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hi for my q
too short song lol

N
00:27:538 - missing this sound, can you take it to use 1/2 slider?
00:29:651 - i think slider end is here with all diffs

H
nope

I
00:28:383 (7) - add NC?

sry for short mod
take my star (=゚ω゚)ノ☆
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@joker- : I don't want to add a NC at the last ><

Thanks for modding!
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wew m4m

Normal
-[insert something about needing lowest diff to follow Easy guidelines] not sure if the stacking is allowed cuz "its confusing for newbies"
00:01:341 - preferably i would just start mapping right here, but if you can't do that cuz timing restrictions well ok lol

Hard
00:16:552 (1) - doesnt match the pattern you were following earlier, you skipped over a vocal in the middle of the slider while you haven't done that anywhere else except v
00:19:932 (1) - ^

Karia's Insane
-the NCing is consistent, but i feel like its a bit excessive.


short map but gud map
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joker- wrote:
hi for my q
too short song lol

N
00:27:538 - missing this sound, can you take it to use 1/2 slider? i prefer a vocal there
00:29:651 - i think slider end is here with all diffs um no, i don't want to make the drain time getting to less than 30 sec :(

H
nope

sry for short mod
take my star (=゚ω゚)ノ☆ arigatou! XD


Yahuri wrote:
wew m4m

Normal
-[insert something about needing lowest diff to follow Easy guidelines] not sure if the stacking is allowed cuz "its confusing for newbies" i think that's fine enough
00:01:341 - preferably i would just start mapping right here, but if you can't do that cuz timing restrictions well ok lol LOL

Hard
00:16:552 (1) - doesnt match the pattern you were following earlier, you skipped over a vocal in the middle of the slider while you haven't done that anywhere else except v i was following a vocal there, ofc that the vocal range from its timing are different from the first one
00:19:932 (1) - ^ ^

short map but gud map

thx!

updated karia's (except from yahuri's)
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m4

that spinner end sounds so weird to end there oh well


Normal
00:09:791 (1) - maybe change this to a slider with red anchor to emphasize that its stronger than 00:08:946 (2) with different shapes
00:14:651 - this tick has similar melody to 00:14:439 - and looking at how u mapped 1/2s in this diff you could map this tick too if u want!


Hard
maybe ar 6.5 so ar spread between diffs will be 5 + 1.5 + 1.5 but idk up to you
00:04:615 - missed 1/4 ?
00:09:791 - u could sacrifice a bit of vocals here and map the downbeat like you did in normal diff
00:14:334 - theres also sound here so you could add a note xd
00:16:129 (4,2) - stack
00:19:932 (1) - same
00:27:960 (7) - this kickslider covers more ''strong snare sound'' than 00:27:327 (3,4,5) - so it would be better if u emphasize the 5 notes at end, you could change the previous kickslider to circles instead to make the part less intense and the rhythm will be like this http://puu.sh/tm4Ni/b1fb2f25b4.jpg


Karia's Insane
00:07:151 - missed 1/4 here :v preferably stack a circle on top of 00:07:256 (3) - would work nicely imo
00:14:651 (4,1) - could space this a bit bigger to emphasize start of new verse

!
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Deppyforce wrote:
m4

that spinner end sounds so weird to end there oh well ikr


Normal
00:09:791 (1) - maybe change this to a slider with red anchor to emphasize that its stronger than 00:08:946 (2) with different shapes keep
00:14:651 - this tick has similar melody to 00:14:439 - and looking at how u mapped 1/2s in this diff you could map this tick too if u want! b-b-b-b-b-but...


Hard
maybe ar 6.5 so ar spread between diffs will be 5 + 1.5 + 1.5 but idk up to you keep ;w;
00:04:615 - missed 1/4 ? not gonna do that though
00:09:791 - u could sacrifice a bit of vocals here and map the downbeat like you did in normal diff focused on vocal
00:14:334 - theres also sound here so you could add a note xd nah .-.
00:16:129 (4,2) - stack k
00:19:932 (1) - same ^
00:27:960 (7) - this kickslider covers more ''strong snare sound'' than 00:27:327 (3,4,5) - so it would be better if u emphasize the 5 notes at end, you could change the previous kickslider to circles instead to make the part less intense and the rhythm will be like this http://puu.sh/tm4Ni/b1fb2f25b4.jpg too much .-.

!

thx!

btw added lasse's and incoming sekaii's easy soon
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speed m4m

Map for m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/557832


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Hard
  • 00:00:284 (1,2) - The distance is too large for a calm part, yet it doesn't give enough emphasize on 00:01:341 (1) - , resulting it kinda gives a plain feeling here
  • 00:09:580 (1) - I know that you're following the vocals but it strangely ignored a strong downbeat here



God karia
  • 00:01:341 (1,1) - Not blanketed if you care :p
  • 00:13:172 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Just my opinion though, but it will be better if it have varieties of movement, although the sound is the same here, it's kinda repetitive and boring to play imo
  • 00:14:862 (1) - Mind make the jump larger? It looks doesn't emphasize the note pretty well :p
  • 00:17:820 (5) - A little suggestion, it flows better yet doesn't destroy the emphasis on the clap imo
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  • 00:19:932 (1) - imo the finish will emphasize better if unstacked
  • 00:27:960 (3,4,5,6,7) - Although it's pretty far, but i would blanket with 00:27:115 (2) - so it will be neater


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No kd if not helpful
Good luck~
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KuranteMelodii wrote:
speed m4m

Map for m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/557832


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Hard
  • 00:00:284 (1,2) - The distance is too large for a calm part, yet it doesn't give enough emphasize on 00:01:341 (1) - , resulting it kinda gives a plain feeling here i used fully DS, so yeah
  • 00:09:580 (1) - I know that you're following the vocals but it strangely ignored a strong downbeat here focusing on vocal seems ok enough


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malas ku download :vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

No kd if not helpful
Good luck~

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