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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, April 24, 2017 at 11:05:58 PM

Artist: Oku Hanako
Title: Kimi no Hana (TV size)
Source: セイレン
Tags: Seiren opening Tsuneki Hikari Miyamae Tooru Touno Kyouko xinying chocox walaowey op
BPM: 154
Filesize: 19372kb
Play Time: 01:29
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Special thanks to KaedekaShizuru for mp3 --> check his/her mapset
Special thanks to Xinying and walaowey for GD




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Image Easy by me : DONE
Image Normal by me : DONE
Image Hard by me : DONE
Image Xinying's Insane by Xinying : DONE
Image Flower by walaowey: DONE
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Hi
From your req~
General

  • Title: I think that "(TV size)" is necessary. I recommend it as follows.
    Title: キミの花 (TV size)
    Romanised Title: Kimi no Hana (TV size)
    Source: recochoku / image
    itunes / image
    The site mentioned above links from the official site of the seiren. Official site of the Seiren / image
    So, It's a trustworthy site.
  • Tag: Addition of the "opening"

Hard


Normal


Easy


gl ;)
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Hi
Thank you :D
General all fixed
kunka wrote:
Hi
From your req~
Hard


Normal


Easy


gl ;)
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m4m

easy

01:15:778 (2) - small ds unconsistency
00:15:778 (1,2) - ^
01:01:752 - can map a 1/1 slider here specialy before kiai it gives that intro
01:29:025 - i think spinner end here is better and fit nicer

normal

01:01:752 - same for easy if u want
01:29:025 - same
fml its good xd

hard

00:34:090 (4,1) - maybe blanket the 1/2 slider on head of slider 1 would look neater
01:01:752 - maybe here 1/1 slider with slow sv

its rly good cant find anything
>w<
/me run
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Lilyanna wrote:
m4m

easy

01:15:778 (2) - small ds unconsistency Fixed
00:15:778 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:01:752 - can map a 1/1 slider here specialy before kiai it gives that intro will consider it cause i follow the rhythm but also follow the vocal so if just vocal i will ignore it
01:29:025 - i think spinner end here is better and fit nicer Fixed

normal

01:01:752 - same for easy if u want
01:29:025 - same Fixed
fml its good xd

hard

00:34:090 (4,1) - maybe blanket the 1/2 slider on head of slider 1 would look neater Nope, i make it like that on purpose
01:01:752 - maybe here 1/1 slider with slow sv same like in easy
i change the spinner too in hard
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Hi~ so m4m time ^_^

General

Idk why, but I think that the song's end is just like an edge, it is cutted so sharpy... Can you fix this in any way?

Easy

00:06:427 (1,2,3) - different distance snap...
00:28:245 (1,2,3) - sounds weird a little
Also, you can make moments "slider-circle-slider" more round to seems better.

Normal

No problems with separate elements, but in general...
The same as in Easy, but more: you can make connecting all of elements more round/linear to let them become whole parts of map, but not the lonely tap-waiting objects :3
Also I thought as maybe here is strange rhythm, because I really confused when I see this... I can't pass the normal with fc, lol :c

Hard

00:07:401 (2) - move it in way to be more nice :P
00:30:194 (2,3,4) - non-symmetrical placing of sliders of really only one type, why not to place first slider (of these three) a bit far to make same distance?
00:49:869 (6,7) - I even don't hear them... Maybe you can make them louder?
01:16:168 (5) - please place it in other place to face smoother... (near the next element or far from it)
01:16:947 (2,3,4) - the same as with other 2,3,4 sliders at the start of Hard's mod
01:19:284 (5) - oh again this placing :c

That's all, I hope I was useful :P
Good luck, and I'm waiting for this will be ranked, really nice song :D
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Easy

00:06:427 (1,2,3) - different distance snap... It's fine
00:28:245 (1,2,3) - sounds weird a little ??sound fine to me i follow the beat and the vocal
Also, you can make moments "slider-circle-slider" more round to seems better.

Normal

No problems with separate elements, but in general...
The same as in Easy, but more: you can make connecting all of elements more round/linear to let them become whole parts of map, but not the lonely tap-waiting objects :3
Also I thought as maybe here is strange rhythm, because I really confused when I see this... I can't pass the normal with fc, lol :c Normal is fine [color=#FF0000]i can FC it with HD HD DT
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00:07:401 (2) - move it in way to be more nice :P will consider it
00:30:194 (2,3,4) - non-symmetrical placing of sliders of really only one type, why not to place first slider (of these three) a bit far to make same distance? it is look fine now
00:49:869 (6,7) - I even don't hear them... Maybe you can make them louder? Fixed
01:16:168 (5) - please place it in other place to face smoother... (near the next element or far from it) it flow good now and i want use jump to emphasize it
01:16:947 (2,3,4) - the same as with other 2,3,4 sliders at the start of Hard's mod actually 2 3 4 is not a pattern the pattern start 3 4 5 so its fine now
01:19:284 (5) - oh again this placing :c it flow good now and i want use jump to emphasize it
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my diff~


edit: had to fix a small rhythm mistake
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IRC
2017-01-18 21:19 Del05: halo :D
2017-01-18 21:19 Riantra: :D
2017-01-18 21:19 Riantra: hai
2017-01-18 21:20 Del05: bs minta mod nggak gan
2017-01-18 21:21 Riantra: aku udah lupa soal modding :<
2017-01-18 21:21 Riantra: padahal pingin balik mapping lagi tapi ilmunya dah hilang
2017-01-18 21:21 Del05: lol
2017-01-18 21:21 Del05: wkwkkw
2017-01-18 21:21 Del05: belajar lg gan wkwkw
2017-01-18 21:21 Del05: gpp kok
2017-01-18 21:21 Riantra: boleh kirim mapnya
2017-01-18 21:21 Riantra: tapi saya noob banget pasti wkwk
2017-01-18 21:22 Del05: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1184212 Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV Size)]
2017-01-18 21:22 Del05: itu sih mapnya
2017-01-18 21:22 Del05: gpp kasih pendapatnya juga gp
2017-01-18 21:22 Del05: gpp
2017-01-18 21:22 Riantra: oke
2017-01-18 21:23 Del05: makasih gan :D
2017-01-18 21:24 Riantra: hmm seiren
2017-01-18 21:24 Riantra: fresh
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: iya
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: aku suka ama heroinenya
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: wkwkw
2017-01-18 21:25 Riantra: artnya mirip amagami
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: katanya sih
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: sequelnya amagami
2017-01-18 21:25 Riantra: testplay dulu ya uwu
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: cuma yg lama dah lulus semua
2017-01-18 21:25 Riantra: lol
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: jd kayak kouhainya
2017-01-18 21:27 Riantra: pingin ngasih pendapat tapi soal mapping saya noob xD
2017-01-18 21:28 Del05: gpp kasih aja
2017-01-18 21:28 Del05: ntah jumpnya flownya
2017-01-18 21:28 Riantra: yang normal lebih enak ketimbang easy
2017-01-18 21:30 Riantra: ga bisa bacanya xdd
2017-01-18 21:31 Del05: hm.. berarti new styleku lbh enak drpd old style
2017-01-18 21:31 Del05: baca ? diff apa
2017-01-18 21:31 Riantra: yang insane haha
2017-01-18 21:31 Riantra: belum kuat baca ar segitu
2017-01-18 21:31 Del05: hm..
2017-01-18 21:32 Del05: berarti arnya aku minta diturunin aja
2017-01-18 21:32 Riantra: diff easy
2017-01-18 21:33 Del05: knp easy ?
2017-01-18 21:33 Riantra: 00:26:687 (3) - ini namanya slider bolak balik apa ya, pokoknya itu kalau bisa reversenya dihilangin
2017-01-18 21:33 Riantra: pendapat pribadi aja sih, rasanya aneh
2017-01-18 21:34 Del05: hm..
2017-01-18 21:34 Del05: aku follow vocal sih buat di tail itu ada vocalnya
2017-01-18 21:34 Del05: consider dulu :D
2017-01-18 21:36 Riantra: 00:26:687 - 00:27:856 - imo enakan dibuat 1/1 slider clap tail gitu
2017-01-18 21:36 Riantra: tapi vocal not bad juga
2017-01-18 21:36 Riantra: cuma karena sebelumnya ga ngikut vocal jadi aneh
2017-01-18 21:37 Del05: seblm follow vocal cuma gk se follow yg itu sih
2017-01-18 21:37 Del05: emang
2017-01-18 21:37 Riantra: 00:47:921 (2,3) - terus ini, kalau buat first try bikin salah baca pasti haha
2017-01-18 21:38 Del05: hm..
2017-01-18 21:38 Del05: diapakan ya itu
2017-01-18 21:38 Del05: dijadiin stu slider ?
2017-01-18 21:38 Del05: tp malah jd aneh xD
2017-01-18 21:39 Riantra: hmm
2017-01-18 21:40 Riantra: 00:49:090 (4) - mungkin ininya aja yang digeser
2017-01-18 21:41 Riantra: 00:48:505 (3) - jadi 1/2 slider?
2017-01-18 21:41 Del05: ke ?
2017-01-18 21:42 Del05: hm.. kalo 1/2 malah jd aneh
2017-01-18 21:42 Del05: soalnya gitarnya cuma sampe blu tick
2017-01-18 21:42 Riantra: 00:49:090 (4) - digeser ke 00:48:895 -
2017-01-18 21:43 Riantra: jadi 1/1 slider
2017-01-18 21:43 Riantra: 00:49:674 - add note
2017-01-18 21:43 Del05: hm.. oke lah
2017-01-18 21:44 Del05: fixed
2017-01-18 21:44 Riantra: yang lainnya bagus kok
2017-01-18 21:45 Del05: okok
2017-01-18 21:45 Del05: kirim ke forum ya irc
2017-01-18 21:45 Del05: bs ksh kds
2017-01-18 21:45 Del05: sekalian aku msh bs inget yg aku consider td
2017-01-18 21:52 Del05: mkasih gan :D
2017-01-18 21:52 Del05: aku tunggu postnya wkwk
2017-01-18 21:52 Riantra: sama-sama xd
2017-01-18 21:53 Riantra: aku merasa ga ngebantu nih xD


duh banyak lupanya, cara ngepost di forum aja lupa xd
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As you requested.


Normal
00:07:596 (2) - putting 199.172 could be better for flow. overlapping 00:09:544 (1) - doesn't matter, It's okay.
00:25:908 (2) - some....missed hitsounds?
00:36:038 (3) - this is the only one 1/2 rhythm in this diff. looks awkward, and 00:36:232 - this part doesn't need to emphasize.
00:53:181 (1,2) - this rhythm could be better for read.
01:25:323 (2) - this is. too.


Normal
00:13:830 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many rhythm terms. imo, 00:15:583 - deleting this beat could be better.
00:23:765 - this is strong sound, Add ad beat.
00:36:622 - why don't you add a beat in here? It has strong piano sound
00:38:375 (2) - missing hitsound
00:53:765 - this part has vocal, I prefer you adding a vocal sound in tere, 00:53:960 (2) - start at 00:53:765 - ?
00:57:077 (2) - ^
01:14:025 (6,7) - swap rhythm, could be better for vocal emphasizing.
01:14:804 (8) - and this beat doesn't need,,


Hard
00:36:038 (1,2) - how about blanket?
00:48:895 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about make star pattern?
01:21:817 (2) - slider blanket


Insane
00:00:388 - 00:01:947 - why you ignored this rhythm part? I think you should add a beat since you add a beat in 00:03:505 - .
00:07:596 (4) - stacking 3 looks not so good, imo. DS feels decreased.
00:10:518 (3) - you don't need to make a jump in here, music is calm now.
00:25:323 - add a beat
00:25:908 (4,5) - Ctrl G for make flow with 00:26:297 (6) - .
00:38:181 (3,5) - ctrl G and make a star pattern.
00:41:297 (2,3) - stack looks weird, too.
01:17:921 (7) - delete this beat since you didn't added a beat in 01:05:453 - .

GL
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Neoskylove wrote:
As you requested.


Normal
00:07:596 (2) - putting 199.172 could be better for flow. overlapping 00:09:544 (1) - doesn't matter, It's okay. Fixed
00:25:908 (2) - some....missed hitsounds? There is no beat there (beat in red tick)
00:36:038 (3) - this is the only one 1/2 rhythm in this diff. looks awkward, and 00:36:232 - this part doesn't need to emphasize. will consider it if someone said again about this i will change it
00:53:181 (1,2) - this rhythm could be better for read. Fixed
01:25:323 (2) - this is. too. will consider it if someone said again about this i will change it


Normal
00:13:830 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many rhythm terms. imo, 00:15:583 - deleting this beat could be better. Actually it is same with 00:01:362 (2,3,4,5,1) -
00:23:765 - this is strong sound, Add ad beat. Fixed
00:36:622 - why don't you add a beat in here? It has strong piano sound Fixed
00:38:375 (2) - missing hitsound There is no beat there (beat in red tick)
00:53:765 - this part has vocal, I prefer you adding a vocal sound in tere, 00:53:960 (2) - start at 00:53:765 - ? Will consider it cause i want to emphasize the beat more
00:57:077 (2) - ^
01:14:025 (6,7) - swap rhythm, could be better for vocal emphasizing. i want to emphasize the cymbal sound at 01:14:219
01:14:804 (8) - and this beat doesn't need,, Fixed


Hard
00:36:038 (1,2) - how about blanket? It is on purpose i make it like that
00:48:895 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about make star pattern? Will consider it cause it flow well now, i think
01:21:817 (2) - slider blanket Fixed
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halo

Easy
00:25:129 (1,2) - flownya disini agak kasar,coba kayak gini biar agak halus dikit http://prnt.sc/dxl7dz
00:36:622 (4) - unsnapped slider tailnya
00:40:712 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - flow pattern (1,2,3,4) mirip dengan (1,2,3) mungkin bisa di kasih beda dikit flownya *mungkin ini nggk guna jadi di skip aja,cuma uneg2 doang
00:48:895 (4) - suara cymbalnya keras banget disini loh,nggk mau pakai finish?
01:27:661 (1) - spinnernya terlalu terburu-buru munculnya,kan ini level easy jadi mungkin di mundurin dikit spinnernya ke red tick ~

Normal
00:02:921 (5) - ini jadi circle aja deh,masa masih awal lagu rhythmnya dah susah kayak gini lel
00:09:155 (5) - ^
00:15:388 (5) - ^
00:21:622 (6) - ^
00:31:947 (2) - mungkin slider tailnya di red tick aja biar rhythmnya nggk terlalu dense disini
00:44:414 (2) - ^
00:58:245 (3) - circle disini,biar enak ke vocalnya
01:00:973 (4,5) - potong jadi 2 1/2 slider? biar enak ke drumnya

Hard
01:09:739 (4) - kalau aku sih mending stack di slider (4) aja biar agak enak flownya
01:10:908 (2,3) - unstack? agak rada aneh sih kalau stack disini
01:23:765 (3) - stack di slider (1)? biar lebih leluasa pemain ngekliknya

ok itu aja kak GL!
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Neoskylove wrote:

Insane
00:00:388 - 00:01:947 - why you ignored this rhythm part? I think you should add a beat since you add a beat in 00:03:505 - . there is no sound at the start lol
00:07:596 (4) - stacking 3 looks not so good, imo. DS feels decreased. DS is not decreased, consistent 1.21x
00:10:518 (3) - you don't need to make a jump in here, music is calm now. Build up to next slider well, keep
00:25:323 - add a beat there is no sound
00:25:908 (4,5) - Ctrl G for make flow with 00:26:297 (6) - . your flow is bad compared to mine, so keep for now
00:38:181 (3,5) - ctrl G and make a star pattern. 00:38:570 (5) - deserves more emphasis compared to 00:38:181 (3) , and there is nothing wrong with this pattern/flow playability wise
00:41:297 (2,3) - stack looks weird, too. have you tried playing it?
01:17:921 (7) - delete this beat since you didn't added a beat in 01:05:453 - . the beat here 01:05:453 - is really soft, so skipping it wouldn't be a problem. But the beat here 01:17:921 (7) is much more obvious, skipping it would be questionable.


even though no change from mod, I fixed a jump that I feel is overmapped. My new diff -> https://puu.sh/trGrr/6a02db5b42.osu
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halo

Easy
00:25:129 (1,2) - flownya disini agak kasar,coba kayak gini biar agak halus dikit http://prnt.sc/dxl7dz Consider dulu deh soalnya menurutku udah enak flownya
00:36:622 (4) - unsnapped slider tailnya Fixed
00:40:712 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - flow pattern (1,2,3,4) mirip dengan (1,2,3) mungkin bisa di kasih beda dikit flownya *mungkin ini nggk guna jadi di skip aja,cuma uneg2 doang Gpp sih itu
00:48:895 (4) - suara cymbalnya keras banget disini loh,nggk mau pakai finish? Fixed
01:27:661 (1) - spinnernya terlalu terburu-buru munculnya,kan ini level easy jadi mungkin di mundurin dikit spinnernya ke red tick ~ Fixed

Normal
00:02:921 (5) - ini jadi circle aja deh,masa masih awal lagu rhythmnya dah susah kayak gini lel consider dulu
00:09:155 (5) - ^
00:15:388 (5) - ^
00:21:622 (6) - ^
00:31:947 (2) - mungkin slider tailnya di red tick aja biar rhythmnya nggk terlalu dense disini Fixed
00:44:414 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:58:245 (3) - circle disini,biar enak ke vocalnya Nggak deh gini aja enak wkwkw
01:00:973 (4,5) - potong jadi 2 1/2 slider? biar enak ke drumnya Fixed

Hard
01:09:739 (4) - kalau aku sih mending stack di slider (4) aja biar agak enak flownya consider dulu
01:10:908 (2,3) - unstack? agak rada aneh sih kalau stack disini Fixed
01:23:765 (3) - stack di slider (1)? biar lebih leluasa pemain ngekliknya Fixed

ok itu aja kak GL!
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