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Kaori Utatsuki - Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~ [Taiko]

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Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年1月12日 at 22:34:18

Artist: Kaori Utatsuki
Title: Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~
Source: ラブライド・イヴ
Tags: short ver op opening eroge Love-Bride Eve LEVEL OCTAVE Girls Compilation C.G mix whitesoft I've Sound Saikoro
BPM: 140
Filesize: 2518kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kantan (1.28 stars, 111 notes)
  2. Muzukashii (2.56 stars, 306 notes)
  3. Oni (3.54 stars, 436 notes)
  4. Saikoro's Futsuu (1.88 stars, 200 notes)
Download: Kaori Utatsuki - Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5 Ranked Mapset

Kantan - 100%
Saikoro's Futsuu - 100%,by Saikoro
Muzukashii - 100%
Oni - 100%

Thank you for Modding
Niko-nyan
desireofpainx
R
Charlotte
MidSoul
Gemu-
yuzu__rinrin
yassu-
Labyr
Skylish
Volta

old std mapset(RIP)
Last edited by Renka , edited 27 times in total.
Saikoro
78 posts
Joined March 2011
Saikoro
finished 8-)

Saikoro's Futsuu
osu file format v14
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 0.5

[Metadata]
Title:Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~
TitleUnicode:Hold on me ～恋の魔法～
Artist:Utatsuki Kaori
ArtistUnicode:詩月カオリ
Creator:chaica
Version:Saikoro's Futsuu
Source:ラブライド・イヴ
Tags:short ver op opening eroge Love-Bride Eve LEVEL OCTAVE Girls Compilation C.G mix whitesoft I've Sound
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:557842

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Last edited by Saikoro , edited 1 time in total.
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
Quick mod as m4m :3

[General Checking]
  1. None (maybe i need to ask some metadata xD
[Oni]
  1. Maybe you can change the OD to OD6 because it isn't hard at all to get accuracy on it (or maybe try 5.5 too)
  2. 00:22:510 (84.85.86) - on vocal, the voice is quite same with (84) so i suggest to change it to kdd
  3. if you change ^, you may need to change this one too : 00:29:008(117,118,119) -
  4. 00:37:579 (164,165) - It's quite questionable about the vocal because it can be k k and d k as well
  5. 01:13:807 (359.360.361.362.363) - How about change it to kdddk ? Much better with the rhytmic
[Muzukashii]
  1. Fine at all :), but the HP should be increased a little bit by 0.5 and OD to 5
[Saikoro's Kantan? oh it's Futsuu]
  1. OD3? Maybe you can increase the OD as well
  2. 00:18:950 - You can delete this one because you didn't do the same thing on 00:15:521 -
  3. 00:47:008 - necessary placement, you can delete it because there is no instrument sound.
  4. 01:06:950 - quite same with 00:18:950 -
  5. 01:22:378 - necessary placement, you cna delete it because the vocal is quite off.
[Kantan]
  1. I'm not sure with the kantan but it looks like a futsuu at all because there is not much 4/1 break
HP for this mapset : 8/7.5/7/6.5

u.u nice song
Hantsuki
178 posts
Joined November 2013
Hantsuki
NM from my queue

[Kantan]
  1. 00:25:365 (7) - d?
  2. 00:51:092 (4) - k
[Saikoro's Futsuu]
  1. 00:07:378 (12) - d?
  2. 01:06:950 (153) - that random note ;d, delete it

    Use Clap instead of whistle
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:29:436 (90) - d
  2. 00:57:950 (193,194) - dk?
  3. 01:06:092 (226) - d
  4. 01:23:021 (300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307) - use dkdkdkdk instead of kdkdkdkdkd
  5. 01:24:950 (308) - k
[Oni]

empty ;-;
[R]
1,050 posts
Joined November 2013
[R]
yo

you split the taiko diff ? xD
[Kantan]
00:25:365 - delete ? density too high for beginning part
01:03:521 - move 01:03:950 - match with instrument
01:05:664 - can delete if mod above applied

[Futsuu]
change HP 7
00:15:950 - add note maybe
00:18:950 - delete
00:30:722 - delete ? doesn't good to place triplet here
00:30:936 - can change don
00:43:365 (89,90) - invert ? flow in 00:43:793 - same with 00:42:079 -
00:49:150 - delete every similiar this note, it's weird after hitting the finisher

01:03:092 - can add note to fill this long spacing (it's kiai man)
01:03:950 - can add note ^
01:06:950 - move 01:06:521 - instead
01:08:021 - delete and 01:07:378 - make kdd , there pattern you copy doesn't good to follow in here

01:08:235 - change kat ?
01:08:677 (156,157) - can be ddd
01:11:878 - delete ? you dont follow pitch in 01:10:164 -
01:18:735 - ^
01:26:450 - move 01:26:021 - make easier hitting finisher forward


that's all from me
good luck
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Niko-nyan wrote:

Quick mod as m4m :3

[General Checking]
  1. None (maybe i need to ask some metadata xD
[Oni]
  1. Maybe you can change the OD to OD6 because it isn't hard at all to get accuracy on it (or maybe try 5.5 too) - nope,Because I think OD5 is good
  2. 00:22:510 (84.85.86) - on vocal, the voice is quite same with (84) so i suggest to change it to kdd - change ddk.
  3. if you change ^, you may need to change this one too : 00:29:008(117,118,119) - ^
  4. 00:37:579 (164,165) - It's quite questionable about the vocal because it can be k k and d k as well - change d k
  5. 01:13:807 (359.360.361.362.363) - How about change it to kdddk ? Much better with the rhytmic - keep.
[Muzukashii]
  1. Fine at all :), but the HP should be increased a little bit by 0.5 and OD to 5 - nope,This is easymap,I think 4 is good
[Kantan]
  1. I'm not sure with the kantan but it looks like a futsuu at all because there is not much 4/1 break - I made a slight change to the map
HP for this mapset : 8/7.5/7/6.5

u.u nice song

desireofpainx wrote:

NM from my queue

[Kantan]
  1. 00:25:365 (7) - d? - nope
  2. 00:51:092 (4) - k - changed
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:29:436 (90) - d - ok
  2. 00:57:950 (193,194) - dk? -
  3. 01:06:092 (226) - d
  4. 01:23:021 (300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307) - use dkdkdkdk instead of kdkdkdkdkd
  5. 01:24:950 (308) - k
[Oni]

empty ;-;

[R] wrote:

yo

you split the taiko diff ? xD
[Kantan]
00:25:365 - delete ? density too high for beginning part - ok
01:03:521 - move 01:03:950 - match with instrument - delete this note.
01:05:664 - can delete if mod above applied - nope.I want to pick up the sound of vocals

that's all from me
good luck
thank you for modding!
Saikoro
78 posts
Joined March 2011
Saikoro

Niko-nyan wrote:

[Saikoro's Kantan? oh it's Futsuu]
  1. OD3? Maybe you can increase the OD as well　maybe,it is chaica's miss...fixed~ :D
  2. 00:18:950 - You can delete this one because you didn't do the same thing on 00:15:521 -　okay
  3. 00:47:008 - necessary placement, you can delete it because there is no instrument sound.　I'm still debating. if other guys said same thing, i will delete
  4. 01:06:950 - quite same with 00:18:950 -　　fixed
  5. 01:22:378 - necessary placement, you cna delete it because the vocal is quite off.　 deleted

desireofpainx wrote:

[Saikoro's Futsuu]
  1. 00:07:378 (12) - d?　fixed
  2. 01:06:950 (153) - that random note ;d, delete it　deleted~

    Use Clap instead of whistle　fixed

[R] wrote:

[Futsuu]
change HP 7　changed
00:15:950 - add note maybe　no changed
00:18:950 - delete　ok
00:30:722 - delete ? doesn't good to place triplet here　hmm... sorry, i keep here
00:30:936 - can change don
00:43:365 (89,90) - invert ? flow in 00:43:793 - same with 00:42:079 -　no changed
00:49:150 - delete every similiar this note, it's weird after hitting the finisher

01:03:092 - can add note to fill this long spacing (it's kiai man)　
01:03:950 - can add note ^　no changed. if adding, 01:03:521 and 01:03:950 but i keep now
01:06:950 - move 01:06:521 - instead　no changed.
01:08:021 - delete and 01:07:378 - make kdd , there pattern you copy doesn't good to follow in here

01:08:235 - change kat ?
01:08:677 (156,157) - can be ddd
01:11:878 - delete ? you dont follow pitch in 01:10:164 - if adding notes here, it's too hard? i cannot decide ;w;
01:18:735 - ^
01:26:450 - move 01:26:021 - make easier hitting finisher forward　Good! changed~
thank you all :)

Code
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
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Title:Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~
TitleUnicode:Hold on me ～恋の魔法～
Artist:Utatsuki Kaori
ArtistUnicode:詩月カオリ
Creator:chaica
Version:Saikoro's Futsuu
Source:ラブライド・イヴ
Tags:short ver op opening eroge Love-Bride Eve LEVEL OCTAVE Girls Compilation C.G mix whitesoft I've Sound Saikoro
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Charlotte
1,905 posts
Joined December 2013
Charlotte
IRC LOG
21:06 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183491 Utatsuki Kaori - Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~ [Saikoro's Futsuu]]
21:07 Charlotte: 00:03:735 - 00:10:592 - 00:14:021 - kに変更?
21:08 Saikoro: ok!
21:09 Charlotte: まだ高い音のように感じます + 次の 00:04:378 - がdonなので強調出来ます
21:10 Saikoro: なるほど
21:11 Charlotte: 00:20:235 - を　00:20:450 - へ移動 & 00:20:664 - を 00:20:878 - へ移動
21:11 Charlotte: 今の音取より、よりfitするかと思います。
21:11 Saikoro: ここは違和感があったんだけど
21:12 Saikoro: 突然このタイミングでddkがきても大丈夫かな？
21:12 Charlotte: あれタイムスタンプ間違えてるかな...(?) ddkは来ないはず...
21:13 Charlotte: http://puu.sh/trGCM/19dae6698e.jpg
21:13 Saikoro: あれ　元のわからなくなった・・・
21:13 Charlotte: dd k k D　→ d d kk D
21:14 Saikoro: あ、わかりました
21:14 Saikoro: 確かにfitしてますね！
21:15 Saikoro: 01:08:021-もおなじなので直しました
21:15 Charlotte: ok です
21:15 Charlotte: 00:30:508 - ここdon 00:30:722 - 削除
21:16 Saikoro: ok それはほかの人にも言われました笑
21:19 Charlotte: 00:34:365 (65,66) - ん~入れ替えてkdk...?の方が合う気がしますがどうでしょうか?
21:19 Saikoro: たしかにそうですね
21:19 Charlotte: 00:36:293 - を 00:36:722 - 移動した後にkに変更
21:19 Saikoro: そうなるとそのまえのkはdにしたほうがいいかな？
21:21 Saikoro: それもokです
21:21 Charlotte: 00:33:508 (63,64) - このd kをk dに変更するのがよいかなと思います
21:22 Saikoro: d dがいいと思ったんだけどk dのほうがいいですかね？
21:22 Charlotte: 00:36:722 - ここへ移動した理由はこの後の音取と一貫性を保つためです
21:23 Charlotte: 00:33:508 - ここのvocalが力強い跳ね感があるのと00:34:365 - ここと同様の高さな感じがしたのでk dがいいかなとは思います
21:24 Saikoro: okです　納得
21:28 Charlotte: 00:49:164 - 削除 00:49:378 - kに変更　00:49:807 - ここからのkkkをddkに変更はどうでしょうか?
21:30 Saikoro: それでもいいね　それにします！
21:30 Charlotte: 00:52:378 - ここからのddd kkkはd k kdk辺りに変更...?
21:31 Charlotte: お腹痛いのでちょっとだけ離れますね
21:32 Saikoro: そうですね～　 採用
21:32 Saikoro: はい！まってます！
21:35 Charlotte: 戻り
21:38 Charlotte: 00:55:807 - ここからも同様に1/2 3連を続けて使うのではなく先ほどと同じく1回の使用にするほうがよいです
21:39 Saikoro: 1回目と全くおなじで良いですよね？
21:40 Saikoro: こういうのってパターン変えるべきなんですか？
21:41 Charlotte: 絶対変える必要はないです
21:41 Saikoro: じゃあ変えない！
21:41 Charlotte: 00:56:664 - ここはddk より dkkのほうがマッチする気がします。高さ的に
21:42 Charlotte: 後ろはさっきと同じでkdkでもいいかなとは思ってました
21:43 Saikoro: 一回目より高い？的な感覚がわからないのでやっぱりセンスないのかなと思いました
21:43 Saikoro: dkkにしてみました～
21:43 Charlotte: 01:03:521 - 01:06:950 - k入れてもいいかも。間奏がちょっと長い...(?)
21:45 Saikoro: 入れた！
21:48 Charlotte: 01:14:021 - を01:14:450 - へ　01:20:878 - を01:21:307 - へ
21:49 Saikoro: これはそうですね・・・ｗ
21:49 Charlotte: 01:22:378 - k入れますか? 以上ですね
Saikoro
78 posts
Joined March 2011
Saikoro
Code
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: hold.mp3
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PreviewTime: 48722
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Title:Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~
TitleUnicode:Hold on me ～恋の魔法～
Artist:Utatsuki Kaori
ArtistUnicode:詩月カオリ
Creator:chaica
Version:Saikoro's Futsuu
Source:ラブライド・イヴ
Tags:short ver op opening eroge Love-Bride Eve LEVEL OCTAVE Girls Compilation C.G mix whitesoft I've Sound Saikoro
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Renka
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MidSoul
288 posts
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MidSoul
遅刻おじさん。

Kantan
00:20:664 - add k
・うまく言えないけれど個人的にはここにノーツがあった方が安心します。無理やり言葉で説明するとボーカルの最初をとってるのに間を埋めないとり方をしてる箇所ってたぶんほかにはあまりなくて、簡単な難易度ほどノーツを薄くのばして埋めるイメージがあるのでこういう偏り方をしていると特別に目立素オーケストラヒットとかミュートがあるわけじゃないのに違和感があるのかなと思います。

Saikoro's futsuu
00:20:021 (30,31,32,33) - d d kk > dd kkk
あとに3連も結構あるので単色踏みならアクセント強いところ欲張ってとってもいいかなと思いました。

短周期的にdとkが入れ替わるパターンマップ感が強いことを考慮した場合、他には特に目立って言うべきかなと思うところはありませんでした。うまく整ってると思います。

Muzukashii
00:38:865 (118,119) - del
・ここが3連なら　00:37:150 - 、00:37:258 - にもそれぞれたぶんadd kとなるようなパターンに組み直さないとボーカルにウェイト置いた配置だとしてもこの位置だけ特に理由なく難しくなっているかのような印象を与えるかなと思いました。　このあたり一帯をうまく配置換えするのも良いかなとおもうけどかなり難しそうです。

こちらもパターンマップ感が強いことを考慮しても他には特に目立って言うべきかなと思うところはありませんでした。うまく整ってると思います。

Oni
-1 00:08:235 (27,28,29,30,31) - kdkkd > k kkd or k kkk
-2 00:11:664 (39,40,41,42) - k dkk > kddkk or kdkkk
・この位置について、-2の方ではドラムの音が増えているのでこちらの方が長い複合系となっている形とするために-1、-2両方に修正を加える方法か、ボーカルの取り方として-1,-2パート双方で統一させるために-1,-2ののどちらかのみを修正する方法をとると、よりまとまった感じが得られるかなと思います。　それぞれの前部提案は単純にノーツを消すか追加するもの、後部提案は個人的に響きが良いかなと考える配置です。

00:20:235 (75,76,77,78) - d ddk > dd dk
・個人的にベース音の強い位置にノーツがあった方が響きがよさそうな感じがしました。
ボーカルの噛み合わせについて人によっては違和感を覚えるかもしれないので軽く一考程度にお願いします。

-1 00:27:508 (110,111,112,113) - kkd k > kkk d
-2 00:28:150 - add d
・ボーカルで切るなら-1を、パターン配色を狙うならこの位置でドラム配置を切るのは違和感があるような気がしましたので-2をとるとよくなる気がします。Aメロ入ってからはボーカル位置重視のパターン配色配置に見えるので個人的には-2採用してくれるとうれしいです。パターン配置って意味では-2は休憩を一定間隔に取っているので入れづらいかもしれないけどこの次に来るまとまりと同じくらいの長さにしかならないのでまだ合理的かと思います。

01:22:271 - add d
・キックうるさいのがあるので浮いていると違和感。

短周期的にdとkが入れ替わるパターンマップなんて妙な言い方してますが、要するにプレイヤーにとっては規則的で読みやすくいい譜面だと受け入れられやすい譜面構成だと思います。
特に低難易度不安とか言ってたけどほぼほぼ最高の状態だと思う。GJGLです！
Saikoro
78 posts
Joined March 2011
Saikoro

MidSoul wrote:

遅刻おじさん。

Saikoro's futsuu
00:20:021 (30,31,32,33) - d d kk > dd kkk
あとに3連も結構あるので単色踏みならアクセント強いところ欲張ってとってもいいかなと思いました。 変更しました！01:08:021-についても同様です。

短周期的にdとkが入れ替わるパターンマップ感が強いことを考慮した場合、他には特に目立って言うべきかなと思うところはありませんでした。うまく整ってると思います。
嬉しいお言葉、ありがとうございます！

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Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

MidSoul wrote:

遅刻おじさん。

Kantan
00:20:664 - add k
・うまく言えないけれど個人的にはここにノーツがあった方が安心します。無理やり言葉で説明するとボーカルの最初をとってるのに間を埋めないとり方をしてる箇所ってたぶんほかにはあまりなくて、簡単な難易度ほどノーツを薄くのばして埋めるイメージがあるのでこういう偏り方をしていると特別に目立素オーケストラヒットとかミュートがあるわけじゃないのに違和感があるのかなと思います。 - ok


Muzukashii
00:38:865 (118,119) - del
・ここが3連なら　00:37:150 - 、00:37:258 - にもそれぞれたぶんadd kとなるようなパターンに組み直さないとボーカルにウェイト置いた配置だとしてもこの位置だけ特に理由なく難しくなっているかのような印象を与えるかなと思いました。　このあたり一帯をうまく配置換えするのも良いかなとおもうけどかなり難しそうです。 - 配置をいろいろ変更

こちらもパターンマップ感が強いことを考慮しても他には特に目立って言うべきかなと思うところはありませんでした。うまく整ってると思います。

Oni
-1 00:08:235 (27,28,29,30,31) - kdkkd > k kkd or k kkk
-2 00:11:664 (39,40,41,42) - k dkk > kddkk or kdkkk
・この位置について、-2の方ではドラムの音が増えているのでこちらの方が長い複合系となっている形とするために-1、-2両方に修正を加える方法か、ボーカルの取り方として-1,-2パート双方で統一させるために-1,-2ののどちらかのみを修正する方法をとると、よりまとまった感じが得られるかなと思います。　それぞれの前部提案は単純にノーツを消すか追加するもの、後部提案は個人的に響きが良いかなと考える配置です。- k kkdにしました、

00:20:235 (75,76,77,78) - d ddk > dd dk
・個人的にベース音の強い位置にノーツがあった方が響きがよさそうな感じがしました。
ボーカルの噛み合わせについて人によっては違和感を覚えるかもしれないので軽く一考程度にお願いします。- 00:16:807 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - と同じようにボーカルで取りたいのでno change,やっぱりここで偶数入れるとプレイする分には違和感があるかなと・・・

-1 00:27:508 (110,111,112,113) - kkd k > kkk d
-2 00:28:150 - add d
・ボーカルで切るなら-1を、パターン配色を狙うならこの位置でドラム配置を切るのは違和感があるような気がしましたので-2をとるとよくなる気がします。Aメロ入ってからはボーカル位置重視のパターン配色配置に見えるので個人的には-2採用してくれるとうれしいです。パターン配置って意味では-2は休憩を一定間隔に取っているので入れづらいかもしれないけどこの次に来るまとまりと同じくらいの長さにしかならないのでまだ合理的かと思います。- add dしました

01:22:271 - add d
・キックうるさいのがあるので浮いていると違和感。- 承諾

短周期的にdとkが入れ替わるパターンマップなんて妙な言い方してますが、要するにプレイヤーにとっては規則的で読みやすくいい譜面だと受け入れられやすい譜面構成だと思います。
特に低難易度不安とか言ってたけどほぼほぼ最高の状態だと思う。GJGLです！
modありがとうございました！all updated
Gemu-
1,015 posts
Joined October 2010
Gemu-
Hi!

Request from Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


  • [ Kantan]

    OD: 2
  1. 00:20:021 (18) - This note sounds weird in this part, is better move to 00:19:807 -
  2. 00:54:521 (60) - Change to k because the voice is increasing.
  3. 01:02:235 (71) - Remove to keep similar consistency with 00:54:092 (59,60,61,62) - because you need a finish to consistency and sense with 00:55:807 (62) - or can you remove the finish in the note 62 and add a k 00:55:378 - to similar consistency in both parts and for the voice.
  • [ Saikoro's Futsuu]

    OD: 3
  1. 00:39:079 (77,78,79) - Can you change to k d d or d k d to follow the voice. Also to not repetited the same here 00:36:508 (69,70,71) -
  2. 00:59:664 (130) - Change to k for the similar "Clap" sound. Also, to keep sequence with the rhythm 00:57:092 (123,125,128) -
  3. 01:15:521 (168,169) - Ctrl G to emphasize the finish D 01:16:378 (170) -
  4. 01:18:092 (174,175) - Ctrl G, sounds very good.
  • [ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:936 - If you want can you add a k to keep the drums with 00:34:365 (102,103,104,105) -
  2. 00:40:793 - Same, add a k to keep the drums with 00:41:222 (124,125) -
  3. 00:52:700 (165,166) - Personally is better ddd because ddk is a bit hard for Muzukashii.
  4. 00:59:450 (189,190,191) - Same ^
  5. 01:22:592 (288,289,290) - Same but is better a kkk.
  • [ Oni]

    HP: 5
  1. 00:15:307 (50,51) - Change to kd or dk sounds very good the instrumental 00:15:628 (52,53,54,55,56) -
  2. 00:18:735 (66,67) - Same here to consistency in both parts.
  3. 01:08:450 (329,330,331,332,333) - Can give you some ideas, for example... ddkkd / dkkkd / dkkdd
  4. 01:13:807 (358,359,360,361,362) - For keep and manifest much better the voice and the drums change it to kkddk. Also, to keep consistency with 01:20:664 (398,399,400,401,402) -

I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

game rock wrote:

Hi!

Request from Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


  • [ Kantan]

    OD: 2 - keep
  1. 00:20:021 (18) - This note sounds weird in this part, is better move to 00:19:807 -　ok
  2. 00:54:521 (60) - Change to k because the voice is increasing. - ^
  3. 01:02:235 (71) - Remove to keep similar consistency with 00:54:092 (59,60,61,62) - because you need a finish to consistency and sense with 00:55:807 (62) - or can you remove the finish in the note 62 and add a k 00:55:378 - to similar consistency in both parts and for the voice. - fixed

  • [ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:936 - If you want can you add a k to keep the drums with 00:34:365 (102,103,104,105) - ok
  2. 00:40:793 - Same, add a k to keep the drums with 00:41:222 (124,125) - nope,Put a break.
  3. 00:52:700 (165,166) - Personally is better ddd because ddk is a bit hard for Muzukashii. - nope,but If there is a problem with this arrangement change it
  4. 00:59:450 (189,190,191) - Same ^ - ^
  5. 01:22:592 (288,289,290) - Same but is better a kkk. - change kkk
  • [ Oni]

    HP: 5 - no.
  1. 00:15:307 (50,51) - Change to kd or dk sounds very good the instrumental 00:15:628 (52,53,54,55,56) - nope,I think the dd dk is the best.
  2. 00:18:735 (66,67) - Same here to consistency in both parts. - ^
  3. 01:08:450 (329,330,331,332,333) - Can give you some ideas, for example... ddkk d / dkkkd / dkkdd - nope,Because I like this arrangement. I think that it is good as it is
  4. 01:13:807 (358,359,360,361,362) - For keep and manifest much better the voice and the drums change it to kkddk. Also, to keep consistency with 01:20:664 (398,399,400,401,402) - nope.I want to change the arrangement, so I changed the color scheme.

I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!
thank you for modding!
Saikoro
78 posts
Joined March 2011
Saikoro
:x

game rock wrote:

Hi!

Request from Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue

  • [ Saikoro's Futsuu]

    OD: 3 - not this time sorry.
  1. 00:39:079 (77,78,79) - Can you change to k d d or d k d to follow the voice. Also to not repetited the same here 00:36:508 (69,70,71) - no change, fitting the sound as it is.
  2. 00:59:664 (130) - Change to k for the similar "Clap" sound. Also, to keep sequence with the rhythm 00:57:092 (123,125,128) - ok! nice change
  3. 01:15:521 (168,169) - Ctrl G to emphasize the finish D 01:16:378 (170) - fixed.
  4. 01:18:092 (174,175) - Ctrl G, sounds very good. no changed. i emphasize the pattern
thank you for your mod :)
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256,192,83235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,85378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Renka
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yuzu__rinrin
943 posts
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yuzu__rinrin
omatasetonight
02:28 yuzu__rinrin: 干し芋
02:28 chaica: 今落花生食ってる
02:29 yuzu__rinrin: 一か所めっちゃ気になること押し付けていい？
02:29 *yuzu__rinrin is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183429 Utatsuki Kaori - Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~ [Kantan]]
02:29 chaica: もうどこでも違和感だしOK(
02:30 yuzu__rinrin: 00:51:950 (58) - ここ裏のvo取るのおかしいし00:51:521 - に移動した方分かりやすくね
02:30 chaica: やっぱり？
02:30 chaica: 変えるか
02:31 yuzu__rinrin: うん、わかりやすい方がいい
02:31 chaica: こういう一生スネアの音なってる曲、低難易度作りにくくね
02:31 yuzu__rinrin: 一生vocalに合わせてるからそこまで
02:32 yuzu__rinrin: Futsuuは無理
02:32 chaica: ボーカルに合わせたら合わせたで音拾いたくなってしまうニョ
02:32 yuzu__rinrin: ニョ
02:33 chaica: 実際この譜面どう思う？
02:33 yuzu__rinrin: さっきのとこ以外いいと思うよ
02:34 chaica: なるほど
02:34 yuzu__rinrin: ん～完璧主観だけど00:33:079 (36) - を00:34:793 - ？
02:36 chaica: なる
02:37 chaica: できるだけ大音符につなげたくないんだよね　00:33:936 - はどう
02:37 chaica: ちょっと待って
02:37 yuzu__rinrin: おう
02:37 chaica: 考えを改めたわよ
02:37 yuzu__rinrin: はい
02:38 chaica: 00:19:807 (18,19,20,21) -
02:38 chaica: みたいな感じになるな
02:38 yuzu__rinrin: たし蟹
02:39 chaica: 配色いじった
02:39 chaica: 00:34:365 (37,38,39) - 　何がいいと思う
02:40 yuzu__rinrin: 音を忠実に取るならkdK ドラムに合わせていきたいならddK
02:40 chaica: 他の難易度みてkdkにした
02:41 yuzu__rinrin: kdkにするなら00:33:508 - dにした方が聞こえよさそう
02:41 chaica: 変えたよ
02:41 yuzu__rinrin: シイタケ
02:42 chaica: 噛み合ったね
02:42 yuzu__rinrin: ｲｼﾝﾃﾞﾝｼﾝ
02:42 chaica: 難しい見れる？
02:42 yuzu__rinrin: miyoutoomoeba
02:42 chaica: 00:52:378 (164,165,166,167) -
02:42 chaica: ダメ？
02:43 yuzu__rinrin: BNによっては×
02:43 chaica: このくらいいいと思うんだけど
02:43 yuzu__rinrin: 俺はいいと思う
02:44 chaica: 割とノーツも詰まってないし大丈夫だと思うんだよね
02:44 chaica: まあ変えろと言われたら変えるけど
02:44 yuzu__rinrin: 00:50:450 - 00:50:557 - 00:50:664 - 三連ここに乗せたほうきれいじゃね
02:46 chaica: それだとoniもいじらない完
02:46 chaica: かん
02:46 yuzu__rinrin: べつにかえなくていいか
02:46 chaica: たぶん
02:46 yuzu__rinrin: これ変えても後の方あってたし統一感無くなるわ
02:47 chaica: うむ
02:47 yuzu__rinrin: 00:54:521 (172) - 単発ならkに変えたほうがよさげ
02:47 yuzu__rinrin: dだった
02:47 yuzu__rinrin: dに変えろ
02:48 chaica: ok
02:51 yuzu__rinrin: 色々変えたほうがいい所は出てくるけど変えたら後がつらい
02:54 chaica: mapperの中で勝手に完成してるヤツだ　わかるぞ
02:56 yuzu__rinrin: Oni　00:53:878 - k? なんかブツ切り感が否めない
02:58 chaica: あったほうがいいか
02:58 yuzu__rinrin: 個人的には。ノーツの戦いしてないなら入れても文句言われないだろ
02:59 chaica: 叩いた感じ合ったほうがいわかんはないしいれｔ
02:59 yuzu__rinrin: 01:00:735 - ireterutoomoukedo
03:00 chaica: もちろん入れた
03:00 yuzu__rinrin: やっぱ日本人のマップmodしてるの楽でいいわ
03:02 chaica: いちいちフォーラムに書くのめんどいしな￣
03:02 chaica: vcだともっと楽だけど何があったか第三者に伝わらないから完
03:02 yuzu__rinrin: vcが一番楽だけど今の時間帯親が56しに来る
03:03 chaica: ﾎﾟｯﾁｬﾏ･･･
03:03 yuzu__rinrin: 01:24:950 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438) - nice pp
03:04 chaica: ddkkddk(クソ叩きにくい)
03:04 yuzu__rinrin: 勝手にmod始めたけどクソス貰っていいか
03:05 chaica: フォーラムに貼りな　２億個送る
03:05 yuzu__rinrin: 5000兆欲しい
Renka
858 posts
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Topic Starter
Renka

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

omatasetonight
02:28 yuzu__rinrin: 干し芋
02:28 chaica: 今落花生食ってる
02:29 yuzu__rinrin: 一か所めっちゃ気になること押し付けていい？
02:29 *yuzu__rinrin is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183429 Utatsuki Kaori - Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~ [Kantan]]
02:29 chaica: もうどこでも違和感だしOK(
02:30 yuzu__rinrin: 00:51:950 (58) - ここ裏のvo取るのおかしいし00:51:521 - に移動した方分かりやすくね
02:30 chaica: やっぱり？
02:30 chaica: 変えるか
02:31 yuzu__rinrin: うん、わかりやすい方がいい
02:31 chaica: こういう一生スネアの音なってる曲、低難易度作りにくくね
02:31 yuzu__rinrin: 一生vocalに合わせてるからそこまで
02:32 yuzu__rinrin: Futsuuは無理
02:32 chaica: ボーカルに合わせたら合わせたで音拾いたくなってしまうニョ
02:32 yuzu__rinrin: ニョ
02:33 chaica: 実際この譜面どう思う？
02:33 yuzu__rinrin: さっきのとこ以外いいと思うよ
02:34 chaica: なるほど
02:34 yuzu__rinrin: ん～完璧主観だけど00:33:079 (36) - を00:34:793 - ？
02:36 chaica: なる
02:37 chaica: できるだけ大音符につなげたくないんだよね　00:33:936 - はどう
02:37 chaica: ちょっと待って
02:37 yuzu__rinrin: おう
02:37 chaica: 考えを改めたわよ
02:37 yuzu__rinrin: はい
02:38 chaica: 00:19:807 (18,19,20,21) -
02:38 chaica: みたいな感じになるな
02:38 yuzu__rinrin: たし蟹
02:39 chaica: 配色いじった
02:39 chaica: 00:34:365 (37,38,39) - 　何がいいと思う
02:40 yuzu__rinrin: 音を忠実に取るならkdK ドラムに合わせていきたいならddK
02:40 chaica: 他の難易度みてkdkにした
02:41 yuzu__rinrin: kdkにするなら00:33:508 - dにした方が聞こえよさそう
02:41 chaica: 変えたよ
02:41 yuzu__rinrin: シイタケ
02:42 chaica: 噛み合ったね
02:42 yuzu__rinrin: ｲｼﾝﾃﾞﾝｼﾝ
02:42 chaica: 難しい見れる？
02:42 yuzu__rinrin: miyoutoomoeba
02:42 chaica: 00:52:378 (164,165,166,167) -
02:42 chaica: ダメ？
02:43 yuzu__rinrin: BNによっては×
02:43 chaica: このくらいいいと思うんだけど
02:43 yuzu__rinrin: 俺はいいと思う
02:44 chaica: 割とノーツも詰まってないし大丈夫だと思うんだよね
02:44 chaica: まあ変えろと言われたら変えるけど
02:44 yuzu__rinrin: 00:50:450 - 00:50:557 - 00:50:664 - 三連ここに乗せたほうきれいじゃね
02:46 chaica: それだとoniもいじらない完
02:46 chaica: かん
02:46 yuzu__rinrin: べつにかえなくていいか
02:46 chaica: たぶん
02:46 yuzu__rinrin: これ変えても後の方あってたし統一感無くなるわ
02:47 chaica: うむ
02:47 yuzu__rinrin: 00:54:521 (172) - 単発ならkに変えたほうがよさげ
02:47 yuzu__rinrin: dだった
02:47 yuzu__rinrin: dに変えろ
02:48 chaica: ok
02:51 yuzu__rinrin: 色々変えたほうがいい所は出てくるけど変えたら後がつらい
02:54 chaica: mapperの中で勝手に完成してるヤツだ　わかるぞ
02:56 yuzu__rinrin: Oni　00:53:878 - k? なんかブツ切り感が否めない
02:58 chaica: あったほうがいいか
02:58 yuzu__rinrin: 個人的には。ノーツの戦いしてないなら入れても文句言われないだろ
02:59 chaica: 叩いた感じ合ったほうがいわかんはないしいれｔ
02:59 yuzu__rinrin: 01:00:735 - ireterutoomoukedo
03:00 chaica: もちろん入れた
03:00 yuzu__rinrin: やっぱ日本人のマップmodしてるの楽でいいわ
03:02 chaica: いちいちフォーラムに書くのめんどいしな￣
03:02 chaica: vcだともっと楽だけど何があったか第三者に伝わらないから完
03:02 yuzu__rinrin: vcが一番楽だけど今の時間帯親が56しに来る
03:03 chaica: ﾎﾟｯﾁｬﾏ･･･
03:03 yuzu__rinrin: 01:24:950 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438) - nice pp
03:04 chaica: ddkkddk(クソ叩きにくい)
03:04 yuzu__rinrin: 勝手にmod始めたけどクソス貰っていいか
03:05 chaica: フォーラムに貼りな　２億個送る
03:05 yuzu__rinrin: 5000兆欲しい
アリです　update
yassu-
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yassu-
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Kantan
・00:06:092 - change to d　声が低くなってる印象があります
・00:40:793 - delete and 00:41:650 - add k　vocalの伸びがあるのでピアノの方に合わせたらどうかなぁ
・01:13:378 - 01:20:235 - delete　kantanにしては5連符が多い気がしたので、同じくvocalの伸びを取る方針で
・01:00:950 (72,73,74,75,76) - BPM低いけど、dkkdk(1/1)は少し難しい気も。。。

Saikoro's Futsuu
・00:03:092 - change to d　vocal合わせ
・00:06:521 (10,11,12) - Ctrl+G　こっちのほうがvocalに合いそう
・00:38:008 - delete　vocalが伸びているので
・00:41:650 - add k　ピアノ
・00:48:079 - delete あってもいいけど、無い方が個人的に好きです
・01:03:521 - delete　何をfollowしているのかよくわかりませんけど、どっち道kiaiで長い1/2パターンが続いているので長い休憩が欲しいところです。
・01:06:950 - delete　^
・01:11:235 (159,160) - Ctrl+G　01:18:092 (176,177) - pattern
・01:11:878 - delete　oo o o リズムパターンに持ち込んでもいいかも
・01:15:521 - move to 1/2 →　^
・01:18:735 - delete　^
・01:22:378 - delete　^

Muzukashii
・00:15:092 (40,41,42,43) - delete　futsuuとの差を考えて無くしたほうがいいかも
・00:18:521 (47,48,49,50) - delete　^
・00:56:664 (170,171,172) - swap　00:49:807 (145,146,147,148) - と比べて良い変化になるかと
・01:02:235 - delete and 01:02:450 (193,194) - swap 小節の終わりをdに合わせたほうが次にうまくつなげれるかと
・01:10:378 - 01:11:878 - delete　1/2パターンが長いと飽きが来るので少し間を開けては？
・01:17:235 - 01:18:735 - delete　^
・01:24:950 (292,294) - change to d　同じ音なので

Oni
・00:28:150 - delete　小節の始まりを強調したいかな
・00:51:735 (235,236) - swap　00:51:735 - こっちを強調するべきかな
良い譜面です^^

good luck~~~ :) :) :)
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