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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 4. huhtikuuta 2012 at 4:35:12

Artist: BRZion
Title: Game Brain
Tags: 8bit
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4213kb
Play Time: 02:51
Difficulties Available:
  • Easy (2,23 stars, 167 notes)
  • Extra (5 stars, 886 notes)
  • Hard (4,81 stars, 426 notes)
  • Insane (5 stars, 596 notes)
  • Normal (3,62 stars, 196 notes)

Download: BRZion - Game Brain
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Extra - Done <- FOR APPROVAL
Insane - Done
Normal - Done
Easy - Done
Hard - Done

deddb?
Last edited by Zapy on , edited 50 times in total.
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00:03:534 (6) - Whistle hitsound.
00:06:060 (6) - Whistle hitsound.
00:08:586 (7) - Whistle hitsound.

00:21:534 - Put the hitsound volume up to around 70-80%. (I also tried SOFT hitsounds here, and it sounded better, but that's your choice.)
00:31:955 (2) - Finish hitsound (if you made it use soft hitsounds.)
00:32:586 (5) - ^
00:33:218 (7) - ^
00:33:849 (11) - ^
00:34:481 (3) - ^
00:35:113 (5) - ^
00:35:744 (9) - ^
00:36:376 (12) - ^
00:37:007 (2) - ^
---Ect...

02:04:402 (3) - Snap this beat.


Extra
Yeah, keep doing this.
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Slider Savant
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Applied LTR's mod with little changes as well as added more hitsounds in hard+ in general. Now it should(?) sound better.
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Combo Commander
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First off:

General
-BG should be in 4:3 aspect ratio; that is, it should have a size of either 1024x768 or 800x600
-2000 ms lead in time would do
-remove unused .osb and fully submit

Hard+ - maybe reduce the size of the circles and then rename it to Insane?

00:34:323 (2,3) - ugly overlap
01:01:323 (6,7,8) - bah antijump
02:04:402 (3) - snap to the 1/3 red line behind it, looks like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/96582
02:08:902 (1,3) - ugly overlap
....remap up to the end of Extra?

Extra

00:02:586 (1) - remove new combo
00:03:534 (5) - new combo and add whistle
00:06:060 (14) - new combo and add whistle
00:06:376 (1) - remove new combo
00:08:586 (10) - new combo
00:08:902 (1) - remove new combo
00:08:586 (1) - add whistle
00:11:113 (9) - new combo
00:11:428 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:007 (7) - new combo
00:27:534 (6) - ^
00:36:692 (1) - redo this slider by moving the red point one grid up
00:41:113 (4) - finish
01:00:692 (7) - new combo
01:24:692 (1,2,3,4) - unreadable :o
01:25:323 (5) - new combo here
01:25:639 (1) - remove NC
01:27:218 (1) - flip this horizontally?
01:28:165 (6,7,8) - this too?
01:30:692 (1) - remove NC
01:31:797 (5) - place this in the middle of 4 and 6 like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/96578
01:53:744 (1) - remove NC
02:04:376 (3) - snap to the 1/3 red line behind it, looks like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/96582
also, fix spacing
02:05:744 (1,2,1,2) - baah. remove those 1/16th notes next to the (1's)
02:22:323 (4,6) - stack these two properly
02:23:034 (7) - snap this circle underneath the previous slider by turning the grid snap off and setting the distance snap multiplier to 0.0x
02:50:165 (3) - same as: 02:04:376 (3) - snap to the 1/3 red line behind it, looks like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/96582

Whew. Nice map but has lots of confusing patterns. :o Maybe that's just me though.
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Add more hitsounds in both diffs, please.


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01:15:218 (1) - For a better esthetic result, make it symmetrical

Rest is fine, I think that.. considering that this is just insane, make these parte more easier because they are really critical:
00:38:586 (1,2) - because of the "hidden" stack on 1 and of the immediate jump of (2)
02:04:797 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - High jumps, players which FC'd that and will miss this part will hate you XD
02:28:007 (6,7,8,9,10) - because of the stream's discontinuity


Hard+


01:00:692 (1) - Its ends is situated on a blue tick, this is quite confusing...plus you didn't respect spacing here 01:01:007 (2). reduce the stream by adding a repeat to this slider if you want to fix it
01:25:639 (4) - unexpected jump. Try to flip vertically (3) and (4) if you want to make it more intuitive (just like this picture: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/96725)
02:05:823 (1) - Whoops unrankable spinner

Starred, I love your creativity.
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Alright I will keep working on this map after a couple of weeks when I'm out on holiday from army...

Shame that osu! can't be played on android os :p
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Hi~


General

Rename the BG file. Make the name shorter.
Your mp3 file is 320kbps, it UNRANKABLE. So change it into 192kbps or lower.
Goodbye .osb~


Hard+

Why not rename it Insane?
00:13:797 (9) - Delete this.
00:36:060 (12,13) - Remove finish
Delete timing lines after 02:36:849
It's fine :3


Extra

00:41:74~00:51:849 - Here is hard enough to read. So remove the new combos like 00:42:849 (1)
00:47:902 (1,1) - The jump is too large IMO
01:09:376 (5) - Add clap
01:09:455 (6) - Remove clap
01:14:428 (1) - Remove new combo
01:31:639 (4) - Add soft-whistle
01:36:692 (4) - ^
01:41:744 (4) - ^
01:54:455 (7) - Move it 1/4 beats backward
02:08:270 (12,13) - Reverse them, for making them easier to hit
02:11:744 (2) - D: Use circles, or it is impossible to read
02:51:218 (9,10,11) - Super hard to read D:
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9
10
11

Make the order like this

:3 Nice map , Star~
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Uh-huh

This is amazing
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If you make a difficulty around 3 stars, you can get the map ranked and only extra approved
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I like it, star :)
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so fun!!!

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