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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 czerwca 2017 at 21:51:27

Artist: NicolArmarfi
Title: Generic Happy Music
Source: かたわ少女
Tags: hakamichi shizune shiina mikado misha hisao nakai visual novel eroge four leaf studios katawa shoujo lily satou emi ibarazaki hanako nozhomi krfawy
BPM: 120
Filesize: 2235kb
Play Time: 01:10
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Download: NicolArmarfi - Generic Happy Music
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Image Hard - by Krfawy
Image Happy Insane - by Nozhomi
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Mod from #modreqs

Hello!

I think your map need its overal design to be improved. Spacing, slider shapes etc. Try adding some more blanket combos :v

Good luck!
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Blan_C wrote:
Mod from #modreqs

Hello!

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We made simple IRC mod about main stuffs

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- Easy -
00:38:158 (1) - Missed opportunity for red anchor to be on a white tick.
00:16:158 (1) - (EDGY OPTIONAL COMMENT NO NEED TO DO IT BUT-) Why are these sliders so complex? I mean I can see that some of red acnhors are on white ticks but this is on easy on a slow song. Some of them are bunched up and feel like crumpled paper... if that made sense. Attempt to make these sliders simpler.
00:12:158 (4,5) - Try to make these sliders look like this. Better asthetically and better flow.
http://imgur.com/a/ocN7f

- Normal -
01:00:158 (1 and everything after it.) - I feel liek these are spammed notes. Try this to change the rythm and fix the mood. Try replacing 01:03:158 (3) with two circles on the body and the tail of this slider and remove 01:03:908 (4). Or... just remove 01:03:908 (4). Probably better now that I think about it.

M4M: t/536476
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ViolentBoo wrote:
- Easy -
00:38:158 (1) - Missed opportunity for red anchor to be on a white tick. Uhh missed thx
00:16:158 (1) - (EDGY OPTIONAL COMMENT NO NEED TO DO IT BUT-) Why are these sliders so complex? I mean I can see that some of red acnhors are on white ticks but this is on easy on a slow song. Some of them are bunched up and feel like crumpled paper... if that made sense. Attempt to make these sliders simpler. Yea but i just want to make this sliders a little weird, simple slider is just too boring. They might be even ugly but it makes player at least think a bit to actually follow them.
00:12:158 (4,5) - Try to make these sliders look like this. Better asthetically and better flow. Nah i think it's better this way
http://imgur.com/a/ocN7f

- Normal -
01:00:158 (1 and everything after it.) - I feel liek these are spammed notes. Try this to change the rythm and fix the mood. Try replacing 01:03:158 (3) with two circles on the body and the tail of this slider and remove 01:03:908 (4). Or... just remove 01:03:908 (4). Probably better now that I think about it. Just removed 01:03:908 - Thx for mod

M4M: t/536476
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Hello... A little mod for you~

Easy

00:41:158 (2,3) - check DS (AImod)
00:44:158 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can do sth with it to make easier as for Easy...
00:48:158 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:52:158 (1,2) - ^
In general, long sliders seems weird... (but only at appearance)

Normal

00:22:908 (2,3,4,5) - you can move them a bit upper to make smoother
00:47:158 (4) - one slider at the place where I hear many sounds... strange a little
00:51:158 (4) - ^
00:55:158 (4) - ^
01:06:158 (5) - I think that's boring, you can replace it with circles...

So, nice song, I think here can be at least Hard yet
Good luck!
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Morroni wrote:
Hello... A little mod for you~

Easy

00:41:158 (2,3) - check DS (AImod) Yea i know about this, aimod sometimes can be bugged i guess.
00:44:158 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can do sth with it to make easier as for Easy... Nah, it's still plays just fine, and it's kiai time so this can be a little more challanging
00:48:158 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:52:158 (1,2) - ^
In general, long sliders seems weird... (but only at appearance) I agree, but somehow i like it lol, maybe i will change some sliders in the future tho

Normal

00:22:908 (2,3,4,5) - you can move them a bit upper to make smoother Nice catch
00:47:158 (4) - one slider at the place where I hear many sounds... strange a little I think it's fine to ignore some sounds, it's normal diff after all, but thanks to this i found other issue.
00:51:158 (4) - ^
00:55:158 (4) - ^
01:06:158 (5) - I think that's boring, you can replace it with circles... Dunno i will think about it

So, nice song, I think here can be at least Hard yet i know.. but i suc when comes to map something harder for rank ;x
Good luck!Thanks for mod :)
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Hello, M4M from #ModReqs


Easy

Timing

I really recommend 0,80 SV.

Because of this.

00:44:158 (1,2,3,4) - Your actual SV (0,60)
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With 0,80 SV
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You see the diferrence? In 1/1 is not possible make blankets, because the circles touch the other, is bad to compose.
And actually, people prefer maps with SV high in Low Difficult, it's more fun.

Timeline

00:02:158 (1) - delete
00:12:158 - add Circle
00:13:158 - Slide start here and end here 00:14:158 (Don't use red ticks in Easy)
00:15:158 - add Circle

If you change the timing, change this too:

00:45:158 - Make slide here at 00:45:658 (I think this have too much single tap) (Have a suggestive pattern in Compose)
00:49:158 - Make slide here at 00:49:658 (I think this have too much single tap) (Have a suggestive pattern in Compose)


Compose

You need to use more Straight Slides. You only use curve sliders, straight slides is cool.

Suggestive Pattern

00:09:158 (2,3) -
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00:10:158 (3,4) -
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00:12:158 (4,5) -
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Suggestive Pattern

00:44:158 (1,2,3,4) -
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00:48:158 (1,2,3,4) -
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Normal

Timing

Again, we need to make the single taps split, to increase Difficult in Stars and make this more fun and organized (And your map don't diserve 1,7 it's more hard then that, your distance snap have made this map easy on stars, but difficult in compose)

SV = 1,20
Distance Snap = x1,2

I recommend then your remap this map and make beatiful pattern with this timing (You can made blankets now, easily)

Compose

00:06:158 (1,2,3) - The eye... i thinks this is not a good pattern and the blanket is wrong, you can make another pattern or fix this blanket, but remember you, the eye pattern is not cool.
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iHatePeople wrote:
Hello, M4M from #ModReqs


Easy

Timing

I really recommend 0,80 SV.I see your point, most likely I will change

Because of this.

00:44:158 (1,2,3,4) - Your actual SV (0,60)
collapsed text
Image

With 0,80 SV
collapsed text
Image


You see the diferrence? In 1/1 is not possible make blankets, because the circles touch the other, is bad to compose.
And actually, people prefer maps with SV high in Low Difficult, it's more fun.

Timeline

00:02:158 (1) - delete Nah there is sound i want to ephasize
00:12:158 - add Circle
00:13:158 - Slide start here and end here 00:14:158 (Don't use red ticks in Easy)
00:15:158 - add Circle
^I don't like this idea, but i see your point so i changed few things, differently tho
If you change the timing, change this too:

00:45:158 - Make slide here at 00:45:658 (I think this have too much single tap) (Have a suggestive pattern in Compose)
00:49:158 - Make slide here at 00:49:658 (I think this have too much single tap) (Have a suggestive pattern in Compose)
Actually i think it's fine to have these single tap pattern.

Compose

You need to use more Straight Slides. You only use curve sliders, straight slides is cool. I will consider this

Suggestive Pattern

00:09:158 (2,3) -
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00:10:158 (3,4) -
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00:12:158 (4,5) -
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Suggestive Pattern

00:44:158 (1,2,3,4) -
collapsed text
Image

00:48:158 (1,2,3,4) -
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Normal

Timing

Again, we need to make the single taps split, to increase Difficult in Stars and make this more fun and organized (And your map don't diserve 1,7 it's more hard then that, your distance snap have made this map easy on stars, but difficult in compose) Interesting. I might change something.

SV = 1,20
Distance Snap = x1,2

I recommend then your remap this map and make beatiful pattern with this timing (You can made blankets now, easily) Dunno i don't like how ppl overusing blankets.

Compose

00:06:158 (1,2,3) - The eye... i thinks this is not a good pattern and the blanket is wrong, you can make another pattern or fix this blanket, but remember you, the eye pattern is not cool.
I kinda like it tho :/ I will think about it.
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taki tam chujowy mod z discorda xD


Easy
  • 00:02:909 - błagam cię, dodaj tutaj przerwę, bo to nie ma sensu xd
  • 00:06:158 (1) - spróbuj jebnąć tu taką idalną symetrię w osi Y

to na tyle XD
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Mod:
Easy
-00:44:158Make the hitsounds smaller
-00:52:158Make this faster, they thought it a kickslide.
-00:56:158same as the second one
Normal:
Okay ;)
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davidminh0111 wrote:
Mod:
Easy
-00:44:158Make the hitsounds smaller ??
-00:52:158Make this faster, they thought it a kickslide. nope. i don't think it's necessary.
-00:56:158same as the second one ^^
Normal:
Okay ;)


Thanks for your time tho.
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General
  • combo color 3 and 4 is almost the same, please reconsider change or remove one of it.
  • your bg is larger than 1366x768.


Normal


Easy
  • add NC on every 4 big white ticks consistentcy is better imo, current one is pretty random for me.

neat map, good luck! :D
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P A N wrote:

General
  • combo color 3 and 4 is almost the same, please reconsider change or remove one of it. Changed
  • your bg is larger than 1366x768. oh right forgot about that


Normal


Easy
  • add NC on every 4 big white ticks consistentcy is better imo, current one is pretty random for me.I will consider this but tbh feels good to me as it is

neat map, good luck! :D Thanks :)
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