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Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年2月14日 星期二 at 19:40:20

Artist: Oku Hanako
Title: Kimi no Hana (TV size)
Source: セイレン
Tags: seiren 清恋 DreaM117er Pata-Mon anime opening short ver
BPM: 153.99
Filesize: 12269kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Hard (2.92 stars, 220 notes)
  2. Love (3.89 stars, 297 notes)
  3. Normal (1.56 stars, 112 notes)
  4. Pata-Mon's Advanced (2.33 stars, 211 notes)
Download: Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV size)
Download: Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#14
Wish you a Sweet Love
Happy Valentine's Day~
Map this song only for Oku Hanako.
See also an other map set here: 奥華子 - キミの花 (TV size) by Del05

佐仓一屁股坐在了我的桌子上从此我爱上了学习
那个……宫前学姐,车爆胎了……
向女装男主低头

Lyrics
キミの花TV size
詞/曲:奧華子
編曲:森本隆寛
もう僕のこの胸は どこにも逃げない 君へと向かうよ
今 駆け出してゆける 恋する場所へと 何度でも

初めて君を見た瞬間のこと スローモーションみたいに全てが
僕の頭の中にインプットされてく 君の髪も 笑う横顔も

教室に響く声たち すぐに君を探し出せる


会うたび君を好きになって 小さな手に触れたくて
君の声が 風に煌めく花のように
儚げで だけど強く 輝き続けてるから
いつだって 僕だって その手をちゃんと握り締めたい

This map get a Achievement: Qualified on Valentine's Day
Advanced by Pata-Mon.
Hard by DreaM117er.
Video by Shad0w1and.
DreaM117er
2.93* 音效不下啦

117's Hard
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 50091,62170,73859
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi no Hana
TitleUnicode:キミの花
Artist:Oku Hanako
ArtistUnicode:奥華子
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:117's Hard
Source:セイレン
Tags:seiren
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"optc.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Pata-Mon
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
GD update
set ready
二位辛苦了

I need someone's help about the metadata.
Flower
摸个鱼

截图用的puush,可能要代理才能看到

00:11:905 - 不考虑来点钢琴?就2个音可以随手加一下

[Love]
00:02:164 (1) - 个人觉得flow朝上而不是向下比较舒服,因此顺时针旋转一定角度后再调整
00:17:750 (1) - 这里就接应上一个combo而言应该再顺时针旋转20度,但这样又太倾斜不配合下一个note,所以建议是:变成弯的
00:23:984 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个有点莫名其妙感觉,还是combo内间距一致,下一个combo再缩小,毕竟不是渐进往返跳
00:25:933 (2,3,4,5,6) - 摆成等边菱形
00:29:342 (3) - 个人觉得放在00:29:537 - 比较舒服合曲,经验是比较舒缓的曲子一般三连白线起
00:41:811 (4) - ^
00:30:803 (3,4,5,6,7) - ctrl+shift+d,no need to explain
00:34:700 (6,1) - 觉得逆时针旋转一点比较舒服,让6的尖头微微偏向左边,flow比较流畅
00:38:596 (2,3,4,5,6) - 丑
00:47:753 - 00:48:143 - 00:48:532 - 00:48:922 - 你需要一个较低音量的crash,翻音效包吧
00:49:312 - 这个怎么样?http://puu.sh/trAVe/7b6b6034b2.wav
01:07:430 (1) - 把白锚点提升,更对称的形状
01:25:159 (3) - 放到下面来(x:104, y:356左右)更舒服感觉

[117‘s Hard]
01:02:170 (5) - 感觉容易当成1/2,用0.75x吧?

[Normal]
01:26:328 (3,4) - 对称

加油吧
匿了
Atrue
同楼上

没看metadata 见谅。

不知道是曲子还是mp3问题,结尾像是有音被吞掉了。最好能再接个fading。(还有我老感觉这人唱歌跑掉啊233)
[Normal]
00:26:322 (2,3) - 主要是这种节奏的问题,在这个段落里面的这种节奏。 本来音乐是节奏加快的,但是这个滑条本身的存在使得不确定什么时候才能结束滑条,因为每个1/2上面基本都有人声,所以其实本身你也在忽略一些,这里也不太需要cover到全部的vocal。何况后边也没有完全cover鼓声。这里一定要跟鼓的话显得得不偿失。这里我的想法如下:00:45:025 - 其实要是跟vocal的话,我觉得这种节奏型应该更合适,因为原来的打击点有点奇怪,没有起在人声甚至鼓点上面。[Pata-Mon's Advanced]
有些音轨跟的不是很清楚。
00:36:648 - 打击起于这里有点奇怪,我觉得这个音应该是附属于前一个note的,也就是这里可以这么安排00:45:025 - 不知道为啥这里miss过两次,有一次还直接fail了。可能是换气声太像人声了,本身这里就有点tricky吧,可以的话试试map全beat,毕竟也是条白线。
[117's Hard]
00:13:074 - 这里开始的音效音量不够,听上去打击感不够充分。
[Love]
00:26:322 (4) - 不知道为啥我觉得拉远一点会好打一些,可能跟音乐buildup有关系,也可能跟本身这种flow不是很好打有关系。00:49:701 (3,4,5,6) - 我是觉得这四个太近了,反而不好抓flow。 按说这种地方不是可以跳开的么,就算不跳开,也尽量不要太靠近。 两个一组的stack也是可以的。
01:15:028 - 个人觉得这里不用NC。这里没有那么剧烈的变化,也不用过分强调。
yf_bmp
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Sonnyc
Can you get a better mp3? The end just disappears and doesn't really feel natural enough. Some fade out would work better if possible.

Normal.
00:03:333 (4) - etc - Due to the low sv, such 1/2 sliders are having a really short visual length. I'd say such aspects not to be really beginner friendly due to the need of effort to read that it is a slider afterall. Beginners wouldn't be much used to gameplay elements, and a slider without a path wouldn't be familiar to see.
00:29:829 - Clap?
01:01:391 (3,1) - Despite the consistent spacing, I think the actual spacing is too far for beginners to properly aim it. Mind making a closer spacing?
01:02:949 - You've used a 1.2x sv multiplier and the base spacing has also really increased. I wouldn't feel such constantly large spacings to be beginner friendly.. Considering this being the lowest diff in this mapset, a remap using a 1.00x sv multiplier is recommended from me.

Pata.
01:02:949 - From this section.. I feel a huge portion of snare sounds weren't expressed as a hitsound due to your custom settings. Such as 01:03:339 - 01:04:118 - etcetc you'll know what parts I'm saying. Totally ignoring those didn't felt like expressing the music properly, and I recommend you to express those with a hitsound as other diffs did.

117.
01:22:821 (3,4) - I feel a 3/4 slider on (3) would be better to express the vocals, but it's up to you.

Love.
00:53:598 (1,3) - Consider making the slider curve rate consistent. Using a different slider concept felt a little unpolished.

Not bad overall. Good luck with this~
yf_bmp
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General
  1. check AI mod
  2. 推荐bg用waifu2x放大一波
Normal
  1. 00:28:660 (1) - 推荐更换一个节奏
  2. 01:14:639 (4,1) - hitsound
Pata-Mon's Advanced
  1. 01:00:611 (3) - 和2堆叠
  2. 01:15:321 - add a note
117's Hard
  1. 01:13:080 (5,6) - ?
Love
  1. 01:15:125 (2) - 去掉这个一样好玩,没必要的overmap
  2. 01:14:639 (5,1) - hitsound
Adol Christin


Normal

  1. 00:03:333 (4) - 00:09:567 (4) - 作为最低难度还是不推荐1/2滑条,新人很容易拉断尾的。真的。建议强行忽略鼓点,改成圈。00:51:649 (2) - 00:54:767 (2) -

117's Hard

  1. 00:17:750 (1,2) - nazi,感觉可以再包好点
  2. 00:28:271 (4) - 试试这个?这样在音乐转折的地方flow没那么顺,感觉会好一些。
  3. 01:20:873 (5) - 试试ctrl+g?

Love

  1. 00:16:776 (1) - 要不去掉吧。感觉这里留出空拍的话节奏变化多一些,更好玩。
  2. 00:27:102 (1,2) - 建议换成折返,感觉更合曲。00:33:336 (1,2) - 同理

好久没听奥华子的歌了
Lily Bread
star first, will mod when i am free
鸽了
Fushimi Rio
我觉得sonnyc说的有点道理啊 MP3稍微结尾弄点淡出吧
至少你的normal和love应该都有个转盘 不然draining都不一样长
[Normal]
od和ar有点高吧 都-1?
[Advanced]
其他难度都开着widescreen support 不知道是你该开开还是其他难度应该关掉
[Hard]
00:07:424 (2) - 看了看其他地方 这里好像应该是个圈而不是1/2滑条
01:08:794 (5) - 这个音人声是拖长的 我觉得用1/2滑条比圈好
01:27:302 (3) - 有点坑 要不要加个nc
[Love]
00:20:478 (5) - 其实我感觉也是滑条好
00:49:312 (2) - 拉远点 至少和5到1差不多比较好
00:59:637 - 补个note吧 前面空了这再空有点不合适
01:14:639 (5) - 用soft-finish, 别用drum 憋死了
01:27:107 (5) - 同上 滑条头用soft
Fushimi Rio
哦对了 title用不用加个(TV size.)?
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
先咕咕一下 这两天天天跑亲戚……
I will reply all mods here
wait me
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
花花

Flower wrote:

摸个鱼

截图用的puush,可能要代理才能看到

00:11:905 - 不考虑来点钢琴?就2个音可以随手加一下 找了一下音效包里居然没相配的……而且这是吉他吧

[Love]
00:02:164 (1) - 个人觉得flow朝上而不是向下比较舒服,因此顺时针旋转一定角度后再调整 顺时针转了13度
00:17:750 (1) - 这里就接应上一个combo而言应该再顺时针旋转20度,但这样又太倾斜不配合下一个note,所以建议是:变成弯的 OK
00:23:984 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个有点莫名其妙感觉,还是combo内间距一致,下一个combo再缩小,毕竟不是渐进往返跳 这段全部都是缩小的 连续8个降调
00:25:933 (2,3,4,5,6) - 摆成等边菱形 OK
00:29:342 (3) - 个人觉得放在00:29:537 - 比较舒服合曲,经验是比较舒缓的曲子一般三连白线起 不巧的是刚好这里有适合摆三连的弱音而00:29:537没有
00:41:811 (4) - ^ 同上
00:30:803 (3,4,5,6,7) - ctrl+shift+d,no need to explain regular polygons are not my style
00:34:700 (6,1) - 觉得逆时针旋转一点比较舒服,让6的尖头微微偏向左边,flow比较流畅 思考
00:38:596 (2,3,4,5,6) - 丑
00:47:753 - 00:48:143 - 00:48:532 - 00:48:922 - 你需要一个较低音量的crash,翻音效包吧
00:49:312 - 这个怎么样?http://puu.sh/trAVe/7b6b6034b2.wav 插绿线调音量好了
01:07:430 (1) - 把白锚点提升,更对称的形状 OK
01:25:159 (3) - 放到下面来(x:104, y:356左右)更舒服感觉

[Normal]
01:26:328 (3,4) - 对称

加油吧
匿了

黄书

Atrue wrote:

同楼上

没看metadata 见谅。自行解决了

不知道是曲子还是mp3问题,结尾像是有音被吞掉了。最好能再接个fading。(还有我老感觉这人唱歌跑掉啊233)CD没出只能从动画里截取这没办法 要等到2月22号 谁会等啊喂 顺便跑调你妹
[Normal]
00:26:322 (2,3) - 主要是这种节奏的问题,在这个段落里面的这种节奏。 本来音乐是节奏加快的,但是这个滑条本身的存在使得不确定什么时候才能结束滑条,因为每个1/2上面基本都有人声,所以其实本身你也在忽略一些,这里也不太需要cover到全部的vocal。何况后边也没有完全cover鼓声。这里一定要跟鼓的话显得得不偿失。这里我的想法如下:好 果然还是这样最舒服了
00:45:025 - 其实要是跟vocal的话,我觉得这种节奏型应该更合适,因为原来的打击点有点奇怪,没有起在人声甚至鼓点上面。 改了
[Love]
00:26:322 (4) - 不知道为啥我觉得拉远一点会好打一些,可能跟音乐buildup有关系,也可能跟本身这种flow不是很好打有关系。 OK
00:49:701 (3,4,5,6) - 我是觉得这四个太近了,反而不好抓flow。 按说这种地方不是可以跳开的么,就算不跳开,也尽量不要太靠近。 两个一组的stack也是可以的。 keep 我觉得作为单点不算近了 这地方更不适合跳 两两stack让我考虑一下
01:15:028 - 个人觉得这里不用NC。这里没有那么剧烈的变化,也不用过分强调。好 不NC了


Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

Can you get a better mp3? The end just disappears and doesn't really feel natural enough. Some fade out would work better if possible.
sorry CD has not started selling, I can only get mp3 from video

Normal.
00:03:333 (4) - etc - Due to the low sv, such 1/2 sliders are having a really short visual length. I'd say such aspects not to be really beginner friendly due to the need of effort to read that it is a slider afterall. Beginners wouldn't be much used to gameplay elements, and a slider without a path wouldn't be familiar to see.
you're right, but I need them. I can't add a circle at 00:03:528 because of it‘s too close to 00:03:723 in NM/EZ, so I choose short sliders.
00:29:829 - Clap? hmm... sure
01:01:391 (3,1) - Despite the consistent spacing, I think the actual spacing is too far for beginners to properly aim it. Mind making a closer spacing?
but I suit the DS, here has enough blank time
01:02:949 - You've used a 1.2x sv multiplier and the base spacing has also really increased. I wouldn't feel such constantly large spacings to be beginner friendly.. Considering this being the lowest diff in this mapset, a remap using a 1.00x sv multiplier is recommended from me. ok, back to 1.0

Love.
00:53:598 (1,3) - Consider making the slider curve rate consistent. Using a different slider concept felt a little unpolished. OK

Not bad overall. Good luck with this~

爱抚

yf_bmp wrote:

  1. Just comments.
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General
  1. check AI mod 巴达萌背锅
  2. 推荐bg用waifu2x放大一波 好吧
Normal
  1. 00:28:660 (1) - 推荐更换一个节奏 我觉得这个挺好的
  2. 01:14:639 (4,1) - hitsound ??没少啊

Love
  1. 01:15:125 (2) - 去掉这个一样好玩,没必要的overmap 爱抚你这样很没良心知道吗(摔
  2. 01:14:639 (5,1) - hitsound ??所以说没少啊?


Adol Christin

Adol Christin wrote:



Normal

  1. 00:03:333 (4) - 00:09:567 (4) - 作为最低难度还是不推荐1/2滑条,新人很容易拉断尾的。真的。建议强行忽略鼓点,改成圈。00:51:649 (2) - 00:54:767 (2) -
    你说的我懂 sonnyc也说了 不重复

Love

  1. 00:16:776 (1) - 要不去掉吧。感觉这里留出空拍的话节奏变化多一些,更好玩。 我要糊满
  2. 00:27:102 (1,2) - 建议换成折返,感觉更合曲。00:33:336 (1,2) - 同理 hard我会 insane就no了 sry

好久没听奥华子的歌了

imoutosan wrote:

我觉得sonnyc说的有点道理啊 MP3稍微结尾弄点淡出吧 编辑MP3什么的太麻烦不搞 CD没发售呢只能从动画里截取 只能这样咯
至少你的normal和love应该都有个转盘 不然draining都不一样长
[Normal]
od和ar有点高吧 都-1? OD-0.5吧 AR不动

[Love]
00:20:478 (5) - 其实我感觉也是滑条好 这里给我休止的感觉挺强的 不是没考虑过slider 想想还是circle好了
00:49:312 (2) - 拉远点 至少和5到1差不多比较好 5跟1那个距离是作为小节间的放这俩之间就大了……拉远 不过没那么大
00:59:637 - 补个note吧 前面空了这再空有点不合适 不不前面空了这里不应该也空么
01:14:639 (5) - 用soft-finish, 别用drum 憋死了 soft那个嚓音不对把
01:27:107 (5) - 同上 滑条头用soft 同上

imoutosan wrote:

哦对了 title用不用加个(TV size.)?
CD没发售title不明的情况下只能用full name 跟Kwan确认过的

thank you for mods
Pata-Mon
好 来回摸
@黄书 第一处00:36:648 - 这里有鼓+钢琴声,而后面那里没有,所以做成现在的节奏.后面那里白线并没有声,没声就不跟,读图是玩家的事
@sonnyc I prefer my hitsound now. I will consider if somebody else mentione this again.
@yf 01:00:611 (3) - 这里是重音,不跟前面叠.后面一处我这难度不打算放连打
@妹桑 静流帮我改
no change
thanks for mod
DreaM117er
@Flower: 01:02:170 (5) - 沒問題,大師 ((膜
@Ature: 音效我自己重下了
@Sonnyc: That part I think is fine, keep it. Thanks
@yf: 沒問題,大神 ((膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜
@Adol Christin: 這些都是在遊玩上體會到的梗,我不會去動它們。flow的部分我也不動,不用完全包好才好

境留神麻破
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:キミの花
Artist:Oku Hanako
ArtistUnicode:奥華子
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Source:セイレン
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5.5
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480,277,44149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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434,72,45220,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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241,45,47266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,45,47363,6,0,P|183:29|123:22,1,120,2|8,0:1|3:2,0:0:0:0:
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275,273,48922,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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105,210,60806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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225,126,61780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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KaedekaShizuru
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Metadata --> http://www.tbs.co.jp/anime/seiren/music/cd01.html <-- キミの花(TVアニメ「セイレン」オープニングテーマ)

Chaoslitz
[General]
  1. 我試了把最後fade out你看看要不要換個mp3 https://reol.s-ul.eu/Zp5XB3Ks
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:802 (4,1) - 這兒的Flow打起來不是很順, 要不直接00:15:802 (4) - 尾向下吧
  2. 00:35:674 - 沒音吧, 把00:35:479這個琴音也跟一下, 00:35:869 (3,4,5) - 這些都跟了
  3. 00:37:427 - 同上
  4. 00:45:220 (2,3) - 美麗的spacing
  5. 01:04:313 (3) - 01:07:430 (3) - 這些要不要拆成1/1+note配合vocal啊 跟01:09:768 (2,4) 有個差別
  6. 01:12:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個疊的有點嚴重, 建議改改
  7. 01:16:782 (3,3) - 跟01:04:313 (3) - 01:07:430 (3) - 一樣
  8. 01:26:328 (3,4) - 這跟回vocal? 1/1+1/1+note
[Pata-Mon's Advanced]
  1. 00:14:633 (4) - Missing NC
  2. 00:20:478 (3,1) - 只是相差1/1還是不建議stack上
  3. 00:25:543 (1,2) - ^, 讓新手打這種和00:23:984 (1,2) - 肯定會混亂
  4. 整體沒問題, 唯一就是那些stack了
[117's Hard]
  1. 00:48:143 (2) - 不用這麼遠吧, 把角度調調
  2. 00:52:818 (5,1) - ^也是啊, 這裡也太靜
[Love]
  1. 00:18:919 (1,2) - NC錯了吧
  2. 00:23:984 (1,2,3,4) - 這個角度放得...還是要吐糟一下
  3. 01:20:873 - Finish

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