2017-04-18 22:13 NeonLights: hey there
2017-04-18 22:17 Chezz: heyhey whassup
2017-04-18 22:18 NeonLights: would you like to test a shitty beatmap of mine and provide some feedback?
2017-04-18 22:18 Chezz: sure
2017-04-18 22:18 Chezz: might not be very useful though lol
2017-04-18 22:18 NeonLights: t/539311
2017-04-18 22:18 NeonLights: if you can play it that does wonders for me because i can't do high bpm
2017-04-18 22:21 Chezz: oops lol
2017-04-18 22:21 NeonLights: rip
2017-04-18 22:24 Chezz: are you looking for like general feedback
2017-04-18 22:24 Chezz: it's fun lol
2017-04-18 22:24 NeonLights: yeah i guess
2017-04-18 22:24 NeonLights: if you want to delve into it you can
2017-04-18 22:30 Chezz: 00:28:700 (3) -
2017-04-18 22:30 Chezz: feel like you could do something better here for the rhythm
2017-04-18 22:31 Chezz: 00:31:309 (1,2) - add more spacing?
2017-04-18 22:31 NeonLights: i can see two triples and an extra note there, turns out a bit wonky there though
2017-04-18 22:32 NeonLights: ah good catch
2017-04-18 22:38 Chezz: 01:22:178 (6) - feel like the end of this should be a circle
2017-04-18 22:39 NeonLights: imo it's awkward hitting a circle coming out of a back and forth slider
2017-04-18 22:39 NeonLights: especially with the speed of the song
2017-04-18 22:39 NeonLights: anywhere else i'd definitely agree with you though
2017-04-18 22:40 NeonLights: then again
2017-04-18 22:41 Chezz: i think it feels more comfortable for me to play with the circle
2017-04-18 22:41 Chezz: but it's your call
2017-04-18 22:42 NeonLights: i added a circle after listening to it again
2017-04-18 22:46 Chezz: 00:50:091 (1) - think the motion going into this is kinda awkward
2017-04-18 22:50 NeonLights: agreed
2017-04-18 22:50 NeonLights: should continue that zigzag pattern
2017-04-18 22:54 Chezz: 00:16:700 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm here was kinda hard for me to read
2017-04-18 22:54 Chezz: might just be me though
2017-04-18 22:55 Chezz: 00:19:439 (3,1) - especially going from 3 to 1
2017-04-18 22:57 Chezz: 01:46:439 (1,2,3,4) - flow is a bit uncomfortable here
2017-04-18 22:57 NeonLights: not sure why i stacked that 1,2 either
2017-04-18 22:57 NeonLights: not sure why i stacked anything in there
2017-04-18 22:57 Chezz: lol
2017-04-18 23:00 NeonLights: i think unstacking those notes will fix it
2017-04-18 23:02 NeonLights: good catch on that flow idk why i did it that way
2017-04-18 23:02 Chezz: 00:16:309 (1) -
2017-04-18 23:02 Chezz: 00:25:048 (1) -
2017-04-18 23:02 Chezz: dont think these need nc
2017-04-18 23:02 Chezz: 00:26:091 (7) - and add nc here?
2017-04-18 23:03 NeonLights: fixed
2017-04-18 23:07 Chezz: 00:30:265 (8) - same thing here
2017-04-18 23:07 Chezz: 00:35:091 (1) - dont need nc here
2017-04-18 23:07 NeonLights: fixed
2017-04-18 23:08 Chezz: think that's all i have