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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017 m. gegužės 15 d. at 12:31:15

Artist: Mediks
Title: Nightmare
Tags: dnb drum and & bass 2012 outbreak ep edm DeRandom Otaku CptSqBany
BPM: 172
Filesize: 3882kb
Play Time: 02:07
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2nd song in the outbreak album

Mediks - Outbreak
Mediks - Doomsday

in top diff purple, light blue colors = 1/3
Last edited by Strategas on , edited 36 times in total.
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No kudosu yet.
Mediks is bae!

Call me if you need any support on it
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No kudosu yet.
Are u planning to map the whole album? xd
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oh there were messages here lul

DeRandomOtaku: I already mapped the whole album, because it only has 4 song in it, and one of them I mapped like a year ago but it was quite different from these 3

Secretpipe: pm
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Earned 2 kudosu.

Easy
  • 01:08:820 (1) - Kinda weird shape to be honest lol and its different than all other sliders you used for this sound. Ye, you kinda used the same shape everywhere else for this sound so why is it different here in first place? Like 01:03:239 (1) - 01:14:401 (1) - shape is similar
  • 01:23:820 (2,3,4) - 01:26:611 (2,3,4) - Kinda unsure about stacks here since its just an easy difficulty and there is only 2 beats gap between them so leaving the DS'd would work better as you have done in other places

Normal
  • 01:00:099 (1,2) - You should swap NC's here since its supposed to start from 01:00:448 - since thats the start of kiai and it would be better to NC 01:00:448 (2) - for emphasis
  • 01:44:750 - recovery time is too low for normal, should be atleast 2 beats gap
  • Also check aimod there are unsnapped notes

Hard
  • 01:11:611 (1,2,3) - Just a hard difficulty , i dont think you should have doubles and triples in same combo as they can confuse most of the hard-rank players. Just do repeats like you did in other cases. Also applies for the rest like these
  • 01:31:146 (7) - 01:36:727 (7) - Why not do a 3/4 slider for these also for the wub sounds? these are the only two spots in which you did circle instead of sliders
  • 02:06:025 (1,2) - Try moving both to 135,201 so that it wont make a messy overlap with 02:05:676 (6) - and wont break the ds as well

Ex
  • looks p cool already
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DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Easy
  • 01:08:820 (1) - Kinda weird shape to be honest lol and its different than all other sliders you used for this sound. Ye, you kinda used the same shape everywhere else for this sound so why is it different here in first place? Like 01:03:239 (1) - 01:14:401 (1) - shape is similar
  • 01:23:820 (2,3,4) - 01:26:611 (2,3,4) - Kinda unsure about stacks here since its just an easy difficulty and there is only 2 beats gap between them so leaving the DS'd would work better as you have done in other places wanted to show that it's different somehow, will check into this later


Hard
  • 01:11:611 (1,2,3) - Just a hard difficulty , i dont think you should have doubles and triples in same combo as they can confuse most of the hard-rank players. Just do repeats like you did in other cases. Also applies for the rest like these agreed about tripple and double thing, but I'm having only two clickable objects on the tripple, I think than can still work
  • 01:31:146 (7) - 01:36:727 (7) - Why not do a 3/4 slider for these also for the wub sounds? these are the only two spots in which you did circle instead of sliders doesn't have to be the same everytime lul, well my reasoning is that the kiai is over and I gave some more resting room by making slighly less dense rhythm, but I will see if I want to change that later
  • 02:06:025 (1,2) - Try moving both to 135,201 so that it wont make a messy overlap with 02:05:676 (6) - and wont break the ds as well

Ex
  • looks p cool already
d


ty, no response= fix
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DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Normal
  • 01:00:099 (1,2) - You should swap NC's here since its supposed to start from 01:00:448 - since thats the start of kiai and it would be better to NC 01:00:448 (2) - for emphasis kay
  • 01:44:750 - recovery time is too low for normal, should be atleast 2 beats gap kay
  • Also check aimod there are unsnapped notes done



Thank you =)

I'm nightmare
Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81465
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Nightmare
TitleUnicode:Nightmare
Artist:Mediks
ArtistUnicode:Mediks
Creator:Strategas
Version:Skubi's Normal
Source:
Tags:dnb drum and & bass 2012 outbreak ep edm DeRandom Otaku CptSqBany
BeatmapID:1258268
BeatmapSetID:550808

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Hi, M4M with this map t/543350

General
• You need to have at least 80% of the mp3 mapped. You only have 62.1% (94.6 - 32.5) of it mapped atm, so you'll have to trim your mp3. Unrankable issue

01:45:095 - Why is this timing point here? It's seemingly random and it's in every diff

• Turn off widescreen support for the lower three diffs

• nice inverse cs spread hahaha


Extra
00:59:925 (1) - put this circle at the 1/6 note at 00:59:866 - imo. The red tick doesnt follow the part of the vocals that well where he says -mare

01:00:971 (3,4,5,6) - This flow looks nicer because of the sharper angle between 2,3,4 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916402

01:11:262 (1,2,3,4,1) - move this down so it doesn't interfere/clutter too much with 01:10:739 (1) - ? you can overlap 01:11:436 (3) - on the tail of 01:10:477 (1) - and adjust 01:11:000 (1) - like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916423 (You'll also have less issues with fitting your patterns at the top of the screen at 01:11:611 (1,2,3) - )

01:33:936 (1) - 01:22:773 (1) - why do you use such a bigger sv on the first slider than the second? Same sound here; this is better off consistent imo

01:19:983 (1) - picky, but move the rd tick down a little to make a straight line ? the corner in the slider is visible at the red point :p

01:44:925 (4,1) - I see your intentions here,but the spacing is too large imo. Compared to


Ren
01:14:750 (1,2,3) - space these evenly from eachother. Aesthetic is a hair off here

01:23:384 (4,5) - This spacing is inconsistent from the way you spaced the same slider-circle pattern at 01:23:820 (6,1) - and 01:24:256 (2,3,4) - . Make this consistent. (If you fix this, adust 01:28:965 (4,5) - also)

01:40:128 (4,6) - make these two the same slider xd

01:49:281 (1) - Maybe you can keep aesthetics consistent by curving this similarly to 01:47:885 (1) - and 01:48:408 (2,3,4,5,6) - ?

Nice diff, you're very consistent


Hard
00:59:053 (1) - Maybe nudge this note to the left a bit to make it more in line with 00:58:006 (2,4) -

01:03:239 (1) - x217 y63? this will put 01:02:541 (3,4,1) - in line and show more structure

01:11:611 (1,2,3) - I recommend making this a repeat slider again. The player just came out of a 5 note stream and, for a hard player, this rhythm might be strenuous and unsuspecting (because you already use repeat sliders). Same for 01:33:936 (1,2,3) - if you decide to change

01:30:622 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g ? This would just give a more direct flow to and from the next object

01:47:013 (2,4) - fix blanket


Normal
01:22:773 (1,1,2,3,4) - The sudden use of a 3/4 rhythm here might by hard to read for a Normal player; they would ultimately confuse this type of spacing with a 1/1 jump (what they're used to seeing in Normal maps). Highly recommended you fix. Maybe you can do something aesthetically different here to let the player obviously know about this rhythm change. Same for 01:32:541 (1,2,3) -

01:45:792 (3) - Making this the same slider as 01:45:095 (1) - would direct the player more nicely toward the next object https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916788

01:52:769 (5) - While I see why this is curved so much, I think you should curve it a little less to make the slider head and tail less clustered and to make the slider body itself less broad. suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916799

01:55:560 (3,1) - Make these parallel? Would give a more structured aesthetic

After looking over this I don't actually have many complaints. A lot of cool ideas in here for a Normal diff that I think you executed pretty well!


Easy
• Lower AR to 3.2 or 3.3? I agree with the higher-than-usual ar for this diff but 3.7 might be a little difficult for an easy player to read

01:18:587 (4) - Rotate this by like 4 degrees so that there to create symmetry and better structure for https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916906

01:23:820 (2,3,4) - This pattern is honestly pretty boring to play, your sitting there tapping to a slow rhythm for like 4 seconds. Please add some movement across the map? Same for the next one also

Don't see much wrong here


Good luck! :)
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Hi, M4M with this map t/543350

General
• You need to have at least 80% of the mp3 mapped. You only have 62.1% (94.6 - 32.5) of it mapped atm, so you'll have to trim your mp3. Unrankable issue intro isn't counted

01:45:095 - Why is this timing point here? It's seemingly random and it's in every diff mp3 is cut and the timing becomes slighly off there

• Turn off widescreen support for the lower three diffs

• nice inverse cs spread hahaha


Extra
00:59:925 (1) - put this circle at the 1/6 note at 00:59:866 - imo. The red tick doesnt follow the part of the vocals that well where he says -mare simplifying rhythm works better here

01:00:971 (3,4,5,6) - This flow looks nicer because of the sharper angle between 2,3,4 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916402 those are doubles though, feel like this is more comfortable to play as it is

01:11:262 (1,2,3,4,1) - move this down so it doesn't interfere/clutter too much with 01:10:739 (1) - ? you can overlap 01:11:436 (3) - on the tail of 01:10:477 (1) - and adjust 01:11:000 (1) - like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916423 (You'll also have less issues with fitting your patterns at the top of the screen at 01:11:611 (1,2,3) - )

01:33:936 (1) - 01:22:773 (1) - why do you use such a bigger sv on the first slider than the second? Same sound here; this is better off consistent imo because one builds up, other doesn't

01:19:983 (1) - picky, but move the rd tick down a little to make a straight line ? the corner in the slider is visible at the red point :p

01:44:925 (4,1) - I see your intentions here,but the spacing is too large imo. Compared to most important parts spaced most, if I nerf this some other parts will feel too much in comparison


Hard
00:59:053 (1) - Maybe nudge this note to the left a bit to make it more in line with 00:58:006 (2,4) -

01:03:239 (1) - x217 y63? this will put 01:02:541 (3,4,1) - in line and show more structure

01:11:611 (1,2,3) - I recommend making this a repeat slider again. The player just came out of a 5 note stream and, for a hard player, this rhythm might be strenuous and unsuspecting (because you already use repeat sliders). Same for 01:33:936 (1,2,3) - if you decide to change nerfed the stream instead

01:30:622 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g ? This would just give a more direct flow to and from the next object

01:47:013 (2,4) - fix blanket


Easy
• Lower AR to 3.2 or 3.3? I agree with the higher-than-usual ar for this diff but 3.7 might be a little difficult for an easy player to read

01:18:587 (4) - Rotate this by like 4 degrees so that there to create symmetry and better structure for https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916906

01:23:820 (2,3,4) - This pattern is honestly pretty boring to play, your sitting there tapping to a slow rhythm for like 4 seconds. Please add some movement across the map? Same for the next one also

Don't see much wrong here


Good luck! :)


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squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi, M4M with this map t/543350

Ren
01:14:750 (1,2,3) - space these evenly from eachother. Aesthetic is a hair off here Tried

01:23:384 (4,5) - This spacing is inconsistent from the way you spaced the same slider-circle pattern at 01:23:820 (6,1) - and 01:24:256 (2,3,4) - . Make this consistent. (If you fix this, adust 01:28:965 (4,5) - also) well this is a different section of the song, i left them spaced in kiai but stacked them in non-kiai and yes theres a difference b/w the wubs sounds that these support 01:23:297 (3,4,5) - and the drums that these support 01:23:820 (6,1) -

01:40:128 (4,6) - make these two the same slider xd They are similar

01:49:281 (1) - Maybe you can keep aesthetics consistent by curving this similarly to 01:47:885 (1) - and 01:48:408 (2,3,4,5,6) - ? its ok to curve it more or make it different since different combo

Nice diff, you're very consistent


Good luck! :)

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squirrelpascals wrote:
01:22:773 (1,1,2,3,4) - The sudden use of a 3/4 rhythm here might by hard to read for a Normal player; they would ultimately confuse this type of spacing with a 1/1 jump (what they're used to seeing in Normal maps). Highly recommended you fix. I've done that, i think that before change it was more intuitive than what it is now. But we will see Maybe you can do something aesthetically different here to let the player obviously know about this rhythm change. Same for 01:32:541 (1,2,3) - But i think this pattern is readable and pretty intuitive enough. It's emphasized with edgy sliders and that blanket thing.

01:45:792 (3) - Making this the same slider as 01:45:095 (1) - would direct the player more nicely toward the next object https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916788 Done

01:52:769 (5) - While I see why this is curved so much, I think you should curve it a little less to make the slider head and tail less clustered and to make the slider body itself less broad. suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7916799 Done

01:55:560 (3,1) - Make these parallel? Would give a more structured aesthetic Done

After looking over this I don't actually have many complaints. A lot of cool ideas in here for a Normal diff that I think you executed pretty well! Thank you <3 That means a lot for me


I'm nightmare!
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    easy
    00:53:122 (2,3,4) - this linear flow looks kinda awkward imo, especially in the easiest diff.. consider doing smth like this https://puu.sh/vw5Yj/8920b045cd.png , just optional, though, but imo it looks better
    01:08:820 (1,2) - this flow is totally unreadable, consider to rearrange this somehow..
    01:10:215 (1) - this nc is unnecessary, also i think that this 3/4 rhythm is kinda hard for the beginner players
    01:19:983 (7) - nc here?
    01:28:355 (1,2) - imo its better not to blanket these since the movement is a bit weird and can be hard to read for the new players.. just a straight one will be fine i suppose
    01:31:843 (2,3) - well, flow here isnt really nice as well, movement is too rough, so it can be a problem for the new players
    01:35:332 (3,1) - this overlap is visible in-game, maybe you could avoid that?
    01:44:576 (1) - not sure if this one is really needed in the easiest diff. also there is a timing change later, so not sure if this 1/2 slider is fine for this diff
    02:06:025 (1,2) - well i think u should swap these ncs to fit your nc pattern
     

    normal
    01:00:971 (2,3) - well, kinda nazi but this blanket can be improved a bit?
    01:01:843 (1,2) - a 1/1 slider + circle feels better since you are mapping the sounds (01:02:018 - 01:02:366 - ) that are way weaker than 01:01:320 -, but ignoring 01:01:320 - the sounds that are stronger. also 01:02:541 (3,4) - these sounds are different from 01:01:843 (1,2) - so they should be mapped differently so yeah (its fine here 01:07:425 (1,2,3,4) - tho since the sounds here are kinda similar)
    01:04:634 (4) - hmm.. missing nc?
    01:06:553 (2,3) - again blanket ;;
    01:10:215 (1,2) - this is too hard for a normal diff. i mean, it would be fine if it was lower bpm, but since the bpm is rly high, you should make it a little bit easier (check easiest diff, doing like there will fix the problem)
    01:15:797 (4) - if you apply nc there 01:04:634 (4) -, consider putting it here as well
    01:23:384 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - well.. you only used stacks for a 1/1 gap before, but here you decided to use it for 1/2 gaps with an abnormal rhythm and i think its a really bad idea, since it will be very confusing for the new players. my solution here is to make those stacks different from the standard, but the best option here is to remake the rhythm here
    those suggestions apply to the second kiai part as well, if you apply them
    01:39:169 (7,1) - flow here isnt all right https://puu.sh/vw87w/373d018354.png , i think it will be hard for the newbies.. so try smth like this instead https://puu.sh/vw88V/77bce6d3ae.png
    01:54:862 (1) - delete this nc? for consistency
    very cool stuff, but some moments are a bit hard for a normal diff
     

    hard
    00:43:791 (1,1) - isnt this recovery time too small for a hard diff?
    01:09:983 - 01:10:099 - why didnt you map this? this moment feels empty
    01:11:872 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - oh, i actually think that this rhythm is really hard, since you have to pass a triplet, which is already a hard challenge, and then do two doubles, so this will be a real hell for the hard players
    01:16:146 (3,4) - for slider->slider this spacing is okay, since its easier for playing, but for slider->circle its really huge so hard players have a huge chance to miss this note
    01:23:035 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - eh.. and again
    01:25:215 (5,6,7,8,9) - are you sure its all right for a hard diff? a 5-note stream after an awkward rhythm seems like a hard challenge for a typical hard diffs player. maybe you will consider a 1/4 repeat slider there?
    01:42:308 (7) - nc? to buff the hp after a hard part
    01:49:281 (1,2) - nazi, but fix this blanket pls
    01:49:804 (2,3) - hm.. imo its a bit confusing, but probably thats just me
    02:07:071 (3,1) - maybe you will use ds here?


    insane
    00:43:791 (1) - imo its better to end the spinner 00:48:936 - here, because the sound here is stronger than 00:49:111 - this one, also recovery time will be bigger, which is a good point for an easy insane
    00:55:739 (1,2) - consider ctrl+g this since the 1/1 spacing is too small and kinda unreadable. (u could also ctrl+g 00:56:436 (1,2,1,2) - these so ur pattering wont be broken)
    00:57:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - as far as i know its forbidden to map a stream that has more than 8 notes in the insane with such high bpm. pls consider to nerf it since this is the easiest insane
    01:04:982 (4,4) - nc these? to buff the hp + player will recognise that this is not 1/4 more easily
    01:10:477 (2) - 01:11:001 (2) - consider to nc these ones as well since some players might think its a 1/2 jumps
    01:27:308 (4,4) - same as before
    01:32:803 (2,2) - and again if you applied that
    01:39:169 (4) - nc this aswell? to show that its not 1/4 stream
    02:00:967 (2,7) - ehh, blanket is off
    very clean, seems like everything will be useless ;w;


    extra
    00:43:791 (1) - same suggestion as in the insane
    00:59:227 (1) - pls delete this nc :( it was very confusing to play since i thought it had a 1/1 gap
    01:14:401 (1) - touching the hp bar a bit, but shouldnt be a problem i guess
    01:42:308 (11) - nc this probably? to buff the hp and show that a new section starts
    01:44:925 (4,1) - oh, isnt this spacing tooo huge? seems like the only moment in the map with a such big distance
    nothing else worths mentioning

    uwu sorry for the bad mod ;;
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normal
01:00:971 (2,3) - well, kinda nazi but this blanket can be improved a bit? Tried
01:01:843 (1,2) - a 1/1 slider + circle feels better since you are mapping the sounds (01:02:018 - 01:02:366 - ) that are way weaker than 01:01:320 -, but ignoring 01:01:320 - the sounds that are stronger. also 01:02:541 (3,4) - these sounds are different from 01:01:843 (1,2) - so they should be mapped differently so yeah (its fine here 01:07:425 (1,2,3,4) - tho since the sounds here are kinda similar) Seems logical, fixed (hopefully playably)
01:04:634 (4) - hmm.. missing nc? I don't think so
01:06:553 (2,3) - again blanket ;; Oh you and your pixel blankets ><
01:10:215 (1,2) - this is too hard for a normal diff. i mean, it would be fine if it was lower bpm, but since the bpm is rly high, you should make it a little bit easier (check easiest diff, doing like there will fix the problem) I tried ;-;
01:15:797 (4) - if you apply nc there 01:04:634 (4) -, consider putting it here as well Not happening
01:23:384 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - well.. you only used stacks for a 1/1 gap before, but here you decided to use it for 1/2 gaps with an abnormal rhythm and i think its a really bad idea, since it will be very confusing for the new players. my solution here is to make those stacks different from the standard, but the best option here is to remake the rhythm here That is so hard to remake with this kind of spacing, and also when you cannot use that 3/4 (or something) rhythm... I've changed it, but temporarily, we'll see the opinions
those suggestions apply to the second kiai part as well, if you apply them
01:39:169 (7,1) - flow here isnt all right https://puu.sh/vw87w/373d018354.png , i think it will be hard for the newbies.. so try smth like this instead https://puu.sh/vw88V/77bce6d3ae.png ok
01:54:862 (1) - delete this nc? for consistency ok
very cool stuff, but some moments are a bit hard for a normal diff Thank you <3


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insane
00:43:791 (1) - imo its better to end the spinner 00:48:936 - here, because the sound here is stronger than 00:49:111 - this one, also recovery time will be bigger, which is a good point for an easy insane i m actually following that dark vocal thing which ends at 00:49:285 - but i ended that spinner a bit earlier for recovery lol
00:55:739 (1,2) - consider ctrl+g this since the 1/1 spacing is too small and kinda unreadable. (u could also ctrl+g 00:56:436 (1,2,1,2) - these so ur pattering wont be broken) i dont think this will be an issue because players can expect stuff like this since its a technical map
00:57:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - as far as i know its forbidden to map a stream that has more than 8 notes in the insane with such high bpm. pls consider to nerf it since this is the easiest insane its allowed :>
01:04:982 (4,4) - nc these? to buff the hp + player will recognise that this is not 1/4 more easily C
01:10:477 (2) - 01:11:001 (2) - consider to nc these ones as well since some players might think its a 1/2 jumps O
01:27:308 (4,4) - same as before O
01:32:803 (2,2) - and again if you applied that L
01:39:169 (4) - nc this aswell? to show that its not 1/4 stream Not quite sure about this but i will nc for now ,i might remove it later
02:00:967 (2,7) - ehh, blanket is off cool
very clean, seems like everything will be useless ;w;

uwu sorry for the bad mod ;;[/list]


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    easy
    00:53:122 (2,3,4) - this linear flow looks kinda awkward imo, especially in the easiest diff.. consider doing smth like this https://puu.sh/vw5Yj/8920b045cd.png , just optional, though, but imo it looks better
    01:08:820 (1,2) - this flow is totally unreadable, consider to rearrange this somehow..
    01:10:215 (1) - this nc is unnecessary, also i think that this 3/4 rhythm is kinda hard for the beginner players pretty important note so nced it, and it's 3/4 on a repeat slider so it's no problem
    01:19:983 (7) - nc here? looks better without
    01:28:355 (1,2) - imo its better not to blanket these since the movement is a bit weird and can be hard to read for the new players.. just a straight one will be fine i suppose
    01:31:843 (2,3) - well, flow here isnt really nice as well, movement is too rough, so it can be a problem for the new players
    01:35:332 (3,1) - this overlap is visible in-game, maybe you could avoid that?
    01:44:576 (1) - not sure if this one is really needed in the easiest diff. also there is a timing change later, so not sure if this 1/2 slider is fine for this diff
    02:06:025 (1,2) - well i think u should swap these ncs to fit your nc pattern
     

    hard
    00:43:791 (1,1) - isnt this recovery time too small for a hard diff? 1 beat is enough and it's not intense here
    01:09:983 - 01:10:099 - why didnt you map this? this moment feels empty I did it everywhere due to difficulty reasons
    01:11:872 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - oh, i actually think that this rhythm is really hard, since you have to pass a triplet, which is already a hard challenge, and then do two doubles, so this will be a real hell for the hard players the tripple played is only two clicks so I think it's fine
    01:16:146 (3,4) - for slider->slider this spacing is okay, since its easier for playing, but for slider->circle its really huge so hard players have a huge chance to miss this note don't think players will follow those repeats, and just hold it there, the spacing is the same as the rest lol
    01:23:035 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - eh.. and again same
    01:25:215 (5,6,7,8,9) - are you sure its all right for a hard diff? a 5-note stream after an awkward rhythm seems like a hard challenge for a typical hard diffs player. maybe you will consider a 1/4 repeat slider there?
    01:42:308 (7) - nc? to buff the hp after a hard part visuals reason again
    01:49:281 (1,2) - nazi, but fix this blanket pls
    01:49:804 (2,3) - hm.. imo its a bit confusing, but probably thats just me seems fine to me
    02:07:071 (3,1) - maybe you will use ds here? no need, doesn't seem to be hard to read and good emphasis for ending


    extra
    00:43:791 (1) - same suggestion as in the insane
    00:59:227 (1) - pls delete this nc :( it was very confusing to play since i thought it had a 1/1 gap
    01:14:401 (1) - touching the hp bar a bit, but shouldnt be a problem i guess
    01:42:308 (11) - nc this probably? to buff the hp and show that a new section starts visuals
    01:44:925 (4,1) - oh, isnt this spacing tooo huge? seems like the only moment in the map with a such big distance
    nothing else worths mentioning emphasis, as a big drop happens, alrdy explained in other mod reply

    uwu sorry for the bad mod ;;


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