1. High Tower (4.12 stars, 1648 notes)

-Anhedonia- wrote:

M4M request from my queue ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

General

- I'm not so sure but I think the artist is actually Kikuo , and the singer is Hanatan, but as there's two versions of this song (the other one sung by Hatsune Miku) you should make the artist Kikuo, and add "Hanatan" and "Hatsune Miku" to tags (not sure about Hatsune Miku but if this was a vocaloid song which "originally" (and i say it quotation marks because Hanatan's version is also original lol) is a Hatsune Miku song, most the people will come out with this song after searching hatsune miku songs ). Again, I'm not completely sure about this so you are free to consider doing it or not
- I'm also concerned about using "scga-00045" in the tags as i dont really think anybody would search that but uhhh yeah maybe why not Tags and metadata were completely copied from the already ranked standard set so I'll leave them for now.
- I'm also not sure about this but Background should be 1366x768 (at least i think most maps use that resolution). 1280x720 is fine though i dont really know. I really suck at finding backgrounds, this was the best and most related one I could find :S

High Tower

- I don't really like the first red line you used, even though it gets fine after 00:09:150 - , just saying~ Moved it up to that point
- 04:20:390 - ~ 04:23:116 - maybe this will give you troubles with the people who know more about it so if it isnt really necessary consider removing those removed them since I have a spinner there anyway
- 00:44:854 (178,179,180,181,182) - kdkdk > kkk k (change for consistence, keep for fighting agaisnt monotony loll) keeping since it follows the background trumpet
- 00:56:685 - ~ 01:01:545 - Maybe you can follow a bit more the piano here by doing a "o oo o" kind of pattern in this section, for example 00:56:474 (242,243,244,245,246) - d kkd k -> d dk k. This is most likely to be a personal mod as i dont really like vocal mapping at all .Eeeeh, I'll keep it for now as I want to be very sparing with my use of doubles, looks like a nice suggestion though
- 01:09:995 - ~ 01:22:671 - I really wonder why you stopped mapping finishers here, they sounded really good and you dont really need to make the kiai much harder anyways I only added finishers for the "nobore susume..." parts, If I get more opinions like this I guess I'll remap that part with finishers
- 01:24:678 - ~ 01:25:207 - make a 6notes long pattern here as you did before in 01:23:094 (395,396,397,398,399) - to make it consistent. I dont really know how you feel about 1/4 distance from a normal note and a finisher but i do like them lol ehhh, having just one stream pattern makes it weird when the rest are doubles, also that's a 5note pattern, not 6
- 01:34:502 (462,466,468,470) - you're really missing finishers in those notes </3 last three notes sound a bit too weak for finishers, but I've added them for now
- 01:43:692 - add k here and change 01:44:221 (511) - to k done
- 01:44:643 (513) - change this to d, nothing really depicts anything worth a k here but for fill an upbeat then d is just fine Worked alright without applying your previous suggestion, but d works better now yeah, changed.
- 01:44:854 (514,515) - Make it else "dd" or "kd" , this really isnt a "kkk" at all I hear a clap sound on the last note so I'm sticking with it, it also makes it easier for people to hit the d after it.
- 01:45:911 (521) - clap here so make it k you got it boss
- 01:46:333 (523) - this also should be a d because it isnt justified to be a k keeping this a k for now and I think the volume justifies it. Hitting the kkk afterwards would be awkward if I changed that note to a d aswell.
- 02:33:974 - add k here, the stream doesnt feel like finishing before lol done
- 03:07:038 (1038,1039,1040,1041,1042) - i dont know, even if you mapped it like this before i dont like how it sounds like that, so you could make it kkk k as before or do any other pattern but dkdkd is really weird to me changed to kkddkkd
- 04:02:390 - ~ 04:19:844 - I'd really recommend to remap this and follow the accordion instead, right now it is really gimmicky to notice what bpm/ divisor are you using here at first glance and at this point of the song i'd really hate to get a 100 because of that lol. Accordion and taiko should be doing the same job, rhythm. Melody is singer's job and ours is much different :3 Btw, is this 3/4 ? most accordion songs are waltz so i thought it was, im not sure... I thought it was a bit evil looking back at it yeah, accordion is a nice suggestion. changed to that.
- 05:04:072 - modify last stream to make room for a finisher here, its literally the only spot in the whole section which is missing one lolchanged that part to fit a finisher, thx for spotting it

Great map! Dropping a kudosu here, you deserve it :3

Thank you! and thanks for putting up with modding such a long song!

Kantan wrote:

1. 00:15:699 - remove done
   | Literally no sound
   | Increase emphasize on 00:15:382 - (sry for broke good flow a bit)
   
   easter egg
2. 00:32:811 - K I kinda want to keep it for playability but I'll change for now
   | emphasize same feeling with previous k notes which have covered same sound
   | make some interest stuffs in repetitive patterns
   
   easter egg
3. 00:39:783 - and 00:40:628 - dkd ooo nice
   | Sound better imo
   | It have some more sound can be cover unlike 00:19:502 -
   
   easter egg
4. 01:15:171 - move to 01:15:382 - and change to k comprised by just deleting the k, want to avoid a quad pattern if possible
   | Better flow
   | Have consistency with 01:11:473 -
   
   easter egg
5. 01:32:811 - http://puu.sh/tfh9m/315486bee1.jpg changed to a similar stream
   | According to previous rhythm (01:30:488 - , 01:31:333 - )
   | Melody on second half are more intense, can be emphasize with k
   
   easter egg
6. 01:43:480 - add note aaa i dont want to but ok
   | That low key synth pretty noticeable
   
   easter egg
7. 01:56:685 - PLEASE ADD MORER NOTE TO THAT SYNTHHHHHH ARHGHGHGHGH
   | fuck break, who need that in hard diff nop it's supposed to be easy diff w
   
   easter egg
8. 02:10:206 - ADD SPPINNNAERRRERERERER
   easter egg
9. 04:02:389 - HERE COMES THE KANTAN DIFFICULTY
10. ok enough. Please check AI MOD and check some notes (the copypasta) They didn't snap properly oops
11. please change BG to cute devil anime girl in some fantasy land DDDbg spooked me

anime girl = bad

[R] wrote:

yo

are you kidding me ??
[High Tower]
00:18:974 (52,53) - delete, no any pitch sound here deleted k
00:36:404 (133,134,135,136) - and other part, this is should be 1/4 imo keeping as 1/6. 1/4 would sound weird
00:39:466 - move 00:39:150 - make drum sound in 00:39:572 - clear done
00:47:495 - add note ? make not monotoune only had triples and quints before due to the trumpet, will consider though.
01:24:678 (406,407,408,409) - make same with 01:23:094 (397,398,399,400,401) - sounds you follow in 01:23:833 (402,403,404,405) - will matching too no change for now cause piano would sound weird
01:43:480 - | 01:43:692 - delete ? since pattern forward not much deleted note at 01:43:692
02:03:023 - delete, good spot to give a rest accepted for now
02:22:354 - add note ? I like how it builds up to the chorus so I'm keeping it empty
02:59:749 - move 02:59:326 - make same pattern with 02:58:058 - sounds good! done
03:11:051 - maybe kkdkd more fit here want to end it on k so decline for now
03:51:720 - add note ? I cant hear a sound there
03:53:728 - spinner should end in 04:00:488 - done
04:08:661 - add kat ? only doing accordion here
04:19:843 - should end in 04:25:298 - done
04:43:579 - change don ? refer to 03:11:051 - mod no change
05:09:671 - | 05:09:882 - delete and 05:09:777 - change don to emphasize 05:09:988 - done

that's all from me
good luck

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frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello, M4M promise!

Just need to say, these are just opinions rather than needs to be fixed. Just like my mod then!

Btw, i think the kiai sections are way too much, especially the middle one that is long. Consider lowering them for everyone's eyes' sake You make a good point. So much of the song is chorus though

High Tower

00:23:934 (73) - You maybe used kat because of the vocals here but looking at 00:23:512 (70) - this note and the drum sounds which are strong, i think a don will be better here. If you apply this, for consistency 00:25:624 (83) - this needs to be changed. I'd like to keep this section with only monocolor triples as the patterns get more and more complex during each kiai. The blue ones also follow the trumpet(?)idk what instrument it is ;w;

00:32:174 (111,112,113,114) - Why not dk dk since the keyboards (not sure) are exactly the same? aaah you may be right there, I'll keep it as dk kk for now though, if I get more people commenting it I'll change it.

01:02:174 (276,277) - I think this should be kdk because of the drum sounds here. three repeating kdk's sounded weird so I went with a kkd instead.

01:23:300 (396) - This can either d or k since the keyboard sounds are going higher. But in my opinion kat will be better. keeping this as a d for now since the spike on that trumpet noise is on the current k

01:24:040 - There is a slight sound that makes a note neccesary I think. Also, the green line is unsnapped. For the sake of not messing up the consistency of the section I'll keep it as is. The section mostly follows the keyboard + trumpet combo, the sound you suggested sounds like a triangle. About the green line, idk what to do about it tbh. Admittedly it'd look much better on the white tick. but then the SV on the k would be screwed.

01:33:547 (456,457) - Swap these maybe? Because at that part the keyboards are high-low. following the trumpet for this stream. ending on kd would also be hard for mid-level oni players.

01:43:793 (508) - Since you didn't put a finisher here I suggest adding a note 01:43:688 - here. I'd rather not make the 1/6 stream too long, and the note in question doesn't really warrant an

01:56:469 (585,586) - Some fun stuff can be mapped between these 2 notes :3 I think it creates a perfect break point so I'll leave it unmapped for now.

02:16:329 - I strongly suggest adding a kat here. ok w

03:04:709 (1025,1026) - Just for this bit, i think you can use 1/6 here since the notes are fast. I'd like to use 1/6 only where it's absolutely necessary, so I'll keep it as is for now.

03:24:779 - You can end the spinner here. ehh, maybe.

03:28:371 (21,22) - Swapping these notes will sound better imo.declining for now, will change if more people tell me to. The only reason the start is a d is because of the vocals.

04:02:385 - How about decreasing the volume to 50% here? Since this part is calm I think you can lower the volume for this section. ehh why not. Applied.

04:19:705 (1) - Move this spinner to 04:19:841 - here since the sounds start here. If you apply this, don't forget to adjust the length of this spinner. done

04:36:807 (52) - This is just a suggestion but a kat will be nice here. that does sound pretty nice. I'll consider it

This map is fun as hell and i really enjoyed playing this Good luck on ranking it! Thank you!!

katacheh wrote:

Hi~ NM Explosion!!

mod

SV1.40383 → 1.4 Fixed

00:35:343 (124,125,126,127,128) - dkdkd sounds alright, changed.

00:55:624 (236,237,238,239,240) - maybe dkdkd? Improves flow, thanks!

01:16:540 (356,357) - d k done

01:19:920 (376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387) - change to d k ddkkd kkddk because high pitch at 01:20:131 (377,380,383,387) - also done

02:49:075 (917,918,919) - Ctrl+G c:? keeping kkd for now, cant hear the sounds supporting dkk

03:04:286 (1025) - delete makes a nice pause, thx

04:02:385 - kind of weird. The red line is not on the previous barline and this redline Omit first barline? fixed

04:28:568 - the red line should use 4/4(common) ....not waltz
04:30:258 - so this red line is not necessary. both fixed

05:01:525 (228) - missed finisher oops

good luck for rank c:

125601228 wrote:

02:39:568 (851,852,853,854,855,856,857,858,859) - https://goo.gl/photos/yWhmRpG8UjX1wrND8

Other need revise are not too much this pattern should mirror the one at 02:42:737 (873,874,875,876,877,878,879,880,881,882,883) - so I'll keep it

good luck

thanks

Namki wrote:

idk if this finisher here was skipped on purpose 02:30:272 - but it seems kinda off according to 02:37:033 - / 03:10:836 - / 03:17:596 -
I skipped the finisher to emphasise the transition to the next section, but for consistency's sake I'll change it.
also, 00:32:174 (111,112,113,114) - you may want to make 00:32:491 (113) - d, it would be logical if 00:32:491 (113,114) - was the same pattern as 00:32:174 (111,112) - because sound is the same as for me. no so sure about this one, I find that a kk plays better, and there's definely enough sound to support it. I'll see what Volta says about it.
great map, good luck

1. 00:32:174 (111,112,113,114,115) - how about change to kk-kk-d instead? following the previous k-d-k-d pattern it would be more intuitive to make (111) as k. and (115) doesn't worth finisher imo since sound is not strong enough there, and is comparable with 00:12:526 -
2. 00:39:357 (152,153) - swap? drum at (152) sounds same with (151) so this might suits better.
   00:41:047 - change to k? i think it would suits better with the violin. and i feels more dynamic this way
3. 00:56:681 (243,244,245) - maybe change to kdk to have more varied pattern at this part? just because 00:58:371 (253,254,255) - this ddk feels out of consistency with previous two kkd
4. 01:02:596 (279,280) - i like how you mapped this with whistle lol
5. 02:22:984 - consider to add k? i think the atmosphere here is as intense as 02:09:462 -
   02:23:406 - ^
6. 02:18:758 - change to d? currently the pattern seems doesn't work best considering the song's nature
7. 02:30:272 - i assume this already has given a finisher
8. 03:14:216 (1086,1087,1088,1089,1090) - i feels like this pattern is kinda unfit here. how about change to dddkd?
9. 03:18:441 (1) - spinner can end at 03:24:779 - instead i guess.
10. 03:31:751 (42,43) - swap so (43) will have a d like start of this session? (03:25:202 - ), feels more consistent this way through this session (with 03:38:723 - , 03:45:484 - )
11. 03:53:723 (1) - end at 04:00:695 - ?
12. 04:44:094 - maybe try move to 04:44:305 - ? this arrangement feels more flowy than 2 triplet (refer to 04:37:333 - too)