not 5mins?
[deluge]
00:38:602 (4) - extend 3 instead? > no big sound on 4, better as a return slider
00:40:458 - rly strong piano ignored > bad emphasis, use a circle + kickslider instead for better representation i think
00:53:138 (2) - 00:54:375 (2) - not jump like other times > less emphasis even with hitsounding
01:06:282 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - better as double rhythm emphasis not on red tick or blue after > emphasis in the song is not equal cuz of the type of drums, should represent that (happens a lot, maybe spacing change instead in accord with drum hitsound = smaller spacing)
01:15:251 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 03:12:468 - 02:10:458 (9) - angle? 02:30:251 (9) - no reason for angle change > no change in song (no piano note etc.) should be no change in stream angle like that imo
01:45:870 (7) - 1/8 slider already introduced, use here > makes more sense since it doesnt ignore that part and was used elsewhere
01:52:983 (6) - inconsistent spacing with other drum parts > other parts are smaller spacing this one is big and not in kiai
01:55:767 (7) - 02:15:561 (8) - better 1/8 burst here > already introduced + 1/8 repeat misses sounds
01:57:777 (4) - double into quint = awkward tapping + hard to read, though it is consistent
02:21:592 (9) - not really emphasis on those 2 thing, better burst 02:36:437 (7,8) - > no need for emphasis on those two beats since its all same stuff = burst is better than kickslider here imo ( compare to 03:36:901 (5,6) - > different sound so different rhythm = makes sense to have kickslider)
02:23:447 (3) - why more emph than other one compare t 03:23:293 (3) - > other times the triangles are always equal despite different force, why not here?
02:44:788 (3) - reverse rhythm > buzz slider should be on the other side to follow the sound thingy imo
02:54:994 (1) - inconsistent with other similar? (kiai start tho) > better to increase spacing over time into that slider rather than all at once for playability
03:18:808 (1) - 02:59:169 (2) - bad flow > wide angle and not stacked double = small movement -> big movement in same direction = awkward
(happen other places too =/)
02:48:499 - 03:50:355 - 03:52:520 - 04:05:200 (3) - 04:09:530 (1) - better as a different sv slider (though the semicircles are cool too)> more highlighted as "weird" sound but still looks conventional (e.g not a circle that touching itself)
04:24:066 (6) - 04:25:303 (2) - 04:36:437 (3) - - ehh > not followed later on why here? it makes a random increase in density
if you wanted to follow those, why not add 04:36:437 (3) -
silence slider slide on end?
nazi04:31:798 (3) - nazi stack
00:56:540 (1) - minor move down for better look from the circle slider
04:04:581 (1) - overlap by a pixel or two
04:18:190 (4) - not symmetrical
04:19:427 (1) - nothing change on that sharp angle, not blanketing anything
04:24:375 (1) - uneven > not symmetrical
woops i did this before i saw kaitjuh post sry if overlap