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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quarta-feira, 3 de janeiro de 2018 at 13:33:12

Artist: Silent Siren
Title: LOVE no Shirushi
Tags: サイレントサイレン yoshida sumire umemura hinako yamauchi aina kurosaka yukako loveshiru
BPM: 152
Filesize: 3126kb
Play Time: 01:57
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Download: Silent Siren - LOVE no Shirushi
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before spam lopkyy... thanks surono, gabe, [R], Igor Sprite, lopkyy, Fantazy, JarvisGaming, Poii, Ataraxia, Mir, Axer, Ulqui, Kbludoh, Karee Pan, sing216, Idealism, Tyistiana, davidminh0111 >.>, this guy, Nardo-something, naotoshi, net0 and kisses, kisses and net0, irreversible, taikocracy, okoratu, sinnoh you no `-´, -Sh1n1-, Kurai, Lanturn. everyone here made this possible, thanks again. bye o/
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Last edited by Igor Sprite on , edited 49 times in total.
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yo


General
- 01:15:424 - slider should end at 01:16:608 -


Kantan
00:02:003 - | 00:03:582 - | 00:05:161 - maybe delete this note, to make different at 00:07:529 - (as the melody feels more intense here)
00:07:135 - add note, to give 1/1 pattern
00:40:095 - move 00:40:292 - to follow the vocal, like 00:41:871 -


Futsuu
00:01:608 - | 00:03:187 - | 00:04:766 - can delete, same reason with kantan
00:06:937 - | 00:07:332 - delete, to keep sphread between kantan
00:50:556 - change don, to emphasize 00:50:950 -
01:26:082 - add note, to fill the vocal sound
01:27:069 - maybe move 01:27:463 -
01:39:306 - move 01:39:898 - the 3/4 break feels sudden


Muzukashii
00:12:266 - delete, sound stops here
00:32:398 - change kat
01:18:582 - delete, its too long as muzukashii
01:21:740 - ^

that's all from me
good luck
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[R] wrote:
yo


General
- 01:15:424 - slider should end at 01:16:608 - ok


Kantan
00:02:003 - | 00:03:582 - | 00:05:161 - maybe delete this note, to make different at 00:07:529 - (as the melody feels more intense here) ok
00:07:135 - add note, to give 1/1 pattern nice
00:40:095 - move 00:40:292 - to follow the vocal, like 00:41:871 - ok


Futsuu
00:01:608 - | 00:03:187 - | 00:04:766 - can delete, same reason with kantan ok
00:06:937 - | 00:07:332 - delete, to keep sphread between kantan ok
00:50:556 - change don, to emphasize 00:50:950 - ok
01:26:082 - add note, to fill the vocal sound no, i'm giving emphasis to 01:26:279 (28,29) -
01:27:069 - maybe move 01:27:463 - no
01:39:306 - move 01:39:898 - the 3/4 break feels sudden ok


Muzukashii
00:12:266 - delete, sound stops here ok
00:32:398 - change kat no
01:18:582 - delete, its too long as muzukashii ok
01:21:740 - ^ ^

that's all from me
good luck thanks :)
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3 Hard diffs is unrankable(I think), pls nerf futsuu

Kantan
00:32:398 (39) - k to make it consistent
00:57:266 (71) - d because no pitch change or any distinct sounds
01:18:582 (3) - k because this note is higher than before (so you should probably do dkd)

Futsuu
At the beginning, why are you starting of so strong? You should slowly increase the difficulty as the music gets more intense. It makes the next part easier than the calm part.
00:34:371 (77) - k because higher pitch
00:59:832 (144) - k because higher vocal pitch
01:09:306 (172,173) - place a note before this, there are clearly sounds
01:18:187 (5,6,7,8) - should be dk kd to fit the vocals better
01:21:740 (17) - k, same pitch as first note(of this triple)
01:31:213 (42) - k to fit vocal
01:33:977 (51) - why the sudden gap after this? there are vocals

Muzu
00:32:398 (134) - k to fit the music
00:42:661 (172,173) - you're doing the breaks wrong:Image
01:28:450 (59) - add a d after this
01:34:963 - same, i recommend this: Image
01:52:727 (164,165) - doesn't fit the music, suggest to add a k behing all of these, but if you wanna keep it, move it 1/4 of a beat forward to make it sound better

Oni
00:07:529 (23) - Somehow this part is even more intense than the next part?
00:58:450 (270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282) - i think this would sound better if its kdkddkdkdkddkkk
01:30:819 (442,443) - dk because pitch

Gl :3
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for metadata
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122444

turn off your countdown at muzu


Oni
00:26:279 (135,136,137) - why not kkd ? i hear snare at 00:26:279 - also is it oky if you have finisher at 1/4 ?

01:15:424 - wat ? i just hear snare sound, why you use dkdkdkdkdk :3 how about dddkkkkkk ?


Muzu
00:14:832 - why not d ? it have differ pitch :3 , apply in reapeated part

00:41:871 - snare :3
00:46:608 - same ^ also its fit with vocal
00:48:977 - ^
:3 i dunno why you use d for snare sound, but in beginning part, you use k

the combination both drum and vocal seem not good enough for me :3 also, why you have 2 kai ? thelast part is same like in beginning


Futsuu
:3 maybe SV change in futsuu lil bit too hard, it confusing some new player, and its cause miss or even fail becareful with that

better than muzu, you have consistency here, and variety, cool
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3 Hard diffs is unrankable(I think), pls nerf futsuu i will

Kantan
00:32:398 (39) - k to make it consistente i'm following the pattern kd d dd d kd
00:57:266 (71) - d because no pitch change or any distinct sounds ok
01:18:582 (3) - k because this note is higher than before (so you should probably do dkd) ok

Futsuu
At the beginning, why are you starting of so strong? You should slowly increase the difficulty as the music gets more intense. It makes the next part easier than the calm part. fixed
00:34:371 (77) - k because higher pitch no
00:59:832 (144) - k because higher vocal pitch ok
01:09:306 (172,173) - place a note before this, there are clearly sounds used
01:18:187 (5,6,7,8) - should be dk kd to fit the vocals better ok
01:21:740 (17) - k, same pitch as first note(of this triple) ok
01:31:213 (42) - k to fit vocal no
01:33:977 (51) - why the sudden gap after this? there are vocals fixed

Muzu
00:32:398 (134) - k to fit the music ok
00:42:661 (172,173) - you're doing the breaks wrong:Image
01:28:450 (59) - add a d after this ok
01:34:963 - same, i recommend this: Image
01:52:727 (164,165) - doesn't fit the music, suggest to add a k behing all of these, but if you wanna keep it, move it 1/4 of a beat forward to make it sound better ok, i used the 1/4

Oni
00:07:529 (23) - Somehow this part is even more intense than the next part? ?
00:58:450 (270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282) - i think this would sound better if its kdkddkdkdkddkkk ok
01:30:819 (442,443) - dk because pitch no

Gl :3 thx
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for metadata ok
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122444

turn off your countdown at muzu ok


Oni
00:26:279 (135,136,137) - why not kkd ? i hear snare at 00:26:279 - also is it oky if you have finisher at 1/4 ? yeah, kkd

01:15:424 - wat ? i just hear snare sound, why you use dkdkdkdkdk :3 how about dddkkkkkk ? i like the kdkdkdkdkd


Muzu
00:14:832 - why not d ? it have differ pitch :3 , apply in reapeated part yes

00:41:871 - snare :3 ok
00:46:608 - same ^ also its fit with vocal ^
00:48:977 - ^ ^
:3 i dunno why you use d for snare sound, but in beginning part, you use k

the combination both drum and vocal seem not good enough for me :3 also, why you have 2 kai ? thelast part is same like in beginning because this is the end(?)


Futsuu
:3 maybe SV change in futsuu lil bit too hard, it confusing some new player, and its cause miss or even fail becareful with that

better than muzu, you have consistency here, and variety, cool
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[11:54] Ataraxia: Easy
[11:54] Ataraxia: 00:32:398 (39) -  Deixa whistle
[11:54] Ataraxia: igual voce fez aqui 00:35:556 (42,43) -
[11:56] Ataraxia: @Igor Sprite
[11:56] Igor Sprite: to aqui
[11:56] Igor Sprite: to ligando o pc
[11:58] Ataraxia: NORMAL: 01:21:345 (15,16,17) -  Delete o (17) , ai o (15) tu deixa como normal e o (16) como whistle(editado)
[11:58] Ataraxia: o vocal so da 2 batida ai
[11:59] Igor Sprite: nn fala whistle, fala k
[11:59] Igor Sprite: e normal fala d
[12:00] TheGame9583: o que é whistle e silent siren?
[12:00] Igor Sprite: silent siren é o nome da banda do meu mapa
[12:01] Igor Sprite: e whistle é a nota azul no taiko
[12:01] TheGame9583: hmm
[12:01] Ataraxia: beleza
[12:01] Ataraxia: K e D
[12:01] Ataraxia: K e azul
[12:01] Ataraxia: e o D é vermelho né
[12:01] Ataraxia: pelamor Taiko é mta putaria OSADFJOISAOJIFDASJOIDF
[12:01] Igor Sprite: ss
[12:02] Ataraxia: okay then
[12:02] -Miyashiro-: sei nada de taiko
[12:02] Igor Sprite: mas k e K são coisas diferentes
[12:02] Ataraxia: Puta que o pariu explica pra min
[12:02] Ataraxia: ah pera
[12:02] Ataraxia: k é vermelho fraco
[12:02] Ataraxia: e K
[12:02] Ataraxia: com finish ne
[12:02] Igor Sprite: nn k é azul pequeno e K o grande
[12:03] Ataraxia: ah sim
[12:03] Ataraxia: beleza
[12:03] Ataraxia: continuano
[12:03] Igor Sprite: vai falando ai
[12:03] Ataraxia: HARD: nada pra fala
[12:04] Igor Sprite: o futsuu nn precisa moddat
[12:04] Igor Sprite: pq eu vou nerfar ele ainda
[12:05] Ataraxia: nem o Insane
[12:05] Ataraxia: vou postar la no forum
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Hello, from my queue!

Oni

Muzu
I think the lower diffs look mostly fine. A bit busy so I'll skip those. Good luck!
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Hello, from my queue!

Oni

Muzu
I think the lower diffs look mostly fine. A bit busy so I'll skip those. Good luck! thanks ><
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21:50 Igor Sprite: axer
22:00 Axer: yes?
22:01 Axer: how can I help you
22:04 Axer: hellos (?
22:07 Axer: ;;
22:08 Igor Sprite: sorry ;-;
22:09 Axer: u want to snipe me in trickl4sh owo?
22:09 Igor Sprite: can you mod my map?
22:09 Axer: ooooooooooooooooooooOO
22:09 Axer: what map
22:09 *Igor Sprite is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1148886 Silent Siren - LOVE no Shirushi]
22:10 Axer: I'll do it uwu
22:10 Igor Sprite: thanks *-*
22:11 Axer: in post or here
22:11 Igor Sprite: here
22:11 Axer: alright, gimme a min
22:12 Igor Sprite: okay :3
22:17 Axer: aight
22:17 *Axer is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1148886 Silent Siren - LOVE no Shirushi [Oni]]
22:18 Igor Sprite: love no shirushi
22:20 Igor Sprite: pu pupu purupu pupu pu
22:20 *Axer is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1148886 Silent Siren - LOVE no Shirushi [Oni]]
22:20 Axer: asdasdas
22:20 Axer: 00:07:529 (23) - make this finisher
22:22 Igor Sprite: okay
22:23 Axer: It's p decent
22:23 Axer: 01:57:266 (596,597) - make this kdk uwu
22:25 Axer: and that's about it for the oni
22:26 Igor Sprite: no D:
22:26 Axer: o
22:27 Axer: 00:12:069 (50) - this finisher
22:27 Axer: 00:39:108 (153) - finisher
22:28 Igor Sprite: ok
22:30 Axer: 01:57:661 (188,189) - there are no noises here.
22:31 Axer: or are just too low to pick up
22:31 Axer: not worth mapping those
22:31 Igor Sprite: yeah
22:31 Igor Sprite: i deleted
22:32 Axer: usually futsuu and kantan are the ones that need least mods
22:32 Axer: you can make a 4* inner oni with this song too
22:33 Igor Sprite: no, i hate inner oni `-´
22:33 Axer: ooo :<
22:33 Axer: why
22:33 Axer: 01:28:845 (34) - this is snapped incorrectly
22:34 Axer: 01:29:635 - it should end here
22:34 Igor Sprite: ok
22:35 Axer: now kantan
22:35 Axer: 00:12:463 (13) - this is not snapped correctly
22:37 Igor Sprite: wtf these sliders
22:37 Axer: 01:43:845 (42) - not snapped correctly
22:38 Axer: and that's about it
22:38 Igor Sprite: thanks <3


very smol and cute song >< good luck with rank
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Slider Velocity should be 1.40 on all diffs :thinking:
^fix sv



Oni

00:02:200 - 00:03:779 - 00:05:358 - I think those notes sound potentially like k
00:07:036 - move to 00:06:937 - -----> cuz 00:07:036 - here is no sound :thinking:
00:09:306 (34,35,36) - change to dkd, for a more varied pattern
00:12:266 - delete cuz i hear no sound, also the sv change is better understood
00:14:536 - 00:17:694 - change those to d, it will be less repetitive (dk dk dk dk dk dk dk dk----> dd dk dk dk dd dk dk dk)
00:19:569 - i hear no sound here, i'll suggest move that note to 00:19:273 - and change to d. There's no sound too but it seems good imo.
00:20:852 - 00:24:010 - change to d same reason that i mentioned (variation)
00:25:983 - delete cuz no particular sound...
00:25:292 - k 00:25:490 - d cuz synth sounds like that...
00:26:378 - delete cuz kkD is pretty weird ;-; OR 00:26:477 - remove finisher, so it'll be kkd
00:51:641 - delete, then 00:51:740 - D
01:14:240 - 01:15:029 - 01:15:227 - delete so you can make emphasis on 01:14:635 - this sound, sv and stream will be better understood
01:15:424 (340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351) - kdddkdddkddk?
01:17:003 - D?
Hmmm...
01:17:200 -
01:20:358 -
01:23:615 -
01:29:832 -
^ patterns would look better if you remove those
01:20:950 - d? consistence with 01:17:792 -
01:21:740 - ^
01:22:529 - i hear k sound like 01:22:727 -
01:25:984 - delete? so i can prepare for 01:26:280 (407,408,409) - that kdK DDDx
01:29:536 - delete to avoid dkkdkkddK? --> dkkdkkd K 8)
01:31:213 - no sound owo, delete (unless you're following hihat) but map flows well without that note...
01:36:246 - delete? cuz relax after kdK ;-;
01:23:121 (383,384,385) - this is kkd but 01:35:753 (455,456,457) - this is kdK, for consistence, both should be the same pattern...
01:38:713 (474,475) - ctrl+g on those, like 01:26:082 (403,404) - THIS
01:42:167 - delete cuz no sound
01:44:635 (503,504,505,506,507) - i think ddddk is better, to emphatize 01:45:029 - this
01:47:595 (522,523,524,525,526,527,528) - try with another pattern, for variation... like ddkdkdk or whatever
01:49:174 (533,534,535,536,537,538,539) - ^
01:51:246 - delete, reason mentioned...
01:52:431 - d, for variation(?


Muzukashii

00:02:200 - 00:03:779 - 00:05:358 - change to k, mentioned in oni diff
00:06:740 - delete? to make it easier than oni
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - what happened with the finishers on that part? if you want to make better spread, make shorter patterns like cutting 00:52:727 - this and 00:54:503 - this
01:15:424 - end slider 01:16:510 - here

i recommend you to nerf this diff a little, it's pretty hard compared to futsuu
^try to make shorter patterns and delete unnecesary 1/4 triplets.


Futsuu

00:13:056 - end slider 00:13:450 - here
01:23:319 - why not K?
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - what happened to finishers?

pretty cool diff


Kantan

00:13:845 - finisher, loud sound
00:20:161 - ^ (but this isn't necessary at all)
00:26:477 - finisher.
00:32:792 - i think finisher is not necessary here
00:35:950 - ^
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - finishers?
01:17:003 - finisher
01:29:635 - ^
01:26:279 - move 01:26:477 - here, so baby players will not get confused @-@ (also finisher if you want)
01:35:950 - K, for consistence with 01:23:319 -
01:39:108 - finisher?????
01:42:266 - finisher sound


GL
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Slider Velocity should be 1.40 on all diffs :thinking: nice bug
^fix sv



Oni

00:02:200 - 00:03:779 - 00:05:358 - I think those notes sound potentially like k no
00:07:036 - move to 00:06:937 - -----> cuz 00:07:036 - here is no sound :thinking: ok
00:09:306 (34,35,36) - change to dkd, for a more varied pattern no, i like the ddd
00:12:266 - delete cuz i hear no sound, also the sv change is better understood but has a sound
00:14:536 - 00:17:694 - change those to d, it will be less repetitive (dk dk dk dk dk dk dk dk----> dd dk dk dk dd dk dk dk) used
00:19:569 - i hear no sound here, i'll suggest move that note to 00:19:273 - and change to d. There's no sound too but it seems good imo. i prefer with k and this note does not affect the gameplay
00:20:852 - 00:24:010 - change to d same reason that i mentioned (variation) ?
00:25:983 - delete cuz no particular sound... ok
00:25:292 - k 00:25:490 - d cuz synth sounds like that... no
00:26:378 - delete cuz kkD is pretty weird ;-; OR 00:26:477 - remove finisher, so it'll be kkd does not have any note after the kkD, you can do it, just try xd
00:51:641 - delete, then 00:51:740 - D ok
01:14:240 - 01:15:029 - 01:15:227 - delete so you can make emphasis on 01:14:635 - this sound, sv and stream will be better understood no
01:15:424 (340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351) - kdddkdddkddk? no
01:17:003 - D? no
Hmmm...
01:17:200 - ok
01:20:358 - ok
01:23:615 - no
01:29:832 - ok
^ patterns would look better if you remove those
01:20:950 - d? consistence with 01:17:792 - ok
01:21:740 - ^ no
01:22:529 - i hear k sound like 01:22:727 - ok
01:25:984 - delete? so i can prepare for 01:26:280 (407,408,409) - that kdK DDDx no
01:29:536 - delete to avoid dkkdkkddK? --> dkkdkkd K 8) why? D:
01:31:213 - no sound owo, delete (unless you're following hihat) but map flows well without that note... no
01:36:246 - delete? cuz relax after kdK ;-; die no :/
01:23:121 (383,384,385) - this is kkd but 01:35:753 (455,456,457) - this is kdK, for consistence, both should be the same pattern... ok
01:38:713 (474,475) - ctrl+g on those, like 01:26:082 (403,404) - THIS OK
01:42:167 - delete cuz no sound delete cuz i hate ddK no xd
01:44:635 (503,504,505,506,507) - i think ddddk is better, to emphatize 01:45:029 - this ok
01:47:595 (522,523,524,525,526,527,528) - try with another pattern, for variation... like ddkdkdk or whatever no
01:49:174 (533,534,535,536,537,538,539) - ^ ^
01:51:246 - delete, reason mentioned... ok
01:52:431 - d, for variation(? no


Muzukashii

00:02:200 - 00:03:779 - 00:05:358 - change to k, mentioned in oni diff no
00:06:740 - delete? to make it easier than oni ok
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - what happened with the finishers on that part? if you want to make better spread, make shorter patterns like cutting 00:52:727 - this and 00:54:503 - this ok
01:15:424 - end slider 01:16:510 - here ok

i recommend you to nerf this diff a little, it's pretty hard compared to futsuu
^try to make shorter patterns and delete unnecesary 1/4 triplets.


Futsuu

00:13:056 - end slider 00:13:450 - here ok
01:23:319 - why not K? ok
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - what happened to finishers? ok

pretty cool diff >///<


Kantan

00:13:845 - finisher, loud sound ok
00:20:161 - ^ (but this isn't necessary at all) ^
00:26:477 - finisher. ok
00:32:792 - i think finisher is not necessary here
00:35:950 - ^
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - finishers? yes
01:17:003 - finisher ok
01:29:635 - ^ ^
01:26:279 - move 01:26:477 - here, so baby players will not get confused @-@ (also finisher if you want) "baby players" :3
01:35:950 - K, for consistence with 01:23:319 - ok
01:39:108 - finisher????? ok
01:42:266 - finisher sound ok


GL thanks c:
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Hello! Modding the Oni difficulty, since I'm not very familiar with the lower difficulties.

00:15:424 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - Some slight variance is recommended here. Nothing drastic, but just to keep your player engaged a little more. Doing the variation only in the 3rd does not take away the feeling of repetition the map gives. This applies to most places where you copy/pasted stuff.

01:15:424 (343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354) - I think changing the pattern here would sound a bit better. KKKKDDDDKKKK perhaps?

01:28:845 (422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429) - This is mostly something you'd find in an Inner Oni, not in Oni. Change to something simpler. No hand swaps on Oni. (Except on patterns such as KDDKD and DKKDK.)

01:41:477 (493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501) - This is mostly something you'd find in an Inner Oni, not in Oni. Change to something simpler. No hand swaps on Oni. (Except on patterns such as KDDKD and DKKDK.)

01:46:016 (517,518,519,520,521,522,523) - Too long and hand swaps. Not fit for Oni.

01:47:595 (528,529,530,531,532,533,534) - ^

01:49:174 (539,540,541,542,543,544,545) - ^

Those are the most glaring things I've found.
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Hello! Modding the Oni difficulty, since I'm not very familiar with the lower difficulties.

00:15:424 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - Some slight variance is recommended here. Nothing drastic, but just to keep your player engaged a little more. Doing the variation only in the 3rd does not take away the feeling of repetition the map gives. This applies to most places where you copy/pasted stuff. ja tentei de todas as maneiras e desmaneiras que tem de nn deixar repetitivo, então sei la oq fazer ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

01:15:424 (343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354) - I think changing the pattern here would sound a bit better. KKKKDDDDKKKK perhaps? nn, que coisa absurda

01:28:845 (422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429) - This is mostly something you'd find in an Inner Oni, not in Oni. Change to something simpler. No hand swaps on Oni. (Except on patterns such as KDDKD and DKKDK.) arrumei, agora eu consigo fazer FC xd

01:41:477 (493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501) - This is mostly something you'd find in an Inner Oni, not in Oni. Change to something simpler. No hand swaps on Oni. (Except on patterns such as KDDKD and DKKDK.) ^

01:46:016 (517,518,519,520,521,522,523) - Too long and hand swaps. Not fit for Oni. ss

01:47:595 (528,529,530,531,532,533,534) - ^ ^

01:49:174 (539,540,541,542,543,544,545) - ^ ^

Those are the most glaring things I've found. vlw ai c:
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