1. Easy (1,98 stars, 123 notes)
2. Hard (4,49 stars, 260 notes)
3. Normal (3,02 stars, 168 notes)

ouranhshc wrote:

Hard - feels kinda blah
00:24:983 to 00:40:483 - maybe add some variety to the rhythm?
01:00:483 (2) - new combo
01:13:983 (4) - make this straight

Normal
00:12:983 (4) - new combo?
00:43:983 (1) - remove new combo?
00:53:983 (3) - line up with (2)?
00:55:983 (1) - make this straight?
01:01:983 (3,4) - possible make this symmetrical to (1,2) [suggestion]
01:30:983 (5) - make symmetrical to (3)?
01:31:483 (6) - make symmetrical to (2)?
01:31:983 (7) - make symmetrical to (1)?
01:38:483 (3) - line up with (2)
01:50:483 (4) - make symmetrical to (2)?

Easy
00:50:983 (4,5) - maybe make these combos like how you did in Normal and Hard? (same goes for the second kiai section)

Combo1 : 92,163,155
Combo2 : 85,70,43
Combo3 : 99,156,106
Combo4 : 88,70,121

KuraiPettan wrote:

General
- Enable the countdown ?

Easy
- It's weird that the HP drain is higher than the approach rate, Low the HP drain by 1 tick and increase the AR by tick would be better imo. (And i AR 3 will make the map more readable.)
00:24:483 (4) - This circle is a bit too close from the previous slider
01:28:483 (3) - This circle is a bit hidded by (2) and by the sliderfollowcircle, so you should move it
01:56:983 (1) - Remove whistle, Having 2 whistle consecutively like that sounds kinda ugly
02:00:983 (1) - For this whistle too

Normal
Fine.

Hard
00:12:483 (1) - A bit close from (5), Move 1 grid up and 1 grid right
00:50:983 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - For all of this kind of pattern, it should have a note 1/4 earlier from the first circle (Ex : Here it should have a note at 00:50:858.) But I guess it's fine, streams with 4 notes are not very cool :/ So add a note 1/4 earlier of all this kind of pattern if you think it's nice.

I guess it's all :3
Star~

y u c a wrote:

hi :3

Easy

00:14:983 (4) - new combo
01:24:983 (5) - ^
01:26:483 (1) - remove new combo
01:29:483 (5) - new combo



Normal

00:32:983 (7) - new combo
00:33:483 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:983 (1)~01:00:483 (6),01:37:483 (1)~end- same rhythm pattern are not fun for play


Hard


00:26:983 (1)~00:40:483 (4) - same rhythm pattern are not fun for play
00:46:983 (4) - new combo
00:51:233 (3) - add whistle
00:51:733 (3) - ^
00:52:233 (3) - ^
00:52:733 (3) - ^
00:55:233 (3) - ^
00:55:733 (3) - ^
00:56:233 (3) - ^
00:56:733 (3) - ^
00:59:233 (3) - ^
00:59:733 (3) - ^
01:00:233 (3) - ^
01:00:733 (3) - ^
(you can use same pattern at other place)
01:12:983 (1)~01:20:483 (4) - same rhythm pattern are not fun for play
01:20:983 (5) - new combo
01:23:983 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:983 (3) - new combo

good luck

Lanttu wrote:

[Easy]
00:10:983 (3) - New combo?
00:18:983 (5) - ^
00:29:483 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for an easiest diff... ;u;
00:49:483 (1) - ^
01:24:983 (5) - Maybe new combo?
01:37:483 (1) - Too soon after spinner again.
01:53:483 (1) - ^

Other than that, looked good. Starred~ o/

Behonkiss wrote:

Overall, it might help to add some claps, unless you avoided them on purpose.

Normal:
- 00:13:983 (2,3,4): 3 and 4 would be good spots for claps, and there are other 3-circle stacked notes that the same would apply to.
- 00:48:733: Maybe add a circle with a new combo here (And make the one after it a normal circle instead of another new combo), since the melody picks up at this spot.
- 00:56:983 (1): Add a finish, maybe?

No problems with Easy & Hard. Nice job.

Resize your BG to 1024 x 768 :<

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Your BG is 4 pixels too wide, I don't care but someone else might =P
-- Claps?

Easy:

01:53:483 (1,2) - Use a slider here imo, the note can be hard to hit straight after a spinner. Or delete and put a note at 01:53:983

Normal:

Claps at the start of the map but no where else? Maybe use claps in other places or just remove the claps at the start? Other than that it's fine.

Hard:

-- Slider tick rate 2.

01:37:483 (1) - Put this in the center? Rearrange the notes after if you do this.
01:49:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you make some kind of pattern here? The notes seem randomly placed.

The map could have done with a custom claps and some different pattern variations imo xD

Star, good luck.