1. Faraway - 4Key (3.83 stars, 3340 notes)

4-Key Christmas Marathon Map

¤ Jumps ¤ Chords ¤ Consistency ¤ Light Long Notes ¤

dudehacker wrote:

Really nice song , love DnB and Nishino Kana

Added some hats .

http://puu.sh/sMcFP/b0785445ac.zip

juankristal wrote:

For some reason I like this song quite a bit.

Todestrieb wrote:

Really superficial check, I need to go sleep but wanted to do something about this chart.

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Far Away From You

00:09:588 (9588|3) - Missing note for bass.
00:09:760 (9760|3) - Delete, no bass nor clap.
01:19:188 (79188|3) - I don't know if It was intentional or not, but maybe you should follow the second guitar and add jump here and all the suggestion that follow, It will make these parts less boring (and will have 3333 objects Xd).
01:20:731 (80731|3) - ^
01:24:674 (84674|0) - ^
01:26:217 (86217|0) - ^
01:29:988 (89988|1) - Move to 0 if you add the note for the guitar.
01:30:160 (90160|1) - Add note for second guitar.
01:31:702 (91702|3) - ^
01:35:645 (95645|0) - ^
01:37:188 (97188|0) - ^
03:19:874 (199874|0) - ^
03:21:417 (201417|0) - ^
03:22:617 (202617|1) - ^
03:22:788 (202788|3) - ^
03:25:360 (205360|3) - ^
03:26:902 (206902|3) - ^
03:30:845 (210845|1) - ^
03:32:388 (212388|3) - ^
03:33:760 (213760|0) - ^
03:36:331 (216331|3) - ^
03:37:874 (217874|3) - ^

got lazy, to reply each since all applied and fixed! Really nice notice!

Cool song, the chart looks like a sequel to J-Core Mix, hope you can get it qualified.
It does have the feeling of the my J-core Mix map, thank you so much!

Thank you so much for that mod! Very much appreciated

1st MOD applied and updated!

1. BPM: No Problem.
2. Offset: No Problem.
3. AiMod: No Errors.
4. Audio: No Problem.
5. Background: Nice BG. I like it!
6. Preview Point: Nice choice
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7. I think you need some sv's to emphasize this map. I give you suggestion(s) in sv.
8. Note: Feel to reject if you don't want sv in your map and use "Open .osu in Notepad" change the timing points by copy/paste method if you want to try.
   

   [TimingPoints]
   160,342.857142857143,4,2,1,80,1,0
   21445,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21531,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21588,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21617,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21702,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21760,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   32931,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   33017,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   33074,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75610,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75652,-500,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75695,-333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75738,-250,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75781,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
   76038,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   131502,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   131617,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   131645,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   142788,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
   153617,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,1
   153702,-50,4,2,1,80,0,1
   153760,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
   163360,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   175731,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   175817,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   175874,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196295,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196338,-500,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196381,-333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196424,-250,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196467,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196681,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   252352,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   252417,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   252502,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   263474,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
   284045,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0

1. Nice pattern and i think i need to find the missing/ghost note and some changing of patterns.
2. 00:49:445 - Add one note in column 2. (missing/ghost note right?)
3. 01:17:988 - I think you need to add one note. Most likely same sound here 01:18:331 (78331|0,78331|3) -
4. 01:41:302 (101302|3,101474|2) - i suggest to change pattern into " 01:41:302 (101302|3) - move to column 3, and 01:41:474 (101474|2) - move to column 4"

I know it's a little mod but i hope it helps for your map. Good Luck and I hope it will rank ASAP

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Hi arcwin. Mod Request from Discord #kudusu-farm

Mod Request

Here we go!

[General]

1. BPM: No Problem.
2. Offset: No Problem.
3. AiMod: No Errors.
4. Audio: No Problem.
5. Background: Nice BG. I like it!
6. Preview Point: Nice choice
   ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
7. I think you need some sv's to emphasize this map. I give you suggestion(s) in sv.
8. Note: Feel to reject if you don't want sv in your map and use "Open .osu in Notepad" change the timing points by copy/paste method if you want to try. sadly, I always non-sv my marathons so players can have fun and concentrate well. sorry but still thanks.
   

   [TimingPoints]
   160,342.857142857143,4,2,1,80,1,0
   21445,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21531,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21588,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21617,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21702,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   21760,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   32931,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   33017,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   33074,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75610,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75652,-500,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75695,-333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75738,-250,4,2,1,80,0,0
   75781,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
   76038,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   131502,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   131617,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   131645,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   142788,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
   153617,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,1
   153702,-50,4,2,1,80,0,1
   153760,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
   163360,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   175731,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   175817,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   175874,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196295,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196338,-500,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196381,-333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196424,-250,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196467,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
   196681,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   252352,-1000,4,2,1,80,0,0
   252417,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
   252502,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
   263474,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
   284045,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Far Away From You]

1. Nice pattern and i think i need to find the missing/ghost note and some changing of patterns.
2. 00:49:445 - Add one note in column 2. (missing/ghost note right?) really nice notice! fixed
3. 01:17:988 - I think you need to add one note. Most likely same sound here 01:18:331 (78331|0,78331|3) - oh yes, I might missed some sounds. Thanks!
4. 01:41:302 (101302|3,101474|2) - i suggest to change pattern into " 01:41:302 (101302|3) - move to column 3, and 01:41:474 (101474|2) - move to column 4" I think I'm fine with the current pattern as it is comfortable without having a mini hammer. I did hammer on same instruments such as 01:40:102 (100102|0,100274|0) - which are beat sounds.

I know it's a little mod but i hope it helps for your map. Good Luck and I hope it will rank ASAP thanks for the support!

Thank you so much for that mod! Very much appreciated

ALSO THANKS TO: Todestrieb for that Star!

2nd MOD applied and updated!

1. 00:51:417 (51417|1) - move to 4
2. 00:52:102 (52102|2) - move to 1
3. 00:52:274 (52274|3) - move to 4
4. 00:52:617 (52617|2) - move to 4
5. 00:52:702 (52702|1,52788|2) - ctrl + h
6. 00:53:302 (53302|1,53302|3,53388|2,53474|1,53645|3,53645|0,53817|1,53988|2,53988|0,54074|1,54160|2,54331|1,54331|0) - like this? http://puu.sh/sO0Cc/d731ed4c75.jpg
7. 00:55:360 (55360|1) - move to 1
8. 00:55:445 (55445|1) - move to 2
9. 00:55:531 (55531|1) - move to 1
10. 00:55:702 (55702|0) - move to 3
11. 00:58:102 (58102|2) - move to 4
12. 00:58:188 (58188|2) - move to 3
13. 00:58:274 (58274|1) - move to 2
14. 01:05:645 (65645|0,65645|1,65645|3,65731|2,65817|1,65902|3,65988|0,65988|1,65988|2,66160|3,66331|1,66331|0) - like this? http://puu.sh/sO3Ig/f5314ecede.jpg
15. 01:07:702 (67702|1) - move to 4
16. 01:07:788 (67788|2,67874|1) - ctrl + h
17. 01:09:074 (69074|2,69160|1,69245|2,70445|2,70531|1,70617|2) - change into something like this (the mod from 00:51:417 - until 00:52:702 - )
18. 01:50:217 - add 1 for snare and 01:50:560 - remove 1
19. 01:51:588 (111588|0,111588|1,111931|2,111931|0,111931|1,112960|1,112960|3,113302|1,113302|3,113302|0,114331|0,114331|2,114674|0,114674|2,114674|3) - ^
20. 02:45:074 - until 03:16:274 - change this pattern 02:51:931 (171931|2,172017|1,172102|2,172617|1,172702|2,172788|1,173302|1,173388|2,173474|1) - into something like this (the mod from 00:51:417 - until 00:52:702 - )

Virtue- wrote:

Hi there, from Ngeng Familiy Mania Queue and Christmas☆Queue 2016

General

- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!

[Far Away From You]

1. 00:51:417 (51417|1) - move to 4
2. 00:52:102 (52102|2) - move to 1
3. 00:52:274 (52274|3) - move to 4
4. 00:52:617 (52617|2) - move to 4
5. 00:52:702 (52702|1,52788|2) - ctrl + h
6. 00:53:302 (53302|1,53302|3,53388|2,53474|1,53645|3,53645|0,53817|1,53988|2,53988|0,54074|1,54160|2,54331|1,54331|0) - like this? http://puu.sh/sO0Cc/d731ed4c75.jpg
7. 00:55:360 (55360|1) - move to 1
8. 00:55:445 (55445|1) - move to 2
9. 00:55:531 (55531|1) - move to 1
10. 00:55:702 (55702|0) - move to 3
11. 00:58:102 (58102|2) - move to 4
12. 00:58:188 (58188|2) - move to 3
13. 00:58:274 (58274|1) - move to 2
14. 01:05:645 (65645|0,65645|1,65645|3,65731|2,65817|1,65902|3,65988|0,65988|1,65988|2,66160|3,66331|1,66331|0) - like this? http://puu.sh/sO3Ig/f5314ecede.jpg
15. 01:07:702 (67702|1) - move to 4
16. 01:07:788 (67788|2,67874|1) - ctrl + h
17. 01:09:074 (69074|2,69160|1,69245|2,70445|2,70531|1,70617|2) - change into something like this (the mod from 00:51:417 - until 00:52:702 - ) I think there's no problem with the triplets. Changed some patterns though. Thanks!
18. 01:50:217 - add 1 for snare and 01:50:560 - remove 1 The reason is that there's a strong clap /snare-like sound on the note you suggested to remove. Listen to the mp3.
19. 01:51:588 (111588|0,111588|1,111931|2,111931|0,111931|1,112960|1,112960|3,113302|1,113302|3,113302|0,114331|0,114331|2,114674|0,114674|2,114674|3) - ^
20. 02:45:074 - until 03:16:274 - change this pattern 02:51:931 Why change? there's no problem in the pattern. If I will change to triplets, it will be repetitive as previous patterns.(171931|2,172017|1,172102|2,172617|1,172702|2,172788|1,173302|1,173388|2,173474|1) - into something like this (the mod from 00:51:417 - until 00:52:702 - ) would be glad if you screenshot'd instead ;;

well that's all i guess... rip mod and sorry if it's useless oh no no its fine! as a matter fact, I still changed some pattern based on your suggestions \o/

Thank you so much for that mod! Very much appreciated

ALSO THANKS TO: Nysrogh for that Star!

3rd MOD applied and updated!

od3x wrote:

Heya

This is definately a song I would've wanted to found sooner so there would be left something to mod

But since only praising doesn't do good here, think about adding 04:56:560 (296560|0,296560|3) - It was very off-putting to ACTUALLY hit some randoms keys right there without nothing being mapped Plus, it does have the bass/synth sound so.

Hope to see this ranked! ps. no need for kudosuses

Somehow make sense since last part is only bass but same density. Applied on that section. I feel bad without giving you a kudosu since that's really helpful and considered as mod. So please accept it. \o/

Thank you so much for that mod! Very much appreciated

ALSO THANKS TO: Virtue- for that Star!

4th MOD applied and updated!

JztCallMeRon wrote:

Hi koya arc! Mod requested via #kudosu-farm
1|2|3|4

Far Away From You

00:21:417 - pattern suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6823224 since i think that the ghost note at 00:21:931 (21931|2) is a bit off and the LNs give more emphasis on the ending woosh sound, like what you did from 01:16:274 up to 01:16:960. Still up to you to implement There's a sound at 00:21:931 - which synth-like instrument. The woosh sound is much consistent at 01:16:274 and longer that why I made it LN.

04:21:931 (261931|3) - maybe move this to [1] to mirror what you did at 02:21:074 and coincidentally moving these notes 04:22:274 (262274|0,262274|2,262445|1,262445|3) like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6823295 to solve the resulting anchor at [1] from 04:21:760 to 04:22:474 and to follow the flow of the next LNs like 04:22:617 (262617|1,262788|2,262960|0,263131|1) . idk what im saying man xd Lol xD I got the idea though, rearranged thanks!

04:41:817 (281817|3,281988|3,282160|3,282331|3) - there's an anchor here and idk how to re-pattern this hmm..... maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6823312 idk you deleted a 1/4 note at your suggestion. But still rearranged on a different way. Thanks!

That would be all I guess. Lmao sorry for the short mod, map is almost perfect tho, hope it helped uwu. Goodluck!!

Thank you so much for that mod! Very much appreciated

ALSO THANKS TO: Your Star! \o/

5th MOD applied and updated!

Protastic101 wrote:

hi, here from the xmas queue that im too lazy to link

lalalalala

[General]

1. soft-hitnormal has some silence at the end, here's a fix http://puu.sh/sVjnG.wav fixed
2. Idk, I feel like OD and HP are a bit low. Maybe 8.3 for both works? I think I'll keep 8 since its quite the default one. Did the same back then in my J-core Mix
3. No offense, but "Far Away From You" seems like too long of a diffname and doesn't have as much resonance with someone planning on playing this map than a single word or something. Just my input, you might consider making it something like "Detachment" or "Dissociation" since the song seems more about distancing oneself from another person. Nice ideas, I think I'll go for "Detachment"
4. Offset seems a little late. Maybe 155 is better? seems 160 already fits, double checked with 25% sample rate and 155 is little early and might be more early if played in normal rate.

[Diff]
00:08:388 (8388|3,8388|2,8560|0) - I think control H here would be cool to make a stack with 00:08:217 (8217|0,8217|1,8388|2,8388|3) - to show that they're the same sound. I'll keep, made it alternate so it can be smooth and easy to execute especially on DT.

00:11:131 - I think it's ok to add another note in 2 to make a triple and just jack the other notes around it since there's a crash there. Maybe like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6849127 rearranged in a similar way

00:13:702 (13702|0,13702|1,13874|2,13874|3) - Similar to what I mentioned before about stacking these, maybe a [14] stack would work like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6849131 Same reason as before.

00:19:188 (19188|2,19188|0,19360|2,19360|3) - Similar to above again, maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6849140 ^

00:16:788 (16788|0,17131|1,17474|1,17817|2,18160|3,18502|2,18845|2) - I think it'd actually be cool to make these 1/2 LNs to represent the synth that comes in on the upbeat. keeping as I didn't mapped for it starting on 00:11:131 - where that bass synth started.

00:43:531 (43531|2,43874|1) - These are actually a different pitch from 00:43:360 (43360|2,43702|1) - , so I'd consider moving them to different columns, and making it like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6856136 rearranged on alternate way

00:42:674 - Would be cool to use LNs here imo. Maybe something like 00:42:674 - .75, 00:42:760 - 1.25 and repeat for the measure. I think you mean SV, I don't really like adding SVs on my marathons so it can be played without worrying SVs

00:54:502 (54502|2,54502|3) - Might be cool to turn one or both of these short notes into Lns that end at 00:54:674 - for the small whoosh sound. nice idea, changed 4 to LN

00:54:674 - Might consider a very short slowjam here, like .9x or something with a 1.1x bump at 00:54:931 - and end at 00:55:017 - same reason on previous

00:55:188 - Why not add another note here in 2 since it's the same sound as at 00:55:360 - ? I'll leave it like that so that next chord will be executed comfortably.

01:58:788 - Rather than just using a simple jumptrill, might be cool to jack the notes instead like this (also might be stupidly uncomfortable to hit, not entirely sure lol) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6856417 keeping this generic jumptrill for smooth execution

02:00:502 - SVs would be hella cool here, like .5x at 02:00:502 - and 1.5x at 02:00:545 - and repeat until 02:00:845 - Same as previous. No SV marathon.

02:22:788 - tbh, I can't really understand why the notes on the redtick like 02:22:960 (142960|0,142960|1) - or 02:23:302 (143302|1,143302|2) - are jumps. They're only synths + hihat. Plus, there are some parts like 02:25:702 (145702|0) - or 02:28:788 (148788|2) - where the notes are single only. the doubles emphasizes the vocals along with the instruments.

02:33:417 (153417|2) - I think it'd be fine to remove this note in order to accent the sudden loss in music intensity here. You could also consider a short bump SV like I mentioned above if you wanted. I think I'll add one note, the reason is that there a noticeable clap in that specific time and kinda feels off if ignored.

02:42:674 (162674|2,162674|3,162760|1,162760|0,162845|3,162845|2,162931|1,162931|0,163017|2,163017|3) - Shouldn't these be jump-single-jump since they're the same snare sound like at 00:20:731 - ? oh yes great notice! fixed.

02:43:360 - SVs PLS D: nu!

02:54:502 (174502|2,174674|1) - Would consider a control H here. I know the structure here is to use complementary chords, but they're a bit repetitive after a while, and I honestly think that it's a bit heavy on column 3. So yeah, if accepted, shift 02:54:760 (174760|2,174845|1) - one to the left. rearranged a note

03:46:617 (226617|1,226617|3,226702|0,226788|1,226788|2,226874|3,226960|0,226960|2) - Idk, this pattern felt a bit awkward to hit. I'd try to make it more roll like, so like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6857003 keeping, actually fits on the vocals + to differ on other rolls (quite using alot).

04:28:617 - Shouldn't this be a triple for the snare? Maybe add another note in 1. nice! fixed

04:34:102 (274102|2,274102|0,274102|3) - Honestly, this sound is not deserving of 3 notes lol. It's only a single hihat, and if you accepted one of my previous suggestions about making removing the single note completely to accent the sudden drop of the music, I'd apply the same here. If not, just reduce it to a single note. fixed to double same as previous. Clap + the vocal.

04:51:417 (291417|0,291588|0) - Seeing as you haven't used any ministacks at all so far in this section, this is out of place and inconsistent with how the rest of the section is mapped. I'd consider moving 04:51:588 (291588|0) - to 4 for that reason. fixed

04:53:645 (293645|3) - similar to above, so move this to 2? fixed

05:03:245 - Not really a fan of the current pattern right now since it feels a little left hand heavy. Maybe try this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6857044 rearranged patterns in this part

Hitsounds
05:03:245 (303245|2) - Nice double hitsound. daym nice fixed.

Thank you so much for that BN Mod! Mam Sheep! Very much appreciated

6th MOD applied. updated and ready for recheck!

Protastic101 wrote:

ok, rechecked and it's 10/10

Thank you so much O Great Holy Sheep