00:08:280 (8280|1,8280|2) - Jack into double here, if the double was in 3,4 it would play better.
applied00:32:880 - Maybe for sections like these (with the mini breaks) add LN's in for extra emphasis.
I haven't thought of this, but it works really well! applied 00:36:240 - Another example of how LN's could enhance the mini breaks (just so you know what I'm talking about).
same as above00:57:960 - I think this section could be made more interesting with some SV's, but this is a more subjective thing
I've been considering adding sv's to this chart eventually, but I'm also not really good at sv mapping so if I add anything it would be something small 01:04:680 - For the repetitive sections like these triples feel unnecessary, maybe doubles instead
kind of applied, I made the first too cymbals doubles but I feel the sounds after are deserving of a triple jack01:12:120 - Maybe move the jacks into the 4th lane to emphasize how quiet they are
applied01:13:920 (73920|1) - The notes like this feel like ghost notes, but that may just be me
I guess this technically doesn't flow to anything audible, its mostly there to keep this sections from being just a boring LN/note mash section. I'll considering removing these01:42:720 - Quad feels unnecessary here, perhaps make into a triple
applied02:11:760 (131760|1) - Unnecessary note
fixed02:11:520 - Make these into a quad stair (if you accept the one above this)
applied02:19:200 - Add a stair here
done02:48:960 - Change from quads to triples maybe
applied03:08:220 - Change from double into quad, into a fast stair
I was kinda confused here, wasn't sure how to map your suggestion so I left it alone03:10:200 - Quad into triple
same as above, did change a quad into a triple though03:15:360 - Maybe change into just a stair (very subjective here, it could work either way)
applied03:17:040 - Stair again if you accept the other one
kind of applied, remapped the patterns a bit03:21:600 (201600|2) - Make into same size as the others and replace the single above it
done03:34:440 - Earlier in the song you would repeat patterns for these kinds of sounds, try and keep it consistent
fixed03:36:960 (216960|1) - Maybe remove this one
done03:41:880 - Triples earlier are associated with the cymbal sounds, so maybe make these a double
applied03:48:360 (228360|0,228360|1) - Move to right lanes for consistency (or move them all left, up to you)
applied03:49:560 - Maybe change from the triple jacks into LN's (could work either way)
changed the first 2 triple jacks into LN's03:52:200 - Extend the LN's into the quad (
like this)
applied03:53:640 - Just reiterating from earlier but I think SV's could help enhance this map like crazy, especially with patterns like the one here
like I said earlier, I'd really like to add some sv's but I have to get better at sv mapping 03:56:520 - No point in making this a triple
fixed04:01:560 - I would do this pattern more like
this, but once again highly subjective here
applied04:16:320 - Ghost here
fixed04:16:440 - I think these LN's could be made more fun if you make them extend to where the next one starts (
here's what I mean)
kind of applied, remapped a bit04:17:160 - Ghost notes here
I can hear bass here so I'll keep the notes there 04:19:320 (259320|0,259560|1,259680|0) - Remove the LN and these notes to emphasize the gap in sounds
it would feel weird to have no LN here when there are LN's in the similar section, I did remove the notes though04:19:800 - Same as above
same as above haha04:20:880 - Maybe make the triples into repeating doubles
applied04:25:320 (265320|3,265320|2) - Don't space these apart
did you mean the notes right below this? if you did, I fixed it and if not I'm not sure what you meant lol04:38:280 (278280|1,278280|0) - Make these two the same height as the one in the third lane, and make the LN extend into the quad (this works either way)
applied04:46:200 - I feel like this section could be more fun if it was dense streams rather than just continuous alternating doubles. Up to you though.
so you would mean continuous 1/8 rolls? I feel the way I added some rolls into a few sections is fine05:01:800 - Make this section less dense, just doing doubles on every white would work better after the stamina hell the player just underwent LOL
LMAO I'll consider making these doubles but for now I feel the triples fit well, also since I already put doubles later in to emphasize the song is getting quieter05:32:280 - End with a triple
triple seems too much for how quiet that sound is, so I made it a double Love the song! If I was good enough to play the map I'm sure I'd love that too lmao, overall it seems well done (if a little bit overmapped), hope this was helpful, and good luck!