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nano - DREAMCATCHER (TV Size) [Taiko|Osu]

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Topic Starter
Senko-san
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 05, 2020 at 17:31:18

Artist: nano
Title: DREAMCATCHER (TV Size)
Source: 魔法少女育成計画
Tags: Magical Girl Raising Project Mahou Shoujo Ikusei Keikaku ED Ending Snow White Ripple Kocari Winnie Crowie HPK Hiicantpk
BPM: 180
Filesize: 2551kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.91 stars, 190 notes)
  2. Crowie's Easy (1.67 stars, 94 notes)
  3. Hard (3.87 stars, 237 notes)
  4. Kocari's Insane (4.3 stars, 322 notes)
  5. Muzukashii (2.95 stars, 373 notes)
  6. Normal (2.13 stars, 141 notes)
  7. Oni (3.61 stars, 446 notes)
Download: nano - DREAMCATCHER (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Check out the OP, mapped by Meg


We back?

Advanced/Hard probably getting remapped lol
Crowie
hoi ya need an easy diff right i think i'll make one :3

done here u go
DeletedUser_2179411
Hi .. Mod from Queue ..

Crowie's Easy :

00:12:489 (2) - Move it to X:65 , Y:355 .. to make it not attatched to the previous slider .. and make it blanket with it ..
00:13:156 (3) - Move this one too to X:181 , Y:244 .. blanket issue ..
00:21:823 (1) - What about if you make this circle at X:124 , Y:281 .. just to avoid that attached between this circle with the next slider .. its a bit off .. like that i mean -> http://i.imgur.com/O0vLOjg.png .. and to make it readable ..
00:27:489 (2,3) - Blanket .. just fix the slider 3 a bit down .. it will be perfect ..
00:41:156 (2,3,4) - Please this will be miss reading for the beginners .. please change it to something like that -> http://i.imgur.com/gIU93HY.png .. or whatever you like .. just not closer to each other .. to make it easier ..
00:45:489 (3,4) - Look at this - > http://i.imgur.com/m6lkcKl.png .. here as you can see 3 and 4 can be miss reading too .. just avoid this in easy diff .. cause they will click 4 instead of 3 .. so how about this ? -> http://i.imgur.com/6VT56sD.png .. make the slider 4 away from slider 1 .. it will fix it ..
01:01:156 (3,4,1) - Same ^
00:52:823 (5) - Clap sound at the end of the slider ?
00:53:489 (7) - ^
00:56:489 (1,2) - Blanket issue ..
00:57:989 (2) - This slider I feel like its confusing for the bigenner .. how about this -> http://i.imgur.com/YbYKfXW.png ?
01:01:156 (3,4,1) - Same like 00:45:489 (3,4) - ..
01:03:823 (2,3,1) - ^
01:09:156 (5,6,1) - ^
01:22:489 (3,4,1) - ^
01:23:156 (1) - Please so many reverse here make it 1/1 slider .. And i feel like the end is a bit off .. how about if you make it like this -> http://i.imgur.com/vu8cHy9.png ..

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Normal :

00:00:989 (2,3) - Look at this -> http://i.imgur.com/DzfBcoz.png .. make it blanket ..
00:32:489 (1,2,3) - Also look at this -> http://i.imgur.com/Lx4nvA4.png .. it kindda off .. make it like this -> http://i.imgur.com/OUavoQy.png .. just move slider 1 and 2 to the left ..
00:36:489 (3) - This slider is a bit off .. make this sider clear i mean move it to the left a bit .. so it will make it easy to read it ..
00:46:156 (2) - Again this slider is quite hard to read for the beginners .. so change it to another style .. or i guess you can make it like this -> http://i.imgur.com/1jGo4tG.png ? its up to you ..
00:47:823 (4) -Make this slider like the previous one .. i mean copy this slider 00:47:156 (3) - and Ctrl+H ..
00:51:489 (2) - Same as 00:46:156 (2)-
00:55:823 (4,5,6) - Blanket issue ..
01:03:156 (2) - Make this slider similar to to the next slider .. just copy the next slider .. Ctrl+g+h ..
01:07:489 (2) - And 01:12:823 (2) - Same as 00:46:156 (2) -

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Topic Starter
Senko-san

Rose Melody wrote:

Hi .. Mod from Queue ..

Normal :

00:00:989 (2,3) - Look at this -> http://i.imgur.com/DzfBcoz.png .. make it blanket .. Neat idea, but I don't think thats needed here
00:32:489 (1,2,3) - Also look at this -> http://i.imgur.com/Lx4nvA4.png .. it kindda off .. make it like this -> http://i.imgur.com/OUavoQy.png .. just move slider 1 and 2 to the left .. Did that intentionally, but looking back its kinda dumb. fixed
00:36:489 (3) - This slider is a bit off .. make this sider clear i mean move it to the left a bit .. so it will make it easy to read it .. Fixed this one as well
00:46:156 (2) - Again this slider is quite hard to read for the beginners .. so change it to another style .. or i guess you can make it like this -> http://i.imgur.com/1jGo4tG.png ? its up to you .. I think this is fine.
00:47:823 (4) -Make this slider like the previous one .. i mean copy this slider 00:47:156 (3) - and Ctrl+H .. SeemsGood
00:51:489 (2) - Same as 00:46:156 (2)- Also fine
00:55:823 (4,5,6) - Blanket issue .. Thats due to the stacking of the 4 and 5, can't do much
01:03:156 (2) - Make this slider similar to to the next slider .. just copy the next slider .. Ctrl+g+h .. the "-yond" in the lyrics is less powerful than the "the", so I mapped the second slider slightly curved to emphasize the intensity increase.
01:07:489 (2) - And 01:12:823 (2) - Same as 00:46:156 (2) - Still fine

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Thanks for the mod
Crowie
i think Magical Girl is a better name than mahou shoujo imo
Crowie

Rose Melody wrote:

Hi .. Mod from Queue ..

Crowie's Easy :

00:12:489 (2) - Move it to X:65 , Y:355 .. to make it not attatched to the previous slider .. and make it blanket with it .. 1 pixel ok
00:13:156 (3) - Move this one too to X:181 , Y:244 .. blanket issue .. idk if pk already fixed that for me or what it's already at that spot
00:21:823 (1) - What about if you make this circle at X:124 , Y:281 .. just to avoid that attached between this circle with the next slider .. its a bit off .. like that i mean -> http://i.imgur.com/O0vLOjg.png .. and to make it readable .. don't see how this is not readable. there's a whole 3/4 of a measure for the player to read that. also put it in that position for aesthetics in my own eyes i guess
00:27:489 (2,3) - Blanket .. just fix the slider 3 a bit down .. it will be perfect .. fixed what little bit off the blanket was.
00:41:156 (2,3,4) - Please this will be miss reading for the beginners .. please change it to something like that -> http://i.imgur.com/gIU93HY.png .. or whatever you like .. just not closer to each other .. to make it easier .. changed to a slider
00:45:489 (3,4) - Look at this - > http://i.imgur.com/m6lkcKl.png .. here as you can see 3 and 4 can be miss reading too .. just avoid this in easy diff .. cause they will click 4 instead of 3 .. so how about this ? -> http://i.imgur.com/6VT56sD.png .. make the slider 4 away from slider 1 .. it will fix it ..hmm done
01:01:156 (3,4,1) - Same ^ hmm will probably change when i find a better solution that doesn't ruin aesthetics -_-
00:52:823 (5) - Clap sound at the end of the slider ? clap is on the red tick so nah
00:53:489 (7) - ^ drum is fine since the drums do shift into a tom sound around here
00:56:489 (1,2) - Blanket issue .. ik big blankets aren't that great but it's fine
00:57:989 (2) - This slider I feel like its confusing for the bigenner .. how about this -> http://i.imgur.com/YbYKfXW.png ? that looks bad tried doing something else idk if it makes it better -_-
01:01:156 (3,4,1) - Same like 00:45:489 (3,4) - .. u already did this lol
01:03:823 (2,3,1) - ^ if u mean 01:08:156 (5,6,1) - i think it's fine since 1 is a finish
01:09:156 (5,6,1) - ^ where are u????
01:22:489 (3,4,1) - ^ will probably change when i find a better solution that doesn't ruin aesthetics?
01:23:156 (1) - Please so many reverse here make it 1/1 slider .. And i feel like the end is a bit off .. how about if you make it like this -> http://i.imgur.com/vu8cHy9.png .. changed to 1 reverse instead. the end is fine, it follows the vocals closely. what u suggested follows neither vocals nor drums. i could extend 4 to the big white tick tho
thanks for modding!
i'm sorry i meant to edit this in the last post but i forgot don't kill me D:


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Shino Inuzuka
NM Req from ♫♫~Shino Inuzuka's NM/M4M STD Queue!~♫♫~

Kocari's Insane
00:05:264 (6) - NC here to emphasize the beat, also since you NCed here 00:10:598 (1) -
00:12:431 (4) - NC here since you NCed here 00:17:764 (1) - and they follow the same pattern
00:15:098 (6) - NC here since you NCed here 00:20:431 (1) - and they follow the same pattern
00:33:931 (1) - Move this away from the stack since they aren't all pressed with the same rhythm
00:40:597 (4) - NC here instead of here 00:41:264 (1) -
00:42:597 (4) - NC
00:54:431 (2) - Move this away from (1) since its not pressed directly after
00:55:597 (6,7,8) - Don't do this. It messes up the spacing. They should all be the same length apart
00:57:097 (2) - Stack this on top of (3)
00:58:931 (1,2) - Reverse the order of these
01:16:764 (1) - Stack this on top of (2)
01:24:264 (2) - Move this away from (1) and NC

Mahou Shojou
Please just call this Magical Girl.... It looks really weeaboo
00:05:597 (7) - NC to emphasize the beat
00:10:931 (7) - ^
00:27:181 (6) - Remove this, its too far away from 5 and nothing sounds here
00:42:597 (2) - NC
00:43:097 (3) - Remove this since its a passive beat
01:21:597 (4) - NC this instead of the next slider since you NCed this 01:00:264 (1) -
01:12:264 (5) - Increase spacing
Topic Starter
Senko-san

Shino Inuzuka wrote:

NM Req from ♫♫~Shino Inuzuka's NM/M4M STD Queue!~♫♫~

Mahou Shojou
Please just call this Magical Girl.... It looks really weeaboo Its something I do with the anime maps I've done. I'm not going to change this.
00:05:597 (7) - NC to emphasize the beat That would be excessive. Also I NC on the downbeats here, having a NC on the third white tick would be weird.
00:10:931 (7) - ^ Same deal
00:27:181 (6) - Remove this, its too far away from 5 and nothing sounds here Sounded good in my head but yeah theres nothing there. fixed.
00:42:597 (2) - NC Meh, K.
00:43:097 (3) - Remove this since its a passive beat Having that downward motion from the previous note up sharp to the first note of the kiai is good for emphasis, I'll keep it.
01:21:597 (4) - NC this instead of the next slider since you NCed this 01:00:264 (1) - Makes sense.
01:12:264 (5) - Increase spacing what? I think the spacing is fine.
Thanks for the mod
Shino Inuzuka

Hiicantpk wrote:

01:12:264 (5) - Increase spacing what? I think the spacing is fine.
Spacing should be even here or gradually increasing because the music gets emphasized towards the end of (3), (4), and (5) therefor the spacing should be getting farther apart, not closer.
Affirmation
Q

[mahou]
00:13:764 (1,2) - Distance is same with 00:13:264 (3,1) - ?> looks hard to read
00:41:264 (3,4) - HArd to read this 1/3. reduce DS for better reading
00:48:597 (1,3) - you don't need to overlap since you didn't overlap well.
00:50:764 (4,5,1) - flow looks awkward.
Nothing to sy, but totally I couldn't understand your intentions.
Topic Starter
Senko-san

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[mahou]
00:13:764 (1,2) - Distance is same with 00:13:264 (3,1) - ?> looks hard to read Yeah I could see how it could be misread. Changed.
00:41:264 (3,4) - HArd to read this 1/3. reduce DS for better reading I don't think reducing the DS is going to change the readability
00:48:597 (1,3) - you don't need to overlap since you didn't overlap well. Tried to make the overlap look a little better
00:50:764 (4,5,1) - flow looks awkward. Reworked a little, but it plays fine imo
Nothing to sy, but totally I couldn't understand your intentions. I don't understand what you're talking about with this. I wasn't trying to map specifically or have a theme, i just map.
Rad-
Hello! From my queue.

General:
Make sure to disable widescreen support on all diffiiculties

Crowie's Easy
00:56:597 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
01:01:931 (1) - This one can stay as the song changes a bit
01:17:931 (1) - Remove NC
01:24:597 (1) - Remove NC

Normal
00:41:764 (3) - Not sure if this stack on a normal is allowed, though i cannot confirm.
01:03:931 (3) - Make this slider straight just like slider 2, or make both curvy, so it gives the pattern overall better shape

Advanced
00:01:764 (3) - I recommend ending this slider on 00:02:597 - ,fits best to the music and becomes less confusing at the start of the map
00:07:097 (3) - ^
00:46:931 (4,1,2) - This type of spacing can get really confusing to play, specially on such a low difficulty, its more the fact that its a transition from short slider to 2 circle single taps that make it weird to play for alot of people at this skill level, if it was only only single tap next after a short slider would be ok
Also i suggest reducing the overall spacing from 1.5x to 1.3x, as it gets pretty jumpy for such short slow sliders, that plus the fact that the map also has low spaced single taps makes it a bit awkward to play.
00:46:931 (4,1,2) - It's parts like these that what i mentioned before would be fixed
01:03:931 (1) - Remove NC, it would have been ok if it at least changed slider speed

Hard
00:43:264 (1,2) - Please fix this spacing, its very inconsistent, you could just stack on top of each other
00:45:931 (1,2) - distance these 2 to look more like they are seperated in rhythm, with this distance it looks like it went from blue tick to red tick
01:04:597 (1,2) - same as before
There are parts on Hard (mostly on kiai time) that could have better spacing to be more consistent, like remain on the 1.3x instead of 1.2x, so consider fixing the ones needing this, the short jumps dont really matter

Kocari's Insane
00:27:264 (1,3) - Stack this end of slider properly to slider 1
00:33:931 (1) - Move this circle to a different position so it's not just a stack of 4 objects (stacking on the start of slider 00:33:264 (4) - isn't bad)
00:35:597 (2) - Why not make the triple here like you did previously, so it fits better with the song?
00:36:764 - Another point that should be a triple, for consistency since you mapped triples before
00:50:931 (1,2) - Switch NC between these 2 for consistency
00:58:764 - Add a circle here to fit the kick on the beat?

Hope it helped!
Winnie
All No Fix
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42264
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:DREAMCATCHER
TitleUnicode:DREAMCATCHER
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:Hiicantpk
Version:Kocari's Insane
Source:魔法少女育成計画
Tags:Magical Girl Raising Project Mahou Shoujo Ikusei Keikaku ED Ending TV Size Snow White Himekawa Koyuki Kocari Crowie HPK
BeatmapID:1142506
BeatmapSetID:537022

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
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Topic Starter
Senko-san

Rad- wrote:

Hello! From my queue.

General:
Make sure to disable widescreen support on all diffiiculties

Normal
00:41:764 (3) - Not sure if this stack on a normal is allowed, though i cannot confirm. Better safe than sorry, unstacked
01:03:931 (3) - Make this slider straight just like slider 2, or make both curvy, so it gives the pattern overall better shape Already explained my reasoning for this in Rose Melody's mod.

Advanced
00:01:764 (3) - I recommend ending this slider on 00:02:597 - ,fits best to the music and becomes less confusing at the start of the map The slider is going to the vocal which ends on the red tic, and since this is an advanced diff players should be able to read a 3/2 gap without much effort.
00:07:097 (3) - ^
00:46:931 (4,1,2) - This type of spacing can get really confusing to play, specially on such a low difficulty, its more the fact that its a transition from short slider to 2 circle single taps that make it weird to play for alot of people at this skill level, if it was only only single tap next after a short slider would be ok
Also i suggest reducing the overall spacing from 1.5x to 1.3x, as it gets pretty jumpy for such short slow sliders, that plus the fact that the map also has low spaced single taps makes it a bit awkward to play. I'll get more opinions on this. I think its fine but you bring up valid points.
01:03:931 (1) - Remove NC, it would have been ok if it at least changed slider speed This is an NC for vocal emphasis, its fine.

Hard
00:43:264 (1,2) - Please fix this spacing, its very inconsistent, you could just stack on top of each other Fixed
00:45:931 (1,2) - distance these 2 to look more like they are seperated in rhythm, with this distance it looks like it went from blue tick to red tick Fixed
01:04:597 (1,2) - same as before Fixed
There are parts on Hard (mostly on kiai time) that could have better spacing to be more consistent, like remain on the 1.3x instead of 1.2x, so consider fixing the ones needing this, the short jumps dont really matter

Hope it helped!
Thanks for the mod.
_Meep_
06:01 _Meep_: Yea
06:01 _Meep_: Oh yea,in the hard diff
06:01 *_Meep_ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1143817 nano - DREAMCATCHER [Hard]]
06:02 _Meep_: You're missing out too many beats on 00:32:597 -
06:02 _Meep_: on the long sliders
06:02 _Meep_: 00:33:264 (4) -
06:02 _Meep_: 00:35:931 (4) -
06:02 _Meep_: You're forsaking too many drum beats just to lower the density
06:03 _Meep_: 00:52:264 (4,1) - Reversing flow like this is really difficult
06:03 _Meep_: for the players
06:03 Hiicantpk: would it flow better if 4 was lower than 3?
06:03 _Meep_: 00:52:264 (4) - move 4 to like 15 136
06:04 _Meep_: 00:53:931 (1) - is this a trend in the song lol
06:04 Hiicantpk: At least that one has a 1/1 gap
06:04 _Meep_: as in the slider shape
06:05 Hiicantpk: oh
06:05 Hiicantpk: yeah
06:05 Hiicantpk: Like i said i kinda went hard on the slider shapes this diff
06:05 _Meep_: because you didn't touch the corners at all
06:05 _Meep_: and 01:01:931 (2) - this is just the same as making diagonal straight sliders = aesthetically bad imo
06:05 Hiicantpk: oh shit
06:06 _Meep_: 01:01:931 (2,3,4) - idk whats with the weird spacing here
06:06 _Meep_: 01:03:931 (1) - Why no stream here when there was before?
06:06 _Meep_: 01:03:264 (1,1) - fix blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7541560
06:07 _Meep_: 01:06:597 (4) - Sharp curves are really hard to deal with because the SV is pretty high, means sliderbreak potential is high
06:07 Hiicantpk: I'll respond to each point when you post this
06:07 _Meep_: I suggest you use a slider trend with less sharp curves
06:07 _Meep_: Sure.
06:07 _Meep_: You can think of how to answer them as i spam them
06:08 _Meep_: 01:06:597 (4) - Missed 2 drum notes
06:08 Hiicantpk: Yeah i can't keep up with answers at this speed
06:08 _Meep_: 01:06:597 (4,1) - fix blanket (added circle so u can see) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7541572
06:09 _Meep_: 01:08:264 (4,1,2) - This flow is practically in a straight line,not too wise for a hard diff,players don't really like moving in straight directions
06:09 _Meep_: 01:09:264 (3) - beats are missing too
06:09 _Meep_: 01:09:764 (4,1) - too far imo
06:10 _Meep_: 01:12:931 (2) - Just make it 2 curves instead of 1,makes me triggered lol
06:11 _Meep_: 01:14:931 - here and 00:53:597 - , both share the same problem,since the drums still continue,however you decided to stop at the 5th note,I suggest you make it a reverse slider at the end to play out the rest of the drums rather than leave it alone
06:11 _Meep_: 01:23:931 (2) - rotate by -20
06:11 _Meep_: 01:23:931 (2,3,1) - too far
06:12 _Meep_: 01:25:097 (2) - Forsaking too many powerful sounds in the background just for the vocals,I don't think this is necessary
06:12 _Meep_: 00:22:097 (2,3) - Hard diff players tend to follow the sliders,so this is going to be hell for them
06:13 _Meep_: 00:20:931 (2) - Move this 2 ticks infront and add a note,fix the pattern afterwards,this allows the player to play the song smoothly without stopping momentum/rhythm
06:13 _Meep_: add a note at its previous place*
06:13 _Meep_: 00:23:764 (3,1) - Using different curves isn't too nice imo,I rather you stick to a consistent one that doesn't change too much,it makes it look a bit messy
06:14 _Meep_: 00:25:264 (4) - move it to 192 196 so you can keep the parallel movement between 00:24:431 (1,2) - and 00:25:097 (3,4) -
06:14 _Meep_: 00:30:597 (4,1) - make them both the same slider.
Kk.

The hard diff is really inconsistent in its spacing, you have to work on that in order for this to be rankable imo. Take for example 00:48:597 (1,2,3) - . 1-2 has lesser DS than 2-3 even though 2 is the powerful clap note. To emphasize claps in hard diffs,I recommend you space it more and use at least 0.2 DS higher than the other notes for a clearer difference.

Flow too is flawed, It feels as if you think that the direction of the slider = the direction of where the cursor will go,which is practically wrong in this case.
Take 00:50:597 (3) - for example. The first curve is fine,the players can follow, however, they won't be able to follow through the second one, and because of slider leniency,they stop midway during the second curve, therefore there won't be any circular flow. In this situation,it would be better to place a note somewhere above the slider, like at 421 98. Flow may be hard to understand for hard diffs, but you gotta try to understand how hard diff players move and stuff. With high SV, there are a lot of considerations you have to take rather than just adding in sliders hoping they will follow it 150%.

Lastly is rhythm. You forsake too many instruments just for the sake of mapping to the vocals, which is not right imo. You should find a connection between the two and try to map them both together, this allows the player to better understand the rhythm while at the same time playing well with the song. This isn't impossible in hard diffs as well. Stuff like 00:49:264 (3) - , you could have mapped it as https://puu.sh/uEylB/6dbce628b9.jpg instead, it plays well to both the instruments and the vocals.

Good luck!
Crowie

Rad- wrote:

Crowie's Easy
00:56:597 (1) - Remove NC for consistency done
01:01:931 (1) - This one can stay as the song changes a bit ok
01:17:931 (1) - Remove NCdone
01:24:597 (1) - Remove NC done
!
thanks for modding :3
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Topic Starter
Senko-san
This is a self-reminder to stop procrastinating and respond to meep's mod
_Meep_

Hiicantpk wrote:

This is a self-reminder to stop procrastinating and respond to meep's mod
This is also a reminder for you to JUST DO IT!
Kaori M
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