1. Chaoz's Insane (4.47 stars, 988 notes)
2. Collab Light Insane (3.44 stars, 616 notes)
3. Error (5.14 stars, 999 notes)
4. Hard (2.84 stars, 511 notes)
5. Normal (1.75 stars, 284 notes)

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

dont even try to DT :>

Watch My Skill wrote:

Error

Change stack leniency to 4-5
00:14:758 (2) - This is really jarring and unexpected. It only needs to really repeat twice. hmm i dont think so, sound was ended at 00:14:865 -
00:18:240 (4,5) - 00:21:668 (3,4) - Again is jarring. It can be difficult to hit, it really doesnt need a slider. Maybe just two single notes? kick slider are for emphasis
00:35:383 (3,4) - all combos like these are a little strange. Tinkered around with them, maybe try something like this? same as above

Nothing much else, just consider those combos like 00:25:097 (4,5) - and see if you can make them smooth.

Del05 wrote:

Hi
sorry if it is not very helpful

M4M

You can choose one

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1. Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV Size)
2. nano.RIPE - Lime Tree Hard still WIP so dont mod it
3. ISHIDA YOKO - Ashita no Tsubasa (TV Size)
   Just give mod as fair as my mod

[General]

1. Set combo colour ? yap gonna do it

[Normal]

1. 00:42:508 (1,2) - your NC messy here you must swap this nc then make the next nc every 2 big white tick since 00:42:550 - this part was calmer then kiai, and object was more less then kiai, so NC at every white tick at here isnt rly a good choice in normal diff
2. 1st kiai - why you use NC every big white tick ? you should you consistent NC, so change the nc every 2 big white tick like the previous part
3. 01:19:365 (1) - try --> http://puu.sh/trFNh/d351fefb02.jpg <-- follow vocal hmm i prefer the current structure
4. 01:21:079 (7) - i would like to move it to 01:20:865 then change it become 1/1 slider then add circle at 01:21:508 and 01:21:936 --> http://puu.sh/trG0i/0387d34b31.jpg nah i want a small pause at 01:21:293 -
5. 01:36:508 - add note here because i think it must end here not necessary tho, since isnt the main sound im following
6. 02:03:508 (4,1) - blanket off
7. 02:44:222 (4,1) - ^^
8. 03:27:936 (1) - try --> http://puu.sh/trFNh/d351fefb02.jpg <-- follow vocal anh staying cooonsistent
9. 03:29:650 (2) - i would like to move it to 03:29:436 then change it become 1/1 slider then add circle at 03:30:079 and 03:30:508 --> http://puu.sh/trG0i/0387d34b31.jpg same reason
10. 01:23:650 (2) - try to blanket 01:22:793 (1) - --> http://puu.sh/trG0i/0387d34b31.jpg
11. 02:51:936 (1,2) - blanket a little off
12. 03:39:829 (1,1) - try to make a perfect blanket here, i will look better --> http://puu.sh/trHPp/397723c17e.jpg

[Hard]

1. 00:07:365 (1,2) - blanket a little off
2. 00:18:293 - add circle ? nah making a pause for emphasis the vocal
3. 00:51:079 (4,1) - blanket off
4. 01:06:293 - add circle ?
5. 02:04:793 (3,4) - blanket off
6. 03:14:865 (3) - add circle ?
7. 00:34:793 (1) - try this, i try to emphasize the vocal more --> http://puu.sh/trKAD/bb92eb26f5.jpg i rly dont prefer 3/4 slider in hard since is kinda hard to play xd
8. 01:09:079 (1) - bad overlap with 01:08:008 (3,4,5) - my suggestion move 01:09:079 (1) - to right more
9. 01:29:650 (1) - you can emphasize the laser sound with some unique slider shape
10. 01:51:936 (1,2) - blanket it ?
11. 01:54:936 (4,1) - blanket off ?
12. 02:05:650 (1,3) - ^^
13. 02:20:650 (5) - http://puu.sh/trKUB/c5bbb63e54.jpg <-- to emphasize the sound

RagingKirby77 wrote:

Hi NiNo! Mod from my queue o/

[ General]

1. Add Chaoz to tags
2. Disable widescreen support on Chaoz's dif

[ Hard]

1. 00:16:793 (3,1) - I find these 2 sliders too close to each other not dat close
2. 01:08:008 (3,4,5,6) - Is there a reason these sliders are so close to each other compared to other 1/4 sliders? wat doo u mean the ds is all the same lul
3. 02:13:579 (4,5,6) - ^
4. 03:57:722 (2,3,4,5) - ^
5. 01:34:365 (4,5,6) - straighten these up with 01:33:936 (3) - ?
6. 03:17:650 (1) - make this slider less curvy? blanketing

Sorry but I can only mod this diff... Normal is fine but I can't really find anything else to say on the Insanes :/

Good luck! >~<

Pituophis wrote:

Alright, Just some suggestions.
Error
00:44:597 (5) - I think this should start here 00:44:543 - on the blue tick listen in 50%, it should start at yellow tick
00:51:454 (6) - ^ similar to above same
01:01:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels like it plays better like this: is mostly the same i think

.^.

01:19:954 (3) - 1/6 also Whistle
01:20:008 (4) - whistle
01:30:508 (1,2,3) - ending these on blue ticks feels better to me extending the sound to yellow tick is to express the sound here
02:21:936 (2) - end slider on 02:22:650 - 1/6
03:39:079 (1,2,3) - same as 01:30:508 (1,2,3) - same

That's all I can think of

Neanmoins wrote:

from queue

Normal
02:21:936 - 你试试把break的起始位置改到这里看看
03:14:650 (2) - 这里摆上面点？ds有点超
03:36:508 (3,4) - 这是不是没包好啊，3的头那里有点出来

Hard
01:08:008 (3,4,5) - 感觉有点挤，可以像 00:54:293 (4,5,6) - 这样摆开一点
03:57:722 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:21:936 - 同normal
03:00:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hard这么摆会不会too hard，要不要弄成3个往返滑条 其實不會很難 BPM沒有很高

Error
00:58:365 (1) - 你把这个移到247|66然后用00:57:936 (6) - 包一下吧，这里叠得不太好看 主要用意不是要包起來

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

dont even try to DT :>

gl

Litharrale wrote:

Nm from my queue
1|2|3|4
It's interesting that the filename of your bg seems to imply it used to be 1080p, yet now it's a much lower resolution...why?
Not sure why you have hitsounds in the second set when you dont even have first set hitsounds

wait
what the frug
this is standard....you know my queue is mania right?...

>_>

1. 整體太單調了，像00:20:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 01:01:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 都是全程完全複製粘貼。試著增加不同的樣式，這方面Chaoz's Insane 就富有非常多的變化，各處連打和二連都是相似而不雷同
   
2. 03:10:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 具體就是這個可以試試和Insane 的03:32:650 (3,4,5,6,1) - 一樣用不同距離漸變的二連，採用從小變大。然後03:16:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 換成从大变小。03:23:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 最後一次全部大距離。這樣不僅給人的印象更深，而且避免了重複的單調
   
3. 03:33:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同樣是完全複製粘貼而且使用率過高非常單調，堆六個本身也較挫，三個一組可以有更多樣式
   
4. 02:50:222 (1,1,1,1) - 這裡器樂明顯比人聲要強，跟人聲使人混淆。也是對比Insane 難度，他用了完全一樣的梗02:57:936 (1,1,1,1) - 就安排在了器樂區
   
5. 03:00:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 比較挫的連打，而且數字組略大。
   
6. 長達四分鐘的短圖，Hard 也是複製嚴重……實在提不起興趣

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  [Normal]

1. 00:09:079 (1,1) - blanket miss
   
   image

   
2. 00:26:222 (3) - It overlaps the HP bar
3. 01:02:222 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I think the sound is too tight
   01:03:722 (4,4) - I think it is okay to erase it here
4. 01:34:579 - How about adding a circle here?
5. 02:07:365 (1,3) - This slider is not parallel
   
   I piled up for the image

   
6. 03:00:508 (1) - 03:01:793 - Spinner end is better here
7. 03:10:793 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) -
   01:02:222 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - same

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  [Hard]

1. 01:27:400 - If it's Hard, I think that you can pick up the sound here
2. 01:53:222 (5) - I think this can be a kick slider
   01:53:329 - The sound here should pick up
3. 02:43:365 (1) - remove NC
   02:39:936 (5) - If you use NC you need NC here as well
4. 03:35:972 - 01:27:400 - same
5. 03:37:365 (3,4) - I think that it is a little far.
   01:28:793 (3,4) - What is the difference?
6. 03:41:222 (4,1) - overlap
7. 03:49:686 - 01:27:400 - same

Narcissu wrote:

[Error]

1. 整體太單調了，像00:20:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 01:01:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 都是全程完全複製粘貼。試著增加不同的樣式，這方面Chaoz's Insane 就富有非常多的變化，各處連打和二連都是相似而不雷同 每個mapper都有不同個風格 我是主要以consistent來作圖的, 為何? consistent mapping可以讓玩家打圖的時候比較順, 在一首歌內許多相同的音, 玩家打了第一次之後就會expect下個同樣音的地方也是同樣的結構, 就好比說你提的00:20:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 跟其他相同的地方 等等
   
2. 03:10:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 具體就是這個可以試試和Insane 的03:32:650 (3,4,5,6,1) - 一樣用不同距離漸變的二連，採用從小變大。然後03:16:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 換成从大变小。03:23:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 最後一次全部大距離。這樣不僅給人的印象更深，而且避免了重複的單調 這可接受 會把kiai部分地方都改一改
   
3. 03:33:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同樣是完全複製粘貼而且使用率過高非常單調，堆六個本身也較挫，三個一組可以有更多樣式 其實這邊我是要看大家的MOD之後最後決定要怎麼MAP, 先空著八
   
4. 02:50:222 (1,1,1,1) - 這裡器樂明顯比人聲要強，跟人聲使人混淆。也是對比Insane 難度，他用了完全一樣的梗02:57:936 (1,1,1,1) - 就安排在了器樂區 只是單純的rhythn choice問題, 我覺得這邊跟人聲更能比較好表達音樂
   
5. 03:00:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 比較挫的連打，而且數字組略大。沒啥問題
   
6. 長達四分鐘的短圖，Hard 也是複製嚴重……實在提不起興趣 沒關西每個MAPPER都有不同看法

• 00:18:508 (6,7,8) - Ok so what i didn t understand here is your emphasize you have a clap on 00:19:150 (8) - which is a important sound and a DS between 00:18:508 (6,7) - is bigger than between 00:18:936 (7,8) - and it should be opposite cause u are trying to emphasize these important sounds right?
  
  00:29:436 (3) - Again no emphasize on this one and since you are stacking a lot you can stack these 00:29:436 (3,1)
  
  00:32:865 (1) - Maybe stack this one on 00:33:508 (3) - slider head instead of end just to have better emphasize on 00:32:865 (1) - and 00:33:293 (2) - and since they are important sounds it will fit perfect
  
  00:39:508 (9,10,11) - You can move them a little bit down so 00:39:722 (11) - is stacked with 00:38:650 (4)
  
  00:39:936 (1,2,3,4) - Music in these 4 isnt getting intensier or anything and I know you are emphasizing 00:40:150 (2,3) - by increasing DS cause they are important sounds but idk why you are having such a massive jump like the biggest in whole this part on this slider 00:40:579 (4) - that slider is literally nothing and idk why u are putting such a big DS. I suggest you to decrease DS between 00:40:365 (3,4).
  
  00:57:936 (6,1,2) - Weird overlap. You can avoid it if you blanket 00:57:936 (6,1) - these
  
  01:00:293 (1) - Ctrl+G you will get a better emphasize on important sound and on the next sound
  
  01:09:936 (4) - Really bad emphasize. 01:09:615 (3,4,5) - Same DS between them all and there is a bigger time gap between 01:09:615 (3,4) - plus there is a strong sound on 01:09:936 (4) - but still you made it the same DS with 01:09:936 (4,5). Buff up this one a lil 01:09:936 (4).I mean part before that one and after are all spaced and good but this one I think its a little bit under mapped.
  
  01:17:222 (7,1) - Avoid overlap pls
  
  01:30:936 (3,1) - ^
  
  01:40:472 (2) - Why is this a overlap you can make a blanket with 01:39:936 (1,2) - just like u did with the first part
  
  01:43:365 (1) - Ok so every sound that was exactly like this one you didn't stack it for example 00:17:650 (1) - 00:24:508 (1) - 00:31:365 (1) - 00:38:222 (1) - 01:50:222 (1) - 01:57:079 (1) - etc u get what I'm saying. If you won t change it then stack this one 01:42:293 (4) - on the slider end of 01:43:365 (1)
  
  02:39:936 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You spaced these so much and idk why the music is same the whole time

• 00:10:793 (1) - What are you doing with this note? I don t get it for the emphasize you can either stack it or avoid overlap and make a bigger DS between them 00:10:365 (3,1)
  
  00:18:508 (3,4,5) - Why such a big DS between them its literally the same DS as 00:18:079 (2,3) - and 00:18:508 (3) - is a strong sound which should be emphasized
  
  00:21:936 (3,4) - I think these are mapped wrong. You put slider on 2 important sounds and slider end ending on important sound is not that big of an emphasize i would recommend you to put a circle on slider head and start a new slider on slider end so you have emphasize on both strong sounds and since 00:22:365 (4) - this one is not important it will be on slider end.
  
  00:23:222 (2) - Important sound and you but such a low DS between 00:22:793 (1,2) - and such a big DS between 00:23:222 (2,3) - what are you emphasizing here ?
  
  00:31:365 (1,2,3,4) - ^ another bad emphasize part
  
  00:31:900 (4) - You put strong sound on slider end
  
  00:32:650 (7) - ^
  
  00:33:079 (1) - ^
  
  00:36:079 (6) - ^
  
  00:37:793 (7) - ^
  
  00:39:508 (7) - ^ (for me to point out every slider you did that is just pointless i just want to know why u did it like that cause slider ends should be on important sounds)
  
  01:00:722 (2,3) - Why u stack them there is no reason to its 2 different sounds
  
  01:14:436 (2,3) - ^
  
  01:17:436 (3) - This should be more emphasized increase DS
  
  02:16:579 (4) - This one shouldn't have so big DS and what im trying to say with that is that DS should be lower between 02:16:365 (3,4) - thatn between 02:15:936 (1,2,3)

• Only thing I can say here is why is OD 5 its a 1.7* diff nerf it a little bit

1. maybe you can change the order of the combo colors so the grey are not together http://puu.sh/v1WUc/1af89a1c0d.png since they do look kind of similar
2. 00:42:186 (2,3) - more spacing is needed here, since there is 1/2 time between them not 1/4
3. 01:04:150 (2) - maybe change this to 1/4 slider since there is a little piano sound at the blue and to make this part more interesting
4. 01:19:579 (2) - curve it more to look more similar with 01:20:222 (5) -
5. 01:30:936 (3,1) - overlapping
6. 01:47:008 (2,3,4) - i think this is pretty easy to get the timing confused since the spacing between them seem too similar
7. 01:50:008 (7,8,1) - check blanket lol
8. 02:00:508 (1) - maybe 1/2 slider and circle? to map the vocal on the white tick
9. 02:19:793 (3,4) - spacing seems a little too large
10. 02:48:508 - 02:55:365 - i guess its fine as it is right now, but a lot of funky sounds that are being skipped in favor of more simple rhythm. it seems weird because of how technical the rest of the map is, theres no reason to be so simple in this part
11. 03:01:258 (8,9,10,11,12) - the curve looks kinda sloppy
12. 03:08:650 (7,4) - maybe try stacking?
13. 03:39:508 (3,2) - overlapping

1. maybe OD=8
2. 00:37:686 (6,7) - 00:44:543 (5,6) - 00:51:400 (4,5) - etc. i really don't like these because the sliders are just so short its hard to see what is going on. maybe you can try not stacking them on the next one? or simply just change it to a circle instead, i don't think we need the 1/8 sliders for this since its not even the hardest diff. theres a lot more of these but i wont mention anymore
3. 00:57:936 (1,2) - theres no sound at the red actually.. maybe just a 1/2 slider would be much better
4. 00:58:365 (1) - delete NC
5. 01:11:650 (4,5) - this sounds seriously overmapped, theres no 1/6 here
6. 01:21:936 (5) - no good reason to 1/8, circle would be better imo
7. 01:27:079 (3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - how to read this properly.. plz this is just insane
8. 01:33:508 (1,2) - why not just stack them
9. 01:34:365 (3,4,5) - so hard. i dont think this should be acceptable for diff spread
10. 01:36:508 - forgot to turn off kiai time?
11. 02:27:508 (4) - delete whistle on sliderbody
12. 02:32:865 (3) - ^
13. 02:40:365 (1,2) - switch nc for consistency with 02:37:222 (3,1) -
14. 02:51:936 (1,1) - try not to stack these since the next slider is so short
15. 03:03:079 (1) - try starting it on the blue tick 03:02:972 - if you are mapping the breath
16. 03:06:508 (1,2) - overmpped imo, just 1/2 slider would be fine
17. 03:20:222 (4,5) - ^
18. 03:30:508 (5) - just circle
19. 03:31:365 - same stuff as in the first wub section

1. 00:42:936 (1,1,1) - maybe try putting these in different places because stacking it and making the player wait around so much is kinda boring
2. 01:36:508 - insert break
3. 01:46:793 (1,3) - almsot overlapping
4. 02:39:936 (5) - nc
5. 03:59:008 (1) - delete spinner or add this to your error diff to get the same play length

1. maybe OD=4
2. 00:21:936 (2,5) - not sure about this, maybe its unreadable for normal players
3. 00:42:508 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - strange that this is more dense on the normal than hard, maybe you need to add some stuff here on the hard
4. 01:15:936 (3) - NC
5. 01:36:508 - break