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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, December 23, 2017 at 11:44:04 AM

Artist: Jewel
Title: What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.)
Tags: Marianna Greensleeves cover trust fund baby countdown to happy everyone Kilcher Let It Snow: A Holiday Collection jesus christmas hymm KoyomicNC Mary carol
BPM: 178.5
Filesize: 6485kb
Play Time: 02:34
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Download: Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.)
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Marianna's Blessing mapped by Marianna
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This is Speed Up Ver. not Nightcore Mix

Nightcore stands for speed up songs with techno/trance/dance as genre.

If you want proofs, here some examples of:
And, if you want to read a article that says something about this, try reading this: http://www.nightcoreuniverse.net/viewto ... f=17&t=930
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MkGuh wrote:
This is Speed Up Ver. not Nightcore Mix

Nightcore stands for speed up songs with techno/trance/dance as genre.

If you want proofs, here some examples of:
And, if you want to read a article that says something about this, try reading this: http://www.nightcoreuniverse.net/viewto ... f=17&t=930

fixed

here's meta proof: http://www.jeweljk.com/music.html
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Mod from the Christmas Queue! Image


even though it's not in the map list yet edit: and it wont be til the set is finished jon plz


irc
trigger warning: includes roasting of cheeto sliders
Code:
20:38 Noffy: sure >:3
20:39 Jonawaga: yeah
20:39 Noffy: well I mean if I can actually find anything sure xD
20:39 Noffy: 00:15:332 (1) -  why isn't this slider symmetrical on the y axis this is an affront to symmetry 
20:39 *Noffy is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131245 Jewel - What Child Is This (Nightcore Mix) [Easy]]
20:40 Jonawaga: why isn't widescreen support on
20:41 Jonawaga: ah true
20:41 Jonawaga: ok just a sec
20:41 Jonawaga: why isn't there world peace
20:41 Noffy: because it has yet to be done
20:42 Jonawaga: fixed
20:42 Jonawaga: tru
20:42 Noffy: :3
20:42 Noffy: 00:07:265 (1,2) -  how come you used 1.2 spacing here and 00:09:281 (3,4) - here?
20:43 Jonawaga: hm?
20:43 Jonawaga: easy or normal?
20:43 Noffy: easy
20:45 Jonawaga: uh
20:45 Noffy: ?
20:45 Jonawaga: you're totally correct about this
20:45 Noffy: ya
20:45 Jonawaga: it's just hard to fix because blankets ans symmetry ;-;
20:46 Noffy: ;v;
20:46 Jonawaga: and*
20:46 Noffy: ikno
20:46 Jonawaga: 00:08:273 (2,1) - is it ok if this is 1.2x?
20:47 Noffy: I think so, it's less noticable when they're not as close together
20:47 Jonawaga: uh
20:47 Jonawaga: I made it
20:47 Noffy: !!
20:47 Jonawaga: 1.16x
20:47 Noffy: nice
20:47 Jonawaga: close enough!
20:47 Noffy: yes!
20:47 Noffy: 00:16:340 (2) -  I think a shape like this would work better: http://puu.sh/stxTM/5bd308b5b3.jpg
20:48 Jonawaga: are u roasting my cheeto slider
20:48 Noffy: it gives the same general kind of movement while being a nice non-cheeto slider
20:48 Noffy: yus
20:48 Jonawaga: I totally agree
20:48 Noffy: 00:20:374 (2) -  (copy paste the other 1 if you do)
20:50 Jonawaga: done
20:50 Jonawaga: fixed
20:50 Noffy: 00:32:475 (2,3) - these look a bit weak to somewhat-but-not-really-wave
20:50 Noffy: maybe http://puu.sh/sty3M/8a5180055a.jpg >:3
20:51 Jonawaga: that would make the flow 00:33:483 (3,4) - here worse
20:51 Jonawaga: but
20:52 Noffy: hmm or
20:52 Noffy: more intense waves
20:52 Jonawaga: it would make the flow 00:31:466 (1,2) - here better
20:52 Noffy: >:3
20:52 Jonawaga: HM
20:52 Noffy: HM
20:54 Jonawaga: waves intensified~
20:54 Noffy: !!
20:54 Noffy: yay
20:54 Jonawaga: and
20:54 Jonawaga: 00:35:500 (1) - fix stack
20:54 Noffy: !!
20:54 Noffy: 00:40:542 (2,3) -  THESE R NICE
20:54 Jonawaga: thanks
20:55 Jonawaga: gotta love those blanketing wave functions
20:55 Jonawaga: used those in the mapping challenge :3
20:55 Noffy: :3
20:56 Jonawaga: btw I changed the circles to snowflakes
20:56 Jonawaga: ./barely/
20:56 Noffy: \barely?
20:56 Noffy: 00:49:617 (3) - try to revise this slider so that the center makes a nice teardrop shape?
20:56 Jonawaga: the shape is still pretty circular :p
20:56 Noffy: I see :3
20:58 Jonawaga: http://puu.sh/stym6/72dca3f50e.jpg
20:58 Jonawaga: ya mean like that?
20:58 Jonawaga: it's a no if that's what you mean owo
20:58 Noffy: yes like that-
20:58 Noffy: o
20:58 Noffy: oki owo
20:58 Noffy: 01:10:794 (2) -  what is this w;;w
20:59 Jonawaga: the tricurve slider >///<
20:59 Jonawaga: plz don't complain abou that
20:59 Jonawaga: it's beautiful
20:59 Noffy: oki
20:59 Noffy: then
21:00 Noffy: I think make the middle less intense
21:00 Jonawaga: it's a slider I used in this map
21:00 Noffy: http://puu.sh/styrX/338abcc5e6.jpg
21:00 *Jonawaga is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/907975 monaca:factory feat. Hatsune Miku & GUMI - Guu-Paa Star [Hard]]
21:00 Jonawaga: ok
21:00 Jonawaga: but not /too/ unintense
21:01 Noffy: yea!
21:01 Jonawaga: cuz then it plays like a straight line owo
21:01 Noffy: yeah xD
21:01 Noffy: just so it's more obviously a tricurve! cause the ones on the edge are barely curves compared to the middle
21:02 Noffy: o1:30:810 - why the manually extended break?
21:02 Jonawaga: fir impact
21:02 Jonawaga: so BRING
21:02 Jonawaga: HIM INCENSE GOLD AND MYRRH
21:02 Noffy: 02:03:231 (2) - 
21:02 Noffy: omg
21:03 Noffy: 02:09:281 (2) -  this isn't exactly symmetrical btw right is higher than left
21:04 Jonawaga: fixed
21:04 Noffy: 02:22:391 (1,2,3,4) -  o no it's the beginning
21:05 Jonawaga: xd
21:05 Noffy: xd
21:06 Jonawaga: can we take a short break for me to ask questions?
21:06 Jonawaga: a) is it bad that I only use whistle and finishes?
21:06 Jonawaga: b) is my timing at the end correct?
21:08 Noffy: I beleive the timing at the end is correct
21:08 Jonawaga: !
21:08 Jonawaga: yay
21:08 Noffy: the hitsounding sounds nice and goes well with it since it's all piano+vocal
21:09 Jonawaga: it's piano+vocal+strings if I'm correct owo
21:09 Noffy: yes owo
21:10 Jonawaga: 01:12:811 -
21:10 Jonawaga: occasional triangle
21:10 Jonawaga: bell
21:10 Jonawaga: whatever that chime is
21:10 Jonawaga: 01:25:920 -
21:10 Jonawaga: and a guitar!
21:11 Noffy: but _mostly_
21:11 Jonawaga: yeah
21:11 Jonawaga: mostly
21:11 Jonawaga: anyway, onto normal!
21:11 Noffy: !
21:12 Noffy: lemme play it through again to get a feel for it overall first
21:12 Noffy: :3
21:12 Jonawaga: oki
21:12 Jonawaga: uwu
21:12 Jonawaga: you're testing
21:12 Noffy: uwu
21:12 Jonawaga: I was hoping to spec
21:12 Noffy: yes
21:12 Noffy: so if something drives me insane I can instapause and be like
21:12 Noffy: "YO
21:12 Jonawaga: xd
21:13 Noffy: 00:11:298 (1,2,3,4) -  i.e. why aren't these 1/1 sliders like  00:13:315 (5) - 
21:14 Noffy: ok I'll play-play it now xD
21:15 *Noffy is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131246 Jewel - What Child Is This (Nightcore Mix) [Normal]]
21:15 Noffy: >:3
21:16 Jonawaga: srry had to step out owo
21:16 Noffy: welcome back owo
21:17 Jonawaga: thanks
21:17 Jonawaga: rhythmic variety
21:17 Noffy: wait brb GONNA GET PIE BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE
21:17 Jonawaga: lit
21:17 Jonawaga: it was to emphasize the strings while still making 00:11:970 - this clikcable
21:22 Noffy: ahhh I sees
21:22 Noffy: also back
21:22 Noffy: hi
21:25 Noffy: in that case, it's kind of odd that the circles don't follow the curve of the sliders
21:26 Noffy: and I reccomend trying to find a way to make them do so, cause currently having them a bit out of the way makes it weirdish to play ;
21:28 Jonawaga: fixed
21:28 Noffy: 00:57:685 (1,2) -   (same thing)
21:28 Jonawaga: continue plz
21:28 Noffy: 01:01:718 (1,2) -  pl z 
21:30 Jonawaga: an it improves after that!
21:30 Noffy: :D!
21:32 Noffy: 01:54:155 (1,2) -  ;w; 
21:32 Jonawaga: it's a copy/paste section
21:32 Noffy: overall
21:32 Noffy: this diff is nice
21:32 Noffy: :D
21:32 Noffy: yeah I noticed xD
21:32 Jonawaga: I just finished redoing the copy/paste section
21:32 Jonawaga: thanks
21:32 Noffy: 02:26:424 (1,2,3,4) -  same for 
21:33 Noffy: copypastesectrions
21:34 Jonawaga: arenowfixed
21:34 Jonawaga: i
21:34 Jonawaga: i assumed you're done
21:34 Noffy: yes
21:34 Jonawaga: uploading
21:34 Jonawaga: done
21:34 Noffy: I am gonna post mod
21:34 Noffy: nao
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even though it's not in the map list yet


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trigger warning: includes roasting of cheeto sliders
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20:38 Noffy: sure >:3
20:39 Jonawaga: yeah
20:39 Noffy: well I mean if I can actually find anything sure xD
20:39 Noffy: 00:15:332 (1) -  why isn't this slider symmetrical on the y axis this is an affront to symmetry 
20:39 *Noffy is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131245 Jewel - What Child Is This (Nightcore Mix) [Easy]]
20:40 Jonawaga: why isn't widescreen support on
20:41 Jonawaga: ah true
20:41 Jonawaga: ok just a sec
20:41 Jonawaga: why isn't there world peace
20:41 Noffy: because it has yet to be done
20:42 Jonawaga: fixed
20:42 Jonawaga: tru
20:42 Noffy: :3
20:42 Noffy: 00:07:265 (1,2) -  how come you used 1.2 spacing here and 00:09:281 (3,4) - here?
20:43 Jonawaga: hm?
20:43 Jonawaga: easy or normal?
20:43 Noffy: easy
20:45 Jonawaga: uh
20:45 Noffy: ?
20:45 Jonawaga: you're totally correct about this
20:45 Noffy: ya
20:45 Jonawaga: it's just hard to fix because blankets ans symmetry ;-;
20:46 Noffy: ;v;
20:46 Jonawaga: and*
20:46 Noffy: ikno
20:46 Jonawaga: 00:08:273 (2,1) - is it ok if this is 1.2x?
20:47 Noffy: I think so, it's less noticable when they're not as close together
20:47 Jonawaga: uh
20:47 Jonawaga: I made it
20:47 Noffy: !!
20:47 Jonawaga: 1.16x
20:47 Noffy: nice
20:47 Jonawaga: close enough!
20:47 Noffy: yes!
20:47 Noffy: 00:16:340 (2) -  I think a shape like this would work better: http://puu.sh/stxTM/5bd308b5b3.jpg
20:48 Jonawaga: are u roasting my cheeto slider
20:48 Noffy: it gives the same general kind of movement while being a nice non-cheeto slider
20:48 Noffy: yus
20:48 Jonawaga: I totally agree
20:48 Noffy: 00:20:374 (2) -  (copy paste the other 1 if you do)
20:50 Jonawaga: done
20:50 Jonawaga: fixed
20:50 Noffy: 00:32:475 (2,3) - these look a bit weak to somewhat-but-not-really-wave
20:50 Noffy: maybe http://puu.sh/sty3M/8a5180055a.jpg >:3
20:51 Jonawaga: that would make the flow 00:33:483 (3,4) - here worse
20:51 Jonawaga: but
20:52 Noffy: hmm or
20:52 Noffy: more intense waves
20:52 Jonawaga: it would make the flow 00:31:466 (1,2) - here better
20:52 Noffy: >:3
20:52 Jonawaga: HM
20:52 Noffy: HM
20:54 Jonawaga: waves intensified~
20:54 Noffy: !!
20:54 Noffy: yay
20:54 Jonawaga: and
20:54 Jonawaga: 00:35:500 (1) - fix stack
20:54 Noffy: !!
20:54 Noffy: 00:40:542 (2,3) -  THESE R NICE
20:54 Jonawaga: thanks
20:55 Jonawaga: gotta love those blanketing wave functions
20:55 Jonawaga: used those in the mapping challenge :3
20:55 Noffy: :3
20:56 Jonawaga: btw I changed the circles to snowflakes
20:56 Jonawaga: ./barely/
20:56 Noffy: \barely?
20:56 Noffy: 00:49:617 (3) - try to revise this slider so that the center makes a nice teardrop shape?
20:56 Jonawaga: the shape is still pretty circular :p
20:56 Noffy: I see :3
20:58 Jonawaga: http://puu.sh/stym6/72dca3f50e.jpg
20:58 Jonawaga: ya mean like that?
20:58 Jonawaga: it's a no if that's what you mean owo
20:58 Noffy: yes like that-
20:58 Noffy: o
20:58 Noffy: oki owo
20:58 Noffy: 01:10:794 (2) -  what is this w;;w
20:59 Jonawaga: the tricurve slider >///<
20:59 Jonawaga: plz don't complain abou that
20:59 Jonawaga: it's beautiful
20:59 Noffy: oki
20:59 Noffy: then
21:00 Noffy: I think make the middle less intense
21:00 Jonawaga: it's a slider I used in this map
21:00 Noffy: http://puu.sh/styrX/338abcc5e6.jpg
21:00 *Jonawaga is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/907975 monaca:factory feat. Hatsune Miku & GUMI - Guu-Paa Star [Hard]]
21:00 Jonawaga: ok
21:00 Jonawaga: but not /too/ unintense
21:01 Noffy: yea!
21:01 Jonawaga: cuz then it plays like a straight line owo
21:01 Noffy: yeah xD
21:01 Noffy: just so it's more obviously a tricurve! cause the ones on the edge are barely curves compared to the middle
21:02 Noffy: o1:30:810 - why the manually extended break?
21:02 Jonawaga: fir impact
21:02 Jonawaga: so BRING
21:02 Jonawaga: HIM INCENSE GOLD AND MYRRH
21:02 Noffy: 02:03:231 (2) - 
21:02 Noffy: omg
21:03 Noffy: 02:09:281 (2) -  this isn't exactly symmetrical btw right is higher than left
21:04 Jonawaga: fixed
21:04 Noffy: 02:22:391 (1,2,3,4) -  o no it's the beginning
21:05 Jonawaga: xd
21:05 Noffy: xd
21:06 Jonawaga: can we take a short break for me to ask questions?
21:06 Jonawaga: a) is it bad that I only use whistle and finishes?
21:06 Jonawaga: b) is my timing at the end correct?
21:08 Noffy: I beleive the timing at the end is correct
21:08 Jonawaga: !
21:08 Jonawaga: yay
21:08 Noffy: the hitsounding sounds nice and goes well with it since it's all piano+vocal
21:09 Jonawaga: it's piano+vocal+strings if I'm correct owo
21:09 Noffy: yes owo
21:10 Jonawaga: 01:12:811 -
21:10 Jonawaga: occasional triangle
21:10 Jonawaga: bell
21:10 Jonawaga: whatever that chime is
21:10 Jonawaga: 01:25:920 -
21:10 Jonawaga: and a guitar!
21:11 Noffy: but _mostly_
21:11 Jonawaga: yeah
21:11 Jonawaga: mostly
21:11 Jonawaga: anyway, onto normal!
21:11 Noffy: !
21:12 Noffy: lemme play it through again to get a feel for it overall first
21:12 Noffy: :3
21:12 Jonawaga: oki
21:12 Jonawaga: uwu
21:12 Jonawaga: you're testing
21:12 Noffy: uwu
21:12 Jonawaga: I was hoping to spec
21:12 Noffy: yes
21:12 Noffy: so if something drives me insane I can instapause and be like
21:12 Noffy: "YO
21:12 Jonawaga: xd
21:13 Noffy: 00:11:298 (1,2,3,4) -  i.e. why aren't these 1/1 sliders like  00:13:315 (5) - 
21:14 Noffy: ok I'll play-play it now xD
21:15 *Noffy is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131246 Jewel - What Child Is This (Nightcore Mix) [Normal]]
21:15 Noffy: >:3
21:16 Jonawaga: srry had to step out owo
21:16 Noffy: welcome back owo
21:17 Jonawaga: thanks
21:17 Jonawaga: rhythmic variety
21:17 Noffy: wait brb GONNA GET PIE BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE
21:17 Jonawaga: lit
21:17 Jonawaga: it was to emphasize the strings while still making 00:11:970 - this clikcable
21:22 Noffy: ahhh I sees
21:22 Noffy: also back
21:22 Noffy: hi
21:25 Noffy: in that case, it's kind of odd that the circles don't follow the curve of the sliders
21:26 Noffy: and I reccomend trying to find a way to make them do so, cause currently having them a bit out of the way makes it weirdish to play ;
21:28 Jonawaga: fixed
21:28 Noffy: 00:57:685 (1,2) -   (same thing)
21:28 Jonawaga: continue plz
21:28 Noffy: 01:01:718 (1,2) -  pl z 
21:30 Jonawaga: an it improves after that!
21:30 Noffy: :D!
21:32 Noffy: 01:54:155 (1,2) -  ;w; 
21:32 Jonawaga: it's a copy/paste section
21:32 Noffy: overall
21:32 Noffy: this diff is nice
21:32 Noffy: :D
21:32 Noffy: yeah I noticed xD
21:32 Jonawaga: I just finished redoing the copy/paste section
21:32 Jonawaga: thanks
21:32 Noffy: 02:26:424 (1,2,3,4) -  same for 
21:33 Noffy: copypastesectrions
21:34 Jonawaga: arenowfixed
21:34 Jonawaga: i
21:34 Jonawaga: i assumed you're done
21:34 Noffy: yes
21:34 Jonawaga: uploading
21:34 Jonawaga: done
21:34 Noffy: I am gonna post mod
21:34 Noffy: nao

thanks for modding fam
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Marianna missing in tags

idk what's up with ur sb but the bg is a different size during the break

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Blessing


00:59:029 (4,5) - these are really really close, to the point that i assumed they'd be 1/2 distance

uh i guess thats it, some weird stuff like how 02:22:391 (1) - is still 1.0x sv when the similar in intensity intro was .7x, but i guess there's reason for that so whateverr

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  • 00:12:307 (3,4) - think you should try just this rhythm to fit the instrumental better, or if you really need to make that a repeat slider
  • 01:19:870 - uh lol map this, it's too important of a beat to ignore just to follow strings...well i guess you can do like a 1/1 slider from 01:19:533 (4) - with a red point on the slidertick if you want for a similar effect that doesn't just totally ignore the downbeats you've been focusing on the rest of the map
  • 02:17:349 (2) - probably big overlappy sliders like this are too scary for Normal-level players, you can do fun sliderart but try not to completely intersect like this since Normal-level players don't have a good idea of how sliders move to know which way they should travel at the intersection

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00:49:617 (3) - , 01:42:054 (3) - , same as in Normal about sliderart, even moreso for Easy-level players, heavy overlappy sliderart is confusing for people who can barely play a straight slider properly

and i think you should revise 02:03:231 (2) - 's design, it's really scrunched up to the point that the sliderbody doesn't properly connect to the sliderends

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Marianna missing in tags fixed

idk what's up with ur sb but the bg is a different size during the break ill just put in some fades I'm sure it'll be fine

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  • 00:12:307 (3,4) - think you should try just this rhythm to fit the instrumental better, or if you really need to make that a repeat slider
  • 01:19:870 - uh lol map this, it's too important of a beat to ignore just to follow strings...well i guess you can do like a 1/1 slider from 01:19:533 (4) - with a red point on the slidertick if you want for a similar effect that doesn't just totally ignore the downbeats you've been focusing on the rest of the map
  • 02:17:349 (2) - probably big overlappy sliders like this are too scary for Normal-level players, you can do fun sliderart but try not to completely intersect like this since Normal-level players don't have a good idea of how sliders move to know which way they should travel at the intersection fixed all~

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Easy


00:49:617 (3) - , 01:42:054 (3) - , same as in Normal about sliderart, even moreso for Easy-level players, heavy overlappy sliderart is confusing for people who can barely play a straight slider properly fixed

and i think you should revise 02:03:231 (2) - 's design, it's really scrunched up to the point that the sliderbody doesn't properly connect to the sliderends adjusted slightly

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i am sleepy sorry for sleepy mod I was sleepy sorry for sleepy map.

Thanks for the mod >:3
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  • 00:11:298 - I think a whistle here would look great, because it would follow the violin


  • 01:10:794 (2) - If you do this, it will be perfect <3 02:03:231 (2) - same xd


  • 01:42:054 (3) - I think a long slider here does not go down very well, the vocals do not understand each other the last time you used them, so there's no need to do that


  • 02:30:331 - A circle here would fit very well, would follow the sound of the instrumental perfectly



Normal



  • 00:14:323 (5,6) - Maybe leaving a slider with a back to a circle is detrimental to the beauty of your map and worse, ruining the flow, I think this slider should be more "receptive" to the circle, leave it behind like this it is not good 00:14:996 (6,1) - This was super receptive and so the flow between these two 00:14:323 (5,1) - is not good at all


  • 01:09:786 (1,3) - 02:02:223 (1,2) - The flow of these two sliders is not good at all, maybe it's because they're the same slider pointing to the same place, maybe it breaks their symmetrical style a bit, leaving the session a bit repetitive and ugly


  • 01:17:685 - Here is one of the strongest beats on the map and you let it go, maybe that's a little bad in gameplay, wanting to click on that point and not be able to xd


  • 01:28:945 - Leaves this break consistent with those of other difficulties, please xd


  • 02:02:895 (1) - I do not think this is a good place for a NC, I advise you to remove it, for the sake of the consistency of your map xd


  • 02:19:365 - Here is a hit too strong to be a simple slidertail



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@Marianna fixed all except "01:10:794 (2) - If you do this, it will be perfect <3 02:03:231 (2) - same xd" because you didn't give a reason and it looked less attractive to me

Thanks for modding~!!
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2016-12-22 22:04 Ataraxia: i can mod the two diffs with you
2016-12-22 22:04 Jonawaga: yeah!
2016-12-22 22:04 Ataraxia: hey, what you think if i can do a portuguese mod with you ?
2016-12-22 22:05 Jonawaga: ....
2016-12-22 22:05 Jonawaga: a lot of translating
2016-12-22 22:05 Jonawaga: but let's go
2016-12-22 22:05 Ataraxia: HAHAHA
2016-12-22 22:05 Ataraxia: wait a minute
2016-12-22 22:05 Ataraxia: porque eu estou a aplicar mod (because in gonna apply a mod)
2016-12-22 22:05 Jonawaga: I see
2016-12-22 22:06 Ataraxia: Doone
2016-12-22 22:06 Ataraxia: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082089 Perfume - Nee (short ver.) [Ataraxia's Light Insane]]
2016-12-22 22:06 Ataraxia: ooh wait
2016-12-22 22:07 Ataraxia: i miss a thing
2016-12-22 22:07 Ataraxia: Done
2016-12-22 22:08 Jonawaga: good job~
2016-12-22 22:09 Ataraxia: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
2016-12-22 22:09 Ataraxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6873313
2016-12-22 22:10 Jonawaga: oh my
2016-12-22 22:10 Jonawaga: 22222222222222222
2016-12-22 22:10 Ataraxia: 2222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222
2016-12-22 22:10 Jonawaga: lets mod~
2016-12-22 22:10 Jonawaga: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131245 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Easy]]
2016-12-22 22:10 Ataraxia: o yas
2016-12-22 22:12 Ataraxia: omg its impossible mod easy, all easy is perfect maps
2016-12-22 22:13 Jonawaga: xd
2016-12-22 22:13 Jonawaga: thanks
2016-12-22 22:13 Jonawaga: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131246 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Normal]]
2016-12-22 22:13 Ataraxia: this is so relaxing
2016-12-22 22:13 Ataraxia: you map remenber me MKGuh maps
2016-12-22 22:15 Ataraxia: oooh wait jonny
2016-12-22 22:15 Ataraxia: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131245 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Easy]]
2016-12-22 22:15 Ataraxia: nazy thing : 02:09:281 (2) -  fix stack
2016-12-22 22:15 Ataraxia: FINALLY I FOUND A THING
2016-12-22 22:17 Jonawaga: omg
2016-12-22 22:17 Jonawaga: calm down
2016-12-22 22:17 Jonawaga: fixed fixed
2016-12-22 22:17 Ataraxia: Yesssssss
2016-12-22 22:20 Ataraxia: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131246 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Normal]]
2016-12-22 22:23 Ataraxia: 02:04:239 (1,2) - 
2016-12-22 22:23 Ataraxia: holy this is perfect
2016-12-22 22:23 Ataraxia: how u do thisssssssss
2016-12-22 22:23 Jonawaga: ctrl+g patterns
2016-12-22 22:23 Ataraxia: hehe
2016-12-22 22:24 Jonawaga: I map it backwards then ctrl+g
2016-12-22 22:24 Jonawaga: thanks :3
2016-12-22 22:24 Jonawaga: I hope you find something besides the stacks lol
2016-12-22 22:25 Ataraxia: i think this  02:14:996 (6,7) -  need be like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6873400 this]
2016-12-22 22:25 Ataraxia: to follow all map sense
2016-12-22 22:26 Jonawaga: it's called flow lol
2016-12-22 22:27 Ataraxia: ooooh
2016-12-22 22:27 Ataraxia: i see now
2016-12-22 22:27 Ataraxia: my b
2016-12-22 22:27 Jonawaga: xd fixed
2016-12-22 22:27 Ataraxia: xdddd
2016-12-22 22:27 Ataraxia: soo
2016-12-22 22:27 Ataraxia: its this HAHAHA
2016-12-22 22:27 Ataraxia: i will gonna do the irc with the mari now
2016-12-22 22:28 Jonawaga: cool
2016-12-22 22:28 Jonawaga: good luck~!
2016-12-22 22:28 Jonawaga: make sure he checks the other mods too ^^
2016-12-22 22:28 Ataraxia: completed
2016-12-22 22:28 Ataraxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6873416
2016-12-22 22:28 Ataraxia: in good modder
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19:51 LMT1996: umm first off, there's a timing issue
19:51 Jonawaga: oh dang
19:51 Jonawaga: what did I do?
19:51 LMT1996: uh
19:51 LMT1996: just halve the bpm
19:51 LMT1996: and double the sv
19:51 Jonawaga: hm?
19:52 LMT1996: the bpm is in fact 89.25
19:52 Jonawaga: exaplin
19:52 Jonawaga: what
19:52 LMT1996: check the downbeats :d
19:53 Jonawaga: ono
19:53 Jonawaga: I can't really
19:53 Jonawaga: halve a 3/4 song
19:53 Jonawaga: won't I have to third it?
19:53 LMT1996: nvm
19:53 Jonawaga: idk im not good at math anymore
19:53 LMT1996: leave it like that
19:53 LMT1996: it's probably not so important
19:54 LMT1996: the ending tho
19:54 LMT1996: not precise enough
19:54 Jonawaga: hopefully owo
19:57 LMT1996: uhh
19:57 LMT1996: try
19:57 LMT1996: 02:27:432 - 150bpm
19:57 LMT1996: 02:28:632 - 142bpm
19:57 LMT1996: 02:29:899 - 132bpm
19:57 LMT1996: unless someone else timed this for you then you'll probably want to consult that person
19:58 Jonawaga: nah it was self timed
19:59 LMT1996: 00:28:105 (2,3) - spacing :d
20:01 LMT1996: 00:40:542 (2,3) - ctrl+g for rhythm and rearrange so that the sliderhead has the correct emphasis https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6880004
20:03 LMT1996: 00:58:357 (2) - sliderhead isn't really on a strong beat (and ends on a stronger beat, which is more concerning)
20:04 Jonawaga: 00:40:542 (2,3) - here you messed up the spacing
20:04 Jonawaga: should be 1.2x
20:04 LMT1996: i was just trying to get the message across
20:04 LMT1996: don't mind the placement xd
20:05 Jonawaga: I see
20:05 Jonawaga: fixed all so far
20:05 LMT1996: 00:58:357 (2,3,4) - i actually think you have to come up with a different pattern here
20:06 LMT1996: since right now that double blanket doesn't emphasise anything recognisable
20:06 LMT1996: the first 2 makes sense, but the third one should be separate
20:09 LMT1996: 01:49:786 (3,4,1) - probably want to space it evenly since that is a potential misread?
20:09 Jonawaga: http://puu.sh/sZ25M/580d9aaded.jpg
20:09 Jonawaga: weird stack pattern ftw
20:09 Jonawaga: yeah
20:10 Jonawaga: fixed
20:12 LMT1996: 01:10:794 (1,2,3) - would buff the note density here a bit up
20:12 LMT1996: 01:11:802 (1,2,3,1) - so it's more fitting to this
20:13 LMT1996: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6880104
20:13 LMT1996: 01:13:819 (1,2,3,4) - seems unstructured
20:14 LMT1996: comparing with the rest of the patterns the clicking pattern is very different
20:14 LMT1996: 01:15:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vs. 01:13:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - , even tho there isn't something that stands out
20:15 LMT1996: 01:16:844 (4,5,6) - this is good tho because of the violin
20:15 Jonawaga: yeah definetly
20:15 LMT1996: 01:24:575 (3) - should be another 1/2 slider because consistency
20:16 Jonawaga: idea on how to fix 01:13:819 -
20:17 LMT1996: 01:15:836 (1,2,3,4) - sth like this
20:17 LMT1996: i'll give it a try
20:19 Jonawaga: http://puu.sh/sZ2EQ/d1c3cc437c.jpg
20:19 Jonawaga: this is bad cuz the reverse
20:19 LMT1996: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6880153 try mine
20:21 Jonawaga: ay yours is cool
20:21 Jonawaga: http://puu.sh/sZ2MB/158ae2f574.jpg
20:21 Jonawaga: this was my other
20:21 Jonawaga: but I like yours
20:22 LMT1996: that gap is probably too inconsistent with the rest of the rhythm pattern?
20:22 LMT1996: i'm talking about your other
20:23 LMT1996: 02:19:365 (1) - that extra spacing is probably not needed
20:23 LMT1996: but that's not really important
20:24 *LMT1996 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131246 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Normal]]
20:25 LMT1996: 00:11:298 (1,2,3) - why such different rhythm with 00:13:315 (4,5,6) -
20:27 Jonawaga: ok finally done with blessing wew
20:27 LMT1996: 01:19:533 (4) - 2 circles?
20:28 Jonawaga: because the piano does different things there
20:28 LMT1996: or
20:28 LMT1996: 01:18:861 (3) - this can be different
20:28 LMT1996: sec this is a bit hard
20:28 Jonawaga: at 1:18 fixed
20:29 Jonawaga: 00:11:298 (1,2,3) - this i dont get
20:29 LMT1996: so
20:29 LMT1996: the only different piano note i hear is this
20:29 LMT1996: 00:13:987 -
20:29 LMT1996: higher pitch than the previous
20:30 Jonawaga: oh
20:30 LMT1996: 00:12:307 (3) - this and 00:14:323 (5,6) - this are the same imo
20:30 LMT1996: also
20:30 LMT1996: 00:14:323 (5,6) - if these were just a slider
20:30 LMT1996: 00:14:996 (7,1) - these 2 can be more distinct
20:30 LMT1996: which is what the vocal is donig
20:30 LMT1996: doing*
20:31 LMT1996: 00:30:794 (6,7) - would make this a slider to differentiate from the rest of the notes
20:32 LMT1996: differentiate the 2 high pitch notes*
20:32 Jonawaga: I made
20:32 Jonawaga: 00:14:323 - / 00:14:659 - 1 slider
20:32 LMT1996: cool
20:33 Jonawaga: xd
20:33 Jonawaga: keep it going~
20:33 LMT1996: 01:15:836 (4,5) - 01:13:819 (1) - same as in blessing
20:34 Jonawaga: oh is is
20:34 Jonawaga: less structured?
20:35 LMT1996: yea has a completely different clicking pattern
20:35 LMT1996: kinda confusing
20:36 LMT1996: 01:49:113 (4) - nice slider but...
20:36 LMT1996: don't think lowering note density here fits the music
20:37 LMT1996: also the flow could be awkward
20:37 LMT1996: when it needs to be straightforward
20:37 Jonawaga: lol I'm still figuring out how to fix 01:14:491 (2) - this
20:37 Jonawaga: think I just got it
20:38 LMT1996: eh
20:38 LMT1996: i'd literally copy paste 01:15:836 (5,6) -
20:38 LMT1996: xd
20:38 LMT1996: you figured that out , it's good then
20:38 Jonawaga: ya and then I spend 1 minute staring at it
20:38 Jonawaga: until I realized about Ctrl+g
20:39 LMT1996: :D
20:39 LMT1996: i just ctrl+ j
20:39 LMT1996: or k i can't remember
20:39 Jonawaga: not even
20:39 Jonawaga: it's a literal copy/paste pattern
20:39 Jonawaga: and a minor ds change
20:40 LMT1996: yup xD
20:40 Jonawaga: 01:49:113 (4) - why do you wanna change this and not 00:56:676 (4) - this/
20:41 LMT1996: i missed it
20:41 LMT1996: xD
20:41 LMT1996: you probably want to change that too
20:41 Jonawaga: xd
20:42 *LMT1996 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131245 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Easy]]
20:42 LMT1996: 00:31:466 (1,4) - um not sure why the difference
20:43 LMT1996: there is a difference, but how you make it distinguishable isn't really "emphasised" here
20:44 Jonawaga: higher pitch made me excited lol
20:44 LMT1996: yup
20:44 LMT1996: but
20:44 Jonawaga: fixed
20:44 LMT1996: nice
20:44 LMT1996: 00:31:466 (1) - tbh
20:44 LMT1996: a better thing would be
20:45 LMT1996: just a 1/1 slider + a circle on that high pitch
20:45 LMT1996: but that's probably too hard to fix
20:45 Jonawaga: i don't wanna do that anyway
20:45 LMT1996: 00:34:491 (4) - that or you can break this up to 1/1 + 1 circle for the vocals
20:45 Jonawaga: simple 1 click reverse slider of 2/1 slider makes sense to me
20:46 Jonawaga: or*
20:48 LMT1996: 01:44:071 (1,2,3,4) - you stress the second beat instead of the first but 01:47:096 (1,2,3,4) - here you stress the first beat
20:48 LMT1996: i think it should be the other way round?
20:48 LMT1996: cus instruments stress the second one while the vocals stress the first
20:49 LMT1996: 02:07:265 (4,1) - sorry for breaking that symmetry but these shouldn't have the same representative pattern as these 02:04:239 (1,2) -
20:54 LMT1996: once you're done can you update the map?
20:54 LMT1996: I'd like to see how they play
20:56 Jonawaga: fixed fixed sure
20:56 LMT1996: xD
20:56 Jonawaga: it's up
20:58 LMT1996: top diff feels a lot better now
20:59 Jonawaga: updating again I forgot a combo
20:59 Jonawaga: yeah thanks ;3
20:59 Jonawaga: now I will be able to take some credit for that
21:00 LMT1996: 00:58:693 (2,3) - this is still cancer to play tho xd
21:00 Jonawaga: Marianna's Blessing mapped by Marianna
21:00 Jonawaga: and modded by Jonawaga
21:00 Jonawaga: thi-is is
21:00 LMT1996: 01:00:374 (3) - i'd also make this clean
21:01 Jonawaga: not thi-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-s is
21:01 LMT1996: :p
21:01 LMT1996: it would be more intuitive tho
21:01 LMT1996: 00:58:861 (3) - if you stacked this to (2)
21:01 LMT1996: but that's a concept you have to use consistently
21:01 LMT1996: which this map doesn't use that
21:02 Jonawaga: yeah ><
21:02 LMT1996: so going clean there is the best option i can think of
21:02 Jonawaga: just gotta change the patterns
21:02 LMT1996: tbh i like how this diff flows
21:02 LMT1996: it's just the rhythm was weird
21:04 LMT1996: 01:14:659 (3,4) - careful xd overlapping
21:04 LMT1996: the stack ruined it lol
21:04 Jonawaga: unstacked~
21:05 *LMT1996 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131246 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Normal]]
21:05 LMT1996: check your snapping
21:05 LMT1996: :V
21:05 LMT1996: actually
21:05 LMT1996: SV = 0.9 fixes it
21:06 LMT1996: shit
21:06 LMT1996: something
21:06 LMT1996: went horribly wrong
21:06 LMT1996: actually yeah 0.9 fixes most of them
21:07 LMT1996: wait wut
21:07 LMT1996: what's going on
21:08 LMT1996: the sv after the first kiai is correct
21:08 LMT1996: everything before that is unsnapped wtf
21:09 Jonawaga: did you notice the SV changes?
21:10 LMT1996: i noticed it or not
21:10 LMT1996: the sv right now is rip
21:10 Jonawaga: hm? not on my end
21:10 LMT1996: resubmit it?
21:11 LMT1996: Normal diff i'm saying
21:11 Jonawaga: ohhhh
21:12 LMT1996: yup something went horribly wrong in the normal diff
21:12 LMT1996: just resnap them i guess
21:14 Jonawaga: timing > recalc slider lenths
21:14 LMT1996: wew
21:15 Jonawaga: also fixed the cancer in belssing
21:15 LMT1996: :3
21:15 LMT1996: nice
21:16 LMT1996: that's probably it from it
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Why not silence the sliderslide?
Why you used PNG format for your BG? Convert it to JPG and it will save a lot of space!

Could you explain: https://puu.sh/tlFX5/264719f55d.png ?


Easy
02:19:365 (1) - Add a break after this note to keep consistency with other diffs.


Blessing
OD+1
00:34:491 (3) - Wrong snap on its end.
00:42:559 (2,1) - Blanket should be better.
00:58:693 (2,3,4) - Flow could be much better if you try this: https://puu.sh/tlFEr/2d85a6bbe1.png
01:01:718 (1,2) - Blanket does need to be improved.
01:20:878 (3,4) - They are too close, as to their sliderbody. Try this: https://puu.sh/tlFJi/740dad5564.png
02:17:349 (3) - Need a whistle on its head i guess.
02:19:365 (1) - Add a break after this note to prevent unexpected HP drain.
02:31:262 (1) - Adding a whistle would sounds great!

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Why not silence the sliderslide? Fixed~!
Why you used PNG format for your BG? Convert it to JPG and it will save a lot of space! Transparency for the storyboard, since I use the background in the storyboard with fading effects

Could you explain: https://puu.sh/tlFX5/264719f55d.png ? It appears that way inside the editor, but it goes away during gameplay


Easy
02:19:365 (1) - Add a break after this note to keep consistency with other diffs. Fixed~!


Blessing
OD+1 Fixed~!
00:34:491 (3) - Wrong snap on its end. Fixed~!
00:42:559 (2,1) - Blanket should be better. Fixed~!
00:58:693 (2,3,4) - Flow could be much better if you try this: https://puu.sh/tlFEr/2d85a6bbe1.png Changed differently
01:01:718 (1,2) - Blanket does need to be improved. Fixed~!
01:20:878 (3,4) - They are too close, as to their sliderbody. Try this: https://puu.sh/tlFJi/740dad5564.png Fixed~!
02:17:349 (3) - Need a whistle on its head i guess. Fixed~!
02:19:365 (1) - Add a break after this note to prevent unexpected HP drain. Fixed~!
02:31:262 (1) - Adding a whistle would sounds great! Fixed~!

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