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BlackY - Paradission [OsuMania]

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Critical_Star
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, January 3, 2017 at 11:59:02 PM

Artist: BlackY
Title: Paradission
Source: MÚSECA
Tags: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS Setsucom (セツコン) Fresh Chicken Spy
BPM: 154
Filesize: 4520kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. CS vs. Spy.K's Orange Lv.9 - 4Key (3.2 stars, 1117 notes)
  2. Green Lv.5 - 4Key (1.99 stars, 542 notes)
  3. WhiteCS vs. BlackFC Vermilion Lv.15 - 4Key (4.46 stars, 1551 notes)
Download: BlackY - Paradission
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Collab Orange
00:01:207 - - 01:03:934 - CS
01:03:934 - - 01:53:609 - Spy
Collab Vermillion
00:00:233 - - 00:14:064 - Fresh Chicken
00:14:064 - - 00:20:298 - CS
00:20:298 - - 00:26:532 - Fresh Chicken
00:26:532 - - 00:45:233 - CS
00:45:233 - - 00:57:700 - Fresh Chicken
00:57:700 - - 01:03:934 - CS
01:03:934 - - 01:11:726 - Fresh Chicken
01:11:726 - - 01:30:428 - CS
01:30:428 - - 01:36:661 - Fresh Chicken
01:36:661 - - 01:39:778 - CS
01:39:778 - - 01:50:687 - Fresh Chicken
01:50:687 - - 01:53:609 - CS

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Last edited by Critical_Star , edited 29 times in total.
Aruel
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MÚSECA everywhere 'w'
Critical_Star
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Another Lie
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Req mod from my queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/458742/start=120
You can ask for re-mod if this mod doesn't satisfied you :)
Green
00:12:116 (12116|3,12116|2,12311|0,12311|1,12506|0,12506|3,12700|2,12895|1) - you can make it like this http://puu.sh/swhBc.jpg since those sound are starting to low
00:27:700 (27700|2,27798|1,27895|0,27993|3) - well, i hear the two notes at first is low sound and the second two notes is higher. What i mean is, you can make it 2,1,3,4
00:28:674 (28674|1,28772|2,28869|0) - you can make them 2,3,4. they are from low to high pitch i guess.
Collab Orange CS's part
00:57:700 - you can add slow timing here, well between x0.75 until x0.85 then place x1.00 here 01:03:934 - (just a suggestion)
Also, notice me when bubbled. I'll shoot some stars
Critical_Star
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Another Lie wrote:

Req mod from my queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/458742/start=120
You can ask for re-mod if this mod doesn't satisfied you :)
Green
00:12:116 (12116|3,12116|2,12311|0,12311|1,12506|0,12506|3,12700|2,12895|1) - you can make it like this http://puu.sh/swhBc.jpg since those sound are starting to low nice
00:27:700 (27700|2,27798|1,27895|0,27993|3) - well, i hear the two notes at first is low sound and the second two notes is higher. What i mean is, you can make it 2,1,3,4 good
00:28:674 (28674|1,28772|2,28869|0) - you can make them 2,3,4. they are from low to high pitch i guess. rearranged here
Collab Orange CS's part
00:57:700 - you can add slow timing here, well between x0.75 until x0.85 then place x1.00 here 01:03:934 - (just a suggestion)hmm, i not planning to add some sv for now, but i will reconsider thanks!
Also, notice me when bubbled. I'll shoot some stars wow thank you for your support :)
thanks you Liee ;)
pocket-Gao
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pocket-Gao
hi :)

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Green
00:46:402 - 这里LN尾加个note好点
没别的问题

Collab Orange Lv.9
00:27:116 - 加1note
00:28:674 - ^
如果是抓琴音 01:07:441 (67441|1) - 是不是多了

Collab Vermilion Lv.15
00:00:233 - LN move to 00:00:428 - (?
00:18:739 - 2 note ,no other drum sounds
00:46:012 - I think you can change a note with a LN ,refer Harddiff
00:51:467 to 00:54:584 - is too hard than other time ;w;

不看stars 感觉2、3难度跨度有点大，但没别的大问题

good luck~
Critical_Star
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pocket-Gao wrote:

hi :)

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Green
00:46:402 - 这里LN尾加个note好点 好
没别的问题

Collab Orange Lv.9
00:27:116 - 加1note ke yi
00:28:674 - ^ ^

Collab Vermilion Lv.15
00:18:739 - 2 note ,no other drum sounds fixed

不看stars 感觉2、3难度跨度有点大，但没别的大问题 对，不过我觉得没问题吧，gap <1.5

good luck~
感谢小高~ :)
_Stan
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_Stan
hey cs~ :) 来摸了

|1|2|3|4|

Green Lv.5
  1. 00:27:700 - 根据音调，我认为1243比2134更合适，因为00:27:895 (27895|2) - 这个音明显在音调上比00:27:993 (27993|3) - 高
  2. 00:28:577 - 漏音??
  3. 00:29:551 (29551|1) -如果是抓lead piano这里可能ghost了，如果不是就不管这个
  4. 00:31:986 - 根据音调，我认为这里应该这样会更好更合适
    pic
Collab Orange Lv.9
  1. 00:47:181 - to 00:47:571 - 这一部分我觉得将00:47:181 (47181|1,47181|2) - 改成[34]，00:47:571 (47571|2,47571|3) - 改成[23] 更符合鼓点的打击，而且00:47:571 - 还避免了和00:47:863 (47863|0,47863|3) - 这里的连击
  2. 00:59:941 - 这里的double不是很理解
  3. 01:00:038 (60038|2,60038|3) - 你这里的两个note应该是要表达一个piano一个背景音，那么这里你也需要加一个note才对01:00:817 -
  4. 01:01:856 (61856|0,61921|1,61986|2) - 仔细听这里的1/3是不是放错啦
  5. 01:26:824 - add a note at col [1] 这样会有急促的打击感，而且这里确实有音
  6. 01:35:103 (95103|0) - 我建议这个LN结束在01:36:661 - ，将01:36:661 (96661|0) - 移动到col[3]，这样LN可以和Green难度保持一致
Collab Vermilion Lv.15
  1. 01:01:856 (61856|1,61921|2,61986|3) - 仔细听这里的1/3是不是放错啦
  2. 01:26:824 - 漏音
hope it's will helpful and zici !!!! :) :) :)
加油！ :)
Critical_Star
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_Stan wrote:

hey cs~ :) 来摸了

|1|2|3|4|

Green Lv.5
  1. 00:27:700 - 根据音调，我认为1243比2134更合适，因为00:27:895 (27895|2) - 这个音明显在音调上比00:27:993 (27993|3) - 高 我还是觉得2-1-3-4比较好
  2. 00:28:577 - 漏音?? 好
  3. 00:29:551 (29551|1) -如果是抓lead piano这里可能ghost了，如果不是就不管这个 4 这里也有lead piano吧
  4. 00:31:986 - 根据音调，我认为这里应该这样会更好更合适 感觉1-2-3-4这里会比较舒服
    pic
Collab Orange Lv.9
  1. 00:47:181 - to 00:47:571 - 这一部分我觉得将00:47:181 (47181|1,47181|2) - 改成[34]，00:47:571 (47571|2,47571|3) - 改成[23] 更符合鼓点的打击，而且00:47:571 - 还避免了和00:47:863 (47863|0,47863|3) - 这里的连击 ok
  2. 00:59:941 - 这里的double不是很理解 removed
  3. 01:00:038 (60038|2,60038|3) - 你这里的两个note应该是要表达一个piano一个背景音，那么这里你也需要加一个note才对01:00:817 - 我改变single note了
  4. 01:01:856 (61856|0,61921|1,61986|2) - 仔细听这里的1/3是不是放错啦 这里是1/3吧，我听了很多次。看看别人怎么说吧
Collab Vermilion Lv.15
  1. 01:01:856 (61856|1,61921|2,61986|3) - 仔细听这里的1/3是不是放错啦 ^
  2. 01:26:824 - 漏音 ok
hope it's will helpful and zici !!!! :) :) :)
加油！ :)
thanks a lot Stanny :)
Spy
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_Stan wrote:

hey cs~ :) 来摸了

|1|2|3|4|

Collab Orange Lv.9
  1. 01:26:824 - add a note at col [1] 这样会有急促的打击感，而且这里确实有音 有音，可是不是主音
  2. 01:35:103 (95103|0) - 我建议这个LN结束在01:36:661 - ，将01:36:661 (96661|0) - 移动到col[3]，这样LN可以和Green难度保持一致 沒有必要把那個LN延長，這個音確實是這樣的
hope it's will helpful and zici !!!! :) :) :)
加油！ :)
感謝mod :D
Aras
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Aras
yo CS-nya
you can add these to the tag imo :
Setsucom セツコン Ekurearu paradis

here is the source =w= https://remywiki.com/Paradission
Crusts
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Crusts
hi mod from my queue sorry so late

sorry
Orange
00:25:265 (25265|1,25265|3,25265|0,25558|3,25558|0,25558|1,25850|0,25850|3,25850|1,26142|1,26142|0,26142|3) - i think you can add some variety here like |134| |123| and such like that
00:38:025 (38025|2,38220|1,38415|2,38609|3) - i think this should be LN
01:10:947 (70947|2,71142|0,71337|3,71532|1) - ^ for vocal

Vermillion
00:01:889 - add note ? uhh for the piano ? i don't what to call it like you did at 00:05:006 (5006|2) -
01:11:532 - missing note ? maybe add note like orange diff

ok GL
hope can help
no kds pls
Critical_Star
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Crusts wrote:

hi mod from my queue sorry so late np

[box=sorry]Orange
00:25:265 (25265|1,25265|3,25265|0,25558|3,25558|0,25558|1,25850|0,25850|3,25850|1,26142|1,26142|0,26142|3) - i think you can add some variety here like |134| |123| and such like that rearranged a bit
00:38:025 (38025|2,38220|1,38415|2,38609|3) - i think this should be LN to make it simple, i layer all these sound with double, i used short ln in vermilion so i wanted to make it a little different
01:10:947 (70947|2,71142|0,71337|3,71532|1) - ^ for vocal


ok GL
hope can help
no kds pls why not
thanks crust ;)

Aras25 wrote:

yo CS-nya
you can add these to the tag imo :
Setsucom セツコン Ekurearu paradis
here is the source =w= https://remywiki.com/Paradission
lol sure thanks for searching it :)
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2016-12-26 12:30 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2016-12-26 12:30 Kuo Kyoka: irc
2016-12-26 12:30 Kuo Kyoka: link me the map again pls
2016-12-26 12:31 Critical_Star: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1128527 BlackY - Paradission]
2016-12-26 12:31 Kuo Kyoka: sby
2016-12-26 12:32 Critical_Star: lol
2016-12-26 12:32 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1128527 BlackY - Paradission [Green Lv.5]]
2016-12-26 12:32 Critical_Star: very sb
2016-12-26 12:34 Kuo Kyoka: 00:06:272 - suggestion for balance http://puu.sh/t1fD5/83bf1036b0.jpg
2016-12-26 12:35 Kuo Kyoka: actually pattern lel
2016-12-26 12:35 Critical_Star: 00:40:947 (40947|3,41045|2,41142|1,41239|0,41726|2,41824|3,41921|0,42019|1) -  is it ok for normal?
2016-12-26 12:35 Critical_Star: sure
2016-12-26 12:35 Kuo Kyoka: it's ez
2016-12-26 12:35 Kuo Kyoka: dw
2016-12-26 12:36 Kuo Kyoka: and shit
2016-12-26 12:36 Critical_Star: ke yi
2016-12-26 12:36 Kuo Kyoka: bg is so poor quality
2016-12-26 12:36 Critical_Star: this is best one i can find le
2016-12-26 12:37 Kuo Kyoka: very aji song
2016-12-26 12:37 Critical_Star: do you want to get pero pero
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: yes
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: prprprprpr
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: take this one
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: somehow better
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/t1fM0/f818be7cf0.png
2016-12-26 12:39 Critical_Star: thanks meow prpr
2016-12-26 12:39 Kuo Kyoka: 00:20:687 (20687|1,21077|3) - this part
2016-12-26 12:39 Kuo Kyoka: better make it full 1/2 like the previous
2016-12-26 12:39 Kuo Kyoka: because follow only kick now is somehow confused to me
2016-12-26 12:41 Kuo Kyoka: 1/2 till here 00:22:051 - 
2016-12-26 12:41 Critical_Star: 00:22:051 -  can i break here?
2016-12-26 12:41 Critical_Star: ok i added the 1/2 till  00:21:856 -
2016-12-26 12:41 Kuo Kyoka: oh that's fine
2016-12-26 12:42 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-12-26 12:42 Kuo Kyoka: if you break there then maybe 00:21:272 - too
2016-12-26 12:43 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:960 - wub sound on here too
2016-12-26 12:43 Critical_Star: ok
2016-12-26 12:43 Critical_Star: hmm
2016-12-26 12:44 Kuo Kyoka: 00:52:635 (52635|1,52635|0) - move to 34 due to pitch
2016-12-26 12:44 Critical_Star: maybe not , i think i will catch wub + kick here better
2016-12-26 12:44 Critical_Star: 00:48:058 (48058|0,48155|1,48252|0) -  like this one is different
2016-12-26 12:44 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2016-12-26 12:45 Critical_Star: ok
2016-12-26 12:45 Kuo Kyoka: piano part is beautiful af
2016-12-26 12:45 Kuo Kyoka: 01:15:817 - missing a sound on here
2016-12-26 12:46 Critical_Star: taka best
2016-12-26 12:46 Critical_Star: i mean BlackY
2016-12-26 12:46 Critical_Star: oh yea added
2016-12-26 12:47 Kuo Kyoka: taka best
2016-12-26 12:47 Critical_Star: btw 01:25:363 (85363|3) -  this one i moved to 3
2016-12-26 12:47 Kuo Kyoka: 01:24:584 (84584|1) - move this to 3 is better than that
2016-12-26 12:47 Critical_Star: best
2016-12-26 12:48 Kuo Kyoka: 01:46:012 (106012|3,106012|0,106402|2,106791|0,107181|3,107376|2) - same
2016-12-26 12:49 Critical_Star: yep
2016-12-26 12:51 Kuo Kyoka: shit my cat gonna took my lunch
2016-12-26 12:52 Critical_Star: lol
2016-12-26 12:54 Critical_Star: i like your cat
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: 00:07:830 - this part
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/t1gtG/4488c39ec0.jpg
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: for balance i think
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: my cat bitxh
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: i like my cs mommy more 'w'
2016-12-26 12:55 Critical_Star: nice
2016-12-26 12:55 Critical_Star: 'w'
2016-12-26 12:56 Kuo Kyoka: 00:24:778 (24778|2,24778|0,24778|1) - 3 notes?
2016-12-26 12:56 Critical_Star: but still i will take your lunch too
2016-12-26 12:56 Critical_Star: my bad, removed a note
2016-12-26 12:56 Kuo Kyoka: i eat cs prprpr
2016-12-26 12:58 Critical_Star: <!–・”(>0<)”・ –>
2016-12-26 13:00 Kuo Kyoka: oh the rest are neat
2016-12-26 13:00 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1128526 BlackY - Paradission [Collab Vermilion Lv.15]]
2016-12-26 13:00 Kuo Kyoka: 00:00:428 - start on here is better
2016-12-26 13:02 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:058 (48058|2,48058|0,48155|2,48155|1,48252|3,48252|0) - this one present for wub sound
2016-12-26 13:02 Kuo Kyoka: but somehow not fit to me
2016-12-26 13:03 Critical_Star: that is fc part
2016-12-26 13:05 Critical_Star: i will send all your suggestion to him later
2016-12-26 13:06 Kuo Kyoka: actually i would like to try this http://puu.sh/t1gTn/545320d527.jpg
2016-12-26 13:06 Kuo Kyoka: but some how hard too
2016-12-26 13:06 Critical_Star: seems fit better to the sound
2016-12-26 13:07 Critical_Star: but i will tell him to see whether if he wanted to cahnge
2016-12-26 13:07 Critical_Star: change
2016-12-26 13:07 Kuo Kyoka: my suggestion always shit lel
2016-12-26 13:07 Kuo Kyoka: but it's his opinion to change it
2016-12-26 13:08 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:467 - hue
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: ye
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: that
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: actually
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: i only fc once
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: and i cant anymore
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: lol
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: hard
2016-12-26 13:08 Kuo Kyoka: haha
2016-12-26 13:08 Kuo Kyoka: i can;t even fc it
2016-12-26 13:09 Critical_Star: that is also fc pattern
2016-12-26 13:09 Kuo Kyoka: 01:07:343 - add a note for piano?
2016-12-26 13:09 Kuo Kyoka: gg 
2016-12-26 13:10 Kuo Kyoka: 01:31:207 (91207|2,91207|0,91207|3,91402|1,91597|2,91791|3) - 
2016-12-26 13:10 Critical_Star: added to the suggestion
2016-12-26 13:10 Kuo Kyoka: this one feel somehow weird
2016-12-26 13:10 Kuo Kyoka: compare with 01:30:428 (90428|3,90720|0,91012|2,91109|1) - 
2016-12-26 13:11 Critical_Star: hmm
2016-12-26 13:12 Critical_Star: i think he catch other sound here
2016-12-26 13:13 Kuo Kyoka: 01:38:804 - 
2016-12-26 13:13 Kuo Kyoka: 1/8?
2016-12-26 13:14 Critical_Star: ya i think so
2016-12-26 13:14 Critical_Star: i hear 1/8 too
2016-12-26 13:14 Kuo Kyoka: ending was a killer
2016-12-26 13:15 Critical_Star: there is 4 piano sound there
2016-12-26 13:15 Kuo Kyoka: yup
2016-12-26 13:15 Critical_Star: 01:45:233 (105233|1,105233|0,105330|3,105330|0,105428|3,105428|1,105525|0,105525|2,105622|1,105622|2,105720|3,105720|0,105817|3,105817|1,105915|0,105915|2,106012|3,106012|0,106012|1) -
2016-12-26 13:16 Critical_Star: what do you think
2016-12-26 13:16 Kuo Kyoka: basically overdone to me
2016-12-26 13:16 Kuo Kyoka: but meh idk
2016-12-26 13:18 Kuo Kyoka: what about http://puu.sh/t1hk6/905dbc7f17.jpg
2016-12-26 13:18 Critical_Star: i will let him know too
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Collab Vermillion Lv.15
From KK suggestiion:
- 00:48:058 (48058|2,48058|0,48155|2,48155|1,48252|3,48252|0) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/t1gTn/545320d527.jpg
- 01:07:343 - add one more note for piano? ok
- 01:31:207 (91207|2,91207|0,91207|3,91402|1,91597|2,91791|3) - this is weird compared to 01:30:428 (90428|3,90720|0,91012|2,91109|1) - ok
- 01:38:804 (98804|0,98869|1,98934|2,98999|3) - 1/8? ok
- 01:45:233 (105233|1,105233|0,105330|3,105330|0,105428|1,105428|3,105525|0,105525|2,105622|1,105622|2,105720|0,105720|3,105817|1,105817|3,105915|0,105915|2) - how about this? > http://puu.sh/t1hk6/905dbc7f17.jpg

EDIT: updated FC part
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BlackY - Paradission [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

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Congratulations!
Critical_Star
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

BlackY - Paradission [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

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