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Mitsuyoshi Takenobu no Ani - Amphisbaena [OsuMania]

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DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Minggu, 05 Februari 2017 at 18.53.43

Artist: Mitsuyoshi Takenobu no Ani
Title: Amphisbaena
Source: BMS
Tags: 光吉猛修 crossover orchestra BOFU2015 BMS OF FIGHTERS ULTIMATE 2015 チーム光吉猛修 ajeemaniz ExUsagi
BPM: 185
Filesize: 4433kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. ajee's Hyper - 4Key (3,2 stars, 1062 notes)
  2. Another - 4Key (4,33 stars, 1487 notes)
  3. Normal - 4Key (1,95 stars, 634 notes)
Download: Mitsuyoshi Takenobu no Ani - Amphisbaena
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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100% hs, ready for bn check!
thank you so much Gravey- for the stars~
thank you too for dionzz99 for the amazing BG!
thanks modders!!!
Last edited by DoNotMess , edited 98 times in total.
Worms
256 posts
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Worms
hi quick mod from me

00:46:302 - feels like 1/8 is more fitting

sorry i cant say much, don't see much that i can give feedback on
10/10 map
DoNotMess
485 posts
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DoNotMess

Worms wrote:

hi quick mod from me

00:46:302 - feels like 1/8 is more fitting

sorry i cant say much, don't see much that i can give feedback on
10/10 map
i will discuss ur mod with my gd-er
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
[Insane]
Rename to Another

00:48:978 (48978|1) - http://i.imgur.com/PV2RLAA.png

00:49:708 (49708|0,49708|2,50032|2) - 00:54:897 (54897|2,54897|0,54897|3) - 02:17:924 (137924|0) - 02:20:518 (140518|3) - 02:23:113 (143113|0) - rada overnote, 2 LN & 1 note aja dah cukup kebanyakan

01:04:059 (64059|1) - ghost

01:05:924 (65924|0,66005|1,66086|2) - 1/6

01:09:248 (69248|2) - ghost
01:12:816 (72816|1) - ^
01:24:897 (84897|0) - 01:25:545 (85545|3) - 01:31:383 (91383|2) - remove?

01:39:491 (99491|0,99654|1,100140|2,100302|3) - berasa kosong amat 1/2 nya
01:50:032 (110032|2) - ^
02:32:275 (152275|1,152437|1,152599|3) - prolly ghost

ok
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
Ajee's hyper
00:23:599 (23599|0) - ghost (or inconsistent)
00:50:032 (50032|3) - ?
00:51:005 (51005|1) - maybe not necessary
00:57:167 (57167|0) - make ln?
01:12:410 (72410|3) - no kick
01:12:654 - kick
01:18:735 - https://puu.sh/rXb5P/03b9d84c75.jpg suggestion
01:22:464 - maybe add here
01:27:329 (87329|1) - move to 4 and 01:27:978 (87978|2,88059|3,88140|2,88221|3,88302|2,88383|3,88464|2,88545|3,88627|2) - move to 2 and 3 i think
01:38:356 - https://puu.sh/rXbcF/d7560394e4.png suggestion
02:17:924 (137924|3) - end 02:18:248 -
02:25:708 - kiai ends here (maybe i will fix it because i have no idea where the hell is the kiai)

i expect counter mod from you, guguk ^^
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald

DoNotMess wrote:

Ajee's hyper // bark

00:23:599 (23599|0) - ghost (or inconsistent) // ehh there's sound O.o
00:50:032 (50032|3) - ? // laser / fx thing, fixed anyway
00:51:005 (51005|1) - maybe not necessary //
00:57:167 (57167|0) - make ln?
01:12:410 (72410|3) - no kick
01:12:654 - kick
01:18:735 - https://puu.sh/rXb5P/03b9d84c75.jpg suggestion // keeep
01:22:464 - maybe add here
01:27:329 (87329|1) - move to 4 and 01:27:978 (87978|2,88059|3,88140|2,88221|3,88302|2,88383|3,88464|2,88545|3,88627|2) - move to 2 and 3 i think
01:38:356 - https://puu.sh/rXbcF/d7560394e4.png suggestion // keep again
02:17:924 (137924|3) - end 02:18:248 -
02:25:708 - kiai ends here (maybe i will fix it because i have no idea where the hell is the kiai) // fix it thx

i expect counter mod from you, guguk ^^ // *wags* done
https://puu.sh/rXbKA/e0fec8e5f3.zip
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
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Spy
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Spy
Mod as request.

[Another]
Check the AiMod for fixing unsnapped notes.
00:47:113 - Well, seriously, I don't really get why do you want to use stop SV changes here. It is not fit to the melody here from my view.
And if you ask me how to change, I can only explain that, if I map these, I may not use SV changes here.
Since BPM is high, and you put full of notes, there is no much time for you to show the effects you want to make. Because it will end soon and continue to next part very fast. So, I'm not sure what effect you want to make, but if that is common SV changes, maybe you can refer those maps. or ask me again for specific effects you want to make. These SV changes are really odd as I mentioned before. Especially you referred from ZZHBOY's Flashes. I also said same thing to him.
01:24:248 (84248|3) - There is no reason that should be a triple jack with 01:24:086 (84086|3,84410|3) - .
01:38:681 (98681|3,98681|2,98762|3,98762|2,98843|1,98843|0,98924|0,98924|1) - Seems no difference with previous part, why suddenly change the patterns to it?
01:58:464 (118464|3,118708|2) - Maybe you can try to make them in same column and move 01:58:951 (118951|3) - to other column different from these.

Sorry, I can't mention more. Just due to the diff is full, and I noticed a problem is, you used LN and still make it full as you expected. So, just personal opinion, I think when you're using LN, you should reduce notes even if you want to use for kick, snare or what.
A hard map is not only full of notes, sometimes, skillful patterns with some specific note amounts will be hard too. Maybe you should think more while mapping, instead of inserting more notes as you wished.
Good luck.
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

Spy wrote:

Mod as request.

[Another]
Check the AiMod for fixing unsnapped notes.
00:47:113 - Well, seriously, I don't really get why do you want to use stop SV changes here. It is not fit to the melody here from my view.
And if you ask me how to change, I can only explain that, if I map these, I may not use SV changes here.
Since BPM is high, and you put full of notes, there is no much time for you to show the effects you want to make. Because it will end soon and continue to next part very fast. So, I'm not sure what effect you want to make, but if that is common SV changes, maybe you can refer those maps. or ask me again for specific effects you want to make. These SV changes are really odd as I mentioned before. Especially you referred from ZZHBOY's Flashes. I also said same thing to him. i will wait for further mod, if this is gets mentioned again i will remove
01:24:248 (84248|3) - There is no reason that should be a triple jack with 01:24:086 (84086|3,84410|3) - . nerfed the snare into two to prevent density
01:38:681 (98681|3,98681|2,98762|3,98762|2,98843|1,98843|0,98924|0,98924|1) - Seems no difference with previous part, why suddenly change the patterns to it? someone will scream at me "GODDAMN PP MAP", anyway i changed into trill then
01:58:464 (118464|3,118708|2) - Maybe you can try to make them in same column and move 01:58:951 (118951|3) - to other column different from these. ok

Sorry, I can't mention more. Just due to the diff is full, and I noticed a problem is, you used LN and still make it full as you expected. So, just personal opinion, I think when you're using LN, you should reduce notes even if you want to use for kick, snare or what.
A hard map is not only full of notes, sometimes, skillful patterns with some specific note amounts will be hard too. Maybe you should think more while mapping, instead of inserting more notes as you wished. i have thought of the playability when i mapped this map, i mapped kick as 1 and snare as 2 (now 1 because i nerfed almost all of it)
Good luck.
Thanks for the mod and the advice...i'm still in the middle of learning ^^
Kawawa
Kawawa
Irc done
19:15 DoNotMess: kawawa senpai
19:15 Kawawa: hiyo
19:15 DoNotMess: can u test my map ;-;
19:15 Kawawa: okay. but I just online right now.
19:16 DoNotMess: i made 4k map of amphisbaena (not 100% convert)
19:16 Kawawa: so can't play well
19:16 DoNotMess: okok
19:16 DoNotMess: hmm
19:16 DoNotMess: it's ez
19:16 DoNotMess: ;-;
19:16 DoNotMess: i need ur opinion cos u mapped it and got ranked lol
19:18 Kawawa: okay
19:18 Kawawa: gimme link
19:19 *DoNotMess is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1113894 Mitsuyoshi Takenobu no Ani - Amphisbaena]
19:20 DoNotMess: no hs
19:20 DoNotMess: i tried to map by pitch..i dunno if it has suited or not...
19:23 Kawawa: not bad.
19:23 Kawawa: but what do you mean about pitch?
19:23 DoNotMess: hmm
19:23 DoNotMess: pitch relevancy
19:24 DoNotMess: 01:18:248 (78248|3,78248|0,78735|2,78816|1,78897|0,78897|3,78978|2,79059|1,79140|2,79221|3,79221|0,79221|1,79302|2,79383|1,79464|0) -
19:24 DoNotMess: 00:26:681 (26681|2,27005|3,27329|0,27654|1,78248|3,78248|0,78735|2,78816|1,78897|0,78897|3,78978|2,79059|1,79140|2,79221|1,79221|3,79221|0,79302|2,79383|1,79464|0) -
19:24 DoNotMess: 00:49:383 (49383|1,49383|2,49708|3,49708|0) -
19:24 DoNotMess: 00:58:221 (58221|2,58302|3,58464|2,58545|3,58708|2) -
19:25 DoNotMess: maybe u have suggestion?
19:25 Kawawa: please don't care about "pitch" relevancy 
19:25 DoNotMess: why
19:26 Kawawa: It does not need for mapping.
19:26 Kawawa: it will make you mindblock
19:26 DoNotMess: oh i see
19:26 Kawawa: almost beginner mappers care about it.
19:26 Kawawa: but It's wrong.
19:26 DoNotMess: but 4k column so narrow..i cant make anything creative hahaha
19:27 DoNotMess: 01:39:005 (99005|3,99491|0,99654|1,100140|2,100302|3) - i dunno...
19:27 DoNotMess: i'm beginner mapper
19:27 Kawawa: I feel not good SV on dump part.
19:27 DoNotMess: which
19:27 Kawawa: totally.
19:27 DoNotMess: 00:55:302 (55302|3,55383|2,55464|1,55545|3,55545|2,55586|0,55627|1,55667|2,55708|3,55789|1,55870|0,55870|3,55951|2,56086|1,56194|3,56194|0) - ?
19:27 Kawawa: Since I don't feel like SV that why It should be expressed as SV
19:28 Kawawa: anyway depends on you.
19:28 Kawawa: but I don't recommend totally.
19:28 DoNotMess: i would like to emphasize the dubstep
19:28 Kawawa: I don't feel emphasized by SV
19:28 Kawawa: just more weird to me.
19:28 DoNotMess: ok
19:28 Kawawa: And I am the one who I mapped this song first.
19:28 DoNotMess: ikr
19:28 Kawawa: so I can understand this song than anyone.
19:28 DoNotMess: HAHAHA
19:28 DoNotMess: ok X)
19:29 Kawawa: 00:55:951 (55951|2,56086|1) - wrong snap.
19:29 Kawawa: you can see my notes for snapping.
19:31 DoNotMess: 00:55:789 (55789|1,55870|0,55870|3,55951|2,56086|1) - u mapped this on ur map?
19:31 DoNotMess: 00:55:586 (55586|0,55627|1,55667|2,55708|3) - i can only see this one on ur map...
19:32 Kawawa: I mapped  00:55:870 (55870|0,55870|3,55951|2,56086|1,56194|3,56194|0) - 
19:32 Kawawa: that
19:32 Kawawa: as 4snap.
19:33 DoNotMess: so it should be 1/4 in the 00:56:086 (56086|1) - ?
19:33 Kawawa: 00:55:951 -  00:56:113 -  your expression sounds / 00:56:032 - hiht sounds
19:33 Kawawa: yeah.
19:33 DoNotMess: ok
19:33 DoNotMess: is there more u wouldnt like to see?
19:35 Kawawa:  00:57:451 (57451|1) - why note here?
19:36 DoNotMess: piano
19:36 DoNotMess: kinda audible tho..
19:36 Kawawa: alright.
19:37 Kawawa: 00:58:302 (58302|3,58545|3) - It kinda weird to play.
19:37 DoNotMess: erased
19:37 Kawawa: you can make them as jack or something
19:37 Kawawa: 00:58:302 - ~ 00:58:789 - in this part.
19:37 DoNotMess: changed
19:37 Kawawa: you used LN as beep sounds.
19:37 Kawawa: but you can seperate them as normal notes like jack.
19:38 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/rYnIa/e0aa979535.png is this all right?
19:38 Kawawa: hmmm
19:38 Kawawa: I mean make them without LN.
19:39 Kawawa: wait.
19:40 Kawawa: like this. http://puu.sh/rYnMF/f89da57aaa.jpg
19:40 Kawawa: just feedback
19:40 DoNotMess: i can puush but cant view puush...fml in china..
19:40 Kawawa: I see.
19:40 DoNotMess: maybe shift + f12?
19:41 Kawawa: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6427546
19:41 Kawawa: 01:06:032 (66032|0) - wrong snap.
19:41 DoNotMess: i will reconsider...
19:41 DoNotMess: fixed that already, havent uploaded
19:42 Kawawa: 01:39:816 -  01:39:978 -  here also need to LN
19:42 Kawawa: It is important rhythm for background instment.
19:42 DoNotMess: owh ok
19:43 DoNotMess: i will figure it out later
19:43 Kawawa: If you fixed the below part then, consider it too. 02:16:140 (136140|0,136140|3,136302|2,136302|1,136383|3,136383|0,136464|1,136545|2) - 
19:43 Kawawa: 02:24:167 (144167|2,144302|1) - fix this too
19:44 Kawawa: that's all.
19:44 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rYnVB/aa3fe9e2e6.png turn off the countdown. and 
19:45 Kawawa: And Artist must be japanese first.
19:45 Kawawa: you can copy paste it on my mapset
19:53 DoNotMess: ok
19:53 DoNotMess: thank you
20:07 DoNotMess: dude
20:07 DoNotMess: post the irc
20:08 Kawawa: oh.
20:09 Kawawa: okay thanksdude
20:09 Kawawa: btw, what's your country
20:09 Kawawa: indo or china?
20:10 DoNotMess: from indo but now i move to china
20:10 Kawawa: I see
20:10 DoNotMess: for study
20:10 DoNotMess: T_T
20:12 Kawawa: btw why you did not give spy kudosu
20:12 Kawawa: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5571520
20:13 DoNotMess: done
20:16 Kawawa: but I will not post mine
20:16 Kawawa: Since I did not help you much.
20:16 Kawawa: I don't deserve about that.
20:17 DoNotMess: hmm i think u helped
20:17 DoNotMess: about the background song mod u mentioned earlier, i will figure it out later
20:17 Kawawa: hmmm
20:18 DoNotMess: 01:39:491 - i just dunno why u didnt map this...
20:19 DoNotMess: maybe i heard it wrong..
20:19 Kawawa: 01:39:491 - I did not map this as intention.
20:19 Kawawa: because I wanted to take a rest from burst part. 01:39:005 - 
20:19 Kawawa: and started from white section. again
20:19 Kawawa: 01:39:654 - 
20:20 Kawawa: 01:39:491 - this rhythm is really important than your thinking. after burst part.
20:21 DoNotMess: i get what u are meaning...maybe u meant rest after "trill"?
20:21 Kawawa: yeah.
20:21 Kawawa: 01:39:491 - And this can't feel the audible than your thinking.
20:21 Kawawa: skip is better with rest.
20:22 Kawawa: If you can play with x0.75 rate, then It will be important rhythm as audible
20:22 Kawawa: but It's not.
20:23 Kawawa: all the instrument does not need to expressed. If there is a intention.
20:24 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/rYpdk/ba82cfcceb.png ??
20:24 Kawawa: all up to you.
20:24 DoNotMess: is this gud?
20:24 DoNotMess: need ur opinion cos as u said, u know this song well
20:25 Kawawa: patterns are fine. If there is no complex much.
20:25 Kawawa: for ranked.
20:25 DoNotMess: ok
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
thank u for helping Kawawa OwO
ZeroCalamity
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ZeroCalamity
MINIRC cus no time
2016-10-28 15:18 ZeroCalamity: short test ok?
2016-10-28 15:19 ZeroCalamity: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1113894 Mitsuyoshi Takenobu no Ani - Amphisbaena [Another]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2016-10-28 15:20 DoNotMess: ok
2016-10-28 15:20 ZeroCalamity: ok
2016-10-28 15:20 ZeroCalamity: lighten the SVs in the first chorus
2016-10-28 15:20 ZeroCalamity: remove the minijack before LN
2016-10-28 15:21 ZeroCalamity: bursts are good
2016-10-28 15:21 ZeroCalamity: remove that one 2note minijack
2016-10-28 15:21 ZeroCalamity: the [12][3412] pattern thing
2016-10-28 15:21 DoNotMess: ok
2016-10-28 15:21 ZeroCalamity: turn it into [12][134]
2016-10-28 15:22 ZeroCalamity: remove minijack at the very end
2016-10-28 15:22 ZeroCalamity: add slowjam on the first slow part
2016-10-28 15:22 ZeroCalamity: and second actually
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: from 00:05:599 - to 00:15:978 -
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: add slight SV speed increase from 00:15:491 - to 00:15:978 - maybe to ease the player into it
2016-10-28 15:23 DoNotMess: i'm gonna be crucified if i add slowjam
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: doesn't have to be very slow
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: but if you're adding SV that's kinda hard
2016-10-28 15:23 DoNotMess: wow
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: might as well fit the music where it's light
2016-10-28 15:23 DoNotMess: u should post mod then
2016-10-28 15:23 DoNotMess: i would be grateful
2016-10-28 15:24 DoNotMess: u have plenty to say
2016-10-28 15:24 DoNotMess: i'm making normal now
2016-10-28 15:24 ZeroCalamity: 00:52:221 - this is the LN minijack I don't like
2016-10-28 15:24 ZeroCalamity: however 01:04:627 - this is okay
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: why no kiai here? 01:08:113 -
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: I'd say copy from kawawa unless you didn't
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: not sure how he did his
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: if that's how he did, then okay
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: 2nd slowjam 01:39:654 -
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: to 02:04:951 -
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: and okay, I'll post I guess
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: but this is really small
2016-10-28 15:26 DoNotMess: goddamn it u fill the whole chat HAHAHAH XD
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: these are just playtest things
2016-10-28 15:26 DoNotMess: just post it as mod and i will reply wether i agree or not
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: I didn't analyze the whole structure
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: but theme looks consistent enough
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

ZeroCalamity wrote:

MINIRC cus no time
2016-10-28 15:18 ZeroCalamity: short test ok?
2016-10-28 15:19 ZeroCalamity: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1113894 Mitsuyoshi Takenobu no Ani - Amphisbaena [Another]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2016-10-28 15:20 DoNotMess: ok
2016-10-28 15:20 ZeroCalamity: ok
2016-10-28 15:20 ZeroCalamity: lighten the SVs in the first chorus
2016-10-28 15:20 ZeroCalamity: remove the minijack before LN
2016-10-28 15:21 ZeroCalamity: bursts are good
2016-10-28 15:21 ZeroCalamity: remove that one 2note minijack
2016-10-28 15:21 ZeroCalamity: the [12][3412] pattern thing
2016-10-28 15:21 DoNotMess: ok
2016-10-28 15:21 ZeroCalamity: turn it into [12][134]
2016-10-28 15:22 ZeroCalamity: remove minijack at the very end
2016-10-28 15:22 ZeroCalamity: add slowjam on the first slow part
2016-10-28 15:22 ZeroCalamity: and second actually
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: from 00:05:599 - to 00:15:978 -
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: add slight SV speed increase from 00:15:491 - to 00:15:978 - maybe to ease the player into it
2016-10-28 15:23 DoNotMess: i'm gonna be crucified if i add slowjam
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: doesn't have to be very slow
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: but if you're adding SV that's kinda hard
2016-10-28 15:23 DoNotMess: wow
2016-10-28 15:23 ZeroCalamity: might as well fit the music where it's light
2016-10-28 15:23 DoNotMess: u should post mod then
2016-10-28 15:23 DoNotMess: i would be grateful
2016-10-28 15:24 DoNotMess: u have plenty to say
2016-10-28 15:24 DoNotMess: i'm making normal now
2016-10-28 15:24 ZeroCalamity: 00:52:221 - this is the LN minijack I don't like
2016-10-28 15:24 ZeroCalamity: however 01:04:627 - this is okay
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: why no kiai here? 01:08:113 -
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: I'd say copy from kawawa unless you didn't
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: not sure how he did his
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: if that's how he did, then okay
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: 2nd slowjam 01:39:654 -
2016-10-28 15:25 ZeroCalamity: to 02:04:951 -
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: and okay, I'll post I guess
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: but this is really small
2016-10-28 15:26 DoNotMess: goddamn it u fill the whole chat HAHAHAH XD
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: these are just playtest things
2016-10-28 15:26 DoNotMess: just post it as mod and i will reply wether i agree or not
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: I didn't analyze the whole structure
2016-10-28 15:26 ZeroCalamity: but theme looks consistent enough
thank u for mod, i wont add slowjam...it doesnt feel right for me, i tried
Arzenvald
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jiee di notice
puxtu
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SPOILER
20:21 DoNotMess: puk
20:21 DoNotMess: m4m?
20:21 puxtu: :v
20:21 puxtu: map yg kemarin?
20:21 DoNotMess: iya beb
20:21 puxtu: :v
20:22 DoNotMess: ama apa beb
20:22 puxtu: coba senbon map gw
20:28 DoNotMess: sini
20:28 puxtu: tp gw belum update
20:32 DoNotMess: yha
20:33 puxtu: 00:46:383 (46383|1) - setan note
20:33 DoNotMess: post njeng
20:33 puxtu: 00:52:221 (52221|2,52302|2) - this is gay
20:33 puxtu: gw post disini aja
20:33 DoNotMess: ok
20:34 puxtu: 00:55:951 (55951|2,56032|1,56113|2) - lebih mirip 1/3
20:35 DoNotMess: ^tdi 1/3, di fix kawawa
20:35 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/rZvW8/655e599966.png tdnya kek gni
20:35 DoNotMess: mungkin gni aja kali
20:36 puxtu: rip playability
20:36 puxtu: ganti 1/3 aja mnurut gw
20:36 DoNotMess: udh
20:37 puxtu: 01:15:978 (75978|0,75978|3) - triple
20:38 DoNotMess: gw di situ sesuain pitch
20:38 DoNotMess: kalo triple...jd jack
20:38 puxtu: oh kalo gitu perbaiki ini 01:14:599 (74599|3,74681|3) - ?
20:39 puxtu: 01:12:654 (72654|0,72735|0) -
20:39 DoNotMess: ok
20:39 DoNotMess: mata lu skid ye liad mini jack :'v
20:40 DoNotMess: dh gw remove yg lu bakal sbut :v awkwakakwak
20:40 puxtu: kaga, mata gw skid kalo liat sesuatu yg ga konsisten :v
20:42 puxtu: kaga, mata gw skid kalo liat sesuatu yg ga konsisten :v
20:42 puxtu: 01:19:302 (79302|2,79464|0) - rasanya aneh ini
20:43 DoNotMess: udh gw ubah jd stair drtd :'v
20:44 DoNotMess: ooo itu
20:44 DoNotMess: beda deh
20:44 DoNotMess: knp?>
20:44 puxtu: ga maksut gw seharusnya streamnya berhenti disini 01:19:221 (79221|1) -
20:44 DoNotMess: 01:18:735 (78735|2,78816|1,78897|3,78978|2,79059|1,79140|2,79221|1,79302|2,79383|1,79464|0) - pitch
20:44 puxtu: 01:19:302 (79302|2,79464|0) - disini ga ada main soudnya
20:44 DoNotMess: ada ..kcil bngt..
20:45 DoNotMess: 01:19:464 (79464|0) - disini gda
20:45 puxtu: menurut gw cuma ini aja sih yg ada suaranya 01:18:735 (78735|2,78816|1,78897|0,78897|3,78978|2,79059|1,79140|2,79221|1,79221|3,79221|0) -
20:45 puxtu: 01:19:302 (79302|2,79383|1,79464|0) - sampe sini mah kepanjangan
20:46 DoNotMess: 01:19:302 (79302|2) - ini ada
20:46 DoNotMess: 01:19:383 (79383|0) - ini kek instrumen drumnya
20:47 puxtu: ok
20:54 DoNotMess: msh ada?
20:54 DoNotMess: lama bngt si ajf
20:54 DoNotMess: ajg
20:54 puxtu: bntr
20:54 DoNotMess: ok
20:56 puxtu: sorry afk
20:57 DoNotMess: gw dh ktiduran tay
20:57 DoNotMess: untung ditnyain awkwakkawakw
20:57 puxtu: 02:24:167 (144167|3,144248|2,144329|1) - 1/3 nih
20:58 puxtu: 02:26:681 (146681|1,146843|1,147005|1,147167|1,147329|1) - pls
20:58 DoNotMess: udh ubah
20:58 puxtu: 02:29:113 (149113|1,149275|1,149437|1,149599|1,149762|1,149924|1) - why
20:58 DoNotMess: dh
20:58 DoNotMess: ajg gda tempat
-[ AmiShici ]-
-[ AmiShici ]-
hello

SPOILER
[Lainnya]00:58:140 (58140|1,58140|0) - ini knp double?
01:07:545 - clap sound ga double?
01:22:627 - missing? kyak ini 01:21:329 -
01:50:681 (110681|1) - ke 3?
01:55:870 (115870|3,116194|2) - swap kolom?

[hyper]01:01:951 - missing?
01:03:086 (63086|2) - no sound?
01:19:302 (79302|1,79383|1) - lah kok mini jack si? uwu

[Normal]00:36:735 - add for simbal
00:49:545 - add kick kyak 00:49:221 (49221|1) -
00:59:924 - 01:02:518 - 01:05:113 - 01:09:005 - 01:10:302 - 01:11:599 - etc add ^
01:39:978 - add synth?
01:42:086 (102086|1) - harusnya di 01:41:924 - audah
gl~
Another Lie
Another Lie
bla bla bla
20:13 Another Lie: tes tes
20:24 DoNotMess: ????
20:25 Another Lie: map amphisbaena nya ready for mod?
20:26 DoNotMess: iya
20:26 DoNotMess: blm di hs.... msh blm ktemu
20:27 Another Lie: IRC / gimana?
20:27 Another Lie: mod nya :3
20:27 DoNotMess: srah
20:27 DoNotMess: :3
20:28 Another Lie: kalo IRC tungguin yak :3
20:29 DoNotMess: okkoko
20:31 *Another Lie is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1113894 Mitsuyoshi Takenobu no Ani - Amphisbaena [Another]]
20:32 Another Lie: itu mp3 source nya darimana?
20:32 Another Lie: dari map ranked / cari sendiri?
20:32 DoNotMess: dri ranked version kawawa
20:32 Another Lie: ah nice timing, wait puushing
20:34 Another Lie: http://puu.sh/rZygh.osu
20:34 DoNotMess: PUUSH GW GBS BUKA WOI
20:34 DoNotMess: jgn..
20:34 Another Lie: ah
20:34 *Another Lie mod manual deh
20:34 DoNotMess: mod manual aja
20:34 Another Lie: 00:03:005 (3005|2) - mungkin ini bisa diperpendek
20:34 Another Lie: dari sini 00:04:302 - sampai sini 00:05:599 - 
20:36 Another Lie: 00:46:140 (46140|1,46140|3,46221|2,46302|0) - kurang enak dimainin (cuma butuh dipindah)
20:36 Another Lie: lagian itu timingnya 1/8
20:36 Another Lie: bukan 1/4
20:36 DoNotMess: gw bedain dri ajee
20:38 DoNotMess: ok
20:38 DoNotMess: dh gw samain ama yg ranked snapnya
20:38 Another Lie: 00:46:221 (46221|2,46302|1) - ini diganti jadi http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6437944
20:38 Another Lie: 00:46:140 (46140|3) - ini dipindah ke kolom 1
20:38 DoNotMess: udh gw samain pkoknya
20:38 DoNotMess: gw jdiin stair
20:39 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/rZyt2/4c6f13eecd.png
20:39 Another Lie: 00:51:978 (51978|0,51978|3) - bisa dijadiin normal note?
20:39 DoNotMess: gw bsa upload gbs view puush fml
20:39 Another Lie: lah itu bisa puush :3
20:39 Another Lie: :V
20:39 Another Lie: nice
20:39 DoNotMess: gmw udh cocok instrumen dubstep
20:40 Another Lie: 00:52:221 (52221|2) - yg jadi problem sih ini, soalnya jack nya mepet gara gara 00:51:978 (51978|0,51978|3) - 
20:40 Another Lie: well buat rank 2 / 3 digit sih no problem -_-
20:40 Another Lie: yg ribuan noh
20:41 Another Lie: 00:54:167 - ini yg harusnya 2 note (suara lebih keras yg ini)
20:41 Another Lie: 00:54:248 (54248|3,54248|2,54329|2,54329|3) - 1 note (lower sound)
20:41 DoNotMess: gw mw emphasize suara itu jdi jack
20:41 DoNotMess: tar yg jack gw tunggu further mod
20:41 DoNotMess: kkalo ada yg sbutin lg gw ilangin jacknya
20:42 Another Lie: ok
20:42 *Another Lie lanjut
20:43 Another Lie: 01:27:167 (87167|0,87208|1,87248|3,87289|2) - lebih enak 1 arah ini
20:43 Another Lie: 01:27:491 (87491|3,87532|2,87572|0,87613|1) - ^
20:43 DoNotMess: ok
20:44 Another Lie: 01:39:816 (99816|1,99978|0) - jgn semuanya ngikutin ranked version
20:44 DoNotMess: yg dibawahnya yg sbelum itu gw ubah jdi gnti arah
20:44 DoNotMess: itu bkin sndiri....
20:44 DoNotMess: gw aja kgk liad ranked version nya gmn...
20:44 Another Lie: 01:39:491 (99491|2,99654|3) - saran pengubahan http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6438003
20:45 Another Lie: well, tapi itu di ranked ada gituan :3
20:45 DoNotMess: mlaahn di threadnya, kawawa suruh gw liad mapnya buat referensi
20:45 Another Lie: "referensi"
20:45 Another Lie: "panduan"
20:45 DoNotMess: stack 4 gk cocok
20:45 DoNotMess: suaranya gk trlalu gde bngt
20:45 Another Lie: oh, bisa diturunin :3
20:45 DoNotMess: gw keep itu
20:45 DoNotMess: stack 4 gk enak
20:45 Another Lie: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6438009
20:45 DoNotMess: gk cocok mnurut gw...
20:45 Another Lie: wrong ss :V
20:46 *Another Lie sih keep consistency (well 4 stack ga cocok emang :v)
20:46 Another Lie: 01:45:329 (105329|0,105491|1) - ga bisa diubah lagi kah? (note lain ga ada yg gini :3)
20:46 DoNotMess: gw ubah arahnya deh
20:47 DoNotMess: ada saran?
20:47 Another Lie: 01:50:681 (110681|1) - kolom 3, soalnya suara sama kyk ini 01:51:005 (111005|2) - 
20:47 Another Lie: saran yg tadi? mungkin ga kepikiran :v
20:47 Another Lie: 01:45:329 (105329|0) - stack 3 mungkin :3
20:47 DoNotMess: ok
20:48 DoNotMess: stack 3 jg gk enak...mnurut gw 2 dh maksimal
20:48 DoNotMess: tar deh
20:48 DoNotMess: gw pkir" lg diubahnya gmn
20:48 DoNotMess: smentara keep
20:48 Another Lie: :v lanjut~
20:48 DoNotMess: pkoknya gmw 3/4 disitu
20:48 DoNotMess: soalnya suaranya sma ama sbelumnya ama stelahnya, gda beda
20:48 DoNotMess: ok
20:49 Another Lie: 01:53:113 (113113|1) - pindah kolom 1, 01:53:113 (113113|0) - delete 01:53:194 (113194|2) - pindah kolom 2
20:49 Another Lie: jadinya gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6438046
20:49 Another Lie: soalnya susah dimainin
20:49 Another Lie: lagian itu sempit bener -_-
20:50 DoNotMess: emng melodinya mw gmn '-'
20:50 Another Lie: just rubahan :3
20:51 Another Lie: kalo keep sih gpp :V
20:51 Another Lie: aha, ada ide 
20:51 Another Lie: 01:53:113 (113113|1) - delete, ngikutin ini 01:58:302 (118302|1,118383|2,118464|3) - 
20:52 Another Lie: 02:02:356 (122356|0,122437|2,122518|1,122599|0,122681|2) - kalo ini macam mapnya si "Lari"
20:53 DoNotMess: lari?
20:53 *Another Lie is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/951190 Mitsuyoshi Takenobu no Ani - Amphisbaena [TBSM]]
20:54 Another Lie: 02:02:437 (122437|2,122518|1,122599|0,122681|2) - consider remove this soalnya kyk ini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6438106
20:54 Another Lie: (ga masuk instrumen menurutku)
20:55 Another Lie: 02:10:464 (130464|2,130789|1,131113|0) - lah ini stack 3 -_- yg diawal kok ga stack 3? -_-
20:55 DoNotMess: 00:31:870 (31870|0,32194|1,32518|2,130464|2,130789|1,131113|0) -  stack 3 mas...itu gde suaranya..
20:55 Another Lie: oh (ga liat, fokus yg lain) :v
20:55 DoNotMess: gw dh tny qat
20:56 DoNotMess: ktny sama snap gpp asal beda key
20:56 *Another Lie lanjut :3
20:56 DoNotMess: kalo mapnya sma
20:56 DoNotMess: snap sma gpp asal beda key mappingnya
20:56 DoNotMess: jdi dngn kata lain
20:56 DoNotMess: lu dngn gmpng bsa bkin ranked map 7k bkin convertnya jdi 4k
20:56 DoNotMess: tp gw gk ikutin full .... itu aja gw bkin sndiri ._.
20:57 Another Lie: well convert = ikut full :V
20:57 Another Lie: ofc bikin sendiri :3
20:58 Another Lie: 02:29:924 (149924|2) - (saran) delete 02:29:762 (149762|2) - ganti LN sampai garis putih (suara sama kyk 02:30:086 (150086|2) - 02:30:410 (150410|2) - )
20:58 Another Lie: jadinya gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6438148
20:59 Another Lie: HP & OD kok sama kyk punya ajee?
20:59 Another Lie: yg normal = 7 
20:59 DoNotMess: gbs, trlalu smpit
20:59 DoNotMess: gtw tuh si ajee
20:59 DoNotMess: blm fix
20:59 Another Lie: hard - insane = 8?
20:59 DoNotMess: tar tunggu dia online
20:59 Another Lie: :3
20:59 *Another Lie done modding
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

hello

SPOILER
[Lainnya]00:58:140 (58140|1,58140|0) - ini knp double? fixed
01:07:545 - clap sound ga double? kgk, disini map main sound 2, sisanya 1
01:22:627 - missing? kyak ini 01:21:329 - ok
01:50:681 (110681|1) - ke 3? udh
01:55:870 (115870|3,116194|2) - swap kolom? keep

[hyper]01:01:951 - missing?
01:03:086 (63086|2) - no sound?
01:19:302 (79302|1,79383|1) - lah kok mini jack si? uwu

[Normal]00:36:735 - add for simbal ok
00:49:545 - add kick kyak 00:49:221 (49221|1) - disini map choir 2, kick gk di map, mw emphasize choirnya
00:59:924 - 01:02:518 - 01:05:113 - 01:09:005 - 01:10:302 - 01:11:599 - etc add ^
01:39:978 - add synth? normal diff, cuman mw map di choir doang disini
01:42:086 (102086|1) - harusnya di 01:41:924 - audah
saya mabok
gl~
makasih bnyk! :) :) :) :)
Tailsdk
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514 posts
Joined July 2015
Tailsdk
Another
what are these to notes 01:58:302 (118302|1,118383|2) -
this note should be double as all the others 01:51:005 (111005|2) -
same thing here 01:52:464 -
move this note 01:53:194 (113194|2) - up to 01:53:275 -
these should be doubles as well 01:53:518 (113518|1,113762|2) -
same here 01:54:248 (114248|3,114410|2,114572|1) -
this one to 01:56:194 (116194|3) -
^01:57:654 (117654|0) -
these as well 01:58:708 (118708|3,118951|2) -
Crono
227 posts
Joined April 2014
Crono
mod for ajee's hyper o/

0 1 2 3

MOD /)^-^)/
00:15:978 (15978|2,16302|2,16627|2,16951|2,17275|2,17599|2,17924|2,18248|2,18572|2,18897|2,19221|2,19545|2,19870|2,20113|2,20356|2,20518|2,20843|2,21167|2,21491|2,21816|2,22140|2,22464|2,22789|2,23113|2,23437|2,23762|2,24086|2,24410|2,24735|2,25059|2,25302|2,25545|2,25708|2,26032|2,26194|2) - did you not noticed this stack on 2? I strongly recommend rebalancing this section. try to put more notes on the left hand to prevent mindblock. column 1 is quite empty here...

00:47:924 (47924|2,48086|1,48167|3,48329|2) - this seems kind of awkward for a hyper. especially since you have only done lns like these in only 2 parts of the map. perhaps make them a snap kind of feel like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6455359

00:56:356 (56356|3,56681|3,57005|3) - If you ignore the above perhaps shorten these to 1/4 length to match the song? the shorter LNs from above have the same length.

01:12:735 (72735|0) - your main focus right here is the LNs so I suggest deleting this.

01:18:735 (78735|1,78816|2,78897|3,78978|1,79059|2,79140|3,79221|2,79302|1,79383|1) - rearrange, there are at least 5 different tones here.

01:21:329 (81329|0) - move to 01:21:167

01:25:383 (85383|0,86032|0) - 01:25:383 (85383|0,86032|0) - unecessary. The main LN in play here does not string again. at least it's too subtle. If you are trying to include another sound here then I dunno. kind of does not make sense to me for a hyper.

02:16:140 (136140|1) - move to 0 for balance

whatever suggestions you apply be sure to make adjustments throughout the map accordingly. such as at 00:56:356

best of luck!
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