1. bb's hard (2.61 stars, 66 notes)
2. easy (1.5 stars, 44 notes)
3. normal (1.96 stars, 64 notes)
4. upheaval (3.6 stars, 94 notes)

Worminators wrote:

Hello from your M4M queue

[General]

1. Your mp3 has a 128 kbps bitrate have you considered getting a 192 kbps one for better quality? This is the only mp3 of this song that currently exists so there's nothing I can do unfortunately.
2. Maybe you should remove the dot at the end of each diff name since there is none in the title (people keep capitalizing their diff name based on the title right?) The dot is there as requested by the song's creator. I don't want to deny his wish.

[Every diff except bb's]

1. I personally do not like the spinners at the end of each diff some more notes could be mapped there It's a personal policy of mine to have spinners in every map; it promotes scoreboard diversity!
2. 00:32:593 (1) - Even if it is the last note I don't think this hitsound fits well here [b]I think it fits, it's like a "oh we're done now!" feeling.

[Easy]

1. 00:04:546 (2) - You could find a fitting hitsound for this note (and everytime it is repeted in the song) I think the whistles in this diff hitsound it properly. And the two clips. I don't really want to do more for it. the insane and hard have special hitsounding, but the rhyhm for the easy and normal don't justify more than what I have imo. I don't want to use custom hitsunds.
2. 00:15:552 (1,2) - 00:04:546 (2) - These sliders may be hard to read for beginners, and they're ugly imo The reading thing isn't a problem. As for whether they're ugly or not...eh I disagree. I think they're nice.
3. 00:11:646 (4,1) - Improve blanket Sure
4. 00:32:948 (1) - Not sure about the ranking criteria but I think you should give more free time before the spinner appears since it is an easy difficulty Yeah fair enough

[Normal]

1. Raise AR to 4.5 or 5 to make the spread more even? Made it 4.5
2. Nothing else to say except what has been said above Same response regarding hitsounds :p

[soulless]

1. 00:31:173 (6) - change this slider a bit so its tail points the next circle ok
2. 00:05:256 (4,7) - Stack perfectly with the slidertail Good catch

I don't have that much to say, the flow and structure looks great for me
good luck for rank

please mod me: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/488317 (preferably the last diff)

Janpai wrote:

M4M from your Queue

General

1. Soulless diff name is weird for me tho. How about Lifeless instead? or something like Last Breath etc. that relates to something deceased xD It was requested by the song creator
2. I don't get why there are periods in every diff :v Same as above.
3. Disable Countdown and widescreen support Sure, I guess.

easy.

1. 00:21:232 (1) - Since there are few dominant sounds in the song, why not map all that? I mean that red tick has a bell sound so my rhythm suggestion is remove the reverse at 00:21:232 (1) - then delete 00:23:007 (2) - and start a 1/1 slider at 00:22:297 I do agree there's a lot going in the music, but it's an Easy so the player needs some downtime. A long reverse slider does this. Same for below.
2. 00:28:333 (3) - Same ^^
3. Nice easy

normal.

1. I can't find something lol already good Thanks!

soulless.

1. that CS 6.9 lol quite big jump from CS 5 in hard. how about reducing to CS 6.7 or 6.5? CS isn't really something that matters in terms of map spread
2. 00:03:836 (7,1) - Stack? Intentional
3. 00:05:256 (4,7) - ^^ fix
4. 00:16:439 (4,6) - Stack is not perfect xD fix

Sorry for pointing out minor stuffs, rhythms looks fine to me and aesthetics is pretty good
goodluck!

ColdTooth wrote:

Hi. From my queue.

*modding this at 1:30 in the morning and hears it for the first time* Not like i needed sleep lol same[/]

[General]

2spooky4me

[easy.]

00:14:132 (3) - Maybe turn this into a curve downward into 00:15:197 (4) - ? [b]I think it's fine. This sharp flow is about as hard as it gets for an easy, and it's made easier a bit by the break. Does well to emphasize that sound.

00:32:238 (4,1) - As for these two notes, I feel like they stick out too much. Maybe this might flow a little bit better. Implemented

[normal.]

00:12:711 (1) - Eh, just a slight suggestion, maybe curve like this to flow? fair suggestion, but it's not inherently better then the current shape so I'll leave it.

Nothing else, pretty solid difficulty.

[soulless.]

00:05:256 (4,7) - Stack perfectly? Yep!

00:23:540 (7) - Curve this slider the other way for better flow. If this means what I think it does, I feel that would make the flow worse tbh.

This song's title name reminds me that recent beatmaps have no creativity. Is this a reference to that by any chance lmao? No, the title is very serious and is a commentary on society made by Bakari. You have to think deeply about it.

Bakari wrote:

Metadata seems to be correct, thank you for mapping this!

Bakari wrote:

Metadata seems to be correct, thank you for mapping this!

Worminators wrote:

[bb's Hard]

1. 00:00:995 (1) - not sure if it is rankable to have notes before the timing point, also it is the only diff that have this note mapped, consider removing it It's rankable because it follows the music and metronome.
2. 00:35:433 (1) - I personally do not like this hitsound :v especially if it is present in only one diff of the set It's a SB element
3. Anyway, there is a nice use of hitsounds globally in this diff

Janpai wrote:

bb's hard.

1. 00:31:883 (3) - Ctrl+G? personal preference

Think I'll keep it this way ^^

ColdTooth wrote:

[bb's hard.]

Also really solid difficulty. Try AR 7.5 if you haven't already, feels pretty decent.

Hobbes2 could do that for me :^)

(jesus by god that laugh kinda scared me) Good c:<

NewtonsCradle wrote:

from modreqs

easy.

00:11:291 (3,4) - replace with two 1/2 sliders, the sound at 00:12:001 isn't emphasized as much as it should be Well, 00:11:291 (3,4) - is a very specific rhythm that I use repeatedly throughout the map for when it appears in the song. So no change.
00:13:777 - place a note/sliderend here; the break feels unnatural Again, this is a consistency detail.

normal.

00:18:392 (1) - move a bit lower maybe???? (to make a curve with 00:18:037 (7,1,2) ) Good idea.[/b
00:26:913 (1,2,3) - you can turn the sliderend of 00:26:913 (1) and the heads of the rest into a triangle. [b]It's fine as is.

soulless.

00:32:593 (1) - the flow towards this circle feels odd, maybe move it somewhere to the right of 00:32:416 (9) Should be fine, I think, the long pause resets the flow.

good luck!

Kami-senpai wrote:

From your queue >3<

easy.

1. 00:04:546 (2) - This curve is a bit too sharp for easy diff. Consider opening it up a bit more. [b]
2. 00:23:362 (3,1) - No overlaps for easy [b]This kind of overlap is common in Easy difficulties, though. It's not hard to read and the flow is pretty intuitive. Should be fine!
3. 00:30:463 (2,3) - ^ Same as above, doesn't mess with readability so it should be ok
   
   Had my newb roommate play this to confirm xD

normal.

1. 00:02:061 (2,3) - If there's gonna be 1/4 notes like this, why not just make it 169 bpm and do 1/2 snap notes instead? You can't change BPM just for the map, the song's BPM is specific to the song; some may argue otherwise but that's my opinion. This song is 84.5 BPM as that's how the creator made it.
2. 00:15:907 (2,3) - maybe extend this to make it just one 1/2 slider? There's not really any sound at 00:16:084 that would justify ending the slider there There is though! Listen again

[*]00:20:877 (6,1) - Point 6 towards 1 more for an easier to follow normal diff flow Ok, made a small change

soulless.

1. 00:08:451 (4) - Sounds a bit empty after this note. Maybe turn this into a 1/4 slider I prefer it with the break.
2. 00:09:871 (1) - Whistle hitsound for the middle slider portion, not sure if that was intended Thanks for the catch
3. 00:20:167 (6) - Maybe make this a 1/4 slider to map to the slight sound Done!
4. 00:23:007 (5,6,7) - Don't really hear anything that justifies this uneven jump spacing. Make it more even. The high pitched sound that I hitsound with the whistle 00:23:540 (7) - always has more spacing tho
5. 00:24:782 (2) - Move this to the right a little bit more so the corner stacks with the end of the previous slider (for aesthetics) example How's this?
6. 00:31:173 (6,7) - Could have larger spacing. True, but I stacked it over 4 for aesthetics
7. 00:32:238 (8,9,1) - You also have this jump pattern a lot. Please vary more for added entertainment Eh, I like the consistency. It's a pretty simple song so I don't too much variety in the map. I tried to make it consistent without being super boring (and it's a short song so that isn't too hard to do

Good luck and please mod my map . It's a marathon, but you can just mod similar drain time (i.e. around 2 minutes)

Kami-senpai wrote:

bb's hard.

• 
  Those hitsounds though xD c:<

1. 00:05:433 (4,5) - This distance seems way too big for the map as a whole Think it's fine as it is. They are not too big.
2. 00:07:031 (1,2) - Flow seems a bit counterintuitive It's supposed to be to emphasise the melody more
   There seem to be to a lot of repeated shapes for sliders. I think it would add a great aesthetic element if you varied the slider shapes a little more.
3. 00:23:717 (5,6,1) - You also have this jump pattern a lot in your diff. Try to vary that a bit too. For example, you might do something like this. Note that I simply ctrl + g'd the slider, but it makes the pattern seem more varied. Now that's a too big jump ^^ Since this "song" is pretty monotonous I've done well varying the patterns tbh but of course I want to keep some structure in there.

tutuhaha wrote:

[Hard]
00:08:806 (4,5) - weird........I suggest to delete the 00:09:516 (5) - Alright. Done the same later on somewhere.. lol
00:25:848 (4) - end at 00:26:558 (x) - Nah I want to have the background sound clickable with the 2 circles.
00:31:173 (1) - end at 00:31:706 (x) - ^

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 1173
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:the final outburst of dying creativity
TitleUnicode:the final outburst of dying creativity
Artist:Bakari
ArtistUnicode:Bakari
Creator:Hobbes2
Version:bb's hard.
Source:
Tags:dark techno love edge BounceBabe
BeatmapID:1111520
BeatmapSetID:523568

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"serious background.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
Sample,35433,0,"laugh.wav",50

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36143,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


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1. Metadata is flawless. Well done~
2. The soft-hitfinish at the end is still abit too loud imo 00:32:593 (1) - Maybe you could reduce the volume for that a bit? You also used so many soft whistles. On almost every white tick. Mind reducing them a bit?

• 
  Hitsounds:

1. 00:25:137 (2,3,4) - Think you missed out some hitsounds here. Whistles?

• 
  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. 00:13:777 (4,5) - The 1/2 beat slider's curve would look better if it was blanketed with the longer slider. For smoother transition. http://puu.sh/rUcKx/247088eb7f.jpg
   
   Rhythm & Pattern:
2. Note how the spacing between 00:21:232 (1,2) - and 00:21:942 (2,3) - is 1,2 but on 00:07:031 (1,2,3) - the spacing is different for both. Why?
3. 00:09:871 (1,2,3,4) - 00:24:072 (1,2,3,4) - ^ slightly off too.

1. Gud o3o

tutuhaha wrote:

m4m

[Easy]
00:25:493 (3) - whistle Yes!
00:32:593 (1) - delete finish, too strong to the rhythm Correct.

[Normal]
00:02:238 (3) - ？................I dont think this whistle would be necessary...and it just scare me ;-;... I think it fits the sound there!

[soulless]
00:13:066 (2) - nc begin at here I think Hm, I don't think so it's not a new measure.

good luck .-.！

BounceBabe wrote:

Doing a quick mod as well because I can c:

General
[]

1. Metadata is flawless. Well done~ Thanks to Bakari and his spot on metadata check.
2. The soft-hitfinish at the end is still abit too loud imo 00:32:593 (1) - Maybe you could reduce the volume for that a bit? You also used so many soft whistles. On almost every white tick. Mind reducing them a bit? I just deleted em lol. I changed whistles to be every other white tick, Easy had some weird hitsounding so I fixed it.

Easy
[]

• 
  Hitsounds:

1. 00:25:137 (2,3,4) - Think you missed out some hitsounds here. Whistles?

Yeah, whoops.

Hard +
[]

• 
  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. 00:13:777 (4,5) - The 1/2 beat slider's curve would look better if it was blanketed with the longer slider. For smoother transition. http://puu.sh/rUcKx/247088eb7f.jpg I actually did that and then ctrl+H'd it. This is because I wanted a less smooth transition on purpose to emphasize the sound at 00:14:132 (5) -
   
   Rhythm & Pattern:
2. Note how the spacing between 00:21:232 (1,2) - and 00:21:942 (2,3) - is 1,2 but on 00:07:031 (1,2,3) - the spacing is different for both. Why?
3. 00:09:871 (1,2,3,4) - 00:24:072 (1,2,3,4) - ^ slightly off too.

Yeah, good points. I'm the kinda guy as you know to sacrifice spacing for aesthetics as you know, but I made a few adjustments to make the spacing cleaner. Should be better I suppose. Basically, for all of the rhythms that go "duuuu du-duuuu" like 00:31:173 (6,7), 00:09:871 (1,2) - , etc got a spacing buff, except for the one at the end because of aesthetics.

[b]Overall
[]

1. Gud o3o

Plaudible wrote:

lul

rip the og