1. Cuck (2,58 stars, 123 notes)
2. Gero's Easy (1,25 stars, 48 notes)
3. Hard (2,08 stars, 90 notes)
4. Lumael's Normal (1,54 stars, 78 notes)

MkGuh wrote:

Sick song XD

Cloudchaser wrote:

It's "jelly"

1. Nothing.

1. 00:18:251 (3) - Covered by the HP bar. - Not a big problem, I know, but for a Beginner Difficulty, it's better to avoid. - It also happens in few other places: 00:32:599 (1) - 00:40:425 (1) - .
2. 00:19:555 (4) - I quite don't agree with the repeat arrow on the offbeat, it doesn't follow anything in particular. - 00:20:860 - This is a strong beat that has been skipped. - I'd rather this rhythm instead. It happens here too: 00:24:772 (4) - .
3. 00:43:034 (3,1) - The overlap may be a problem, I think the low BPM makes it actually readable for a beginner, but pay attention to avoid it in other situations.
   
   The difficulty is clearly well made, good job Gero I am a fan of your style

1. Consider renaming the difficulty to "Normal" or something similar. It's weird to have - in osu! standards - a Hard right after an Easy difficulty.
2. It's a bit weird to have 2x slider velocity, when the Easy has only 1,2x, it's quite of a big gab, even more for a Normal kind difficulty, I'd rather go with something around 1,5x or 1,6x.
3. As a Normal Kind Difficulty, you must have constant distance snapping through the entire difficulty, jumps like: 00:02:599 (3,4) - 00:04:881 (2,3) - etc. are unrankeable due to the star rating.
4. 00:09:990 (4) - This should be snapped in 1/6
5. 00:22:164 (1) - Slider is a bit out of shape, you may want to improve its shape. (Not necessary though)
6. 00:29:990 (5) - I reckon it's better to have a simple circle instead of this 1/8 ended slider. It doesn't follow anything, it's just some weird overmapping.
7. 00:31:947 (6) - I know you went for the vocals where by finishing on the 1/6 beat, but it makes it really hard to follow for a beginner, remember this is a two stars difficulty, and the gap between the circles/sliders should be equal with some rare exceptions. - The 1/6 slider end is hard to predict and very awkward. - You could try something like this.
   
   I reckon the biggest problem of this difficulty is the DS not being constant, with a lot of unpredictable changes. If it was a Hard itself, it'd be okay, but for a 2 stars difficulty, it's a big problem

1. 00:04:881 (3,4) - Flow is weird. If you want to maintain the slider's shape, you can just Control + H it.
2. 00:07:490 (3) - Control + G this slider to improve the flow and the readability. Those jumps are a bit too much for the kind of difficulty.
3. 00:08:686 - I think you should add a circle here for consistency, you used they in everywhere else there was this beat.
4. 00:16:294 (7) - There isn't any real problem with the slider, but it looks a bit uneaty. What about blanketing it with 00:15:968 (6) - ?
5. 00:17:599 (2,3,4) - The idea of the pattern is quite nice, the problem is that it's quite hard to read, because the reverse arrow is covered by 00:17:925 (3) - 's head.
6. 00:19:229 (5) - slider's end should be snapped on 1/6 instead.
7. 00:28:686 (4,5) - Actual screen space between them is too small. - it can be easy missunderstood with a 1/6 gap, and it's actually a 1/3 gap. - Try to increase the distance between them.
8. 00:29:990 (7) - Same I said on "Hard" Difficulty, a single circle would work much better for the beat there.
   
   The difficulty itself is not bad, it's actually quite okay, the problem is the random spacing between notes. There should be some jumps here and there, with higher DS. But what we have here, is a complete random spacing between each object. In the kiai, you managed to have a more linear DS between the objects, you should apply that to the rest as well.

ezek wrote:

F-F-F-F-F-F-F-FUUURRY BG!!! *_* ♥♥♥

Lumael wrote:

Hello!

Comming from my Modding Queue.

BOLD means: highly questionable/unrankeable
not BOLD means: it's only a suggestion/comment, whether you may or may not apply

[Hard]

1. Consider renaming the difficulty to "Normal" or something similar. It's weird to have - in osu! standards - a Hard right after an Easy difficulty.
2. It's a bit weird to have 2x slider velocity, when the Easy has only 1,2x, it's quite of a big gab, even more for a Normal kind difficulty, I'd rather go with something around 1,5x or 1,6x.
3. As a Normal Kind Difficulty, you must have constant distance snapping through the entire difficulty, jumps like: 00:02:599 (3,4) - 00:04:881 (2,3) - etc. are unrankeable due to the star rating.
4. 00:09:990 (4) - This should be snapped in 1/6 it don't have sound in 1/6
5. 00:22:164 (1) - Slider is a bit out of shape, you may want to improve its shape. (Not necessary though) fix
6. 00:29:990 (5) - I reckon it's better to have a simple circle instead of this 1/8 ended slider. It doesn't follow anything, it's just some weird overmapping. the slider ends tick have the end of the voice, I follow it >.<
7. 00:31:947 (6) - I know you went for the vocals where by finishing on the 1/6 beat, but it makes it really hard to follow for a beginner, remember this is a two stars difficulty, and the gap between the circles/sliders should be equal with some rare exceptions. - The 1/6 slider end is hard to predict and very awkward. - You could try something like this.
   
   I reckon the biggest problem of this difficulty is the DS not being constant, with a lot of unpredictable changes. If it was a Hard itself, it'd be okay, but for a 2 stars difficulty, it's a big problem
   dw, It's really a hard diff, I gonna map a normal (or just find someone who makes me a gd ;w;)
   and for the stars, it's normal bc the low bpm, so I don't think its bad

[Cuck]

1. 00:04:881 (3,4) - Flow is weird. If you want to maintain the slider's shape, you can just Control + H it. nah. i like it ;3;
2. 00:07:490 (3) - Control + G this slider to improve the flow and the readability. Those jumps are a bit too much for the kind of difficulty. Fix
3. 00:08:686 - I think you should add a circle here for consistency, you used they in everywhere else there was this beat. yeah, but the sound is in 1/8, no 1/6
4. 00:16:294 (7) - There isn't any real problem with the slider, but it looks a bit uneaty. What about blanketing it with 00:15:968 (6) - ? Fix
5. 00:17:599 (2,3,4) - The idea of the pattern is quite nice, the problem is that it's quite hard to read, because the reverse arrow is covered by 00:17:925 (3) - 's head. yeah, I don't know how to make it better ;-;
6. 00:19:229 (5) - slider's end should be snapped on 1/6 instead. Fix
7. 00:28:686 (4,5) - Actual screen space between them is too small. - it can be easy missunderstood with a 1/6 gap, and it's actually a 1/3 gap. - Try to increase the distance between them. Fix
8. 00:29:990 (7) - Same I said on "Hard" Difficulty, a single circle would work much better for the beat there. I answer it before
   
   The difficulty itself is not bad, it's actually quite okay, the problem is the random spacing between notes. There should be some jumps here and there, with higher DS. But what we have here, is a complete random spacing between each object. In the kiai, you managed to have a more linear DS between the objects, you should apply that to the rest as well. okay o:

That's it!

Good Luck.

KittyAdventure wrote:

ezek wrote:

F-F-F-F-F-F-F-FUUURRY BG!!! *_* ♥♥♥

Cosmo, let mutual friends~ >3</

Lumael wrote:

I can make normal gd lolol

Chocobo wrote:

Hi, from my queue, NM req;

Hard

. 00:18:903 (4,1) - unclean, maybe blanket together; It flows with a pattern, no change
. 00:29:990 (5) - finished here: 00:30:534 - ; And a finish hitsound here; I follow the voice here (I hear the end in the blue tick)
Actually, for me, to fit the music better, u can use a long 2/1 slider at 00:29:990 - ; ^ I prefer the slider I already have
. 00:34:881 (4,1) - Flow a little strange; Fixed
. 00:42:381 (4) - NC; fix

Cuck

. Can adjust OD to 7, since it's your main diff; Sure! applied
. 00:29:338 (5,6,7) - unclean to me; fixed
. 00:31:947 (1,2) - overmapped, use the slider in hard diff is enough for this; not really overmapped, it follows perfectly the vocal
. 00:42:055 - NC; fixed
. 00:51:186 (2) - can use a curved one: bend it a little upwards; fixed

A nice map indeed, I'll shoot a star;
But still needs polishing I have to say, many details in hard and main diff need to be improved;
Hope it will help, good luck~

1. Uh Oh! Le eche un ojo al artista y al parecer es un furry y esa pandita es su fursona :v asi que tags: furry furries kenny (Kenny es el nombre de la panda). Ya de manera muy opcional podrías agregar panda y bear por el tipo de animal, pero no lo veo necesario (aunque es algo que yo haria lol)~
2. Metadata source pls

1. 00:18:251 (3) - Vamos Gero... tu estilo esta FA-BU-LO-SO y toda esa maravilla estética se arruina cuando tocas la barra de vida y se pierde la magia y el encanto~
2. 00:40:425 (1) - ^
3. Bueno, como ya sabes, excelente diff, pero deberías usar algo de 1/2, vamos! El BPM es bajo y no abria problema en darle mas variedad a la diff para hacerla mas divertida y aparte tambien balancearia mas el spread entre esta diff y la Normal, ya que la Normal usa mucho 1/2 ;w; Me preocuparía si no decides agregar algo de 1/2 ;w;

1. 00:29:990 (1,1) - I'm not a fan of this overlap~
2. 00:47:599 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved, the tail area is a bit more separated from the circle than the head area~

1. 00:29:990 (5) - Creo que a alguien se le olvido agregar nc
2. 00:43:034 (1) - Le vendría bien un jump por el fuerte sonido, de por si ya lo enfatizaste con nc, no le veo lo malo a hacerlo jump separandolo mas de (2)~

1. 00:25:099 (1) - Técnicamente no estas tocando la barra pero le das un buen rozon, se vería mejor que lo separes un poquito de ahí ;w;
2. 00:32:164 (2,3,1) - Se siente muy extraño que estas 3 notas esten hechas stack ya que no estan separadas por el mismo lapso de tiempo, te recomendaría hacer exactamente lo que hiciste en la Hard. 00:31:947 (1,2) - Que estos sean un slider, que haga un ligero jump y (3) y (1) esten hechos stack.
3. 00:53:468 - Eh.. no creo que el clap sea el hitsound apropiado para este sonido :/