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00:02:872 (2872|1,2872|2) - 00:03:103 (3103|1,3103|2) - not sure about having these the exact same tbh; i kinda get that it amplifies the stack of notes there but then again the former is a much airier sound than the latter sooo id prefer you differentiating them (whilst keeping the stack ofc) - applies to all similar
Even if I agree with you, I kinda like the anchor pattern it makes, removing a jump is just gonna make it weird and inconstant00:02:814 (2814|3) - i think this is on the 1/3 tick right before
00:06:507 (6507|0) - 00:10:199 (10199|0) - 00:13:891 (13891|3) - 1/3 tick before too (fix across all diffs pls)
Nice catch, gonna applies to the others diffs00:10:257 (10257|2,10372|2,10488|2) - you had the same stack in the same column as with before (see 00:06:564 (6564|2,6680|2,6795|2) - ) so its kinda odd
Fixed (on the Extra too)00:15:680 (15680|2,15680|3) - not sure why this is a double; the drum this is on 00:15:738 -
00:15:968 - intentionally missed?
Fixed the whole pattern00:16:141 - id prefer you had a note here actually; the synths revert in and out and having something like [124]3[124] could work with that
Oh, good idea00:27:680 (27680|1,27680|0,27795|3,27795|2) - 00:28:141 (28141|2,28141|3,28257|1,28257|0) - maybe you can alternate patterns like 00:27:218 (27218|1,27218|0,27334|1,27334|2,27334|3) - for those two things since having 00:27:218 (27218|1,27334|1) - just this lone thing is pretty odd given how the bouncy""" the beats here are
Kinda want to keep the fade out effectdam the drop always gives me chills
Feel the power ! 00:31:026 - im not tooo sure how you layer the trills here; i guess i can understand the rationale behind 00:31:834 (31834|1,31891|2,31949|1,32180|1,32238|2,32295|1) - trills like these since theres the synth thing on 1/2s there, but then theres a lack of such patterning at places such as 00:31:488 - 00:34:026 - and similar. ill just ignore these variations in the js for this difficulty then
I actually go for playability over pitch for the JS section, some pattern like the trill you said are unintentional, I fixed it.00:36:334 - perhaps you can anchor 4 like what you did back at 00:32:641 - @#@#
actually I kinda want to avoid anchor because I want them for the big bursts like at 00:34:488 - 00:37:718 (37718|2,37834|2) - since there isnt the dududu bass thing on 1/4s here and youve mostly just used 00:37:488 (37488|1,37603|0,37603|1,37718|0) - these things to represent that id suggest you remove 00:37:718 (37718|2,37834|2) -
I made the pattern slighty more rolly, should make it easier without killing the 1/4 stream flow00:44:180 (44180|1,44238|0) - crtl-g
oki00:44:122 (44122|3,44180|2) - crtl-g
okiperhaps you can use something like that trill to represent these 1/4s dudu things - applies to similar sections
what?00:45:680 - im a sucker for consistency things and the difference between the entrace of this js and 00:38:295 - bugs me a little
Well I empathise the voice with big but simple pattern, so I guess it's ok00:47:411 - you can do the anchor thing too, see @#@#
00:51:622 (51622|0,51680|1,51911|0,51968|1,52257|0,52314|1) - is having the 1/4 things land on the same column intentional?
Yes, want to keep the burst on left hand00:52:661 (52661|1,52718|3,52776|0,52834|2,52891|1,52949|3,53007|1,53064|2,53122|3) - i think this makes more sense if it were to transition from a trilly kind of stream to a smoother stream; well, following the woooosh thing in the music at least
Good idea !00:53:526 (53526|0,53641|0,53757|0) - intentional?
Nope, fixed00:57:795 (57795|2,57911|2,58026|2,58141|2) - seems pretty meh to me
changed to something more rolly00:58:834 (58834|3,58949|3,59064|3) - 00:59:411 (59411|2,59526|2,59641|2) - ^ lands on the same hand as the stack above
rearranged00:58:257 - think these would work much better if theyre something like [12]3[12]3; the jumptrill here seems to go too far up the intensity scale given how the wooosh, though it may be going up in tone ( i think idk ), is dropping in volume
Well as the last burst of the kiai section I kinda like it. It's actually pretty rolly/mashable/readable anyway so I guess it's ok.00:59:526 (59526|2,59584|3,59641|2,59718|3,59795|2) - think you can transition out from the hs better, shift 00:59:795 (59795|2,59872|1) - left 1 space
Changed it a bit differently with a jump removed before the hand01:05:526 (65526|1) - to one, you only stack 1/2s when its 01:02:988 (62988|1,63045|3,63103|1) - sounds like these or 01:04:257 (64257|1,64372|1) - synths like these &&&
01:05:930 (65930|1) - dont think theres a beat here
01:06:738 - 01:06:968 - there are beats here
01:06:564 (66564|2,66622|1,66680|0,66680|3,66795|1,66853|2,66911|3,66911|0) - also the last time you used this pattern was at 01:03:334 - hence such a pattern should only begin at 01:07:026 -
01:07:834 (67834|3,67949|3,68064|3) - intentional?
01:07:488 (67488|0) - honestly think the LN does a disservice here, it kinda somewhat masks the woooosh thing rather than represent it since the main thing going on in this section is just 432432432 and it doesnt really do much in terms of scaling up in intensity and whatnot (aside from that 3 note stack i pointed out above but yeah im pretty sure thats unintentional)
01:08:295 (68295|1) - to 4, see &&&
01:08:584 (68584|3) - to 3, 01:08:526 (68526|1,68584|3,68641|1) - only these notes should be trilled cuz of the deeper dudu sounds
01:09:507 (69507|0) - no sound here too imo
01:12:911 (72911|2) - to 2, see &&&
01:13:314 (73314|2) - there miughtttttttttttt be a sound here but im not tooo sure; im going with 70% no sound
01:14:122 (74122|0,74122|1) - why double?
01:14:180 (74180|3,74180|2) - being nitpicky here, but the audio channel for this snare is predominantly on the left and the chord is on the right - same goes for 01:14:526 (74526|2,74526|0,74757|0,74757|3,74988|3,74988|0,75218|0,75218|3) - all these chords
01:15:103 (75103|2,75161|1) - crtl-h, you did the mirror thing for all similar sections
01:15:103 - i guess i should also mention that i think these notes do deserve to be doubled
OK FUCK THE BREAKCORE PART GONNA REMAP IT01:15:334 - graxay corraspe
boi01:19:026 (79026|3,79141|2) - dont think theres anything wrong with stacking these
Little error, fixed01:26:526 (86526|3) - maybe this can go to 2 (and youd have to rearrange above ofc) since the max number of notes in an anchor for this section is 3
rearranged the whole pattern01:29:257 (89257|2,89334|1,89411|0) - i honestly cant really hear what these are folliowing,
theres percussion on 01:29:411 - 01:29:468 - 01:29:526 - and
01:29:564 (89564|2) - if you intend on following the vocals then the girl starts moaning again at 01:29:584 - on 1/4
yeah it's the "uuuuuh", rearranged it01:29:988 - having a note here seems pretty much necessary, gap feels too sudden
Uh oki01:40:863 (100863|0,100949|0) - this jack is pretty iffy to me
removed a note It's kinda the GD goal to have different approach of each parts I guess, a lot of parts are actually easier on the Shift diff but I don't really mind.01:43:026 (103026|2,103141|2,103257|2) - 01:50:872 (110872|2,110988|2,111103|2) - 01:55:718 (115718|2,115834|2,115949|2,116064|2) - 01:56:988 (116988|1,117103|1,117218|1) - intentional?
Nope, fixed01:44:122 (104122|2,104180|3,104238|2,104295|3,104353|1,104411|0,104468|1,104526|0,104584|2,104641|3,104699|2,104757|3) - if im not wrong arent these trills supposed to be a 1/4 tick higher so they start on the white tick, no?
I think it flows better one tick before01:50:180 (110180|0,110295|0,110295|1,110411|1) - maybe you can have these be on the other hand here, last js 01:46:488 (106488|1,106603|0,106603|1,106718|0) - already had these on the same hand
Don't think it's a big issue01:54:968 (114968|2,115026|1,115026|3,115084|0,115084|2,115141|1) - i think this is pretty rough for a 5.17 star 260 bpm extra, maybe you can blame the SR partially here but it seems as though most of the patterning has been quite tame (for the JS, i mean) so this does pop out as a little bit of a spike in difficulty
Changed it a little bit, should be easier to hit but harder to read01:59:641 - this is actually a pretty cool concept, just one thing though: im not sure whether or not players will lose out on the rhythm right here since the jumps extend for song long without any nicks in them and theyve just cleared through 260 js
Already asked about it and it plays well apparently02:28:257 (148257|0,148314|1,148372|2,148430|3) - dont think the wooosh thing starts to be 1/4 until 02:28:488 -
02:27:795 (147795|0,147872|1,147949|2,148026|1,148103|2,148180|3,148257|0,148314|1,148372|2,148430|3) - honestly speaking these notes seem like dumping to me, idk i might just be worrying about the wrong things here since you can rope in willing BNs anyway
the problem is making 02:28:257 (148257|0,148314|1,148372|2,148430|3) - 1/3 is gonna make the whole pattern really weird, consistancy I guess02:47:468 (167468|1) - dont think theres a beat here
Fixed03:04:026 (184026|0,184141|0,184257|0) - i suppose you should standardize how you represent sections like these
Yeah i'm gonna make some changes03:09:603 (189603|1,189641|2,189680|3) - the bzzt sound only starts at 03:09:680 -
I prefer consistancy during dense section like this03:11:526 (191526|3) - having this be included in 03:11:526 (191526|3,191641|3,191757|3,191872|3,191988|3) - this anchor seems misleading to me tbh
Fixed03:13:257 - note perhaps?
Want to empathise the quad03:22:141 (202141|0,202141|2,202141|3) - why a triple here?
Fixed(i think a couple of the things i listed out in this diff carries over to the other diffs too, please check thoroughly)
Moslty the Extra yeah, gonna recheck