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Earth Star Dream - Yumeiro Toridori Parade

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Agatsu
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Agatsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November 20, 2016 at 6:19:47 PM

Artist: Earth Star Dream
Title: Yumeiro Toridori Parade
Source: 魔法少女なんてもういいですから。
Tags: mahou shoujo nante mou iidesukara op opening anime tv size akitoshi pkhg
BPM: 138
Filesize: 18421kb
Play Time: 00:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Normal (1.83 stars, 77 notes)
  2. Easy (1.41 stars, 47 notes)
  3. Parade (3.13 stars, 111 notes)
  4. pkhg's Hard (2.43 stars, 100 notes)
Download: Earth Star Dream - Yumeiro Toridori Parade
Download: Earth Star Dream - Yumeiro Toridori Parade (no video)
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by Akitoshi
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mp3 and video from Pata-Mon's mapset
Last edited by Agatsu , edited 74 times in total.
7ambda
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Joined January 2015
7ambda
#modreqs

Easy
  1. 00:42:521 (3,4) - Vocal begins on white tick; wouldn't make much sense to start (4) on red when the vocal has already started. I know you want to keep that 1/1 gap because it's easy diff, so maybe make (3,4) one long slider, since it would better follow the rhythm, while keeping it simple for beginners.
Akitoshi's Normal
  1. Where are the hitsounds?
  2. 00:05:782 (4) - NC
  3. 00:22:956 (3) - ^
  4. 00:40:782 (2) - To make this more beginner friendly, I would just make this a 1/1 repeat.
  5. 00:41:651 (4) - ^
Parade
  1. 00:00:565 (1,2,3) - I really don't think there should be any hitsounds [which includes 00:02:304 (1,2,3)] until 00:04:043 (1). Everything before 00:04:043 (1) only has subtle drums, which shouldn't be emphasized since the tambourine is more important. It wouldn't be a good idea to give two instruments the same hitsound.
  2. 00:04:043 (1) - Should have some hitsound to emphasize the tambourine.
  3. 00:15:130 (2) - I honestly think this should be two circles. Vocal-wise, this sounds similar to 00:13:608 (3,4) and would be slightly more confusing to play otherwise unless you had that repetition.
  4. 00:35:782 (2) - Shouldn't you just copy/paste (1) to make it symmetrical?
  5. 00:40:564 (1) - NC should start at (2) because that's when a new vocal begins.
  6. 00:44:043 (1) - Don't see a point of an NC here since there's no new sound.
Agatsu
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Topic Starter
Agatsu

F1r3tar wrote:

#modreqs

Easy
  1. 00:42:521 (3,4) - Vocal begins on white tick; wouldn't make much sense to start (4) on red when the vocal has already started. I know you want to keep that 1/1 gap because it's easy diff, so maybe make (3,4) one long slider, since it would better follow the rhythm, while keeping it simple for beginners. for 00:43:391 (4) - i would like it so that it starts when the singer says "piru kana"
Parade
  1. 00:00:565 (1,2,3) - I really don't think there should be any hitsounds [which includes 00:02:304 (1,2,3)] until 00:04:043 (1). Everything before 00:04:043 (1) only has subtle drums, which shouldn't be emphasized since the tambourine is more important. It wouldn't be a good idea to give two instruments the same hitsound. fixed
  2. 00:04:043 (1) - Should have some hitsound to emphasize the tambourine. 00:04:043 - there is a hitsound here
  3. 00:15:130 (2) - I honestly think this should be two circles. Vocal-wise, this sounds similar to 00:13:608 (3,4) and would be slightly more confusing to play otherwise unless you had that repetition. fixed
  4. 00:35:782 (2) - Shouldn't you just copy/paste (1) to make it symmetrical? i guess i want that slider to flow into 00:36:217 (3) -
  5. 00:40:564 (1) - NC should start at (2) because that's when a new vocal begins. i dont want to, idk why.. sry
  6. 00:44:043 (1) - Don't see a point of an NC here since there's no new sound. hmm, it's like to indicate the ending
thanks for the mod! your avatar is scary
Affirmation
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Joined March 2015
Affirmation
Q NM

[Easy]
00:01:869 - 00:03:608 - why you ignored this beat? Music is strong, Do I think you should add a beat here.
00:07:086 - ^
00:33:173 (3,2) - Why you overlapped here? I think stack could be better, or 00:34:912 (2) - put 143,240 for make triangle.
00:37:086 - add a beat and spinner start at 00:37:304 - .

[Normal]
00:29:478 - I think this part should have a beat, It has strong vocal.
00:29:912 (4) - And delete this beat, And map could be better.
00:41:651 (4,5,7) - Too near, Looks little bit awkward 00:43:173 (7) - put little bit down.

[Parade]
00:09:695 - 00:10:130 - 00:10:564 - add beat for express vocals? Could be better,
00:24:043 (4,1) - swap NC.
00:44:043 (1) - put 488,358 for emphasize.
It looks Insane, Where is Hard diff?

Good luck!
Agatsu
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Topic Starter
Agatsu

Neoskylove wrote:

Q NM

[Easy]
00:01:869 - 00:03:608 - why you ignored this beat? Music is strong, Do I think you should add a beat here. i am mapping the drum
00:07:086 - ^ sure
00:33:173 (3,2) - Why you overlapped here? I think stack could be better, or 00:34:912 (2) - put 143,240 for make triangle. fixed
00:37:086 - add a beat and spinner start at 00:37:304 - . i want to keep things simple

[Parade]
00:09:695 - 00:10:130 - 00:10:564 - add beat for express vocals? Could be better,
00:24:043 (4,1) - swap NC. i think it would be better to isolate (1)
00:44:043 (1) - put 488,358 for emphasize. ok
It looks Insane, Where is Hard diff? aaaa, i want to nerf top diff to keep three diffs

Good luck!
ty neosl
Akitoshi
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Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Neoskylove wrote:

[Normal]
00:29:478 - I think this part should have a beat, It has strong vocal. want to prioritize 00:29:260 - instead
00:29:912 (4) - And delete this beat, And map could be better. i prefer my current one ;3
00:41:651 (4,5,7) - Too near, Looks little bit awkward 00:43:173 (7) - put little bit down. fixd
thanks!

asd
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TitleUnicode:夢色トリドリパレード♫
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ArtistUnicode:アース・スター ドリーム
Creator:Agatsu
Version:Akitoshi's Normal
Source:魔法少女なんてもういいですから。
Tags:mahou shoujo nante mou iidesukara op opening anime tv size akitoshi
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Agatsu
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Agatsu

Akitoshi wrote:

Neoskylove wrote:

[Normal]
00:29:478 - I think this part should have a beat, It has strong vocal. want to prioritize 00:29:260 - instead
00:29:912 (4) - And delete this beat, And map could be better. i prefer my current one ;3
00:41:651 (4,5,7) - Too near, Looks little bit awkward 00:43:173 (7) - put little bit down. fixd
thanks!

asd
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TitleUnicode:夢色トリドリパレード♫
Artist:Earth Star Dream
ArtistUnicode:アース・スター ドリーム
Creator:Agatsu
Version:Akitoshi's Normal
Source:魔法少女なんてもういいですから。
Tags:mahou shoujo nante mou iidesukara op opening anime tv size akitoshi
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thanks updated and hitsounded!
CodeS
1,142 posts
Joined September 2011
CodeS
Hey, from #modreq

Something small


Eays:

00:12:738 (3) - move to x:364 y:336 and curve it a bit, like : http://i.imgur.com/ej6iucU.png why? first of all, there's no reason for the slider to be so low, it can be uncomfortable to new players, second, curving it makes the flow a bit better and gives a better feeling / look.
00:26:651 (3) - Wait what? This way too out of grid, I mean, it even TOUCHES the ingame overlay http://i.imgur.com/7Ifooj0.jpg

00:30:130 (3) - Curve it in direction to the next note, also:
00:31:434 (4) - Move this to x:344 y:160 to make a better triangle pattern with 00:29:695 (2,3) -

Like: http://i.imgur.com/bVsT992.png



Insane:

00:09:695 - 00:10:130 - and 00:10:564 - put a note here! while I get the idea behind NOT doing that, I feel like is a shame as you had an amazing intro, and these beats are actually really strong because is combination of Beat + Voice.

00:32:521 (4,5) - These sliders feel really off because they're not on the strong beats and is confusing because owhile you try to follow the voice, you has been following a intituive beat clicking on the sliders, try this 00:32:521 - being another note and move the sliders one tick to the right, it would end as 4 notes jump and then 4 sliders set, that way you make emphasis on the beats, the voice, and you don't lose intensity, like: http://i.imgur.com/ugkvU8D.png




Good map!
Agatsu
Beatmap Nominator
1,145 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Agatsu

Katyusha wrote:

Hey, from #modreq

Something small


Eays:

00:12:738 (3) - move to x:364 y:336 and curve it a bit, like : http://i.imgur.com/ej6iucU.png why? first of all, there's no reason for the slider to be so low, it can be uncomfortable to new players, second, curving it makes the flow a bit better and gives a better feeling / look. fixed
00:26:651 (3) - Wait what? This way too out of grid, I mean, it even TOUCHES the ingame overlay http://i.imgur.com/7Ifooj0.jpg fixed

00:30:130 (3) - Curve it in direction to the next note, also: fixed
00:31:434 (4) - Move this to x:344 y:160 to make a better triangle pattern with 00:29:695 (2,3) - fixed

Like: http://i.imgur.com/bVsT992.png



Insane:

00:09:695 - 00:10:130 - and 00:10:564 - put a note here! while I get the idea behind NOT doing that, I feel like is a shame as you had an amazing intro, and these beats are actually really strong because is combination of Beat + Voice. sorry, i just don't think that this part is strong enough

00:32:521 (4,5) - These sliders feel really off because they're not on the strong beats and is confusing because owhile you try to follow the voice, you has been following a intituive beat clicking on the sliders, try this 00:32:521 - being another note and move the sliders one tick to the right, it would end as 4 notes jump and then 4 sliders set, that way you make emphasis on the beats, the voice, and you don't lose intensity, like: http://i.imgur.com/ugkvU8D.png
i personally have no problem with this, i know it sounds weird but i don't want to change this



Good map!
thanks katyushaa!! :3
Juiceys
530 posts
Joined June 2016
Juiceys
Catchy Song~ Makes me want to mod it tbh

EASY

00:34:912 (2) - Doesn't stack with 00:33:173 (3) - Either make them stack or move 2 above 00:33:608 (1) - more

NORMAL

00:00:999 (2,3) - This doesn't follow the same pattern as 00:02:738 (1,2,3) - Is this intentional? :o
00:23:608 (4,5) - (5) ends on a prominent vocal and I think it should be clicked. You should extend (4) to a full beat and make (5) a circle
00:25:782 (3,4) - I don't really like this shape, consider changing it to make it look nicer.

Parade

This map is filled of confusing overlaps that made looking over the map a challenge, I would consider moving a lot of these overlaps.


Modder's Notes
High Quality map, Good chance of getting it ranked, just need to polish it a bit.
Agatsu
Beatmap Nominator
1,145 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Agatsu

Juiceys wrote:

Catchy Song~ Makes me want to mod it tbh

EASY

00:34:912 (2) - Doesn't stack with 00:33:173 (3) - Either make them stack or move 2 above 00:33:608 (1) - more fixed

Parade

This map is filled of confusing overlaps that made looking over the map a challenge, I would consider moving a lot of these overlaps. i guess overlapping is part of my mapping style so i cant change this easily


Modder's Notes
High Quality map, Good chance of getting it ranked, just need to polish it a bit.
ty for the mod!
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Juiceys wrote:

NORMAL

00:00:999 (2,3) - This doesn't follow the same pattern as 00:02:738 (1,2,3) - Is this intentional? :o variation + actually the intru's pitch is changing too
00:23:608 (4,5) - (5) ends on a prominent vocal and I think it should be clicked. You should extend (4) to a full beat and make (5) a circle
00:25:782 (3,4) - I don't really like this shape, consider changing it to make it look nicer. hah no
thnx
asd
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TitleUnicode:夢色トリドリパレード♫
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Dubturt
508 posts
Joined March 2015
Dubturt
Hello :3

[Parade]

no kiai mode?
00:17:521 (4) - 00:17:956 (1) - flow kind of broke here try adjusting it
00:34:043 (2,3,4,5) - the movement here seems awkward for some players

[Easy]
00:05:782 (3) - slider shape fix
00:17:086 (4) - make this a normal 3 point slider instead

there ya go :D have fun mappoing
Agatsu
Beatmap Nominator
1,145 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Agatsu

Akitoshi wrote:

Juiceys wrote:

NORMAL

00:00:999 (2,3) - This doesn't follow the same pattern as 00:02:738 (1,2,3) - Is this intentional? :o variation + actually the intru's pitch is changing too
00:23:608 (4,5) - (5) ends on a prominent vocal and I think it should be clicked. You should extend (4) to a full beat and make (5) a circle
00:25:782 (3,4) - I don't really like this shape, consider changing it to make it look nicer. hah no
thnx
asd
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70,171,42086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,295,42521,2,0,P|28:329|31:363,2,65,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,270,43173,2,0,L|152:266,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,312,43608,2,0,L|263:308,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,299,44043,5,0,0:0:0:0:


thx updated!

Dubturt wrote:

Hello :3

[Parade]

no kiai mode? no, otherwise kiai will take up majority of the map
00:17:521 (4) - 00:17:956 (1) - flow kind of broke here try adjusting it it's a spot to prepare for the flow to change direction
00:34:043 (2,3,4,5) - the movement here seems awkward for some players not really

[Easy]
00:05:782 (3) - slider shape fix aesthetics yo
00:17:086 (4) - make this a normal 3 point slider instead ^

there ya go :D have fun mappoing
thx 4 ze mod

EDIT: added combo colours
William K
694 posts
Joined January 2013
William K
Hi, I'm back lol I love this song xD

[Parade]

  1. 00:04:912 (3,1) - How about making the aesthetics here better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6420176. They have an even spacing for those two notes and slider end, and maybe you may try changing the place of 00:05:130 (4) - if you want to make it only to the right-movement.
  2. 00:24:478 (1) - I think the NC is not needed here if it's only for the volume and hitsound change, and it looks nicer if the NC is off imo.
  3. 00:27:956 (5,6) - How about CTRL+G-ing here? It would emphasize the high sounded vocals at 00:28:391 (1) - better and there would be an effect for 00:27:956 (5) - too, since you changed the hitsound to soft here.
  4. 00:37:086 (1) - Actually I'm hoping this note has a higher spacing, since you put normal-sounded vocals with 1.40x spacing, mostly in this diff. Imo, putting it a bit more to the bottom sounds better, maybe you may try 1.60x lol

I think that's all from me, xD luv this :3 cya
Agatsu
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Topic Starter
Agatsu

William K wrote:

Hi, I'm back lol I love this song xD

[Parade]

  1. 00:04:912 (3,1) - How about making the aesthetics here better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6420176. They have an even spacing for those two notes and slider end, and maybe you may try changing the place of 00:05:130 (4) - if you want to make it only to the right-movement. fixed
  2. 00:24:478 (1) - I think the NC is not needed here if it's only for the volume and hitsound change, and it looks nicer if the NC is off imo.
    i'll keep the nc cuz i want it to stand out
  3. 00:27:956 (5,6) - How about CTRL+G-ing here? It would emphasize the high sounded vocals at 00:28:391 (1) - better and there would be an effect for 00:27:956 (5) - too, since you changed the hitsound to soft here. sure
  4. 00:37:086 (1) - Actually I'm hoping this note has a higher spacing, since you put normal-sounded vocals with 1.40x spacing, mostly in this diff. Imo, putting it a bit more to the bottom sounds better, maybe you may try 1.60x lol fixed

I think that's all from me, xD luv this :3 cya
thanks again william! <3
vick
260 posts
Joined August 2014
vick
Hi Agatsu !

Parade

- 00:02:738 (2,3) - This flows well, but imo can be improved bending the 2 a bit more like this http://puu.sh/s0hIS/4567ebcac7.jpg

- 00:03:173 (3) - Uhh, i feel like this is overmaped. Can't hear anything in that reverse arrow

- 00:16:217 (1,3) - I don't feel like its necesary, but maybe you can make a blanket here ?

Easy

- 00:07:521 (1) - I'm not good at sliderart but, this feels kinda bad imo xd

- 00:43:391 (4) - Maybe you can improve the rhythm like this ? http://puu.sh/s0iaV/25fe60780d.jpg



Sorry, I couldn't find anything in Akitoshi's diff

Good luck, everything seems very clean !
Agatsu
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Topic Starter
Agatsu

vick wrote:

Hi Agatsu !

Parade

- 00:02:738 (2,3) - This flows well, but imo can be improved bending the 2 a bit more like this http://puu.sh/s0hIS/4567ebcac7.jpg fixed

- 00:03:173 (3) - Uhh, i feel like this is overmaped. Can't hear anything in that reverse arrow really? i hear it though

- 00:16:217 (1,3) - I don't feel like its necesary, but maybe you can make a blanket here ? i don't really like blankets >w<


Easy

- 00:07:521 (1) - I'm not good at sliderart but, this feels kinda bad imo xd i was trying to make something unique but it failed ;w;

- 00:43:391 (4) - Maybe you can improve the rhythm like this ? http://puu.sh/s0iaV/25fe60780d.jpg i feel like this is something for a normal diff instead



Sorry, I couldn't find anything in Akitoshi's diff

Good luck, everything seems very clean !
thanks vick!
Atrue
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Atrue
From #modreq
[General]
Metadata Check OK. Nice mapset.

[Easy]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Some slider shapes are not so fit, but generally is fine.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:01:869 - 00:03:608 - Although it is an Easy diff, leaving this not covered is still makes people feel empty. Since the BPM is not too high, why not covering a strong sound you are following?

    00:07:521 (1) - This curve is not natual. You can actually use a single anchor to create something better. Like this:
    SPOILER

    00:14:478 (1) - Maybe you can use less curve on the tail to make the tail looks not so big.
    SPOILER
[Akitoshi's Normal]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Nice catch on rhythm. Just some minor points here.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:32:086 - Since you are always following the vocal, having some hit feelings here will be a better choice. So how about making the reverse slider a note + a slider? Pattern wise you can use this:
    SPOILER

    00:40:782 (2,3) - Since here is actually with 00:41:651 (4,5) - this part, you didn't map the drum here at 00:41:434 . That is fine, but if you stack 2 with 1, it will make it pretty intuitive to think that the drum is also mapped to follow 1,2,3 pattern. So to be less confusing, I'm thinking about moving 2 and 3 a bit to avoid recognizing 1,2,3 as a pattern. Here is a reference you may want to take a look:
    SPOILER
[Parade]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Clean. Nothing too much to pick.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:42:304 - Should not use finish, a drum finish is not so fit in this gradually decreasing volume especially you didn't used it in previous parts.

Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!
Agatsu
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Topic Starter
Agatsu

Atrue wrote:

From #modreq
[General]
Metadata Check OK. Nice mapset.

[Easy]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Some slider shapes are not so fit, but generally is fine.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:01:869 - 00:03:608 - Although it is an Easy diff, leaving this not covered is still makes people feel empty. Since the BPM is not too high, why not covering a strong sound you are following? i am focusing on the most important sounds here

    00:07:521 (1) - This curve is not natual. You can actually use a single anchor to create something better. Like this: did something simliar
    SPOILER

    00:14:478 (1) - Maybe you can use less curve on the tail to make the tail looks not so big.
    SPOILER
    did something similiar


    • [Parade]
    1. Structrual Issue
      Clean. Nothing too much to pick.
    2. Minor Picks
      00:42:304 - Should not use finish, a drum finish is not so fit in this gradually decreasing volume especially you didn't used it in previous parts. fixed


Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!
thank you for the star & mod!
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