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Aimer - Akane Sasu (TV size)

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Lobelia
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Lobelia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年1月15日 at 17:18:05

Artist: Aimer
Title: Akane Sasu (TV size)
Source: 夏目友人帳 伍
Tags: エメ ed ending natsume yuujinchou aimerrhythm everlasting snow Kanor Regraz
BPM: 74
Filesize: 15659kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Hard (2.61 stars, 180 notes)
  2. Insane (3.29 stars, 230 notes)
  3. kanor's Normal (1.75 stars, 120 notes)
Download: Aimer - Akane Sasu (TV size)
Download: Aimer - Akane Sasu (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄
是不是没人开坑？没人开，我开了。
Normal -- by kanor
Hard -- by Regraz and me
Regraz's parts:00:01:464 - 00:27:409 - , 00:52:139 - 01:06:328
My parts:00:27:409 - 00:52:139 - , 01:06:328 - 01:29:031
Insane -- by me

Metadate: http://www.aimer-web.jp/sp/disco/archive/?SECL-2069
Thanks kitty offer the metadata~~
Thanks Xinely make the sb name~~~
Last edited by Lobelia , edited 35 times in total.
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Lobelia
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kanor
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走开啦，讨厌你QWQ
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Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Lobelia

kanor wrote:

走开啦，讨厌你QWQ
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Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,361 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
My part done!
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Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Lobelia

Regraz wrote:

My part done!
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你真是一个好人
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
没全搞完还真不知道水些什么好.. 比较简单的图怎么说都是比较主观的东西

General
  1. cb colour, countdown
kanor's Normal
  1. 00:51:328 (4) - 这个滑条比较短这么overlap一半看着比较尴尬，建议横过来放或者你觉得怎么样舒服
  2. 00:54:977 (4,5,1) - 在这么柔和的歌里这么丢三个直滑条感觉好生硬.. 我个人是不太喜欢，你看看 00:56:599 (1) - 换成这样如何
  3. 01:04:707 (4,5,1) - 这里这样摆的话感受不太好，视觉上花式不等距。可以试试 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6463584
Collab Hard
  1. 00:05:518 (3) - 可以试试跟钢琴，开头这一大组全是跟的背景里那个很淡的蓝线音有点单调
  2. 00:29:031 (4,5) - 虽然没人看但也可以远距离包一下.. 不白搞5那个形状
  3. 00:34:707 (2) - 2->3 1.5x 还是看得出来间距上有点区别的，调整一下尾部包的位置吧
  4. 00:46:058 (6,7,8,1) - rip blanket
  5. 00:51:734 (5,2) - 00:52:545 (1,3) - 搞一样间距？
  6. 01:06:126 (9) - 相对后面的1甚至678的音都弱很多，8->9的间距不合理，至少比9->1小
  7. 01:08:659 (5,6) - 这个你这样放真的很难直观地读啊，不如尝试把那个音放到滑条尾带过去
Insane
  1. 00:17:680 (1,2,3,4) - 同hard..辣鸡stack 毁我blanket
  2. 00:43:423 (7,1) - 1上那音还是比较强这里stack不太合曲
  3. 01:09:572 (1,2,3) - 为什么不是两边放一样距离啊（

    有些地方个人不是很喜欢不过总体还是很干净，kiai前那部分感觉很舒服
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Lobelia

Garden wrote:

没全搞完还真不知道水些什么好.. 比较简单的图怎么说都是比较主观的东西

General
  1. cb colour, countdown
这个我会在找音效时候一起加上的=W=


Collab Hard
  1. 00:05:518 (3) - 可以试试跟钢琴，开头这一大组全是跟的背景里那个很淡的蓝线音有点单调
  2. 00:29:031 (4,5) - 虽然没人看但也可以远距离包一下.. 不白搞5那个形状好
  3. 00:34:707 (2) - 2->3 1.5x 还是看得出来间距上有点区别的，调整一下尾部包的位置吧好
  4. 00:46:058 (6,7,8,1) - rip blanket好
  5. 00:51:734 (5,2) - 00:52:545 (1,3) - 搞一样间距？好
  6. 01:06:126 (9) - 相对后面的1甚至678的音都弱很多，8->9的间距不合理，至少比9->1小
  7. 01:08:659 (5,6) - 这个你这样放真的很难直观地读啊，不如尝试把那个音放到滑条尾带过去QWQ这里就不啦，感觉这里两连点击更舒服听起来，坑也就坑这一下
没回复的是瓜子的部分=W=
Insane
  1. 00:17:680 (1,2,3,4) - 同hard..辣鸡stack 毁我blanket
  2. 00:43:423 (7,1) - 1上那音还是比较强这里stack不太合曲
  3. 01:09:572 (1,2,3) - 为什么不是两边放一样距离啊（
    all fix

    有些地方个人不是很喜欢不过总体还是很干净，kiai前那部分感觉很舒服
感谢花园神的帮助!
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Hanazawa Kana
小弟来水了
nazi mod come

[Insane]
00:09:166 (4) - 这个前后的flow好难受 而且这里我感觉你如果想追人声的话不如00:09:369 - 这个换成单点 这个是这部分人声最高的部分.讲道理你滑条尾追这个 然后后面放单点感觉起来会有点点奇怪....我推荐一个节奏你可以试试看 https://puu.sh/sERX0.png
00:12:409 (4) - 感觉可以stack到00:11:193 (1) - 的尾部
00:18:288 (2) - 其实这里做blanket的话打起来会很别手 https://puu.sh/sESke.png 我觉得可以把这个放外面一些 搞个类似于圆的flow会好一点
00:20:720 - 这里我觉得可以放个单点 类似00:23:964 (10) - 这里
00:50:112 (1,2,3) - 有点别手 感觉这里可以尝试两个两个一组的滑条 没必要非得包...如果你前面不想改的话 那就把4也包了吧..前面全包了就这个是直的感觉有点尴尬
额 感觉是为了包而包 其实有的地方我觉得可以奔放一点的 没必要非得贴着滑条做blanket

[hard]
hard我自己也不会做所以只能水一点点了
00:46:666 (7,8,1) - 这都要贴上了.... 摆开点感觉美观一点吧

[normal]
水一条
00:27:409 (1) - 这个可以就弧形吧 突然一个折线形感觉有点不爽

加油啦
我kd射没了...设不了 尴尬
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Lobelia

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

小弟来水了
nazi mod come

[Insane]
00:09:166 (4) - 这个前后的flow好难受 而且这里我感觉你如果想追人声的话不如00:09:369 - 这个换成单点 这个是这部分人声最高的部分.讲道理你滑条尾追这个 然后后面放单点感觉起来会有点点奇怪....我推荐一个节奏你可以试试看 https://puu.sh/sERX0.png
00:12:409 (4) - 感觉可以stack到00:11:193 (1) - 的尾部
00:18:288 (2) - 其实这里做blanket的话打起来会很别手 https://puu.sh/sESke.png 我觉得可以把这个放外面一些 搞个类似于圆的flow会好一点
00:20:720 - 这里我觉得可以放个单点 类似00:23:964 (10) - 这里
00:50:112 (1,2,3) - 有点别手 感觉这里可以尝试两个两个一组的滑条 没必要非得包...如果你前面不想改的话 那就把4也包了吧..前面全包了就这个是直的感觉有点尴尬我觉得挺好看的啊QWQ
额 感觉是为了包而包 其实有的地方我觉得可以奔放一点的 没必要非得贴着滑条做blanket 哭哭，不过感觉这个不丑啊QWQ
没回复的都改啦
[hard]
hard我自己也不会做所以只能水一点点了
00:46:666 (7,8,1) - 这都要贴上了.... 摆开点感觉美观一点吧好

[normal]
水一条
00:27:409 (1) - 这个可以就弧形吧 突然一个折线形感觉有点不爽

加油啦
我kd射没了...设不了 尴尬
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]
缩针的 水都难水

[Insane]

00:53:355 (1,2) - 如果算骨头里挑刺这里算是没包好吗.. ;w;

[Collab Hard]

01:16:869 (2,3) - 再挑一个没包好./w\

01:24:166 (3,6) - 这里6slider 试着放在x:456 y:96的位置上 连打也一起 6slider稍微右倾斜点.
如图r

哇 半个小时过去了我就摸了这么点...
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Lobelia

[Kamiya] wrote:

缩针的 水都难水

[Insane]

00:53:355 (1,2) - 如果算骨头里挑刺这里算是没包好吗.. ;w;算，我改了

[Collab Hard]

01:16:869 (2,3) - 再挑一个没包好./w\QWQ改

01:24:166 (3,6) - 这里6slider 试着放在x:456 y:96的位置上 连打也一起 6slider稍微右倾斜点.好
如图r

哇 半个小时过去了我就摸了这么点...
四萌小迪迪
William K
694 posts
Joined January 2013
William K
Hi~ from my queue.

[General]

  1. I think the metadata doesn't need the adding of "TV Size", since there's no TV Size words on https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6754339. Please fix it.
  2. Please add the tag "aimerrhythm" too.

[Insane]

  1. 00:06:328 (1) - Since it's a pretty calm part, please don't break the flow at 00:06:328 (1,2) - first. It doesn't really go with anything except the vocals imo. How about CTRL+G-ing 00:06:328 (1) - for a more friendly flow?
  2. 00:20:112 (1,2,3) - I think the sound is similar to 00:13:626 (1,2,3) - . Consider making it consistent. Actually those 2 rhythms sounds good, so you may take one of your choose whether you'll make the piano clickable like 00:13:626 (1,2,3) - or making the vocals clickable like 00:20:720 (3) - .
  3. 00:30:653 (1,2,3) - Just a minor thing, but the approach circle for blanket is not even from 00:30:653 (1,2) - and 00:30:653 (1,3) - . Take a look at the picture https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6754373. At this picture, the approach circle (2) for blanketing is not as far as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6754376 which touches the slider border.
  4. 00:32:274 (6,7,8) - Same case ^
  5. 00:36:328 (7) - Fix the blanket?
  6. 01:13:626 (3,4) - I think this is pretty much similar with 01:00:653 (3,4) - . At 01:00:653 (3,4) - you did 01:00:653 (3) - an extended slider for the vocals and go with the sound next. But why not at 01:13:626 (3,4) - ? How about making them have a same rhythm? Will look good imo.
  7. 01:18:491 (9) - Not making this clickable like the other drums you made at 01:17:882 (6,7,8) - 00:52:545 (2,3) - etc? I hope it's still jumping because of the drums to keep intensity up.
  8. 01:25:585 - Felt empty imo, consider adding this note to follow the vocals since you did follow the vocals at 01:24:166 (4,5) - .

That's all from me~ GL!
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor
加了下音效，虽然那个地方感觉怎么都不好加啊QWQ
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Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Lobelia

William K wrote:

Hi~ from my queue.

[General]

  1. I think the metadata doesn't need the adding of "TV Size", since there's no TV Size words on it's just apper in the ending movie but this song have a "TV Size" in the albumhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6754339. Please fix it.
  2. Please add the tag "aimerrhythm" too.
OK

[Insane]

  1. 00:06:328 (1) - Since it's a pretty calm part, please don't break the flow at 00:06:328 (1,2) - first. It doesn't really go with anything except the vocals imo. How about CTRL+G-ing 00:06:328 (1) - for a more friendly flow?OK!I like this advice
  2. 00:20:112 (1,2,3) - I think the sound is similar to 00:13:626 (1,2,3) - . Consider making it consistent. Actually those 2 rhythms sounds good, so you may take one of your choose whether you'll make the piano clickable like 00:13:626 (1,2,3) - or making the vocals clickable like 00:20:720 (3) - .i delete 3
  3. 00:30:653 (1,2,3) - Just a minor thing, but the approach circle for blanket is not even from 00:30:653 (1,2) - and 00:30:653 (1,3) - . Take a look at the picture https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6754373. At this picture, the approach circle (2) for blanketing is not as far as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6754376 which touches the slider border.
  4. 00:32:274 (6,7,8) - Same case ^
  5. 00:36:328 (7) - Fix the blanket?all of the blanket problems fixed
  6. 01:13:626 (3,4) - I think this is pretty much similar with 01:00:653 (3,4) - . At 01:00:653 (3,4) - you did 01:00:653 (3) - an extended slider for the vocals and go with the sound next. But why not at 01:13:626 (3,4) - ? How about making them have a same rhythm? Will look good imo.in fact,01:01:058 - here have a obvious piano sound but01:14:031 - here don't have a piano sound,so i make a different rhythm~
  7. 01:18:491 (9) - Not making this clickable like the other drums you made at 01:17:882 (6,7,8) - 00:52:545 (2,3) - etc? I hope it's still jumping because of the drums to keep intensity up.1/8 rhythm is hard enough so i don't make this jump large
  8. 01:25:585 - Felt empty imo, consider adding this note to follow the vocals since you did follow the vocals at 01:24:166 (4,5) - .i think it's finefixed in other way

That's all from me~ GL!Thanks for mod~~
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
I think last.fm is not valid xd



Link: http://www.aimer-web.jp/sp/disco/archive/?SECL-2069
4. 茜さす (TV size)

I not good in Romaji but That write TV size without "S" captial!

Good luck :3
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Lobelia

KittyAdventure wrote:

I think last.fm is not valid xd



Link: http://www.aimer-web.jp/sp/disco/archive/?SECL-2069
4. 茜さす (TV size)

I not good in Romaji but That write TV size without "S" captial!

Good luck :3
Ok~~~thanks!
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
早哇;w;
[General]
  1. enable countdown和wide support关掉?
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:720 (4,5) - 可以互换一下来个交叉跳？突出一个那什么音 而且flow好一些感觉
  2. 00:06:328 (1,2,3,4) - 这里比较主观了 虽然是个梗但是00:07:139 - 个音确实是比较强（外加人声） 所以我还是推荐这个3和前面远一下
  3. 00:23:355 (9,10,1) - flow感觉有点急？尤其是10上面有vocal的情况下 可能和后面衔接一下比较好
  4. 00:51:734 (5) - 感觉和前面衔接也不是很近 或许可以NC
  5. 00:55:788 (7) - 00:59:031 (1) - 这两个NC不保持一致么 后面同理
  6. 00:57:815 (4,5,6) - 这flow有一点点卡手 而且这里为什么突然间距小了... 感觉6往左放一点好些吧
  7. 01:08:659 (7,8) - 这要是摆二连的话就离前面远一些吧 不然可能有点突然
  8. 01:18:085 (7,8,9) - 789这一条flow下来感觉不带感啊111 9号其实可以放376|152附近 接后面感觉也比较好的样子
  9. 01:25:585 (8,9,1) - 个人建议再远一点 现在这样有可能会误读成连着的滑条尾二连...
  10. 再有就是有些地方是8个一组NC有的是6/2有的是4/4 虽然能理解意图但是有的感觉也不是很合理 我个人感觉可以统一一下 或者分配的更有规律一些
[Collab Hard]
  1. 00:21:531 (2,3) - 这突然出现了一个和其他不一样的叠起来的感觉有一点突兀 不会是因为摆不下了吧;w; 主要是00:20:923 (1) - 这一个滑条前后都叠着感觉有点奇怪
  2. 00:22:950 - 这个点不放note强调下么 感觉还挺重的
  3. 00:26:599 (6,7,8) - 这个还是感觉有点突然了 没什么铺垫的感觉 讲道理00:26:801 (7) - 放316|120这个间距大概就ok了
  4. 00:48:288 (3) - 这个已经摆远了的话 索性就叠在4的头上 flow少拐一下还能好打一些
  5. 00:52:545 (1) - 既然要下跳的话 前面空拍离远一点比较好 也是起个铺垫
[kanor's Normal]
  1. 00:01:464 (1,2,3) - 这个转个25°就能保持视觉上间距差不多了 像这样的 也不用刻意摆这种包 因为12这不也没包上么 或者修个滑条弧度包上也ok
  2. 00:11:193 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:20:112 - 这不放个1/4短条突出一下那个重音？而且显得不那么空了
  4. 00:22:545 (3) - 这直接用个note感觉好一些 直接上两个短条有点突然 打击密度突然变高 这里也不是那么需要突出的地方
  5. 01:08:761 (4) - 这个用01:06:328 (1) - 对称的flow方向感觉好一点 不会显得挤
挺稳的 Good luck啊 :)
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Lobelia

Misure wrote:

早哇;w;QWQ早上好
[General]
  1. enable countdown和wide support关掉?垃圾如我。。。又一次忘记关了
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:720 (4,5) - 可以互换一下来个交叉跳？突出一个那什么音 而且flow好一些感觉
  2. 00:06:328 (1,2,3,4) - 这里比较主观了 虽然是个梗但是00:07:139 - 个音确实是比较强（外加人声） 所以我还是推荐这个3和前面远一下这里我觉得OK，也不是很强的音，改了也不是很好看QWQ
  3. 00:23:355 (9,10,1) - flow感觉有点急？尤其是10上面有vocal的情况下 可能和后面衔接一下比较好改了QWQ不过不知道是不是你想的那种感觉
  4. 00:51:734 (5) - 感觉和前面衔接也不是很近 或许可以NC
  5. 00:55:788 (7) - 00:59:031 (1) - 这两个NC不保持一致么 后面同理我觉得这两个位置不是一个节奏诶。。。00:55:788 - 01:08:761 - 就是类似这两组我算一个节奏，然后00:59:031 - 01:12:004 - 这两组算一个
  6. 00:57:815 (4,5,6) - 这flow有一点点卡手 而且这里为什么突然间距小了... 感觉6往左放一点好些吧
  7. 01:08:659 (7,8) - 这要是摆二连的话就离前面远一些吧 不然可能有点突然
  8. 01:18:085 (7,8,9) - 789这一条flow下来感觉不带感啊111 9号其实可以放376|152附近 接后面感觉也比较好的样子
  9. 01:25:585 (8,9,1) - 个人建议再远一点 现在这样有可能会误读成连着的滑条尾二连...
  10. 再有就是有些地方是8个一组NC有的是6/2有的是4/4 虽然能理解意图但是有的感觉也不是很合理 我个人感觉可以统一一下 或者分配的更有规律一些
谢谢没回复的都改了
[Collab Hard]
  1. 00:21:531 (2,3) - 这突然出现了一个和其他不一样的叠起来的感觉有一点突兀 不会是因为摆不下了吧;w; 主要是00:20:923 (1) - 这一个滑条前后都叠着感觉有点奇怪
  2. 00:22:950 - 这个点不放note强调下么 感觉还挺重的
  3. 00:26:599 (6,7,8) - 这个还是感觉有点突然了 没什么铺垫的感觉 讲道理00:26:801 (7) - 放316|120这个间距大概就ok了
  4. 00:48:288 (3) - 这个已经摆远了的话 索性就叠在4的头上 flow少拐一下还能好打一些OK
  5. 00:52:545 (1) - 既然要下跳的话 前面空拍离远一点比较好 也是起个铺垫
其余没回复的部分是瓜子的


挺稳的 Good luck啊 :)QWQ谢谢
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