1. Hard (2.82 stars, 391 notes)
2. Noffy's Advanced (2.28 stars, 342 notes)
3. Normal (1.72 stars, 261 notes)
4. Shira's Insane (3.46 stars, 475 notes)
5. Skairul's Easy (1.3 stars, 179 notes)

-[PopSomeBags]- wrote:

Hi! NM from my Modding Queue!

Insane

00:04:522 (3,4,5) - Weird flow. Make 00:05:204 (5) look like http://hnng.moe/EWX it was intentional but i'll make it less weird when I get more mods saying something about it
00:06:341 (2) - Ctrl + J fix
00:07:477 (1) - Flow is weird on this part, how about breaking it up, like http://hnng.moe/EWY same as before, it intentional and it not weird enough to change
00:10:204 (3,4,5) - no no no... Slider isn't even pointing to the next circle, and the jump is awkward. how about something like http://hnng.moe/EWZ ur example ruins my mapping style a bit and would much rather keep it the same. it suppose to be kind of like a square pattern and I really don't want to change unless a few other say something about it
00:12:477 (4) - Point this to the next slider :L. just move the other slider up a bit
00:14:750 (1) - Super ugly and unneeded. Just do a normal slider or something. There is nothing wrong with this slider beside the fact you call it ugly. The slider was to suppose to be a bit creative and having a normal slider just seem bland
00:16:568 (1,2,3) - Bad angle and messes up w/ the flow. try this http://hnng.moe/EWa All I did was change the shapes of both sliders and nothing else
00:17:477 (3,1,1) - Such a weird slider - circle - slider shape, makes the user have to do a square shape to even hit the triplet which creates awkward flow. Try doing http://hnng.moe/EWc so it actually makes a good transition into the other slider. change this 00:17:931 (5) - shape and move it a bit but did not do nothing else
00:17:818 (1,1) - Remove NC, why is it even needed here.... I honestly was going to say why I did but then I actually seen how stupid it looks so change
00:37:250 (3) - Probably the most awkardest slider placement ever for the circle thats coming next, not even pointing at it and making the user have to change their rotation just to hit the slider. You could try placing it underneath the 00:37:022 (2) - so it points at the next circle. This was pretty much intentional but I change the slider shape and move few things a bit to make this easier
00:43:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same problems as above, also spacing problems w/ them, they seem to get farther and farther spaced apart as it goes... is this intentional? same as above ^
00:55:431 (3) - Bad angle... do something like http://hnng.moe/EWf Meh seems to flow just find and not that bad to change
01:01:568 (4) - Ctrl + J , Ctrl + H. No change but I might do something about this after noticing that
01:48:841 (4,5) - Pattern you are doing w/ the repeat slider is actually beginning on the white tick where the 01:48:841 (4) - circle is. This is still fine, but if you want to change it you can . I just kept it the same
02:37:704 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Whoa. Haha yeah no... remove all the nc's except for the first one :L. this was suppose to be special... I only will get rid of this if it is a problem

Final Thoughts: Song is great, map could be better. Lots of issues with spacing and NC spam that I didn't include in this mod, ask someone else to go over those issues with you I can see what you mean about some spacing issues and i'll likely change them soon. NCs however I don't see a problem since they are use in a special way and suppose to be a bit creative rather than spam for the sake of it. Using NCs like this is perfectly fine I think as long as it's justified

Nice map! Good luck!

Annika Flina wrote:

Sorry, I won't be able to do mods anytime soon because something came up my my life.

Have a star instead. GL

1. 01:00:204 (1,2,3,4) - this zigzag pattern should be smoother to play: https://puu.sh/rKq0d/b87b47569e.PNG
2. 01:04:295 (2) - this slider pointing downwards would flow better from 1
3. 01:07:250 (2) - form a blanket pattern here: https://puu.sh/rKq3H/3965740402.PNG
4. 01:28:841 (2,3) - i dont see why not merge these into one repeating slider
5. 02:37:704 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i disagree with the NCs

samcircus wrote:

[Insane]

1. 01:00:204 (1,2,3,4) - this zigzag pattern should be smoother to play: https://puu.sh/rKq0d/b87b47569e.PNG change
2. 01:04:295 (2) - this slider pointing downwards would flow better from 1 don't understand this...
3. 01:07:250 (2) - form a blanket pattern here: https://puu.sh/rKq3H/3965740402.PNG this kind of would ruin the pattern since all the others patterns is not blanket and I don't want to change the way the are made for a blanket
4. 01:28:841 (2,3) - i dont see why not merge these into one repeating slider I see the point you made but I prefer it to be like it is. I might change if it get constantly point out
5. 02:37:704 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i disagree with the NCs Didn't want to get rid of this but I feel like this is gonna get constantly point out so just got rid of them and only have 1 nc

Also, many of your straight sliders can be curved slightly and rotated ~15 degrees, some curved less. I notice you use the triangle jump pattern nicely. Try to incorporate more patterns such as parallel lines, zig-zag, and rotations (ctrl-shift-r), to make your map look even crisper.

not a bad map overall, quite a fun march with catchy rhythm

DJ Lucky wrote:

samcircus wrote:

01:04:295 (2) - this slider pointing downwards would flow better from 1 don't understand this...

thanks for the mod

samcircus wrote:

you're welcome. this is what i meant: https://puu.sh/rKtiQ/0b4ae1d4f5.PNG

Seaweed wrote:

NM from queue
[Insane]
00:12:022 (3) - Needs to be straightened change
00:17:931 (5) - needs nc - sv change This already have a sv change. I believe I had a nc before but I got rid of it because the way I done it was pointless when it was brought of to a mod. I might add it back but right now I don't feel like dealing with the idea as of now
00:47:704 (2,3,4,5,6) - could be changed into a star http://puu.sh/rOb6j/215671f913.jpg made it look more like a star
00:48:841 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can be changed to fit the star like this http://puu.sh/rOb8e/b67f033e4d.jpg and http://puu.sh/rObbT/d58cda1433.jpg
00:51:568 (1) - take out nc Although i'm as against changing the nc as I was when I first made this map but I wanted to put emphasis on this part with the nc so I still don't want to get rid of them
00:52:477 (1) - ^ same as before
00:51:113 (1,1) - blanket could be fixed here I have no idea what blanket you are talking about since I don't have one here but I did something I guess
00:57:931 (4) - could be changed to or instead to fit the song correctly because currently there is a silent part where the repeat slider hits changed
01:12:477 (4) - ^ change
02:08:159 (4,1,2,3) - delete them and ctrl + shift + D and create 4 sided polygon with 2.4x distance snap to make a better square This was not suppose to be exactly a square...
02:08:386 (1) - unnecessary nc I wanted to put more emphasize on the vocals as it was getting louder and with the slight jump right here so I wouldn't say unnecessary when I use the nc like this.

thanks for the mod

simple but nice map!

Renigar wrote:

from my modding q
sorry if it took a while for me to get to you x-x

so only hard and insane hmm?
kk ;w;

[ Hard]

1. 00:03:841 (1,2,3) - Why not make the first slider flow into the second slider? change
   
   Suggestion

   
2. 00:07:477 (1,2) - ? change
   
   Suggestion

   
3. 00:17:250 (6,1) - What the DS I gonna leave it like it is for now
4. 00:17:704 (1,1) - Same here kinda ^^ same as above
5. 00:51:113 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - You might get a few complaints about the NC's here, just saying. Yea I know t right now I don't really see the NC an issue if there are use in a special way
6. 01:01:568 (4,1) - I'm guessing the anti-flow here is intentional pretty much in a way
7. 01:05:659 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - Same thing about the NC's ^
8. 01:30:431 (3,4,5,1) - This rhythm might be kinda hard to pick up at first play. A normal repeat slider would be fine tbh keeping it like it is
9. 01:39:295 (3,4,1) - Blanket unless intentional ww blanket better
10. 02:03:841 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - For a hard, the intensity of the song doesn't really reflect the difficulty of this pattern (i.e a lot of sliders and a few notes). Meh I was trying to keep the sr as low as possible so I know it not as hard as it should. I might change this tho
11. 02:36:114 (4,1) - bLANKET THIS I rather not
12. 02:38:386 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - nc same reason as the other ncs
13. 02:44:977 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Why on other side i mean granted i get the anti flow strat you're using but using ctlr+h and movin it a bit would look better in terms of aesthetic I'm keeping this the same for now
    
    Suggestion

    
14. 02:56:568 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - nc

i would add a bit more buuuuuuut i'm going to keep in mind the type of map you wanted to create and show some moderation

[ Insane]

1. 00:04:295 (2) - ctrl+g would improve flow imo change
2. 00:10:204 (3,4,5,1) - This is too much to include but i'll try anyways why not curve the stacking slider to ~flow~ into the next note and menawhile move the other note a bit towards the direction on the slider? ill include picture dw lmao change
   
   Suggestion

   
3. 00:14:750 (1,2,3) - wh stack unstack keeping the same
4. 00:43:841 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - flow between these is pretty weird don't see a problem with it as it is
5. 01:00:204 (1,2,3,4) - Make these all the same /: (the '1' slider is off lelelel) change
6. 01:08:613 (4,5,1) - Why not do something like this? change
   
   Suggestion

   
7. 01:12:022 (3,4) - delete this and ctlr+c , ctrl+v and ctrl+ h the other pattern 01:11:113 (1,2) - here so it doesn't seem so off (naturally ctrl+g 01:12:022 (3,4) - these two and fix hitsounds if you go for it >.<) this was a bit intentional
8. 01:19:295 (3) - why not place x:260|y:197? I like it better before
9. 01:38:841 (2,3) - not a fan of how these are so close move it a tad bit
10. 01:39:750 (5) - why bezier?
11. 02:04:068 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lower spaing for these jumps. they don't really match the low intensity of the song. only time where it's ok to have such jumps is 02:07:931 (3,4,1,2,3) - here imo this is something I might have to change later since this will cost me to rearrange the patterns a bit
12. 02:27:931 (2) - distance between this note and the next slider is p weird; place more inbetween
13. 02:53:841 (3,4) - flow fix

keep in mind what i said about the nc's in someparts

kinda reminds me of monstrata style mapping idk why ^^
gl if you're gonna try to go for ranked~ ><
and btw if anything i said in this mod was confusing, by all means feel free to pm me irc and i'll be glad to elaborate on any of my points >w>/

celerih wrote:

Here from my queue (:

[Insane]
About the use of kiai: You have kiai on for too long in the map. If all the parts are kiai, then none of them are. Kiai is for the most intense parts of the song, and they can't all be the most intense. I'd remove all kiai from 00:51:113 - to 01:19:522 - and also remove kiai from 02:56:568 - to 03:07:477 - . Last thing is add kiai to the weird part without kiai here 02:37:704 - I don't agree with this. here 00:51:113 - to here 01:20:204 - is the chorus of the song which is the one of the main reason as to why it kiai in the first place. However, I am going to change this by making the kiai smaller


00:06:568 (3,4) - For this type of symmetrical slider pattern, please use the same slider twice, instead of two slightly different ones. The same thing applies here 00:26:568 (3,4) - done
00:07:477 (1,2) - From the slider to the circle doesn't really play well. Lowering 00:08:159 (2) - would help this part flow better move it a bit
00:10:659 (4,5,1) - CTRL-H this and blanket the slider's end in 00:10:204 (3) - didn't change
00:17:022 - Sound here is louder than pretty much everything in that section, it shouldn't be on a slider end Meh I see your point but for now unchange
00:22:022 (1) - Please redo this slider correctly, as it is now it's kind ugly. Having it like this is better This slider was attended to look like this - I might change it tho
00:46:795 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Use a slider and ctrl-shift-F to make this slider. It will make it correctly curved made it curved but didn't do it like you say
00:49:068 (8,3) - Overlap these Oh forgot Change
01:11:113 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern could be made symmetrical. It would look nicer and play better Eh I kind of rather stay the same. I I might change this eventually
02:03:159 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - The flow of the stream into the jumps is really weird and hard to play for no good reason I don't really know exactly how you want me to fix this...
02:28:841 (5,2) - Overlap here done
02:37:477 (3,1) - Overlap here done
02:38:386 (1) - Curve the slider here a bit more so it follows the curve of the stream before it correctly done
02:42:022 (1) - Move this up
03:06:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Stream here is off and has a weird shape, use a slider and ctrl-shift-F to have a nicer looking one same as the other stream I fix

Blankets

When doing blankets, use the approach circles to be sure they are nicely done.

00:04:295 (2,3) -
00:04:295 (2,5) -
00:11:113 (1,2) -
00:18:386 (1,2) -
00:39:750 (5,1) -
00:42:477 (3,5) -
00:51:568 (1,1) -
01:10:204 (4,6) -
01:38:386 (1,2) -
01:56:341 (6,1) -
01:57:250 (2,4) -
02:33:841 (3,1) -
02:43:841 (1,2) -
02:47:931 (2,4) -
03:06:341 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
Having correct blankets is important, as having some sloppy ones easily attracts the attention of the player. I understand fully but this is no point when I might have this brought up again when I get more mods apply and I much would rather have a blanket mod when this map just need polishing which at this state, it could use a little more work. I did apply some change tho

[General Stuff about flow]
The most reoccurring problem in the map that I found was flow. SOme parts of the map have working flow while some are very unintuituve to play. Example is here 01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,1,1,2) -

And I will have pictures to show why this pat has bad flow.




These parts have flow in one direction then change without anything to help it, like a straight slider, or a stream. Parts like these with direction changes like that hurts to play or are very uncomfortable when playing. This is why stuff like this plays better. There is a flow that the map needs to follow:



For more about this, please check pishifat's videos about flow :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ig7nTSbWwVc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GYGatwQszwQ

Yea I see the point; my flow can use more work. The example I can see how it can flow better but that seems out of my mapping style and I kind of don't want that, so I will fix the flow some way soon, but in a way that still defines my mapping so I hope you understand.



Sorry if I sound a bit harsh with my mod, I quite like the map, it's just that it needs a bit more work to play really well. Good luck, and don't stop working on it (:

nyu - wrote:

random metadata shit..

use this bg because its for the song. official stuff is bae. Also its HD.
i resized it for you.

Title: シニタイちゃん
Romanised Title: Shinitai-Chan

"Miss Wanna-Die" is just the english translation of the official title.

Tags: Switch IA Vocaloid Miss_Wanna-Die Cover ButterP IA_-Aria_On_The_Planetes-
^ Full list of tags so re:place everything please.

Source: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm23636447 http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E ... nitai-chan)

if you dont apply this stuff i'll kill you.

I can also create an Easy GD for you, if you want.

Axarious wrote:

hi, from #modreqs.
not much gameplay to change, just some nc that i disagree with.

Normal

1. in general, you could make some of the 1/1 sliders look better, such as 01:00:204 (1) - 01:09:295 (1) - 01:14:750 (1) - adjusted them
2. 00:07:477 (1) - 3 point slider, not 4 change link

Hard

1. 00:19:068 (2,3) - i disagree with this rhythm, i think it should be similar to the [normal] diff, like this It was suppose to be like normal but I didn't notice so change
2. 00:51:113 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - , 01:05:659 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - , 02:23:841 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - and 02:38:386 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - 02:56:568 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - imo shouldn't have this many nc, reason below. Went on ahead and change this

Insane

1. 00:03:841 (1,2) - looks off, possibly HJ these. attempt to fix
2. 00:26:568 (3,4) - ^ ^
3. 01:05:659 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - you may need to ask more people about this, but i disagree with the nc here. possibly just have this nc instead, the song is too continuous (smooth?) for constant nc
4. 02:23:841 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - ^
5. 02:38:386 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - ^
6. 02:56:568 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - ^ Changed all NCs so this would no longer be a problem (at least shouldn't be anyways)