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Honey and Clover (YUKI) - Dramatic (TV Size)

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Remco32
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zaterdag 9 augustus 2008 at 13:24:47

Artist: YUKI
Title: Dramatic (TV Size)
Source: Honey and Clover
Tags: to
BPM: 164
Filesize: 7839kb
Play Time: 01:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,75 stars, 55 notes)
  2. Normal (2,66 stars, 74 notes)
  3. Hard (3,73 stars, 84 notes)
  4. peppiness (4,78 stars, 187 notes)
Download: Honey and Clover (YUKI) - Dramatic (TV Size)
Download: Honey and Clover (YUKI) - Dramatic (TV Size) (no video)
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The first intro of Honey and Clover. Enjoy!
Thank you again for the timing Peppy.
Let me warn you for the Peppines: [Insert Barrel Roll jokes here]
MP3 has been changed to a higher quality, non ear-bleeding version.
Last edited by Remco32 , edited 15 times in total.
Echo
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Timing sounds spot on. Good job!

Easy:
00:25:99 (3) - imo move this slightly higher

Hard:
00:39:34 (1,1,1,1) - is this spinner spam really necessary?
00:58:55 (3) - move it higher so it's equidistant from the end of 2 and beginning of 4
01:08:25 (1) - personally I would overlap the start and end right on top of each other (but some people might disagree >.>)

Amazing clover leaf at the end :)

edit: is this the best quality music file you can find? sounds a bit... lacking
Remco32
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edit: is this the best quality music file you can find? sounds a bit... lacking
Ripped it from the anime, just like the vid.

00:39:34 (1,1,1,1) - is this spinner spam really necessary?
Is it a bad thing?
Except the for the spinners, it's done, I'm gonna upload it in a sec
James
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James
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Remco32
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Remco32

James wrote:

yup are those spinners really necessary?
i say its better for the first 3 spinners to became notes and/or sliders
Done :)
James
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James
oh one more thing
that clover slider, you might want to separate the starting slider to the end of the slider, just move it by a bit
it might be confusing
Remco32
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Remco32

James wrote:

oh one more thing
that clover slider, you might want to separate the starting slider to the end of the slider, just move it by a bit
it might be confusing
Done
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Looks all good to me.

Blubberlz.
peppy
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Time for some quality control.

Easy:
00:10:46 - end the first slider here?
01:08:25 (1) - this slider seems kind've out of place and... nothingness? i think hitcircles would work better for this length.

Normal:
Same as easy changes. Normal is VERY similar to easy... put it this way: if i was playing from easy to hard, normal would bore me to death after easy. not sure if you want to change this, but keep it in mind for future maps.

Hard:
Again, pretty similar to normal.
00:40:26 - stop the first slider on the red tick at this time if possible. sounds better
00:40:99 - start the second slider on this tick if possible. sounds better. at the moment these sliders make a pattern but the break between them is utterly random. either chagne the timing or connect them to form one larger slider.
00:42:88 (1) - slider end (and start, but not so important) isnt snapped to a beat at all. sounds a bit off-putting.

I guess I'm not too fond of these maps, because I can imagine maps in my head to this song which would be a lot more suitable. I feel your maps are a bit too slider heavy which makes them less rhytmic and more of a cruise control with left mouse button down the whole way. Maybe you will let me do an extra difficulty for inclusion? ;)
Remco32
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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A peppy difficulty? OMG, I think this is a first! O_O!
Saturos
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I will accept nothing short of PEPPY DIFFICULTY!

peppy
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enter the peppiness.

Download: YUKI - Dramatic (TV Size) (Remco32) [peppiness].osu
Remco32
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Added
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Bubbles.
Echo
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Just one thing in peppy's difficulty that tripped me:
00:30:60 (1) - is spaced exactly the same as the previous notes but is actually more than 1 beat time gap

Remco's maps look great now :)

'd until peppy can confirm
LuigiHann
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You need a custom spinner with either a bicycle wheel or a ferris wheel! It represents the wheels of change!

peppy
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Damn luigi. I was tempted to custom skin this but got distracted. I think there are some more elements which could be skinned but this is great even on its own.
Remco32
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peppy wrote:

Damn luigi. I was tempted to custom skin this but got distracted. I think there are some more elements which could be skinned but this is great even on its own.
Added the wheel.
Maybe a background for the spinner would be nice?
The only thing I can think of is the hill from the poster, although I don't know if that would fit as a background
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/e ... Clover.jpg
peppy
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revised for echo's picky tastes.

Download: YUKI - Dramatic (TV Size) (Remco32) [peppiness].osu
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