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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 26 March 2017 at 7:44:37 AM

Artist: Hotaru Murasaki
Title: Re:TrymenT
Source: Re:LieF~親愛なるあなたへ~
Tags: visual novel short レリーフ dear you shin'ainaru anata e Eroge DTM9 Nowa 619 Opening Rask opening Re:LieF~DeaR YoU~ re tryment Sinnoh Ascendance Yaleufeu
BPM: 190
Filesize: 22349kb
Play Time: 01:35
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TOYBOT 1 - 0 MEEP

Quote:
I don't see this going anywhere,and I am sad that I have to love this
I apologise to everyone, you too Mir.



Hard,Insane by _Meep_
Easy by yaleufeu (other gd dropped) (rip dad)
Normal by 619 (op and nice guy)
Nowa's Flower by DTM9 Nowa (no desc xd)
Rain by Sinnoh (dank memer)
DreaM by senor Ascendance (random god)

There was a small misunderstanding of roles in the thread in page 6 and hopefully everyone understands that the only person thats suffers from this is me(and probably yoshimaro who took my place ;w;), not the GDers.

http://rask-soft.com/product/first/product/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zJhlf6Sm2y4

BN MAGNET PLS COME
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TOYBOT 1 - 0 MEEP


TESTPLAYERZ :
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Those who have two links represent them playing the first version and the second version(as of 17/10/2016)


Chillaxmaeng
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6268995


RyanGBW
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6265852


Planecakes
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6269091
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414372


Noobish
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6269044


likejaxirl
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6269184
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6354540


Ket
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6269254


- Neon -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6271759


Suguri
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6271596


Dark Flame
https://puu.sh/rBBnb/c396158643.jpg


Spork Lover
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6272152


Sugoi Desu
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6272277


handsome
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6272451


Evergreenz
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6272686


My Angel Kuon
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6272779


DTM9 Nowa
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6272810


Yukiyo
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6273468
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6354277


Cheryl
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6273796
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6455523


_Everlasting
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6274158


M a c
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6274156


neonat
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6275324


jakomo73
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6276795


Elegant Loli
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6276956


Stingy
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6278131
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6474563


Momiji
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6278166


blizzardice touchscreen LOL
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6278394


Blue Dragon
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6280877


Spaghetti
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6280989


ExKyu
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6281013


Mentai
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6281057
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6354513


GSBlank
Im getting more and more forgetful omg


Lukiose
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6281418


PLZ ENJOY GAME
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6290057


fallenstarxz
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6290077

By this point you can see that most of the players are singaporean,becasue I choose to be an asshole and bother all of them c;

Dame Dame Dame Dame Dame Dame Dame Dame Dame Dame Dame Dame Desu
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6290108


OpticalLuck
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6290190


-Lockon-
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6290290


Alalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalacartx
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6290345


Xilver
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6292026


-ErisiaAvide-
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6338329


YewJoeChai
http://prnt.sc/cv4psr


RemixGen
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6350676


R8nDom
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6350693


DarknessStealth
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6350708


Raen
http://puu.sh/rMXi0/64ac806d76.jpg


BlueKrait
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6354441


Nao Tomori
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6357280


Nicholas
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6357287


Muicat
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6357965


-Kiyo
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6357991


JokThree
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6358024


Raindrop
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6358117


Accurian
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6359782


Dumii
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6359839


Lortus
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6360179


Renblo
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6394567


Reazen
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6405468


burntcedar13
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414307


Doma Umaru
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6415196


Pentori
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6455586


Seere
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6455554


Kashima
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6464728


josephT631
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6474483


Sinnoh
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6479867


Epicmouse
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6480178


ENE
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6480604


sinn
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6577784


Chaos
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6617945


SolariS
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6636734


Rizia
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6660400


3xMidnight
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6694929

i lost count :(
And to all the other testplayers who played the easy,normal,hard and flower <3 THANKS
Last edited by _Meep_ on , edited 305 times in total.
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hey there, saw we are mapping the same song and i drove by :]

Insane
00:04:465 (1,1) - y dis different from 00:01:939 (1,2,3) - ;_; i dont think that blank pause in notes is ideal

00:06:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - now dis optional but isnt this a bit sudden compared to sliders u use before + music intensity didnt rise high enough for dis i dont think

00:27:202 (8) - u ignored the red tick at 00:27:360 when theres a bass note in music? idk if intentional or not but u dont have to change, just highlight it for u to see

00:32:254 (1,2) - did u get lazy D: cmon bro step it up kek

00:42:360 (1,2) - why pause inbetween when u dont pause in same spot for later parts like 00:44:886 (1,2,3) -

00:49:623 (4,5) - HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGE sudden change in spacing, maybe not have dis since you dont do it once :p

00:53:649 (5,6) - im blind, that overlap kill me a little

00:57:991 (3) - move to x:328 y:320

01:17:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - just highlighting the last section so i can explain a couple things:
not that its bad or anything but i think some of those circles u place following the music are unnecessary... it doesnt play poorly at all but idk i think u could focus on vocals only and have it more enjoyable than technical to play.


GOOD LUCK ON YOUR MAP FELLOW SONG FRIEND :)
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Daoski wrote:
hey there, saw we are mapping the same song and i drove by :]

Insane
00:04:465 (1,1) - y dis different from 00:01:939 (1,2,3) - ;_; i dont think that blank pause in notes is ideal The sliders play out the piano notes in the background, so there is a pause between the notes, as there is with the piano notes in the song

00:06:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - now dis optional but isnt this a bit sudden compared to sliders u use before + music intensity didnt rise high enough for dis i dont think I feel it's ok -.-

00:27:202 (8) - u ignored the red tick at 00:27:360 when theres a bass note in music? idk if intentional or not but u dont have to change, just highlight it for u to see Im mapping as much to the piano as possible,the red tick has a very slight and soft sound,so it feels negligible and not needed to map

00:32:254 (1,2) - did u get lazy D: cmon bro step it up kek Fine -.-

00:42:360 (1,2) - why pause inbetween when u dont pause in same spot for later parts like 00:44:886 (1,2,3) - So that players would be able to know that the song is getting faster and prepare for 00:46:307 (1,2,3) -

00:49:623 (4,5) - HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGE sudden change in spacing, maybe not have dis since you dont do it once :p It's ok since you can hear a sopund that sounds somewhat like a triple here. so yea. the jump isn't that abd either since I aligned it to go straight to the circles

00:53:649 (5,6) - im blind, that overlap kill me a little You can hear that slight sizz in the music,so that can't be ignored

00:57:991 (3) - move to x:328 y:320 Fixed, nice spot ;o

01:17:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - just highlighting the last section so i can explain a couple things:
not that its bad or anything but i think some of those circles u place following the music are unnecessary... it doesnt play poorly at all but idk i think u could focus on vocals only and have it more enjoyable than technical to play. Fixed


GOOD LUCK ON YOUR MAP FELLOW SONG FRIEND :)


Thanks for modding bud
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I love kd xdddddd
09:39 _Meep_: can u help me testplay a map
09:39 _Meep_: sporkk
09:40 Spork Lover: sure, just a sec
09:40 Spork Lover: :)
09:40 *_Meep_ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1100514 Murasaki Hotaru - Re:TrymenT [Insane]]
09:40 _Meep_: tell me when ur ready
09:40 _Meep_: <3
09:40 Spork Lover: ^-^
09:43 _Meep_: dat relax
09:43 _Meep_: lol
09:43 Spork Lover: Yeah I used mouse lol
09:44 Spork Lover: 00:09:517 (1,1) - there's a pretty audible sound and pretty nice feedback on the red tick
09:44 _Meep_: is it ok?
09:44 Spork Lover: So doing extended sliders isn't really optimal here
09:44 Spork Lover: Yeah there seems to be good ideas in the map overall
09:44 Spork Lover: ^^
09:44 _Meep_: yay :D
09:44 _Meep_: I tried to add in good flow
09:44 _Meep_: after watching pishi's youtube vid
09:45 Spork Lover: 00:25:939 (3,4,5,6,7) - this not being the same as 00:23:412 (3,4,5,6) - is really odd xd
09:45 Spork Lover: You switch focus here on what you want to follow
09:45 _Meep_: XD
09:46 _Meep_: nono
09:46 _Meep_: the 2nd one(the earlier one) has the very distinct like 'taq' sounds in the background
09:46 Spork Lover: 00:44:570 (9,1) - this is a time where the extended slider works
09:46 _Meep_: while the other one doesn't
09:46 _Meep_: I know it feels uncomfortable,but yea
09:46 Spork Lover: Yeah, the 2nd one should still get a switch up of some sort though xd
09:47 Spork Lover: 'cause it does feel really awkward lol
09:47 Spork Lover: 00:49:623 (4,5) - single tap first, then kickslider
09:47 _Meep_: kk,I'll change it to sliders
09:47 _Meep_: XD
09:47 Spork Lover: Is a better lead-in for the downbeat
09:48 Spork Lover: https://gyazo.com/9c8b7d1270408d96db9e44b3fab7afc5
09:48 _Meep_: https://gyazo.com/c93a262ae20660a53ce64093fc59a781
09:48 _Meep_: ??
09:48 _Meep_: Yea we thought of the same thing then
09:48 _Meep_: XD
09:48 _Meep_: kk
09:48 Spork Lover: 00:52:307 (9,1) - you can do a triple here because of the new kickslider
09:49 _Meep_: https://gyazo.com/eda26af7106fb934131a08116fb0a62a
09:50 _Meep_: I don't think I want the triple there
09:50 _Meep_: There isn't anything that would play the triples in the music and it feels awkward
09:50 _Meep_: 00:53:412 (4,5,6) - not too sure whether this is ok tho
09:50 Spork Lover: If you question yourself, it probably isn't
09:50 Spork Lover: ^^
09:50 _Meep_: No,as in it plays out the sizz
09:51 _Meep_: but Im not too sure if its fine with the players
09:51 _Meep_: most don't have a problem,but are surprised by it
09:51 Spork Lover: yeah
09:51 Spork Lover: It's reading
09:51 _Meep_: 00:53:649 - theres a slight sizz here,its distinct
09:51 Spork Lover: but your map isn't a reading map
09:51 Spork Lover: xd
09:51 _Meep_: lol XD
09:51 Spork Lover: because of the way you made iit
09:52 Spork Lover: Actually a decent map :D
09:52 _Meep_: :DDDD
09:52 Spork Lover: There aren't that many major issues ^^
09:52 _Meep_: YAY
09:52 _Meep_: I GOT PRAISED BY SPORK
09:52 _Meep_: happy day ^_^
09:52 _Meep_: but thanks <3
09:52 Spork Lover: There's definitely oppotunities to improve the flow even more obviously, there always is xd
09:52 _Meep_: If u want to get ur kds u can post da chat XD
09:52 Spork Lover: But yeah, it's looking fine :D
09:52 _Meep_: flow is a subjective thing
09:52 _Meep_: so meh -.-
09:53 Spork Lover: Yeah it is xd
09:53 Spork Lover: I like fancy patterns for my own maps for example when it comes to flow
09:53 Spork Lover: lol
09:53 _Meep_: can u play the map 1 more time? but without relax
09:53 Spork Lover: I can't
09:53 Spork Lover: 'cause mom is sleeping
09:53 Spork Lover: lol
09:53 _Meep_: oh lol
09:53 _Meep_: wait then play with relax one more time after I update this
09:53 Spork Lover: sure
09:53 Spork Lover: btw
09:53 Spork Lover: The AR and OD
09:53 _Meep_: ?
09:54 Spork Lover: don't really match
09:54 Spork Lover: OD8 and AR9
09:54 Spork Lover: Is good for an insane diff like this
09:54 Spork Lover: hp is fine
09:54 _Meep_: I'll put 8.3
09:54 _Meep_: considering the AR is diff as well
09:54 Spork Lover: ye that's fine
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Title:Re:TrymenT
TitleUnicode:Re:TrymenT
Artist:Murasaki Hotaru
ArtistUnicode:Murasaki Hotaru
Creator:_Meep_
Version:Daoski's Easy
Source:Re:LieF ~親愛なるあなたへ~
Tags:Re:LieF Eroge
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2016-10-09 05:28 _Meep_: blizzard
2016-10-09 05:28 _Meep_: can u help me testplay ,3
2016-10-09 05:28 _Meep_: <3
2016-10-09 05:28 blizzardice: wh
2016-10-09 05:28 blizzardice: who r u
2016-10-09 05:28 _Meep_: wh?
2016-10-09 05:28 blizzardice: jk
2016-10-09 05:28 blizzardice: what
2016-10-09 05:28 _Meep_: ACTION runs
2016-10-09 05:28 _Meep_: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1100514 Murasaki Hotaru - Re:TrymenT]
2016-10-09 05:29 _Meep_: #touchscreenthread
2016-10-09 05:29 _Meep_: lol
2016-10-09 05:31 _Meep_: naisu play
2016-10-09 05:31 _Meep_: :D
2016-10-09 05:31 blizzardice: ok so
2016-10-09 05:31 blizzardice: 00:04:465 (1) -
2016-10-09 05:32 blizzardice: why is this an extra repeat
2016-10-09 05:32 _Meep_: piano
2016-10-09 05:32 _Meep_: plays 4 times,then 3
2016-10-09 05:32 _Meep_: thats why the sliders are diff
2016-10-09 05:32 blizzardice: 00:04:465 (1,1) - can you space them a little more at least lol
2016-10-09 05:33 _Meep_: I dont think the spacing is needed,idk why,no matter what i tried,spacing it didn't feel good -_-
2016-10-09 05:33 _Meep_: as in it wouldn't give that calm and soothing effect of a slow part of a song
2016-10-09 05:33 _Meep_: idk how to describe
2016-10-09 05:34 _Meep_: bcuz DS is pretty constant for the notes before,I thought it'd be better to have it close as well,even if the timing was far off
2016-10-09 05:34 blizzardice: im just pointing it out because it was hard to read
2016-10-09 05:34 _Meep_: Sorry uwu
2016-10-09 05:34 blizzardice: and this is just insane diff right?
2016-10-09 05:34 _Meep_: Yea
2016-10-09 05:35 _Meep_: Im gona have a extra GD after he/she's done
2016-10-09 05:35 _Meep_: looks alot harder XD ik
2016-10-09 05:35 blizzardice: 00:13:781 (6) - you're following the drum sound on this one for the wiggle?
2016-10-09 05:35 _Meep_: yea
2016-10-09 05:36 blizzardice: http://i.imgur.com/bUJIggZ.png i'm hearing the sound as about there
2016-10-09 05:36 blizzardice: wait nvm
2016-10-09 05:36 _Meep_: ??
2016-10-09 05:36 _Meep_: I cant see any image
2016-10-09 05:36 blizzardice: ignore that part lol
2016-10-09 05:37 _Meep_: nvm now I see it
2016-10-09 05:37 _Meep_: but ok
2016-10-09 05:37 blizzardice: in general this is really hard to read for an insane lol
2016-10-09 05:37 _Meep_: cs 4.4
2016-10-09 05:37 blizzardice: 00:27:044 (6,7) - nice pp jump xdxdxd
2016-10-09 05:37 _Meep_: XD
2016-10-09 05:38 blizzardice: 00:40:939 (2,3,4,5) - especially this
2016-10-09 05:38 blizzardice: is hard to read
2016-10-09 05:38 _Meep_: Hmm,any way to improve it?
2016-10-09 05:39 blizzardice: make 00:41:254 (3) - closer to the slider?
2016-10-09 05:39 _Meep_: should I place 00:41:570 (5) - at 312 268?
2016-10-09 05:40 blizzardice: wait why not end the slider on 3
2016-10-09 05:40 blizzardice: instead of the extra note
2016-10-09 05:40 _Meep_: olol
2016-10-09 05:40 _Meep_: wow,im stupid
2016-10-09 05:40 _Meep_: O_O
2016-10-09 05:40 _Meep_: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6278452 does this look fine?
2016-10-09 05:41 blizzardice: uhh
2016-10-09 05:42 blizzardice: the piano for the 4 notes after
2016-10-09 05:42 blizzardice: 00:41:728 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-10-09 05:42 blizzardice: goes lower
2016-10-09 05:42 _Meep_: Oh
2016-10-09 05:42 _Meep_: I just noticed
2016-10-09 05:42 blizzardice: but im not sure how you're supposed to do 00:41:254 (3,4) -
2016-10-09 05:43 blizzardice: 00:42:360 (1,2) - theres an awkward pause between these 2 sliders
2016-10-09 05:43 _Meep_: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6278474
2016-10-09 05:44 blizzardice: where is 4
2016-10-09 05:44 blizzardice: the red one
2016-10-09 05:44 blizzardice: i cant tell lol
2016-10-09 05:44 _Meep_: in the start of the slider
2016-10-09 05:44 _Meep_: sorry XD
2016-10-09 05:45 _Meep_: it magically appeard there after I tried rotating
2016-10-09 05:45 _Meep_: so.. ;o
2016-10-09 05:45 blizzardice: i was thinking of the blue 3,4 having less spacing than red 1,2,3,4
2016-10-09 05:46 blizzardice: but im not sure how to fix that so you can leave it
2016-10-09 05:47 blizzardice: 00:49:623 (7,8) - for insane this is a REALLY fast jump
2016-10-09 05:47 _Meep_: Hmm
2016-10-09 05:47 _Meep_: -.-
2016-10-09 05:48 _Meep_: well,because the slider is in the direction of the notes,it'd be fine so long as they hold the slider to the note below
2016-10-09 05:48 blizzardice: if you took out 8 i think it would be better
2016-10-09 05:49 blizzardice: let me play this with mouse actually
2016-10-09 05:49 _Meep_: XD
2016-10-09 05:49 blizzardice: because i can only play insanes with mouse
2016-10-09 05:49 _Meep_: lol
2016-10-09 05:50 blizzardice: fuk
2016-10-09 05:52 blizzardice: 01:30:360 (2) - just wondering but does this represent anything?
2016-10-09 05:52 blizzardice: or is it just random squiggle slider
2016-10-09 05:52 _Meep_: ^
2016-10-09 05:52 blizzardice: oh
2016-10-09 05:53 _Meep_: I was bored,so i just went into grid size medium and did it XD
2016-10-09 05:53 blizzardice: maybe you could make it into something prettier
2016-10-09 05:53 blizzardice: like a flower
2016-10-09 05:53 _Meep_: ooo
2016-10-09 05:53 blizzardice: just a suggestion
2016-10-09 05:53 blizzardice: also
2016-10-09 05:53 blizzardice: 00:57:202 (1,2,3,4,1) - STACK
2016-10-09 05:53 blizzardice: PLEASE
2016-10-09 05:54 _Meep_: stacked :_:
2016-10-09 05:54 blizzardice: thx
2016-10-09 05:54 _Meep_: XD
2016-10-09 05:54 blizzardice: 01:03:044 (3,4,5,6) - this overlaps a lot and would be hard to read
2016-10-09 05:54 _Meep_: Its not that hard to read
2016-10-09 05:55 blizzardice: its bakc and forths too
2016-10-09 05:55 _Meep_: Once u play 4, 3 clears up
2016-10-09 05:55 _Meep_: Yea,it kinda breaks the flow a bit
2016-10-09 05:55 blizzardice: yea
2016-10-09 05:56 blizzardice: 01:04:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sooooo fast
2016-10-09 05:56 _Meep_: gotta go fast
2016-10-09 05:56 blizzardice: but
2016-10-09 05:56 _Meep_: ?
2016-10-09 05:56 blizzardice: its insane
2016-10-09 05:56 blizzardice: ><
2016-10-09 05:57 _Meep_: i seriously dont know why its an insane either -.-
2016-10-09 05:57 blizzardice: the jumps
2016-10-09 05:57 _Meep_: i planned it to be a 5* at least
2016-10-09 05:57 blizzardice: feel like extra
2016-10-09 05:57 blizzardice: like almost extra
2016-10-09 05:57 _Meep_: ikr
2016-10-09 05:57 _Meep_: LOL
2016-10-09 05:57 _Meep_: but nop
2016-10-09 05:57 blizzardice: this should be like a hard insane
2016-10-09 05:57 _Meep_: osu is like 'fak u u stay with 4*'
2016-10-09 05:57 blizzardice: or smth
2016-10-09 05:57 blizzardice: this is really difficult for an insane imo lol
2016-10-09 05:57 blizzardice: its only 4.5* according to osu lol
2016-10-09 05:58 blizzardice: 01:12:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this looks pretty but a little less spacing
2016-10-09 05:59 blizzardice: 01:17:096 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is REALLY spaced for insane ;;
2016-10-09 05:59 _Meep_: wait a min
2016-10-09 05:59 _Meep_: leme relog
2016-10-09 06:00 _Meep_: there
2016-10-09 06:00 _Meep_: now i can submit
2016-10-09 06:00 _Meep_: to pending
2016-10-09 06:00 _Meep_: my GDer finished
2016-10-09 06:00 _Meep_: wooo ^_^
2016-10-09 06:00 blizzardice: nice
2016-10-09 06:00 blizzardice: the flower diff?
2016-10-09 06:00 _Meep_: his is 5.43*
2016-10-09 06:00 _Meep_: yea
2016-10-09 06:00 blizzardice: coo
2016-10-09 06:01 blizzardice: can you fix the formatting on the testplayers
2016-10-09 06:01 _Meep_: formatting?
2016-10-09 06:01 blizzardice: http://i.imgur.com/8vQZCnS.png
2016-10-09 06:01 _Meep_: ? why
2016-10-09 06:01 blizzardice: you did something wrong there lol
2016-10-09 06:01 blizzardice: unless
2016-10-09 06:01 _Meep_: no
2016-10-09 06:01 _Meep_: I wanted it like that XD
2016-10-09 06:02 blizzardice: well it'd look better if you made the names clickable with the screenshot on the name
2016-10-09 06:02 blizzardice: just my opinion
2016-10-09 06:02 _Meep_: Oh
2016-10-09 06:02 _Meep_: Maybe i'll do that tmrw
2016-10-09 06:02 blizzardice: are you going to post this chatlog on forum so i can get kd
2016-10-09 06:02 blizzardice: owo
2016-10-09 06:02 _Meep_: u post it and u get ur kdss
2016-10-09 06:02 _Meep_: lol
2016-10-09 06:02 _Meep_: u helped on some notes
2016-10-09 06:03 blizzardice: 01:17:728 (1) - pretty fast for a slow part
2016-10-09 06:04 blizzardice: sv*
2016-10-09 06:04 _Meep_: XD
2016-10-09 06:04 blizzardice: 01:26:412 (7) - and this is close to going off screen
2016-10-09 06:05 blizzardice: 01:29:412 (3,4,5) - no repeat slider?
2016-10-09 06:05 _Meep_: nah no repeats <3
2016-10-09 06:05 blizzardice: ok~
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Nice song choice. :3 Formatted with top-to-bottom reading in mind. So I might say something in Normal or Hard that applies to all diffs.

Normal

Normal

  • Consider revising new combos! I would put one at every downbeat at least, and most large sv changes should be NC’d.
  • 00:17:096 (1,2) Questionable object placement here. The reverse arrow will probably be hidden by most slider skins.
  • 00:12:044 (1,2,3,4) Maybe something like this instead?: https://puu.sh/rCLYx/e22adb71a2.mp4 Atm it looks kinda weird, and some objects could be placed slightly better.
  • 00:22:149 00:39:833 Feels really empty here. I think the player might get bored if there’s nothing much to click here. Consider Ncing at every downbeat as well, since the follow points look somewhat unappealing with such a long pause between notes.
  • 00:44:886 (5,6) – Blanket!~
  • 00:47:412 (1,2,3) I’m confused as to what rhythm this is supposed to be following. Consider revising that part?
  • 00:51:833 (5) Double reverse sliders can throw players off, consider changing this to something else like two normal sliders.
  • 00:57:517 (1,2) – Blanket!~
  • 01:05:096 (7) Really long multi-reverse slider. I think you can maybe make a more interesting pattern out of this. Especially considering the slider speed it may be hard for new players to keep up. Maybe something like this?: https://puu.sh/rCMuG/64df4378fd.mp4
  • 01:08:886 (3,4) – This overlap looks unsightly. Maybe play around with it until you can get rid of it. I’d move 01:09:517 (4) to the left, personally.
  • 01:10:781 (7,9) – Blanket these two? Or these two: 01:11:096 (8,9) ?
  • 01:11:412 (9) Another double reverse. ._.
  • 01:17:096 (1) I don’t know about stacking this under 01:16:307 (2). It could cause players to click too early since normal diffs are mostly about learning distance/tempo you know? If it’s so close players at this level may tend to click it as fast as possible.
  • 01:24:675 (5,1) – Move 01:24:675 (5) to the right and blanket with 01:25:307 (1) to avoid overlap?


Hard

Hard



Insane+

Insane+



Nowa’s Flower

Nowa’s Flower



Good luck!
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- delete "Re:LieF" from tags it is already included in source.
- 00:00:00 - 00:10:781 - why did you use normal hitsound set instead of soft? It sounds too loud and doesn't fit at all
- 00:22:149 - 00:56:886 - ^
- Where are hitsounds?
- add easy difficulty


Nowa's Flower
AR -0.3~0.5 Too fast for such song.
Slider velocity is way too high. It doesn't fit to the music.
00:06:360 (3) - i don't really think it is needed to map such silent note.
00:21:439 (2) - it actually starts from 00:21:360
00:58:465 (5,6) - I don't hear any beats to approve those sliders. Why did you do that?
01:00:991 (4,5) - ^
01:03:123 (3) - ^
01:06:360 (1) - this slider is made in a special way. Why?
01:17:412 (5) - new combo due to spacing change
01:32:965 (1) - adjust the volume on the end of the slider till 5% with soft hitsound set


Insane+
Name this just [Insane] without those random symbols, please.
00:45:833 (4) - this note overlaps hp bar a bit.
00:46:465 (6) - new combo
00:57:202 (1,2,3,4) - overmapping
00:57:991 (3,4) - ^
01:03:833 (6) - new combo
01:04:781 (1) - no new combo
01:05:096 (2) - new combo
01:06:360 (6) - new combo
01:08:886 (6) - new combo
01:12:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - overmapping
01:17:096 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:30:360 (7) - extend till white tick and keep symmetry
01:32:965 (1) - silence spinner


Hard
00:04:465 (7) - there are no sound on blue tick. It sounds completely off the rhythm. New combo also should be placed there.
00:45:991 (5) - ^
00:20:254 (3) - repeat slider is almost hidden by previous slider
01:32:965 (1) - silence the end of slider


Normal
00:06:991 (1,2,3) - why are they all different? What was the purpose to make it like that.
00:17:886 (2) - repeat slider is almost hidden
00:22:149 - ~ 00:39:833 - You should totally include more notes here, it is waaaay too empty for Normal.
00:43:623 (3) - fix the spacing
00:45:991 (7,8,9,1,2) - this is like a big mess. Remake to make everything readable for average players.
01:27:833 (1) - offscreen
01:32:965 (1) - silence the end of slider
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General
Just the standard stuff for a new mapset, obv needs hitsounds and an easy difficulty (or something below 2 stars atleast).
Also combo colours.


Nowa's flower
00:02:412 (2) - This note is pretty high musically, i think you can add more spacing even though its the intro.
00:08:886 (3,3) - These slider could do well with slightly lower SV.
00:23:254 (4,2) - Unecessary overlap, even if its slight.
00:52:149 (5,1) - Heavy note and big white tick, this should have bigger spacing
01:28:939 (1) - I think this note is quite unecessary, it doesnt hit the "k" sound in the vocals that i think you were going for.


Insane+
Why is this called insane"+"? I mean youre free to call it what you want but i feel like insane+ implies that it is difficult for an insane which it isnt.
00:17:096 (1,2,3) - Why are these tilted differently?
00:18:675 (6,7) - This flows weird.
00:25:939 (4,5) - Copy and paste one of these and just ctrl+j to get the same tilt.
00:42:202 (4,1) - I think this can have even bigger spacing, its quite a change in the music.
00:42:833 - The vocals start here so i think that
Image makes more sense since you do map the vocals.
00:51:833 (6) - This note should be more spaced than 00:51:991 (7) - this note since it has a big vocal hit on it while the red tick doesnt.
00:51:991 (7,1) - This overlap looks off
00:54:360 (9) - Stack this with one of the notes from the triplet
00:55:149 (2,5,7) - Space these out slightly to avoid unecessary overlap
01:20:254 (1,2) - Make these the same design exactly with copy paste and then ctrl+h, ctrl+j


Hard
00:04:465 (7) - This should be NC seeing as how you've Nc'd the rest of the intro
00:20:096 (2,3) - This blanket is too close.
00:49:307 (5,7) - Is this stack meant to be off to make it easier to read? Otherwise, fix.
00:56:096 (8) - I think you can move this slightly to the left to make it flow better
01:05:096 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This might be too difficult to read for a Hard but im not sure tbh.
01:14:570 (8,3) - No reason for this stack to be off i think


Normal
BNs have told me in the past that Normal difficulties cant have changing slider velocities, i think its worth looking into.
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M4M from my queue!

Nice song choice. :3 Formatted with top-to-bottom reading in mind. So I might say something in Normal or Hard that applies to all diffs.

Normal

Normal

  • Consider revising new combos! I would put one at every downbeat at least, and most large sv changes should be NC’d.
  • 00:17:096 (1,2) Questionable object placement here. The reverse arrow will probably be hidden by most slider skins. Fixed
  • 00:12:044 (1,2,3,4) Maybe something like this instead?: https://puu.sh/rCLYx/e22adb71a2.mp4 Atm it looks kinda weird, and some objects could be placed slightly better.Fixed
  • 00:22:149 00:39:833 Feels really empty here. I think the player might get bored if there’s nothing much to click here. Consider Ncing at every downbeat as well, since the follow points look somewhat unappealing with such a long pause between notes.Fixed
  • 00:44:886 (5,6) – Blanket!~ Fixed
  • 00:47:412 (1,2,3) I’m confused as to what rhythm this is supposed to be following. Consider revising that part? Fixed
  • 00:51:833 (5) Double reverse sliders can throw players off, consider changing this to something else like two normal sliders. Fixed
  • 00:57:517 (1,2) – Blanket!~ Fixed
  • 01:05:096 (7) Really long multi-reverse slider. I think you can maybe make a more interesting pattern out of this. Especially considering the slider speed it may be hard for new players to keep up. Maybe something like this?: https://puu.sh/rCMuG/64df4378fd.mp4 Fixed
  • 01:08:886 (3,4) – This overlap looks unsightly. Maybe play around with it until you can get rid of it. I’d move 01:09:517 (4) to the left, personally. Fixed
  • 01:10:781 (7,9) – Blanket these two? Or these two: 01:11:096 (8,9) ? Fixed
  • 01:11:412 (9) Another double reverse. ._. Fixed
  • 01:17:096 (1) I don’t know about stacking this under 01:16:307 (2). It could cause players to click too early since normal diffs are mostly about learning distance/tempo you know? If it’s so close players at this level may tend to click it as fast as possible. Fixed
  • 01:24:675 (5,1) – Move 01:24:675 (5) to the right and blanket with 01:25:307 (1) to avoid overlap?
Fixed

Hard

Hard



Insane+

Insane+


  • Firstly, why insane + if there’s no insane? o.o Many testplayers have stated that the insane doesn't really feel like an insane,more like an insane/extra due to its jumps and big streams,even though its a 4.7*
  • 00:01:939 (1,2) – I’d ctrl+G these tbh, idk why but it looks better to me. (not both, one at a time xD) Fixed
  • 00:04:465 (1) Another double reverse asdjfasdf. I won’t mention any more but I strongly recommend changing these as they play weird and you map them to notes that could be better to play if they were clicked. [color=#4000FF]Fixed

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  • 00:08:097 (2,3) – Inconsistent DS. Fixed
  • 00:10:781 (1,2) What is this massive jump for? o.o Consider nerfing? I'll leave that, because the music gets louder by a shitton and I think that the jump plays it well
  • 00:22:781 (2,4) – Unsightly overlap. ;-; I feel it looks nice though :/
  • 00:27:833 (2,3) – Blanket? Bring the note infront and you'll see it lines up perfectly(ikr)
  • 00:29:096 (5,6,1,2) – These all overlap somehow. Maybe revise how you placed things in this part? Fixed
  • 00:35:096 (2) Misses piano on the red tick. Feels weird to play tbh, I’d end the slider on red rather than blue. I get that you’re mapping the vocals but this rhythm choice is questionable. x.x Piano starts at 1 and I don't hear anything at red so there shouldn't be a note there
  • 00:37:623 (2,3) – Blanket! Fixed
  • 00:41:412 (3,4,1,2,3,4) Aaa this part screwed me up so much. If anything it should be spaced higher at the beginning and less towards the end since at the beginning the piano is more intense. Either way I didn’t like how that played when I tested it. Fixed
  • 00:42:202 (4,1) – Inconsistent DS, unless it’s supposed to be a jump, in that case space it slightly more imo. Fixed
  • 00:45:360 (3,5) – Blanket! Fixed
  • 00:49:623 (7,8) Wha? A triple would be fine here. Fixed
  • 00:51:675 (5,6,7,8,9) These jumps are pretty big for this section’s intensity. Nerf? Fixed
  • 00:53:412 (4,5,6,7) Horrible flow, will nearly always cause a combo break. In fact I might say it’s unplayable, but idk about that. What I would do: https://puu.sh/rCNUe/8f1a2edf8e.mp4 Fixed
  • All through the kiai time there are some flow breaks at the end of sliders where you have to stop to click a circle. I feel it plays weird and doesn’t really match the song very well. I’d consider moving those circles somewhere else. Fixed some
  • 01:03:517 (5,6) – Overlap. ;-; Fixed
  • 01:10:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6) About these… 01:10:465 (2,4) stack 4 with the end of 2. 01:10:465 (2,3) blanket these two? 01:11:097 (4,5) blanket these as well? 01:11:097 (4,6) stack 6 with 4’s end in a way that 01:11:412 (5,6) are symmetrical? This is hard to explain but in the end I get something like this: https://puu.sh/rCOah/d3fdea18aa.mp4 Fixed
  • 01:30:360 (7) – Now… I really don’t wanna pick on this because it’s really good but this: https://puu.sh/rCOcL/08ba8173c0.png . This just… idk it triggers me. You could also extend it to 01:32:886
uh.. -.-


Good luck!


thx 4 ze mod


Louis Cyphre wrote:

General

- delete "Re:LieF" from tags it is already included in source.
- 00:00:00 - 00:10:781 - why did you use normal hitsound set instead of soft? It sounds too loud and doesn't fit at all
- 00:22:149 - 00:56:886 - ^
- Where are hitsounds?
- add easy difficulty


Nowa's Flower
AR -0.3~0.5 Too fast for such song.
Slider velocity is way too high. It doesn't fit to the music.
00:06:360 (3) - i don't really think it is needed to map such silent note.
00:21:439 (2) - it actually starts from 00:21:360
00:58:465 (5,6) - I don't hear any beats to approve those sliders. Why did you do that?
01:00:991 (4,5) - ^
01:03:123 (3) - ^
01:06:360 (1) - this slider is made in a special way. Why?
01:17:412 (5) - new combo due to spacing change
01:32:965 (1) - adjust the volume on the end of the slider till 5% with soft hitsound set


Insane+
Name this just [Insane] without those random symbols, please. Many testplayers have stated that the insane doesn't really feel like an insane,more like an insane/extra due to its jumps and big streams,even though its a 4.7*
00:45:833 (4) - this note overlaps hp bar a bit. Fixed
00:46:465 (6) - new combo Fixed
00:57:202 (1,2,3,4) - overmapping I don't think so, fits the music more.
00:57:991 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:03:833 (6) - new combo Fixed
01:04:781 (1) - no new combo Fixed
01:05:096 (2) - new combo Fixed
01:06:360 (6) - new combo Fixed
01:08:886 (6) - new combo Fixed
01:12:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - overmapping Fits the song more,along with that its aligned in a way that the player doesn't need to do some crazy jump to get to the stream,he just needs to follow the already obvious anti-clockwise flow.
01:17:096 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Also follows flow
01:30:360 (7) - extend till white tick and keep symmetry Fixed
01:32:965 (1) - silence spinner Fixed


Hard
00:04:465 (7) - there are no sound on blue tick. It sounds completely off the rhythm. New combo also should be placed there. Fixed
00:45:991 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:20:254 (3) - repeat slider is almost hidden by previous slider Fixed
01:32:965 (1) - silence the end of slider


Normal
00:06:991 (1,2,3) - why are they all different? What was the purpose to make it like that. Because I cant have the same slider shape play 3 different piano parts,and that it's to give some variety to the song(im sorry I suck)
00:17:886 (2) - repeat slider is almost hidden Fixed
00:22:149 - ~ 00:39:833 - You should totally include more notes here, it is waaaay too empty for Normal. Fixed
00:43:623 (3) - fix the spacing Fixed
00:45:991 (7,8,9,1,2) - this is like a big mess. Remake to make everything readable for average players. Fixed
01:27:833 (1) - offscreen Fixed
01:32:965 (1) - silence the end of slider
Fixed
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Miryle wrote:
M4M from my queue!

Nice song choice. :3 Formatted with top-to-bottom reading in mind. So I might say something in Normal or Hard that applies to all diffs.

Nowa’s Flower

Nowa’s Flower


  • 00:13:781 (2) – Nazi blanket~ Heil
  • 00:15:833 (1) Removing this note would make this 00:15:991 (2,3,4) easier to play. (Also there’s no sound on that note. :3) It would make it easier to play but there is a notable drum hit mapped under that note so not removing it
  • 00:21:439 (2) – I’d lower this to even 10% volume. Will be changed when i get the hitsounds ready
  • 00:32:096 Note here? Done
  • 00:41:412 (2,3,4,5) Pretty big jumps for such a calm section. ._. Also 00:42:044 (1) why? The jumps are for the final piano sounds before the speed up. Though they were bit too excessive to me aswell so i lowered the DS for 3|4|5 to .9x
  • 00:50:886 (4,2) – You could stack these. That was the original plan but the DS for 00:51:675 (2,3) - was too low and i want the 3 to be blanketed with the (1) like it is now
  • 01:27:754 (1) - https://puu.sh/rCOsG/32e044d9f2.png ? First of all the beat is not 1/6 there and second the first beat you mapped under that slider is way too unnotable when played so i don't think it should be mapped
  • 01:30:360 (1) Why reverse this? It looks weird if the reverse sits there. Maybe make the ending stand out a little more? Up to you really, I don’t think it looks too good. ._. I'll see what i can do to it the reverse was just a temp until i got a better idea but seems like i never got one but don't expect a kick ass ending so i want to keep the spinner there


Good luck!


Louis Cyphre wrote:

General

- Where are hitsounds?
- 00:00:00 - 00:10:781 - why did you use normal hitsound set instead of soft? It sounds too loud and doesn't fit at all
- 00:22:149 - 00:56:886 - ^

The hitsounding is WIP


Nowa's Flower
AR -0.3~0.5 Too fast for such song. Let's look at Monstrata's SANTA SAN for example which has AR 9.3 and the same BPM as this song. Also it has similiar slower parts so would you see that as a problem then? How about Fycho's Miraizu [Special]? The patterns are easier and the bpm is 178 which is 12 less than this song and still it has AR 9.3. If i could hear your opinion on this i may re consider the change as i think the AR is fine right now.
Slider velocity is way too high. It doesn't fit to the music. I map with high SV always as that allows the map to be bit loose and that way more fun to play and it fits my style. Also this is one of the reasons i use higher AR. If someone wants to give me a clear reason why is this hurting the map quality so i understand why i have to destroy my own style, i will lower the SV
00:06:360 (3) - i don't really think it is needed to map such silent note. I somewhat agree. It's somewhat less important but it's still notable so i don't really know right now. If someone notes this out again (with a good reason) i will consider and most likely fix it
00:21:439 (2) - it actually starts from 00:21:360 Fixed
00:58:465 (5,6) - I don't hear any beats to approve those sliders. Why did you do that? I kinda tried to follow the vocal lines here but i think they aren't that improtant after all
01:00:991 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:03:123 (3) - ^ Here if you listen closely (or just remove the short slider and listen) there are two clear piano beats mapped under it
01:06:360 (1) - this slider is made in a special way. Why? I don't think there is a reason at all to be special but i mean it's not that special, just bit more aesthetical
01:17:412 (5) - new combo due to spacing change Oh yeah, fixed
01:32:965 (1) - adjust the volume on the end of the slider till 5% with soft hitsound set Will be fixed when we get the hitsounds ready


Kantzm8 wrote:
Hello, for M4M

Nowa's flower
00:02:412 (2) - This note is pretty high musically, i think you can add more spacing even though its the intro. Sure but i can't add too much as it is in the intro : )
00:08:886 (3,3) - These slider could do well with slightly lower SV. I kinda agree on the first one as the notes are bit lower but the second one isn't lower like for the first one
00:23:254 (4,2) - Unecessary overlap, even if its slight. How is this overlapped? They don't even touch each other?
00:52:149 (5,1) - Heavy note and big white tick, this should have bigger spacing Like in the intro thing, increased it by a bit but i don't want to increase too much
01:28:939 (1) - I think this note is quite unecessary, it doesnt hit the "k" sound in the vocals that i think you were going for. Removed for the greater good


Thanks for modding guys, sorry if i sound rude (had a really bad day)


Updated
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Artist:Murasaki Hotaru
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Version:Nowa's Flower
Source:Re:LieF ~親愛なるあなたへ~
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Hello, for M4M

General
Just the standard stuff for a new mapset, obv needs hitsounds and an easy difficulty (or something below 2 stars atleast).
Also combo colours.


Nowa's flower
00:02:412 (2) - This note is pretty high musically, i think you can add more spacing even though its the intro.
00:08:886 (3,3) - These slider could do well with slightly lower SV.
00:23:254 (4,2) - Unecessary overlap, even if its slight.
00:52:149 (5,1) - Heavy note and big white tick, this should have bigger spacing
01:28:939 (1) - I think this note is quite unecessary, it doesnt hit the "k" sound in the vocals that i think you were going for.


Insane+
Why is this called insane"+"? I mean youre free to call it what you want but i feel like insane+ implies that it is difficult for an insane which it isnt. color=#4000FF]I have said it in previous mods.[/color]
00:17:096 (1,2,3) - Why are these tilted differently? The piano notes they play are different
00:18:675 (6,7) - This flows weird. I don't really know how to change this
00:25:939 (4,5) - Copy and paste one of these and just ctrl+j to get the same tilt. Fixed
00:42:202 (4,1) - I think this can have even bigger spacing, its quite a change in the music. Fixed
00:42:833 - The vocals start here so i think that Fixed
Image makes more sense since you do map the vocals.
00:51:833 (6) - This note should be more spaced than 00:51:991 (7) - this note since it has a big vocal hit on it while the red tick doesnt. FixedFixed
00:51:991 (7,1) - This overlap looks off Fixed
00:54:360 (9) - Stack this with one of the notes from the triplet Fixed
00:55:149 (2,5,7) - Space these out slightly to avoid unecessary overlap Fixed
01:20:254 (1,2) - Make these the same design exactly with copy paste and then ctrl+h, ctrl+j Fixed


Hard
00:04:465 (7) - This should be NC seeing as how you've Nc'd the rest of the intro Fixed
00:20:096 (2,3) - This blanket is too close. Fixed
00:49:307 (5,7) - Is this stack meant to be off to make it easier to read? Otherwise, fix. It is.
00:56:096 (8) - I think you can move this slightly to the left to make it flow better Fixed
01:05:096 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This might be too difficult to read for a Hard but im not sure tbh. Not too sure either,I'll have some rank 60-100k players help me test it later on
01:14:570 (8,3) - No reason for this stack to be off i think Fixed?


Normal
BNs have told me in the past that Normal difficulties cant have changing slider velocities, i think its worth looking into. I asked modhelp and most of them said it's fine
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M4M as Requested

General
  • Tags conflict with Nowa's Flower diff
  • Consider hitsounding the map?
Normal
One thing to note is that I'm really having trouble reading the map with the inconsistent Distance Snap. Also some of the slider and circle placement is a bit troublesome as it stacks on one another.

Hard
Insane+
Nowa's Flower
  • 01:27:833 (1) - Awkward. Try adding some rhythm after it and remove the repeat


Thats all from me! Thanks for the M4M and Good luck in ranking!
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M4M as Requested

General
  • Consider hitsounding the map? Already mentioned but yeah, hitsounding is in progress

Nowa's Flower
  • 01:27:833 (1) - Awkward. Try adding some rhythm after it and remove the repeat How does it feel awkward? Mouse movement, maybe. It's placement in the timeline when compared to the song, definitely not because it folllows the guitar/banjo/the_fuck_is_that_instrument sounds. Unless if there is a clear reason to remove the repeat i won't do anything to that part Though i may map this 01:28:781 - if it gets noted out


Thats all from me! Thanks for the M4M and Good luck in ranking!


Thanks for modding~
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DTM9 Nowa wrote:
-Nitrous wrote:
M4M as Requested

General
  • Consider hitsounding the map? Already mentioned but yeah, hitsounding is in progress

Nowa's Flower
  • 01:27:833 (1) - Awkward. Try adding some rhythm after it and remove the repeat How does it feel awkward? Mouse movement, maybe. It's placement in the timeline when compared to the song, definitely not because it folllows the guitar/banjo/the_fuck_is_that_instrument sounds. Unless if there is a clear reason to remove the repeat i won't do anything to that part Though i may map this 01:28:781 - if it gets noted out


Thats all from me! Thanks for the M4M and Good luck in ranking!


Thanks for modding~


It just felt awkward in my own opinion. Well hitsounding might cover it up in the end.
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