1. EXHAUST - 4Key (4.22 stars, 1133 notes)
2. leqek's ADVANCED - 4Key (2.92 stars, 930 notes)
3. NOVICE - 4Key (1.94 stars, 510 notes)

Fresh Chicken wrote:

걍 익저에서 간단한 패턴관련피드백 몆가지 드릴게요

00:22:745 - 노트추가

00:26:460 - 사실상 이런 노트흐름은 좋지않아요. 밸런스상에 문제가 될수도있으니까 좀 고려하심이 좋을거같네요

00:34:603 (34603|2,34603|3,34745|3,34745|2,34888|2,34888|1) - 솔직히 개인적으로 저는 이게 별로 맘에 안드네요, 살짝 무리가 가요

00:49:031 - 노트 추가, 00:51:317 - 참고

뒷부분들은 앞패턴 그대로 꽂아두신거같으니 제가 잡은거 참고해서 고쳐보세요

경험이 부족한거 치고는 꽤나 잘만든 맵이라고 생각합니다 근데 솔직히 말해서 제 맵을 참고한 경향이 적지않게 보이네요.

Good luck!

Ramuchi wrote:

제 주관적 의견이 아아아주 마아아아않이 들어가있습니다. 꼭 수정하실 필요는 없어요!!

익저

모딩 전에 00:09:745 (9745|0,9745|1,9745|3,10031|3,10031|2,10317|0,10317|3,10603|0,10603|1) - 이패턴 너무 좋다아악 - 감사합니다! >_<


00:46:317 - 이 부분에 https://puu.sh/rnZ2A/b8672a9657.jpg 이런식으로 떨어지는거도 좋을거 같습니다! (보컬음인가? 일단 되게 짧게 소리지르는 소리가 들려욧) - 수정!

01:06:317 - 노트 추가! 수정!

01:16:888 (76888|3) - http://puu.sh/rnZmd/2a2a7e01aa.jpg 롱놋으로 이어주는게 더 어울릴거같아요 - 죄송합니다 저는 4비트 부분만 롱놋을 사용 하기 떄문에...ㅠㅠ

다시 봐도 키아이파트 롱놋 사랑스럽네요 - ㅎㅎ 감사합니다.. <3

NOVICE

00:00:603 (603|0,888|1,1174|2) - 롱놋으로 이어주세요! (00:05:174 (5174|2,5460|1,5745|3) - ) - 참고!)

01:16:031 (76031|3,76317|2,76603|1) - 여기도! 01:20:603 (80603|3,80888|2,81174|1) - 또 여기도! 01:21:888 (81888|1) - 이곳은 (01:17:317 (77317|0) - ) 참조! - 처음 도입부 부분은 전부 수정 완료했지만 중반부는 원래 있던 롱놋을 수정했습니다!

모딩해야하는데 BG 겨드랑이에 눈이 자꾸가네요 ㅂㄷ 헉...

수고하세요오옷!

1. Offset :: 605 (안바꾸셔도 괜찮습니당)
   
   [EXHAUST]
2. 00:01:317 (1317|0) - 메인음을 따라간다는 조건하에 이노트를 지우면 좀 더 깔끔하겠네요 (안지워도 상관무)
   00:02:031 (2031|3) - ^
   00:02:888 (2888|2) - ^
   00:03:745 (3745|1) - ^
   00:04:603 (4603|2) - ^
   00:05:888 (5888|0) - ^
   00:06:603 (6603|3) - ^
   
3. 00:07:317 - 이부분은 막난인만큼 http://puu.sh/rqGoU/8b233d4af4.png 이런 패턴이 좋아보이네요
   
4. 00:18:745 (18745|0,18745|2,18888|1,18888|3) - 전 난이도와 비교해봤을때 더 쉬운 패턴이네요 00:18:817 - 여기에 노트하나 추가하시는거 추천
   
5. 00:20:888 - 노트 한개 삭제
   
6. 00:25:460 - 노트 한개 추가
   
7. 00:29:174 - 노트 추가
   
8. 01:02:031 (62031|0) - 삭제 (왜 두개에요?)
   
   

Niks wrote:

Hi Mod Request

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  []Offset :: 605 (안바꾸셔도 괜찮습니당)
  
  [EXHAUST]
  []00:01:317 (1317|0) - 메인음을 따라간다는 조건하에 이노트를 지우면 좀 더 깔끔하겠네요 (안지워도 상관무)
  00:02:031 (2031|3) - ^
  00:02:888 (2888|2) - ^
  00:03:745 (3745|1) - ^
  00:04:603 (4603|2) - ^
  00:05:888 (5888|0) - ^
  00:06:603 (6603|3) - ^ - 죄송합니다 이 부분들은 전부 1/2를 기준으로 잡았습니다 ㅠㅠ
  
  []00:07:317 - 이부분은 막난인만큼 http://puu.sh/rqGoU/8b233d4af4.png 이런 패턴이 좋아보이네요 - 스냅이 1/4 이 아닌지라 이것도 수정 할 수가 없네요...
  
  []00:18:745 (18745|0,18745|2,18888|1,18888|3) - 전 난이도와 비교해봤을때 더 쉬운 패턴이네요 00:18:817 - 여기에 노트하나 추가하시는거 추천 - 제가 봤을때는 제 패턴이 더 어렵다고 생각해요...
  
  []00:20:888 - 노트 한개 삭제 - 스네어를 기점으로 3 초드를 두었습니다 ㅠㅠ
  
  []00:25:460 - 노트 한개 추가 - 수정!
  
  []00:29:174 - 노트 추가 - 수정!
  
  []01:02:031 (62031|0) - 삭제 (왜 두개에요?) - 메인 신스에 롱노트를 두었고 일반 노트들은 배경의 타악기를 따라가는데에 기점을 두었습니다

한번 둘러봤습니다 나중에 또 봐줬으면 하는게 있으면 IRC요청해주세요

Ibrahim wrote:

chit chat

11:43 *Ibrahim is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1090281 you - Shiawase Transmission [EXHAUST]]
11:43 Bolgom: I'm in :)
11:45 Ibrahim: 00:01:888 -  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6235646 how about this?
11:45 Ibrahim: this can make great structure for the LN and single note
11:46 Bolgom: Applied!
11:47 Ibrahim: 00:08:174 (8174|1) -  move this to col 1 (col 1 2 3 4)
11:47 Bolgom: Done~
11:49 Ibrahim: 00:11:460 (11460|0,11603|1) -  ctrl + G for consistency jack
11:49 Ibrahim: like you did it here 00:11:174 (11174|3,11317|3) - 
11:50 Bolgom: Appiled~ also 00:16:031 - here too :)
11:50 Ibrahim: nice you mention it =w=b
11:50 Bolgom: >w<
11:52 Ibrahim: 00:18:031 (18031|2,18067|1,18103|0,18138|3) -  i think this burst it's kinda weird to hit , since the song have high bpm so how about this
11:52 Ibrahim: 00:17:888 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6235673
11:53 Bolgom: uhhh Sorry but I want to keep this part because kinda special to me and it's structure already ;_;
11:53 Ibrahim: no problem :p
11:54 Bolgom: >~<
11:55 Ibrahim: 00:21:888 -  00:22:174 -  how about add one more note? since they have loud sound imo
11:55 Ibrahim: 00:21:603 -  this too
11:55 Bolgom: Looks good for me! applied!
11:56 Ibrahim: 00:25:317 (25317|0) -  this to still have kick sound 
11:56 Ibrahim: ans this should be 2 note if you just foloowing the kick 00:25:460 (25460|3,25460|1,25460|2) - 
11:56 Bolgom: Nice catch o.o done!
11:57 Bolgom: Both are applied!
11:57 Ibrahim: 00:30:317 -  well done here i like the stream
11:57 Bolgom: Thanks >w<
11:59 Ibrahim: 00:51:031 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6235697 how about this?
12:00 Ibrahim: if you apply that
12:00 Bolgom: Changed with'n refer your suggestion!
12:00 Ibrahim: 00:53:317 (53317|2) -  move it to col 1     I   00:53:460 (53460|1) -  move it to col 3
12:01 Bolgom: umm I want to keep there sorry >_<
12:02 Ibrahim: 01:14:888 (74888|0) -  add one more note?
12:02 Bolgom: Done~
12:04 Ibrahim: 01:42:888 (102888|1) -  move it to col 3, because different PR
12:04 Bolgom: 01:42:745 (102745|3) - moved this instead~
12:04 Ibrahim: 01:46:745 (106745|1) -  this too , move it to col 4 
12:04 Ibrahim: and you must re-arrange a lilte in here if you apply it 01:46:460 (106460|0,106460|2,106603|3,106745|0,106745|2) -  :p
12:05 Bolgom: Done!
12:05 Ibrahim: oki done 

좋은 일, 행운을 빌어 요!

Interlude- wrote:

irc

2016-10-03 14:12 Bolgom: 인터루드님 실례지만 혹시 모딩 리퀘스트 부탁 가능할까요...? ㅜㅜ
2016-10-03 14:12 Interlude-: 어떤맵이용?
2016-10-03 14:13 Bolgom: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1090281 you - Shiawase Transmission]
2016-10-03 14:13 Bolgom: 이맵입니다!
2016-10-03 14:14 Interlude-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1090281 you - Shiawase Transmission]
2016-10-03 14:16 Interlude-: irc 되세영?
2016-10-03 14:16 Bolgom: 어떠셨나요..?
2016-10-03 14:16 Bolgom: 넵!
2016-10-03 14:17 Interlude-: 음
2016-10-03 14:17 Interlude-: 딱히 잡을게 없어보이긴 하짐나
2016-10-03 14:17 Interlude-: 하지만
2016-10-03 14:18 Bolgom: 네?
2016-10-03 14:18 Interlude-: 00:17:888 - 
2016-10-03 14:18 Interlude-: 여기 2개여두 될거같아요
2016-10-03 14:19 Bolgom: 그럼 의견을 반영하여 00:17:603 - 여기도 2개로 수정하겠습니다!
2016-10-03 14:19 Interlude-: 음 패턴 제안이 있는데
2016-10-03 14:19 Interlude-: 거기
2016-10-03 14:19 Interlude-: 00:17:603 - 4번 삭제
2016-10-03 14:19 Bolgom: 네?
2016-10-03 14:19 Interlude-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6235746
2016-10-03 14:20 Interlude-: 제가 이런걸 더 선호하는 편이긴 합니다 하하
2016-10-03 14:20 Bolgom: 으 저 딜레이 부분은 킵하고 싶어서...ㅠㅠ
2016-10-03 14:20 Interlude-: 그렇군요
2016-10-03 14:21 Interlude-: 00:21:603 - 여기 노트 추가
2016-10-03 14:21 Interlude-: 00:21:888 - 여기랑 소리가 같아요
2016-10-03 14:21 Interlude-: 00:26:174 - 여기 하나 삭제?
2016-10-03 14:21 Bolgom: 00:21:460 - 이쪽 타이밍하고 베이스를 맞춰서 하나를 이미 지웠었어요 저번 모딩에서...ㅠㅠ
2016-10-03 14:22 Interlude-: 음
2016-10-03 14:22 Interlude-: 추가하셔도 될거같은데
2016-10-03 14:22 Interlude-: 일단 알겠어용
2016-10-03 14:23 Bolgom: 넵 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ
2016-10-03 14:23 Interlude-: 00:26:817 - 여기소리는 의도적 스킵인가용?
2016-10-03 14:23 Interlude-: 00:29:174 - 여기 3개 아니여두 될거같아요
2016-10-03 14:24 Bolgom: 네 플레이 할때에는 그닥 느껴지지않는 포인트여서
2016-10-03 14:24 Bolgom: 3개부분은 하나 삭제했습니다!
2016-10-03 14:24 Interlude-: 00:38:317 - 여기
2016-10-03 14:24 Interlude-: 처음 두개랑 마지막이 같지
2016-10-03 14:24 Interlude-: 처음이랑 마지막 두개가 같지 않은거같은데
2016-10-03 14:24 Interlude-: 확인 해보셔요
2016-10-03 14:25 Bolgom: playability 에 중점을 두었어요 사실상 보컬은 4개가 전부 다 다른지라 ㅠㅠ
2016-10-03 14:25 Interlude-: 00:39:174 (39174|1) - 이거 롱놋으로 어떠세요?
2016-10-03 14:26 Bolgom: 괜찮네요! 수정!
2016-10-03 14:26 Interlude-: 저기 playability 라는게
2016-10-03 14:26 Interlude-: 음
2016-10-03 14:26 Interlude-: 냅둬도 상관은 없겠네요
2016-10-03 14:26 Bolgom: 플레이하기에 좀 편안하고 더 잘 포현하기 위함 이라고 해야되나...
2016-10-03 14:26 Bolgom: 네 ><
2016-10-03 14:27 Interlude-: 00:39:460 - 00:30:317 - 시작점이 다르네용
2016-10-03 14:27 Interlude-: 3개 2개
2016-10-03 14:27 Bolgom: 3개로 전부 통일했어요!
2016-10-03 14:29 Interlude-: 01:10:317 - 노트추가
2016-10-03 14:29 Bolgom: 추가완료!
2016-10-03 14:30 Interlude-: 요정도같아요\
2016-10-03 14:30 Bolgom: 모딩 감사드립니다!
2016-10-03 14:31 Bolgom: >_<
2016-10-03 14:31 Interlude-: 넹
2016-10-03 14:31 Interlude-: 그
2016-10-03 14:31 Interlude-: 저거 제목
2016-10-03 14:31 Bolgom: IRC포스트 하시면 쿠도스 드릴게요!
2016-10-03 14:31 Bolgom: 네?
2016-10-03 14:31 Interlude-: 카타카나 안들어있나요?
2016-10-03 14:31 Interlude-: 원래 로마지로 shiawase라고 적혀있나요?
2016-10-03 14:31 Bolgom: 네 사운드 볼텍스에 저 상태로 수록된 상태에요
2016-10-03 14:31 Interlude-: 넹
2016-10-03 14:32 Bolgom: 치킨님 맵셋에서 메타데이타를 갖고와서...ㅎㅎ
2016-10-03 14:32 Interlude-: 그 widescreen support 해제하셔도 될거같아요
2016-10-03 14:32 Bolgom: 넵!

굿또

Rivals_7 wrote:

M4M o/ 1|2|3|4

[General]
https://remywiki.com/Shiawase_Transmission
add on tags " Hoshizora Illumination " since this song are the sequel of it
add on tags "Makina Maiheartbeat" and "MION" they're the characther on your current BG now - Done~

[EXHAUST]

00:18:031 (18031|2,18067|1,18103|0,18138|3,18174|2,18174|1) - i dont think this is quite comfy to perfectly execute. there's an unecessary inconsitent jacking space here - 00:17:888 (17888|1,18067|1,18174|1) - . Try . (Remember to rearrange your pattern above is possible) - This is one of pattern I had a lot of complain. But this is not uncomfortable to play but I have to consider about this, so I will keep this for now~

00:26:817 - 00:26:888 - I think there's still a sound here. add at 2|4 respectively? - It also pointed out but can't feel it when I was playing it

00:43:603 (43603|0,43603|1) - this seems quite faint. I mean, there's no beat like - 00:43:460 (43460|2,43460|3,43888|2,43888|1) - . maybe remove 1? - Done!

01:20:317 (80317|3,80460|3) - seems too heavy on the left side. might move this to 1|2 respectively - This is most structure pattern with'n keeping 3 chords I think~

01:33:460 (93460|1,93495|2,93531|3,93567|0,93603|1,93603|2) - literally same thing as 1st mod - Same~

00:19:174 (19174|3) - 01:34:603 (94603|3) - maybe add F hitsound? There's a part that contains cymbal obviously tho -I have to add F custom hitsound then, will apply this~

[NOVICE]

00:22:745 (22745|2,23031|0,23174|1) - move to 1|2|1 respectively each note. normal tier player will have a difficult time to perform this - 00:22:745 (22745|2,22745|3,23031|2) - perfectly - Done~

00:24:603 - 00:24:888 - why is this obvious beat ignored? :< add? - As you can see, I only focused on main rhythm, that is why kick doesn't there

00:46:317 (46317|2,46460|2,46888|1,47031|1) - these are quite close. and also somewhat difficult for normal players. Making it a simple stair (2|3|4 , 3|2|1 respectively) might do better - hmm I think that is not good idea if we can consider "fun" of play. but well I have changed above notes for non one hand pattern~

00:55:603 (55603|3,55888|3,56174|3) - how about making it an LN into - 00:56:460 - to cover all the kicks? sounds more better than jacks - Sorry but can't agree with this~ ;w;

01:38:174 (98174|1,98174|0,98460|1) - same thing i've mentioned above - Same~

01:40:031 - 01:40:317 - ignored again :cSame~

01:50:460 (110460|3,110745|3,111031|3,111317|2,111603|2,111888|2,112174|2) - well if possible avoid jacks especially on easier diff since they tend to be hard for newbies - if you think this is really hard, then I will ask to Normal player and take their opinion, thanks~


Good Luck

Wonki wrote:

2쿠도다 만세

레퀙

00:05:174 - ~00:08:603 - 막난이랑 비교해봤을때 이부분은 밀도가 높은듯 막난 참고하면서 줄이는게 좋을듯

01:16:174 - ~01:20:174 - 여기도 막난보다 많음

볼거없다.

막난

00:29:745 (29745|3,29745|2) - 보컬소리를 좀더따라가기위해 롱놋으로 하는건 어떨까요 00:29:888 - 요까지 늘리심되는데 - 느낌상 딱 끊기는 느낌이라서 이곳은 킵해두겠습니다~

00:30:031 (30031|3,30031|0) - 3놋하셔야될거같아요 밑난이도가 3놋이여서 -이거는 leqek 님과 상의해볼게요!

00:46:603 (46603|2) - 단놋은 좀어색한거같아요 롱놋으로 길게 늘어뜨리는게 좋을거같습니다. 수정!

00:47:174 (47174|1) - 이것도 마찬가지요

00:47:745 (47745|0) - 이것도 00:47:888 - 여기까지늘리면 좋을거같습니다 - 이거는 위의 패턴을 바꾸는 방향성으로 가기때문에 일단은 킵해두겠습니다 ㅠㅠ

01:11:460 - ~01:19:888 - 하드난이도와 비교하면서 난이도조정을 하는게 좋을거같아요 - 제 생각에는 익저스트 난이도가 롱놋과 맞물리며 더 어렵다고 생각해요 반면에 leqek님 난이도는 단순히 2개의 노트만을 사용하셨기에 ㅠㅠ

Raediaufar wrote:

quick check

[EXHAUST]

click

00:54:174 (54174|3,54174|1,54174|0) - two notes only vocal + kick is using 3 notes always~

01:24:031 (84031|1,84031|0) - triple here? - umm i dont mind to make jack here ;_;

01:52:460 (112460|3) - end here? 01:53:745 - feels weird with two LN when the sound is decreasing i will consider for this, looks fine for me. let me ask to other modders!

[leqek's ADVANCED]

click

00:21:603 (21603|0,21603|2,21603|3,21888|1,21888|2,21888|0) - two notes here?

00:23:460 (23460|3,23460|2,23460|0) - same like above

00:25:603 (25603|2,25603|0,25603|1,25888|2,25888|0,25888|3,26174|3,26174|1,26174|0) - ^

00:29:174 (29174|2,29174|0,29174|3,29745|3,29745|0,29745|1,30031|2,30031|1,30031|3) - same like above, I don't know why this is two notes

00:39:031 (39031|1) - move to 1

00:39:174 - add LN here until 00:39:460 -

00:47:478 (47478|3) - unsnap, snap to 00:47:460 -

01:06:888 (66888|3,66888|2,66888|0) - two note only here, remove 1

01:16:031 - I don't know what sound this pattern follows but I think this one is just soo wrong if you listen to the song

01:37:031 (97031|0,97031|1,97031|3,97317|2,97317|1,97317|3) - two notes only here

01:38:888 (98888|0,98888|1,98888|3) - ^, because ithe sound is same as 01:38:460 (98460|2,98460|0) -

01:41:031 (101031|2,101031|1,101031|0,101317|2,101317|1,101317|3,101603|0,101603|2,101603|3) - two notes only

01:42:460 (102460|1,102460|2,102745|1,102745|2) - move to 12

[NOVICE]

click

00:18:031 - add LN here until 00:18:174 - for burst sound i will consider for this, look like feeling hard :3

00:33:031 (33031|1) - delete, for break i think theres no break ;_;

00:46:603 (46603|3) - move to 2 00:46:888 (46888|1,47031|1) - this jack will be a problem then ;/

00:46:888 (46888|1,47031|1) - move to 4, one hand on there is not really good - even if i move that to 4, there will be other hard one hand which included one hand jacks

00:49:031 - add single note here on 4

00:49:603 - add single note on 1

00:51:317 - add on 1

00:51:888 - add on 4

00:55:317 - add on 4

00:56:460 - add on 3

01:14:888 - add note on 4 - From where i rejected and until here, sorry but i'm just following main melody only. no need to make double for kick as following my pattern flowing

01:39:888 (99888|2) - should end here 01:40:317 - ok~

01:43:888 - add on 4

01:44:460 - add on 1

01:46:174 - add on 1

01:46:745 - add on 4

01:50:174 - add on 4 - same~

Rivals_7 wrote:

M4M o/ 1|2|3|4

[General]

[leqek's ADVANCED]

00:10:031 (10031|0,10031|3,10317|1,10317|3) -
emm i think its too excesive to have two same hitsounds in a same place. If its not enough, use higher volume on each timing points (maybe 45%?)
hitsound done

00:44:174 (44174|1,44317|1) - i dont see the reason why is this jacked. its not the same as - 00:40:603 (40603|2,40745|2) - and - 00:41:603 (41603|2,41745|2) - . so maybe move - 00:44:317 (44317|1) - to 1 done

00:47:478 (47478|3) - this... is... unsnapped? done

01:00:460 (60460|2) - i think this LN should start at - 01:00:603 - That is not corrcet snapping

Good Luck

Wonki wrote:

2쿠도다 만세

레퀙

00:05:174 - ~00:08:603 - 막난이랑 비교해봤을때 이부분은 밀도가 높은듯 막난 참고하면서 줄이는게 좋을듯 수정

01:16:174 - ~01:20:174 - 여기도 막난보다 많음 수정

볼거없다. 그랭 ㅠ

Raediaufar wrote:

quick check

[leqek's ADVANCED]

click

00:21:603 (21603|0,21603|2,21603|3,21888|1,21888|2,21888|0) - two notes here? done

00:23:460 (23460|3,23460|2,23460|0) - same like above done

00:25:603 (25603|2,25603|0,25603|1,25888|2,25888|0,25888|3,26174|3,26174|1,26174|0) - ^ done

00:29:174 (29174|2,29174|0,29174|3,29745|3,29745|0,29745|1,30031|2,30031|1,30031|3) - same like above, I don't know why this is two notes done

00:39:031 (39031|1) - move to 1 done

00:39:174 - add LN here until 00:39:460 - done

00:47:478 (47478|3) - unsnap, snap to 00:47:460 - done

01:06:888 (66888|3,66888|2,66888|0) - two note only here, remove 1 done

01:16:031 - I don't know what sound this pattern follows but I think this one is just soo wrong if you listen to the song done

01:37:031 (97031|0,97031|1,97031|3,97317|2,97317|1,97317|3) - two notes only here done

01:38:888 (98888|0,98888|1,98888|3) - ^, because ithe sound is same as 01:38:460 (98460|2,98460|0) - done

01:41:031 (101031|2,101031|1,101031|0,101317|2,101317|1,101317|3,101603|0,101603|2,101603|3) - two notes only done

01:42:460 (102460|1,102460|2,102745|1,102745|2) - move to 12 done