1. Futsuu (2 stars, 226 notes)
2. Inner Oni (5.01 stars, 601 notes)
3. Kantan (1.24 stars, 130 notes)
4. Muzukashii (2.81 stars, 353 notes)
5. Oni (3.72 stars, 483 notes)

Nightstalker wrote:

Alrighty, let's do this

Kantan Diff:

SPOILER

• What I immediately found was that the approach speed seems a little fast for a Kantan Diff.
  The gaps between notes makes it easier, but I still think it might be too hard to read for newbies. You might wanna consider setting the slider velocity down to 1,20 or even 1,00. It's up to you ^^ nope, 1.40 is fine. i only use 1.2 at 220+ bpm
  
  01:33:048 - I think, since this is the last note, a Hitfinish would sound good. fixed
  
  Additionally, I think lowering the HP Drain by 1 or 2 would be a good idea, since the Kantan Diff doesn't contain many notes, and beginner's make more often mistakes than more experienced players. Putting on a bit of pressure onto the player in my opinion should start at around Muzu diff. Tho in the end, it's up to you, I however suggest lowering, even if it's just by a bit ^^ about HP/OD setting, refer to this guide: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements , for taiko, the lower the notes count, the higher the HP should be, because taiko gameplay is different than other mode
  
  Other than that, there's nothing else I personally would change ^^

Futsuu Diff:

SPOILER

• 00:03:048 - I think a kat suits here better the pitch is lower than 00:03:817 - so d will also fits here
  
  00:15:741 - I replaced the Don with a kat and it sounds good in my opinion, give it a try ^^ hmm d can emphasis the higher pitch at 00:16:125 - better, so i'll keep it for now
  
  00:16:125 - Exchange the kat with a don ^
  
  If you did the two above this one, make sure to keep it consistent at the other parts of the map. I'll list all times where you would need to change the hitsounds so they are just like the two above.
  
  00:21:894 - make it a kat
  00:22:279 - make it a don
  00:22:664 - A kat here sounds better if you changed the two above
  same as above reason
  
  01:28:048 - make it a kat
  01:28:433 - make it a don
  01:28:817 - make this one a kat too
  same as above reason
  
  01:33:048 - A hitfinish for the last note would definitley be nice here ^^ fixed
  
  Other than that, I wasn't able to find anything else ^^

Muzukashii Diff:

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• 00:36:894 - this one a don 00:37:279 - and this one the kat sounds better I think retained for pattern coherency with 00:30:741 (70,71) -
  
  00:38:817 - Consider making this one a kat aswell the beat is similar with 00:38:433 - so, d would fits better
  
  00:46:894 - The kat here sounds out of place. Maybe change it to a don instead.changed, and did some modification here
  
  00:55:164 - Here's a pattern I'm not 100% sure if it's correct what I'm about to say, but I've heard a couple of times, that you should avoid these kind of patterns in muzu diff's in longer patterns. So if that's actually the case, either keep the kat-kat-don pattern and remove 00:54:779 the don here and the kat 00:55:741 here, or get rid of the kat-kat-don pattern just to be safe.
  also did some modification in kiai section
  
  01:23:817 - Consider exchanging the kat with a don k can reflect the high pitch melody better here
  
  01:28:433 - if you make this one a don, and 01:28:817 - this one a kat I think it sounds better keep unchangedm basically same reason as ^
  
  01:33:048 - again to finish off with the last note, I recommend using a hitfinish, it's completely optional, but in my opinion it rounds it off better, and makes it clear that this is the last note ^^ fixed
  
  That's all I was able to find in the muzu diff. Not bad at all, I like your style!

1. disable "widescreen support" and delete that empty .osb file? lol
2. OPTIONAL** - you could move the background down just a bit so it looks better, you could change this in the .osu files (dont forget to do it for all diffs)
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"687474703a2f2f7075752e73682f726b4d62782f616436373132373435352e6a7067.jpg",0,68

   Now you can see her cute face better imo

1. Im not sure about easier diffs... but i think you should consider adding more breaks ?

1. 00:26:894 - move to 00:27:664 - and do the same (d k d d k d) pattern here 00:33:817 -
2. 01:32:856 - this could confuse the beginner players (i kantan and futsuu should be made thinking about the beginner players, not the "KFM mod farmers") i would suggest to delete or move it to 01:32:471 -

1. 00:43:241 - i think youre following vocal so why not make it a dkdkdkkd ? that would be add d here 00:44:010 - , 00:44:202 - k 00:44:394 - k 00:44:587 - d
2. 00:56:125 - move it to the previous red tick, to follow the same rhythm as you did at 00:54:394 - , you could also add note here 00:56:317 - then
3. 01:08:241 - same as above ^

1. 00:13:241 - no sound here (?) but its up to you keep it or delete it, im not sure, it just plays ok
2. 00:15:837 - add a d here and 00:21:991 - here
3. OPTIONAL 00:29:010 - make a ddd pattern here (00:29:010 - / 00:29:106 - / 00:29:202 - )
4. OPTIONAL2 00:34:779 - ddd here too xD (00:34:779 - / 00:34:875 - / 00:34:971 - )
5. 01:21:991 - add d here and there 01:28:144 - just like 00:15:837 -

1. 00:18:625 - change this here for an k , as these kkkk has the same sounds as the kkkk from the start of this pattern
2. 00:19:202 (4,5) - ctrl+g , 00:19:779 - change this to d 00:19:971 - and 00:20:356 - to k
   pattern should be like this:
   
   NOTE: CURSOR AT 00:19:202 -
   
3. About the next pattern.. Cursor at: 00:24:971 -
   
   it goes better this way, please note that ive added a note on the end 00:26:221 -
   
4. about the other long patterns, you could just do the same as i suggested above, but heres another way to change them
   01:24:779 - k / 01:25:933 - d / 01:26:125 - k / 01:26:414 - k and 01:26:510 - k
   
5. Cursor at: 01:31:510 -
   
   This is another suggestion for the final long pattern, it sounds exactly as the one starting at 00:23:817 -
   

-TheHateD- wrote:

Hi there

[General]

1. OPTIONAL** - you could move the background down just a bit so it looks better, you could change this in the .osu files (dont forget to do it for all diffs)
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"687474703a2f2f7075752e73682f726b4d62782f616436373132373435352e6a7067.jpg",0,69

   Now you can see her cute face better imo

Hope it helps

Surono wrote:

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dem boi

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hi, here are my opinions about Inner Oni diff.

Inner Oni

00:13:337 - Snap that interited point. it is snapped on 1/8, so if player start hit the spinner to early they still get the volume effect
00:13:433 (1) - shorthen this spinner to 00:14:106 - here and 00:14:202 - from here add four 1/4 dons not adding the 1/4 to emphasis the melody stream at next section
00:14:394 - same as 00:13:337 it is snapped on 1/2 for same reason
00:20:356 (16) - k hmm..it lacks a reason to support the use of k here. d would be more flowy imo.
00:50:548 (2,3) - maybe turn them into kats but dons are fine too, just saying that because of the high vocals i see but the base beat is same with 00:49:971 - so D is also fine
01:26:510 (59) - k same as 00:20:356

I've gotta tell you, this map is really good. Really enjoyed it when playing! Hope this helps and good luck

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

1. Okay.

1. 00:13:048 (11) - K? - I thought by looking at other diff
   
2. 00:39:202 (37) - add finisher?
   
3. spinner start 00:51:510 - ?
   
   I think that it is regular and okay.

1. delete 00:12:664 (17) - and 00:12:279 (16) - change d? - I think it would be better to keep the flow from 00:07:664 (8) -
   
2. 00:25:741 (34,35,36,37) - kddk? - I think that it would be better to unify with muzukashii
   
3. 00:28:048 (40) - move to 00:27:664 - ? - I think this break seems unnatural
   
4. 00:34:202 (50) - ^
   
5. 00:39:202 (1) - add finisher and 00:39:587 (2) - delete? - I think that more better

1. 00:45:067 (22,23) - delete? - I think that it is too difficult
   
2. 00:50:356 (43) - It is placed only in Muzukashii...If so, I think that it should be included in Oni and Inner Oni.
   
3. 01:02:471 (44) - move to 01:02:856 - and change k? - I think it will look better

1. 00:19:010 (33) - k? - I think it should be the same as 00:19:779 (38) - .
   
2. 00:19:202 (34,35,36,37) - dk kd? - I think that it fits the backsound
   
3. 00:39:202 (94) - add finisher?
   
4. 01:25:164 (33,34,35,36,37,38) - same as above.
   
   I felt that there are many where the Futsuu and the color scheme is different. Idk if that is wrong....

Aloda wrote:

Hi.

Metadata

idk if this matters but the official source is slightly different to what you have: "恋のハニトー ～えっちで甘いハニートラップ～" (See here) got it from http://albino-soft.jp/ idk either, will need help from QAT or other BN

In the tags, C,G mix should be C.G mix instead. You might also want to add the long version: "Communication Groove mix". ok

You could also add '松島詩史' (Matsushima Shifumi) and '桐島愛里' (Kirishima Airi), the vocalists for the song. ok

You should also add 'Whitesoft' for the developer's name: Whitesoft Albino. ok

I think a better Romanisation of the title would have 'Honeytrap' as one word. I'm not an expert on this though so I could be wrong. i'm not expert either. remain unchanged until found reliable source

Kantan

Not mapping to the strong sounds at 00:09:202 and 00:12:279 feels very strange to me when you've mapped to all the other similar sounds around here. I think that having 2/1 like this would be fine, even for a Kantan, since the bpm isn't that high. not entirely agree (see futsuu), but added some

In the 00:14:587 - 00:26:894 section, you've tended to use 1/1 triplets at the end of the bar, but for the most part, the start of the bar has the more prominent and interesting sounds. Mapping to the less prominent sounds like you have doesn't play well imo. I strongly suggest changing this sections so that the 1/1 triplets fall at the start of a bar whenever it's appropriate. For the 5 note pattern at 00:19:202, you could remove 00:19:587 (10) then have a 1/1 triplet at 00:20:741, so the pattern continues into the next bar. no change, the 5-plet is to emphasize the main melody

00:26:894 - 00:39:202 plays very strangely. Having some bars mapped as 4/1 and some as 2/1 feels really weird to me, since there's no real significant difference between them in the song to justify such a huge difference in density. I think you need to commit to using one beat spacing here throughout the section. not strange to me

I don't think there are any sounds to justify using a pattern like 00:43:048 (42,43,44) here, especially when there's a really nice vocal sound following it that you've completely ignored. I think you'd be best off leaving this as 2/1 then using the triplet in the next bar to match the nice vocal sounds. then it won't have 4/1 break which is essential for kantan player

Same kind of thing for 00:49:202 (50,51,52), but here I'd suggest just leaving this whole phrase as 2/1. nope

I suggest removing 01:19:202 (24,25) and adding a note at 01:18:433. I think this matches the vocals a little better and improves the flow if you apply my suggestions to the following section. that sounds weird imo.

01:20:741 - 01:33:048 same as 00:14:587 - 00:26:894. same then

Futsuu

I have the same issue with the intro as I did with 00:09:202 and 00:12:279 in the Kantan. There's no reason not to map to the sounds at 00:01:510 and 00:04:587. there is a reason. the intro is relatively calm so lower density would help reflect it better.

For the same reason, I suggest adding a note at 00:09:587. nope

The gaps you've left at 00:18:048 and 00:24:202 feel really weird to me. These are two of the more intense parts of this section in the music so leaving them unmapped isn't good. Consider adding notes at these timings. no, it's more suitable as futsuu imo

In 00:26:894 - 00:39:202 you seem to be sort-of mapping to the vocals? The structure seems a little strange to me, particularly with the larger gaps that aren't reflected in the music. I think you'd benefit from mapping more closely to the vocals here. the section is relatively calm, so not necessarily follow every vocal since it will be too dense

How about adding notes at 00:41:125 and 00:47:279 then removing 00:40:356 (4) and 00:46:510 (19)? I think that having the breaks on the 3rd beat of the bar plays a lot better. hmm.. rearranged a bit.

The sounds that you're mapping 00:51:894 (1,2,3,4) to start at 00:51:702, so not having a note here feels weird. Consider adding one here. i think simple rhythm is better for futsuu player

Similarly, 01:17:279 (79,80,81) is mapped to the vocals (I think), so not having a note at 01:16:894 feels weird. Again, consider adding a note here. since the kiai is more dense, i'd like to make longer break here, so no change

01:24:202 and 01:30:356 - same as 00:18:048 and 00:24:202. same

Muzukashii

The 2/1 gaps that you've left in the 00:26:894 - 00:39:202 section kind of ruin the flow here. Compare 00:26:894 (61,62,63,64) to 00:28:433 (64,65,66,67,68,69). There's very little difference in the music between the two, yet you've mapped the latter to be much more intense. I'm not saying you should match that intensity, but I think you should add notes in the 2/1 gaps to make 1/1 to improve the flow of the section. structurally not a problem. the previous section is hard so make 2/1 gap is needed.

Maybe add a note at 01:16:894 to match the vocals? I get that you're mapping to the music here, but I think this plays a little strangely without the note. It's not really a big issue though.retained for better spread with oni

Oni

Change 00:31:894 (60,61,62) to 1/2? This triplet isn't here in the Inner Oni, and having this as the only 1/4 pattern in this section before the transition into the next section feels strange. ok

Inner Oni

A lot of the 1/4 patterns you've used from 00:26:894 - 00:37:664 feel really forced to me. In particular, 00:32:279 (19,20,21) and 00:34:395 (30,31,32) feel really weird to me, though the others also feel a little strange. I would suggest changing most, if not all of these 1/4 patterns to 1/2. some is rearranged

Consider changing all triplets from 00:40:548 - 00:43:048 to start half a beat later (move 00:40:644 (36) to 00:40:837 etc). The way you have it doesn't quite seem to fit with the music imo. I think this way plays a little better. current placement plays well too imo

For the same reason, I think you could change 00:46:510 (73,74,75) to start half a beat earlier. no change

gl with the map

chaica wrote:

Hi,from my quoue

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]

1. Okay.

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[ Kantan]

1. 00:13:048 (11) - K? - I thought by looking at other diff fixed
   
2. 00:39:202 (37) - add finisher? hmm note is not very strong here imo
   
3. spinner start 00:51:510 - ? will reconsider again. i think is fine
   
   I think that it is regular and okay.

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[ Futsuu]

1. delete 00:12:664 (17) - and 00:12:279 (16) - change d? - I think it would be better to keep the flow from 00:07:664 (8) - fixed
   
2. 00:25:741 (34,35,36,37) - kddk? - I think that it would be better to unify with muzukashii fixed
   
3. 00:28:048 (40) - move to 00:27:664 - ? - I think this break seems unnatural i think is better to give longer break here
   
4. 00:34:202 (50) - ^ ^
   
5. 00:39:202 (1) - add finisher and 00:39:587 (2) - delete? - I think that more better same as kantan

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[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:45:067 (22,23) - delete? - I think that it is too difficult ok
   
2. 00:50:356 (43) - It is placed only in Muzukashii...If so, I think that it should be included in Oni and Inner Oni. fixed
   
3. 01:02:471 (44) - move to 01:02:856 - and change k? - I think it will look better fixed

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[ Oni]

1. 00:19:010 (33) - k? - I think it should be the same as 00:19:779 (38) - . d is better because pitch is relatively lower
   
2. 00:19:202 (34,35,36,37) - dk kd? - I think that it fits the backsound fixed
   
3. 00:39:202 (94) - add finisher? no
   
4. 01:25:164 (33,34,35,36,37,38) - same as above. fixed
   
   I felt that there are many where the Futsuu and the color scheme is different. Idk if that is wrong....

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Nice eroge song.good luck~/

Chromoxx wrote:

ayy m4m.... (gohan for best of 2016 pls )

[Kantan]
basically the diff has a major problem (that probably won't take long to fix though lol)
patterns like 00:14:587 - are too hard for a kantan, not only are they already a pretty long 1/2 chain, but they are also using many triplets and even 5plets. I'd reccomend not using 5plets at all in this diff and maybe adding some more 4/1 breaks in also

hmm i think is not a huge problem to have 2 or 3 5-plets, since bpm is not fast and it's a kiai section. but i applied your suggestion to make it friendlier for newbie

[Futsuu]
again here i'd reccomend not using 5plets, pattern length is okay for the most part though imo
make some changes

[Muzukashii]
00:00:741 - to 00:06:894 - is the same density as the oni. i'd maybe remove something there
looks okay to me tbh. The muzu isn't using any particularly hard patterns that would call for Kantan and Futsuu being as hard as they are also btw, so i would definitely reccomend nerfing them
removed 00:04:587 -

[Oni]
00:16:125 (11,12,13,14,15) - i'd suggest having this as k dk kd instead, since it sounds better and also offers some good variation to 00:19:202 (34,35,36,37) -
00:22:279 (11,12,13,14,15) - ^
01:22:279 (11,12,13,14,15) - ^
01:28:433 (11,12,13,14,15) - ^
the things i suggested here also work as they are now, so this is just a reccomendation on my part based on personal preference

hmm i prefer current pattern


[Inner Oni]
looks good tbh

call me back once the kantan and futsuu stuff is fixed :3