00:03:680 (3680|2) - for the SV chunk here, it doesn't really tally to an average SV of 1.0
which is ideal for sightreading for most cases, though it plays fine on the surface, I believe you can fine tune this:
(0.1 * 1 + 1.2 * 3)/4 = 0.925 which is the average SV here, so I'd recommend putting the first value to be 0.4 in order to result this in a 1.0 average SV
*Note: 0.01x SV isn't actually 0.01, it's 0.1... >_> i have no idea why they introduced a value that doesn't work at all
and this applies to any similar SVs
00:04:707 (4707|3,4913|3) - similar case here, you either need to pair the SVs up like 1.4,0.6 or 1.1,0.9 to average to 1.0
00:10:461 (10461|1,10563|1) - while this deviates from 1.0 slightly, you can still match it up to 1.0 average SV perfectly by inputting 1.25,0.75 or 1.30,0.7
00:18:269 (18269|3,18320|2,18372|1,18423|0,18474|3,18526|2,18577|1,18628|0,18680|3,18731|2,18783|1,18834|0,18885|3,18937|2,18988|1,19039|0,19091|3,19142|2,19194|1,19245|0,19296|3,19348|2,19399|1,19450|0,19502|3,19553|2,19604|1,19656|0,19707|3,19759|2,19810|1,19861|0) - this pattern feels very "monotone", doesn't really match the increasing pitch of the music imo, I believe you can stair to the right at midpoint and/or increase the difficulty as it progresses through this whole pattern, a slightly harder pattern but not too gay of a pattern would be something like:
124312312432431231234 and so on, notice how there's a triplet in the streams instead of the usual/common doublet stairs (124312431243) or just a quad stair (123412341234)
00:34:707 (34707|2) - not too sure why the 1.4x SV lies on the 1/8 snap there, think it'd make more sense if snaps to 1/2 for the vocals and shit (not really picking on the average SV here since I
assume that players will
assume this is a 1/1 since i
assumed it's a 1/1 while sightreading)
00:21:557 (21557|2) - Not sure if you've noticed but you use a lot of right hand minijacks/jacks as compared to the leftie, you might want to shift some over if possible
00:43:132 (43132|0,43166|1,43200|2,43235|3,43269|0,43303|1,43337|3,43337|2,43440|1,43543|3,43577|2,43611|1,43646|0,43680|3,43714|2,43748|1) - Think that the second set of bursts here can be of a lower snap than that of the first, you can probably do a 1/8 4 3 2 4 {13} pattern for the 2nd set
00:47:447 (47447|1) - not too sure why you "offset"-ed the SVs early by 1/4, also, you might want to use 1.8,0.2 or 1.6,0.4 if you'd like to keep it average on 1.0
00:47:858 (47858|1) - quite confused on jack usage here, 00:50:015 (50015|0,50118|0,50426|3,50529|3) - not too sure what these go to and they don't seem to be consistent in patterning specifically for jacks. Would recommend to use these 00:48:063 (48063|1,48166|0,48372|1,48474|0,48885|2,48988|1,49194|0,49296|1,49399|2) - if you want to jack notes (and all similar sounds), you can opt to do a 3-note jack but it might be a bit too hard, not too sure
00:54:433 (54433|1) - same here, i'm not entirely certain on what is the pattern on jacks here
01:01:009 (61009|1) - pretty sweet, though i'd recommend to shift this 01:01:146 (61146|2) - to the left by 1 column so as to not "chain" with the previous jack
01:10:923 (70923|2,70974|3,71026|0,71077|1,71128|3,71180|2,71231|0,71283|1,71334|3,71385|2,71437|0,71488|1,71539|3,71591|2,71642|0,71694|1,71745|3,71796|2,71848|0,71899|1,71950|3,72002|2,72053|0,72104|1,72156|3,72207|2,72259|0,72310|1,72361|3,72413|2,72464|0) - similar suggestion as before, think it'd be better if you increase the difficulty here or at least change stair direction midway (players who play it legitly will get lost in the rhythm quite easily as the pattern is the same throughout, changing the pattern slightly will give them "rhythm" cues which helps them play better)
01:14:159 (74159|0) - Think you can do a miniLN for this bass
01:14:878 (74878|3) - this should also be a miniLN for the bass guitar as the bass guitar rhythm pairs both notes 01:14:878 (74878|3,75084|1) - together as a swing rhythm
01:15:700 (75700|2) - think this should be a miniLN too as the bass guitar seems be plucked loudly here
01:16:522 (76522|2,76728|0) - these should be on the same column for pitch relevancy
01:16:933 (76933|3,77036|1) - the second note here should be to the right of the first note for pitch relevancy
01:17:447 (77447|3,77858|3) - having these 2 in the same column is quite weird, move the first one to the left
01:18:372 (78372|1,78474|0) - I do believe this guitar here is split into 2 1/4s here and make this pitch relevant
01:18:988 (78988|2,79091|3) - Should miniLN for the guitar
01:20:735 (80735|3,80735|2,80837|1,80837|0,80940|2,80940|3) - Not too sure why these are 2 notes..?
01:21:813 (81813|2) - this is a ghost note btw, so you might want to repattern this, not too sure why is there a minijack there
01:26:488 - Think you can add a 1.1x SV here just to enter the intro of the chorus more aggressively as compared to a normal 1.0
01:38:817 - i'm not too sure what is the structure of the SVs here, I find reading the 1/4 jack there a bit awkward because of how you distorted the first 1/2 rhythm in which makes me assume that everything here is a snap of 1/2 but the 1/4 jack caught me offguard, would just suggest to use a set of SVs here which average out to 1.0 01:39:074 - i'm not even sure how you got a 1/8 snapped SV here out of no where
01:43:954 (103954|3,104057|2) - this should jack according to 01:30:803 (90803|1,90906|1) -
01:51:762 (111762|1,111762|0,111762|2) - not sure why is this a 3note chord when there is nothing to emphasize
while playability is kind of ok, i just felt that the layering and SVs just needs polishing in general
a bit too tired to look through other stuff >_> probably will do that whenever i feel guilty of not modding everything
by Rivals_7, 
by KamikazeJulie.
gl~
