1. Hard (2,43 stars, 407 notes)
2. Normal (1,47 stars, 250 notes)

1. On Normal difficult ; Better uncheck widescreen support, since this map don't have storyboard on it and Hard diff not check widescreen too.
2. Better add 'ed / ending & full version' on tags since this song is ending song of CLANMADNAD
3. 14mb+ memory space without video on it? It's okay.. I think

1. 00:21:241 (3,4) - Better not stack this one?
2. 00:29:041 (1,2) - Check DS over here.. (0,9 right? don't use grid there)
3. 00:43:441 (1,2) - You can make this straight with move last point on 00:43:441 (1) - to x:276
4. 01:00:841 (5) - If you made this straight with 01:02:641 (1) - will be better, but that's already on corner I have no idea
5. 01:07:441 (1) - Better move last point to 220|84
6. 01:15:841 (5,1) - Swap NC?
7. 01:16:441 (6,1) - Check DS over here..
8. 01:52:741 (2,3) - This one overlap
9. 02:43:441 (1,2) - Better made this one flow like you made on 02:44:341 (2,3,4) -
10. 02:59:341 (3,4) - Better make this blanket than before
11. 03:26:641 (1) - Maybe move to 305|107 with better straighten with 03:26:041 (6) -
12. 03:52:741 (2,1) - This so confused for newbie player, yea DS changing soo hard
13. 03:52:741 (2,2) - This one overlap
14. 04:08:641 (2) - Better change this one to whistle instead than finish like you do on 00:07:441 (3) -

1. 00:17:191 - 00:18:541 - Better remove this break point
2. 00:16:441 (4) - NC there, it's same like 00:06:841 (1) -
3. 00:44:041 (3,1) - Improve this blanket
4. 01:51:841 (1,1) - It can be stack
5. 03:02:641 (1,2) - Improve this blanket
6. 03:33:541 (3,1) - It can be stack
7. 03:41:041 (1,2) - Improve this blanket
8. 03:52:741 (2,1) - Better made this small jump before change from beat to vocal.
9. 04:09:241 (5) - NC this one
10. 04:28:441 (4) - ^

• 00:37:441 (5) - how about put it down from 4? cuz u use a falling tone hitsound here so put it down would be better imo
  00:56:641 (5) - ^
  01:39:241 (5) - seems quite near to 01:40:741 (6) - . ds problem or u mean to?
  02:41:641 (6) - ^
  01:55:441 - isnt that 30s break a little bit too long? maybe u want players to enjoy the music here but imo there is also many mapable(hearable) piano sounds there so ignore them may not that suitable
  04:05:041 (3) - blanket seems quite well with 2 and 4
  04:24:241 (3) - ^ a little bit in with 2

• 00:17:041 - why a break here......
  01:55:441 - same problem with normal
  03:53:041 (1) - i recommand to not use a pattern that cross the kiai time and non-kiai time, try to separate them would be better imo
  03:54:241 (4) - nc should be here i think
  04:04:441 (1,2) - how about make a blanket here?

[ Arika ] wrote:

#modreqs

Halo kak, Dango Dango Dango nya Full Version yaa..

General

1. On Normal difficult ; Better uncheck widescreen support, since this map don't have storyboard on it and Hard diff not check widescreen too.
2. Better add 'ed / ending & full version' on tags since this song is ending song of CLANMADNAD
3. 14mb+ memory space without video on it? It's okay.. I think It's okay

Normal

1. 00:21:241 (3,4) - Better not stack this one? I'll get more opinion on this one
2. 00:29:041 (1,2) - Check DS over here.. (0,9 right? don't use grid there)
3. 00:43:441 (1,2) - You can make this straight with move last point on 00:43:441 (1) - to x:276
4. 01:00:841 (5) - If you made this straight with 01:02:641 (1) - will be better, but that's already on corner I have no idea it has straight flow from the previous notes
5. 01:07:441 (1) - Better move last point to 220|84 same ^
6. 01:15:841 (5,1) - Swap NC? No because of SV change
7. 01:16:441 (6,1) - Check DS over here.. Yes, It's intentional
8. 01:52:741 (2,3) - This one overlap
9. 02:43:441 (1,2) - Better made this one flow like you made on 02:44:341 (2,3,4) - No, I like it lol
10. 02:59:341 (3,4) - Better make this blanket than before If I blanket those, the next 1/1 slider will create an overlap
11. 03:26:641 (1) - Maybe move to 305|107 with better straighten with 03:26:041 (6) -
12. 03:52:741 (2,1) - This so confused for newbie player, yea DS changing soo hard
13. 03:52:741 (2,2) - This one overlap
14. 04:08:641 (2) - Better change this one to whistle instead than finish like you do on 00:07:441 (3) - They have different sound, finish usage is correct on this one

I don't want check all hitsound, but the hitsound looks good but not good at all, need improve that.

Hard

1. 00:17:191 - 00:18:541 - Better remove this break point
2. 00:16:441 (4) - NC there, it's same like 00:06:841 (1) - I'll think about the NC's
3. 00:44:041 (3,1) - Improve this blanket
4. 01:51:841 (1,1) - It can be stack
5. 03:02:641 (1,2) - Improve this blanket
6. 03:33:541 (3,1) - It can be stack
7. 03:41:041 (1,2) - Improve this blanket
8. 03:52:741 (2,1) - Better made this small jump before change from beat to vocal.
9. 04:09:241 (5) - NC this one
10. 04:28:441 (4) - ^

That's all I can mod, actually Hard is really nice pattern.. Find 2 or 3 modder then you can make this going to rank.. ( ' ' )( ' ' )
Good Luck Dango! ~

Neanmoins wrote:

hey from ur mod q~
my map:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502077

Normal

• 00:37:441 (5) - how about put it down from 4? cuz u use a falling tone hitsound here so put it down would be better imo That's actually a good idea, but I want to make it consistent with Hard diff
  00:56:641 (5) - ^
  01:39:241 (5) - seems quite near to 01:40:741 (6) - . ds problem or u mean to?
  02:41:641 (6) - ^
  01:55:441 - isnt that 30s break a little bit too long? maybe u want players to enjoy the music here but imo there is also many mapable(hearable) piano sounds there so ignore them may not that suitable I want to map to the Glockenspiel's sound, so thats that lol
  04:05:041 (3) - blanket seems quite well with 2 and 4
  04:24:241 (3) - ^ a little bit in with 2

Hard

• 00:17:041 - why a break here......
  01:55:441 - same problem with normal
  03:53:041 (1) - i recommand to not use a pattern that cross the kiai time and non-kiai time, try to separate them would be better imo I'll try to change it
  03:54:241 (4) - nc should be here i think I put NC where DS change happen
  04:04:441 (1,2) - how about make a blanket here? umm where? xD Btw, I liked it the way its now lol

thats all! gl for rank~
amazing work on hitsounds!!! Thank you!!

Lilyanna wrote:

Hey nm from my modding kyu

Normal

00:08:041 (4) - maybe ctrl-j and ctrl h move to x440 y104 for the same flow u had here is better imo
00:14:641 (1,2,3) -
00:36:241 (4,5,1) - maybe avoid such stacks Actually, I want to keep it the same with Hard diff
00:39:241 (2,3) - can blanket
01:48:241 (5,6,1,2,3) - spacing unconsistency it from 0.9 to 0.8 also 1.0 Somewhat fixed
also im not sure about the sv change since u dont even have easy difficulty i think its better be avoided well, I'll get more opinions about that
03:30:241 (6) - this look so out of the grid but not sure maybe its fine just wanted point it out anyway haha That's within the playfield even with 4:3 orientation, so thats no problem

Hard

00:17:041 (6) - nc downbeat
00:37:441 (1) - remove nc not rly needed
00:56:641 (1) - ^
01:43:441 (5,1) - swap the nc on downbeat (5)
01:51:841 (1,2,3) - can use more polish maybe make these 01:52:741 (2,3) - symmetry
02:45:841 (5,1) - nc on 5
02:53:041 (5,1) - ^ stay consistnt on every downbeat
03:02:641 (1,2) - blanket can be better
04:09:841 (7) - nc
04:29:041 (6) - nc^ there other nc fixing i didnt mention
the start seem too repetative.
I'll rethink the NCing, other than that, everything's fixed

hope i helped l, good luck! x)

William K wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue :3

[Hard]

1. 00:02:041 (1) - The hitsound here sounds to be interrupted or something else. It feels like the sound volume is getting lower. I don't know how to fix this though, maybe just make the volume to 45% or something else would help.
2. 00:11:641 (1) - same ^
3. 00:42:241 (3,4) - I don't know why the spacing of this feels uneven to 00:41:641 (2,3) - even though the spacings are both 1.20x. But I think it's okay.
4. 00:50:041 (1,2) - This feels untidy, how about blanketing it with 00:50:041 (1) - ? Not exactly blanketing, but I made it tidier
5. 01:18:241 - Actually you pass a pretty important note here in order to follow the vocals. In my opinion, 01:53:641 (3) - is a bit inconsistent since you mainly don't follow vocals in this diff. Consider deleting this slider to make it consistent with the others like 03:15:241 - . Yes, i'm aware that I'm ignoreing a significant sound in there, but I want to consistently mapping to the Glockenspiel (or Kulintang) sound throughout the map, just like what the hitsound is trying to copy. And about the before break time part, It just doesn't feel right to just leave it unmapped, so I put another slider there
6. 01:17:041 - You may put kiai here if you want until 01:54:241 - imo, this part is not "strong" enough to put kiai time
7. 01:55:441 - 02:37:441 - This break is about 40 seconds long lol. Consider shortening it into 20 seconds at least. there's no Glockenspiel sound in this part, and thats that lol
8. 02:37:441 (1,2,3,4) - This's too hard to press for hard players, and it's so sudden. How about making another pattern. If you want to have the note intensity up, you may make the spacing a bit higher with another pattern, 1.15x, 1.20x, 1.30x. I think 1.40x is too high XD Umm, I think this is fine since this is a hard difficulty, and not a Normal. I'll consider it however

I don't have anything to say about the flow since most of them is fine :3 Good luck~

1. Personal preference: Why not add 古河渚 (Furukawa Nagisa) 岡崎渚(Okazaki Nagisa) 岡崎汐(Okazaki Ushio) into tags? This melody is from their theme songs.
2. soft-hitclap.wav, normal-hitwhistle2.wav have delay above 5 ms, please cut the file to make sure that they fit the requirement of RC(Ranking Criteria).
3. Your current silent files are not standard one used in RC, please check that and use the required one in RC. Here is the link: RC silent file

1. Structrual Issue
   Hitsound volume side I have the same opionion as your hard difficulty. You can refer to my mod in hard diff.
   01:53:641 (3,1) - Please refer to Hard diff you see my solution and reason for the notes here. I don't think the hitound here would be fit into this system.

1. Structrual Issue
   Due to the special hitsound work, this set of hitsound can and can only build the intensity of the melody by volume. So you may need more work on this. You may refer to happy30's mapset, but I'll provide my own solution.
   00:00:241 - Timing point setting is not the same as the inherited ones. Should be N:C1, volume I would like to see it becomes lower. Since here the vocal is so pure, why not using really low volume like 10%? And from 00:19:441 on, use 20% since it's still weak.
   00:21:241 - Points like this personally I am fine to leave it as the same a other places in the same part. But if you want you can make it stronger to emphasize the strong sound. 27% will be fine. Similar places are listed here:
   SPOILER

   00:30:841 - 00:40:441 - 00:50:641 -
   00:37:441 - Here since the volume is weaken to get a transition, you can actually put it to 10%
   00:38:641 - Then here make a come back at 20% to resume the same part as before. Until here at 00:55:441 .
   00:56:641 - Here we can become a little bit weaker at 15% to make it easier to get to the stong part.
   00:57:841 - Here I agree with your current setting as 35%
   01:05:641 - Suggestion on putting a timing point to make it weaker to 20% since actually the background music is not consistent with the hitsound. And this slider is for transitioning between 2 sentences.
   01:14:641 (1,2,3,4) - For these 4 notes, as the same reason as above, suggesting to make them 20%.
   01:17:041 - From here on I agree with your 45% setting.
   01:30:241 - And from here to 01:34:141 - I suggest making them weaker to make the next sentence more strong. 35% would be fine.
   01:53:641 (3) - Based on this hitsound system, I really disagree with self-created rhythm here. 01:54:241 - you can add a note here, but making this slider will be too much for this place.
   01:55:441 - And to be consistent, I would suggest you using the hitsound set rather than original one. The sound should be S:C1 Whistle, and you can make it a bit stronger to 50% or so.
   02:37:441 - This place is too strong and personally I'd suggest a 45%, then make the latter part from 02:38:641 to 55%.
   03:53:041 - Until here, you can make a transition to the post-kiai part at around 35%, which is your current setting.
   03:55:441 - And here since the sound from kiai completely fades, you can make it weaker to 20% until the end.
2. Minor Picks
   00:51:241 (2) - 04:05:641 (2) - Personally I would make it a blanket.
   SPOILER

   
   01:05:641 (4) - I would make this slider a bit special and looks better.
   SPOILER

   
   01:41:041 (1,2) - And for this pattern I'll make the arc more consistent to get a better look. 01:39:241 (3) - And considering this will also stack, I have this solution here for making both pattern tidier.
   SPOILER

   
   02:55:141 (3) - You can make this slider look more balanced and more consistent with the previous one.
   SPOILER

   
   03:21:841 (1,2) - To make this Symmetry you can try this:
   SPOILER

   (1 stack with 5)
   04:12:241 - If you want, you can make this part even weaker to get the vocal more pure. Volume can be 15%.

1. Check normal-whistle2.wav. It has delay longer than 5ms.
2. Can not use Slidertick rate 0.5. It is unrankable because of not changing in osu! editor.

1. I don't recommend to change slider velocities in lower diffs, but nice mapset, imo.
2. 00:37:441 (5) - NC is much better, imo because only one NC can not be distinguished in low diff.
3. 01:40:741 (6) - auto stack makes weird placement. I suggest if you can, stack slider moves even farther than before, imo.
4. 02:43:141 (7,1) - Same as above opinion.

1. 02:37:441 (1,2,3,4) - only different spacing in these patterns. Why? is that really emphasis of rhythms after break time? I hope to change consistent difference.

Atrue wrote:

[General]

1. Personal preference: Why not add 古河渚 (Furukawa Nagisa) 岡崎渚(Okazaki Nagisa) 岡崎汐(Okazaki Ushio) into tags? This melody is from their theme songs.
2. soft-hitclap.wav, normal-hitwhistle2.wav have delay above 5 ms, please cut the file to make sure that they fit the requirement of RC(Ranking Criteria).
3. Your current silent files are not standard one used in RC, please check that and use the required one in RC. Here is the link: RC silent file

all fix

[Normal]

1. Structrual Issue
   Hitsound volume side I have the same opionion as your hard difficulty. You can refer to my mod in hard diff.
   01:53:641 (3,1) - Please refer to Hard diff you see my solution and reason for the notes here. I don't think the hitound here would be fit into this system.

[Hard]

1. Structrual Issue
   Due to the special hitsound work, this set of hitsound can and can only build the intensity of the melody by volume. So you may need more work on this. You may refer to happy30's mapset, but I'll provide my own solution. I think I will answer all of it here instead. There're some that i changed, but there're some that I don't. Firstly, the hitsound volume on the begining part, I really think that 10% volume is waaay to quiet to provide "enough" feedback for players (same thing with 20%). Instead, i just reduced the aformentioned part with 30% and 35% hitsound volume. I also increase the HS volume in some places by 10% compared to the previous hs volume on parts that have "background sound" way louder than the HS itself. In the last part, I gradually reduced the HS by 5 percent, with the very last part ended up with 20% hs volume. I hope you get the idea because I will not reply to every line that I didn't change, because the reasoning is always be the same. I will only respond to points that I didn't cover here tl;dr, I changed the most of the hs, but not exactly as you suggested
   00:00:241 - Timing point setting is not the same as the inherited ones. Should be N:C1, volume I would like to see it becomes lower. Since here the vocal is so pure, why not using really low volume like 10%? And from 00:19:441 on, use 20% since it's still weak.
   00:21:241 - Points like this personally I am fine to leave it as the same a other places in the same part. But if you want you can make it stronger to emphasize the strong sound. 27% will be fine. Similar places are listed here:
   SPOILER

   00:30:841 - 00:40:441 - 00:50:641 -
   00:37:441 - Here since the volume is weaken to get a transition, you can actually put it to 10%
   00:38:641 - Then here make a come back at 20% to resume the same part as before. Until here at 00:55:441 .
   00:56:641 - Here we can become a little bit weaker at 15% to make it easier to get to the stong part.
   00:57:841 - Here I agree with your current setting as 35%
   01:05:641 - Suggestion on putting a timing point to make it weaker to 20% since actually the background music is not consistent with the hitsound. And this slider is for transitioning between 2 sentences.
   01:14:641 (1,2,3,4) - For these 4 notes, as the same reason as above, suggesting to make them 20%.
   01:17:041 - From here on I agree with your 45% setting.
   01:30:241 - And from here to 01:34:141 - I suggest making them weaker to make the next sentence more strong. 35% would be fine.
   01:53:641 (3) - Based on this hitsound system, I really disagree with self-created rhythm here. 01:54:241 - you can add a note here, but making this slider will be too much for this place. removed the third slider
   01:55:441 - And to be consistent, I would suggest you using the hitsound set rather than original one. The sound should be S:C1 Whistle, and you can make it a bit stronger to 50% or so. I don't think there're a sampleset form my hitsound that will cover this sound "correctly". The sound here is different to the instrument that being played throughout the map, so I put those hs intead to emphasize the (?) percussion (?) sound
   02:37:441 - This place is too strong and personally I'd suggest a 45%, then make the latter part from 02:38:641 to 55%.
   03:53:041 - Until here, you can make a transition to the post-kiai part at around 35%, which is your current setting.
   03:55:441 - And here since the sound from kiai completely fades, you can make it weaker to 20% until the end.
2. Minor Picks
   00:51:241 (2) - 04:05:641 (2) - Personally I would make it a blanket. Not a blanket, but I changed it a bit
   SPOILER

   
   01:05:641 (4) - I would make this slider a bit special and looks better.
   SPOILER

   
   01:41:041 (1,2) - And for this pattern I'll make the arc more consistent to get a better look. 01:39:241 (3) - And considering this will also stack, I have this solution here for making both pattern tidier. I prefer mine ;;
   SPOILER

   
   02:55:141 (3) - You can make this slider look more balanced and more consistent with the previous one.
   SPOILER

   
   03:21:841 (1,2) - To make this Symmetry you can try this: I like mine better
   SPOILER

   (1 stack with 5)
   04:12:241 - If you want, you can make this part even weaker to get the vocal more pure. Volume can be 15%.

Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you! Star for the song and good luck! Thank you very much!

Kalibe wrote:

hmm, slidertick rate 0.5 is rather unrankable, cuz it got changed from .osu not editor tho. I thought the RC says that you can't edit anything on the .osu files, if they can be changed through the editor? Isn't the way I doing it is the similar like changing the slider velocity to <0.5x (?) Anyway, I need more clarification on this before changing it

Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
normal-hitwhistle2.wav

[normal]
- 00:27:241 (4) - this sounds soo similar like 00:35:641 (3,4) - so why just don't split slider with 2 circles? They sound's kinda different to me, the one with a slider has sound of "hold" vocal much stronger than the other
- 01:19:441 (4,5) - little spacing error, i see u trying to make a blanket with 01:19:441 (4) - but still looks kinda off in my eyes. how about this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6184923 I like mine more to be honest, but I tidied it up a little bit
- 01:37:741 (3,5) - really minor about aesthetic, maybe try to rearrange 01:37:741 (3) - to get a curve that fits with 01:39:241 (5) - nicely? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6184970 I want to put a straight slider there lol, that will makes movement from previous and to the next object looks more flowy
- 03:23:341 (3,4) - 03:42:541 (3,4) - Maybe instead of two sliders -> one slider 1/2 repeater + circle on downbeat? Sounds much better.
- 03:45:841 (1,2) - little spacing error too (0.96) easy to fix.
- 03:52:741 (2,1) - don't like this rhythm, u skipping very loud beat 03:52:741 (2) - by sliderend ;w; // try this instead? http://puu.sh/ropUO/24c7c7d948.jpg They have different SV, that will make it kinda confusing to read I'm afraid

[hard]
- 00:03:241 (2,3) - from personal suggestions: maybe instead of doing linear flow try to move 00:03:841 (3) - on 233/333? Plays pretty well though, also overlap isn't visible in gameplay. I just switched the position of 2 and 3 instead
- visually 01:51:841 (1,2,3,1) - this would be looks neater if you move 01:55:441 (1) - around 156/228 to get center point of 01:51:841 (1,2,3) - pattern. I changed this rhythm
- 03:52:741 (2,1) - can you keep the spacing as you have in 03:51:841 (1,2) - ? SV change lol

that's all. good map :3 Thank!

W h i t e wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry I'm late!

[General]

1. Check normal-whistle2.wav. It has delay longer than 5ms.
2. Can not use Slidertick rate 0.5. It is unrankable because of not changing in osu! editor. I thought the RC says that you can't edit anything on the .osu files, if they can be changed through the editor? Isn't the way I doing it is the similar like changing the slider velocity to <0.5x (?) Anyway, I need more clarification on this before changing it

[Normal]

1. I don't recommend to change slider velocities in lower diffs, but nice mapset, imo.
2. 00:37:441 (5) - NC is much better, imo because only one NC can not be distinguished in low diff.
3. 01:40:741 (6) - auto stack makes weird placement. I suggest if you can, stack slider moves even farther than before, imo. Aaa, i don't want to change the pattern on this, so I guess there's not much that I can do
4. 02:43:141 (7,1) - Same as above opinion. same

[Hard]

1. 02:37:441 (1,2,3,4) - only different spacing in these patterns. Why? is that really emphasis of rhythms after break time? I hope to change consistent difference.

great mapset! I hope it will be ranked. Thanks!

Good Luck

1. i don't think 0.5x slidertick is fine cus
   

   RC wrote:

   Do not manually edit anything in an .osu file that cannot be changed through the Editor. The only exceptions are .osu-specific storyboards, slider velocity multipliers and skin-related options such as SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride.

1. 01:40:741 (6,1) - beware of the auto stack , it rip the pattern 01:39:241 (5,6,1) - here in game lol
2. 02:41:641 (6,7,1) - same
3. 03:52:741 (2,1) - i find this rhythm make a bit better transition than the current one , the current one is feel a bit weird and awkward cus you end 03:52:741 (2) - on emphasized red tick
   SPOILER

   
   
   not sure if the spacing change is good for new player or not , is it possible to make it suitable for beginner by using the same sv spacing for all notes ?

1. 00:14:941 (2,3) - 00:16:441 (4,5,6) - 01:16:741 (4,1) - 02:38:341 (4,1) - 04:26:941 (2,3) - spacing error
2. 04:07:441 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the rhythm here a bit consistent with 04:26:641 (1,2,3) - would make thing looks more solid imo
3. 03:52:741 (2,1) - mmm atleast i think if you still keep using previous spacing on this it would make great trantition to the next notes
4. 02:38:341 (4,1) - 01:16:741 (4,1) - same asme

CelsiusLK wrote:

[general]

1. i don't think 0.5x slidertick is fine cus Oh, I must've misunderstood that rule when I read it the first time. Changed slidertick to 1
   

   RC wrote:

   Do not manually edit anything in an .osu file that cannot be changed through the Editor. The only exceptions are .osu-specific storyboards, slider velocity multipliers and skin-related options such as SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride.

[normal]

1. 01:40:741 (6,1) - beware of the auto stack , it rip the pattern 01:39:241 (5,6,1) - here in game lol lol, W h i t e said the same thing earlier so I guess I'll change it
2. 02:41:641 (6,7,1) - same yea
3. 03:52:741 (2,1) - i find this rhythm make a bit better transition than the current one , the current one is feel a bit weird and awkward cus you end 03:52:741 (2) - on emphasized red tick Kay
   SPOILER

   
   
   not sure if the spacing change is good for new player or not , is it possible to make it suitable for beginner by using the same sv spacing for all notes ? Uh alright, I'm a bit worried about that tbh. I guess it's time to change it!

[hard]

1. 00:14:941 (2,3) - 00:16:441 (4,5,6) - 01:16:741 (4,1) - 02:38:341 (4,1) - 04:26:941 (2,3) - spacing error Fixed But 01:16:741 (4,1) - and 02:38:341 (4,1) - is intentional because I want to keep the previous spacing as a transition
2. 04:07:441 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the rhythm here a bit consistent with 04:26:641 (1,2,3) - would make thing looks more solid imo ok
3. 03:52:741 (2,1) - mmm atleast i think if you still keep using previous spacing on this it would make great trantition to the next notes ok
4. 02:38:341 (4,1) - 01:16:741 (4,1) - same asme same what? lol I keep using the previous spacing here

CelsiusLK wrote:

do you have any official metadata ?

1. If you already included "Maeda Jun", you could maybe include his real name: 麻枝准 as he's quite an important person regarding the song and the anime/visual novel. You could include たくまる (Takumaru) for arrangement of the song as well, though probably not as important as Jun's name. You might see they all are listed on the CD case for example.
2. I have few problems with hitsounds that should be addressed, applies to both Normal and Hard difficulty:
   
   1. All hitnormal hitsounds are muted. I do realize what is the intention of these keysounds, but not having hitnormal support was not supposed to be allowed in the first place. The feedback is not so good if it follows music with almost identical sounds. There is quite a high probability that this won't be ignored, so I'd recommend you using just lowered voluem of the default hitnormal for all hitnormals. Such as this one. That should be enough to make this viable.
   2. I'm missing two things here. There sure is a lot of effort put into the keysounding, but to make it really solid and complete, I'd welcome some heavy drum for sounds like 01:17:041 - in part 01:17:041 - 01:54:241 - . I think it is quite a significant sound in the music and making it stand out a little bit more would really be good. The same thing would apply to kiai time, but there's also some kind of cymbal that is also not good ignoring at 02:47:041 (1) - and other places like this. I personally think that this wouldn't take a lot of effort, it's just few hitsounds but it would use all the potential that these hitsounds have.
   3. I recommend replacing normal-hitfinish3 with another sound, because it's almost inaudible in the map, you can barely notice difference if you remove it, but mainly, because what you hear is mostly a lot of noise, which is not pleasant to listen to. If you decided to apply even the previous suggestion, I'm willing to provide you the hitsounds that would fit instead of this finish and then some sound for the cymbal as I mentioned in previous issue. PM me in case.
3. It's good thing that you want to give the newbies some rest using the break, but I highly encourage you to reconsider the length of the break. ~40 seconds is way too long in my opinion and I believe that even the newcomers will want to skip that part or might eventually quit the map. I would recommend halving the break, starting at 02:14:641 - , then you'd also have a better transition to the kiai part. Eventually, you could map the part completely in a very calm way (for example mapping mostly the bell sound, I believe you could make up something).

1. The only problem I have with hard I think could be done better is 00:58:741 (4) - 01:03:541 (4) - 01:08:341 (4) - . I see that you want to follow the vocals and the mallet/bell/whatever instrument it is, but it's getting a little bit boring to play the same type of slider over and over and you could bring some little variety to the map by using what the song provides here. All of these sliders have quite a significant piano note between them such as 00:59:041 - . I tried shortening it to 1/2 and adding a circle on 00:59:341 - and all of these three sliders played really well, just you'd probably want to use different hitsound. I personally feel that using these inconsistencies from the song makes the map a bit more unique and fun to play. I'm not going to force this and it's nothing what would hold the map away from qualification, but I recommend it just because it appears to be good if mapped a little different (it's 3 sliders after all and most of your map consists of just 1/1 sliders, which is a pity if you have the opportunity here).

1. 01:17:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm a bit worried here that these objects are way too much clustered in one place and this could read to decreased readability. I'd recommend you to make it a little bit more straight-forward.
2. 01:21:541 (6,1) - You're using quite a lot of stacks in the map, in the beginning, you used 1/1 and 2/1, not you're using 1/2 which might not play so well for newbies. I highly recommend you to remake it to regular spacing such as 01:39:241 (5,6,1) - , the stacks that have enough time before you need to click them (for example 01:32:341 (1,2) - ) are fine, but I think 1/2 before and after stack is way too quick for Normal difficulty, if it is not stacked but placed with regular spacing, it's much easier to read as you play just the same way as you did before and you don't have limited time to realize a sudden change.
3. 03:02:341 (6,1) - Same as above.

Wafu wrote:

Red = Not allowed/potentionally causing DQ
Bold = Mostly important, partially subjective, address this properly
Regular = Subjective opinion, try it out but don't obey my opinion if yours is essentially different

[General]

1. If you already included "Maeda Jun", you could maybe include his real name: 麻枝准 as he's quite an important person regarding the song and the anime/visual novel. You could include たくまる (Takumaru) for arrangement of the song as well, though probably not as important as Jun's name. You might see they all are listed on the CD case for example. Added "麻枝准 たくまる Takumaru" to tags
2. I have few problems with hitsounds that should be addressed, applies to both Normal and Hard difficulty:
   
   1. All hitnormal hitsounds are muted. I do realize what is the intention of these keysounds, but not having hitnormal support was not supposed to be allowed in the first place. The feedback is not so good if it follows music with almost identical sounds. There is quite a high probability that this won't be ignored, so I'd recommend you using just lowered voluem of the default hitnormal for all hitnormals. Such as this one. That should be enough to make this viable. Fixed
   2. I'm missing two things here. There sure is a lot of effort put into the keysounding, but to make it really solid and complete, I'd welcome some heavy drum for sounds like 01:17:041 - in part 01:17:041 - 01:54:241 - . I think it is quite a significant sound in the music and making it stand out a little bit more would really be good. The same thing would apply to kiai time, but there's also some kind of cymbal that is also not good ignoring at 02:47:041 (1) - and other places like this. I personally think that this wouldn't take a lot of effort, it's just few hitsounds but it would use all the potential that these hitsounds have. Discussed, added new hitfinish
   3. I recommend replacing normal-hitfinish3 with another sound, because it's almost inaudible in the map, you can barely notice difference if you remove it, but mainly, because what you hear is mostly a lot of noise, which is not pleasant to listen to. If you decided to apply even the previous suggestion, I'm willing to provide you the hitsounds that would fit instead of this finish and then some sound for the cymbal as I mentioned in previous issue. PM me in case.yea
3. It's good thing that you want to give the newbies some rest using the break, but I highly encourage you to reconsider the length of the break. ~40 seconds is way too long in my opinion and I believe that even the newcomers will want to skip that part or might eventually quit the map. I would recommend halving the break, starting at 02:14:641 - , then you'd also have a better transition to the kiai part. Eventually, you could map the part completely in a very calm way (for example mapping mostly the bell sound, I believe you could make up something). About this, the answer is kinda similar to how I address your suggestion on hard difficulty. I want to map this whole map consistently, and by map half of that break time will give me no option but to map it by using circle the whole time or to combine it with 1/2 slider, since I think 1/1 slider wouldn't fit there properly. And by mapping it in "very calm way" is just not my thing. Ignoring all piano sound on that part really wouldn't do it for this map. Moreover, If I decided to map it by the way "I feel is right" it could be possibly ended up being harder than other parts, which is clearly didn't fit the property of the song. I know my reasoning is highly subjective and possibly easy to object, but thats it!

[Hard]

1. The only problem I have with hard I think could be done better is 00:58:741 (4) - 01:03:541 (4) - 01:08:341 (4) - . I see that you want to follow the vocals and the mallet/bell/whatever instrument it is, but it's getting a little bit boring to play the same type of slider over and over and you could bring some little variety to the map by using what the song provides here. All of these sliders have quite a significant piano note between them such as 00:59:041 - . I tried shortening it to 1/2 and adding a circle on 00:59:341 - and all of these three sliders played really well, just you'd probably want to use different hitsound. I personally feel that using these inconsistencies from the song makes the map a bit more unique and fun to play. I'm not going to force this and it's nothing what would hold the map away from qualification, but I recommend it just because it appears to be good if mapped a little different (it's 3 sliders after all and most of your map consists of just 1/1 sliders, which is a pity if you have the opportunity here). I actually want to make the whole map consistent by using only circles and 1/1 slider. So, changing only 3 of them into 1/2 slider doesn't really works in terms of consistency of this map (at least in my opinion)

[Normal]

1. 01:17:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm a bit worried here that these objects are way too much clustered in one place and this could read to decreased readability. I'd recommend you to make it a little bit more straight-forward. Changed into a more straight-forward pattern
2. 01:21:541 (6,1) - You're using quite a lot of stacks in the map, in the beginning, you used 1/1 and 2/1, not you're using 1/2 which might not play so well for newbies. I highly recommend you to remake it to regular spacing such as 01:39:241 (5,6,1) - , the stacks that have enough time before you need to click them (for example 01:32:341 (1,2) - ) are fine, but I think 1/2 before and after stack is way too quick for Normal difficulty, if it is not stacked but placed with regular spacing, it's much easier to read as you play just the same way as you did before and you don't have limited time to realize a sudden change. Okay
3. 03:02:341 (6,1) - Same as above. same

That's all I'd like to mention for now. I'll eventually recheck/tell you a little bit more after these issues are properly addressed. I'm mostly satisfied with the map. Feel free to ask in-game or through PM if you didn't understand anything or want help.