1. Take me on (5.36 stars, 1316 notes)

Arusamour wrote:

[url=soundcloudlinktosong]HIGHER QUALITY AUDIO FILE DOWNLOAD AVAILABLE OVER HERE[/url]

1. Unused hitsounds:
   soft-hitfinish.wav

FCL wrote:

kudosu abuse

15:02 SnowNiNo_: lo sry just back home xd
15:02 FCL: np
15:02 SnowNiNo_: so got time now ?
15:02 FCL: yay
15:03 SnowNiNo_: k lets do the mod now or xd?
15:03 *SnowNiNo_ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1072130 VINXIS - Take]
15:03 FCL: sure
15:03 SnowNiNo_: idk if you like the song tho =w=
15:06 FCL: hmm, are you sure that stuff like this is not confusing in game? 00:07:356 (1,3) -
15:06 FCL: looks so so
15:07 SnowNiNo_: well the testplayer ive ask so far didnt mention tho, ill ask for it
15:13 FCL: overall nice map
15:13 FCL: but i would say some subjective points
15:14 SnowNiNo_: oky
15:15 FCL: 00:45:251 (1,2,3,4) - why there spacing less than at 00:43:988 (1,2,3,4) - ? I guess these sections sound same
15:16 FCL: 00:51:409 (1,1) - kinda nazi point, you could avoid this overlap
15:16 SnowNiNo_: oky fix both
15:17 FCL: 00:57:014 (1) - i think this rhythm doesn't work properly cuz the song has pretty hard vocal at 00:57:093 -
15:17 FCL: so circle+kickslider would work better there
15:18 FCL: 00:59:541 (1) - hmm, same as above
15:18 SnowNiNo_: well this part mainly following the kicks tho
15:18 FCL: hmm, it seems you did everywhere these things
15:19 FCL: but idk, for me it look not so good
15:19 SnowNiNo_: if i switch this part to follow the vocal it would be kinda weird and inconsistent =w=
15:20 FCL: 01:26:699 - it's really hard beat
15:20 FCL: i'd map it and stack with 01:26:777 (1) -
15:20 SnowNiNo_: k add a note
15:21 SnowNiNo_: i map same thing like 01:26:146 (7,8,9) -
15:22 SnowNiNo_: it's more smooth
15:22 FCL: 01:27:724 (5,6,7,8) - subjective, but i'd add more distance cuz 01:27:725 (5) - doesn't sound same as 01:27:409 (1,2,3,4) -
15:22 FCL: like http://puu.sh/r6j1x/cffac63d10.jpg
15:23 FCL: yea, it's crazy but has sense
15:24 SnowNiNo_: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6059178 how about this?]
15:24 FCL: 01:30:251 (2) - about these slider - i think you should make another share cuz this sound sounds different than 01:29:935 (1) -
15:25 FCL: also i'd increase sv or do sthm other interesing things
15:25 FCL: yay, it's fine
15:26 SnowNiNo_: well it sound the same to me lol
15:26 FCL: more slowly i guess
15:26 SnowNiNo_: =w=
15:27 SnowNiNo_: hmm.. i think it's not necessary cuz i only heard the different in 50%
15:27 FCL: 01:42:725 (2) - dam there's autostacking looks not so good
15:27 FCL: custom stacking or smth
15:27 FCL: np, it was subjective
15:28 SnowNiNo_: you mean the autostack at 01:41:777 (1,3) - ?
15:28 FCL: 01:42:409 (3,2) -
15:29 SnowNiNo_: 01:41:777 (1,3) - ill fix this
15:29 SnowNiNo_: autostack stack like that lol
15:29 FCL: 01:51:883 (1) - did you put whistle on sliderbody intentionally? sounds weird
15:30 SnowNiNo_: 01:41:777 (1,3) - ill do custom stack here, looks better
15:30 FCL: cuz you didn't do smth same before
15:30 SnowNiNo_: sliderbody?
15:30 SnowNiNo_: whistle was on sliderhead tho
15:31 FCL: not for me
15:31 FCL: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6059227
15:31 FCL: lul
15:32 SnowNiNo_: well there isnt a whistle on sliderend tho
15:32 SnowNiNo_: so the hs only was on sliderhead
15:32 FCL: 01:53:225 - aaa, this melody is so strong
15:32 SnowNiNo_: was only*
15:32 FCL: you could map this section like spaced stream
15:32 FCL: at leas i'd do it
15:32 FCL: idk why, but i have this
15:33 FCL: k nwm about whistle
15:33 SnowNiNo_: that isnt the sound im following tho
15:33 FCL: like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6059250
15:33 SnowNiNo_: you mean the synth sound right?
15:33 FCL: yep, maybe
15:34 SnowNiNo_: yea not following that sound
15:34 FCL: as you wish
15:34 SnowNiNo_: kk
15:34 FCL: 01:53:304 (1) - subjective, but i don't like shares like that
15:34 FCL: looks not so tidy
15:35 SnowNiNo_: nah is wub tho slider shape isnt rly a problem xd
15:35 FCL: 02:05:935 (1,2) - you could improve the blanket
15:35 SnowNiNo_: yap
15:38 FCL: 02:56:304 (4) - also subjective, i'd use kickslider instead for these sounds
15:38 FCL: cuz vocal sounds like 1/4
15:38 FCL: but w/e
15:39 FCL: 03:10:199 (1,3) - is overlap really need?
15:39 SnowNiNo_: not rly intense to used kick imo
15:39 FCL: you could start to use kickslider from this part btw 03:11:462 (5) -
15:39 SnowNiNo_: yea keeping the shape since is rotated
15:39 FCL: there is' more intensive
15:41 SnowNiNo_: well i just think the vocal at the non kiai isnt that intense to use kicks to express
15:41 FCL: 04:07:041 (8,1) - more distance maybe? for emhasize
15:41 FCL: okay
15:42 SnowNiNo_: oky make sense
15:42 FCL: 04:15:409 (3) - place like 136 156 would look better imo
15:42 FCL: blanket+avoiding some overlaps
15:43 FCL: 04:25:514 (3) - would move to 312 184, looks more tidy than
15:43 SnowNiNo_: i placed here cuz i want 3's sliderhead to be at middle of 1 and 2
15:44 SnowNiNo_: oky
15:44 FCL: 04:26:620 (3) - nc should be here? or it's fine
15:45 FCL: 04:29:935 (1) - there's also whistle on sliderbody
15:45 SnowNiNo_: nope there should be NCed just like every similar parts lo
15:45 FCL: 04:31:199 (2) - should be more spacing i guess
15:45 SnowNiNo_: about this i think the sound is still the same tho cuz the tail doesnt got the whistle
15:45 FCL: as you did for 01:46:830 (1,2) -
15:45 SnowNiNo_: oky
15:47 FCL: they don's stacked intentionally?
15:48 SnowNiNo_: lol wat?
15:48 SnowNiNo_: where xd
15:48 FCL: oh shit
15:48 FCL: i am sorry
15:48 FCL: 04:56:304 (1,1) -
15:48 SnowNiNo_: oh
15:49 SnowNiNo_: cuz the autostack of 04:57:093 (1,2,1) - tho
15:49 SnowNiNo_: so 04:57:093 (1) - looks a bit off
15:49 SnowNiNo_: but it;s weird if i custom stack either so i stay with autostack here
15:49 FCL: kay
15:50 FCL: 05:41:462 (4) - it would look better if you make the slider parallel with 05:41:225 (3,5) -
15:50 FCL: and follow good with preview patterns
15:50 FCL: or not xd
15:51 SnowNiNo_: o that kick is for 05:40:988 (2) - tho lo
15:51 FCL: yay, just noticed
15:51 FCL: and you did similar in whole section
15:51 SnowNiNo_: oky xd
15:52 FCL: well, that all what i can say
15:52 SnowNiNo_: cool
15:52 SnowNiNo_: post in thread :.
15:52 SnowNiNo_: :>
15:52 FCL: yep, time for kudosu abuse

Mein Gauche wrote:

Hi from my q

01:00:251 (1) - played this map twice, missed this twice. maybe move to a more visible spot? it plays fine for me tho lol
01:02:777 (1) - ^
01:28:672 (3) - ctrl-g do better imo actually both are the same tho xd

can't find more problems. only few things bugged me though, 01:32:462 (1) - this slow slider. i don't like it.. and also the ending is a bit repetitive imo.

other than that, nice map. i really like it.

MisterDinner wrote:

NM BOIIIIII
END MY LIFE THE COLD AIR IS COMING IN THE TREES ARE FALLING, HELP

DAT BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

Is this a billain map?
take a pee

40% volume is ridiculously loud for the starting part, and the custom hs sound like theyre part of the song and really kills the mood with the 40% volume going into that break. edit: oh thats just a part of the song, it sounds weird... decreased to 30%

01:13:356 (4) - just nudge the end to the left a bit. lol why
01:27:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a bit hard to read but it makes sense
past that it goes more ape shit than byfar's parts in amber's love and i have no idea whats going on.

i dont know what else to say the rest of it is perfect...

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

hi as requested

[General]

1. Unused hitsounds:
   soft-hitfinish.wav k

[Take Me on]
02:30:883 - i think the circle should be here xd (the piano sound looks strong here) mainly vocal
02:35:935 - ^
02:40:988 - ^
02:43:514 - ^
03:10:672 (3) - i think overlap looks not good here (the pattern looks weird imo) maybe move to (136,200) to avoid the overlap or stack (maybe the tail between slider (1) and (3) ) nah keeping the shape here, the shape are all consist
03:15:725 (3) - ^ (suggestion move to (47,177) )
03:18:251 (3) - tbh this confuses me (when you try to overlap just little bit at 03:15:725 (3) and 03:10:672 (3) then you make full overlap here) maybe move this slider to (178,274) instead? plays fine cuz the high ar
03:25:830 (2) - why not ctrl j? for better pattern with slider (1) flows a bit awkward imo
03:49:988 - drag the break here? to make sure the vocal finished?
04:36:962 - unused green line is not unused tho, it change sc3to sc3 which give sliderslide silence, and unused green line is totally fine tho lol
04:42:014 - ^
04:54:962 - 04:55:120 - ^
04:57:172 - and the next one ^
05:00:014 - ^ xd
05:02:225 - zzz (i'm just curious,why you adds green line around here? it looks unnecessary)
05:05:067 - ^
05:10:120 - ^
05:53:304 - unused blue line this is but a bookmark =w=

ok thats it from
GL!

NeilPerry wrote:

We are discussed some flow moments.

irc mod

16:58 SnowNiNo_: lol need your mod xd
16:59 NeilPerry: have time for short irc?
16:59 NeilPerry: or not short
16:59 SnowNiNo_: ye
16:59 SnowNiNo_: idk xd
17:00 NeilPerry: 00:23:777 (2,3,4) -
17:00 NeilPerry: space different?
17:00 NeilPerry: or my eyes give a fck
17:00 NeilPerry: ye
17:00 NeilPerry: my eyes
17:00 SnowNiNo_: is the same lo
17:00 NeilPerry: sec
17:03 NeilPerry: 01:37:041 (2) -
17:03 NeilPerry: wanna to advice you change flow a bit
17:03 NeilPerry: this moment some confused
17:03 NeilPerry: let me show
17:04 NeilPerry: http://puu.sh/r7r8G/7a59bb0145.jpg
17:04 NeilPerry: try smthing like this
17:04 NeilPerry: will play MUCH softer imo
17:05 SnowNiNo_: k
17:05 SnowNiNo_: i think both was fine but w*e
17:06 SnowNiNo_: w/e*
17:06 NeilPerry: 01:44:620 (2) -
17:06 NeilPerry: mby here try to do same thing?
17:06 NeilPerry: http://puu.sh/r7reW/ca720fe51c.jpg
17:07 SnowNiNo_: k a sec
17:08 SnowNiNo_: done
17:08 NeilPerry: as i told you
17:09 NeilPerry: 02:48:883 -
17:09 NeilPerry: 03:49:514 -
17:09 NeilPerry: curves in this part
17:09 NeilPerry: should be more consist imo
17:09 NeilPerry: i dunno how explain
17:09 SnowNiNo_: wat curves tho
17:10 NeilPerry: structure looks random a bit
17:10 SnowNiNo_: like where lol
17:10 NeilPerry: will be cool if you make some curve patterns and will repeat them throw part
17:11 SnowNiNo_: im slowing changing the structure at this part since the music got more intense
17:11 NeilPerry: 03:09:093 -
17:11 NeilPerry: from here yes
17:12 NeilPerry: but actyally it looks aestheticaly well
17:13 SnowNiNo_: still dont get it wat you are trying to say tho lol
17:15 NeilPerry: uh
17:15 NeilPerry: i will try explain
17:16 NeilPerry: 02:48:883 (1,4,1,3,3,1,4,1,3,3,3,1,4,1,3,3,1,4,1,3,1,3) -
17:16 NeilPerry: in this part so many different sliders
17:16 NeilPerry: it's losing a bit of consistency
17:17 SnowNiNo_: wat lol
17:17 SnowNiNo_: does it even matter
17:17 SnowNiNo_: =w=?
17:17 NeilPerry: so okay then
17:17 NeilPerry: just my advice to make this part more softer
17:17 SnowNiNo_: imagin if the slider are all the same
17:17 SnowNiNo_: it plays rly boring
17:18 SnowNiNo_: so more vairty is better
17:18 NeilPerry: oky then
17:18 NeilPerry: and the last
17:18 NeilPerry: 04:54:883 (2) -
17:19 NeilPerry: you stop use sliders there
17:19 NeilPerry: does it okay?
17:19 NeilPerry: 04:57:093 (1) -
17:19 NeilPerry: same
17:19 SnowNiNo_: yea cuz the music is different
17:19 NeilPerry: so strong WUB there
17:19 SnowNiNo_: here
17:19 SnowNiNo_: just compare this part with 04:54:883 (2) - or 04:54:883 (2) -
17:20 SnowNiNo_: 01:29:935 (1) -
17:20 SnowNiNo_: the music sound different
17:20 NeilPerry: yup
17:20 NeilPerry: im catch it
17:20 NeilPerry: so other looks solid for me
17:20 SnowNiNo_: yea so shouldnt be the same lol
17:20 NeilPerry: sory for poor mod
17:20 SnowNiNo_: k
17:20 SnowNiNo_: is oky
17:21 NeilPerry: i will post
17:21 SnowNiNo_: at least ive cahnge sth xd
17:21 NeilPerry: and
17:21 NeilPerry: 04:58:356 (3) -
17:21 NeilPerry: mby cntrl+g?
17:22 SnowNiNo_: is the same thing tho xd
17:22 SnowNiNo_: ctrl + g makes the flow 3>1 worse
17:22 NeilPerry: oky then

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey from Lazyboy's and Phyloukz' queue for NM!

00:07:356 (1) - would make sense for the beginning kicksliders to have a mute hitsound on the end hit or a 5% volume imo is already a soft sample tho, is totally fine
00:40:199 (1) - don't feel like this fits nor does it on the later ones fir for me tho
02:18:725 (1) - same again + all following same
02:50:777 (3) - missing a note on the red tick, I'd do 2 sliders here, same on all following with the same melody, you have skipped a lot of notes here not following the vocal here, otherwise would be inconsistent
03:09:093 - from here the feel of the song changes a lot, yet you kept the same mapping style, i think some of the longer sliders should have some 1/2 going on instead to emphasize the fact that the map's intensity increases, plus it gets boring to play ive already used different structure to express the music tho
03:31:830 (1,2) - maybe lower SV here since the beat is missing? oky cool ill take this

I don't like your slider design much, I feel like rhythmically a lot is wrong, but otherwise the map is fine :p Also I don't have too much experience modding this kinds of wild maps, so I will have missed a load of stuff that should've been pointed out

Good luck going for approval

Hou Rearu wrote:

well, so your idea was like "I'll make a perfect map with amazing forms and aestetics and stuff, where everthing stacks, matches, blankets..."
So mod is like searching all imperfectnesses (dunno if this word exists, so "all not perfect moments"). I think your aim is make a super perfect thing, so u might be interesting in super minor fixes like 1 pixel of stack, avoiding not really good overlaps, fixing angles and etc...
Uhm, here we go...
00:50:699 (1,4,5,1) - overlap
00:51:409 (1,2) - 2 supposed to match (stack) sliderend of 1
00:53:935 (1,2) - overlap
00:58:514 (2,1) - a bit wrong blanket fixed
00:58:514 (2) - supposed to match(stack) with 00:57:567 (4) -
01:00:804 (1,1) - not really good overlap
01:03:330 (1,4,5,1) - overlap
01:29:146 (1) - seems a bit weird form, i mean, it's like bad blanked that looks a bit imperfect.

May be making these sliders this way will looks more pretty

oh it would work for almost all slider this "wave" form made with only 4 dots, so I'd put there all of them I consider being weird 01:31:199 (3) - 01:36:725 (1) - 01:45:725 (1) - 01:49:356 (1) - 01:50:777 (1) - 02:03:409 (1) - 02:56:462 (1) - 03:24:251 (1) - 03:40:041 (3) - 03:47:620 (3) - 04:02:777 (3) - 04:15:409 (3) - 04:56:304 (1) -

01:29:146 (1,3) - overlap
01:31:988 (2) - I think 01:31:199 (3) - was supposed to be exactly on the angle
03:10:988 (4,2) - ^
01:31:672 (1,1) - ^
01:34:199 (1) - weird blanket
01:36:567 (1) - doesn't match the angle of 01:36:251 (3) -
01:36:093 (2,1) - stack?
01:51:093 (2,1) - overlap
02:01:988 (1,3) - weird blanket
02:03:725 (2,2) - ^
03:07:672 (1,2) - ^
03:14:146 (1,2) - ^
02:31:830 (3,2) - overlap
03:14:146 (1,3) - may be better make matching sliderbodies then blanked around the sliderend

this way:

damn it looks super bad, but u may be got the idea.

03:15:725 (3,1) - stack?
03:16:041 (4,3) - off angle fixed
03:17:777 (1,3) - strange overlap, may be better match sliderbodies?
03:18:093 (2,4) - overlap
03:19:830 (3,1,2,3) - lazy made pattern, off blankets overlaps etc...
03:16:672 - 03:49:514 -
damn, recheck this part yourself, there are lots of lost angles, obejects that drops the forms, i mean like they are jsut put somewhere randomly, weird overlaps and etc. It's like ur were already tired when mapped that or smth, This part is simply worse the the rest of the map, that seems to be almost perfect.
04:01:356 (2,1) - weird blanket
04:05:304 (3,7) - off angle
04:12:883 (3,1,2) -match angle of 2 with the angle of 3, and move the end dot of 2 to make 1 slider's end matching 2's body (tfw what i have just wrote, just watch screenshot)

*click*

hope you can understand smth here

04:13:199 (1,1) - stack
04:14:777 (1,3) - overlap
04:15:883 (1,2) - weird blanket
04:34:988 (1,2) - off angle
05:35:620 (1,2) - may be it should be blanket
05:39:409 (1,2) - ^
or not, w/e it's fine
05:45:725 (1,2) - weird blanket fixed
05:50:462 (5,4) - stack



Also there was billions of 1(or few or some) pixel off stack things, I'll just put them all of them I could manage to observe. Some might be mistaken, missed or noticed twice
00:49:435 (1,4) - 00:50:146 (1,1) - 00:50:146 (1,1) - 00:50:146 (1,1) - 00:58:277 (1,3) - 00:59:304 (3,3) - 00:59:541 (1,4) - 01:02:462 (3,1) - 01:03:093 (4,2) - 01:07:672 (4,4) - 01:11:857 (2,1) - 01:13:514 (5,1) - 01:16:041 (5,1) - 01:24:251 (1,5) - 01:23:935 (9,6) - 01:40:988 (1,3,2,1) - 01:54:409 (1,2,3,1) - damn, I give it's too hard...(u should find the rest yourself, if u care at all...)

Hope I got your idea correctly and my mod would be any useful. Inspiring map tbh, so tryhard mapping, lol.
I may be noticed couple of things twice, but who cares, right...?

You don't have to reply this at all, just fix the things you found reasonable.
Good luck, dude. A star.

S A V E R Y wrote:

From my queue.
Light mod start.

[VINXIS]
00:36:251 - What the unsnapped breaktime? http://puu.sh/r9ezd/93b7b1e78a.jpg fixed
05:53:304 - Add spinner here and finish at 05:57:725 nope

/me sleep