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MaxNRG - Hide Away My Heart

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016 m. gruodžio 29 d. at 12:37:06

Artist: MaxNRG
Title: Hide Away My Heart
Tags: dnb drum and & bass liquicity liquid cut Exote Come[Back]Home cbh
BPM: 174
Filesize: 3992kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. CBH's Insane (5,12 stars, 506 notes)
  2. Easy (1,64 stars, 145 notes)
  3. Exote's Hard (3,16 stars, 312 notes)
  4. Extra (6,06 stars, 541 notes)
  5. Insane (4,22 stars, 438 notes)
  6. Normal (2,17 stars, 244 notes)
Download: MaxNRG - Hide Away My Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mazzerin
Good map!
Mazziv
thats how it would look like if hollow wings mapped dnb
Fuuka
holy, good stuff
Buttercup
you are the inovation of the dnb
Topic Starter
Strategas
me too thanks
Exote
first mod aye(jk)
2016-08-30 22:55 Exote: 01:33:890 (1,2) -
2016-08-30 22:55 Exote: this is very mean
2016-08-30 22:55 Exote: xd
2016-08-30 22:56 Exote: http://puu.sh/qUcbn/bd5aef3466.jpg this works like a charm as well imo
2016-08-30 22:56 Strategas: but visible hitcircle :((
2016-08-30 22:56 Exote: 01:36:648 (1,1) -
2016-08-30 22:56 Exote: also gets consistent with those
2016-08-30 22:56 Exote: ye but
2016-08-30 22:56 Exote: very mean
2016-08-30 22:56 Exote: xddd
2016-08-30 22:56 Exote: i dont even remember hittinh this
2016-08-30 22:56 Exote: idk
2016-08-30 22:56 Exote: LOL
2016-08-30 22:58 Exote: 01:48:717 (3,4) -
2016-08-30 22:58 Exote: also this
2016-08-30 22:58 Exote: im sure if u overlap 4 a bit further from sliderend would look more cathy
2016-08-30 22:58 Exote: catchy*
2016-08-30 22:58 Strategas: sec
2016-08-30 22:58 Exote: sure
2016-08-30 22:59 Exote: 02:01:390 - wanna mute sliderend?
2016-08-30 22:59 Exote: ill just spam here
2016-08-30 22:59 Exote: u can take a look whenever you can
2016-08-30 23:01 Exote: looks like uve missed that sliderend, since eveything else that's similar to this is muted
2016-08-30 23:01 Exote: 02:05:614 (5) - 02:06:303 (9) - nc? xd
2016-08-30 23:02 Strategas: nuhh
2016-08-30 23:02 Exote: 01:23:200 (2) - veri nic
2016-08-30 23:02 Strategas: no nc
2016-08-30 23:03 Strategas: I kinda used NC to indicate paterns more than rhythmical shet
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: ah
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: idk
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: would also help with hp
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: if you're gonna leave it 6
2016-08-30 23:03 Strategas: ty
2016-08-30 23:03 Strategas: it's ok
2016-08-30 23:03 Strategas: more challenge
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: more challenge
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: means
2016-08-30 23:03 Strategas: just not sure about hr LUL
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: no clearing from me
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: xd
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: lmao
2016-08-30 23:03 Strategas: i means good milestone to reach
2016-08-30 23:03 Strategas: to clear
2016-08-30 23:03 Strategas: :P
2016-08-30 23:03 Exote: that too
2016-08-30 23:04 Exote: ow shit
2016-08-30 23:04 Strategas: how much further are you talkinga bout tho
2016-08-30 23:04 Strategas: 01:48:890 (4) -
2016-08-30 23:04 Exote: sec
2016-08-30 23:04 Exote: puushed 2 things
2016-08-30 23:04 Exote: not sure which is gonna be first
2016-08-30 23:04 Exote: LOL
2016-08-30 23:04 Exote: puush will prolly crash on me
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: wpow
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: puush is smart
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: http://puu.sh/qUcIX/c2f8817e76.jpg
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: this far is just purrfect
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: also
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: http://puu.sh/qUcIu/eb1c8ddc43.jpg xddddd
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: this
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: bugs me so much
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: this tiny little overlap
2016-08-30 23:05 Exote: its like a fly in your big room
2016-08-30 23:06 Exote: and u tryna kill it, no luck
2016-08-30 23:06 Exote: neverluckyman
2016-08-30 23:06 Strategas: where is it
2016-08-30 23:06 Exote: 01:36:993 -
2016-08-30 23:06 Strategas: ah
2016-08-30 23:06 Exote: just drop those 2 sliders 1-2 pixels down
2016-08-30 23:06 Exote: should get free from the overlap
2016-08-30 23:07 Strategas: 01:37:683 (3) -
2016-08-30 23:07 Strategas: this offscreen now
2016-08-30 23:07 Strategas: g
2016-08-30 23:07 Exote: o wth
2016-08-30 23:07 Exote: a
2016-08-30 23:07 Exote: yea btw
2016-08-30 23:07 Exote: i also saw some other offscreen elelments
2016-08-30 23:07 Exote: they were touching the bottom of my monitor LOL
2016-08-30 23:07 Strategas: fixd
2016-08-30 23:08 Exote: ggwp
DeRandom Otaku
oh god this song is amazing!
M4M from your q
[General]
  1. Unsnapped timing objects in all difficulties except CBH's Insane : 01:20:193 - 01:25:724 -
[Easy]
  1. 01:15:279 - i cant really tell the difference between this and other beats like this one , such as 01:09:417 - 01:12:520 - etc . They are all mapped but 01:15:279 - is ignored, why? it should really be mapped
  2. 01:26:313 - same here .. You could do something like http://puu.sh/ru80z/32673def38.jpg here
  3. 01:38:038 (1,2,3) - 02:00:107 (1,2,3) - Not really sure about these , the only 1/2's u used in the whole diff .. well i know it fits perfectly but it can be confusing as hell for newbie players
  4. 01:56:658 (3) - this kinda looks bad . Yeah ,it should be symmetry pls
  5. 02:11:141 - The song is actually pretty intense here so u should rather map it with circles/sliders instead of using a spinner . imo a 3/2 reverse slider and a circle on the last big white tick will be perfect
  6. Also , could delete all those useless timing points if ur not lazy xd
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is kinda dense .. Yes , u should probably introduce some sliders in here
  2. 01:05:969 (1) - Either remove this NC or remove the NC in easy
  3. 01:35:279 (5) - You could prolly add some kind of variation to this slider cuz the sounds it supports is intenser than what 01:34:589 (3,4,6,7,8) - all these support
  4. 01:46:313 (5) - 01:54:589 (5) - 02:05:624 (5) - Same for these , again just a suggestion to make the difference more obvious . not really needed to apply
  5. 01:59:934 - should rather not skip this cuz u never skipped wub sound like this one before
  6. 02:01:831 - 01:59:072 - what is consistency
  7. 02:11:141 (1) - Same as in easy
[Exote]
  1. 00:22:175 (1) - Space more for emphasis?
  2. 00:35:796 (1,2,3,4) - i m assuming that u r following vocals here , if so then it would actually make more sense if u use a different rhythm such as the rhythm u used for 00:34:417 (1,2,3,4,1) - so that the vocal at 00:37:175 - could become clickable because its really emphasized in the song and it should be clickable
  3. 00:44:072 (5,1) - here u stacked 1 under 5 which is a p bad idea because 1 is have loud cymbal which should be emphasized and stacking it under 5 gives it no spacing emphasis
  4. 01:08:038 (2,3) - DS
  5. 01:17:003 (3) - This shape looks rather weird and messy , it should be cooler if u move the red node a bit to the left or maybe just make it symmetry
  6. 02:06:313 (4) - NC for consistency
  7. 02:11:141 (1,2,1,1) - make these equally spaced?
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:796 (2,3) - u could move these a bit down , like 2 or 3 pixels so that they would be more linear towards the reverse arrow of the slider and same for 00:02:175 (2,3) - but in opposite direction
  2. 00:26:141 (3,1) - this is a bit unexpected , the spacing gets pretty intense here so suddenly , i broke my combo here tbh while if u compare it to 00:28:727 (3,1) - .. These two have really small spacing compared to previous one while pattern is same
  3. 01:11:831 - if i m not wrong , isnt this supposed to be two 1/3 sliders like in the previous patterns? the previous patterns played well while this one felt boring ~ This also applies on other patterns like this , maybe u felt lazy to map 2 sliders? jk xd
  4. 01:16:831 (1) - Remove NC because u never had NC for this note before
  5. 01:39:072 (1,1) - Mis-stacked
  6. 01:45:624 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is way toooooooooo much for a diff like this . i failed on this part because it was almost impossible to read it on the first try even those these kind of diffs are piece of cake for me =w= i really really really recommend u to change this
  7. 01:50:969 - I think u should add a circle here there is a clear sound here which wasnt much audible at 01:28:900 -
  8. 02:06:831 (4) - Forgot to silent slider end?
  9. 02:12:175 - You should somehow manage to make this beat clickable since theres a sick wub sound that starts from there and it should be clickable
[CBH]
  1. 00:16:141 (4) - maybe move this 2 or 3 pixels to left so the overlap would look cuter xd
  2. 00:22:175 - Uh that cymbal sounds is so strong in the background , must make it clickable
  3. 00:36:486 (2,1) - Stack?
  4. 00:44:244 (1) - 00:45:624 (1) - 00:47:003 (1) - 00:48:382 (1) - for all these , they should end on the blue tick since thats where the sound ends in the background . Currently they sound weird af to me
  5. 00:49:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is sick!
  6. 01:04:158 (8) - you dont need this circle
  7. 01:20:451 (2) - ctrl g plays much better here
  8. 02:00:107 (1,2) - 02:00:624 (3,4) - These two should really have the same rhythm since the sounds in the background are 100% same and since they are so close to each other in timeline , its easily noticeable during gameplay
  9. 02:01:141 (5,1) - tbh , it looks pretty ugly when ONLY the boarders overlap
  10. 02:11:141 (1,2,3,4) - same as 02:00:107 (1,2,3,4) -
ok thats all i guess . last diff is too op for me to mod :<
i need some time to decide which map i want u to mod , gotta confirm with other BNs first xd
gl!
Topic Starter
Strategas

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

oh god this song is amazing!
M4M from your q
[General]
  1. Unsnapped timing objects in all difficulties except CBH's Insane : 01:20:193 - 01:25:724 - they don't really matter as they already do what I want them to do, but so that people wouldn't complain ok
[Easy]
  1. 01:15:279 - i cant really tell the difference between this and other beats like this one , such as 01:09:417 - 01:12:520 - etc . They are all mapped but 01:15:279 - is ignored, why? it should really be mapped
  2. 01:26:313 - same here .. You could do something like http://puu.sh/ru80z/32673def38.jpg here
  3. 01:38:038 (1,2,3) - 02:00:107 (1,2,3) - Not really sure about these , the only 1/2's u used in the whole diff .. well i know it fits perfectly but it can be confusing as hell for newbie players will gather more opinions as the active playing is still 3/2
  4. 01:56:658 (3) - this kinda looks bad . Yeah ,it should be symmetry pls wasn't aiming for symmetry and I like how nasty it is
  5. 02:11:141 - The song is actually pretty intense here so u should rather map it with circles/sliders instead of using a spinner . imo a 3/2 reverse slider and a circle on the last big white tick will be perfect spinner for noobs most intense though
  6. Also , could delete all those useless timing points if ur not lazy xd don't like putting effort into things that don't change anything
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is kinda dense .. Yes , u should probably introduce some sliders in here
  2. 01:05:969 (1) - Either remove this NC or remove the NC in easy
  3. 01:35:279 (5) - You could prolly add some kind of variation to this slider cuz the sounds it supports is intenser than what 01:34:589 (3,4,6,7,8) - all these support I tried various things, but this still feels better
  4. 01:46:313 (5) - 01:54:589 (5) - 02:05:624 (5) - Same for these , again just a suggestion to make the difference more obvious . not really needed to apply
  5. 01:59:934 - should rather not skip this cuz u never skipped wub sound like this one before better emphasis for the stronger stuff and don't want a long chain
  6. 02:01:831 - 01:59:072 - what is consistency one of them has a wub on slider end :X
  7. 02:11:141 (1) - Same as in easy
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:796 (2,3) - u could move these a bit down , like 2 or 3 pixels so that they would be more linear towards the reverse arrow of the slider and same for 00:02:175 (2,3) - but in opposite direction
  2. 00:26:141 (3,1) - this is a bit unexpected , the spacing gets pretty intense here so suddenly , i broke my combo here tbh while if u compare it to 00:28:727 (3,1) - .. These two have really small spacing compared to previous one while pattern is same they aren't really the same though, so they are mapped differently, first one has downbeat emphasis, while the other one doesn't have vocal on the downbeat
  3. 01:11:831 - if i m not wrong , isnt this supposed to be two 1/3 sliders like in the previous patterns? the previous patterns played well while this one felt boring ~ This also applies on other patterns like this , maybe u felt lazy to map 2 sliders? jk xd I just avoided spamming it and switched between those
  4. 01:16:831 (1) - Remove NC because u never had NC for this note before different music playing and indicates 1/1 better
  5. 01:39:072 (1,1) - Mis-stacked
  6. 01:45:624 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is way toooooooooo much for a diff like this . i failed on this part because it was almost impossible to read it on the first try even those these kind of diffs are piece of cake for me =w= i really really really recommend u to change this ye I will, once I figure out how lo
  7. 01:50:969 - I think u should add a circle here there is a clear sound here which wasnt much audible at 01:28:900 - it's not as clear as the one's I'm mapping though
  8. 02:06:831 (4) - Forgot to silent slider end?
  9. 02:12:175 - You should somehow manage to make this beat clickable since theres a sick wub sound that starts from there and it should be clickable I would if it wasn't so dense already
ok thats all i guess . last diff is too op for me to mod :<
i need some time to decide which map i want u to mod , gotta confirm with other BNs first xd
gl!
ty
vanucik
Hello

m4m from queue

Check aimod in all diffs

Easy

00:11:572 - 00:12:003 - I don't understand needs the green line in easy?
00:37:348 (2,1) - slider (1), turn left to 2-3 degrees ( that was parallel)
01:51:141 (3) - blanket in this slider can be better
01:56:658 (3) - I would remove this red point to make a smooth S
02:04:934 (3) - Heh

Normal

00:07:003 (3,4,1) - for a good flow
00:09:417 (2,1) - stack
00:49:762 (1,2) - x306:y89
01:24:072 (4) - it is better to ignore the vocals, not to lose quite a powerful sound in a kiai
01:26:486 - add a note

Hard

00:44:244 (1) - this note with the finish requires a spacing
01:03:555 (1) - move the red dot in the middle of the slider, it looks better
01:36:227 - I would put a note, too well she stands out
I don't like is that there are many same and repetitive patterns, for example 01:28:382 (1) - and other, 01:40:107 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - , you repeated this pattern 4 times that is already too much

Insane

00:26:313 (1) - 1\2 the reverse will fit better under the vocals (or slider + note)
01:05:969 (1,1) - a slider with a speed of 1.0 x is best, because it better expresses this powerful sound
01:18:555 (4,1,2,3) - I'm confused when I first played it xd
01:19:762 (4) - Overlap with the accuracy meter (if enabled)
01:29:072 - I think it's better to put more speed, as kik sliders are too short, and 1\2 sliders can be confused with these sliders, they in fact should be played quickly, and you made his slow
01:45:624 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) is lost on these notes at the first testplay, it is better to move a little from each other to better see it. I'm really confused
02:04:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Very hard played

CBH Insane

01:28:038 (2) - maybe 3\4 slider better suited as another Insane?
01:44:934 (1) - ctrl+g+h+j for flow (awkward bend slider)

Sorry to have not written anything on Extra diff, I don't know how to play and modding Extra diff

Very good song choice, good luck
Exote
@DeRandom Otaku

00:22:175 (1) - Space more for emphasis? - it's already spaced from the last section, not going to space it more cause I wanna stay within the range of spacings that I've used throughout the whole map.
00:35:796 (1,2,3,4) - i m assuming that u r following vocals here , if so then it would actually make more sense if u use a different rhythm such as the rhythm u used for 00:34:417 (1,2,3,4,1) - so that the vocal at 00:37:175 - could become clickable because its really emphasized in the song and it should be clickable - what, whatever you just said I don't see any problems with the vocal following, 00:38:555 - might be emphasized but 00:38:727 - is even more and this one is clickable, kinda evens things out
00:44:072 (5,1) - here u stacked 1 under 5 which is a p bad idea because 1 is have loud cymbal which should be emphasized and stacking it under 5 gives it no spacing emphasis - alright
01:08:038 (2,3) - DS - yeah, what? if you mean the stacks, they are fine
01:17:003 (3) - This shape looks rather weird and messy , it should be cooler if u move the red node a bit to the left or maybe just make it symmetry - yea ik, fixed
02:06:313 (4) - NC for consistency - ok
02:11:141 (1,2,1,1) - make these equally spaced? - nah, both pairs of kickliders are spaced equally, so are those such as 01:05:969 (1,1) - 01:28:038 (1,1) - etc

@vanucik5656

00:44:244 (1) - this note with the finish requires a spacing - already fixed
01:03:555 (1) - move the red dot in the middle of the slider, it looks better - ok
01:36:227 - I would put a note, too well she stands out - I don't hear anything strong enough here to put a circle
I don't like is that there are many same and repetitive patterns, for example 01:28:382 (1) - and other, 01:40:107 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - , you repeated this pattern 4 times that is already too much - but isn't the song repetitive as well.. well, let's just say I've run out of ideas, even I agree it's repetitive but my options are limited for a hard diff.

thanks for the mods guys http://puu.sh/rumPn/a448888633.osu
Topic Starter
Strategas

vanucik5656 wrote:

Hello

m4m from queue

Check aimod in all diffs

Easy

00:11:572 - 00:12:003 - I don't understand needs the green line in easy? they are coppied from other diff, but they don't hurt
00:37:348 (2,1) - slider (1), turn left to 2-3 degrees ( that was parallel)
01:51:141 (3) - blanket in this slider can be better tried before but can't avoid overlap then
01:56:658 (3) - I would remove this red point to make a smooth S
02:04:934 (3) - Heh

Normal

00:07:003 (3,4,1) - for a good flow it's fine
00:09:417 (2,1) - stack don't like stacks on normals
00:49:762 (1,2) - x306:y89
01:24:072 (4) - it is better to ignore the vocals, not to lose quite a powerful sound in a kiai
01:26:486 - add a note

Insane

00:26:313 (1) - 1\2 the reverse will fit better under the vocals (or slider + note)
01:05:969 (1,1) - a slider with a speed of 1.0 x is best, because it better expresses this powerful sound the way it is now gives better contrast between sections
01:18:555 (4,1,2,3) - I'm confused when I first played it xd all hitobjects and slider patch are clear for me
01:19:762 (4) - Overlap with the accuracy meter (if enabled)
01:29:072 - I think it's better to put more speed, as kik sliders are too short, and 1\2 sliders can be confused with these sliders, they in fact should be played quickly, and you made his slow it's just what I used for map, weak wubs - slow and strong wubs - fast
01:45:624 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) is lost on these notes at the first testplay, it is better to move a little from each other to better see it. I'm really confused
02:04:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Very hard played keep for now

Sorry to have not written anything on Extra diff, I don't know how to play and modding Extra diff

Very good song choice, good luck
ty
Shyotamaze
Hi, M4M from your queue -> Here's my map if you think my shitty mod it worth a M4M lol https://osu.ppy.sh/s/457042

General
  1. Disable widescreen support on Easy, Normal, Exote's Hard, Insane and CBH's Insane
  2. There are quite a lot of unused green lines tbh, especially in the lower diffs
Insane
  1. 01:07:693 (1,2,3,4) - Here it feels a bit too repetitive imo, maybe try to spice it up by swapping 01:08:038 (2,3) - their position in the timeline or something else idk
  2. 01:53:555 (1) - Some people might think that you tried to stack the tail with 01:52:693 (4) - 's head, I'd suggest to move 01:53:555 (1) - 's a bit to the right (TL;DR: rotate it by -5° or something)
CBH's Insane
  1. 00:39:934 (1) - Try to make the curve more like this one 00:15:451 (2) -
  2. 01:16:141 (2) - I don't really understand what you're trying to map with this reverse slider tbh lol, even if it was on the big white tick it wouldn't follow the vocals properly and I don't think skipping a huge sound like this 01:16:313 is a great idea imo
  3. 02:01:486 (1) - Same sound as 01:55:969 (1,2,1,2) - (+ some others) but mapped differently?
Really nice map, I tried my best tbh but I couldn't find anything on the other diffs I'm really sorry :( take a star
Good luck!
Beomsan
m4m from your queue.
I might use many pictures for explain. because my English isn't good. plz understand me xd
than, let's see

[Easy]

  • seems you didn't delete unused inherited points. I dunno well about inherited points in sliders like 00:11:572 - 00:11:658 - 00:11:744 - (I think it'll be important issue since you using muted slider-slide hitsound.) but 00:11:313 - It must not. right? please make sure these things.
  1. 01:02:175 (2,3,4) - I think this is really hard to NEW players. but seems you want to emphasis here. then, I recommend this. It's more safety pattern and pretty easy to play. also this is good for emphasis.
  2. 02:04:934 (3) - this is probably not what you wanted. you should trim it. roughly this much?
[Normal]

  • this map have same issue with easy diff.
  1. 00:23:382 (2) - ~ 00:24:762 - this is too hard to Normal players imo. I can't mouth-filling explain but It'll causing confusion seriously. at least 00:24:244 - this place is need to switch like this imo. however, other place (00:26:141 (2,3,4,5,1 - 00:31:831 (3,4,5,1) - etc) looks good. because they have a different rhythm. this is strong suggest
  2. 00:34:417 (2,3,4,5,1) - It had the same direction as the previous(00:31:831 (3,4,5,1) - ). idk that why you did so. but this is really weird to me.
  3. 01:15:451 (3,4,5,6,7) - I really don't recommend this. It seems too charged. also, this song is not low bpm at all so this is obviously difficult. if you will change this, I recommend 01:16:313 (6,7) - delete and 01:16:313 - add a 1/2 slider. since 01:15:451 (3,4) - these two notes are required for 01:15:796 (5) - emphasis this.
  4. 01:12:175 (2) - why is this 3/2 slider? It should be 1/1 slider for consistency. also this is really week compared with other places.
  5. 01:23:210 (2) - same as above.
  6. 01:52:693 (5) - it should be 1/2 slider. the reason is really simple 01:51:141 (2,3,4) - following 'woooob wooob' (wtf is this lol) sounds right? that ends 01:52:865 - here.
  7. 01:58:210 (6) - same as above.
  8. 02:03:727 (6) - ^
  9. 02:09:244 (5) - ^ but this also... good ¿ :P
  10. 01:45:624 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd like to 01:47:003 (7) - reverse 01:47:520 - note 01:47:693 - 1/1 slider. current rhythm is a bit confusing to play. I think If you modify it like my suggestion, It would be nice seriously.
  11. 01:55:279 - same as above.
[Exote's Hard]

  • Yeeeeeeaaaaah Strategas, plz check all diff's inherited points!
  1. 01:06:313 - where is the kiai time? lmao
    sorry. because this is completely different with my style. but overall using distance snap and basically not bad flow and rhythm so It's fine I guess.
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:658 (2) - etc. why using 1/8 snap? is there any reason? I think it has no logic at all. also bgm is completely 1/4 snap. isn't it? idk well about this... :(
  2. 00:33:210 (1) - It look like 2/1 like 00:28:038 (2,3) - this. 00:33:038 (4,1) - It was so sudden increases. I'd like to make narrow the distance.
  3. 01:17:348 (1) - why you didn't use a consistent pattern? it looks really weird.
  4. 01:54:933 (3) - stack?
[CBH's Insane]
  1. 00:37:348 (1) - maybe stack on 00:36:486 (2) - this? It'll be more neat.
    CBH is always solid mapper what can I do lol
    great
[Extra]
  1. sliders like 01:00:796 (1) - this. it makes really weird movement. can you remake it? at least I think it's really not good.
  2. 01:18:210 (3) - delete and 01:18:210 - add a note for consistency.
  3. 02:11:572 - delete a note and 02:11:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - move to more distant places? I think 02:11:572 - I think this is not necessary, unfitting and 02:11:572 - > 02:11:658 (1) - this movement is so weird to me.
    that gimmick patterns lmao It is difficult to modding xdxdxd
ok that's all.
overall fun to play. I love gimmick patterns :P
hope this helped. good luck
Exote
@Beomsan

Added kiai

sorry. because this is completely different with my style. but overall using distance snap and basically not bad flow and rhythm so It's fine I guess. -okay?xd

strati bby http://puu.sh/rv0ba/e1517e3163.osu

edit1: disabled widescreen support
Come[Back]Home

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

[CBH]
  1. 00:16:141 (4) - maybe move this 2 or 3 pixels to left so the overlap would look cuter xd Okay
  2. 00:22:175 - Uh that cymbal sounds is so strong in the background , must make it clickable Will do if more point it out
  3. 00:36:486 (2,1) - Stack? Okay
  4. 00:44:244 (1) - 00:45:624 (1) - 00:47:003 (1) - 00:48:382 (1) - for all these , they should end on the blue tick since thats where the sound ends in the background . Currently they sound weird af to me Okay
  5. 00:49:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is sick! Thanks :DD
  6. 01:04:158 (8) - you dont need this circle Okay
  7. 01:20:451 (2) - ctrl g plays much better here Okay
  8. 02:00:107 (1,2) - 02:00:624 (3,4) - These two should really have the same rhythm since the sounds in the background are 100% same and since they are so close to each other in timeline , its easily noticeable during gameplay I wanted to give that part more speed that way, otherwise it would be slown down, and I dont want that. Will fix if more mention it though
  9. 02:01:141 (5,1) - tbh , it looks pretty ugly when ONLY the boarders overlap Fixed
  10. 02:11:141 (1,2,3,4) - same as 02:00:107 (1,2,3,4) -
ok thats all i guess . last diff is too op for me to mod :<
i need some time to decide which map i want u to mod , gotta confirm with other BNs first xd
gl!

vanucik5656 wrote:

Hello


CBH Insane

01:28:038 (2) - maybe 3\4 slider better suited as another Insane? I think 1/4 fits
01:44:934 (1) - ctrl+g+h+j for flow (awkward bend slider) Okay

Sorry to have not written anything on Extra diff, I don't know how to play and modding Extra diff

Very good song choice, good luck

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, M4M from your queue -> Here's my map if you think my shitty mod it worth a M4M lol https://osu.ppy.sh/s/457042

CBH's Insane
  1. 00:39:934 (1) - Try to make the curve more like this one 00:15:451 (2) - Does it really matter?
  2. 01:16:141 (2) - I don't really understand what you're trying to map with this reverse slider tbh lol, even if it was on the big white tick it wouldn't follow the vocals properly and I don't think skipping a huge sound like this 01:16:313 is a great idea imo To give the players some kind of little break, and it fits to strong beats so its fine imo
  3. 02:01:486 (1) - Same sound as 01:55:969 (1,2,1,2) - (+ some others) but mapped differently? See it as a break
Really nice map, I tried my best tbh but I couldn't find anything on the other diffs I'm really sorry :( take a star
Good luck!

Beomsan wrote:

m4m from your queue.


[CBH's Insane]
  1. 00:37:348 (1) - maybe stack on 00:36:486 (2) - this? It'll be more neat. Okay
    CBH is always solid mapper what can I do lol Thanks~
    great

ok that's all.
overall fun to play. I love gimmick patterns :P
hope this helped. good luck
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182,40,111831,5,0,0:0:0:0:
366,122,112003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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167,335,113900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
247,135,114072,1,2,0:3:0:0:
305,315,114244,1,8,1:0:0:0:
238,102,114417,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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334,105,115107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
261,309,115279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
261,309,115451,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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350,281,115796,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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278,87,116658,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,299,116831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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157,160,117348,6,0,L|41:173,1,103.500001974106,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,276,117693,2,0,P|281:233|339:233,1,103.500001974106,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,291,118038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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267,133,118382,2,0,L|247:29,1,103.500001974106,8|2,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
87,289,118727,6,0,B|153:306|153:306|240:286,1,155.250002961159,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,283,119072,2,0,L|368:299,1,103.500001974106,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,222,119417,1,2,0:0:0:0:
279,368,119589,1,2,0:3:0:0:
427,240,119762,1,8,1:0:0:0:
215,123,119934,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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476,265,120451,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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180,13,120969,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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310,252,131486,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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254,312,132348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,101,132520,5,4,1:0:0:0:

Pls add cbh to the Tags
Topic Starter
Strategas

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, M4M from your queue -> Here's my map if you think my shitty mod it worth a M4M lol https://osu.ppy.sh/s/457042

General
  1. Disable widescreen support on Easy, Normal, Exote's Hard, Insane and CBH's Insane
  2. There are quite a lot of unused green lines tbh, especially in the lower diffs
Insane
  1. 01:07:693 (1,2,3,4) - Here it feels a bit too repetitive imo, maybe try to spice it up by swapping 01:08:038 (2,3) - their position in the timeline or something else idk
  2. 01:53:555 (1) - Some people might think that you tried to stack the tail with 01:52:693 (4) - 's head, I'd suggest to move 01:53:555 (1) - 's a bit to the right (TL;DR: rotate it by -5° or something)

Really nice map, I tried my best tbh but I couldn't find anything on the other diffs I'm really sorry :( take a star
Good luck!

Beomsan wrote:

m4m from your queue.
I might use many pictures for explain. because my English isn't good. plz understand me xd
than, let's see

[Easy]

  • seems you didn't delete unused inherited points. I dunno well about inherited points in sliders like 00:11:572 - 00:11:658 - 00:11:744 - (I think it'll be important issue since you using muted slider-slide hitsound.) but 00:11:313 - It must not. right? please make sure these things.
  1. 01:02:175 (2,3,4) - I think this is really hard to NEW players. but seems you want to emphasis here. then, I recommend this. It's more safety pattern and pretty easy to play. also this is good for emphasis.
  2. 02:04:934 (3) - this is probably not what you wanted. you should trim it. roughly this much?
[Normal]

  • this map have same issue with easy diff.
  1. 00:23:382 (2) - ~ 00:24:762 - this is too hard to Normal players imo. I can't mouth-filling explain but It'll causing confusion seriously. at least 00:24:244 - this place is need to switch like this imo. however, other place (00:26:141 (2,3,4,5,1 - 00:31:831 (3,4,5,1) - etc) looks good. because they have a different rhythm. this is strong suggest
  2. 00:34:417 (2,3,4,5,1) - It had the same direction as the previous(00:31:831 (3,4,5,1) - ). idk that why you did so. but this is really weird to me. no real reason it was just easiest to fit in there
  3. 01:15:451 (3,4,5,6,7) - I really don't recommend this. It seems too charged. also, this song is not low bpm at all so this is obviously difficult. if you will change this, I recommend 01:16:313 (6,7) - delete and 01:16:313 - add a 1/2 slider. since 01:15:451 (3,4) - these two notes are required for 01:15:796 (5) - emphasis this.
  4. 01:12:175 (2) - why is this 3/2 slider? It should be 1/1 slider for consistency. also this is really week compared with other places. don't really understand why, the way it is now puts pressure on the snare nicely and I do it often here
  5. 01:23:210 (2) - same as above.
  6. 01:52:693 (5) - it should be 1/2 slider. the reason is really simple 01:51:141 (2,3,4) - following 'woooob wooob' (wtf is this lol) sounds right? that ends 01:52:865 - here. but it's the same as those other 3 wubs, it just has a snare in the middle but I focus on the wub
  7. 01:58:210 (6) - same as above.
  8. 02:03:727 (6) - ^
  9. 02:09:244 (5) - ^ but this also... good ¿ :P
  10. 01:45:624 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd like to 01:47:003 (7) - reverse 01:47:520 - note 01:47:693 - 1/1 slider. current rhythm is a bit confusing to play. I think If you modify it like my suggestion, It would be nice seriously. I wanted to have same emphasis for all of the wubs here, but maybe
  11. 01:55:279 - same as above.
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:658 (2) - etc. why using 1/8 snap? is there any reason? I think it has no logic at all. also bgm is completely 1/4 snap. isn't it? idk well about this... :( because I'm trying to follow the continous buzz sound instead of seperate beats
  2. 00:33:210 (1) - It look like 2/1 like 00:28:038 (2,3) - this. 00:33:038 (4,1) - It was so sudden increases. I'd like to make narrow the distance. it's easy to tell, because there's a drastic change in the metronome, if it was the same as something like 1/1 and 1/2 gap then it would be confusing but now it's not
  3. 01:17:348 (1) - why you didn't use a consistent pattern? it looks really weird. but it's consistant, just the slider shape is different :(
  4. 01:54:933 (3) - stack?
[Extra]
  1. sliders like 01:00:796 (1) - this. it makes really weird movement. can you remake it? at least I think it's really not good. doesn't need to be smooth, goes well with the sound I think
  2. 01:18:210 (3) - delete and 01:18:210 - add a note for consistency. I would have done it at 01:07:175 (4) - but since there's a different buildup I keep, it's the only part where the music repeats here so consistency is not possible here
  3. 02:11:572 - delete a note and 02:11:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - move to more distant places? I think 02:11:572 - I think this is not necessary, unfitting and 02:11:572 - > 02:11:658 (1) - this movement is so weird to me. it's just a stream jump and I'm keeping the notes because the drums continue playing there, and imo it fits well cause emphasis is on the right notes
    that gimmick patterns lmao It is difficult to modding xdxdxd
ok that's all.
overall fun to play. I love gimmick patterns :P
hope this helped. good luck
ty
Yamicchi
Hi :3 M4M?
[Easy]
• 00:20:796 (3) - Just my opinion but I think rotate this by 4* clockwise will make it looks better either in HR or not.
• 00:26:313 (2,3) - the strong beat is on 00:26:831 - so why not making these 2 a 3/2 slider reverse slider?
• 00:31:486 (2,3) - small blanket fix?
• 01:03:555 (1) - Is it necessary to put a NC here?
• 01:38:038 (1,2,3) - isn't this too much for an Easy?
[Normal]
• 00:11:141 (1) - small fix on the stack would ya?
[Exote]
• 00:04:934 (2) - For small consistency you should make either this or 00:02:175 (2) - the same shape tbh
• 00:32:865 (3) - This is really a bad blanket...
• 00:42:865 (1,2) - The pattern should be ctrl + g actually, to show the vocal better
• 01:51:141 (2,3,4,5) - The slider end should be curved a bit for blanket?
• 01:54:589 (1,2,3) - This pattern is really nice but tbh it annoys me really much too due to it's awkwardness while DT, and even while I'm not. Should really find a way to fix it
• 02:05:624 (1,2,3,1,2) - perfect one
• 02:09:244 - you really wanna skip the triple here? I mean it's really obvious but all I found was a slider
[Insane]
• 00:08:382 (1,2,3) - 00:09:762 (1,2,3) - is the spacing really fine? Would like to see some more spacing here so as not to confuse players
• 00:11:141 (1) - I think the strong beat should be shown by hitsound and not by SV. A consistent SV with 00:12:520 (1) - 00:13:900 (1) - ... would be nice
• 00:50:624 (3,4) - 00:52:003 (3,4) - literally the rhythm is the same as 00:52:865 (3,4) - but then you were like double the spacing and for what? I don't think it's necessary
• 01:04:072 (2) - About the strong beats stuff again. I don't think this circle deserves a super large spacing like this. Not every last note is a strong note I think.
• 01:25:624 (1,1) - I saw the stacks inb4 but not this time. What is the reason for it?
• 01:28:037 (9) - Not a big problem but just wanna say this circle should be a 3/4 slider.
• 01:38:038 (1,1,1) - Same increasing effect but I can see that the slider head are not overlap constantly. I can tell that the increasing is 100% same so how about increasing the SV and overlap the sliders constantly too?
• 02:00:107 (1,1,1) - This one is not even increasing hmmm?
• 02:04:934 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern requires movement on cursor, but then 02:05:624 (1,2,3,4) - are not so it might bring confusion to players. Ctrl + g the first part?
• 02:12:175 - same as mentioned inb4 how about a 3/4 slider here?
[CBH's]
• 00:20:796 (1) - A few time confused by the slider. I'd suggest ending it at 00:22:089 - and add a circle in
• 00:49:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A really interesting part but it makes the part afterward seems weak and boring.
• 01:05:969 - did you intend to skip a beat here?
• 01:16:141 (2) - I can understand why there is a weird slider here since it skipped a lot of strong beats and (idk) seems like it's not following any of important rhythms.
• 01:19:072 (3) - For a snare, and compare to the last same part, this slider needs more spacing. :|
• 01:22:520 (5,6) - ^ same as above. And please don't tell me that you're trying to follow the vocal, the pattern can tell that you're not.
• 01:25:279 - I prefer something clickable here, make this a slider end feels a bit down to me.
• Wait I've just realized. No kiai?
• And yea the mapset needs a non-wubs diff like this, because you know...as you and Strategas and everyone else can see in Insane and Extra...
[Extra]
• 00:05:624 - This part should be brought to the first, then the first part later, wanna see some build-up patterns here. The 2nd feels tooa bit easier than the first part.
• 01:14:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - rip emphasis, can't recognize which is drum which is snare anymore
• 01:11:831 (1) - 01:14:589 (1) - 01:17:348 (1) - 01:20:107 (1) - 01:22:865 (1) - 01:25:624 (1) - can't tell the difference between these, so why is the different? (talking about sliders and circles at parts)
• 01:33:210 (1,2,3,4) - Up - down - up - down-ing but then these went straight then down and straight, kinda weird and uncomfortable. Change?
• 01:35:451 (2) - This wub is different to the others, so why is this object's spacing is the same?
• 01:50:796 (2) - Almost out of the screen. Keep in mind that some players that use >1.0x combo meter size won't see 100% slider end.
• 01:51:141 (1) - same here
• 01:54:762 (1) - lol this is a really problem tbh, high wub, but super small spacing
• 02:00:107 (1,1,1) - I think I mentioned this in Insane, so you know what to do
• 02:04:589 (1) - And I was told to fix by Smoothie World because the last slider covers more than 50% of this one, so how can you use this here? Partial?
• 02:05:796 (6) - Different wub here too


That's all for a mod :3
Exote
@Yamicchi

00:04:934 (2) - For small consistency you should make either this or 00:02:175 (2) - the same shape tbh - no, I am fully aware of what and why I did this, to bring variety since it would get very boring to have the same pattern all over again, especially in the beginning
00:32:865 (3) - This is really a bad blanket... - fixed
00:42:865 (1,2) - The pattern should be ctrl + g actually, to show the vocal better - actually the opposite, a.k.a like the current one. Since after the circle on the vocal start, the rest of the 1/2 sliders are starting on red ticks, the same as vocals, you basically click (follow/emphasize) vocals
01:51:141 (2,3,4,5) - The slider end should be curved a bit for blanket? - ok
01:54:589 (1,2,3) - This pattern is really nice but tbh it annoys me really much too due to it's awkwardness while DT, and even while I'm not. Should really find a way to fix it - nah gonna leave it since nomod this plays fine, lower diffs arent made to be DT'd lol
02:09:244 - you really wanna skip the triple here? I mean it's really obvious but all I found was a slider - putting a triple only here would make the whole thing inconsistent, I'd rather stick to the wubs

ty

http://puu.sh/rzGme/21bb0d94a0.osu
Topic Starter
Strategas

Yamicchi wrote:

Hi :3 M4M?
[Easy]
• 00:20:796 (3) - Just my opinion but I think rotate this by 4* clockwise will make it looks better either in HR or not.
• 00:26:313 (2,3) - the strong beat is on 00:26:831 - so why not making these 2 a 3/2 slider reverse slider?
• 00:31:486 (2,3) - small blanket fix?
• 01:03:555 (1) - Is it necessary to put a NC here? not really, but it's better imo
• 01:38:038 (1,2,3) - isn't this too much for an Easy?
[Normal]
• 00:11:141 (1) - small fix on the stack would ya?
[Insane]
• 00:08:382 (1,2,3) - 00:09:762 (1,2,3) - is the spacing really fine? Would like to see some more spacing here so as not to confuse players it's fine it's clearly larger than what I use for 1/2
• 00:11:141 (1) - I think the strong beat should be shown by hitsound and not by SV. A consistent SV with 00:12:520 (1) - 00:13:900 (1) - ... would be nice I use both sv and beat, I think it's the best option, this section not that intense anyway, shouldn't be confusing.
• 00:50:624 (3,4) - 00:52:003 (3,4) - literally the rhythm is the same as 00:52:865 (3,4) - but then you were like double the spacing and for what? I don't think it's necessary uh no, it is still the same spacing you are just looking at the wrong place 00:50:624 (3,4) - 00:53:382 (5,6) - these are the same in the music not the 00:52:865 (3,4) - because 00:52:520 (1,2,3,4) - is the same as 00:49:762 (1,2) -
• 01:04:072 (2) - About the strong beats stuff again. I don't think this circle deserves a super large spacing like this. Not every last note is a strong note I think.
• 01:25:624 (1,1) - I saw the stacks inb4 but not this time. What is the reason for it? I just switch between a few set of paterns I set up? 01:09:072 (1,1) - 01:14:589 (1,1) - etc.
• 01:28:037 (9) - Not a big problem but just wanna say this circle should be a 3/4 slider.
• 01:38:038 (1,1,1) - Same increasing effect but I can see that the slider head are not overlap constantly. I can tell that the increasing is 100% same so how about increasing the SV and overlap the sliders constantly too? it's because the last slider is 3/4 instead of 1/1 like the other two, so it's lower lenght and I didn't want to make the SV too retarded to justify that, all that matters to me there that the slider bodies are aligned don't really care about the part where it starts or ends. same for the other ones and extra
• 02:00:107 (1,1,1) - This one is not even increasing hmmm?
• 02:04:934 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern requires movement on cursor, but then 02:05:624 (1,2,3,4) - are not so it might bring confusion to players. Ctrl + g the first part? the whole point of that part to lower the ammount needed to jump as this is insane diff and I don't want to make it too hard. so it goes from 4 to 2 to 1 places to jump
• 02:12:175 - same as mentioned inb4 how about a 3/4 slider here? this part is different, more dense than the other part so I can't just convert the repeat slider to lenghten the stream, would be too intense in comparison to the rest of the map
[Extra]
• 00:05:624 - This part should be brought to the first, then the first part later, wanna see some build-up patterns here. The 2nd feels tooa bit easier than the first part.
• 01:14:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - rip emphasis, can't recognize which is drum which is snare anymore yeah, but since the drums remade it
• 01:11:831 (1) - 01:14:589 (1) - 01:17:348 (1) - 01:20:107 (1) - 01:22:865 (1) - 01:25:624 (1) - can't tell the difference between these, so why is the different? (talking about sliders and circles at parts) keep switching between those so that it wouldn't get repetitive
• 01:33:210 (1,2,3,4) - Up - down - up - down-ing but then these went straight then down and straight, kinda weird and uncomfortable. Change? don't really see how it would play badly
• 01:35:451 (2) - This wub is different to the others, so why is this object's spacing is the same?
• 01:50:796 (2) - Almost out of the screen. Keep in mind that some players that use >1.0x combo meter size won't see 100% slider end.
• 01:51:141 (1) - same here this one seems ok for me
• 01:54:762 (1) - lol this is a really problem tbh, high wub, but super small spacing it's alright it's not that small and direction/patern change is enough emphasis
• 02:00:107 (1,1,1) - I think I mentioned this in Insane, so you know what to do ye explained in insane
• 02:04:589 (1) - And I was told to fix by Smoothie World because the last slider covers more than 50% of this one, so how can you use this here? Partial?
• 02:05:796 (6) - Different wub here too can't really change without destroying the symmetry lol


That's all for a mod :3
ty changed a lot
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