1. Frightful Space Shuttle - 4Key (4.68 stars, 3837 notes)

Syadow- wrote:

hi om req dari chat :3

General

OD HP mending -> 8,2 / 8,4 , 8 agak ez :v

om Draft

Manyuu~

00:30:550 - ini kick, mending buat triple om

00:33:464 - ini jg kick

00:44:093 (44093|3,44264|2,44607|1) - ini pitchnya tinggi mending diswap col 2 -> 4, col 4 -> 2

01:20:607 - sampai 01:22:664 - 1/3 biar lebih mantapz >w< nope

01:22:664 - 01:23:350 - 1/6 aja, ada suara wrwrwrwsssttt dyar + itung2 nambah SR :VV skip deh anggap ini pattern break ny

01:40:321 - ini sama kek 01:41:007 - , mending triple

01:43:064 - kick, mending buat triple *nambah Sr lagi :v ?

01:45:293 - ini sampai 01:50:093 - 1/3 aja, kalo 1/2 jd aneh imo aneh gimana ?

02:29:179 - 1/3 sampai 02:31:236 - , terus dilanjutin 1/6 sampai 02:31:921 - , masak 1/12 doang yg di cover =3= aa skip

02:51:636 - kick, triple

02:53:864 - 1/3, sama sperti sebelumnya sampai 02:58:664 - nope haha

04:09:293 - tumben 1/12 nya ga dibuat ?? di enakin wkwk

05:40:836 (340836|2) - ghost, ga suara di situ mas remove aja ada suara piano lain itu

05:51:807 (351807|1) - ini jg ^ ^

05:58:664 (358664|1) - jadiin LN biar ena gak deh wkwk

Good Luck >w<

Ilham wrote:

son buy icecreeeaaammm

Timing

first offset, current 13347 -> 13388 then resnap is better i delete this timing :v

Mod

*pattern
01:24:550 (84550|0) - kenapa ini kick 1 note ._. dan ini 2 01:30:036 (90036|3,90036|0) -
01:25:579 (85579|0) - ^ dengan 01:31:064 (91064|1,91064|0) -
01:27:979 (87979|2) - ^ dengan 01:33:464 (93464|0,93464|1) -
01:54:293 - missed note
02:18:207 - mulai sini sampe 02:26:436 mending buat yang di garis merah diisi 1 note aja, kalau putih sama merah diisi 2 note jadi aneh feel nya buat bedain synth+kick sama synth only ?? aneh knp ? itu pas ko buat merah untuk synth and putih untuk kick
02:33:121 - sampe 02:36:550 - kick issues
04:41:693 (281693|2) - ini add di 3, same pitch with 04:41:007 (281007|0,281179|0,281350|0) -
05:57:979 - suara 1/4 nya masih lanjut https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6826467

*random move suggestion
02:01:321 (121321|0,121407|2) - ctrl+G
02:05:864 (125864|1) - jadi 13
02:06:036 (126036|0,126121|1) - ^ ctrl+right
04:20:264 (260264|2) - 4

Another Lie wrote:

Req from queue
Waiting for M4M

Mod

00:29:864 (29864|3,29864|0,29864|2) - double note maybe. Soalnya beda suara sama 00:29:521 (29521|0,29521|3,29521|2) -
00:44:093 (44093|1) - move col 3? suara mirip sama ini 00:43:750 (43750|2) -
00:57:293 - maybe add note lagi? suara lebih keras dari note bawah (just suggestion)
01:38:864 (98864|1,98950|3,99036|2) - dibuat 2|3|4 kalau ngikut comfortability
01:55:579 (115579|0,115636|1,115693|2,115750|3,115807|2,115864|1,115921|0,115979|3,116036|2,116093|1,116150|0,116207|3) - ini emang dibuat susah ya? atau gimana? kalau saran pattern sih gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6833298
02:17:436 (137436|0,137479|2,137521|1,137564|3,137607|2,137650|1,137693|0,137736|3,137779|2,137821|1) - ini serem mas, kalau diganti lagi bisa kah? maybe gini kalo saran pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6833309
03:02:864 - miss?
03:37:064 (217064|2,217236|3,217407|0) - stack 3 OP mas. Saran buat itu
First LN: dibuat kecil aja kyk bawahnya
Second LN: keep sih gpp, lebih PW
Third LN: ^
kalau misalnya mod LN diatas di accept. 03:37:750 - add more note. Suara keras
05:15:121 - add more note

oi oi aslinya itu against rules loh -_-
"I will accept below 3 minutes length, even 03:01, i will not accept it" 6th Rules

Davin Fortune wrote:

Here the mod as m4m that i request

Senya become nanahira

00:29:864 - make it 2 since other part also 2 if the sound is not like the sound that 3 note use, whether there is any emphasize or not (based on what i see)
00:31:236 - ^, should be look like 00:32:607 (32607|2,32607|1,32779|0,32779|1,32779|3) -
00:35:350 (35350|0,35350|3,35393|1,35436|2,35479|3,35521|0,35564|1,35607|3,35650|2,35693|0,35736|1,35779|2,35821|3,35864|1,35907|0,35950|3,35993|2,36036|1,36079|0,36121|2,36164|3,36207|0,36250|1,36293|2,36336|3,36379|1,36421|0,36464|3,36507|2,36550|1,36593|0,36636|3,36679|2) - i don't see any change pitch or vocal change since the vocal and the instrument are not get seperated so maybe just make them into 1 direction (all stair go to left or right not left right left right like now)
00:47:350 - make the note become 2 like 00:36:721 -
01:24:550 - should be one since there isn't any instrument that support this become 2, it isn't like 01:24:721 - (2 note) or 01:24:036 - (3 note), in here i want to make sure that the one get 2 note is only bass and the 3 note is only "maybe" snare
01:25:579 - ^
01:27:979 - ^
01:30:036 - ^
01:44:436 - should be 2 since this is same like 01:44:607 (104607|2,104607|3,104693|0,104693|1,104779|3,104779|2,104864|0,104864|1) -
02:16:836 (136836|3,136836|0,136879|2,136921|1,136964|0,137007|3,137050|2,137093|0,137136|1,137179|3,137221|2,137264|0,137307|1,137350|2,137393|3,137436|0,137479|2,137521|1,137564|3,137607|2,137650|1,137693|0,137736|3,137779|2,137821|1) - like i say before
02:33:121 - umm back to i say before, i'm not gonna mod this part again, also applied to all which has same problem in here, until 02:42:893 -
02:53:007 - should be 2 since tis is same like 02:53:179 (173179|0,173179|3,173264|2,173264|1,173350|0,173350|3,173436|2,173436|1) -
03:50:607 - i think it should be 1 since it don't have sound like for example in 03:50:950 -
04:07:921 - until 04:09:293 - i think the space between the chords still drum sound so why you miss them and make it space between them?

Here i shoot 3 stars for you, since i like the song and your map already pretty tidy

Evening wrote:

:thinking:
http://puu.sh/t4G6e/4c3a843bab.osu

Might need to rename your difficulty to include "4K"

and you will need to shift the red line back a bit (and resnap) since i did that just to allow me to do SVs

Another Lie wrote:

anjeng draftnell kalo punya GD legend ga chat -_-

I have little opinion for you Evening / a.k.a Zenx

7K

Maybe you can add SV 02:53:521 - until this part 02:53:864 -
02:58:664 - until this part 02:59:007 -
05:05:179 - until this part 05:05:521 -

Feel free to reject my opinion ET Evening

Rivals_7 wrote:

Draftnell force to mod this :u
well ofc, feel free to reject since i only have limited experience modding something more than 7* xd. esp. when its 7K

[7K]

00:53:521 (53521|5,53521|1) - maybe you could add more notes like you do on every downbeats up until - 00:55:921 - ? since its also crash too

Kinda slipped my mind when i was mapping this i think, added them on the crashes

01:20:607 - maybe its better if you do polyrythming instead of this. since the blue line have some synth noise too

ehh, I personally don't hear it, if there is actually a sound, I think it's too soft to map to it since I prefer to map the more prominent ones

01:45:464 (105464|1,105464|3) - move right 1x i guess. doesnt seem to be have the same pitch with - 01:45:293 (105293|1,105293|3) -

oki done

01:56:093 (116093|1,116136|2,116179|3,116221|4) - pitch is descending down but uh.... might want to rearrange

kinda staired them towards the center as it was more comfy, I'll give a try to force PR here in though

02:08:264 (128264|5,128436|5,128607|5,128779|5,128950|5,129121|5,129293|5) - this might be quite troublesome.

personally don't think it'd be much of a problem for players at this level but I rearranged it just in case anyways

02:20:607 (140607|2,140607|4,140607|0,140607|6,140607|3) - not a 1/4 LN?

mapping to the vocals here

02:28:407 (148407|4) - should be in the red line below (1/4)

mapping the vocals here too actually, not sure if this change will feel better but I'll try it out for now

02:53:864 (173864|6,174121|5,174379|4) - emm idk. the noise are exist for like 1/2 beat but the LNs is long

yea, not really going for accuracy for this pattern, else it'd be really boring lol

03:52:036 (232036|2,232093|3) - http://puu.sh/t8eF0/cfd107934a.jpg i think you were following guitar but the snap is kinda ambiguous so might be better to snap it as drum since most of this section are focused to drum

I'm quite certain that there are 3 guitar instrumentals there so I approximated it to 1/6, I don't really wanna do 1/4 all the way since that's kinda plain

05:57:121 (357121|4,357636|4) - should be in separated colums since it doesnt have the same pitch

pretty sure it's the same pitch actually

eh.... nub mod huhu ;w;
i dont think i have suggestion for SVs but there's some potential place to have more SVs tho. you decide.

Good Luck furthermore c: