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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 05, 2017 at 12:50:25 PM

Artist: Shiena Nishizawa
Title: The Asterisk War
Source: 学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags: 2nd second season opening gakusen toshi academy city on water j-rock tv size west ground keweft
BPM: 143
Filesize: 3826kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:

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Gakusen Toshi Asterisk
the opening theme for the second season of the anime

The Asterisk War
Shiena Nishizawa



Status: RANKED


Image by Mam Protastic101
Image by Sir Kawawa


Difficulty:


  • 4K/7K Easy - for beginners. Various basic 1/2 notes patterns with some really easy 1/4 notes.
  • 4K/7K Normal - for average players. More 1/2 notes and some addition of 1/4 for the percussions.
  • 4K/7K Hard - for intermediate players. Full percussion notes are implemented in the difficulty, feels like drummer.
  • 4K/7K Insane - for amateur players that can handle full percussion notes along with other instruments such as power guitar and synthesizers.
  • 4K/7K Maximum Genestella - for veteran players. More dense in terms of notes and more detailed long sound of guitars and synthesizers. Better set up your strategies, get ready your weapons, and be the best Genestella. Let the ASTERISK WAR begins!


Thank you for these helpful people below!


Modders: count - 17

  • Syadow- - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal
  • LuckyLemon - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 7K Easy, 7K Normal
  • Aras25 - Modded: 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane with Hitsound Mod!
  • Rivals_7 - Modded: 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 4K Maximum, 7K Normal, 7K Hard, 7K Insane, 7K Maximum with Hitsound Mod!
  • Dellvangel - Modded: 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 4K Maximum
  • M o M o- Modded: 4K Insane, 4K Maximum
  • -SoraGami- - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 7K Easy, 7K Normal, 7K Hard, 7K Insane
  • Seraphin - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane, 4K Maximum
  • Verniy_Chan - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Hard, 4K Insane With Metadata and Hitsound mod!
  • JztCallMeRon - Modded: 7K Normal, 7K Maximum Genestella
  • DixonBlackwing - Modded: 4K Easy, 4K Normal, 4K Maximum, 7K Easy, 7K Normal, 7K Maximum
  • Lenfried- - Modded: 4K Maximum, 7K Insane, 7K Maximum
  • ArcherLove - Modded: 4K Easy, 7K Easy
  • dudehacker - Modded: 7K Easy, 7K Normal, 7K Hard and HITSOUNDS!
  • stryver12 - Modded: ALL 7K Difficulties
  • Adiopulse - Modded: ALL 4K Diffficulties
  • Protastic101 - BN CHECK Modded: All Difficulties!
  • Kawawa - BN CHECK Modded: All Difficulties!


Changelog:

  • Started mapping - August 21, 2016
  • Finished All Difficulties - August 22, 2016
  • Added Temporary BG
  • Added Hitsound - August 23, 2016
  • Submitted the map to osu - August 24, 2016
  • 1st mod applied along with self mod on 7K Normal and 7K Hard - August 25, 2016
  • 2nd mod applied - August 25, 2016
  • 3rd mod applied - August 25, 2016
  • 4th mod applied - August 25, 2016
  • 5th mod and selfmod applied - August 25, 2016
  • 6th mod applied - August 26, 2016
  • 7th mod applied - August 27, 2016
  • 8th mod applied - August 27, 2016
  • Some minor changes applied in 4K Maximum Genestella by self-mod - August 27, 2016
  • 9th mod applied - August 28, 2016
  • 10th mod applied - August 28, 2016
  • 11th mod applied - August 29, 2016
  • 12th mod applied - August 29, 2016
  • 13th mod applied - October 26, 2016
  • 14th mod applied - October 26, 2016
  • 15th mod applied - October 26, 2016
  • 16th mod applied - October 26, 2016
  • Added new sets of hitsounds (thanks to dudehacker!) - October 26, 2016
  • self mod applied. some major fixes applied - October 27, 2016
  • Changed BG, Image by Keweft - October 31, 2016
  • 17th mod applied, BEATMAP NOMINATOR Protastic101's - November 19, 2016
  • BUBBLED! by Mam Protastic - November 21, 2016
  • 18th mod applied, BEATMAP NOMINATOR Kawawa's - April 05, 2017
  • Removed "2" at Source, based on https://osu.ppy.sh/s/440397 - April 05, 2017
  • QUALIFIED! by Sir Kawawa - April 05, 2017
  • RANKED! Thank you so much for all the people who helped! :oops:



Thank you for playing! Keep your battle on!
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feel free to reject

4k NM
00:23:783 - add note
00:26:825 (26825|1,27035|2,27245|3) - maybe short note here and add note 00:27:140 -
00:27:664 - add note
00:28:713 (28713|2) - i think this note move to 00:28:818 -
00:30:497 - add note here too
00:32:070 (32070|2) - move to 00:31:965 - and add note here 00:32:175 -
00:33:329 - add note
00:28:504 - u put double here but 00:33:539 - only 1 ? add note
00:35:217 - ^
00:35:532 - add note cuz make me mindblock
00:36:161 - ^
00:37:210 - ^
00:37:839 - 00:37:944 - 00:38:049 - ^
00:38:364 - ^
00:38:888 - ^
00:39:518 - ^
00:40:567 - ^
00:41:196 - ^
00:56:825 - idk add note or empty for this ;w;
01:00:392 - add note for cymbal
01:02:070 - ^
01:13:294 (73294|0,73504|0,73713|0) - to much in col 1 spread it plz
01:17:175 - ^
01:18:853 - ^

4K hard
00:22:105 - add note here
00:22:734 - add note
00:27:140 - ^
00:27:664 - ^
00:28:399 - ^
maybe 00:28:713 (28713|1) - move to 00:28:609 -
00:28:818 - add note
00:31:965 - ^
00:32:175 - ^
00:33:434 - ^
maybe 00:33:748 (33748|1) - move to 00:33:853 -
00:35:217 - add note for cymbal
00:37:105 - add note
00:37:734 - ^

i think that diff can make me mindblock at the moment
Check again with other diff
maybe i'll mod again in 2nd part if not busy
Nice map Good luck xD cuu cuu
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4k NM

00:23:783 - add note following the guitar here

00:26:825 (26825|1,27035|2,27245|3) - maybe short note here and add note 00:27:140 - changed the LNs to short notes but I won't add note since its only following the guitar

00:27:664 - add note no additional instrument also I am avoiding LN with a note beside it in this difficulty

00:28:713 (28713|2) - i think this note move to 00:28:818 - following the guitar

00:30:497 - add note here too following the guitar

00:32:070 (32070|2) - move to 00:31:965 - and add note here 00:32:175 - same reason

00:33:329 - add note ok!

00:28:504 - u put double here but 00:33:539 - only 1 ? add note fixed
00:35:217 - ^ I let it single since its only for the synth

00:35:532 - add note cuz make me mindblock
00:36:161 - ^
00:37:210 - ^
00:37:839 - 00:37:944 - 00:38:049 - ^
00:38:364 - ^
00:38:888 - ^
00:39:518 - ^
00:40:567 - ^
00:41:196 - ^ I did add some notes but only some piano and vocal with instrument. Still thanks for pointing out!

00:56:825 - idk add note or empty for this ;w; the LN serve as the drum roll so I wont add any note on it.

01:00:392 - add note for cymbal
01:02:070 - ^ added both

01:13:294 (73294|0,73504|0,73713|0) - to much in col 1 spread it plz rearranged

01:17:175 - ^
01:18:853 - ^ added both for cymbals. thanks!


4K hard
00:22:105 - add note here ok

00:22:734 - add note ok

00:27:140 - ^ ok

00:27:664 - ^ following the percussion only

00:28:399 - ^ added

maybe 00:28:713 (28713|1) - move to 00:28:609 - ok

00:28:818 - add note ok

00:31:965 - ^ ok

00:32:175 - ^ ok

00:33:434 - ^ ok

maybe 00:33:748 (33748|1) - move to 00:33:853 - ok

00:35:217 - add note for cymbal ok

00:37:105 - add note synth only

00:37:734 - ^ only following synth


i think that diff can make me mindblock at the moment
Check again with other diff
maybe i'll mod again in 2nd part if not busy
Nice map Good luck xD cuu cuu




Thank you so much for that mod and a star as support! Syadow~! Much appreciated :oops:
1st Mod applied and.. UPDATED!

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hi, could only do the two easier 7K difficulties as I'm not good with their structure and whats normal or not :)

4K Easy
00:49:063 - why not add a ln here? unless you wasn't following the vocals and was following the other instrument

01:16:336 (76336|3,76755|0) - change this to, http://puu.sh/qN8YN.png


4K Normal
00:31:965 - add note here in 2?

00:49:063 - same as easy add the ln


4K Hard
00:35:846 (35846|2) - move to 1

00:37:525 (37525|0,37839|0) - move to 2

00:37:525 (37525|0,37839|0) - add a note in 3?

00:32:804 (32804|2) - double like previous patterns


4K Insane
01:17:175 (77175|3,77175|0,77175|1) - I don't know why but I just find this part too dense. Would be better if focused on one element such as either just the ln's or the other instruments from the start

On a side note, by just using ln's for the end part it only goes down to 4.2*


7K Easy
00:36:161 - add note here

00:47:280 (47280|3) - delete and replace with two notes, one 00:47:175 - and one 00:47:385 -


7K Normal
01:10:357 (70357|3) - maybe delete to make it more comfortable like the same pattern used here 01:02:909
(62909|0,63119|4,63224|2,63434|6,63539|4,63748|1,63748|0) -

01:08:783 - add another note here


Sorry the mod is quite short, the structure of the whole mapset is very good and, I love those HITSOUNDS!!

Anyway, good luck and I look forward to seeing this ranked :)
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hi, could only do the two easier 7K difficulties as I'm not good with their structure and whats normal or not :)

4K Easy
00:49:063 - why not add a ln here? unless you wasn't following the vocals and was following the other instrument there's no instrument on that part, only vocal alone

01:16:336 (76336|3,76755|0) - change this to, http://puu.sh/qN8YN.png I assume you are pertaining to the guitar but the synth's long sound is more consistent.


4K Normal
00:31:965 - add note here in 2? I am thinking of this as well since its a tom sound and has more consistency. Applied.

00:49:063 - same as easy add the ln vocal alone


4K Hard
00:35:846 (35846|2) - move to 1 moved to 2 instead so it can be same below

00:37:525 (37525|0,37839|0) - move to 2 applied

00:37:525 (37525|0,37839|0) - add a note in 3? only following synths

00:32:804 (32804|2) - double like previous patterns this is only a bass drum, not snare.


4K Insane
01:17:175 (77175|3,77175|0,77175|1) - I don't know why but I just find this part too dense. Would be better if focused on one element such as either just the ln's or the other instruments from the start It has a strong starting sound which is kinda different compared to the 1st phase of the song.

On a side note, by just using ln's for the end part it only goes down to 4.2* yep, and I am avoiding reduce of SR as it will change icon to H haha.


7K Easy
00:36:161 - add note here nice notice~ applied.

00:47:280 (47280|3) - delete and replace with two notes, one 00:47:175 - and one 00:47:385 - nice variation suggestion, applied.


7K Normal
01:10:357 (70357|3) - maybe delete to make it more comfortable like the same pattern used here 01:02:909
(62909|0,63119|4,63224|2,63434|6,63539|4,63748|1,63748|0) - I thought of this as well but it seems it really gets in way, removed

01:08:783 - add another note here great notice! thanks. added.


Sorry the mod is quite short, the structure of the whole mapset is very good and, I love those

Anyway, good luck and I look forward to seeing this ranked :) thank you so much for the support, feedback, and test play~!



Thank you so much for that mod and testplay support! LuckyLemon~ Much appreciated :oops:
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|1|2|3|4|

HS :
N = Normal
F = Finish
W = Whostle
C = Clap

Normal
- 00:38:364 - add?
- 01:14:343 (74343|3,74762|2) - ctrl +j? the idea is to have the "kat" drum at col.1 and 4 in this part, as for 01:14:972 (74972|0) - you can just leave it there as there is this 1/4 stream after it
- 01:15:497 - what do you think?
- 01:22:210 - adding 1 note in 4 is fine I thing, I mean, this song bpm is only 140, and also at this part, there is this "kat kat kat" sounds located here 01:22:210 - here 01:22:630 -, and here 01:23:049 -
- 00:09:308 (9308|1) - it's C here senpai


Hard
- 00:09:308 (9308|2) - add 1 note and use C here, same like 00:10:986 (10986|0,10986|1) -
- 00:10:671 (10671|0) - delete, same like 00:08:993 (8993|2) -
- 00:12:664 (12664|1) - add 1
- 00:16:126 (16126|2,16231|3) - ctrl + J? pich will not be followed, but I think it's a better flow, eh, NVM current is fine too
- 00:18:434 - add 1 here? the guitar is just so WOAAAAA
- 00:22:839 (22839|0) - delete? and 00:22:734 (22734|2) - add?
- 00:32:804 (32804|3) - 2 maybe? It's not so loud thou
- 01:08:783 (68783|3) - F here
- for this sound 01:08:678 (68678|1) - , you used C before
- 01:08:888 - missing?
- 01:09:937 - ^


Insane
- 00:17:595 (17595|2) - move to 4? to fit with 00:17:909 (17909|0) -
- 00:22:734 (22734|1,22839|3,22839|2) - same like in other diff
- 00:45:287 - at this part, for this diff and harder, how about make it like this? 321 is to easy I think, and 312 feels somewhat more compatible imo
- 01:06:371 - just a "meh" pattern variation suggestion
- 01:21:790 (81790|1) - F

mod on Insane diff is kinda short, so I guess you can count this as 2 diff maybe? nah, IDK, hope this help u.u
out of topic, but will you become BN someday arcwin-senpai? =3=

edit : don't mod ADVANCED diff on my map
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|1|2|3|4|

HS :
N = Normal
F = Finish
W = Whostle
C = Clap

Normal
- 00:38:364 - add? nice catch!

- 01:14:343 (74343|3,74762|2) - ctrl +j? the idea is to have the "kat" drum at col.1 and 4 in this part, as for 01:14:972 (74972|0) - you can just leave it there as there is this 1/4 stream after it very nice suggestion~

- 01:15:497 - what do you think? alright~

- 01:22:210 - adding 1 note in 4 is fine I thing, I mean, this song bpm is only 140, and also at this part, there is this "kat kat kat" sounds located here 01:22:210 - here 01:22:630 -, and here 01:23:049 - nice catch~

- 00:09:308 (9308|1) - it's C here senpai thanks for the correction! applied in all difficulties~


Hard
- 00:09:308 (9308|2) - add 1 note and use C here, same like 00:10:986 (10986|0,10986|1) - ok!

- 00:10:671 (10671|0) - delete, same like 00:08:993 (8993|2) - ok!

- 00:12:664 (12664|1) - add 1 ok!

- 00:16:126 (16126|2,16231|3) - ctrl + J? pich will not be followed, but I think it's a better flow, eh, NVM current is fine too keeping

- 00:18:434 - add 1 here? the guitar is just so WOAAAAA ikr? :3 but I will not add triples in this difficulty.

- 00:22:839 (22839|0) - delete? and 00:22:734 (22734|2) - add? ok!

- 00:32:804 (32804|3) - 2 maybe? It's not so loud thou added anyway, its a snare so yeah :v

- 01:08:783 (68783|3) - F here Thanks!

- for this sound 01:08:678 (68678|1) - , you used C before Thaanks!

- 01:08:888 - missing? this is very low volumed kick. But it seems yeah, I guess I'll note for it since it kinda feels empty with that gap. added on most difficulty.

- 01:09:937 - ^ thaanks!


Insane
- 00:17:595 (17595|2) - move to 4? to fit with 00:17:909 (17909|0) - ok!

- 00:22:734 (22734|1,22839|3,22839|2) - same like in other diff fixed!

- 00:45:287 - at this part, for this diff and harder, how about make it like this? 321 is to easy I think, and 312 feels somewhat more compatible imo ok!

- 01:06:371 - [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5929949]just a "meh" pattern variation suggestion ok!

/url

- 01:21:790 (81790|1) - F


mod on Insane diff is kinda short, so I guess you can count this as 2 diff maybe? nah, IDK, hope this help u.u every mod is helpful =w=)b
out of topic, but will you become BN someday arcwin-senpai? =3= I do not know about that yet, but without taking BN examination, I won't be a BN and I am not interested in exams coz I am lazy to do that haha :D

edit : don't mod ADVANCED diff on my map got it~


Thank you so much for that mod! Aras25~ Much appreciated :oops:
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Hi o/
M4M from your queue :3

1|2|3|4|5|6|7


General

soft-hitwhistle is below 100ms
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Fix -> http://puu.sh/qNJeo/f4016daadf.wav



4K Max Gen

00:09:308 (9308|2) - should be C? its a same snare like - 00:10:986 (10986|3) -

00:20:532 (20532|2) - add W to emphasize the beat?

00:21:790 (21790|3) - ^

00:28:504 (28504|2) - ^

I quite didnt understand most of the LN usage at - 00:21:790 -> - 00:33:329 - . If its follow guitar, it didnt constant with the pitch. It seems not following vocal either

00:35:532 (35532|0) - 00:36:161 (36161|0) - 00:37:210 (37210|3) - 00:37:839 (37839|3) - 00:38:888 (38888|1) - 00:39:518 (39518|1) -
All of these^ Could be doubled. They have same instrument like - 00:35:846 (35846|0,35846|1) -

00:41:091 -> - 00:41:930 - The pitch change every 1/4? so maybe will be like -
Image

00:57:245 - it seems there's another kick here?

01:00:392 (60392|0) - W?

01:08:678 (68678|2,68783|1) - it seems this should be C|W respectively instead

01:10:462 (70462|2) - W?

01:13:818 (73818|1) - ^

01:15:497 (75497|1,75602|2,75706|1) - C|C|W Respctively?

01:16:755 (76755|3,76755|0) - emm quite faint... reduce one note?


7K Max Gen

00:12:664 (12664|0,12664|1) - pretty sure this is louder than - 00:12:769 (12769|5,12769|3,12769|6) - . Also its the same as - 00:12:979 (12979|4,12979|3,12979|6) - so its rather inconsistent layering according to instrument here

00:14:343 (14343|0,14343|1) - 00:16:021 (16021|5,16021|6) - 00:19:378 (19378|0,19378|1) - should be three noter?

00:34:850 (34850|5) - emm what? there's no distort noise like - 00:34:955 (34955|0,35007|1,35060|2,35112|6,35164|5,35217|4) - it seems. so delete?

00:35:532 (35532|4) - 00:36:161 (36161|5) - 00:37:210 (37210|1) - 00:38:888 (38888|1) - This could be double. According to the instrument you mapped (pretty much similar like in 4K)

00:46:021 (46021|6,46441|2) - oookeeyy any reason why you map this but not in 4K? Since both diff are made by you, it seems pretty inconsistent.
Image

01:00:287 (60287|4,60392|3) - C|W respectively? (might applied to the 4K Max Gen, i think I missed it)


4K Insane

00:07:315 (7315|0) - make this an LN? short buildup noise tho

00:16:126 - how about
Image
since - 00:16:231 (16231|3) - are pretty loud and seems worthy to be doubled

00:31:965 - seems there's some low snare. add?

01:14:343 (74343|0,74553|0,74762|0) - these seems unecessary, despite these - 01:14:762 (74762|3,74762|0) - having a different drum pitch from the other two noter below. so move - 01:14:762 (74762|0) - to 2


7K Insane

00:02:909 (2909|3,3119|3,3329|3) - dunno :/ anchoring the spacebar doesnt seem rly nice, so just move - 00:03:119 (3119|3) - to 3? (quite aesthetical too it seems)

00:03:748 - add on 3 - 00:03:853 - add on 5 or 7. Its the same like - 00:05:427 (5427|2,5532|5) -

00:16:755 (16755|1,16755|2,17070|1,17070|2,17385|2,17385|1,17699|2,17699|1,17909|1) - rip left hand lol.
I guess you can make this balanced. just a suggestion, i'm sure you can do better
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00:31:965 - liitle snare. add?


4K Hard

00:01:651 (1651|3,2280|2) - this and other similar sound above, how about make it into a 1/2 LN? its a long guitar tho

01:15:916 (75916|2,76021|1) - emm swap? i found - 01:15:706 (75706|2,75916|2) - not rly comfy for me :>

01:23:154 (83154|3,83364|2) - maybe just my preference but it seems better handling if its swapped


7K Hard

00:11:406 (11406|4,11616|2) - emm 4K Hard doesnt have this tho. why is this here? i thought both 4K and 7K should be equal in term of layering, especially when both of them are in the similar diff zone ("Hard" diff, in this case)

00:13:084 (13084|4) - same^

00:18:119 (18119|2,18329|4) - ^

01:23:678 (83678|5,83783|1) - move it to 5|3 respectively? i just dont really like these - 01:23:259 (83259|5,83364|1,83469|5,83574|1,83678|5,83783|1) - lel


4K Normal

00:34:273 - should add one more note i guess. I heard drum

00:36:161 - 00:37:839 - 00:39:518 - why you ignoring these while - 00:41:196 (41196|0) - not? its the exact same noise

01:02:909 (62909|1,63224|2,63539|3) - seems people with quite low finger independence might have a hard time 300-ed these. I suggest to connect the LN each other sequentially

01:09:623 (69623|2,69937|1,70252|0) - ^

01:12:245 (72245|0,72560|0,72874|0,73084|0,73504|0,73713|0) - Image
emm sounds heavy on the left side. if possible try to spread them out


7K Normal
00:14:657 (14657|2,14762|5,14867|4) - I suggest moving these to 5|3|6 respectively for more comfy gameplay

00:27:245 (27245|6) - should add one more note for loud drum here. maybe at 2

Not really much i guess :/ But yey :D I'm kinda lazy to mod these days so i think my modding skill are kinda missing huehue xD
Good luck :D /
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Hi arcwin, M4M from your queue.

1|2|3|4

4K Maximum Genestella


4K Insane


4K Hard


4K Normal

good luck! :)
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M4M from your queue :3

1|2|3|4|5|6|7


General

soft-hitwhistle is below 100ms
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Fix -> http://puu.sh/qNJeo/f4016daadf.wav Thanks alot!



4K Max Gen

00:09:308 (9308|2) - should be C? its a same snare like - 00:10:986 (10986|3) - oh already fixed by the other mod before this (it seems this is the later version)

00:20:532 (20532|2) - add W to emphasize the beat? I'll let the F alone

00:21:790 (21790|3) - ^

00:28:504 (28504|2) - ^

I quite didnt understand most of the LN usage at - 00:21:790 -> - 00:33:329 - . If its follow guitar, it didnt constant with the pitch. It seems not following vocal either It is the guitar, though it might be not pitch relevant pattern, I made it comfortable for the percussion notes.

00:35:532 (35532|0) - 00:36:161 (36161|0) - 00:37:210 (37210|3) - 00:37:839 (37839|3) - 00:38:888 (38888|1) - 00:39:518 (39518|1) -
All of these^ Could be doubled. They have same instrument like - 00:35:846 (35846|0,35846|1) - oooh nice catch! thanks~

00:41:091 -> - 00:41:930 - The pitch change every 1/4? so maybe will be like -
Image I'll keep my pattern, focusing on vocal's long sound

00:57:245 - it seems there's another kick here? I don't hear any kick here, or if there's a kick, it is quite inaudible

01:00:392 (60392|0) - W?
01:08:678 (68678|2,68783|1) - it seems this should be C|W respectively instead
01:10:462 (70462|2) - W?
01:13:818 (73818|1) - ^
all of them are already fixed on the new version, though I didn't use W but F on some parts since it has cymbals.

01:15:497 (75497|1,75602|2,75706|1) - C|C|W Respctively? whoa great catch! Thanks! applied on all difficulty~

01:16:755 (76755|3,76755|0) - emm quite faint... reduce one note? already reduced in the new version


7K Max Gen

00:12:664 (12664|0,12664|1) - pretty sure this is louder than - 00:12:769 (12769|5,12769|3,12769|6) - . Also its the same as - 00:12:979 (12979|4,12979|3,12979|6) - so its rather inconsistent layering according to instrument here oops, seems misplaced that one. Fixed

00:14:343 (14343|0,14343|1) - 00:16:021 (16021|5,16021|6) - 00:19:378 (19378|0,19378|1) - should be three noter? all fixed, thanks!

00:34:850 (34850|5) - emm what? there's no distort noise like - 00:34:955 (34955|0,35007|1,35060|2,35112|6,35164|5,35217|4) - it seems. so delete? I've been thinking about this, but yeah it seems no at this measure line. Moved the note beside the previous note anyway.

00:35:532 (35532|4) - 00:36:161 (36161|5) - 00:37:210 (37210|1) - 00:38:888 (38888|1) - This could be double. According to the instrument you mapped (pretty much similar like in 4K) thanks! rearranged some patterns as well~

00:46:021 (46021|6,46441|2) - oookeeyy any reason why you map this but not in 4K? Since both diff are made by you, it seems pretty inconsistent.
Image fixed by adding on 4K Maximum Genestella

01:00:287 (60287|4,60392|3) - C|W respectively? (might applied to the 4K Max Gen, i think I missed it) great catch! though the W will be F since cymbals is there. Applied on all difficulty


4K Insane

00:07:315 (7315|0) - make this an LN? short buildup noise tho ok!

00:16:126 - how about
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since - 00:16:231 (16231|3) - are pretty loud and seems worthy to be doubled applied on a different pattern arrangement, though I didn't doubled just to give way for the double of the snare next to it.

00:31:965 - seems there's some low snare. add? damn I forgot about this, thanks

01:14:343 (74343|0,74553|0,74762|0) - these seems unecessary, despite these - 01:14:762 (74762|3,74762|0) - having a different drum pitch from the other two noter below. so move - 01:14:762 (74762|0) - to 2 alright~


7K Insane

00:02:909 (2909|3,3119|3,3329|3) - dunno :/ anchoring the spacebar doesnt seem rly nice, so just move - 00:03:119 (3119|3) - to 3? (quite aesthetical too it seems) ok!

00:03:748 - add on 3 - 00:03:853 - add on 5 or 7. Its the same like - 00:05:427 (5427|2,5532|5) - ok!

00:16:755 (16755|1,16755|2,17070|1,17070|2,17385|2,17385|1,17699|2,17699|1,17909|1) - rip left hand lol.
I guess you can make this balanced. just a suggestion, i'm sure you can do better
Image ok! but on different approach~

00:31:965 - liitle snare. add?


4K Hard

00:01:651 (1651|3,2280|2) - this and other similar sound above, how about make it into a 1/2 LN? its a long guitar tho won't add LN for guitar on this difficulty

01:15:916 (75916|2,76021|1) - emm swap? i found - 01:15:706 (75706|2,75916|2) - not rly comfy for me :> rearranged on a different approach.

01:23:154 (83154|3,83364|2) - maybe just my preference but it seems better handling if its swapped ok!


7K Hard

00:11:406 (11406|4,11616|2) - emm 4K Hard doesnt have this tho. why is this here? i thought both 4K and 7K should be equal in term of layering, especially when both of them are in the similar diff zone ("Hard" diff, in this case) added this as variation for 4K Hard so it can be higher SR. When two difficulties are exactly the same but different keys like 4K and 7K, 4K is higher on SR (tested). I want the 7Ks' harder than 4Ks'

00:13:084 (13084|4) - same^

00:18:119 (18119|2,18329|4) - ^

01:23:678 (83678|5,83783|1) - move it to 5|3 respectively? i just dont really like these - 01:23:259 (83259|5,83364|1,83469|5,83574|1,83678|5,83783|1) - lel applied your idea and rearrange the doubles after those singles.


4K Normal

00:34:273 - should add one more note i guess. I heard drum kinda hard to execute

00:36:161 - 00:37:839 - 00:39:518 - why you ignoring these while - 00:41:196 (41196|0) - not? its the exact same noise ok!

01:02:909 (62909|1,63224|2,63539|3) - seems people with quite low finger independence might have a hard time 300-ed these. I suggest to connect the LN each other sequentially I'll keep since its the exact length of the long sound synth

01:09:623 (69623|2,69937|1,70252|0) - ^

01:12:245 (72245|0,72560|0,72874|0,73084|0,73504|0,73713|0) - Image
emm sounds heavy on the left side. if possible try to spread them out moved 01:12:560 (72560|1) - to 2 instead


7K Normal
00:14:657 (14657|2,14762|5,14867|4) - I suggest moving these to 5|3|6 respectively for more comfy gameplay ok
00:27:245 (27245|6) - should add one more note for loud drum here. maybe at 2 applied on different approach

Not really much i guess :/ But yey :D I'm kinda lazy to mod these days so i think my modding skill are kinda missing huehue xD very helpful mod to be honest~
Good luck :D/ thanks!


Thank you so much for that mod! Rivals_7~ Much appreciated :oops:
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Hi arcwin, M4M from your queue.

1|2|3|4

4K Maximum Genestella
ok!


4K Insane


4K Hard


4K Normal

good luck! :) Thank you!


Thank you so much for that mod! Dellvangel~ Much appreciated :oops:
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o yea, dunno if you notice yet. But pls compress the background from PNG to JPG pls xD
it tooks 1,65mb :u
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o yea, dunno if you notice yet. But pls compress the background from PNG to JPG pls xD
it tooks 1,65mb :u


Png seems fine though, I used it on my previous ranked map @@
but this is just a temporary BG, will change soon~

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arcwin-senpai 777th post is spend to reply my mod, >//<

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Hi arcwin :3/ for M4M
Columns 1,2,3,4
4K Maximum Genestella
00:04:168 (4168|3) - Extend this ln to 00:04:378 - (Is same sound here 00:04:797 (4797|3) -)
00:09:203 - I think this is better https://puu.sh/qOb5f/6f2e1c3fc7.jpg for this reason https://puu.sh/qObIh/1e7b0e28d2.jpg
00:10:462 - ^ https://puu.sh/qOc4j/237de46ccc.jpg same reason
00:12:560 (12560|0) - ^ move to 2
00:15:182 - ^ https://puu.sh/qOcu5/a99a079a7c.jpg same reason
00:17:175 - ^ https://puu.sh/qOcEr/6b3ab8e26d.jpg
^ it's just a suggestion :3
00:27:664 - You like this? https://puu.sh/qOdc4/e560ec81ac.jpg for this reason 00:27:874 - i think this need double note
00:29:762 - 00:31:441 - 00:33:119 - add a note, is same sound here 00:23:049 - 00:24:727 - 00:26:406 -
00:39:832 (39832|1) - move to 1
01:16:021 - I think this is better https://puu.sh/qOe5Y/c7c33d5cbf.jpg

4K Insane

Sorry for short mod xD is nice map
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