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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, October 2, 2016 at 5:19:21 PM

Artist: Afgan
Title: Jodoh Pasti Bertemu
Tags: live L1ve To Love Afgansyah Reza Cut Version Trinity Optima Production Bahasa Indonesia Indonesian
BPM: 68
Filesize: 2953kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  • Cup (1.11 stars, 105 notes)
  • Platter (2.28 stars, 186 notes)
  • Salad (1.6 stars, 151 notes)

Download: Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu
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a beautiful indonesian love song, sure why not? <3
Dedicated for someone i love

Standard Version by Mako Sakata
Mania Version by -[Hotaru]-
Taiko Version by Senritsu
Last edited by Xinely on , edited 15 times in total.
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Image Cup
Image Salad
Image Platter
  • 00:05:382 (3,1) - I don't really agree to this hyper... It feels and plays weird.. Maybe try a normal dash instead?
  • 01:01:412 (3,4,5) - Would be nice to see a little more movement between these notes as a "build-up" to the kiai.

I can't really find much to say about this map, it's already very good!
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BennyBananas wrote:
Image Cup
Image Salad
Image Platter
  • 00:05:382 (3,1) - I don't really agree to this hyper... It feels and plays weird.. Maybe try a normal dash instead?
  • 01:01:412 (3,4,5) - Would be nice to see a little more movement between these notes as a "build-up" to the kiai. fixed all from platter

I can't really find much to say about this map, it's already very good!


thank you for mod :3
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M4M, thank you for requesting from my lazy queue.

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Your BG is a bit large, you might wanna crop it a bit since it's 1388 x 768 instead of 1366 x 768. Doing this change will meet the 16:9 ratio size for rank-ability.
Turn off “Widescreen Support” on Salad and Platter because of no storyboard.

Cup

Combo concerns:
00:11:118 (1,2,3,4,5) – The combo is a little long for a Cup, including slider tails but since it's only a combo of 9 and only 1 over the usual limit, it might be passable.
00:32:294 – New combo here, this combo is way too long.
01:14:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – This combo is just over the RC limit, might be passable, but I'd recommend putting an NC on (4).
01:28:765 – NC here. Combo is WAY too long.
01:28:765 (1) – NC here because combo too long.
Other stuff:
00:04:941 (2) – This being on the border feels really weird to play for a newer player. This note would make more sense on X=264.
01:18:177 (1) – This overlaps the border a bit to the point it's noticeable while playing. Possibly rotating the slider so it keeps it's position but so the bend doesn't overlap has deeply.

Salad

00:00:530 (1,2) – There feels like a slight pause in between these that messes with flow a bit. Moving (2) a bit to the right, to about X=420 makes it feel a bit better spaced.
00:28:765 (1,2) – Another pause due to under spacing, the same as above. Move 00:29:647 (2,3) to X=268. That will give it the flow it needs.
01:06:265 (4,5) – ^A weird pause again. You could move this pattern 01:07:147 (5,6,1) to the right a bit to fix the flow, to about X=272 and that would play well.
01:14:206 (6,7,1) – Why not make this a straight stream so there's emphasis on (1) and there isn't a break in flow?

Platter

Looks good.

Good luck with your map.
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ya ampun :) :v ada lagi
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Phantom_Stella wrote:
ya ampun :) :v ada lagi


Taikonya sekalian biar full mode

RoseusJaeger wrote:
M4M, thank you for requesting from my lazy queue.

General

Your BG is a bit large, you might wanna crop it a bit since it's 1388 x 768 instead of 1366 x 768. Doing this change will meet the 16:9 ratio size for rank-ability.
Turn off “Widescreen Support” on Salad and Platter because of no storyboard. there is sb lyrics D;

Cup

Combo concerns:
00:11:118 (1,2,3,4,5) – The combo is a little long for a Cup, including slider tails but since it's only a combo of 9 and only 1 over the usual limit, it might be passable.
00:32:294 – New combo here, this combo is way too long.
01:14:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – This combo is just over the RC limit, might be passable, but I'd recommend putting an NC on (4).
01:28:765 – NC here. Combo is WAY too long.
01:28:765 (1) – NC here because combo too long.
Other stuff:
00:04:941 (2) – This being on the border feels really weird to play for a newer player. This note would make more sense on X=264. i kinda dislike zig zag for cup but i try fixed it in my own way
01:18:177 (1) – This overlaps the border a bit to the point it's noticeable while playing. Possibly rotating the slider so it keeps it's position but so the bend doesn't overlap has deeply.

Salad

00:00:530 (1,2) – There feels like a slight pause in between these that messes with flow a bit. Moving (2) a bit to the right, to about X=420 makes it feel a bit better spaced.
00:28:765 (1,2) – Another pause due to under spacing, the same as above. Move 00:29:647 (2,3) to X=268. That will give it the flow it needs.
01:06:265 (4,5) – ^A weird pause again. You could move this pattern 01:07:147 (5,6,1) to the right a bit to fix the flow, to about X=272 and that would play well.
01:14:206 (6,7,1) – Why not make this a straight stream so there's emphasis on (1) and there isn't a break in flow?

Platter

Looks good.

Good luck with your map.


no reply means fixed, thanks :3
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Gak main taiko mbak hehehehe
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Haruto wrote:
can i gd xd


Another spoon ayy
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Cute song <3
Reminds me of someone I dated back when I was a chilld xD

General

Song Setup: Remove Indonesian from Tag since you have already typed in Indonesian from your beatmap description.
Remember to turn on Widescreen Support because you have SB. I thought you have it turned on lol.

Cup

00:05:382 (3,4) - I'm sorry, but this doesn't really fit. 4 seems overmapped for Cup because there is no vocal or something that rings a bell for that part. Honestly, i'd rather make this like 00:01:853 (3) - or any other slider like that because it makes the map cuter and flow better~ :3
01:28:471 - O: I HAVE AN IDEA FOR THIS PART (and trust me, you are going to love this.. ;) ). If you are good at slider arts and wanted to make the Cup difficulty for creative then here's a guideline or an example of what I would do for this part:
Image
01:00:530 (1,2,3) - I'd remove these notes if you are also planning to rank this because it's recommended to include a spinner here. There are no spinners in this map atm.

This should be a nice Cup after that~
Let me know if the slider art worked out for you.

Salad

00:01:853 (3) - Optional if you wanna create heart sliders here too. Also 00:05:382 (1) - too. Whatever works for your style of mapping :3
01:28:544 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I was wondering if you would like to delete these notes and insert spinner on 01:28:765 to 01:31:853.
01:12:441 (4) - Move to x:404

Good salad btw! I don't see much problems with it.

Platter

I think spinner should be added the same as Salad because no vocal atm.
01:03:618 (8,1) - This is a comment btw, I love these parts. It's so beautiful <3
01:31:632 - I don't know if i would add a note for this. It would ruin the combo guideline, but i think it sounds better to add note on my part. I'll leave it up to you to decide.

I can't really find any issues with Platter, but it's a really nice map overall.
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I'll be back when you reply to Tran's mod.
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Cute song <3
Reminds me of someone I dated back when I was a chilld xD

General

Song Setup: Remove Indonesian from Tag since you have already typed in Indonesian from your beatmap description. tag helps to find "indonesian" in search when beatmap description is only for telling if this song is from indonesia (because no indonesian genre in setting)
Remember to turn on Widescreen Support because you have SB. I thought you have it turned on lol. im dumb lol

Cup

00:05:382 (3,4) - I'm sorry, but this doesn't really fit. 4 seems overmapped for Cup because there is no vocal or something that rings a bell for that part. Honestly, i'd rather make this like 00:01:853 (3) - or any other slider like that because it makes the map cuter and flow better~ :3
01:28:471 - O: I HAVE AN IDEA FOR THIS PART (and trust me, you are going to love this.. ;) ). If you are good at slider arts and wanted to make the Cup difficulty for creative then here's a guideline or an example of what I would do for this part: waa nice but i cant skip piano there so i do for 00:05:382 - instead :D
Image
01:00:530 (1,2,3) - I'd remove these notes if you are also planning to rank this because it's recommended to include a spinner here. There are no spinners in this map atm. ah no spinner doesnt mean unrankable. the time doesnt fit to do it too so i prefer making like this ><

This should be a nice Cup after that~
Let me know if the slider art worked out for you.

Salad

00:01:853 (3) - Optional if you wanna create heart sliders here too. Also 00:05:382 (1) - too. Whatever works for your style of mapping :3 we already did for cup so lets create another random shape xd
01:28:544 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I was wondering if you would like to delete these notes and insert spinner on 01:28:765 to 01:31:853. same as cup. i cant due piano >_<
01:12:441 (4) - Move to x:404

Good salad btw! I don't see much problems with it.

Platter

I think spinner should be added the same as Salad because no vocal atm. same reason as well ><
01:03:618 (8,1) - This is a comment btw, I love these parts. It's so beautiful <3 thanks xD
01:31:632 - I don't know if i would add a note for this. It would ruin the combo guideline, but i think it sounds better to add note on my part. I'll leave it up to you to decide. 01:31:632 - has very weak sound. i think ppl wont notice it when play but i consider to add it when other ppl say same thing since it can be continuous steams xD

I can't really find any issues with Platter, but it's a really nice map overall.


thank you :D
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