m4m from #modreqs
General - BPM / Offset: Sound fine, (is your preview point snapped?)
- Folder: Looks clean
- Metadata: Couldn't find anything off here
- AiMod: Good
Eternal Sleep 00:26:922 (1) - This should possibly be curved the other way, just so the flow is kept consistent, especially due to the slider orientation before.
00:32:650 (2,3,4,1) - I don't like the random jump tbh, making the notes curve inward sharper could make room for a nice pattern perhaps?
00:35:650 (1,2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent here, doesn't really look too nice.
00:39:468 (3,1) - This blanket can be improved by curving down the bottom more, making sure it's consistent across makes it looks nicer aesthetically.
00:48:195 (4) - Bring this down a tiny bit for a better alignment with the previous slider end (idk nazi asf sorry) XD
01:06:195 (1) - Move this middle anchor up a tiny bit more so the blanket is nicer.
02:05:104 (1) - The final curve on this slider is made pretty harsh due to the addition of an anchor, for this I would remove the final anchor and have that curve solely dependant on one anchor point like so:
02:13:831 (1) - Move the first curves middle anchor to the central position so it's consistent curve.
02:22:559 (1) - I'm personally not a fan of the harsh curves on sliders, they kind of amplify the way older maps were made. This is not entirely a bad thing, and the suggestion is purely my own opinion, although I would add an extra anchor on each curve and make it so they're smoothed out.
03:00:741 (3,4,1) - I recommend consistent spacing here, or if you're wanting emphasis you should make the spacing between four and one further.
03:06:195 (1) - Move this 1 tiny pixel right and then up, the blanket is slightly misplaced.
03:47:650 (1) - Move the last anchor out more so the curve is more natural, it feels kind of compressed and leans to the center more than it should imo.
04:05:650 (2) - The slider is too curved at the end so it clashes too close to the previous slider and the blanket doesn't work
04:13:831 (1,2,3) - I think adding a little more consistency here would work well by making two of the sliders the same slider shape, especially since the string variation doesn't come in until the slider after these.
04:16:013 (1) - Move this to the other side of the previous note so the cursor movement 'slides' into the slider :3
04:19:559 (2,3,4) - This spacing triggers me, I don't feel it should be done like that, it doesn't look too good imo, if you really want that, just add slider velocity changes and put a slider in
04:22:915 - This could be a good time to initiate kiai?
04:40:013 - ^ good time to end kiai :3
04:44:922 (2) - Put it so the sliderhead is in the center of the antiblanket.
04:49:831 (3) - Curve the sliderend down two more tiny pixels so the blanket is complete.
04:56:650 (2,3,4) - Space these out more just like you did before with the star pattern, it's still a strong part of the music you mapped to before.
04:58:559 (3,3,4) - Same music type so why is there a change in the way it's mapped, you should either change the 1/1 slider to two 1/2 sliders or vice versa
Really nice song and the mapping portrays it really well! I want to see this done for approval (: