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CLIFF EDGE - Sayonara I Love You feat. jyA-Me [CatchTheBeat]

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CLSW
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 10월 25일 화요일 at 오후 5:52:31

Artist: CLIFF EDGE
Title: Sayonara I Love You feat. jyA-Me
BPM: 110
Filesize: 12954kb
Play Time: 05:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Farewell Words (4.42 stars, 946 notes)
Download: CLIFF EDGE - Sayonara I Love You feat. jyA-Me
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愛し合い、
すれ違い、
そして愛し合いながら別れを選んだ二人…




SB by me
Please redownload if you dl'ed this map before Oct 25th 2016

A gift to you
Last edited by CLSW , edited 37 times in total.
Equim
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Equim
Endless Tears v2?
CLSW
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CLSW

Equim wrote:

Endless Tears v2?
song's intensity is pretty similar but not really a similar case on pattern style imo ;)
ZHSteven
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ZHSteven
another hyper after endless tears.

let me see how many stars I have.

teach me how to use hypers please TAT



**might have a look at it at weekends
koliron
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koliron
<3 aesthetic
Spectator
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Spectator

koliron wrote:

<3 aesthetic
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
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Ascendance
<3 cliff edge
Xinely
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Xinely

koliron wrote:

<3 aesthetic
Kowaii_ne
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Kowaii_ne
[Farewell Words]
  1. 01:11:519 01:12:610 01:14:792 랩 부분 끝 라임마다 쉬운 하이퍼 붙이면 좀더 재밌을 거 같습니다
  2. 01:38:246 (1,2,3,4) - 이 보컬 부분이 좀 잘 들어오는데 이런 패턴 어떨까요!
  3. 01:45:882 (1) - 슬라 마지막 노트에 finish 추가 해주세요
  4. 04:07:154 (1,2) - 04:06:609 (1,2) - 패턴 복사후 Ctrl+H, x:248로 해보시는게 어떨까요
CLSW
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01:11:519 - 요 부분은 의도적으로 하이퍼대시 없이 가려고했어요. 아직 키아이도 아니고 곡 분위기 맞춰서 간다면 적당한 일정거리로 유지하는 숏점프만 넣어가면서 완성하는게 가장 이상적이라고 생각합니당
01:38:246 (1,2,3,4) - 한번 써봤지만.. 하이퍼대시가 좀 마음에 안드네요 ㅠㅠ 살짝 음 톤도 낮아지는 부분이라 같은 방향으로 두번 점프하는 분위기 체인지 용도의 무빙을 살리는 부분이기 때문에 정방향 좌우 왕복은 그렇게 좋은 선택은 아니어보입니다.
04:07:154 (1,2) - 비슷한 3-3-2 리듬의 패턴으로 01:39:337 (1,2,3) - 이것과 01:56:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이것 등이 있는데, 이 부분도 마찬가지로 3-3-2 패턴입니다만 보시면 점프가 들어가는 부분이 다르죠. 곡의 후반부이기도 하고 뭔가 다른 느낌으로 짠 패턴인데 이 부분이 전체적으로 채보에 감성을 담는 스토리텔링 역시 가능한 부분이라 놔두고 싶습니다.

사운드는 수정했고 참고도 많이 됐습니다. 감사합니다!
DeletedUser_6709840
DeletedUser_6709840
From my lazy queue. I'll try my best to be helpful since I'm not too experienced with Rains.

General

- Check the “Epilepsy Warning” since the storyboard appears to being going to have elements that could be harmful later on.
- Why is this picture file named “ss+(2016-08-28+at+02.48.11)” in the storyboard files? It doesn't seem to be going to be part of the storyboard.

Farewell Words

00:16:974 (2,3,1) – I felt a slight difference in flow here that makes (2) and (3) feel slightly under-spaced. It would be better if the distance was a 1.20x snap between (2) and (3) and then increase slightly between (3) and (1) to maintain the dash. Doing this will eliminate the slight pause that happens while playing.
00:24:065 (3) – It could be hard for the player to read the slight movement of this slider and think that it could be caught by just leaving the catcher stagnant. Possibly rotate the slider reverse more to the left for the movement of the slider to be more readable.
01:18:610 (1) – This could be rotated a bit to the the right to give a slight bit more emphasis to the long vocal here.
01:29:656 (1) – Suggestion: This spinner could be shortened to 01:30:610 so you could map the “Sayonara” vocal here.
02:04:428 (1) – This slider plays really awkwardly to the vocal being vertical and curved, it would be better with the slider rotated to the right more.
02:42:746 (1) – Suggestion same as above for spinner. It could be shortened to 02:43:701 and then map the vocal of “sayonara”.

Good luck with your map, thank you for requesting me.
wonjae
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wonjae
Endless Tears
00:22:974 (1,2) - i feel like the 2 notes here would fit the rhythm better if it was like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987752

01:01:837 (3) - add a note here or make the previous note a slider that ends here? There is a vocal here.

01:20:110 (2) - its odd that there is a pause here in my opinion. maybe add a note?

03:00:200 (1) - i feel like the start of this slider should have sound to it.

03:16:154 (2) - although the slider here does catch the beginning of the vocals, i think that it plays/sounds smoother if it was just a note at 03:16:154

04:10:290 (3,4,5) - when playing it feels a little off since there is no movement. maybe make 4 x=423

04:51:745 (4) - nc?

good map
CLSW
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CLSW
rofl random ss saving

alright, mod checking time! sorry for super late :o

All fixed with RoseusJaeger's suggestions except the spinners, it's just in my taste but I feel better at the usage which I've used.

@Paranoid Grapes
00:22:974 (1,2) - extremely calm part, so i don't think it needs more distances with circles. also the sliders will have same colors on each fruits so I'd like that.
01:01:837 (3) - here is the timeline.
SPOILER
the vocal has been snapped on 1/16, so so i would like to follow with this rhythm.
01:20:110 (2) - well the vocal sound 'shi' actually exists here but it's pretty low and it hurts the combo count 1623(same max combo count as endless tears Tears difficulty) which I wanna take, also it's good to emphasis just on the strong vocal sound so yeah.
03:00:200 (1) - hmm, the vocal sound exists here but i've mapped this part with instrumental so it doesn't look good with loud hitsound as usual.
03:16:154 (2) - and this one i wanna take as double notes with the same position. it looks good for me. yep, just in my taste :?
04:10:290 (3,4,5) - intended 'stand-by' flow to get ready for the multiple jumps in 04:10:563 (5,6,7,1) - , it looks nice for me.

NC has been added, thank you so much for mod everyone!
Asahina Momoko
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holy such a sick SB

☆
CLSW
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Asahina Momoko wrote:

holy such a sick SB

☆
<3
BoberOfDarkness
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As I promised

  1. 00:31:701 - I would map this part as well
  2. 00:33:883 - here is good spot for some 1/16 repetitive sliders, I found it nice as introduction to next part, if you will add it add notes at 00:35:792 - and 00:35:928 - (try to place hyper dash to 00:36:065 (1) - )
  3. 00:38:519 (2) - I wonder why you ignore beat at 00:38:656 -, maybe change slider to 1/2 long with reverse ?
  4. 01:10:701 (1) - I feel that NC is not necessary
  5. 01:29:656 (1) - I like adding spinners but you could end it here 01:30:610 - and then place some notes what is better for introducing kiai time than long spinner

    (same with 02:42:746 (1) - and 03:40:563 (1) -

    I wonder if you try to put this kiss scene to your SB
    link: http://puu.sh/rADVW/8c62aad547.jpg

sorry thats all what I could spot

That map is too pro for me to mod ;P
CLSW
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I've got an injury on my arms and legs, gonna check the mod when i feel better. Thank you!
BoberOfDarkness
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CLSW wrote:

I've got an injury on my arms and legs, gonna check the mod when i feel better. Thank you!
I wish you a speedy recovery then :)
CLSW
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CLSW
00:31:701 - intentional break here, it looks good for me.
00:33:883 - ^
00:38:519 (2) - based with vocal sounds, i don't really wanna emphasize the other instrumental here.
01:10:701 (1) - I'm sure it's fine because of a little break between 01:09:883 (1,1) - , it's pretty accurate.
01:29:656 (1) - inspired by [emiria]'s mania mapping style and some sdvx charts which is having a charge note/specific breaks at the end of the measure bar, this looks pretty cool for my sense. so I would like to use his usage with ctb spinner. ofc same goes to the others ;)

i'm sorry but your anime based pic doesn't make a good compatibility with the others :(((((

thanks for taking a look!
autofanboy
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