forum

Yall feat. Gabriela Richardson - Hundred Miles (Sombury Remi

posted
Total Posts
59
Topic Starter
Vovan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 9 juillet 2017 at 17:23:42

Artist: Yall feat. Gabriela Richardson
Title: Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
Tags: electro house dance remix
BPM: 128
Filesize: 2748kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,21 stars, 90 notes)
  2. Hard (2,65 stars, 206 notes)
  3. Normal (1,76 stars, 124 notes)
Download: Yall feat. Gabriela Richardson - Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Lully
first ~
DeRandom Otaku
Hi

IRC for nyu's insane
20:10 CookieKivi: btw, do you want to mod a map that a friend of mine and me mapped?
20:11 DeRandom Otaku: idk -w- not in the mood right now .. but gimme the map , maybe i might
20:11 CookieKivi: Okay. o:
20:11 *CookieKivi is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1024276 Yall feat. Gabriella Richardson - Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)]
20:13 DeRandom Otaku: i will mod it later uwu maybe tomorrow
20:13 CookieKivi: You have your time
20:14 DeRandom Otaku: well nvm
20:14 DeRandom Otaku: i will mod ur diff only
20:14 DeRandom Otaku: irc?
20:15 CookieKivi: okie
20:15 DeRandom Otaku: 00:22:071 (7) - lower SV for this slider would be better
20:16 DeRandom Otaku: 00:24:415 (1,2,3,4) - please use timing points to make their end silent
20:16 DeRandom Otaku: 00:30:040 - make the downbeat clickable
20:16 CookieKivi: why timing points?
20:16 CookieKivi: lol
20:17 DeRandom Otaku: i mean green timing point
20:17 DeRandom Otaku: or whateves
20:17 DeRandom Otaku: just silent their ends
20:17 CookieKivi: oh oki
20:17 DeRandom Otaku: 00:42:696 (2,3) - blanket
20:18 DeRandom Otaku: 01:08:946 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - please change this pattern ~ dont make 01:08:946 (7,5) - overlap each other .. they look ugly like this x-x
20:18 DeRandom Otaku: 01:15:040 (8) - nc becuase of SV change
20:19 DeRandom Otaku: 01:30:040 - volume 20% or lower
20:20 DeRandom Otaku: thats pretty much all
20:21 CookieKivi: ehh
20:21 CookieKivi: i underlapped 7 with 5
20:21 DeRandom Otaku: your choice desu
20:21 CookieKivi: is that oki too?
20:21 DeRandom Otaku: Yep
20:21 CookieKivi: oki den
20:21 CookieKivi: fixed that stuff~

GL with this map =w=/
Lully
wheeeeeeee

updated diff after irc
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hundred Miles Sombury Remix (Cut).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59442
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
SamplesMatchPlaybackRate: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5665,22540,30040,37540,45040,50665,52540,59571
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
TitleUnicode:Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
Artist:Yall feat. Gabriella Richardson
ArtistUnicode:Yall feat. Gabriella Richardson
Creator:Lexis
Version:nyu's Farewell
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1024276
BeatmapSetID:479701

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Wallpaper.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
3790,468.75,4,2,1,80,1,0
22071,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,0
22540,-125,4,2,1,80,0,0
24766,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
25235,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
25704,-125,4,2,1,20,0,0
26290,-125,4,2,1,80,0,0
50665,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
52540,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,80,0,0
56290,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
58165,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
60040,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
75040,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
75508,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
86290,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,80,0,1
90040,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,91,136
Combo2 : 64,0,128
Combo3 : 255,67,34
Combo4 : 255,0,128

[HitObjects]
56,88,6602,6,0,L|56:28,2,37.5
92,180,7071,2,0,P|176:200|208:180,1,112.5
232,156,7540,6,0,P|272:128|364:136,2,112.5
308,216,8477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,236,8594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,228,8711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,172,8946,2,0,B|492:116|484:100|484:100|432:60,1,112.5
404,72,9415,6,0,P|380:100|276:104,2,112.5
320,20,10352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,24,10469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,60,10586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,140,10821,2,0,P|144:160|88:104,1,112.5
56,88,11290,6,0,L|48:208,2,112.5
136,32,12227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,56,12344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,56,12461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,28,12696,2,0,P|388:16|448:28,1,112.5
472,48,13165,6,0,L|448:168,1,112.5
428,200,13633,2,0,P|380:224|332:224,1,75
268,196,14102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,14219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,160,14336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,140,14454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,100,14571,2,0,L|80:32,3,37.5
88,16,15040,6,0,L|208:12,1,112.5
240,40,15508,2,0,L|296:116,1,75
324,184,15977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,228,16094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,16211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,260,16329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,232,16446,2,0,L|152:168,3,37.5
132,156,16915,6,0,L|48:236,1,112.5
32,280,17383,2,0,L|128:280,1,75
204,276,17852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,260,17969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,216,18086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,172,18204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,132,18321,2,0,P|220:100|224:76,3,37.5
220,44,18790,6,0,P|288:40|348:52,1,112.5
368,76,19258,2,0,L|396:168,1,75
340,232,19727,2,0,L|312:268,2,37.5
252,188,20196,2,0,P|208:188|144:232,1,112.5
112,252,20665,6,0,L|36:168,1,112.5
4,132,21133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,40,21368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,21602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,116,21719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,108,21836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,56,22071,2,0,P|372:40|432:40,1,84.3750032186509
452,56,22540,6,0,P|464:116|464:156,2,90
380,88,23477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,52,23711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,40,23829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,40,23946,2,0,L|164:60,1,60
120,108,24415,6,0,L|140:200,1,90
156,232,24883,2,0,P|232:260|264:256,1,90
272,236,25352,2,0,P|328:192|368:192,1,90
384,196,25821,2,0,L|412:292,1,90
396,320,26290,6,0,P|364:348|308:352,2,90
332,276,27227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,220,27461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,212,27579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,27696,2,0,L|116:244,1,60
84,180,28165,6,0,P|76:144|96:80,1,90
108,60,28633,2,0,L|176:48,1,60
237,82,29102,2,0,P|297:106|357:94,1,120
389,75,29688,2,0,L|417:135,1,60
430,171,30040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
397,254,30274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,231,30508,2,0,L|241:251,1,60
176,224,30977,6,0,L|100:200,1,60
83,178,31329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,133,31446,2,0,L|103:49,1,60
178,33,31915,2,0,L|282:17,1,90
296,40,32383,2,0,P|316:88|316:112,1,60
288,160,32852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,180,32969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,33086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,33321,2,0,L|96:228,1,90
80,190,33790,6,0,P|100:118|120:106,2,90
160,180,34727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,34961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,108,35196,2,0,L|368:96,1,60
428,108,35665,6,0,L|408:216,1,90
400,232,36133,2,0,L|332:212,1,60
276,188,36602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,232,36836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,248,36954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,240,37071,2,0,P|96:220|88:204,1,60
80,132,37540,2,0,P|124:68|172:68,1,120
236,92,38243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,64,38477,6,0,L|368:24,1,60
392,100,38946,2,0,L|328:144,1,60
264,140,39415,2,0,L|144:216,2,120
220,76,40586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,52,40821,2,0,P|88:64|56:100,1,90
60,124,41290,2,0,L|68:168,3,30
80,192,41758,2,0,L|136:240,1,60
200,256,42227,6,0,P|244:264|280:256,1,60
244,184,42696,2,0,P|288:180|324:188,1,60
347,249,43165,2,0,P|368:231|372:137,2,120
376,320,44336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,344,44571,2,0,L|192:352,1,90
172,340,45040,2,0,L|136:312,3,30
128,288,45508,2,0,L|120:204,1,60
128,152,45977,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,46211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,46446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,72,46680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,112,46915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,47383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,156,47852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,100,48086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,176,48321,2,0,P|64:232|76:272,1,90
100,292,48790,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,308,48907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,320,49024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,320,49141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,300,49258,2,0,L|312:256,1,60
328,192,49727,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,49961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,50196,2,0,P|144:164|124:160,1,60
63,134,50665,6,0,B|24:150|7:186|7:186|55:222|55:222|32:267|47:310,1,225
204,312,52540,6,0,L|260:316,3,56.2500021457673
296,228,53008,2,0,L|232:224,3,56.2500021457673
152,168,53477,6,0,L|132:96,3,56.2500021457673
208,48,53946,2,0,L|228:112,3,56.2500021457673
320,152,54415,6,0,L|368:112,3,56.2500021457673
404,208,54883,2,0,L|344:260,3,56.2500021457673
248,256,55352,6,0,L|208:200,3,56.2500021457673
132,248,55821,2,0,L|88:184,3,56.2500021457673
68,154,56290,5,0,0:0:0:0:
60,98,56407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,49,56524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,27,56641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,48,56758,5,0,0:0:0:0:
221,94,56875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,135,56993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,155,57110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,111,57227,5,0,0:0:0:0:
371,61,57344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
423,42,57461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,70,57579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,119,57696,5,0,0:0:0:0:
508,173,57813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,228,57930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,280,58047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,312,58165,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,120,59571,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,128,60040,6,0,L|108:152,3,37.5
80,180,60508,2,0,L|76:276,1,75
164,304,60977,2,0,P|208:312|264:300,2,75
192,204,61680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,140,61915,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,124,62032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,120,62149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,62266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,62383,2,0,P|452:228|440:260,1,75
400,328,62852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,208,63086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,340,63321,2,0,L|168:288,1,75
120,240,63790,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,196,63907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,64024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,100,64141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,60,64258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,156,64493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,64727,2,0,P|312:44|360:44,1,75
332,136,65196,2,0,P|360:180|360:244,1,112.5
332,276,65665,6,0,L|296:300,1,37.5
232,264,65899,2,0,L|184:240,1,37.5
144,304,66133,2,0,P|104:304|24:260,1,112.5
4,188,66602,2,0,L|16:104,1,75
140,68,67071,2,0,L|128:156,1,75
188,240,67540,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,188,67657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,156,67774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,67891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,108,68008,2,0,P|436:80|456:40,1,75
380,200,68477,2,0,P|424:200|472:184,1,75
293,272,68946,2,0,P|329:292|417:288,1,112.5
451,266,69415,5,0,0:0:0:0:
425,218,69532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,208,69649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,231,69766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,272,69883,2,0,P|247:301|189:312,1,112.5
128,268,70352,2,0,L|80:192,1,75
208,116,70821,2,0,L|176:184,1,75
124,88,71290,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,44,71407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,36,71524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,68,71641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,71758,2,0,L|296:212,1,75
396,164,72227,2,0,L|404:84,1,75
436,240,72696,2,0,P|396:248|336:236,1,75
297,202,73047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,132,73165,6,0,L|220:84,1,37.5
160,152,73399,2,0,L|112:172,1,37.5
192,224,73633,2,0,L|252:324,1,112.5
308,344,74102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,336,74219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,74336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,168,74571,2,0,P|408:132|324:128,1,112.5
256,200,75040,6,0,L|180:268,1,75
88,188,75274,2,0,L|152:132,1,75
232,68,75508,6,0,P|260:44|340:44,1,112.5
416,96,75977,2,0,L|448:196,1,75
364,264,76446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,136,76680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,276,76915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,77032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,200,77149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,116,77266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,56,77383,6,0,P|208:36|272:56,1,112.5
320,104,77852,2,0,L|352:180,1,75
280,256,78321,2,0,L|248:176,1,75
208,116,78672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,78790,6,0,P|96:136|80:128,1,37.5
132,64,79024,2,0,L|140:8,1,37.5
220,36,79258,2,0,P|264:32|316:36,1,75
368,72,79610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,79727,2,0,P|304:172|304:232,1,75
392,296,80196,2,0,P|356:320|300:320,1,75
248,300,80547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,240,80665,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,160,80782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,84,80899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,68,81016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,120,81133,2,0,P|4:176|0:208,1,75
48,252,81485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,81602,2,0,L|228:240,1,75
248,136,82071,2,0,L|152:160,1,75
120,84,82540,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,28,82774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,192,83008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,120,83243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,284,83477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,352,83711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,224,83946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,84180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,68,84415,6,0,L|48:104,1,75
272,136,84883,2,0,L|368:88,1,75
184,248,85352,2,0,P|160:320|164:344,1,75
339,102,85821,2,0,P|355:66|351:18,1,75
188,32,86290,6,0,L|104:72,3,56.2500021457673
80,92,86758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,148,86875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,216,86993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,260,87110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,288,87227,6,0,P|236:296|256:292,3,56.2500021457673
296,284,87696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,224,87813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,156,87930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,92,88047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,88165,6,0,P|200:72|180:88,3,56.2500021457673
256,144,88633,2,0,P|312:128|328:108,3,56.2500021457673
364,64,89102,5,0,0:0:0:0:
420,128,89219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,208,89336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,280,89454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,236,89571,2,0,P|252:220|136:308,1,225.000008583069
Kyuukai
Ayy, M4M request from your queue !

General
- I don't know if it's bugged only for me, but there's no background
- You should reduce the hitsounds volume overall, they are higher than the sound of the music

nyu's Farewell
00:26:290 (1,2) - Blanket
00:30:040 - You should up the speed to x1.0 since the rhythm of the music is dynamic again
00:33:790 (1,2) - Blanket
00:42:227 (1,2) - Blanket
00:42:696 (2,3) - Blanket
01:08:008 (5,6) - Blanket
01:12:227 (6,7) - Blanket
01:29:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find this too hard for a 3.65*

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Vovan

yaleufeu wrote:

Ayy, M4M request from your queue !

General
- I don't know if it's bugged only for me, but there's no background
I don't know... That was bugged for me at the beggining, but with the updates, that got fixed. I really don't know where that come from ._.
- You should reduce the hitsounds volume overall, they are higher than the sound of the music
I will fix it on my diffs

Good luck!
Fanteer
Hi
M4M

off countdown

nyu's Farewell

00:14:102 (3,4,5,6) - this direct stream looks ugly
00:16:446 (7,3) - bad flow
01:03:321 (8) - bad flow, put another slider
01:04:727 (7,8) - blanket
01:08:946 (7,5) - overlap
01:12:227 (6,7) - blanket
01:22:071 (8,3) - overlap

Hard

00:24:415 (1,2) - overlap
01:14:102 (3,1) - overlap

Normal

00:07:071 (2,2) - put them farther apart
00:15:040 (1,2) - fix spacing
00:16:915 (5,6) - ^
01:30:040 (2) - ^
01:05:665 (5) - ^
00:16:446 (4,5) - overlap
00:29:571 (4,1) - ^

Easy

00:14:102 (3,2) - overlap
01:04:727 (2,5) - ^

Good luck :)
Jonarwhal
NM

[General]
  1. Where is your background?
  2. Where are your combo colors?
[Easy]
  1. You can make the CS 3 to avoid the weird overlaps is you want.
  2. 00:03:790 (1,1) - in Easy, 4 beats of spinner recovery are required
  3. 00:13:165 - the rhythm you use here is a little strange, you leave the powerful downbeat to a sliderend, and 00:13:633 - this weaker beat is clickable you should use a rhythm more similar to this:
    This is called an emphasis problem, it will probably come up again.
  4. 00:18:790 (1,2) - This flow is questionable and a little ugly. 1 should be pointed at 2, like this:
    Which looks much more nice than this:
  5. 00:27:227 - I'm really confused what you're following in this section. 00:22:540 - From here, it seems like you're following the beat, but the pause 00:25:352 (3,1) - here makes it seem like you're following the lyrics. You need to decide on just one and map more consistently. Ask me if you need further explanation on how to do this. And if you're following the beat, then there's an emphasis problem 00:26:290 - here.
  6. 00:30:040 (4,1) - Swap NC. The NC should be as close to the downbeat as possible.
  7. 00:35:196 - Emphasis problem.
  8. 00:37:540 (4,1) - Swap NC.
  9. 00:45:040 (4) - are you following the lyrics? remove this if you are
  10. 00:49:727 (1) - Don't use complicated slider points to make a simple slider unless you can make it look good. Using the ticks in a simple way like this makes a nicer looking shape:
I'll stop there for now. You can ask me question in-game, over pm, or right here if you want.
I hope I helped.
Topic Starter
Vovan

Fanteer wrote:

Hi
M4M

off countdown

Hard

00:24:415 (1,2) - overlap Fixed
01:14:102 (3,1) - overlap Fixed

Normal

00:07:071 (2,2) - put them farther apart Fixed
00:15:040 (1,2) - fix spacing Fixed
00:16:915 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
01:30:040 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:05:665 (5) - ^ No problem here
00:16:446 (4,5) - overlap Fixed
00:29:571 (4,1) - ^ Fixed

Easy

00:14:102 (3,2) - overlap Fixed
01:04:727 (2,5) - ^ Fixed

Good luck :)
paydayzcool
Hi Lexis,

This is an M4M from your queue.

[Hard]
00:50:665 (6) - Curve this slider so that it properly blankets 00:50:196 (4).
[]

[nyu's Farewell]
00:58:165 - Maybe replace this note with a really slow, but long slider that finishes at 00:59:571?
01:00:977 (3,4) - Blanket error
[]

Easy and Normal were excellent. I couldn't mod them.

Also, sorry for s*** post. I'm not that great at modding. :o
Topic Starter
Vovan

Jonawaga wrote:

NM

[General]
  1. Where is your background? FIX
  2. Where are your combo colors? fix
[Easy]
  1. You can make the CS 3 to avoid the weird overlaps is you want. I don't need CS 3. That's fine now ^^
  2. 00:03:790 (1,1) - in Easy, 4 beats of spinner recovery are required fix
  3. 00:13:165 - the rhythm you use here is a little strange, you leave the powerful downbeat to a sliderend, and 00:13:633 - this weaker beat is clickable you should use a rhythm more similar to this: I prefer now. I hate using red ticks on Easy.
    This is called an emphasis problem, it will probably come up again. I know. But thanks to say it :p
  4. 00:18:790 (1,2) - This flow is questionable and a little ugly. 1 should be pointed at 2, like this:
    Which looks much more nice than this: Fix. But not kike you said
  5. 00:27:227 - I'm really confused what you're following in this section. 00:22:540 - From here, it seems like you're following the beat, but the pause 00:25:352 (3,1) - here makes it seem like you're following the lyrics. You need to decide on just one and map more consistently. Ask me if you need further explanation on how to do this. And if you're following the beat, then there's an emphasis problem 00:26:290 - here.
    I follow the lyrics on BOTH times
  6. 00:30:040 (4,1) - Swap NC. The NC should be as close to the downbeat as possible. fix
  7. 00:35:196 - Emphasis problem. Umm... I don't see where is it. I made the downbeat clickable here, not like before.
  8. 00:37:540 (4,1) - Swap NC. fix
  9. 00:45:040 (4) - are you following the lyrics? remove this if you are fix
  10. 00:49:727 (1) - Don't use complicated slider points to make a simple slider unless you can make it look good. Using the ticks in a simple way like this makes a nicer looking shape: I changed it before I readed it xD
I'll stop there for now. You can ask me question in-game, over pm, or right here if you want.
I hope I helped.

paydayzcool wrote:

Hi Lexis,

This is an M4M from your queue.

[Hard]
00:50:665 (6) - Curve this slider so that it properly blankets 00:50:196 (4). I had not that idea to blanket it. But that is good. I apply :D
[]

Easy and Normal were excellent. I couldn't mod them.
thanks :o

Also, sorry for s*** post. I'm not that great at modding. :o
You will be better ;)
I was not good at modding before ;)
Lully

yaleufeu wrote:

nyu's Farewell
00:26:290 (1,2) - Blanket fix
00:30:040 - You should up the speed to x1.0 since the rhythm of the music is dynamic again nah, its fine
00:33:790 (1,2) - Blanket
00:42:227 (1,2) - Blanket
00:42:696 (2,3) - Blanket
01:08:008 (5,6) - Blanket
01:12:227 (6,7) - Blanket fixed all blanket thingys
01:29:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find this too hard for a 3.65* its fine for an insane

Good luck!

Fanteer wrote:

Hi
M4M

off countdown
nyu's Farewell

00:14:102 (3,4,5,6) - this direct stream looks ugly fix
00:16:446 (7,3) - bad flow
01:03:321 (8) - bad flow, put another slider i don't see the point
01:04:727 (7,8) - blanket
01:08:946 (7,5) - overlap i dont see the point for this.
01:12:227 (6,7) - blanket
01:22:071 (8,3) - overlap tell me why. it fits

paydayzcool wrote:

[nyu's Farewell]
00:58:165 - Maybe replace this note with a really slow, but long slider that finishes at 00:59:571? nah.. i tried that out but.. i don't really like it. and 00:59:571 (1) - should be a highlighted beat anyway
01:00:977 (3,4) - Blanket error fixed
[]

yay
update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hundred Miles Sombury Remix (Cut).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59442
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
SamplesMatchPlaybackRate: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5665,22540,30040,37540,45040,50665,52540,59571
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
TitleUnicode:Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
Artist:Yall feat. Gabriella Richardson
ArtistUnicode:Yall feat. Gabriella Richardson
Creator:Lexis
Version:nyu's Farewell
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1024276
BeatmapSetID:479701

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Wallpaper.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
3790,468.75,4,2,1,80,1,0
22540,-125,4,2,1,80,0,0
24883,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
25352,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
25821,-125,4,2,1,20,0,0
26290,-125,4,2,1,80,0,0
50665,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
52540,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,80,0,0
56290,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
58165,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
60040,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
75040,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
75508,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
86290,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,80,0,1
90040,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,91,136
Combo2 : 64,0,128
Combo3 : 255,67,34
Combo4 : 255,0,128

[HitObjects]
56,88,6602,6,0,L|56:28,2,37.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,180,7071,2,0,P|176:200|208:180,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,156,7540,6,0,P|272:128|364:136,2,112.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,216,8477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,236,8594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,228,8711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,172,8946,2,0,B|492:116|484:100|484:100|432:60,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,9415,6,0,P|380:100|276:104,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,20,10352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,24,10469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,60,10586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,140,10821,2,0,P|144:160|88:104,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,88,11290,6,0,L|48:208,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,32,12227,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,56,12344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,56,12461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,28,12696,2,0,P|388:16|448:28,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,48,13165,6,0,L|448:168,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,200,13633,2,0,P|380:224|332:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,196,14102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,176,14219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,160,14336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,140,14454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,100,14571,2,0,L|80:32,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,16,15040,6,0,L|208:12,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,40,15508,2,0,L|296:116,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,15977,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,228,16094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,16211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,260,16329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,232,16446,2,0,L|152:168,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,156,16915,6,0,L|48:236,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,280,17383,2,0,L|128:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,276,17852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,260,17969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,216,18086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,172,18204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,132,18321,2,0,P|220:100|224:76,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,44,18790,6,0,P|288:40|348:52,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,19258,2,0,L|396:168,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,232,19727,2,0,L|312:268,2,37.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,188,20196,2,0,P|208:188|144:232,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,252,20665,6,0,L|36:168,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,132,21133,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,40,21368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,21602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,116,21719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,108,21836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,52,22071,2,0,P|356:36|436:40,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,56,22540,6,0,P|464:116|464:156,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,88,23477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,52,23711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,40,23829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,40,23946,2,0,L|164:60,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,24415,6,0,L|140:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,232,24883,2,0,P|232:260|264:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,236,25352,2,0,P|328:192|368:192,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,196,25821,2,0,L|412:292,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,320,26290,6,0,P|364:348|308:352,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,276,27227,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,220,27461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,212,27579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,27696,2,0,L|116:244,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,28165,6,0,P|76:144|96:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,60,28633,2,0,L|176:48,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,29102,2,0,P|296:108|356:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,76,29688,2,0,P|424:96|424:152,1,90,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,200,30274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,228,30508,2,0,L|240:248,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,30977,6,0,L|100:200,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,188,31329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,31446,2,0,L|108:64,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,31915,2,0,L|272:28,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,40,32383,2,0,P|316:88|316:112,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,32852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,180,32969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,33086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,33321,2,0,L|96:228,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,33790,6,0,P|104:124|124:112,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,180,34727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,128,34961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,108,35196,2,0,L|368:96,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,108,35665,6,0,L|408:216,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,36133,2,0,L|332:212,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,188,36602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,232,36836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,248,36954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,240,37071,2,0,P|96:220|88:204,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,132,37540,2,0,P|124:68|172:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,92,38243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,64,38477,6,0,L|368:24,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,100,38946,2,0,L|328:144,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,39415,2,0,L|144:216,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,76,40586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,52,40821,2,0,P|88:64|56:100,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,124,41290,2,0,L|68:168,3,30,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,41758,2,0,L|136:240,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,256,42227,6,0,P|244:264|280:256,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,184,42696,2,0,P|288:180|324:188,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,252,43165,2,0,P|364:236|364:136,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,320,44336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,344,44571,2,0,L|192:352,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,340,45040,2,0,L|136:312,3,30,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,45508,2,0,L|120:204,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,45977,5,2,0:0:0:0:
168,88,46211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,46446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,72,46680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,112,46915,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,56,47383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,156,47852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,100,48086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,176,48321,2,0,P|64:232|76:272,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,292,48790,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,308,48907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,320,49024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,320,49141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,300,49258,2,0,L|312:256,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,49727,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,136,49961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,50196,2,0,P|144:164|124:160,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,50665,6,0,B|40:128|8:180|8:180|56:216|56:216|36:256|40:288|48:304,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,312,52540,6,0,L|260:316,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,228,53008,2,0,L|232:224,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,168,53477,6,0,L|132:96,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,53946,2,0,L|228:112,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,54415,6,0,L|368:112,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,208,54883,2,0,L|344:260,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,55352,6,0,L|208:200,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,248,55821,2,0,L|88:184,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,160,56290,5,8,0:0:0:0:
84,112,56407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,68,56524,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,36,56641,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,48,56758,5,8,0:0:0:0:
212,88,56875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,116,56993,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,120,57110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,88,57227,5,8,0:0:0:0:
364,48,57344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,36,57461,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,60,57579,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,100,57696,5,8,0:0:0:0:
492,148,57813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,196,57930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,244,58047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,288,58165,5,4,0:0:0:0:
168,120,59571,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,128,60040,6,0,L|108:152,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,180,60508,2,0,L|76:276,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,304,60977,2,0,P|208:312|264:300,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,204,61680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,140,61915,5,2,0:0:0:0:
300,124,62032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,120,62149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,62266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,62383,2,0,P|452:228|440:260,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,328,62852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,208,63086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,340,63321,2,0,L|168:288,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,240,63790,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,196,63907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,64024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,100,64141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,60,64258,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,156,64493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,64727,2,0,P|312:44|360:44,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,65196,2,0,P|360:180|360:244,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,276,65665,6,0,L|296:300,1,37.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,264,65899,2,0,L|184:240,1,37.5
144,304,66133,2,0,P|104:304|24:260,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,188,66602,2,0,L|16:104,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,68,67071,2,0,L|128:156,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,240,67540,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,188,67657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,156,67774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,67891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,108,68008,2,0,P|436:80|456:40,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,200,68477,2,0,P|424:200|472:184,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,284,68946,2,0,P|332:304|420:300,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,69415,5,2,0:0:0:0:
428,204,69532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,180,69649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,204,69766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,260,69883,2,0,P|232:300|172:300,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,268,70352,2,0,L|80:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,116,70821,2,0,L|176:184,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,88,71290,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,44,71407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,36,71524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,68,71641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,71758,2,0,L|296:212,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,164,72227,2,0,L|404:84,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,240,72696,2,0,P|396:248|336:236,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,202,73047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,132,73165,6,0,L|220:84,1,37.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,73399,2,0,L|112:172,1,37.5
192,224,73633,2,0,L|252:324,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,344,74102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,336,74219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,74336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,168,74571,2,0,P|408:132|324:128,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,75040,2,0,L|180:268,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,188,75274,2,0,L|152:132,1,75
232,68,75508,6,0,P|260:44|340:44,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,75977,2,0,L|448:196,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,264,76446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,136,76680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,276,76915,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,264,77032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,200,77149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,116,77266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,56,77383,6,0,P|208:36|272:56,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,77852,2,0,L|352:180,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,78321,2,0,L|248:176,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,116,78672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,78790,6,0,P|96:136|80:128,1,37.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,64,79024,2,0,L|140:8,1,37.5
220,36,79258,2,0,P|264:32|316:36,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,72,79610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,79727,2,0,P|304:172|304:232,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,80196,2,0,P|356:320|300:320,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,300,80547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,240,80665,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,160,80782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,84,80899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,68,81016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,120,81133,2,0,P|4:176|0:208,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,252,81485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,81602,2,0,L|228:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,82071,2,0,L|152:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,84,82540,5,8,0:0:0:0:
276,28,82774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,192,83008,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,120,83243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,284,83477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,352,83711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,224,83946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,136,84180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,20,84415,6,0,L|116:56,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,84883,2,0,L|368:88,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,212,85352,2,0,P|184:284|188:308,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,173,85821,2,0,P|339:137|335:89,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,32,86290,6,0,L|104:72,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,92,86758,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,148,86875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,216,86993,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,260,87110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,288,87227,6,0,P|236:296|256:292,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,284,87696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,224,87813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,156,87930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,92,88047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,88165,6,0,P|200:72|180:88,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,88633,2,0,P|312:128|328:108,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,89102,5,8,0:0:0:0:
420,128,89219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,208,89336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,280,89454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,236,89571,2,0,P|252:220|136:308,1,225.000008583069,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
beaw
;w; ;w; ;w; M4M thingy that I'm late on

nyu's Farewell
P.S., I've had to re-mod this song 5 times now and now I'm only going to do the things I think are most important. ;w; ;w;

00:08:477 (2,3,4) - Loosen this triplet. By this, I just mean to curve it less. Here is an example.
00:14:102 (3,4,5,6,7) - Curve this stream a little. It flows with the slider before it AND looks a lot more appealing. Here is an example.00:15:508 (2,3) - Tilt 2 down just a little to flow into 3 better.
00:15:977 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream is harsh as well. Maybe try something like this.
00:17:852 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same here. I noticed you curved 7, buuttt that doesn't help at all. Try something like this.
00:22:540 (1,2) - Are you going for a blanket here or not? Pick one xD.
00:33:790 (1,2) - Fix this blanket.
00:35:196 (4,1) - Tilt 4 into 1 for better flow.
00:41:758 (7,1) - Tilt 7 into 1.
00:42:696 (2,3) - Fix this blanket.
00:44:336 (4,5,6) - Move 4 down or tilt 5 up so they line up.
00:48:321 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - This stream doesn't look 2gr8 in between these sliders. Fix it up a bit.
00:49:258 (5,1) - Either have 5 go towards 1 or have it face completely away from 1. There is no sense in leaving it halfway.
00:52:540 (1) - WOooOaaHhhH dUdE! SudDeN IncReaSE in sV! Seriously though, this is extremely unexpected. Please turn it down a little ;/. I'm not saying the change is bad, it's just very drastic.
00:56:290 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream isn't too good-looking ;/. Clean it up a bit. I'm not sure how I'm supposed to show you an example though because there's too many notes xD. Basically what I did was sharpen 00:56:993 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - These two corners and loosen the rest of the curves. Experiment with it; make It look good ;3.
00:59:571 (1,1) - Stack these.
01:00:040 - Also, WHY THE FRICKIN HECK DID YOU TURN THE SV DOWN. THIS IS THE DROP AND YOU LITERALLY JUST MADE IT SO MUCH LESS EXCITING AND FUN BY LOWERING SV AND SPACING. DO NOT HYPE PEOPLE UP FOR A GOOD DROP THEN GO BACK TO SOME LAME ASS SLOW SLIDERS. INCREASE THE SV AND SPACING FOR THIS KIAI TIME OR ELSE I WILL PM YOU AND STEAL 99% OF YOUR COOKIES AND KIVIS! *HEAVY BREATHING*
*clears throat and adjusts bowtie* Ahem.. Anyway, back to the map! ^c^!
01:00:977 (3,4) - Blanket or nah, booboo?
01:04:727 (7,8) - Same affff. You finna blanket or nah.
01:19:727 (5,6) - Blanket or nah ;w;.
01:21:016 (4,5,6) - Move 4 or 5 to make them line up better. It's easier to play and looks better. Also, you want it to flow with 6. Here is an example.

yooo also my bad for the shitty pics. My puush drags my cursor across the skin even when I'm not touching anything ;/.
Lully

Stingy wrote:

;w; ;w; ;w; M4M thingy that I'm late on

nyu's Farewell
P.S., I've had to re-mod this song 5 times now and now I'm only going to do the things I think are most important. ;w; ;w;

00:08:477 (2,3,4) - Loosen this triplet. By this, I just mean to curve it less. Here is an example.
00:14:102 (3,4,5,6,7) - Curve this stream a little. It flows with the slider before it AND looks a lot more appealing. Here is an example
.00:15:508 (2,3) - Tilt 2 down just a little to flow into 3 better.
00:15:977 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream is harsh as well. Maybe try something like this.
00:17:852 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same here. I noticed you curved 7, buuttt that doesn't help at all. Try something like this.
00:22:540 (1,2) - Are you going for a blanket here or not? Pick one xD.
00:33:790 (1,2) - Fix this blanket.
00:35:196 (4,1) - Tilt 4 into 1 for better flow.
00:41:758 (7,1) - Tilt 7 into 1.
00:42:696 (2,3) - Fix this blanket.
00:44:336 (4,5,6) - Move 4 down or tilt 5 up so they line up.
00:48:321 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - This stream doesn't look 2gr8 in between these sliders. Fix it up a bit.
00:49:258 (5,1) - Either have 5 go towards 1 or have it face completely away from 1. There is no sense in leaving it halfway.
00:52:540 (1) - WOooOaaHhhH dUdE! SudDeN IncReaSE in sV! Seriously though, this is extremely unexpected. Please turn it down a little ;/. I'm not saying the change is bad, it's just very drastic. but me do likey
00:56:290 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream isn't too good-looking ;/. Clean it up a bit. I'm not sure how I'm supposed to show you an example though because there's too many notes xD. Basically what I did was sharpen 00:56:993 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - These two corners and loosen the rest of the curves. Experiment with it; make It look good ;3. its now a nice heart
00:59:571 (1,1) - Stack these. mainstream
01:00:040 - Also, WHY THE FRICKIN HECK DID YOU TURN THE SV DOWN. THIS IS THE DROP AND YOU LITERALLY JUST MADE IT SO MUCH LESS EXCITING AND FUN BY LOWERING SV AND SPACING. DO NOT HYPE PEOPLE UP FOR A GOOD DROP THEN GO BACK TO SOME LAME ASS SLOW SLIDERS. INCREASE THE SV AND SPACING FOR THIS KIAI TIME OR ELSE I WILL PM YOU AND STEAL 99% OF YOUR COOKIES AND KIVIS! *HEAVY BREATHING* pm.
*clears throat and adjusts bowtie* Ahem.. Anyway, back to the map! ^c^!
01:00:977 (3,4) - Blanket or nah, booboo?
01:04:727 (7,8) - Same affff. You finna blanket or nah.
01:19:727 (5,6) - Blanket or nah ;w;.
01:21:016 (4,5,6) - Move 4 or 5 to make them line up better. It's easier to play and looks better. Also, you want it to flow with 6. Here is an example. similar

yooo also my bad for the shitty pics. My puush drags my cursor across the skin even when I'm not touching anything ;/.
thanku

dadadadadadada
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hundred Miles Sombury Remix (Cut).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59442
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
SamplesMatchPlaybackRate: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5665,22540,30040,37540,45040,50665,52540,59571
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
TitleUnicode:Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
Artist:Yall feat. Gabriella Richardson
ArtistUnicode:Yall feat. Gabriella Richardson
Creator:Lexis
Version:nyu's Farewell
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1024276
BeatmapSetID:479701

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Wallpaper.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
3790,468.75,4,2,1,80,1,0
22540,-125,4,2,1,80,0,0
24883,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
25352,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
25821,-125,4,2,1,20,0,0
26290,-125,4,2,1,80,0,0
50665,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
52540,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,80,0,0
56290,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
58165,-200,4,2,1,80,0,0
60040,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
75040,-50,4,2,1,80,0,0
75508,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
86290,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,80,0,1
90040,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,91,136
Combo2 : 64,0,128
Combo3 : 255,67,34
Combo4 : 255,0,128

[HitObjects]
56,88,6602,6,0,L|56:28,2,37.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,180,7071,2,0,P|176:200|208:180,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,156,7540,6,0,P|272:128|364:136,2,112.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,216,8477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,236,8594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,228,8711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,172,8946,2,0,B|492:116|484:100|484:100|432:60,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,9415,6,0,P|380:100|276:104,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,20,10352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,24,10469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,60,10586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,140,10821,2,0,P|144:160|88:104,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,88,11290,6,0,L|48:208,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,32,12227,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,56,12344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,56,12461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,28,12696,2,0,P|388:16|448:28,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,48,13165,6,0,L|448:168,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,200,13633,2,0,P|380:224|332:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,196,14102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,176,14219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,160,14336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,140,14454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,100,14571,2,0,L|80:32,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,16,15040,6,0,L|208:12,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,40,15508,2,0,L|296:116,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,15977,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,228,16094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,16211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,260,16329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,232,16446,2,0,L|152:168,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,156,16915,6,0,L|48:236,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,280,17383,2,0,L|128:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,276,17852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,260,17969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,216,18086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,172,18204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,132,18321,2,0,P|220:100|224:76,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,44,18790,6,0,P|288:40|348:52,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,19258,2,0,L|396:168,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,232,19727,2,0,L|312:268,2,37.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,188,20196,2,0,P|208:188|144:232,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,252,20665,6,0,L|36:168,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,132,21133,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,40,21368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,21602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,116,21719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,108,21836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,52,22071,2,0,P|356:36|436:40,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,56,22540,6,0,P|464:116|464:156,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,88,23477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,52,23711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,40,23829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,40,23946,2,0,L|164:60,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,24415,6,0,L|140:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,232,24883,2,0,P|232:260|264:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,236,25352,2,0,P|328:192|368:192,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,196,25821,2,0,L|412:292,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,320,26290,6,0,P|364:348|308:352,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,276,27227,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,220,27461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,212,27579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,27696,2,0,L|116:244,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,28165,6,0,P|76:144|96:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,60,28633,2,0,L|176:48,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,29102,2,0,P|296:108|356:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,76,29688,2,0,P|424:96|424:152,1,90,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,200,30274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,228,30508,2,0,L|240:248,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,30977,6,0,L|100:200,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,188,31329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,31446,2,0,L|108:64,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,31915,2,0,L|272:28,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,40,32383,2,0,P|316:88|316:112,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,32852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,180,32969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,33086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,33321,2,0,L|96:228,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,33790,6,0,P|104:124|124:112,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,180,34727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,128,34961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,108,35196,2,0,L|368:96,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,108,35665,6,0,L|408:216,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,36133,2,0,L|332:212,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,188,36602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,232,36836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,248,36954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,240,37071,2,0,P|96:220|88:204,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,132,37540,2,0,P|124:68|172:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,92,38243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,64,38477,6,0,L|368:24,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,100,38946,2,0,L|328:144,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,39415,2,0,L|144:216,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,76,40586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,52,40821,2,0,P|88:64|56:100,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,124,41290,2,0,L|68:168,3,30,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,41758,2,0,L|136:240,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,256,42227,6,0,P|244:264|280:256,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,184,42696,2,0,P|288:180|324:188,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,252,43165,2,0,P|364:236|364:136,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,320,44336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,344,44571,2,0,L|192:352,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,340,45040,2,0,L|136:312,3,30,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,45508,2,0,L|120:204,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,45977,5,2,0:0:0:0:
168,88,46211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,46446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,72,46680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,112,46915,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,56,47383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,156,47852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,100,48086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,176,48321,2,0,P|64:232|76:272,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,292,48790,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,308,48907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,320,49024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,320,49141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,300,49258,2,0,L|312:256,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,49727,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,136,49961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,50196,2,0,P|144:164|124:160,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,50665,6,0,B|40:128|8:180|8:180|56:216|56:216|36:256|40:288|48:304,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,312,52540,6,0,L|260:316,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,228,53008,2,0,L|232:224,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,168,53477,6,0,L|132:96,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,53946,2,0,L|228:112,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,54415,6,0,L|368:112,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,208,54883,2,0,L|344:260,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,55352,6,0,L|208:200,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,248,55821,2,0,L|88:184,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,160,56290,5,8,0:0:0:0:
84,112,56407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,68,56524,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,36,56641,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,48,56758,5,8,0:0:0:0:
212,88,56875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,116,56993,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,120,57110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,88,57227,5,8,0:0:0:0:
364,48,57344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,36,57461,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,60,57579,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,100,57696,5,8,0:0:0:0:
492,148,57813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,196,57930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,244,58047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,288,58165,5,4,0:0:0:0:
168,120,59571,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,128,60040,6,0,L|108:152,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,180,60508,2,0,L|76:276,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,304,60977,2,0,P|208:312|264:300,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,204,61680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,140,61915,5,2,0:0:0:0:
300,124,62032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,120,62149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,62266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,62383,2,0,P|452:228|440:260,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,328,62852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,208,63086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,340,63321,2,0,L|168:288,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,240,63790,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,196,63907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,64024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,100,64141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,60,64258,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,156,64493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,64727,2,0,P|312:44|360:44,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,65196,2,0,P|360:180|360:244,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,276,65665,6,0,L|296:300,1,37.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,264,65899,2,0,L|184:240,1,37.5
144,304,66133,2,0,P|104:304|24:260,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,188,66602,2,0,L|16:104,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,68,67071,2,0,L|128:156,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,240,67540,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,188,67657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,156,67774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,67891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,108,68008,2,0,P|436:80|456:40,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,200,68477,2,0,P|424:200|472:184,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,284,68946,2,0,P|332:304|420:300,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,69415,5,2,0:0:0:0:
428,204,69532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,180,69649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,204,69766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,260,69883,2,0,P|232:300|172:300,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,268,70352,2,0,L|80:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,116,70821,2,0,L|176:184,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,88,71290,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,44,71407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,36,71524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,68,71641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,71758,2,0,L|296:212,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,164,72227,2,0,L|404:84,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,240,72696,2,0,P|396:248|336:236,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,202,73047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,132,73165,6,0,L|220:84,1,37.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,73399,2,0,L|112:172,1,37.5
192,224,73633,2,0,L|252:324,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,344,74102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,336,74219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,74336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,168,74571,2,0,P|408:132|324:128,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,75040,2,0,L|180:268,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,188,75274,2,0,L|152:132,1,75
232,68,75508,6,0,P|260:44|340:44,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,75977,2,0,L|448:196,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,264,76446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,136,76680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,276,76915,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,264,77032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,200,77149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,116,77266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,56,77383,6,0,P|208:36|272:56,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,77852,2,0,L|352:180,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,78321,2,0,L|248:176,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,116,78672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,78790,6,0,P|96:136|80:128,1,37.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,64,79024,2,0,L|140:8,1,37.5
220,36,79258,2,0,P|264:32|316:36,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,72,79610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,79727,2,0,P|304:172|304:232,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,80196,2,0,P|356:320|300:320,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,300,80547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,240,80665,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,160,80782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,84,80899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,68,81016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,120,81133,2,0,P|4:176|0:208,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,252,81485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,81602,2,0,L|228:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,82071,2,0,L|152:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,84,82540,5,8,0:0:0:0:
276,28,82774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,192,83008,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,120,83243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,284,83477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,352,83711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,224,83946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,136,84180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,20,84415,6,0,L|116:56,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,84883,2,0,L|368:88,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,212,85352,2,0,P|184:284|188:308,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,173,85821,2,0,P|339:137|335:89,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,32,86290,6,0,L|104:72,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,92,86758,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,148,86875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,216,86993,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,260,87110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,288,87227,6,0,P|236:296|256:292,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,284,87696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,224,87813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,156,87930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,92,88047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,88165,6,0,P|200:72|180:88,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,88633,2,0,P|312:128|328:108,3,56.2500021457673,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,89102,5,8,0:0:0:0:
420,128,89219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,208,89336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,280,89454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,236,89571,2,0,P|252:220|136:308,1,225.000008583069,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Reillia
[Easy]
00:09:415 (3,4,5) - how about make flow like this? 00:14:102 (3,2) - this overlap is not good on easy diff. it should stack on slider tail or make triangle like this 00:20:665 (3,1) - this stack is not good on easy diff cuz it makes miss reading to newbie.
00:26:758 - why empty this rhythm ;w; it's weird for me
00:32:852 (4,1) - how about make parallel?
00:53:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - it's too hard for newbie. how about some circles to change slider?
00:59:571 (1,3) - same as 00:20:665 (3,1) -
01:08:946 (2,4) - ^

[Normal]
00:06:602 (1) - it should be 1/2 slider cuz 1/4 slider is too hard on normal
00:16:915 (5) - how about copy 00:15:040 (1) - this and blanket 00:15:977 (2,3,4) - this?
00:21:602 (6,7,8) - how about make two 1/2 slider? 1/4 slider is too hard on normal.
00:30:508 (5,1) - swap nc
00:23:243 (2) - remove nc
00:33:790 (5,1) - swap nc
00:37:540 (6,1) - ^
00:39:415 (4) - this is too twisted. plz don't place red dot on straight line.
00:41:290 (6,1) - swap nc
00:46:915 (4) - delete nc
00:51:133 (1) - ^
00:55:352 (1,2) - swap nc
00:58:165 (5) - delete nc
01:01:915 (1) - ^
01:05:665 (1) - ^
01:11:524 (1) - add nc
01:18:790 (6) - ^
01:24:415 (5) - delete nc
01:26:290 (1,1) - this is unrankable. cuz it's not see spinner next note's approach circle during spin.

[Hard]
00:10:468 (5,7) - avoid overlap plz
00:25:352 (2) - why don't copy 00:24:415 (1) - this?

[nyu's Farewell]
00:08:477 (2,3,4) - plz fix this distance.
00:10:352 (2,3,4) - ^
00:30:274 (5,1) - swap nc
00:31:915 (6) - add nc
00:37:540 (7,1) - swap nc
00:39:415 (5) - add nc
00:41:290 (4,1) - swap nc
00:43:165 (5) - add nc
00:45:040 (4,1) - swap nc
00:46:915 (7) - add nc
00:49:727 (6) - delete nc
00:56:290 (1,1,1,1) - nc spam plz remove nc 00:56:758 (1,1) -
01:15:040 (8) - add nc
01:16:915 (5,1) - swap nc
Topic Starter
Vovan

[C u r i] wrote:

[Easy]
00:09:415 (3,4,5) - how about make flow like this? I like it. Applied.
00:14:102 (3,2) - this overlap is not good on easy diff. it should stack on slider tail or make triangle like this Fixed
00:20:665 (3,1) - this stack is not good on easy diff cuz it makes miss reading to newbie.
Yes but if fits really good with rythm. D:
00:26:758 - why empty this rhythm ;w; it's weird for me
It's for give a small break to new players.
00:32:852 (4,1) - how about make parallel?
Yay it's cool ^-^
00:53:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - it's too hard for newbie. how about some circles to change slider?
changed a bit
00:59:571 (1,3) - same as 00:20:665 (3,1) -
Idk what can I do here
01:08:946 (2,4) - ^
^

[Normal]

00:06:602 (1) - it should be 1/2 slider cuz 1/4 slider is too hard on normal
hmm... It depends. The player thust need to hold clicking
00:16:915 (5) - how about copy 00:15:040 (1) - this and blanket 00:15:977 (2,3,4) - this?
nah, I keep my pattern
00:21:602 (6,7,8) - how about make two 1/2 slider? 1/4 slider is too hard on normal.
Yes but 1/2 don't fits correctly with rythm. And the player just to keep clicking
00:30:508 (5,1) - swap nc
Fix
00:23:243 (2) - remove nc
Fix
00:33:790 (5,1) - swap nc
Fix
00:37:540 (6,1) - ^
^
00:39:415 (4) - this is too twisted. plz don't place red dot on straight line.
I just changed the slider a bit
00:41:290 (6,1) - swap nc
Fix
00:46:915 (4) - delete nc
Fix
00:51:133 (1) - ^
Fix
00:55:352 (1,2) - swap nc
Fix
00:58:165 (5) - delete nc
Not this one. The moment id different. It can't go with one of the nearby combos
01:01:915 (1) - ^
Fix
01:05:665 (1) - ^
Fix
01:11:524 (1) - add nc
Fix
01:18:790 (6) - ^
Fix
01:24:415 (5) - delete nc
Fix
01:26:290 (1,1) - this is unrankable. cuz it's not see spinner next note's approach circle during spin.
We can see it, the note isn't in the middle of the screen I just reduced a bit the spinner

[Hard]
00:10:468 (5,7) - avoid overlap plz
Fix
00:25:352 (2) - why don't copy 00:24:415 (1) - this?
Nah... I made symmetry enter the sliders


Thanks for your mod !
Saoji
[Easy]
  1. 00:10:352 (5,1) - Je conseil pas du tout les jumps sur les Easy diffs. Surtout que c'est pas constant avec 00:15:040 (1) - etc.
  2. 00:52:071 (2) - Tu peux ajouter clap+finish comme tu l'as fait ici 00:59:571 (1) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:977 (2,3,4) - et 00:17:852 (6,7,8) - Les stacks sont pas ultras conseillés non plus dans les normales, surtout la, ils sont pas vraiment incorporés a un flow particulièrement évident, et puis le rythme les rend pas forcement blatant non plus.
  2. 00:37:540 (4) - Ce serait plus logique de mettre le NC ici.
  3. 00:51:133 (1) - La fin est pas censé etre clap+finish?
  4. 00:59:571 (2) - clap+finish ce serait mieux que ce soit juste une seule note je pense aussi, ou un slider 1/1 mais la ca fait un peu overmap ce qui est pas forcemment le bienvenue dans une normal diff.
  5. 01:29:102 (1,2) - Je suis pas fan de ca, la musique continue de s'abaisser je vois pas trop pourquoi tu arrêtes le slider "prématurément" pour mettre mapper des notes qu'on entend presque plus. Je finirai le spinner comme dans la Easy.
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:351 (4,5,6) - et 00:14:102 (3,4) - Ca manque vraiment de constance. (Je prefere les kick sliders, plus naturel a jouer et ca donne + d'impact a la note ici 00:10:821 (7) - )
  2. 00:22:540 (1) - Ca m'avait pas marqué sur la easy et normale, mais la je trouve que les hitsounds sont juste beaucoup trop forts pour cette section qui est beaucoup plus calme. En plus pour ce slider, y a rien du tout a la fin, la melodie etant 1/6. Ca fait juste trop x:
  3. 00:30:040 (1) - Tu veux pas mettre en drum additions pour ce genre de son? Ca sonne bien.
  4. 00:35:665 - Si tu rajoutes une note ici, ca sera plus naturel a jouer. Puis c'est le beat le plus important.
  5. 00:42:696 (4,5) - Je trouve le jump trop important et pas consistant avec les autres DS que t'as choisis pour cette partie.
  6. 00:51:602 (7) - clap+finish a la fin
  7. 00:59:571 (2) - +finish
Voila!
Topic Starter
Vovan

Yales wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:352 (5,1) - Je conseil pas du tout les jumps sur les Easy diffs. Surtout que c'est pas constant avec 00:15:040 (1) - etc.
    En fait c'est une erreur, et non voulu x)
  2. 00:52:071 (2) - Tu peux ajouter clap+finish comme tu l'as fait ici 00:59:571 (1) -
    Bonne idée !
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:977 (2,3,4) - et 00:17:852 (6,7,8) - Les stacks sont pas ultras conseillés non plus dans les normales, surtout la, ils sont pas vraiment incorporés a un flow particulièrement évident, et puis le rythme les rend pas forcement blatant non plus.
    Changé en 2 sliders a reverse
  2. 00:37:540 (4) - Ce serait plus logique de mettre le NC ici.
    Ok
  3. 00:51:133 (1) - La fin est pas censé etre clap+finish?
    Autre erreur de ma part
  4. 00:59:571 (2) - clap+finish ce serait mieux que ce soit juste une seule note je pense aussi, ou un slider 1/1 mais la ca fait un peu overmap ce qui est pas forcemment le bienvenue dans une normal diff.
    J'ai pas tout compris. Pour le clap-finish, c'est OK mais pour la suite... :/
  5. 01:29:102 (1,2) - Je suis pas fan de ca, la musique continue de s'abaisser je vois pas trop pourquoi tu arrêtes le slider "prématurément" pour mettre mapper des notes qu'on entend presque plus. Je finirai le spinner comme dans la Easy.
    Tout simplement parce qu'ici il y a quand même des beats a mapper et que je juge "mappables" et assez importants pour être mappés. Tout simplement. La vitesse des beats était trop rapide pour la Easy donc j'ai décidé de conclure en les ignorant.
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:351 (4,5,6) - et 00:14:102 (3,4) - Ca manque vraiment de constance. (Je prefere les kick sliders, plus naturel a jouer et ca donne + d'impact a la note ici 00:10:821 (7) - )
    J'ai vraiment joué avec les triples dans cette diff car ca correspond aux "critères de ranking" d'une hard et que ca suit parfaitement le rythme
  2. 00:22:540 (1) - Ca m'avait pas marqué sur la easy et normale, mais la je trouve que les hitsounds sont juste beaucoup trop forts pour cette section qui est beaucoup plus calme. En plus pour ce slider, y a rien du tout a la fin, la melodie etant 1/6. Ca fait juste trop x:
    Baissé le son sur toutes les diffs Mais la mélodie est pas en 1/6 Car mes triples en 1/4 passent parfaitement
  3. 00:30:040 (1) - Tu veux pas mettre en drum additions pour ce genre de son? Ca sonne bien.
    C'est bien comme c'est, mais merci quand meme, je prend en compte au cas ou c'est répété
  4. 00:35:665 - Si tu rajoutes une note ici, ca sera plus naturel a jouer. Puis c'est le beat le plus important.
    Fait
  5. 00:42:696 (4,5) - Je trouve le jump trop important et pas consistant avec les autres DS que t'as choisis pour cette partie.
    Oui mais il faut bien apprendre aux joueurs a faire des jumps ?
  6. 00:51:602 (7) - clap+finish a la fin
    Ok
  7. 00:59:571 (2) - +finish
    Fait
Voila!


Merci pour ton mod !
Lilyanna


Salut. sorry if i sound mean in my mod i dont mean to.

Easy

00:11:290 (1) - u could made this end here 00:12:696 - and then map the rest like u did here 00:09:415 (3,4,5) - also ending the slider on this downbeat 00:13:165 - feels wierd
so u will end up with this pattern which work more imo
00:45:977 (1,2,3) - not important but i would avoid liner flow even in easy maybe this

Normal

00:13:165 (4,1) - the over lap maybe stack them
00:21:133 (5,7) - doesnt look appealing when they touch
00:25:352 (3,1) - ^
00:55:118 (6,2) - at least when u go back the same way u were before stack the notes to avoid the overlap
01:04:024 (2,4) - ^ u get the idea
01:13:165 (8) - nc
01:18:790 (6) - nc

Hard

00:10:351 (4,5,6,7) - why use triplet here and then for same sound u use 1/4 00:14:102 (3,4) - i suggest u use one pattern for rythm consistency
00:27:461 (3) - it looks uncomfortable pattern to read and again use triplet since u already did triplet here 00:23:711 (3,4,5) -
00:34:727 (3) - i dont hear any 1/4 repeat seems overmapped
00:42:227 (2,3,4,5) - why this spacing is bigger than this 00:45:977 (2,3,4,5) - ? maybe make consistente spacing for both jumps
00:52:071 - its better if u make this beat clickable and more emphasized since its hard diff like u did here 00:59:571 (2) -
00:58:165 (1) - how about use lower sv for this slider its optional and it can be better slider art
01:17:383 (5) - nc

overall u couldv used bigger spacing and some strong notes can be more spaced to be emphasized.try avoid overlaps as much u can; (ctrl A) all the objects are stacked in the center of the map u have enough empty area's u couldv used.
i hope i helped sorry if i didnt.Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Vovan

Lilyanna wrote:



Salut. sorry if i sound mean in my mod i dont mean to.

Easy

00:11:290 (1) - u could made this end here 00:12:696 - and then map the rest like u did here 00:09:415 (3,4,5) - also ending the slider on this downbeat

00:13:165 - feels wierd
so u will end up with this pattern which work more imo


00:45:977 (1,2,3) - not important but i would avoid liner flow even in easy maybe this Fixed a bit

Normal

00:13:165 (4,1) - the over lap maybe stack them

00:21:133 (5,7) - doesnt look appealing when they touch I don't really understand but I made an other pattern

00:25:352 (3,1) - ^ It's fine like it is.

00:55:118 (6,2) - at least when u go back the same way u were before stack the notes to avoid the overlap

01:04:024 (2,4) - ^ u get the idea I like the actual pattern : A linear flow, Slider, A curved linear flow

01:13:165 (8) - nc

01:18:790 (6) - nc

I changed NCs So I will not see that


Hard

00:10:351 (4,5,6,7) - why use triplet here and then for same sound u use 1/4 00:14:102 (3,4) - i suggest u use one pattern for rythm consistency Nah. D I V E R S I T Y.

00:27:461 (3) - it looks uncomfortable pattern to read and again use triplet since u already did triplet here 00:23:711 (3,4,5) - ^

00:34:727 (3) - i dont hear any 1/4 repeat seems overmapped Yeah I overmapped. But it fits.

00:42:227 (2,3,4,5) - why this spacing is bigger than this 00:45:977 (2,3,4,5) - ? maybe make consistente spacing for both jumps Meh... I like my pattern

00:52:071 - its better if u make this beat clickable and more emphasized since its hard diff like u did here 00:59:571 (2) - Nah I made the slider follow the "One more time" because I think that's important and I will keep it

00:58:165 (1) - how about use lower sv for this slider its optional and it can be better slider art No It's good like that.

01:17:383 (5) - nc Umm ? Why ? The NC just beginned ?!

overall u couldv used bigger spacing and some strong notes can be more spaced to be emphasized.try avoid overlaps as much u can; (ctrl A) all the objects are stacked in the center of the map u have enough empty area's u couldv used.
i hope i helped sorry if i didnt.Good luck! :)


Thanks !
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply