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Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH

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Doyak
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 8월 11일 목요일 at 오후 8:41:22

Artist: Suzuki Konomi
Title: DAYS of DASH
Source: さくら荘のペットな彼女
Tags: Lanturn [_Zzz_] Sonnyc Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo ending1 ED1 tv size
BPM: 160
Filesize: 17168kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.46 stars, 313 notes)
  2. Lanturn's Easy (1.52 stars, 80 notes)
  3. Normal (2.02 stars, 161 notes)
  4. Sonnyc's Insane (3.96 stars, 261 notes)
  5. Zzz's Hard (3.03 stars, 201 notes)
Download: Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH
Download: Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked #12
몬데그린
Easy by Lanturn
Normal by me
Hard by [ Zzz ]
Insane by Sonnyc
Insane by me
Last edited by Doyak , edited 44 times in total.
Lanturn
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DAYS of DOYAK
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겟난...한자리만요...
Doyak
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Neoskylove wrote:

겟난...한자리만요...
힛사까지 다 찍고 생각해볼게요.
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15:31 Doyak: 턍님 있나요
16:51 Doyak: 턍님 있습니까
16:51 Taeyang: spd
16:51 Taeyang: 넹
16:51 Doyak: 텟플좀요
16:51 Taeyang: 넹~
16:51 Taeyang: np점
16:51 *Doyak is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1021976 Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH (TV Size)]
16:51 Doyak: ㄳ요
16:55 Taeyang: 묘하게
16:55 Taeyang: 쿨쿨님 닮은듯한??
16:57 Doyak: 아무래도 수평 수직이니까요
16:57 Doyak: 근데 그 외엔 딱히 닮은 점은?
17:01 Taeyang: 00:00:822 (1,2,3,4) - 이거 리듬 2슬라부분
17:01 Taeyang: 1/1리듬 쓰는게?
17:01 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/pTdW6/d182a2b122.jpg
17:02 Doyak: 뭐 그렇게 해도 되지만
17:02 Taeyang: 00:04:009 (2,3) - 
17:02 Taeyang: 이거도
17:02 Doyak: 그래도 저 끝은 클릭으로 하고 싶네요
17:02 Doyak: 1/2 소리도 다 명확하게 있으니
17:03 Taeyang: 00:11:134 (1,2) - 흠 http://puu.sh/pTe1e/5c9bbd0885.jpg
17:04 Doyak: 1-2도 거리를 두고 싶네요
17:04 Doyak: 좀 더 뾰족한 흐름으로 멜로디 강조를
17:05 Taeyang: 00:11:509 (2,4) - 근데 이거 2슬라 담요가
17:05 Taeyang: 너무 큰거같음
17:05 Doyak: ?
17:06 Doyak: 너무 멀리 도는 느낌요?
17:06 Taeyang: 00:23:322 (1) - 일단 이거https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5555442
17:07 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/pTe9g/5953007e7d.jpg
17:07 Taeyang: 저런식으로
17:07 Taeyang: 더 줄여서
17:07 Taeyang: 슬라변속 0.75정도 써줬으면 함
17:07 Doyak: 플레이성으론 그게 나을지도 모르겠는데
17:07 Doyak: 거리를 계속 일정하게 유지하고 싶어서 말이죠
17:07 Taeyang: 아니면 슬라 담요 써도 괜찮은데
17:08 Doyak: 뒤에건 슬라 방향 거기서 거꾸로 한 걸로 교체...
17:09 Doyak: 저는 지금이 괜찮은데
17:09 Doyak: 마음에 안 드시나 보죠
17:10 Taeyang: 아 원래전 롱슬라 쓸때
17:10 Taeyang: 그냥 깡슬라 안쓰고 
17:10 Taeyang: 어떻게든 모양 만들기떄문에...
17:10 Doyak: 변속은 생각해볼만하겠네요
17:10 Taeyang: 00:26:509 (2,3) - 
17:11 Taeyang: 컨쥐흐름이 더나음
17:12 Taeyang: 00:38:884 (3) - 이것도 걍 1/1슬라?
17:12 Doyak: 00:26:509 (2,3) - 점프 간격을 노트마다 다르게 만들고 싶지 않고 그냥 거리 고정으로
17:12 Doyak: 그리고 00:25:384 (3) - 부터 회전하는 흐름이기 때문에 유지하는 것도 괜찮다고 보이고
17:13 Doyak: 00:38:884 (3) - 는 3/4 지점에 드럼 소리가 들려서 넣은 거라 역시 패스
17:13 Taeyang: 그럼 물흐르는듯한 흐름으로 ㄱㄱ http://puu.sh/pTenL/1f20fdb5ac.jpg
17:13 Taeyang: 00:38:884 (3,4) - 이거 소리에 비해
17:13 Doyak: 흠
17:14 Doyak: 제가 그걸 못하는 이유가 있어서...
17:14 Taeyang: 00:29:884 (4,5) - 요게 너무
17:14 Taeyang: 강함
17:14 Doyak: 그러려면 거기만 ds가 깨지거나
17:14 Doyak: 00:25:947 (4,2) - 이게 담요가 안 되거나
17:14 Doyak: 00:25:947 (4,1,2) - 가 정삼각형이 안 되거나
17:14 Doyak: 다 깨뜨려야 되서
17:15 Taeyang: 근데 저부분은 컨쥐하라고 아마 저말고 지적할거같...
17:15 Doyak: 해도 안 고치면 되는
17:15 Taeyang: ㅋㅋ
17:15 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/pTesX/1a76597779.jpg
17:15 Doyak: 저는 이 맵에서 그 거리 지키는 게 더 중요한지라
17:15 Taeyang: 00:40:384 (3,4) - 
17:15 Taeyang: 이거 꺽슬?
17:16 Taeyang: 00:40:947 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 흐르므 몬몬이 같긴하지만 저게더 치긴편합 http://puu.sh/pTeuw/a2b8709885.jpg
17:17 Taeyang: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5555477 리듬 00:43:572 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
17:17 Taeyang:  00:43:759 - 00:44:134 - 00:44:509 - 00:44:884 -  그냥 보컬보단 기타 잡는게 더 나아보여서요
17:18 Taeyang: 이유는 00:42:822 (1) - 00:45:447 (4) - 이구간 보컬이 전부 1/2이라 그냥 보컬로 두면 아쉽
17:18 Doyak: 전 보컬로 갈래요
17:18 Taeyang: 00:45:259 (3,4) - 여기 이미 무시됬고 ..
17:19 Doyak: 아시겠지만 저는 보컬 1순위주의라서
17:19 Taeyang: 00:48:447 (6,7) - 이거 너무멉
17:19 Doyak: 저거 때문에 전부 엇박으로 기타 클릭하게 하고 싶지 않은...
17:19 Doyak: 줄임
17:20 Taeyang: 00:51:822 (1,2,3,4) - 리듬 http://puu.sh/pTeCY/7561b09642.jpg
17:20 Doyak: 왜요
17:20 Taeyang: 00:52:572 - 
17:20 Doyak: 저것도 생각을 안 해본 건 아닌데
17:20 Taeyang: 여긴 드럼 없고
17:20 Doyak: 00:52:572 - 보컬을 클릭하고 싶었음
17:20 Taeyang: 00:52:759 - 00:52:947 - 00:53:134 - 여긴 있어서 저기만 눌러주고싶
17:21 Doyak: 으 부디 제 의도를 좀 이해해주세요
17:21 Doyak: 저도 드럼이 그렇게 된 건 알지만
17:21 Taeyang: 그럼 http://puu.sh/pTeFm/cb1aa1940b.jpg
17:21 Doyak: 보컬이 뚜렷이 있으면 그걸 먼저 잡는 게 제 매핑인데
17:21 Doyak: 저것도 저렇게 하면
17:22 Taeyang: 00:56:978 - 노트추가?
17:22 Doyak: 보컬이 길게 나가는 소리가 서클 하나에 끊어져버리잖음
17:22 Doyak: 그것도 물론 생각해봤는데
17:22 Doyak: 그걸 넣으면 점프를 못 시켜서
17:22 Doyak: 00:57:072 (1,2) - 요 보컬들은 점프로 강조를 해주고 싶었기에
17:22 Doyak: 1/4 킥슬라 쓰라고 하실 거 같은데
17:22 Doyak: 미리 거절해두겠>..
17:23 Taeyang: ㄴㄴ 이렇게요
17:23 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/pTeJg/4df92b327f.jpg
17:23 Doyak: 그니까 그렇게 하면
17:23 Doyak: 00:57:072 - 이쪽으로 점프가 안 생기잖음
17:24 Doyak: 드럼 너무 작아서 3연타로 메우기엔 보컬 강조가 아깝네요
17:25 Taeyang: 01:01:197 (2,3) - 이거 좀먼듯..?
17:25 Doyak: 음 좀 내림
17:25 Taeyang: 01:07:759 (4,5) - 컨쥐?
17:26 Doyak: 그거 괜찮네요
17:26 Doyak: 점프가 더 커져버리긴 했지만...
17:26 Doyak: ??
17:26 Doyak: 별이...
17:26 Doyak: 0.09나 오름
17:27 Doyak: 두고 봐야겠네요 일단은 고침
17:27 Taeyang: 01:12:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -  꾸엨 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5555507
17:28 Doyak: 01:13:197 (2,3) - 여기 점프 왜 지우신
17:28 Doyak: 새로운 보컬 시작점이라고 점프 넣었는데
17:28 Taeyang: 01:13:384 (3,4,5) - 여기에 점프있어야할거같음
17:29 Doyak: 앞에서도 쭉 안 넣어온 소린데요
17:29 Doyak: 그냥 기본 디스턴스가 1.4라 딱히 안 넣어도 서클로 쓴 것만으로도 어느 정도 강조가 되서
17:31 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/pTf1t/5ac9f78635.jpg
17:31 Taeyang: 01:21:634 (8,1) - 음냐
17:32 Doyak: 그것도 생각은 해봤는데
17:32 Doyak: 마지막 것도 보컬 드럼 다 있는데 굳이 슬라 끝으로 차별할 필요 있을까 싶었
17:32 Doyak: 아니
17:32 Doyak: 잠깐요
17:32 Doyak: 저거
17:32 Doyak: 기타 소리 끝 잡은 건가요
17:33 Taeyang: ㅇㅇ
17:33 Taeyang: 끝에 볼륨 넣으시면
17:33 Doyak: 별로...
17:33 Taeyang: 될듯
17:33 Doyak: 마지막 스피너가 나타내는 거 자체가 보컬인데
17:33 Doyak: 중간에 다른 소리 잡아주고 그 뒤에 시작하는 건 별로 흠
17:34 Doyak: 볼륨은 힛사 넣을 때 다같이 조정할 거고
17:34 Doyak: 1난이도 모딩에 쿠도스 받아가시겠네
17:34 Taeyang: 냠냠
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some metadata on the CD scans here. it seems that the TV size isn't part of the title so it was removed.
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osu file format v14

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컨셉에 충실한 인간입니다(도망)
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Uh. I might have went a little overboard on the whole straightness theme Nevermind. Neoskylove totally wins. but yeah. I'll remap if it's that bad XD
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Enon
2,690 posts
Joined November 2012
Enon
데이쓰 오브 다쉬!
Grrum
886 posts
Joined November 2011
Grrum
Hey. I respect your mapping style a lot and I really think I could learn a lot from you. But being a BN, you probably get spammed for request so much that I'm just going to mod your maps until you eventually decide you want to mod mine. So I hope this helps.

[Insane]

00:01:009 (2) – really just my taste and adding no potential improvements here, but I don't like how much horizontal/vertical sliders you have. It looks a little too grid-like and formulaic.

00:05:509 (2,3,4,5,1) – stream looks odd to me because the flow from (2,3) is horizontal which matches the flow of the (2) slider a little too well. Consider starting to curve earlier and harder like: http://puu.sh/pXs5K/bb1893fda2.jpg

00:26:322 (1,2,3,4) – The structure on (1,2,3) is great with what comes before it, but the shape that (1,2,3,4) make is overall lacking structure. May I suggest you add a jump into (4) that also happens to fix this (notice that 2,3,5 are linear): http://puu.sh/pXrgD/b366e0130b.jpg

00:27:634 (6) – There are notes like this one in the song that don't feel like they're emphasized nicely. This offbeat doesn't feel as strong as (5), but it gets a lot more spacing because you choose to have structure here. You might be able to get away with most of these, especially the ones not in the kiai, but this one at 01:06:634 (5) – is something I think you should look into and see if a different spacing works nicer since the strong note on the vocal is on (4) and the strong note on the piano is on (1), but (5) isn't all that strong of a note. Furthermore, lowering the DS here would give a nice rest section to allow 01:07:759 (4) – to shine even more relative to it. If you think this lowers the intensity too much, consider increasing the DS into 01:05:884 (3) – since the note in the music can accept a little more intensity if you need it.

00:55:197 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) – Your build up is overall good, but I am very picky about my build-ups, and I think it can be improved. Overall, 00:57:822 (1) – doesn't feel strong enough relative to what you've built up (I didn't even notice there was a SV change until after checking the editor). You should try to make this one be the star of these notes. To achieve this, you obviously shouldn't make a full screen jump, so you should consider making some notes in here provide rest to the player. Specifically, try making the spacing into 00:57:072 (1,2) – be small, then make the jump into 00:57:822 (1) – be large. This is probably not the best example, but to give you an idea: http://puu.sh/pXviN/d99e3aa53b.jpg

01:20:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – Can you rotate this star structure a little so that 01:20:134 (1,3) – aren't so close? Looks a bit odd to me.

Overall, the emphasis of the song is clear and goes well with the song. Good diff.

Will mod the other maps when the set has a Hard diff.
Affirmation
2,543 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
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Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc


Easy #1 incoming.

http://puu.sh/q5d9a/4bf9599b11.osu

일단은 난이도 내 밸런스가 무너질까봐 점프는 안들어가버렸네요 ㄷㄷ
넣기를 원하시면 키아이 갈아보겠습니다 ._.
현재는 적절한 *3.96입니다.
Cellina
1,004 posts
Joined March 2013
Cellina

Lanturn's Easy

  1. 00:12:259 - useless green line I guess
  2. 00:57:072 - same as above
  3. 01:11:322 (1) - remove NC
  4. 01:14:322 (1) - ^
  5. 01:12:822 (2) - NC

NeoSL's Normal

  1. 00:01:947 (3) - 리핏하는게 더 좋을거같은데요
  2. 00:28:009 (2,3) - DS
  3. 00:29:884 (5,6) - 0.03 DS 차이나는데 그래도 맞춰주시는게
  4. 01:21:259 (5) - 슬라 + 서클로 하는게 좀 더 마지막을 살릴거같아요

Zzz's Hard

  1. 태그 확인
  2. 00:11:134 - 하드급 난이도에서 확실히 들을 수 있는 기타음을 무시하고 스피너를 넣는건 아닌거같네요... 1/1 슬라이더라도 넣는걸 권장할께요
  3. 00:21:822 (5) - 의도하신건지는 모르겠는데 NC 넣고 다음노트 NC?
  4. 00:57:447 - 노트 추가하면 좋을거같아요
  5. 01:00:634 - ^
  6. 01:12:634 - ^
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Del05
Hi
Very nice map, cant find many things xD
And sorry i cant mod insane and for short mod xD

Tell me if you dont like my mod xD and Star for you :D

[General]
  1. Tag conflict with ZZZ Hard
  2. Nice concept :D

[Lanturn's Easy]
  1. 00:12:259 - 00:05:509 - 00:12:259 - unused green line
  2. 01:11:322 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this section NC, 01:11:322 (1,2) - swa NC, 01:14:322 (1) - delete NC, 01:15:822 (2) - NC, 01:17:134 (1) - delete NC, 01:18:822 (3) - NC. Cause before this section you use NC every 2 big white tick, but suddenly you use NC 01:11:322 (1) i think NC must consistent
  3. 00:27:822 (3) - NC ??
  4. 00:44:322 (3) - NC ??
  5. 00:50:322 (3) - NC ??
  6. 00:54:822 (1) - How about end the spinner at 00:56:697 ?

    Very nice easy

[NeoSL's Normal]
  1. 00:09:447 - Try to map this part too ?? Cause i can hear .... dont know the instrument name xD lol
  2. 00:20:322 (4,5) - how about this --> http://puu.sh/q5HkO/284483d81a.jpg, i try to map the vocal since you map the vocal since the beginning
  3. 00:29:134 (3) - this feel off to me, how about move this to the previous white tick then add circle at 00:29:322 , i feel better like that
  4. 00:31:947 - vocal here, map it ?
  5. 00:36:634 - dont know what it called, but i can hear clap sound here, i think normal better to map something like this, it also point that the rhythm increase too for a while
  6. 00:37:947 - same with 00:31:947
  7. 00:39:822 (1) - try this --> http://puu.sh/q5HD3/6ebc8a489d.jpg
  8. 00:21:822 (1) - try this too --> http://puu.sh/q5HZq/117a717c75.jpg, i try to map the vocal too here
  9. 00:38:322 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/q5I49/ca5e169aae.jpg, you can try other combination, like using slider+circle+circle+circle, or something , but just make sure map the vocal, cause you follow vocal from the beginning right
  10. 00:30:634 - add circle here and clap, cause the rhythm actually going intense with that stream sound ?? dont know what it call xD, so make the rhythm intense too with add circle and clap :D

[ZZZ's Hard]
  1. AR 7 is fine
  2. 00:05:134 (4) - try this --> http://puu.sh/q5It3/b3084370a0.jpg, i think this one is more suit
  3. 00:41:134 (1) - spinner here ?? feel like... bad i think xD, i think better to map this rhythm, cause the rhythm will lead to the next section rhythm, http://puu.sh/q5IH3/34b9e27695.jpg
  4. 00:54:822 (1) - you can end the spinner at 00:56:697 and add 1/2 slider at 00:57:072 and 00:57:447 (follow vocal, "Days of Dash vocal")
  5. 01:00:634 - add circle ??
  6. 01:12:447 (3) - how about change this with 1/2 slider cause the vocal also hear 01:12:634. Long vocal ?? <-- cause of that i think better to use 1/2 slider here
  7. 00:35:697 (5) - maybe dont affect gameplay so much, but i feel better if this object is put at x:116;y:188 (stack 00:34:384 (2) - tail)
Last edited by Del05 , edited 2 times in total.
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Hanazawa Kana
Hi
[Lanturn's Easy]
00:20:322 (3) - I think it can be a 1/1 repeat slider and a note.since you dont follow 00:20:134 - it and catch the drum,then i think it's strange to follow it. 00:20:884 -
01:11:322 (1) - you put NC every two big white line,but here's not.please fix it

[NeoSL's Normal]
these are just my suggestions
00:26:322 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - please check ds
00:02:322 - you can put a note here
00:13:384 (2) - try to put it here 00:13:572 - to emphasis the drum here
00:15:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here,cause drums here is stronger than sounds you catch,it may cause players dont konw how to do it. have a try of it http://puu.sh/q5IG8.jpg?
00:47:134 - try to put something here? feel so empty when here's both voice and drums

[Zzz's Hard]
please check tags
00:03:447 - there's no sound,put it 00:03:447 (7) - to 00:03:540 - ?
00:05:509 - try to put something clickable?
00:21:822 (5) - NC?
00:54:822 - put a note here? and put the spinner to 00:55:197 - ? because i think here's a strong beat and the beginning of the spinner cant express it well

[Sonnyc's Insane]
00:03:447 - there's no sound,why not remove it and put a note to 00:03:915 - ?

[Insane]
00:03:447 - there's no sound,i suggest to put it 00:03:447 (3) - to 00:03:540 - and remove 00:03:822 (1) - ?
00:58:384 (2,3) - ctrl+g?
01:21:634 (1) - remove NC?

nice song and map~ sorry i cant find much to say
have my star
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Oops, not sure how that NC mess up happened. Fixed.

Also removed pointless green lines.

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

00:20:322 (3) - I think it can be a 1/1 repeat slider and a note.since you dont follow 00:20:134 - it and catch the drum,then i think it's strange to follow it. 00:20:884 - The repeat actually hits a key guitar note. It honestly works out just fine imo.

Del05 wrote:

00:54:822 (1) - How about end the spinner at 00:56:697 ? Not enough recovery time actually.
Thanks for picking up on that NC mistake XD

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[ Zzz ]
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Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]

Cellina wrote:

Zzz's Hard

  1. 태그 확인
  2. 00:11:134 - 하드급 난이도에서 확실히 들을 수 있는 기타음을 무시하고 스피너를 넣는건 아닌거같네요... 1/1 슬라이더라도 넣는걸 권장할께요 ( 일단은 보류, 그리고 나중에 같은지적 많이들어오면 바꾸도록 해볼게요. )
  3. 00:21:822 (5) - 의도하신건지는 모르겠는데 NC 넣고 다음노트 NC?
  4. 00:57:447 - 노트 추가하면 좋을거같아요
  5. 01:00:634 - ^
  6. 01:12:634 - ^
모딩 감사합니다~

Del05 wrote:

[ZZZ's Hard]
  1. AR 7 is fine -> ar 7.2 change
  2. 00:05:134 (4) - try this --> http://puu.sh/q5It3/b3084370a0.jpg, i think this one is more suit ( Changed differently. )
  3. 00:41:134 (1) - spinner here ?? feel like... bad i think xD, i think better to map this rhythm, cause the rhythm will lead to the next section rhythm, http://puu.sh/q5IH3/34b9e27695.jpg
  4. 00:54:822 (1) - you can end the spinner at 00:56:697 and add 1/2 slider at 00:57:072 and 00:57:447 (follow vocal, "Days of Dash vocal")
  5. 01:00:634 - add circle ??
  6. 01:12:447 (3) - how about change this with 1/2 slider cause the vocal also hear 01:12:634. Long vocal ?? <-- cause of that i think better to use 1/2 slider here
  7. 00:35:697 (5) - maybe dont affect gameplay so much, but i feel better if this object is put at x:116;y:188 (stack 00:34:384 (2) - tail)
Thanks ar mod : 3

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

Hi

[Zzz's Hard]
please check tags
00:03:447 - there's no sound,put it 00:03:447 (7) - to 00:03:540 - ?
00:05:509 - try to put something clickable?
00:21:822 (5) - NC?
00:54:822 - put a note here? and put the spinner to 00:55:197 - ? because i think here's a strong beat and the beginning of the spinner cant express it well
Thanks mod : 3

Done
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: DAYS of DASH.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56978
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:DAYS of DASH
TitleUnicode:DAYS of DASH
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:Doyak
Version:Zzz's Hard
Source:さくら荘のペットな彼女
Tags:Lanturn Neoskylove [_Zzz_] Sonnyc Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo ending1 ED1 tv size
BeatmapID:1026781
BeatmapSetID:478496

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.2
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"682856.jpg",0,0
Video,629,"DAYSofDASH.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Doyak
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Doyak

pinataman wrote:

Hey. I respect your mapping style a lot and I really think I could learn a lot from you. But being a BN, you probably get spammed for request so much that I'm just going to mod your maps until you eventually decide you want to mod mine. So I hope this helps.

[Insane]

00:01:009 (2) – really just my taste and adding no potential improvements here, but I don't like how much horizontal/vertical sliders you have. It looks a little too grid-like and formulaic. That's the concept of this map, using horizontal/vertical patterns, and this shows it really well from the start.

00:05:509 (2,3,4,5,1) – stream looks odd to me because the flow from (2,3) is horizontal which matches the flow of the (2) slider a little too well. Consider starting to curve earlier and harder like: http://puu.sh/pXs5K/bb1893fda2.jpg Seems better, fixed.

00:26:322 (1,2,3,4) – The structure on (1,2,3) is great with what comes before it, but the shape that (1,2,3,4) make is overall lacking structure. May I suggest you add a jump into (4) that also happens to fix this (notice that 2,3,5 are linear): http://puu.sh/pXrgD/b366e0130b.jpg uhh not quite a jump but fixed similarly.

00:27:634 (6) – There are notes like this one in the song that don't feel like they're emphasized nicely. This offbeat doesn't feel as strong as (5), but it gets a lot more spacing because you choose to have structure here. You might be able to get away with most of these, especially the ones not in the kiai, but this one at 01:06:634 (5) – is something I think you should look into and see if a different spacing works nicer since the strong note on the vocal is on (4) and the strong note on the piano is on (1), but (5) isn't all that strong of a note. Furthermore, lowering the DS here would give a nice rest section to allow 01:07:759 (4) – to shine even more relative to it. If you think this lowers the intensity too much, consider increasing the DS into 01:05:884 (3) – since the note in the music can accept a little more intensity if you need it. Fixed 00:27:634 (6) - this one because of re-structuring. But a thing here is that I do consider the latter ones pretty much deserve to be emphasized when the two sounds are all strong, and the latter one is a long sound. The jump between these two not only emphasizes the latter one, but also these two sounds as a whole. So these kind of jumps works here.

00:55:197 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) – Your build up is overall good, but I am very picky about my build-ups, and I think it can be improved. Overall, 00:57:822 (1) – doesn't feel strong enough relative to what you've built up (I didn't even notice there was a SV change until after checking the editor). You should try to make this one be the star of these notes. To achieve this, you obviously shouldn't make a full screen jump, so you should consider making some notes in here provide rest to the player. Specifically, try making the spacing into 00:57:072 (1,2) – be small, then make the jump into 00:57:822 (1) – be large. This is probably not the best example, but to give you an idea: http://puu.sh/pXviN/d99e3aa53b.jpg I moved 00:57:822 (1) - further away instead. It's not like I want to emphasize "dash" only, but also each of "days" and "of", because they're all strong. Furthermore, the flow change into 00:57:447 (2,1) - is pretty strong so it kinda reflects the intensity of "dash" as well.

01:20:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – Can you rotate this star structure a little so that 01:20:134 (1,3) – aren't so close? Looks a bit odd to me. uhh sure

Overall, the emphasis of the song is clear and goes well with the song. Good diff.

Will mod the other maps when the set has a Hard diff.
Thanks~ now we have all other diffs too!

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

Hi
[Insane]
00:03:447 - there's no sound,i suggest to put it 00:03:447 (3) - to 00:03:540 - and remove 00:03:822 (1) - ? There is a sound on the background actually. Anyway, what's important here is that it'll hurt the gameplay too much so it's better to simplify it if possible. I removed the whistle on the head instead.
00:58:384 (2,3) - ctrl+g? uhh no?
01:21:634 (1) - remove NC? k

nice song and map~ sorry i cant find much to say
have my star
Thanks for your mod~

Also fixed the tag on Zzz's Hard.
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Del05 wrote:

[NeoSL's Normal]
  1. 00:09:447 - Try to map this part too ?? Cause i can hear .... dont know the instrument name xD lol
  2. 00:20:322 (4,5) - how about this --> http://puu.sh/q5HkO/284483d81a.jpg, i try to map the vocal since you map the vocal since the beginningNo.
  3. 00:29:134 (3) - this feel off to me, how about move this to the previous white tick then add circle at 00:29:322 , i feel better like thatI'll think about that
  4. 00:31:947 - vocal here, map it ?vocal is 00:31:759 - here.
  5. 00:36:634 - dont know what it called, but i can hear clap sound here, i think normal better to map something like this, it also point that the rhythm increase too for a while
  6. 00:37:947 - same with 00:31:947^
  7. 00:39:822 (1) - try this --> http://puu.sh/q5HD3/6ebc8a489d.jpg
  8. 00:21:822 (1) - try this too --> http://puu.sh/q5HZq/117a717c75.jpg, i try to map the vocal too hereNo..
  9. 00:38:322 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/q5I49/ca5e169aae.jpg, you can try other combination, like using slider+circle+circle+circle, or something , but just make sure map the vocal, cause you follow vocal from the beginning rightNo/
  10. 00:30:634 - add circle here and clap, cause the rhythm actually going intense with that stream sound ?? dont know what it call xD, so make the rhythm intense too with add circle and clap :DI'll Think about that :D

Cellina wrote:

NeoSL's Normal

  1. 00:01:947 (3) - 리핏하는게 더 좋을거같은데요
  2. 00:28:009 (2,3) - DS
  3. 00:29:884 (5,6) - 0.03 DS 차이나는데 그래도 맞춰주시는게
  4. 01:21:259 (5) - 슬라 + 서클로 하는게 좀 더 마지막을 살릴거같아요마지막이 강조될 음은 아닌듯하네요

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

[NeoSL's Normal]
these are just my suggestions
00:26:322 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - please check ds
00:02:322 - you can put a note herereverse slider.
00:13:384 (2) - try to put it here 00:13:572 - to emphasis the drum hereI followed vocal
00:15:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here,cause drums here is stronger than sounds you catch,it may cause players dont konw how to do it. have a try of it http://puu.sh/q5IG8.jpg?I'll think about it.
00:47:134 - try to put something here? feel so empty when here's both voice and drumsNo.
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DeletedUser_3638005
DeletedUser_3638005
hi, M4M thing

[NeoSL's Normal]
  1. 01:21:728 (1) - Spinner start is ''unsnapped''. You have it snapped on 1/4th which supposedly doesn't exist on a normal. Maybe start it 01:21:822 - here?

[Zzz's Hard]
  1. 00:17:697 (2,3,4,5) - Try making something less dull with the flow here, maybe a zig-zag pattern?
  2. 01:00:634 - Why not put a hitcircle here? Or make 01:00:447 (5) - a slider? It's the kiai time, it doesn't hurt to make the map more dense there. Plus, th e vocal starts here and I feel like this note should be filled with something.

[Sonnyc's Insane]
  1. 01:01:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 01:13:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not sure how I feel about these two. For while there are vocals covering for where there are no beats, it feels too intense and unfitting. While the spacing does make up for it, and probably makes the pattern ok, the rhythm just doesn't feel right to me.

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:134 (1) - Remove NC?
  2. 00:24:447 (3) - The distance on this compared to the previous notes is higher. You used 0.6x for it, so do it for (3) too.
  3. 00:26:322 (1,2,3,4) - This would look nicer if it was symmetrical, but it overlays with 00:25:947 (4) - . Try looking into it maybe.
  4. 01:04:197 (2) - Stack to sliderend properly xd

Good luck! (◕‿◕✿)
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