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Kano - Prima Stella

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Sotarks
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Sotarks
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercredi 24 août 2016 at 12:33:54

Artist: Kano
Title: Prima Stella
Tags: Akitoshi Kalibe nowhere samfree ゆうゆ
BPM: 180
Filesize: 3283kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Normal (2,16 stars, 193 notes)
  2. Easy (1,64 stars, 129 notes)
  3. Insane (4,59 stars, 367 notes)
  4. Kalibe's Hard (3,36 stars, 277 notes)
Download: Kano - Prima Stella
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#13


♥
Last edited by Sotarks , edited 47 times in total.
Mint
1,607 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
hi
18:50 *Sotarks is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020458 Kano - Prima Stella]
18:50 Sotarks: (hi ♥)
18:50 Sotarks: (wait)
18:50 appleeaterx: what is it with you cutting songs that have ranked full ver,..
18:50 appleeaterx: orz
18:51 Sotarks: well
18:51 Sotarks: the fact is i did a nice cut this time tho
18:51 Sotarks: i kept intense part
18:51 appleeaterx: i dont believe innice cuts
18:51 Sotarks: and I love the song
18:51 Sotarks: and i don't like mapping full ver
18:51 Sotarks: so much
18:51 *appleeaterx is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020458 Kano - Prima Stella [Miracle]]
18:51 Sotarks: wait
18:51 Sotarks: someone is testing
18:51 Sotarks: i spec after
18:53 Sotarks: rdy
18:53 *appleeaterx is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020458 Kano - Prima Stella [Miracle]]
18:55 Sotarks: thanks bro
18:56 appleeaterx: 00:04:054 (3) -
18:56 appleeaterx: nc
18:56 appleeaterx: xd
18:56 Sotarks: ok xd
18:56 Sotarks: want kd?
18:56 Sotarks: xD
18:57 Sotarks: it deserve 5
18:57 Sotarks: at least
18:57 appleeaterx: wowow im not done molesting your map
18:57 appleeaterx: 00:13:387 (1,2) - 00:18:721 (1,2) -
18:57 appleeaterx: so idk why you did this
18:57 appleeaterx: but it aint gud
18:57 appleeaterx: especially the second one
18:57 appleeaterx: your 1/2 spacing is literally the same in most parts
18:57 Sotarks: why?
18:57 appleeaterx: = cri
18:57 Sotarks: explain
18:57 appleeaterx: 00:21:387 (1,2) - and then you have this
18:57 appleeaterx: which is spaced normally
18:57 Sotarks: uh
18:57 appleeaterx: = cri again
18:57 Sotarks: 00:21:387 (1,2) - this is fine
18:57 Sotarks: pls
18:58 appleeaterx: yea thats the only fine one
18:58 appleeaterx: is what i meant
18:58 Sotarks: ahh
18:58 Sotarks: ok
18:58 Sotarks: lemme fix
18:58 Sotarks: *me cry*
18:59 Sotarks: the 2nd
18:59 Sotarks: idk how to fixxx
18:59 Sotarks: aaaaa
18:59 Sotarks: ><
18:59 appleeaterx: i do: move closer
18:59 Sotarks: thanks
18:59 Sotarks: 60kd
18:59 appleeaterx: 01:05:721 (3,1,2,3) - space this further away
18:59 appleeaterx: bc (1,2) from previous combo also quite large
18:59 appleeaterx: so this can be misread as directly after
19:00 Sotarks: yeh
19:01 appleeaterx: 01:39:054 (1) - 1/7
19:01 appleeaterx: 1/8**
19:01 Sotarks: mmh
19:01 Sotarks: i updated
19:01 appleeaterx: 01:39:721 (1) -
19:01 appleeaterx: also 1/8
19:02 Sotarks: 1/7??
19:02 Sotarks: lol
19:02 Sotarks: no
19:02 appleeaterx: its 1/8 http://puu.sh/pRfJO/cc0c5f9246.jpg
19:02 Sotarks: oh
19:02 appleeaterx: try it yourself
19:02 Sotarks: wait
19:02 Sotarks: yes
19:02 Sotarks: 01:36:387 (2,2) - ?
19:02 Sotarks: those
19:03 appleeaterx: also
19:03 appleeaterx: 01:40:387 (1) - also 1/8
19:03 appleeaterx: but a reverse will sound too spammy
19:03 appleeaterx: so i recommend just having 3/8
19:04 Sotarks: whats a 3/8?
19:04 appleeaterx: you know what 1/4 slider is right
19:04 appleeaterx: guess what 3/8 is
19:04 appleeaterx: 01:38:387 (1) - also 1/8
19:04 Sotarks: i don't know
19:04 Sotarks: what 1/4 slider
19:04 Sotarks: is
19:05 appleeaterx: pls
19:05 Sotarks: i don't know
19:05 Sotarks: those terms
19:05 Sotarks: 1/2 /1/1 1/3
19:05 appleeaterx: 00:11:721 (1) - is a 1/4 slider
19:05 Sotarks: ect
19:05 Sotarks: xd
19:06 Sotarks: oh
19:06 Sotarks: ok
19:06 Sotarks: xD
19:06 appleeaterx: 00:43:887 (4) - is 1/1 slider
19:06 Sotarks: for me it's a kickslider
19:06 appleeaterx: 00:43:221 (2) - 1/2 slider
19:06 Sotarks: oh
19:06 Sotarks: XD
19:06 appleeaterx: how do you mod then if you dont know those term o_O?????????????????
19:06 Sotarks: i don't use that term
19:06 Sotarks: i say
19:06 Sotarks: (that slider is shit)
19:06 Sotarks: not (that 1/2 is shit)
19:07 appleeaterx: 01:37:721 (1) - 01:40:387 (1) - nvm i think 1/6 is OK here
19:07 Sotarks: kidding me ?
19:08 appleeaterx: only the long ones
19:08 appleeaterx: lol
19:08 appleeaterx: bc the background sound behind there kinda resembles 1/6
19:09 Sotarks: updated
19:09 Sotarks: xd
19:09 appleeaterx: where did you get the mp3 from
19:09 Sotarks: myself
19:09 appleeaterx: bc fycho's map
19:09 appleeaterx: uses 1/6
19:09 appleeaterx: but it sounds right there
19:09 appleeaterx: which can mean two things
19:10 Sotarks: i think i use same mp3 of fycho
19:10 Sotarks: if he took it on the source
19:10 Sotarks: of kano
19:10 Sotarks: official
19:10 Sotarks: but
19:10 Sotarks: the offset
19:10 appleeaterx: 1) different mp3 might sound different , 2) overall timing is wrong in your map, 3) fycho's map is wrong, 4) ihave hearing aids
19:10 Sotarks: is not the same
19:10 Sotarks: since I edited it
19:10 Sotarks: and rencoded it
19:10 Sotarks: 4)
19:11 Sotarks: timing can't be wrong
19:11 Sotarks: it's perfect the whole map
19:11 Sotarks: OH OH
19:11 Sotarks: i cutted 2 Parts
19:11 Sotarks: 01:17:387 (1) -
19:11 Sotarks: to
19:11 appleeaterx: then you need 1 extra line
19:11 appleeaterx: or better cut
19:11 Sotarks: 01:25:387 (1) -
19:11 Sotarks: 01:25:387 (1,1) -
19:11 Sotarks: 3 cuts
19:11 Sotarks: but it's perfect cut
19:11 Sotarks: listen
19:11 Sotarks: at 25%
19:12 appleeaterx: http://puu.sh/pRgi4/3f75105743.png
19:12 appleeaterx: lol thats where the cut part is i guess xd
19:12 appleeaterx: few ms will make difference though
19:12 appleeaterx: with 1/6 1/8 being really close
19:12 appleeaterx: lemme see if i can get correct timing offset
19:13 Sotarks: where the offset is wrong
19:17 appleeaterx: needs offset reset at 01:17:395
19:18 appleeaterx: 393
19:18 appleeaterx: then listen to the 1/6 again
19:19 appleeaterx: this time 1/6 should fit
19:20 appleeaterx: with what program did you cut
19:20 Sotarks: audacity
19:21 appleeaterx: you know what
19:21 appleeaterx: i can just fix the mp3 whole for you
19:21 appleeaterx: so you wont need 2 line
19:22 Sotarks: at cutting
19:22 Sotarks: tell me i'm bad
19:22 Sotarks: you're shitting on my face
19:22 Sotarks: :(
19:22 appleeaterx: well i think its common for cut people to include extra line sometimes
19:22 Sotarks: well
19:22 Sotarks: it's fine
19:22 Sotarks: like that
19:22 Sotarks: i'll just use extra line
19:23 appleeaterx: new mp3 file is easier to acc later tho
19:23 Sotarks: updated
19:23 appleeaterx: especially with OD10 if people HR
19:23 Sotarks: yes but I like doing things my self xd
19:25 Sotarks: i just got 99,32%
19:26 Sotarks: in hd hr
19:26 Sotarks: so i guess it's fine
19:31 appleeaterx: well just so you know
19:31 appleeaterx: my judgement and timing cant always be 100% right ofc
19:31 appleeaterx: so gl
19:31 Sotarks: i love your anus
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe

Sotarks wrote:

No GD request, thanks ><
:v
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Sotarks wrote:

please don't ask for gd in the thread I swear i'll burn your dog...
can i make gd?
dont worry
i dun have doge
-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-

Akitoshi wrote:

Sotarks wrote:

please don't ask for gd in the thread I swear i'll burn your dog...
can i make gd?
dont worry
i dun have doge
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
Akitoshi gding for 2 maps gg
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
yeah i gd'd 2 maps on meaning and gate opening and Eos as well xd
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
oh boy xD
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
I mapped to the end, and found the end of the mp3 was cutted in a very bad way, the music from 01:33:392 - to 01:35:726 - is very stonger, and stronger to stronger, but it got stopped suddenly at 01:36:059 - , which is very unnatural when playing, It's like mapping a song, and cut the KIAI parts off, only reverse the non-kiais. I hope this cut i's a trick, really.

Sorry, I don't like the mp3. I won't continue the mapping until there comes a good cut.

A suggestion from me is: make the third KIAIs's end connected to the first kiais, not with the weird second kiais(02:40:131 - 02:50:798 - , from my full ver).
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks
The ending volume of the section at the end of my cut, is the same as the mp3 of your full ver. I don't know why you don't like it, i could do a cut even worse like usual poeple do just cut after kiai and put a fade off. Instead I cutted 3 intense parts to put them together so it's not boring while playing.. I won't force you to map the end tho since I can actually rank my set without any Extra diffs, even tho it would've been a pleasure having U in the set.
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
Let's take the matter on its merits.
Well, I've already provided a suggestion, if you insist in your cutting, don't add my difficulty please, thanks.
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks
No problem, I won't.
Mentai
472 posts
Joined June 2016
Mentai
Looking at the difficulties i can most relate to as a player

Kalibe's Hard
00:01:388 (1) - you made the next similar rhythm sound cool, this 1/1 snap sounds really awkward from the beginning

00:37:387 (1,2,3,4) - these series of of overlaps aren't easy on the eyes solely because of AR 8

00:41:887 (2) - blanket is slightly off

00:59:721 (5,6,1) - i think some slight changes in directions and blanketing would improve this section (mainly, ctrl + h the slider) http://i.imgur.com/HZcKK8v.jpg

01:10:387 (4,1) - blanket


Insane
00:11:721 (1,2) - match the angle of the next slider, it really caught my eye

00:17:054 (4,2,3) - equalize spacing between these, nicer on the eye

00:27:221 (2) - blanket is literally just a grid tick off. move 1 grid tick to the right

00:30:554 (1) - odd looking slider. i think one of those curvy sliders inside kalibe's map would look better http://i.imgur.com/Az1DKQS.jpg (something along those lines)

00:35:887 (5,2) - blanket opportunity

01:03:721 (6,1) - hardly noticeable, but "blanketing" here would look nicer as well

01:06:387 (4) - i'd move this up slightly, as the angles of the sliders makes it seem like they're closer together, making a slightly larger jump neutralizes this effect slightly

01:44:060 (1) - lower the volume as much as possible for the end of this spinner



Hopefully this helps ♥
Dilectus
1,727 posts
Joined April 2014
Dilectus
Random mod from nowhere. It literally came from nowhere. I have no idea how or why it came here, but it did.

Insane
00:01:388 (1,2,3,1) - I think you should use the same pattern you used here 00:04:054 (1,2,3,1) - as there is a beat on 00:01:554 -
00:14:387 (6,7,1) - That's quite the jump for an insane. I'd suggest reducing the spacing to maybe stack on the 2 or something.
00:19:721 (6,7,1) - ^
00:42:554 (5) - Change sampleset to drum for the correct snare ^^
01:36:142 - Maybe I'm weird for saying this, but I think the map should end here. Just like how it ends on Miraizu (toyosaki aki ver). It's pretty out of character and brings new rhythm into the mix.
Kalibe
00:01:388 (1,2,1) - Same as insane, use the same pattern as you used here 00:04:054 (1,2,3) - cause theres a beat on the red tick
00:15:721 (5,6) - Melody suggests an unstack
00:34:721 (1) - missing finish
00:45:721 (2,3) - I hate to say this, but... blanket? dont kill me ;w;
00:46:887 (1,2,3) - Maybe this would work better? http://puu.sh/qvmCi/c75a1b3c89.jpg
01:36:142 - Same as insane

This songs intro reminds me of the intro to Danmachi ;w;
This is good
Good luck 8-)
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao
Hey~

This is your NM :)

Difficulties

Easy

  1. 01:21:393 (5) - Blanket

    It's a very good difficulty!

Akitoshi's Normal

  1. 00:22:054 (6) - NC
  2. 00:26:721 (1) - ^
  3. 01:35:392 (6) - NC
  4. 01:22:393 (5) - 01:22:559 (6) - Add a finish

Kalibe's Hard

  1. 00:23:554 (1) - Put a slider in vertical.
  2. 00:49:054 (4) - Move a little more this circle. It's too close.
    I tested this difficulty and it's not bad. :)

(This is a good map). Good luck for the rest! :)
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
Fixed most of things, you've mentioned guys, thx for mods!!

stellarium
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 23554
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Prima Stella
TitleUnicode:プリマステラ
Artist:Kano
ArtistUnicode:鹿乃
Creator:Sotarks
Version:Kalibe's Hard
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1021835
BeatmapSetID:477708

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Combo2 : 80,122,220
Combo3 : 130,198,170
Combo4 : 129,210,254
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428,121,94059,2,0,L|344:107,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
291,38,94392,2,0,L|204:26,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
125,49,94726,5,0,1:0:0:0:
125,49,94892,1,0,1:0:0:0:
196,116,95059,2,0,P|231:119|276:112,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
356,72,95392,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,176,95559,1,0,0:3:0:0:
424,176,95642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,176,95726,2,0,P|390:174|343:159,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
265,114,96059,6,0,P|196:98|120:104,2,140,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,97059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,28,97392,6,0,P|352:88|352:172,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,345,98059,2,0,P|270:275|283:206,1,140
399,48,98726,6,0,P|399:117|386:186,2,140,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,229,99726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,105,100059,6,0,B|233:93|260:123|168:116,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
5,203,100726,2,0,B|92:191|65:221|157:214,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,181,101392,6,0,L|352:30,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,331,102726,6,0,L|235:175,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104059,12,0,109392,0:0:0:0:
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
CookieBite
Hi there, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:387 (2,1) - I think do a curve blanket is better
  2. 00:08:054 (3,4) - make them parallel
  3. 00:16:721 (4,1) - fix the blanket
  4. 00:20:054 (1) - this is better
  5. 00:21:387 (1,2) - hmm the first slider ends being down but the next slider's start point is higher than the first silder
    so I suggest do this
  6. 00:41:387 (3) - make the first line straight
  7. 00:48:054 (1) - better do this?
  8. 01:00:720 (4,1) - kinda close
  9. 01:25:392 (1,2) - improve blanket
  10. 01:32:726 (3,1) - close too
  11. 01:36:059 (1,1) - do another curve blanket?
  12. 01:38:726 (1,1) - overlap

[Akitoshi's Normal]
  1. 01:40:059 (2,1) - overlap
seems fine for me.

[Kalibe's Hard]
  1. 00:02:721 (1) - I suggest stack it to 00:01:388 (1) -
  2. 01:04:554 (2,3,4) - stack them
also fine for me.

[Insane]
Yes, I'm not good at modding 4* so sorry :(
  1. 00:20:721 (4,5) - make them parallel
  2. 00:26:054 (3) - give it a little curve?
  3. 00:42:721 (1,3) - the distance beween 00:42:721 (1,2) - is not the same.
  4. 00:43:221 (2,4) - blanket?
  5. 01:12:554 (2,4) - overlap

gl with your map!

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/492602
mod it within 7 days please.
Chalwa
1,105 posts
Joined August 2014
Chalwa
Hello! Mod from my queue!

Easy

  1. 00:12:054 (1,2) - Improve it
  2. 00:19:387 (4,1) - ^ (end of slider)
  3. 00:32:887 (2) - Move to x:280 y:244
  4. Make start of 01:06:721 (1) and end of 01:08:054 (3) parallel
  5. 01:25:392 (1,2) - Improve it

Akitoshi's Normal

  1. 01:17:387 (1) - END OF SLIDER IS UNSNAPPED!
  2. Nice diff :D

Kalibe's Hard

  1. 00:29:887 (2,1) - Improve blanket
  2. 00:32:054 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:08:054 (1) - Make it like on image: http://puu.sh/qxnzd.jpg
END!
Nice mapset, will be ranked soon imo :)
GOOD LUCK!
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks

CookieBite wrote:

Hi there, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:387 (2,1) - I think do a curve blanket is better :arrow: It's not my objective.
  2. 00:08:054 (3,4) - make them parallel :arrow: ctrlh flows better
  3. 00:21:387 (1,2) - hmm the first slider ends being down but the next slider's start point is higher than the first silder :arrow: I like my current shape..
    so I suggest do this
  4. 00:48:054 (1) - better do this? :arrow: not really
  5. 01:38:726 (1,1) - overlap :arrow: this one is fine lo

[Insane]
Yes, I'm not good at modding 4* so sorry :(
  1. 00:20:721 (4,5) - make them parallel :arrow: ctrl h better
  2. 00:26:054 (3) - give it a little curve? :arrow: no meaning for that, i like it straight too
  3. 00:42:721 (1,3) - the distance beween 00:42:721 (1,2) - is not the same. :arrow: it's the emphasis
  4. 00:43:221 (2,4) - blanket? :arrow: nope
  5. 01:12:554 (2,4) - overlap :arrow: it's okay

gl with your map!

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/492602
mod it within 7 days please.

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! Mod from my queue!

Easy

  1. 00:12:054 (1,2) - Improve it :arrow: why?
  2. 00:19:387 (4,1) - ^ (end of slider) :arrow: same
END!
Nice mapset, will be ranked soon imo :)
GOOD LUCK!
ty for mods, no reply = fixed!
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
k m4m pls mod gate https://osu.ppy.sh/s/394277

[General]
01:36:059 - this cut is weird
tags
widescreen
01:17:387 - why is there red line here it works same if this is green

[Insane]
00:17:304 - pls map this 1/4 so triples are a bit more constant
00:33:387 (1) - this could be some 0.75x sv long slider tbh xd same with kalibu's hard
00:40:054 (1) - should be emphasized more imo maybe 2.25x or smth
00:53:387 (1) - did ju forgot finish hitsound on head or smth cuz its same as 01:01:387 (1) -
00:54:721 (1) - 4->1 should be largest jump in buildup imo cuz ze music is still kinda rising at 1
01:19:976 - try map this note for a bit more diverse rhythm

[Kaleebe's Hard]
nc color usage is not same with sotarks diff cool
00:34:221 - you should map this vocal too!
00:35:721 (4) - why this is only one in verse that got empahsizd but even 00:40:054 (1) - is not a jump
01:08:637 - is this supposed to be triple so its constant with 01:11:304 -
01:35:726 (7) - pls make reverse slider instead

[Akitoshi's Normal]
hello man with future 100 ranked normal diffs
00:26:054 (2) - make this 1/1 slider or smth cuz 00:28:721 (2,3,1) - plays kinda weird it plays like sudden 1/2 spike after slow parts and beginners will choke badly (or maybe not choke but it feels weird), adding dat 1/1 slider would make the verse feels a bit more intense
01:06:054 (1,2,1) - i are nazi but try place 2 under 1 instead cuz the song is getting weaker and weaker there

[Easy]
00:27:887 - would be nicer to move slider here to follow vocals!
00:33:221 - similar to above, start spinner here? xd
01:40:726 (2) - try place 2 on the slidertick instead!

gl!
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